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Pralay 1 : 100 saal pehle




15 November 1918

Somewhere in Europe





Ek badi jung jo Europe me kaafi arse baad hui thi akhirkaar khatam ho gayi ! par jung khatam hone ke baad jaisa filmo me dikhate he waisa koi Khushi wala mahol kahi nahi dikhai pad raha tha kyonki khushiya manane ke liye yaha koi bacha he nahi tha, aur agar yaha koi tha to bus cheel (Vulture) aur bhediye jo padi hui laasho ko khane me lage hue the. Waha ki hawa me saans lena tak lagbhag namumkin tha ,fir bhi kuchh bachhe waha apne naak pe kapda baande hue kabaad jama kar rahe the aur jitna loha ,metal aur jo bhi chij bechi ja sake ya unke ghar ya jo bhi jagah bachi ho uske kaam aaye use wo bachhe utha rahe the. Ek ladka kabaad uthate hue uske bhaiyo se thoda andar ki taraf chala gaya tha kyonki bahar kuchh bhi nahi bacha tha aur andar bhediye the !

Usne dekha ke ek jagah jaha kuchh pagdi wale soldiers ki laashe padi he aur unke hatho me anguthi aur golden kade jaisa kuchh he to usne apne hath ka kabad side me rakha aur wo un Murdo ke ungliyo se anguthi aur kade nikalne laga.

Usne dekha ke ek aadmi ke hatho me chaandi ka kada he jisme kuchh hire bhi jade he to usne use nikalna chaha, par jab wo aasani se nahi nikal raha tha to usne jor-aajmaish chalu kari aur tab ladke ko mehsus hua keuske hatho ki nabj chal rahi he aur usme thodi garmi bhi he ! Ek jhatke se wo ladka pichhe hata aur fir uss hath ke ungliyo me kuchh halchal si hui to ladka uske paas gaya aur aadmi ke ke sharir pe padi mitti ko hatane laga, jab mitti hat gayi to bhari dopahar ke kadi dhoop aadmi ke chehre pe padi, bachhe ne dekha wo ek 60-65 saal ka kaale rang ka aadmi tha jiske sir pe pagdi bandhi thi, usne aise aadmi ko kabhi bhi nahi dekha tha, kuchh der intjaar karne ke baad ladke ne uske khaki shirt se malba hatana shuru kiya to waha usse ek pistol mili aur uske chhati pe lagaye hue kuchh medals bhi dikhe to usne un dono ko nikala he tha ke aadmi ke muh se halki si aah nikli !

Wo aadmi dhire dhire jaag raha tha ,use jaagta dekh ladka ghabra gaya aur pichhe hatate hue wo bhagne laga ,bhaagte hue wo waha gaya jaha uske bhai the kuchh der pehle par ab waha koi nahi tha ! wo unhe dhundhne laga, aawaj dene laga par kahi se koi jawab nahi aaya, par ek jaani pehchani gurrane wali awaj aayi jo bhediye ki thi. Uske samne 25 feet doori par ek chhoti si chattan par bhediya khada hua usse he dekh raha tha aur gurra raha tha. Ladka dar ke maare pichhe hata aur ulti disha me bhaagne laga, uske pichhe bhediya bhi aaya ! Bhediya koi 6 feet he dur tha ke kahi se goli chalne ki aawaj aayi ladka apna santulan kho baitha aur niche gira, usne pichhe dekh to bhediya niche gira hua tha par abhi bhi usme jaan baki thi ke tabhi dobara goli chalne ki aawaj aayi aur goli sidha bhediye sir me chali gayi . ladke ne dekha ke wahi aadmi hath me rifle liye uski taraf dhire dhire badh raha hai, usne kai kisse sune the ke jung me kaafi baar sipahi unke gharo ko lootate hai, jalate hai aur logo ko maar daalte he ! Apne anjam ke baare me soch kar uske pair kampane lage the ,usse wapas khada bhi nahi ho pa raha tha.

Wo sipahi uske paas aaya aur ghutno pe baith ke usse kuchh kehne laga par bachhe ko kuchh bhi samaz nahi aa raha tha ,sipahi ne bachhe ke zole ko liya aur usme se uska kada apne paas rakha aur baki wapas de diya aur bhediye ko utha ke ek taraf chala gaya.

