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अब ये क्या वेयर वुल्फ पड़ गया पीछे?Update 7
June 17, 2018
Clinic se nikal ke sidha Rajan ki dukan ke paas aaya to dekha ke wo mera he wait kar raha tha, fir use leke hum nikle class ki taraf .
Rajan : Kya bhai itna der lagaya tum bhi ? August 2021 me 1st lecture attend kiya apan ne aur aaj January 2023 ko 2nd lecture karne ja re he , aise to ho gayi apni engineeringYe writer ko bol kuchh speed weed badhane ko.
Me : Ha bsdke writer to nalla he na apne jaisa, usko to job wob to karni he nahi jo khali update he deta rahega bc.
Rajan : Fir bhi consistency naam ki koi chij to hoti he na bhai
Me : Ha to tu review dena uske story ka ,me baat karta usse regular updates ke liye.
Aise he bakchodi karte karte 2no tution pohoche. 2:15 ho rahe the aur classes abhi chalu hone he wale the to bina koi bakchodi kiye hum chuphchaap 2nd floor pe gaye aur mast aage jake baith gaye.
Fir Nilam mam ne aake padhaya kuchh sums solve kiye, fir dusra teacher aaya fir 2ra lecture khatam karte karte dimag bhanna gaya. Classes khatam hui to dekha check kiya 5 bajne wale he aur Nisha ka koi call nahi aaya tha abtak.
Hum dono bike pe baith ke nikal he rahe the ke ek scooty wali aake ekdam se mere samne 2 inch pe ruki , gaur se dekha to helmet jana pechana sa laga .
Renuka : Aur janab aaj badi jaldi me lag rahe ho , bhool gaye kya hume ?
Me : Sorry yaar ,par kahi jana tha to jaldi nikal raha tha. Baki hum kal milte he na.
Re : Arre majak kar rahi thi, muze bhi bahar jana he aaj, aur apni main classes Saturday-Sunday ko he hoti he, Monday se leke Thursday tak regular students ke classes hote he.
Rajan : Ye achha kiya bataya tumne …
Me : Renuka ye Rajan he mera dost, aur rajan ye Renu .
dono ne ek dusre ko hi hello kiya fir next week aane ka bol ke wo chali gayi aur mene bhi gaadi chalu ki.
Rajan : bhai kasam se jab-jab sochta hu ke serious ho jaunga padhai aur career ko leke ,tab tab koi na koi ladki aake jhand kar jati he.
Me : Chup bsdk, saale khud ek jagah focus nahi kar sakta ye nahi bolega aur naam dalega ladki pe, bc jis ladki ke chakkar me ye sab kiya wo kisi aur se set ho gyi aur apan fokat me Vikas chodu se panga le liye, aur wo bhadwa Vikas bc chutiye ne hospital se he meri jindagi ke lavde lagva diye saale ne. pure saal bhar ki padhai paani me gayi wo alag upar se babu ji gariya rahe roj roj wo alag.
Ek tarike se mere andar ka daba hua gussa bahar aa raha tha aur Rajan ye baat janta tha.
Rajat : Sorry bhai, sala me kya janta tha wo ladki ke pichhe itna bada game ho jayega ,upar se Vikas ki jaisi shakal aur aukat he usse bada punch mara tha saale ne, humne usse hospital pohochaya aur wo humra ek saal kha gaya.
Yahi past wali bakchodi karte karte hum uske dukan tak aa gaye.
Rajan : Chal ek cup chai samosa lele aur mood thik kar le bhai, maana galti ho gayi mere se uss time par maafi bhi to dede yaara.
Me : Chai manga de khali tu aur jane de uss baat ko me bhi bhul gaya hu usko ab.
Chai pite pite maine Nisha ko call ki to usne bataya ke wo aaj uski didi ke pass he rukne wali hai to muze rukne ki jarurat nahi thi .
Rajan ke dukan se me sidha Tehsil office gaya, sham ke 5 baj chuke the aur lagbhag office ke band hone ka he time tha par papa ne jo kaam bataya tha uska puchhna bhi jariri tha.
