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Romance Kasam - Love is not Everything (Completed)

Champ_AK_81

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GLIMPSE OF UPDATE 99

Nisha:- Abb kya hai? Kyu bulaya?

Chhat me aate hi Nisha gusse se boli...Atul to pehle se hi gusse me tha...Fir bhi apna gussa dabaate hue.

Atul:- Mujhe ye Ravi thik nahi lag raha hai.

Nisha:- Toh?

Atul:- Kya toh? Usse dur raha karo.

Nisha:- Tum kaun hote ho mujhe ye salaah dene wale.

Nisha to gusse me bole jaa rahi thi lekin uski ye baat se abb Atul khud par aur control nahi kar paaya.

Atul:- Mai kaun hu? Abb ye mat kehna ki ham dono alag ho gaye hai aur abb wo pyar bhi nahi raha.

Gusse me Atul ki aawaj bhi tej ho raha tha.

Nisha:- Ha abb nahi raha pyar...Nahi karti hu tum se pyar.

Atul abb Nisha ki aankho me dekhte hue...

Atul:- Sach bol rahi ho?

Nisha kuch jawaab deti isse pehle Atul ek baar fir se...

Atul:- Agar ye sach hai to mujhe bhi aaj se tumse koi matlab nahi...Mai bhi hamaare rishte ko iss tarah se tod lunga ki kabhi jutt nahi paayega aur naa hi jutne dunga.

Khud ki kasam khaata hu kabhi mud kar tumhe dekhunga bhi nahi...Har wo photos aur yaadein jalaa dunga jisme ham dono saath ho.

Fir tumhari jindagi tumhe mubaarak aur mera jindagi mujhe.


Itna keh kar Atul chhat ki chakkar lagaane lagta hai...Frustration me deewal par mukka marta to kabhi apne hi baal nochne laga...Gussa apne charam par tha.

Atul:- Bahut seh liya...Lekin abb aur kis hadd tak...Gussa sirf tumhe hi nahi aata...Aaj jo gussa dekh rahi ho naa...Yahi gussa...Aisi gussa me sirf "Me and Myself"...Baaki kisi ki mujhe parwah nahi aur koi matlab bhi nahi.


Abb Atul apna aankhein Nisha ki tarah uthaa kar.

Atul:- Jaldi jawaab do...Faaltu ka time nahi hai mere paas.

Nisha Atul ko dekh kar ekdum se dar jaati hai.

Atul ka chehra aur aankhein gusse me bilkul laal ho gaya tha...Chehra pura paseena me bheenga hua aur aankhein usko hi ghurta hua.

Atul:- Jawaab do.

Laghbhag dahaadte hue Atul bola.


[Sorry friends...Jyada likh nahi paaya...Abhi thoda busy hu aur aaj update dene ka bola tha iss liye ek baar fir update ka jhalak likh kar hi post kar raha hu...Next update kal tak complete kar ke post karunga.

Abb aap bataaiye Nisha ka jawaab kya hoga?

And sorry for short update (glimpse)...Will complete it by tomorrow.
 

Mbindas

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Bhai ye aane achchha nahi kiya ya fir to aapko update kal hi complet kar ke dena tha.
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Champ_AK_81

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Bhai ye aane achchha nahi kiya ya fir to aapko update kal hi complet kar ke dena tha.
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Socha tha bahut delay ho raha hai iss liye thoda sa likh kar post kar diya...Aage se complete likh kar hi post karunga. :)
 

Champ_AK_81

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UPDATE 99

Nisha:- Abb kya hai? Kyu bulaya?

Chhat me aate hi Nisha gusse se boli...Atul to pehle se hi gusse me tha...Fir bhi apna gussa dabaate hue.

Atul:- Mujhe ye Ravi thik nahi lag raha hai.

Nisha:- Toh?

Atul:- Kya toh? Usse dur raha karo.

Nisha:- Tum kaun hote ho mujhe ye salaah dene wale.

Nisha to gusse me bole jaa rahi thi lekin uski ye baat se abb Atul khud par aur control nahi kar paaya.

Atul:- Mai kaun hu? Abb ye mat kehna ki ham dono alag ho gaye hai aur abb wo pyar bhi nahi raha.

Gusse me Atul ki aawaj bhi tej ho raha tha.

Nisha:- Ha abb nahi raha pyar...Nahi karti hu tum se pyar.

Atul abb Nisha ki aankho me dekhte hue...

Atul:- Sach bol rahi ho?

Nisha kuch jawaab deti isse pehle Atul ek baar fir se...

Atul:- Agar ye sach hai to mujhe bhi aaj se tumse koi matlab nahi...Mai bhi hamaare rishte ko iss tarah se tod lunga ki kabhi jutt nahi paayega aur naa hi jutne dunga.

Khud ki kasam khaata hu kabhi mud kar tumhe dekhunga bhi nahi...Har wo photos aur yaadein jalaa dunga jisme ham dono saath ho.

Fir tumhari jindagi tumhe mubaarak aur mera jindagi mujhe.


Itna keh kar Atul chhat ki chakkar lagaane lagta hai...Frustration me deewal par mukka marta to kabhi apne hi baal nochne laga...Gussa apne charam par tha.

Atul:- Bahut seh liya...Lekin abb aur kis hadd tak...Gussa sirf tumhe hi nahi aata...Aaj jo gussa dekh rahi ho naa...Yahi gussa...Aisi gussa me sirf "Me and Myself"...Baaki kisi ki mujhe parwah nahi aur koi matlab bhi nahi.


Abb Atul apna aankhein Nisha ki tarah uthaa kar.

Atul:- Jaldi jawaab do...Faaltu ka time nahi hai mere paas.

Nisha Atul ko dekh kar ekdum se dar jaati hai.