Ladka ne jab kuchh der baad hosh sambhala to wo apni zoli leke basti ki or bhaag gaya.

Uske basti me uske bhai behen aur uske padosi ke bacche the, un sab ke baap-bhai jung me chale gaye the 5-6 saal pehle aur koi bhi wapas nahi lauta tha , jab unke gharo pe bum barse tab uski maa chachi aur bhi log the jo maare gaye, jo ekadh badi aurate bachi wo unhe leke in junglo me leke aayi aur yahi pe unhone rehna shuru kiya. Ladke ka naam James he aur wo apne bhaiyo me sabse Chhota he ,ye log in junglo me bas 2 he kaam karte he ek to chhupne ka aur dusra khana dhundne ka, par jab aakhri badi aurat ek baar khana lene gayi aur wapas nahi aayi to ye sab bacche ab bikhar gaye the aur apni manmaani kar ke rehne lage.

James apne bhaiyo ke paas gaya to waha sab log baith ke apna kabad ek dusre ko dikha rahe the, aaj kisi ko khana mila nahi tha to sab log pani pike so gaye, bas unka ek bhai jaagne wala tha peheredari ke liye.

Raat ke karib 3 baje peshab ki wajah se James ki nind khuli aur wo basti ke thoda he dur jake moot ke wapas aaya aur sone ki koshish karne laga,par bhooke pet use nind nahi aa rahi thi, wo apne bhai ke paas gaya khana maangne ke liye par wo bhi pehra dete hue so gaya tha ,wo soya he tha ke use aisa laga ke shayad usne kahi se goli chalne ki awaj suni ho, ek baar fir jab aawaj hui to wo utha aur jungle ke bahar jis taraf se awaj aa rahi thi usi taraf jaane laga aur wo wahi pohocha jaha wo subah uss aadmi se mila tha .

Waha jaake usne dur se he dekha ke uss sipahi ne waha pe aag jalayi he aur usske samne kuchh bhuna ja raha he.

Use dar to lag he raha tha par pet ki bhukh ke samne wo dar bhi fika pad gaya aur wo aage badhne laga. Jab wo uske paas gaya to dekha ke sipahi ne kamar ke upar wale kapde nikal rakhe he, sharir pe kuchh jagah ghaav bhi dikh rahe the, pair pe bhi ek jagah patti baandhi hui thi .

Us aadmi ne ladke ko dekha aur ishara kar ke use apne paas bulaya aur ladkabhi jhijakte hue uske paas gaya usne dekha ke aadmi jiske upar baitha he wo ek bhediye ki khaal he to wo samaz gaya ke ye wahi dopahar wala bhediya he jise sipahi ne mara tha. Usne ladke ko bhune hue maans ka ek bada tukda diya, jab ladke ne maans khasa to use wo taste pura ajeeb sa laga ,fir bhi usne khaya .

Sipahi : Mera naam Shivaraj Thakur hai, me British Indian Army se hu ,tumhara naam kya he ?

Ladka : ……

Shivraj Thakur : Naam ? tumhara naam ? kya he ?

Ladke ko thoda he sahi par samaz aata he ke naam puchh raha he

Ladka : James .

Shivraj Thakur : (Hath aage karte hue ) Shivraj Thakur .

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Un dono se kuchh he dur andhere me ek aadmi jo poore kaale kapde pehene hue tha wo ja raha tha, usne jeb se ghadi nikali aur muskuraate hue jungle me ghus gaya .





To be continued …


 

Thakur

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Awesome update bhai

Sandar story hai bhai

अब ये क्या वेयर वुल्फ पड़ गया पीछे?

Asvani ke baat karne ka tarika, sur, lay, taal pure ke pure ashiko vale hai, vo kisi premika ki tarah hi vyavhar karti hai pr apna hero use sirf accha dost hi manta hai, Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...

Hero ne jb btaya ki tendua se bachte bachte aaya hai to usne najar bhi utari, vahi bagiche me sath baitha kr jabarjasti khana bhi khilaya...

Kheto me bapu or Asvani ke bapu milkr khana pina ke sath sath daru party bhi karne me lage hai, ab pta nhi kon sa unka spacial din hai aaj ka...

Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab

Awesome and fantastic story and fantastic update bhai keep posting

Sandar kahani hai bhai

Bahut hi behtareen story likh rahe ho Thakur bhai....

Padhkar mazza aa raha hai aur update bhi samay par aa rahe hai toh flow bhi ban Raha hai..

Nice update bro and waiting for next update aur mujy lagta hai ajy my Kuch power bi ho gi

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Thakur bhai...
Nice and lovely update....
Update posted :check:
Ye wala turning point kaisa laga bataiyo sab :writing:
 

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Pralay 1 : 100 saal pehle




15 November 1918

Somewhere in Europe





Ek badi jung jo Europe me kaafi arse baad hui thi akhirkaar khatam ho gayi ! par jung khatam hone ke baad jaisa filmo me dikhate he waisa koi Khushi wala mahol kahi nahi dikhai pad raha tha kyonki khushiya manane ke liye yaha koi bacha he nahi tha, aur agar yaha koi tha to bus cheel (Vulture) aur bhediye jo padi hui laasho ko khane me lage hue the. Waha ki hawa me saans lena tak lagbhag namumkin tha ,fir bhi kuchh bachhe waha apne naak pe kapda baande hue kabaad jama kar rahe the aur jitna loha ,metal aur jo bhi chij bechi ja sake ya unke ghar ya jo bhi jagah bachi ho uske kaam aaye use wo bachhe utha rahe the. Ek ladka kabaad uthate hue uske bhaiyo se thoda andar ki taraf chala gaya tha kyonki bahar kuchh bhi nahi bacha tha aur andar bhediye the !

Usne dekha ke ek jagah jaha kuchh pagdi wale soldiers ki laashe padi he aur unke hatho me anguthi aur golden kade jaisa kuchh he to usne apne hath ka kabad side me rakha aur wo un Murdo ke ungliyo se anguthi aur kade nikalne laga.

Usne dekha ke ek aadmi ke hatho me chaandi ka kada he jisme kuchh hire bhi jade he to usne use nikalna chaha, par jab wo aasani se nahi nikal raha tha to usne jor-aajmaish chalu kari aur tab ladke ko mehsus hua keuske hatho ki nabj chal rahi he aur usme thodi garmi bhi he ! Ek jhatke se wo ladka pichhe hata aur fir uss hath ke ungliyo me kuchh halchal si hui to ladka uske paas gaya aur aadmi ke ke sharir pe padi mitti ko hatane laga, jab mitti hat gayi to bhari dopahar ke kadi dhoop aadmi ke chehre pe padi, bachhe ne dekha wo ek 60-65 saal ka kaale rang ka aadmi tha jiske sir pe pagdi bandhi thi, usne aise aadmi ko kabhi bhi nahi dekha tha, kuchh der intjaar karne ke baad ladke ne uske khaki shirt se malba hatana shuru kiya to waha usse ek pistol mili aur uske chhati pe lagaye hue kuchh medals bhi dikhe to usne un dono ko nikala he tha ke aadmi ke muh se halki si aah nikli !

Wo aadmi dhire dhire jaag raha tha ,use jaagta dekh ladka ghabra gaya aur pichhe hatate hue wo bhagne laga ,bhaagte hue wo waha gaya jaha uske bhai the kuchh der pehle par ab waha koi nahi tha ! wo unhe dhundhne laga, aawaj dene laga par kahi se koi jawab nahi aaya, par ek jaani pehchani gurrane wali awaj aayi jo bhediye ki thi. Uske samne 25 feet doori par ek chhoti si chattan par bhediya khada hua usse he dekh raha tha aur gurra raha tha. Ladka dar ke maare pichhe hata aur ulti disha me bhaagne laga, uske pichhe bhediya bhi aaya ! Bhediya koi 6 feet he dur tha ke kahi se goli chalne ki aawaj aayi ladka apna santulan kho baitha aur niche gira, usne pichhe dekh to bhediya niche gira hua tha par abhi bhi usme jaan baki thi ke tabhi dobara goli chalne ki aawaj aayi aur goli sidha bhediye sir me chali gayi . ladke ne dekha ke wahi aadmi hath me rifle liye uski taraf dhire dhire badh raha hai, usne kai kisse sune the ke jung me kaafi baar sipahi unke gharo ko lootate hai, jalate hai aur logo ko maar daalte he ! Apne anjam ke baare me soch kar uske pair kampane lage the ,usse wapas khada bhi nahi ho pa raha tha.