Par wo kaam bhi nahi hua kyonki kaam ka banda chhutti pe gaya tha to waise he bahar aaya, dopahar ko bhi kuchh dhang se khaya nahi tha to bhukh bhi lagi hui thi, ek restaurant me aake baith gaya aur khana order kiya aur sochne laga ke past me kya galti ki thi maine aur agar me samay me pichhe jata time travel kar ke to kya wo sab hone se rok sakta tha jo hua tha ?
Itne me khana aa gaya aur mene bhi dimag se sare purane khayal nikal diye ,khana kha ke bill pay kiya aur bahar aaya. Bahar restaurant ke samne he beer shop thi to bada man kiya pine ka,
Mera dil : 6 baj rahe he aise to ,ek thandi beer pi lete he aise bhi ghar jate jate 8 bajenge he.
Dimag : last time pi thi tab kya bhasad machai thi wo yaad kar lavde fir bol.
Dil : Wo whisky thi ye beer he, beer se jhanta kuchh nahi hota , aur konsa ghar jake pahad todne wala he tu .
Dimag : mat maan ,gand mara ,muze kya !
Ye sab bakchodi side kar ke me beer shop pe gaya 2 beer leli aur gaon ki taraf nikal liya.
Sheher1 ki boundary se bahar aate he kuchh he der me jungle shuru hone lagta he ,usse pehle 1-2 jagah dhaba aur petrol pump he jaha jyadatar truck driver rukte he, to me bhi waha ek dhaabe pe gaya ,kaaju leke ek jagah baith gaya aur beer ke chhote chhote sip lene laga. Shaam ke 7 baje the aur andhera hone laga tha , dono beer gatakne ke baad me aaram se utha aur bike leke ghar ki taraf nikla .
Beer ka nasha kam he tha aur aise he ghar aaram se ja sakta tha aur jabtak koi aake sungh na le tabtak kisi ko bhi pata nahi chalne wala tha ke mene pi rakhi he. Jungle shuru ho chuka tha aur raasta pura sunsaan tha ,bich bich me 2-4 gaadiya aati jaati rehti thi. Abhi June ka mahina chalu he par barish kaha abhi shuru hui he , bas hawa thodi thandi thi par Saagwaan ke pedo ka jungle hone ke kaaran hawa me garmahat bhi thi . Abhi me jungle ke bich me he tha ke mere mutrashay jisko hum angreji me bladder kehte he usne signal dena chalu kiya ke tanki khali karo. Aur majburi me aake maine gadi ko raaste se niche utara aur wahi paas me mutne laga.
Jaise he meri tanki khali hui aur aankhe kholi to saamne pedo ke upar koi jeev baitha hua lag raha tha jo ki andhere me bilkul bhi nahi dikh raha tha par uski chamakili aankhe uski maujudgi ki gawah thi. Meri saanse usse dekh ke wahi ki wahi atak gayi ,ek anjane darr se hath paon ful gaye ,wo jeev shayad apni mundi hila raha tha jo uski aankho se dikh raha tha , par wo na to gurra raha tha na he ped se niche utar raha tha .
kuchh seconds tak ye sab chalta raha, itni der me maine apna hausla jama kar liya aur ek ek kadam pichhe hatate hue bike ke paas pohocha aur jaise bike ko touch hua me palti maar ki seat pe baitha aur bike start kar ke gaon ki taraf bhagai. Kuchh second baad aisa laga ke mere pichhe koi he aur me akela nahi hu is raaste pe ! Dimag keh raha tha aage chalta reh,pichhe dekhega to pakka gand fatt jayegi, to mene bhi dimag ki suni aur uss sense ko bhula ke bullet daudata raha .
