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Romance Kasam - Love is not Everything (Completed)
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UPDATE 112
Abb achanak kya ho gaya? Paise ki kami ho gayi?
Thoda gussa ke saath Aamir ne Atul se puccha...Atul jawaab sme usko hairaani se dekhta hai.
Aamir:- Aapne hi toh kaha tha agar aapko paise ki jarurat hota toh aap seher me kaam karte...Aur aaj aap iss gaanw ko chhod kar jaane ki baat kar rahe hai.
Atul:- Maine tujhe ye bhi kaha tha ki kabhi kisi baat ka galat matlab mat nikaalna...Insaan aur baaton ko hamesha acche se samajhna chaahiye...Thodi si galti bahut bhaari pad sakta hai.
Fir Atul ek najar Aamir ko dekhta hai aur thoda muskura kar kehta hai.
Atul:- Kuch hi dino ki toh baat hai...Tujhe sab kuch bata toh diya maine...Abhi haalaat aise hai ki mai kuch soch samajh nahi paa raha hu...Shreya ki Papa ki baat ka koi jawaab nahi hai mere paas...Jald hi fresh ho kar aaunga warna abhi toh yaha mera dum ghut raha hai.
Aur waapas mujhe yahi toh aana hai.
Bas gaanw walo ko samjha dena...Sabhi ki health ke baare me khayal rakhna...Hospital tak pahunchne me help kar...Baaki wo log dekh lenge...Agar kuch jyada hi serious ho toh mujhe phone kar dena.
Itna keh kar Atul waha se nikal gaya...Ek anjaana sa safar me anjaani vajah ke saath.
Picche Aamir bas Atul ko jaate dekh hi sakta tha...Kuch kar nahi paa raha tha...Baat toh sirf kuch hi dinon ka tha...Lekin abb Atul ki ye gair maujudgi bhi Aamir ke dil me dar paidaa kar raha tha...Naa jaane kuch hi saalon me kitna kuch badal gaya tha.
5 years Ago
Baat tab ki hai jab Atul ek doctor ke roop me pehli baar uss gaanw gaya tha...Laghbhag 1 hafte baad hi usne pure gaanw ko ek saath jamma kiya tha...Saaf safayi aur Beemari ke baare me pure gaanw ko jaagruk karna chaahta tha wo.
Wo apni baat keh hi raha tha ki tabhi bich me ek aadmi utth kar bolna suru kar deta hai...Wo aadmi Aamir hi tha.
Aamir:- Kisi par bhi bharosha karna lekin doctors par nahi.
Aamir ki iss baat par uske dost uska saath dete hai.
Haan haan...Picchla doctor bhi nikkama hi tha...Kuch aata nahi tha usse...Bas sarkar ki taraf se milne waale paise muft me loot raha tha...Jab wo kuch kar nahi paaya toh ek din yaha se nikal kar chala gaya.
Rehne do Doctor...Tumhari koi jarurat nahi hai...Beemari se kaise ladna hai ham jaante hain aur aage bhi issi tarah jeete rahenge.
Kuch gaanw walon ki taraf se bhi aawaj utha.
Atul bas khada ho kar tamasha dekh raha tha.
Aamir:- I have seen 2 types of doctor in my life...One who are capable and another who are useless and jobless like you and works wherever they get chance...I have never seen any capable doctor in village.
And this is the problem with our medical system...We get only useless doctors, who further ruins our health services instead of improving it.
Samajh rahe ho naa...Main kya keh raha hu.
Atul:- (Halka smile ke saath) Accha Ninja technique hai...English se logon ka intelligence check karne ka...Khair, aapka baat samajh gaya...Aapka baat sun kar lag raha hai ki aap padhe likhe hai...Ummeed nahi tha ki aap itni jaldi kisi ko judge kar lenge.
Aamir bhi aaj shaant rehne wala nahi tha.
Aamir:- Ek aur baat...Yaad hai ek baar aapse checkup karaane aaya tha...Aapne mujhse mera religion bhi pucha tha...Kya aap aise hi apne patients ko treat karte hai? Biased ho kar!!
Aur fir baaki ki gaanw wale bhi issi mudde ko uthaate hai...Maahaul garam ho raha tha...Lekin Atul bhi shaant hi tha.
Atul:- Patient particular ka ye jaruri hissa hai...Ilaaj me bahut madad milti hai...Abhi shayad sabko samjha nahi paaunga...Lekin agar jaanna hi chaahte hai toh akele me aaiye acche se samjha dunga.