Wo sipahi uske paas aaya aur ghutno pe baith ke usse kuchh kehne laga par bachhe ko kuchh bhi samaz nahi aa raha tha ,sipahi ne bachhe ke zole ko liya aur usme se uska kada apne paas rakha aur baki wapas de diya aur bhediye ko utha ke ek taraf chala gaya.

Ladka ne jab kuchh der baad hosh sambhala to wo apni zoli leke basti ki or bhaag gaya.

Uske basti me uske bhai behen aur uske padosi ke bacche the, un sab ke baap-bhai jung me chale gaye the 5-6 saal pehle aur koi bhi wapas nahi lauta tha , jab unke gharo pe bum barse tab uski maa chachi aur bhi log the jo maare gaye, jo ekadh badi aurate bachi wo unhe leke in junglo me leke aayi aur yahi pe unhone rehna shuru kiya. Ladke ka naam James he aur wo apne bhaiyo me sabse Chhota he ,ye log in junglo me bas 2 he kaam karte he ek to chhupne ka aur dusra khana dhundne ka, par jab aakhri badi aurat ek baar khana lene gayi aur wapas nahi aayi to ye sab bacche ab bikhar gaye the aur apni manmaani kar ke rehne lage.

James apne bhaiyo ke paas gaya to waha sab log baith ke apna kabad ek dusre ko dikha rahe the, aaj kisi ko khana mila nahi tha to sab log pani pike so gaye, bas unka ek bhai jaagne wala tha peheredari ke liye.

Raat ke karib 3 baje peshab ki wajah se James ki nind khuli aur wo basti ke thoda he dur jake moot ke wapas aaya aur sone ki koshish karne laga,par bhooke pet use nind nahi aa rahi thi, wo apne bhai ke paas gaya khana maangne ke liye par wo bhi pehra dete hue so gaya tha ,wo soya he tha ke use aisa laga ke shayad usne kahi se goli chalne ki awaj suni ho, ek baar fir jab aawaj hui to wo utha aur jungle ke bahar jis taraf se awaj aa rahi thi usi taraf jaane laga aur wo wahi pohocha jaha wo subah uss aadmi se mila tha .

Waha jaake usne dur se he dekha ke uss sipahi ne waha pe aag jalayi he aur usske samne kuchh bhuna ja raha he.

Use dar to lag he raha tha par pet ki bhukh ke samne wo dar bhi fika pad gaya aur wo aage badhne laga. Jab wo uske paas gaya to dekha ke sipahi ne kamar ke upar wale kapde nikal rakhe he, sharir pe kuchh jagah ghaav bhi dikh rahe the, pair pe bhi ek jagah patti baandhi hui thi .

Us aadmi ne ladke ko dekha aur ishara kar ke use apne paas bulaya aur ladkabhi jhijakte hue uske paas gaya usne dekha ke aadmi jiske upar baitha he wo ek bhediye ki khaal he to wo samaz gaya ke ye wahi dopahar wala bhediya he jise sipahi ne mara tha. Usne ladke ko bhune hue maans ka ek bada tukda diya, jab ladke ne maans khasa to use wo taste pura ajeeb sa laga ,fir bhi usne khaya .

Sipahi : Mera naam Shivaraj Thakur hai, me British Indian Army se hu ,tumhara naam kya he ?

Ladka : ……

Shivraj Thakur : Naam ? tumhara naam ? kya he ?

Ladke ko thoda he sahi par samaz aata he ke naam puchh raha he

Ladka : James .

Shivraj Thakur : (Hath aage karte hue ) Shivraj Thakur .

.

.

.

.

.

Un dono se kuchh he dur andhere me ek aadmi jo poore kaale kapde pehene hue tha wo ja raha tha, usne jeb se ghadi nikali aur muskuraate hue jungle me ghus gaya .





To be continued …
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Thakur bhai....
Nice and awesome update....
 
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