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Romance Kasam - Love is not Everything (Completed)

Champ_AK_81

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UPDATE 69

Kis soch me khoye ho?

Atul:- Soch raha hu...Propose kaise karu...Kabhi vakt aur jagah sahi nahi hota to kabhi himmat hi nahi kar paa raha hu.

Pyar karna aashaan hai propose usse bhi mushkil.

Nisha:- Sidhe jaa kar bol do apni dil ki baat...Pyar kiya to darna kya?

Atul:- Ye sabhi dialogue film me hi acche lagte hai...Yaha hakikat me bahut fat rahi hai.

Nisha:- Kya baat hai? Kabhi kisi se nahi darne wala Atul ki baato me aaj dar?

Atul:- Insaan hu yaar...Bhoot pret aur pyar se dar lagta hai.

Nisha:- Mountain dew peeyo aur suru ho jaao...Dar ke aage jeet hai.

Atul:- Kya tum bhi...Meri help karne ki jagah mera hi majaak udaa rahi ho.

Hmm...Idea!

Nisha:- Kya idea?

Atul:- Mountain Dew se yaad aaya...Kajal ko dhokhe se vodka pila deta hu...Fir karta hu propose...Agar inkaar bhi karegi to nashe me gussa nahi hogi...Mujhe bahut dar lagta hai yaar uske gussa se.

Fir Atul Nisha ki taraf dekhne lagta hau...Nisha usse hi ghur rahi thi.

Atul:- Kaisa laga mera idea?

Nisha:- Bakwaash.

Abb Nisha se raha nahi jaa raha tha...Atul ki help karne ke liye uss par kya beet rahi thi ye sirf wohi jaanti thi...Lekin naa jaane kyu wo bhi Atul ke saath majaak karne lag gayi thi.

Anjaane me hi dono ka dosti itna gehra ho gaya tha ki Nisha ke liye Atul ka saamne rehna hi kaafi tha...Haalaath jaisa bhi ho Atul ka saath aur Atul ki baaton me aise kho jaati ki wo apna saara dukh dard bhul kar bas saamne chal rahe pal me jeene lagti thi.

Atul:- Please help karo naa.

Nisha:- Tum majaak kar rahe ho naa?

Dil se ek dua nikli ki Atul haa bol de.

Atul:- Nahi...Sach me pyar karta hu Kajal se.

Nisha:- Lekin aisa lag to nahi raha hai...Tum tabhi se majaak hi kar rahe ho...Abhi propose karne ki baat kar rahe thhe...Fir ussi baat ka majaak bana rahe thhe?

Atul:- Wo to bas dil ka dar ko halka karne ke liye...Abb serious hu.

Fir achanak se Atul serious dikhne laga aur saath hi Nisha ko yakin.

Kuch der ki khaamoshi ko tod kar Atul ne kehna suru kiya.

Atul:- I think...Itne vakt ho gaye ham dono ko saath me...Abb to ek dusre ko acche se jaante bhi hai...Pata nahi ye dosti kab pyar me badal gayi...Shayad Kajal mujhe pehle se hi acchi lagti thi...Lekin uss vakt ye ehsas kabhi nahi hua...Jab se pyar ko jaana hai, mehsus kiya hai tab pata chala "I love her. I love her so much."

Really its wonderful feeling...Bata nahi sakta din raat bas Kajal ke baare me hi sochna, uski fikr karna...Chhoti chhoti khushiyon me jeena.

Thanks a lot Nisha...Agar tum mujhe pyar ke baare me nahi bataati to shayad hi kabhi mujhe iss baat ka ehsas hota...You are my bestesttttt friend...Thanks a lot.

Atul excitement me bole jaa raha tha aur uski har baat Nisha ki dil me chubh rahi thi.


Nisha:- Mai kaise help kar sakti hu?

Atul:- Pyar to karta hu but abhi bhi jyada kuch pata nahi...Kajal ko kaise propose karu...Impress karu ye sab acche se jaanta nahi.

Please bataao na...Ladkiyo ko kya jyada pasand aati hai...Kaise wo impress hoti hai...Unki kya khwahish hoti hai ki koi unse aise propose kare.

Nisha:- Lekin mujhe kya pata Kajal ki choice kya hai?

Atul:- Tum apne baare me bataao...Yaa fir generally kisi ladki ki baare me...Sample samajh kar koshish karunga.

Nisha:- Ok thik hai...Raat me bataaungi...Tumhe kya karna hai?

Dil par patthar rakh kar Nisha ne haa keh diya...Ye baat wo bhi jaanti thi ki Atul uski pasand ki har cheej karega lekin fir bhi uska kabhi nahi ho paayega...Wo jaanti thi ki uski dil kis tarah se tootegi fir bhi wo taiyaar ho gayi...Shayad Atul ki khushi ke liye.

Atul ne ek baar fir Nisha ko excitement me gale laga liya.

Atul:- Thanks...Thanks a lot...Mujhe pata tha sirf tum hi mujhe help kar sakti ho.