Vatavaran me bullet ki awaj he sunai de rahi thi ke muze firse aisa laga jaise koi mere sath daud raha ho aur iss baar mera dimag muze kuchh kehta usse pehle maine apni aankhe bayi taraf ghumai aur rear view mirror me dekha ke 2 bayi aankhe muzse 5 foot duri se he par thoda pichhe daud rahi thi aur andhere me wo konsa jeev he ye bhi pata nahi chal raha tha ,ke wo sher he ya tendua ya koi Aur ! iss waqt me bullet ko 90 km/hr ki speed se dauda raha tha aur tabhi samne se ek tempo aaya aur uske headlight ki roshni me maine use dekha ….
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Vatavaran me bullet ki awaj he sunai de rahi thi ke muze firse aisa laga jaise koi mere sath daud raha ho aur iss baar mera dimag muze kuchh kehta usse pehle maine apni aankhe bayi taraf ghumai aur rear view mirror me dekha ke 2 bayi aankhe muzse 5 foot duri se he par thoda pichhe daud rahi thi aur andhere me wo konsa jeev he ye bhi pata nahi chal raha tha ,ke wo sher he ya tendua ya koi Aur ! iss waqt me bullet ko 90 km/hr ki speed se dauda raha tha aur tabhi samne se ek tempo aaya aur uske headlight ki roshni me maine use dekha ….
To be continued…
Wo ek bada sa kaala Tendua (Black Panther) tha jo meri taraf dekhte hue mere sath me daud raha tha, uske aur mere bich me 5-6 feet ka he distance tha ,matlab uski ek jump aur mera khel khatam !
Par usne mere upar chhalang nahi lagai, tempo nikal chuka tha aur me accelerator daba ke jitna ho sake utni teji se bullet bhagane laga . Lekin wo Tendua ab bhi mere pichhe tha aur me uski chamakti ankho ko mirror se dekh pa raha tha ,itne me muze gaon ki sima dikhne lagi aur jaise he maine sima paar ki tab jaake mere seene me jaan aa gayi , saamne se kuchh gaon wale bhi dikhe par me ruka nahi aur sidha hamare ghar jaake bike roki .
Bike ki chabi nikalte samay mere hath kaanp rahe the jaise me abhi apne ghar ke samne na ho ke uss Kaale Tendue ke saamne khada hu aur uski wo pili si chamkili ankhe meri ankho me jhaank rahi ho .
Didi : Ajay, itni der se bahar kyu khada he ? Sunai nahi de raha kya tuze ?
Didi ki awaj se me vartaman me aaya aur sidha apne room me chala gaya.
Bed par bag feki aur bistar pe let gaya aur aaj jo kuchh bhi hua tha usse yaad karne laga aur sochne laga agar me beer he nahi pita to meri jaan pe nahi ban aati , par jo hona tha wo ho gaya .
Par muze kya pata tha ke ye ant nahi aarambh he Pralay ka !
Aaj babuji kheto par he rukne wale the isliye me unhe khana dene chala gaya. Kheto ke paas jake pohocha to dekha babu ji aur pehelwan chacha dono alaav (aag ) ke paas baithe sek rahe the aur baate ho rahi thi ,aur baju me Ashwini khana laga rahi thi.
Babu ji : le shambhu Ajay bhi aa gaya khana leke.
Pehelwan chacha (Shambhu chacha) : Ajay, khana ghar le ja idhar Ashwini ne bhuni murgi banai he, aaj khas din he to.
Me : kya khaas he chacha ji ?
Ispe babu ji unko kohni maari to maine dekha ek side me kaanch ke glass rakhe he matlab aaj pine ka plan hoga inka. Jabse me bada hua tabse maine kabhi bhi na to Babu ji ko aur na he Shambhu chacha ko sharab pite hue dekha tha, ha bas holi waghera ke samay bhang pina yaad he par gaon me ye common he. Par aaj sharab he matlab jarur special hoga kuchh. Unka special program dekhne ke liye me bhi unke sath baitha to babu ji ne hadkaya ,
Babu ji : Tu kya baitha he nawab jaisa , jake Ashwini ko madat kar !