Aamir:- Koi jarurat nahi...Koi nahi aayega tumhaare paas ilaaj karaane.
Fir Aamir waha se chala gaya...Picchle doctor ke saath wo kitna naa khus tha aur medical system ke baare me kaisa soch ban gaya tha ye aaj uski baatein dikha raha tha.
Aamir ke saath saath dhire dhire sabhi gaanw wale waha se jaane lage.
Atul:- (Unhe rok kar) Ye aap ka marji hai...Mujhse ilaaj karaana yaa nahi karaana...Agar aapka iccha nahi toh mera koi hak nahi...Kyuki ek docot ko apne marij ke iccha (autonomy) ko sabse upar rakhna padta hai...Haa agar tabiyat kaafi kharaab ho toh yaad kar lijiye.
Lekin sab Atul ki baat ko unsuna karke chale jaate hai...Sirf ek ko chhod kar...Shreya...Aaj pehli baar usko Atul ke liye bura lag raha tha...Pehli baar Atul ki baatein sun usse laga ki usme kuch toh baat hai...Jo sab uske khilaaf hone par bhi ek baar gussa nahi hua...Pyar se sab ko samjhaane ki koshish karta raha.
Dusri taraf Atul...Abhi bhi muskuraa raha tha...Apna iss program fail hone par...Uske dimaag me do alag alag khayal chal rahe thhe...Pehla usse wo picchla doctor sahi lag raha tha ki ye gaanw wale accha health service deserve hi nahi karte...Aur dusra...Thik alag...Nahi nahi...Ye unka soch hai...Jaisa unhone mehsus kiya waisa unhone bol diya...Abb uski jimmedaari hai ki unko galat saabit kare.
Fir kuch din aise hi chalta raha...Atul hospital me apna duty toh karta lekin patient naa ke barabar thhe...Lekin abhi abhi Nisha se bicchda Atul, wo toh apne hi duniya me khoya hua tha..Ek dard bhari duniya...Shayad hi wo kabhi usse baahar nikal paaye.
Aise hi ek din.
Doctor Doctor chillate hue kuch log hospital aaye.
Atul ne dekha ki 3 log uski taraf aa rahe hai...Pehchaane me pareshaani nahi hua...Aamir aur uske do dost thhe...Aamir beemar lag raha tha.
Aamir:- Mujhe bacha lijiye doctor.
Ek dar bhari aawaj me Aamir ne kaha.
Atul:- Kya hua aapko?
Chair par baitha kar Atul ne pucha.
Aamir:- Bahut tej bukhaar hai..Thodi der baad thik ho jaata hai...Lekin fir kuch hi der me waapas...Bahut tej bukhaar hai...Paseena paseena ho jaata hu...Aur peshaab bhi abb kaala (black) aane laga hai.
Samajh me nahi aa raha kya hua hai.
Dheemi aawaj me Aamir ne kaha...Thoda bahut wo samajh gaya ki vajah kya hai.
Fir wo aage kuch aur sawaal puchta hai...Diagnosis ko aur confirm karne ke liye.
Atul:- Mujhe lagta hai ki aapko Malaria hai...Blood test karne par confirm hoga.
Aamir:- Lekin malaria toh mere doston ko bhi hua tha pehle...Itna tej bukhaar aur kaala peshaab...Aisa problem toh nahi tha unhe.
Atul:- Aapko alag malaria hua hai...Yaa fir kahu toh sabse khatarnaak wala malaria...Plasmodium falciparum...Iss jeevanu ki vajah se jo ki ek macchar (mosquito) me hota hai...Baaki malaria jo jyada logon ko hota hai wo hota hai Plasmodium vivax se...Jo utna khatarnaak nahi hota.
Aamir:- Khatarnaak?
Atul ki baat se wo aur bhi dar gaya.
Atul:- Haan...Kabhi kabhi jaan bhi jaa sakti hai isse...Lekin aap ghabraaiye mat...Vakt par aaye hai...Blood test karke aage kya karna hai wo dekhta hun..
Blood sample lene ke baad.
Atul:- Kuch dawaai aur dose likh raha hun...Agar thik naa hua toh fir waapas aaiye...Kabhi kabhi ek dawaai iss jeevanu ke khilaaf kaam nahi karte...Aise me dawaai badalna padta hai.
