Fantasy Pralay

[Thakur]

INDEX

Introduction​

Update 1​	Update 2​	Update 3​	Update 4​	Update 5​
Update 6​	Update 7​	Update 8​	Pralay 1​	Pralay 2​
Pralay 3​	Update 9​	Update 10​	Update 11​	Update 12​
Update 13​	Update 14​	Update 15​	Update 16​	Update 17​
Update 18​	Update 19​	Update 20​	Update 21​	Update 22​
Update 23​	Update 24​	Update 25​	Update 26​	Update​

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[parkas]

Next update kal aayega

Intezaar rahega Thakur bhai....

 

[Alok]

Thakur bhai kya story bandh kar diye hai...

 

[Thakur]

Intezaar rahega Thakur bhai....

Thanks for waiting

 

[Thakur]

Thakur bhai kya story bandh kar diye hai...

Aaram chal raha tha ,ab continue kare

 

[Thakur]

Past-3​

Dhaar chhod ke usne apni patloon ka belt lagaya he tha ke usko laga jaise uske upar koi he, aur jaise he usne mundi upar ki to dekha usi ped ki ek majbut tehni par ek bada sa Kaala Tendua apni chamkili aankho se usse dekh raha he !



To be continued….



Subah ki tej dhoop chehre pe padne se James ki nind khuli to usne dekha ke wo jhopde ke bahar pada hua he, uske baju me Sabrina daant maanjhte hue ketli me chaye bana rahi he aur kisi ka aata pata nahi he.

James : Sabrina ,dada ji kaha gaye he ? aur me yaha kaise aaya ?

Sabrina : Dada ji ghodo ko pani pilane leke gaye he aur tum ko uth ke taiyar hone ko kaha hai, hum ghar wapas ja rahe he.



Kuchh der me Shivraj ghode lekar aa gaya aur chaye leke padosi ke sath baith gaya, uska baya kandha pattiyo me lipta hua tha .

Dopahar tak sab saman samet ke wo log ghar ki or chal diye, James ko bohot ajib laga ye sab ke bina shikar kiye wo ghar ja rahe he par puchhne ka waqt nahi tha aur na he jagah.

Sham se pehle wo ghar aaye aur aate he Shivraj railway station chala gaya aur sidha raat ko he aaya aur aate waqt khana bhi leke aaya .

James : Aapke kandhe ko kya hua dada ji ?

Shivraj : Jungli suar tha ek ,bohot jyada bhagaya usne ,ped se takraya to ye kandha ghis gaya mera .

James : Aap doctor ko dikha ke aaye he na ?

Shivraj : Nahi, me station gaya tha ticket lane, hum Hindostan ja rahe he !

James : (jhatke se uthate hue) Kya ? matlab aise achanak se kyu ?

Shivraj : Hawaye kharab chal rahi he yaha ki aajkal ,maut har taraf se aa rahi he ,ab agar marna he hai to apne mitti me kyu nahi ? Tum chaho to kisi bade college me ja sakte ho jaha tumhara man kare , faisala tumhara hai Rajkumar !

James : Me bhi aap ke sath he chalunga, padhna he hai to yaha kya aur waha kya ?

Shivraj : Badhiya ,ab saman bandh do, jaruri saman he lena. Baki ka saman waha le lenge.

James : Aur hum waha jaake rahenge kaha pe ? Aapne to kaha tha ke aap ka koi apna he hi nahi ab to ?

Shivraj : Kehne ko to sari duniya apni he hai, rahi baat jagah ki to Thakuro ke paas jameen ki kami kabhi nahi rahegi. Ab so jao aap, me baju wale se mil ke aata hu.

Shivraj padosi ko milne chala gaya aur kaafi der baad ghar aaya, tabtak James so gaya tha. Shivraj apne kamre me gaya aur apna sanduk me usne rifle aur pistol ko khol ke rakha, mej pe rakhi uski gharwali ki aur beto ki tasveere kapde me bandh ke rakhi aur akhir me kal shikar kar ke laaya hua kaale Tendue ka sir jise kal raat ko usne mara tha. 6’2” ke Shivraj ke hatho me wo kaale Tendue ka sir ek bade Tarbuje jaisa lag raha tha, uss Tendue ki aankhe khuli hui thi aur lag raha tha jaise wo abhi bhi jinda ho aur use he dekh raha ho !

Subah 8 baje James ke taiyar hote he dono saman leke ghar se bahar aaye aur ghar ko taala laga ke chaabi padosi ko di chunki wo usi ka ghar tha aur wo log bhaade pe reh rahe the. Unke padosi ne unko station tak chhoda aur unse vida le li , Shivraj ko ye ghode kaafi pasand the isliye usne unke liye bhi suvidha kar rakhi thi train ke akhri dibbe me. Akhir ek jung khatam kar ke ek arse baad Shivraj apne watan laut raha tha.