Waha se laat kha ke me Ashwini ke paas gaya, usne already khana laga he diya tha ,
Ashwini : Bas ho he gaya khana laga ke ,tu ruk idhar he fir hum dono chalte he .
Babu ji aur pehelwan chacha baith gaye khana khane ,aur me bhi apni potali leke wapas ghar nikalne laga to babu ji ne roka,
Babu ji : kaisa nalayak ladka he ye, idhar andhera ho chala he , Ashwini kya akele ghar jayegi ? usko pehle uske ghar chhod fir apne ghar jana .
Ispe Ashwini halka sa has di, aur chacha to laga he tha peg banane me .
Me aur Ashwini uske ghar ki taraf chalne lage jo ke unke khet fir aam aur kaju ke baagho ke baad aata hai ! hum dono chal he rahe the khali, koi kuchh bol nahi raha tha, Purnima ki raat hone ke karan andhere me bhi sab kuchh saaf dikh raha tha, aaj Ashwini apne me he muskura rahi thi ,par mene puchha nahi ,agar puchhta to alag siyappa hoga iska !
Ashwini : Suno .
Me : Hmm kya he ?
Ashwini : ek kaam he muze tuzse , karoge ?
Me : kaisa kaam ?
Ashwini : Actually 2 kaam he, 1 ye ke wo Vinod he na Nisha ka pati usko baki awara log jinke sath wo ghumta he unse alag karna he aur dusra ye ke uske liye koi naukari ya kaam dhundhna he ,plz ha bol na Ajay
Me : Pagla gayi he kya tu ? Nisha ke liye kuchh hota to baat hoti kuchh par ye Vinod pura kaam se gaya he, daru cigarette hukka tak thik he , par ye chutiya Ganja, randibaji tak karta firta he, aajkal to sunne me aaya he ke iske dosto ne kahi aas pados me koi illegal kaam tak chalu kiye he. Iske liye kya kuchh karna ? aur karna bhi kyu jab iske baap ki badi dukaan he wo he sambhale apne poot ko !
Ashwini : aur Nisha ka kya ? dost he wo meri, kya ye bhi bhool jaye ? aur Vinod illegal kaam nahi kar raha par jinke sath wo ghumta firta he wo karte he, aur abhi 2 mahine pehle vinod bhi Naukri karta tha ,acchha khasa kama ke deta tha ghar me par aisi sangat me pada ke aaj ye haal hai, aur hum kya aise he ye sab hone de kyunki wo hamara kuchh nahi lagta ?
Me : Dekh har chij apni marji se razamandi se he hoti he ,koi daru ki botal tumhare muh ko lagaye bhi to bhi use pina he ya nahi ye hum tay karte he. Baki tu kehti he to me koshish karunga baki jiske jaise karam-dharam.
Ashwini: Thank you thank you Ajay, tune mera ek kaam to kar he diya ,dusra fir kabhi bataungi abhi ye bata tuze kya hua he ,pareshan sa lag raha he aaj ?
Me : kuchh nahi bass study aur career ki tension he thoda
Ashwini : muzse jhuth bol ke kya milega tuze ? bata to , dost he itne saalo se ,ha ab itne time baad mile he wo baat alag he par dost to samazta he na tu muze ,ya wo bhi nahi ?
Me : (frustrate ho ke )Arre yaarr kya tu bhi ye sab leke baithi hai ,jaldi jaldi chal muze bhuk lagi he
Ashwini ne ispe kuchh nahi kaha aur mere sath chalne lagi ,ab unke hamare khet khatam ho chuke the aur pedo wala area shuru hua tha ke ekdam se usne mera hath pakda aur ek ped paas ke le kar gayi aur khinch ke niche bithaya .
Me : Aashu yaar ghar chal pehle he raat ho gayi he aur yaha tere drame khatam nahi ho rahe
Ashwini ne bass meri potli leli aur khana bahar nikalne lagi .
Ashwini : Le kha le ab ,bhukh lagi he na tuze, kha ab jaldi se
Me bas use dekhta raha, jab usne dekha ke me kha he nahi raha to usne ek niwala banaya aur mere muh ke paas laai.