Fir Atul Aamir ko acche se samjha kar bhej deta hai.
After a week
Atul:- Kaise ho Aamir bhai abb?
Aamir:- Abb bilkul thik hun...Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Doctor saahab...Mujhe laga ki kahi mai...
Atul:- Kuch jyada hi soch lete ho...Aakhir ye jobless doctor kis din kaam aata?
Aamir:- Kya Doctor sahab aap bhi? Mai sach me sharmindaa hun...Ek galti samajh kar maaf kar dihiye.
Atul:- Koi baat nahi...Hota rehta hai yeh sab.
After a month
Ek patient diarrhoea ka complaint le kar hospital aaya...History lene par pata chala ki usse Cholera hai...Kuch hi der me dusra patient bhi...Aise hi karte karte 15 aur patients.
Abb Atul ko kuch bahut bada khatra dikh raha tha.
Sabhi gaanw walon ko bulaya ek ground me meeting ke liye...Aur waha ek shocking fact pata chala...Gaanw ke aadhe se jyada log achanak iss beemari ke chapet me aa gaye hai.
Aur vajah ek tha...Gaanw ka mela me ek bhoj...Jo 7 ghante pehle hua tha.
Atul:- Bahut hi serious baat hai ye...Agar kuch der aur hua toh pata nahi kya ho jaayega...Gaanw me ORS (Oral Rehydration Solution) (Jeevan jal) bhi khatm ho chuka hai.
Aamir:- Kya karna chahiye aise me?
Atul:- Kisi ke gaanw ke baahar koi log hai seher me...Agar hain toh phone karke kaho....Jitna ho sake utna jeevan jal yaha bhej de aur pados ke gaanw me bhi unke liye jo uss bhoj me gaye thhe.
Fir sabhi waisa hi karte hai...Atul bhi bechaini me apni taraf se puri koahish kar raha tha...Jab jarurat ke anusaar usko ORS milta hai toh sabhi gaanw walon ko uska istemaal kaise karna hai wo bata deta hai.
Aur raahat ki saans usne tab liya jab sabhi ka sahi salaamat hone ki baat pata chali.
Aur fir wo ek meeting bulaata hai.
Atul:- Pichhli baar jo diarrhoea hua tha uska vajah tha dushit (polluted) khaana aur paani...Ussi se jeevanu (bacteria) ek dusre se failta gaya...Aur kuch hi der me aadhe se jyada gaanw bhar me fail gaya...Aur jab wo jeevanu aapke sharir me jaata hai toh 6 ghante me hi diarrhoea suru ho jaata hai...Aur ilaaj naa hua toh sharir me paani ki kami se jaan bhi jaa sakta hai.
Ek do marij ka aasani se ilaaj kar sakta hun...Lekin pure gaanw ka? Wo bhi akele itne kam vakt me?
Sabhi gaanw wale chup thhe.
Atul:- Issi liye kehta hu saaf safaayi jaruri hai...Jitna saaf safaayi hoga utna hi kam aisi beemari failegi.
Beemari do tarah ke hote hain...Ek jo ek insaan se dusre me failte hain (communicable) aur dusra jo nahi failta...Failne waalo beemari ko ham rok sakte hai...Acche saaf safaayi se yaa fir usko jadd se khatm kar ke (root cause).
Beemari ka ilaaj karne se accha hai beemari hone hi naa de.
Main aap sab ko kuch beemari ke baare me kehne wala hun...Ummeed hai aap sab uss baat par dhyan denge...Fir dekhiye kutna badlaaw aata hai.
Iss baar gaanw wale Atul ki har baat aur program par saath dete hain...Aur dekhte hi dekhte beemari bhi kaafi hadd tak ghat jaata hai...Communicable disease me kaafi sudhaar aaya toh non-communicable disease (Diabetes, Bolld pressure, Ashthma, Heart atrack) jaise beemari wale marij ke lifestyle me bhi kaafi sudhar aaya.
Abb dhire dhire gaanw walon ka bhi hospital aur Doctor par fir se vishwas hone laga.
Aamir:- Bhai sach me aapne toh kamaal kar diya?
Atul:- Asli credit tum sab ko hi jaata hai...Mera toh kaam hai ek koshish karna...Maanna yaa naa maanna tum logo par hai...Tum log badlaaw ke liye taiyaar hue aur natija sabke saamne hain.