Atul ka chehra aur aankhein gusse me bilkul laal ho gaya tha...Chehra pura paseena me bheenga hua aur aankhein usko hi ghurta hua.

Atul:- Jawaab do.

Laghbhag dahaadte hue Atul bola.


Kuch der to Nisha Atul ko dekhti hi rahi...Dar ke saath saath usse hairaani bhi ho rahi thi...Kya ye wohi Atul hai jisko wo jaanti hai...Itna gussa!!!Itna gussa wo bhi apne liye.

Nisha:- Abb apni galti chhupaane ke liye gusse ka sahara lo.

Shikayat bhari aawaj me Nisha ne pucha.

Itna gussa ke baawjud bhi Atul hans pada.

Atul:- (Laughing in Anger) Bewkoof hi rahogi...Aur bewkoofi ki koi ilaaj nahi.

Nisha:- Ha bewkoof hi to hu...Tumse pyar kiya aur andha viswash kiya...Aur meri hi bewkoofi ka sazaa mil rahi hai jis haal me aaj me hu.

Atul bas chup hi raha...Gussa to bahut aa raha tha...Lekin kar bhi kya sakta tha.

Nisha:- Kya Preeti itni acchi hai?

Thoda sa dard ke saath Nisha ne pucha.

Atul:- Wo bhi bewkoof hai tumhari tarah.

Nisha:- Aur ham dono ko bewkoof banane wale...Tum apne baare me kya kahoge?

Atul:- Mai bhi bewkoof tha...Jo tumse pyar ho gaya...Tumse dosti bhi nahi karna chaahiye tha.

Nisha:- Aa gayi naa dil ki baat jubaan par...Waise abb mai tum dono ke bich nahi aaungi.

Atul:- Mere baare me toh itna kuch bol rahi ho...Khud ki shakal bhi toh dekho aayine me...Mujhe jalaane ke liye Ravi se baat cheet badha di.

Nisha:- What?

Atul:- Jab baat apne par aa gayi toh? Waise baat tumhaare jhuthlaaane se jhuth nahi ho jaayega.

Nisha:- Kya jhuth? Maine kab mana kiya ki aaj wo mujhse baat nahi kar raha tha? Tumhari tarah jhuth toh nahi bolti.

Atul:- Toh maan rahi ho ki mujhe jalaane ke liye ye sah kar rahi ho.

Nisha:- Tumhe jalaane ke liye...Kya abb yahi kaam baaki reh gaya hai mere paas?

Ek baat kaan khol kar sun lo...Bhaad mein jaao tum aur Ravi.

Wo toh Ravi kuch kaam ki baat kar raha tha warna mujhe usse koi matlab hi nahi.

Atul:- Tum chaahti ho ki mai sach maan lu?

Nisha:- Jarurat nahi...Jo sochna hai socho...Mujhe koi matlab nahi...Aur mai sahi hone ke baawjud ye saabit nahi karungi.

Atul:- Exactly...Mujhe bhi jarurat nahi khud ko sahi saabit karne ki.


Dono ka gussa aur ego charam me pahunch gaya tha...Naa hi dono ek dusre ke saamne jhukna chaahte thhe aur naa hi ek dusre par vishwash kar paa rahe thhe.

Kuch der baad.

Atul:- Tumne jawaab nahi diya? Kya sach me abb tum mujhse pyar nahi karti...Abhi jawaab do...Apna apna raasta chun lenge.

Nisha kuch der Atul ko dekhti hai aur fir.

Nisha:- Tumse nafrat nahi kar paa rahi hu...Lekin jald koshish karungi.

Kuch sochne ke baad.

Atul:- Tumhe toh shayad hi kabhi samjha paaunga...Agar samajhna hota to pehle hi samajh jaati...Khair karti raho nafrat...Aur saabit kar dena "Mera pyar tumhare liye sabse bada bhool tha, Galat tha mai ki pyar ke raaste chal pada"

Faisla tumhare haath me hai...Mujh par yakin karna ya naa karna...Agar kabhi yakin ho bhi jaaye to itna late mat kar dena ki tab tak mai hi badal jaau...Mai mai naa rahu.

Pehli baar Atul apna gussa bhul kar emotional ho gaya.

Fir wo waha aur reh nahi paaya...Kya baatein karta aur baaton ka matlab hi kya tha.

Dono apne apne room ki taraf jaane lage...Nisha ki aankho me aansu thaa to Atul ki aankhon ka bhi waisa hi haal tha...Uski bhi aankhein nam ho gaya tha.

Shayad dono mehsus kar rahe thhe...Unka future abb jyada nahi hai...Aaj nahi to kal wo din aa hi jaayega.
 

Hellohoney

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Bro bhot emotinal update aarahe he yar kya bachoki tarah ladte he ye dono kisiki bhi baatme aajate he waiting for next update
 
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Champ_AK_81

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Bro bhot emotinal update aarahe he yar kya bachoki tarah ladte he ye dono kisiki bhi baatme aajate he waiting for next update
Thanks Hellohoney bhai for your support and review...Great to see you after long time...Ravi ki planning hi aisi hai ki dheere dheere dono uski plan me fasa gaye...Aur jhuth ko baar baar cheekh cheekh kar bolne se wo sach lagne lagta hai...Ravi ki plan iss liye nahi likha ki story aur lamba ho jaata bas uske plan ke effects ko dikhaya.

Aise hi saath bane rahiye bhai.
 

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Friends Update 99 is posted...Please read and give your valuable feedbacks.
Pyar m jhagde hote h lekin ye tho sarasar galat h galat fehmi ko bhi sahi point of view de rahe ho tum

Ab pyar m sabse jyada ego ko dur rakhna chahiye ab ye dono ego p leliya yhi sabse badi bhool h in dono ki


Very nicely explained bro :claps:
 
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