Ashwini : Muh khol chupchap.
Ab iss bala se aise to bach nahi sakta tha kyonki bhoot-pishach se uparwale ka naam leke to bacha ja sakta he par naari ke hat ke aage bhala kisi ki chali he jo meri chalti !
Uske ek niwala khilane ke baad mene khud se khana shuru kiya, khane ka taste alag tha par badhiya banaya tha, matlab Vidya didi ne he banaya hoga aaj . maine dekha ke wo bass muze he dekh rahi he to na jane kyu aur kaise maine ek niwala uske hotho se lagaya ,usne bina kuchh kahe wo kha liya. Fir jab khana khatam hua to hum log kapde zaadte hue uthe aur uske ghar ki taraf nikle jo ki abhi bhi 10 minute ki duri pe tha.
Ashwini : Tune bataya nahi aaj kya hua tuze ?
Me : kya batata tuze ke marte marte bacha hu aaj !
Ashwini wahi ki wahi ruk gayi aur usne mera hath pakad liya,
Ashwini : Thik se bata matlab kya hua , kisne mara kya, ya ….
Me : Arre yaar kuchh nahi, bas Sheher1 se aa raha tha jungle wale raste se to ek jagah ruk gaya aur waha Kaala Tendua dikha jo mere pichhe pad gaya, gaadi bhaga bhaga ke aaya hu bass aur kya !
Ashwini : Tu jhuth to nahi bol raha he na ?
Me : me kyu jhuth bolu Aashu ab,
Ashwini : Hamare yaha jungle me baagh, tendue jaise koi janwar nahi he isliye maine puchha , yaha sirf jangli suar aur bandar wagera jaise chhote mote janwar he , tune pakka tendua he dekha tha na ? ya tu kuchh pike baitha tha .
Uske iss sawal se me sakpaka gaya aur usne ye baat notice kari.
Me : Chhod ye sab ghar aa gaya tera .
Usne kuchh nahi kaha,bass aise he aage chali gayi aur me bhi apne ghar ki taraf nikala, kuchh dur he chala tha ke pichhe se usne aawaj lagai to me ruk gaya, wo lagbhag daudate hue mere paas aayi aur usne apne hatho me kuchh laya tha, kya wo pata nahi par usne mere sir ke upar se 1-2 baar daayi fir baayi taraf use ghumaya aur dur feka.
Me : kya kar rahi he tu aashu ? pagal wagal ho gayi he kya ?
Ashwini : (haste hue) Najar utar rahi thi teri .
Me : Muze kiski najar lagegi bhala ?
Usne jaate hue dhire se kaha “Meri” !
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ये क्या चक्कर है?
जंगल में जब तेंदुआ है ही नही तो पीछे क्या पड़ा था?
वैसे ये अश्विनी फिदा है हीरो पर, चांस लपक लेना चाहिए उसे।
Xabhi
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Asvani ke baat karne ka tarika, sur, lay, taal pure ke pure ashiko vale hai, vo kisi premika ki tarah hi vyavhar karti hai pr apna hero use sirf accha dost hi manta hai, Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...
Hero ne jb btaya ki tendua se bachte bachte aaya hai to usne najar bhi utari, vahi bagiche me sath baitha kr jabarjasti khana bhi khilaya...
Kheto me bapu or Asvani ke bapu milkr khana pina ke sath sath daru party bhi karne me lage hai, ab pta nhi kon sa unka spacial din hai aaj ka...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
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Awesome and fantastic story and fantastic update bhai keep posting
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Thanks for support Riky Bhai
Aur jungle me tendua he ya nahi ye bad ki baat he, abhi jo aayega wo story ka title he
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Thanks for review Xabhi bhai
Sab khulasa hoga aage ,soch raha hu ke ab pralay ki jhalak dikha dete he , kyonki main mudde pe aane me abhi time lagega
Aur rahi baat Aashiqui ki to ek baar stiry ka 1st intro padhna bas