Nisha:- Accha abb chalti hu...Ghar me kuch kaam hai.

Fir Nisha waha se nikal jaati hai...Atul kuch sochte hue usse piche se dekhta rehta hai jab tak wo Atul ki aankho se ojhal naa ho gayi...
Usse thoda ajeeb bhi lag raha tha...Aur khud se hi ek sawaal "Kya wo sahi hai yaa fir sahi kar raha hai?"

Jiska jawaab abhi bhi usse pata nahi tha.



Ye sab kya chutiyapa hai?

Gusse se Ajay ne Atul ko pucha...Tab usse yaad aaya.

Atul:- Kya hua?

Ajay:- Tujhe nahi lagta tu kuch jyada hi badal gaya hai?

Atul:- Hmm...Sach me bahut badal gaya hu...I am in love...May be that's why.

Ajay:- Kis se? Kajal se?

Atul:- Yes bro.

Ajay:- Tujhe ye galatfehmi kyu ho raha hai?

Atul:- Kya galatfehmi?

Ajay:- Tujhe lagta hai tu Kajal se pyar karta hai?

Atul:- Haa.

Ajay:- Lekin tum dono ko dekhne se aisa bilkul bhi nahi lagta.

Atul:- Ye tu kaise keh sakta hai?

Ajay:- Common sense naam ki bhi koi cheej hoti hai...Notice kar raha hu 2 months se jab se tour se waapas aaye hai...Pyar jaisa kuch hai hi nahi tum dono ke bich.

Atul:- Abb tujhe mere baare me mujhse jyada pata chal gaya?

Ajay:- Jab tujhe khud ke baare me hi pata nahi to obviously mujhe hi jyada pata hoga...Agar pata hota to tu aise khud ko hi dhokha nahi deta.

Atul kuch jawaab nahi deta...Bas Ajay ko hi dekhta rehta hai.

Ajay:- Meri baat maan...Abb aur khud se jhuth mat bol...Maan le ki tu Nisha se pyar karta hai...Aur ye dikh bhi raha hai.

Atul:- Nahi aisa kuch nahi hai aur nahi ho sakta.

Ajay:- Kyu nahi ho sakta?

Atul:- Kyu ki Nisha kisi aur se pyar karti hai...Aur wo meri sirf best friend hai...Mai sirf Kajal se pyar karta hu.

Fir itna keh kar Atul bhi apne ghar ke liye nikal jaata hai...Ajay sirf dekhta hi reh jaata hai aur uski munh se itna hi nikalta hai.

"Bewkoof...Iska kuch nahi ho sakta."

Room me pahunch kar Atul 2 cigarette nikaal kar jalaa leta hai.

Atul:- Ye sala pyar bhi pata nahi kya hai...Kabhi kabhi to lagta hai pyar se jyada chutiyapa aur kuch nahi.

Nisha se kuch aur kehna chaahta hu kehta kuch aur hu...Ajay ki sawaalo ka jawaab dene ki himmat nahi.

(Cigarette ko dekh kar) Kajal proposal accept kare yaa naa kare lekin drugist jarur bana dega ek din.

Jab se pyar ka ehsas hua hai 2 months se har roj cigarette peene laga hu...Har weekend ghar walo se chhupa kar vodka...Pata nahi ho kya raha hai aur kyu ho raha hai.
 

Aryan s.

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Confused aatma....
Lagta hai Doctor sahab ko kisi ne nehi bataya hai ki "consumption of Alcohol and cigarettes are injurious to health"
Sudhar jaiye nehi toh nisha bohot maregi....
Lagta Atul Nisha se bohot pyar karta hai....
:thanks: for the update
 

Naina

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ye atul to sach me.. ab kya bolu.. koi word hi nahi mil rahi hai ...
.itne paas rahkar bhi atul samajh na paya ki nisha ushe beinteha pyar karti hai. uski dil ke dard ko atul ehsaas na kar paya. ya fir samajhne ki kasish nahi kiya.

pyar ne bhi kya khoob rang dikha rahi hai . nisha apne pyar ko dil me chuppake, atul ko help kar rahi hai, Kajal ko propose karne ke liye .

lo.. ab smoking & drinking bhi karne lag gya.
Jane ish flashback me kya kya rang dikhaye.
Brilliant update champ ji.. Keep it up
 
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Champ_AK_81

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Confused aatma....
Lagta hai Doctor sahab ko kisi ne nehi bataya hai ki "consumption of Alcohol and cigarettes are injurious to health"
Sudhar jaiye nehi toh nisha bohot maregi....
Lagta Atul Nisha se bohot pyar karta hai....
:thanks: for the update
Thanks Aryan bhai for your support and review... Naa hi maarne ke liye Nisha hai aur naa hi abhi tak cigarette and alcohol touch kiya hai (for drinking purpose):D. Story ek passion aur imagination hai...Aise hi saath bane rahiye.
 
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