Atul:- Ek baat aur...Accha padha likha hai tu...Kuch baat kehna chaahta hu...Kabhi bhi insaan ko galat mat samajhna...Galat insaan ko sahi samjha toh kabhi bhi dhokha milega aur sahi insaan ko galat...Toh apna hi nukshaan hai.
Aur jaruri nahi ki har doctor jo kaabil hai wo seher me hi jaaye...Sabhi ka apna apna vajah hota hai...Haa agar mujhe sirf paise kamaane ka hi shaukh hota toh mai bhi seher me hi hota.
Aamir bas Atul ko dekh hi raha tha...Samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya kahe.
Atul:- Ek help chaahiye mujhe tera.
Aamir:- Mera help? Kya?
Atul:- Ek aur meeting karna hai...Mujhe unn sabhi gaanw walon ka naam chahiye jo HIV/AIDS, kustha rog (leprosy) aur Daayan jaise case ke victim ho?
Aamir:- Lekin kyu? Unn logon ki puri gaanw me beijjati ho jaayegi...Gaanw walon ka najar bahut galat hota hai aise logon par.
Atul:- Yahi najar badalna hai...Aise log jo aisi samasya ke saath jee rahe hai unki jindagi nark se badtar hoti hai...Human Right ki baatein toh bahut karte hai hum...Lekin aise logon ko dekh saamp sungh jaata hai.
Aur fikr mat kar...Unki naam nahi lunga kisi ke saamne...Bas unki samasya ko sabke saamne laana hai.
Aamir:- Isse kya hoga? Mujhe nahi lagta kuch badlaaw hoga.
Atul:- Koshish to kar hi sakte hain...Agar nahi badle toh ye samasya hai pure gaaanw ka...Wohi bhugtenge.
Aamir:- Kaise?
Atul:- Agar kisi ko AIDS yaa leprosy hai toh wo kisi ko nahi batayenge iss dar se ki samaaj unhe alag akr dega...Wo apni beemari chhupa lenge...Aur anjaane me ek se dusre logon ko failta jaayega.
Do problem hai...Ek dusre logon ko failega...Aur dusra bat hai ham unke saath galat kar rahe hai...Jitna der hoga utna hi beemari aur badhta jaayega...Aise me ham unka nukshaan kar rahe hai jo hamaara koi hak nahi...Aur ham unka ilaaj ka hak bhi cheen rahe hai.
Leprosy hona yaa fir Daayan jaisi samasya...Isme logo ki koi galti nahi hota...Bas dusre logon ke liye wo galat ho jaate hain...AIDS ye bhi jyadatar anjaane me hota hai.
Agar vakt rehte ilaaj kiya toh Leprosy puri tarah thik ho sakta hai...AIDS puri tarah thik toh nahi hoga fir bhi acche life jee sakte hai.
Aise me do faaidaa hai...Ek ham aisi beemari failne se rok sakte hain...Aur dusra...Humar Right...Unko bhi jeene ka hak de sakte hai...Acchi jeevan de sakte hai bina kisi dar ke.
Atul ki ye baat Aamir ko bhi kaafi pasand aaya.
Wo soch raha tha ki "Abb aur kitna kuch karega...Itna toh kar hi chuka hai...Gaanw ka health me bahut badlaaw aaya tha...Uske soch se pare...Aur ye paise ke liye bhi nahi tha...Bas ek doctor hone ka dharm."
Aur aaj Atul ko jaate dekh Aamir yahi sab soch raha tha.
Aisi hi kuch baatein tha jo Aamir ko Atul ki aur bhi ijjat karne par majbur kar raha tha.
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Friends Update 112 is posted... Please read and give your valuable feedbacks.
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Aryan s.
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Superb doctor....
Mind-blowing....
Yeh update lagta hai aapne dil se likha hai....
for the update
Sushant Devgan
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kamdev99008
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bhai 2nd century karne ke liye.Bohot hi knowledgeable update diya hai bhai aapne.
Par bhai Shreya ke papa ne esa kya keh diya ki Atul ko gaanw chhod kar jana pada?
Arjun Singh 72
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No problem bro...Even due to lack of time, I could not reach much stories...Read whenever you get the time.Brother, do not mind what I am going to say. Your story has moved a lot and I have to read your story from the beginning and I am already reading some stories, so when I am free, I will read your story first. Hope you understand me. Thank You...