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[Thakur]

Thodi familly badi honi chahiye thi chachi nahi bua nahi atleast 2 3 sagi aur chacha ki 2 betiya bhi chahiye thi. Taki familly me jyada maja ata rahe

Kya karenge itni badi family ka wo jo tum sochte ho wo to hona he nahi yaha
aur bhi ladkiya he jahaan me Ajay Thakur aise he nahi kehte usko.

 

[Thakur]

काला कपड़ा, काला तेंदुआ।

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Very nice review
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Update posted Past end ho gaya he short me he ,par iske nishaan milenge bich bich me ,dhundh ke batana hume

 

[parkas]

Past-3​

Dhaar chhod ke usne apni patloon ka belt lagaya he tha ke usko laga jaise uske upar koi he, aur jaise he usne mundi upar ki to dekha usi ped ki ek majbut tehni par ek bada sa Kaala Tendua apni chamkili aankho se usse dekh raha he !



To be continued….



Subah ki tej dhoop chehre pe padne se James ki nind khuli to usne dekha ke wo jhopde ke bahar pada hua he, uske baju me Sabrina daant maanjhte hue ketli me chaye bana rahi he aur kisi ka aata pata nahi he.

James : Sabrina ,dada ji kaha gaye he ? aur me yaha kaise aaya ?

Sabrina : Dada ji ghodo ko pani pilane leke gaye he aur tum ko uth ke taiyar hone ko kaha hai, hum ghar wapas ja rahe he.



Kuchh der me Shivraj ghode lekar aa gaya aur chaye leke padosi ke sath baith gaya, uska baya kandha pattiyo me lipta hua tha .

Dopahar tak sab saman samet ke wo log ghar ki or chal diye, James ko bohot ajib laga ye sab ke bina shikar kiye wo ghar ja rahe he par puchhne ka waqt nahi tha aur na he jagah.

Sham se pehle wo ghar aaye aur aate he Shivraj railway station chala gaya aur sidha raat ko he aaya aur aate waqt khana bhi leke aaya .

James : Aapke kandhe ko kya hua dada ji ?

Shivraj : Jungli suar tha ek ,bohot jyada bhagaya usne ,ped se takraya to ye kandha ghis gaya mera .

James : Aap doctor ko dikha ke aaye he na ?

Shivraj : Nahi, me station gaya tha ticket lane, hum Hindostan ja rahe he !

James : (jhatke se uthate hue) Kya ? matlab aise achanak se kyu ?

Shivraj : Hawaye kharab chal rahi he yaha ki aajkal ,maut har taraf se aa rahi he ,ab agar marna he hai to apne mitti me kyu nahi ? Tum chaho to kisi bade college me ja sakte ho jaha tumhara man kare , faisala tumhara hai Rajkumar !

James : Me bhi aap ke sath he chalunga, padhna he hai to yaha kya aur waha kya ?

Shivraj : Badhiya ,ab saman bandh do, jaruri saman he lena. Baki ka saman waha le lenge.

James : Aur hum waha jaake rahenge kaha pe ? Aapne to kaha tha ke aap ka koi apna he hi nahi ab to ?

Shivraj : Kehne ko to sari duniya apni he hai, rahi baat jagah ki to Thakuro ke paas jameen ki kami kabhi nahi rahegi. Ab so jao aap, me baju wale se mil ke aata hu.

Shivraj padosi ko milne chala gaya aur kaafi der baad ghar aaya, tabtak James so gaya tha. Shivraj apne kamre me gaya aur apna sanduk me usne rifle aur pistol ko khol ke rakha, mej pe rakhi uski gharwali ki aur beto ki tasveere kapde me bandh ke rakhi aur akhir me kal shikar kar ke laaya hua kaale Tendue ka sir jise kal raat ko usne mara tha. 6’2” ke Shivraj ke hatho me wo kaale Tendue ka sir ek bade Tarbuje jaisa lag raha tha, uss Tendue ki aankhe khuli hui thi aur lag raha tha jaise wo abhi bhi jinda ho aur use he dekh raha ho !

Subah 8 baje James ke taiyar hote he dono saman leke ghar se bahar aaye aur ghar ko taala laga ke chaabi padosi ko di chunki wo usi ka ghar tha aur wo log bhaade pe reh rahe the. Unke padosi ne unko station tak chhoda aur unse vida le li , Shivraj ko ye ghode kaafi pasand the isliye usne unke liye bhi suvidha kar rakhi thi train ke akhri dibbe me. Akhir ek jung khatam kar ke ek arse baad Shivraj apne watan laut raha tha.

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Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Thakur bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

 

[Shahrukh]

Fantastic update bhai keep posting

 

[Thakur]

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Thakur bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

Thank you parkas bhai
Keep supporting