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Romance Kasam - Love is not Everything

Discussion in 'Hindi' started by Champ_AK_81, Feb 16, 2019.

  1. Champ_AK_81

    Champ_AK_81 Well-Known Member

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    Thanks Killar bhai for your support and review...Sachche pyar ko paane ke liye abhi aur bhi pariksha baaki hai...Aise hi saath bane rahiye.
     
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    Posting.
    Bas aane wali hai.
    :beaten: Posting.
     
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    UPDATE 72

    Kajal Atul ko hi dhund rahi thi...Jab kuch der dhundne ke baad bhi Atul nahi mila tab wo soch me pad gayi...Atul yaha hai bhi ya nahi.

    Ek baccha Kajal ke paas aaya aur ek card de kar chala gaya.

    "You are looking beautiful."

    Ye padhte hi Kajal fir se chaaro taraf dekhne lagi...Tabhi dusra bachcha aaya...Wo bhi Kajal ko card de kar chala gaya.

    "My first friend (girl) in this college."

    Fir issi tarah baar baar bachche Kajal ke saamne aate rahe aur usko card dete rahe.

    "A special one."

    "Our friendship is priceless and always will be."

    "I want to confess something to my caring and motivating friend.'

    "Until few weeks ago, I thought it is just friendship. Only true friendship. Nothing else."

    "Now I feel something different. Kuch kuch hone laga hai."

    "I think I am in love."

    "Yes I love you."

    Cards padhte vakt Kajal ki bhaaw teji se badalne laga...Abb wo Atul ka aur intejaar nahi kar paa rahi thi...Wo idhar udhar daud kar Atul ko dhundh rahi thi.

    Tabhi saamne ke ped se Atul baahar aaya...Face Hat se cover tha...Baaki ka get up same tha jisse Nisha ke saamne try kiya tha.

    Bina der kiye Kajal Atul ke paas pahunchi...Dhire dhire Atul ne apna chehra uthaya...Atul ki hontho me aisi muskaan tha ki Kajal bhi ek pal ke liye Atul ki muskaan me kho gayi.

    Fir agle hi pal.

    Kajal:- Ye sab...Ye sab...

    Atul:- Ha ye sach hai.

    I love you.

    Bahut dino se tumhe apna dil ki baat kehna chaahta tha lekin dar tha ki kahi tum inkaar naa kar do.

    Lekin aaj nahi...Aaj sab kuch kehna chaahta hu...Apni dil ki baat...Apni feelings...Sab kuch.


    Kajal:- Par...

    Atul:- Tum ne to bataya bhi nahi...Tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho naa? Kya tum jindagi ki iss safar me mera saath dogi.

    Atul ummeed bhari najro se Kajal ko dekh raha tha.

    Kajal:- Mai...Mai kisi aur se ppppyar kkarti hu.

    Kajal ne darte hue hi sahi par Atul ki aankho me dekhte hue kaha.

    Atul:- Pplease abhi mmajaak mat karo.

    Atul ka jubaan bhi uska saath nahi de raha tha.

    Kajal:- Nnahi...Mmai majaak nahi kar rahi hu.

    Atul khud do kadam piche hat gaya...Usse samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki ye sab uske saath hi kyu hota hai!!!

    Achanak se aage aa kar Kajal ke kandhe ko pakar kar.

    Atul:- Meri aankho me dekh kar kaho...Kya tum mujhse pyar nahi karti?

    Kajal:- Nahi...Nahi karti.

    Abb Atul se raha nahi gaya...Wo wohi jameen me ghutno ke bal gir gaya...Aankho me abb aansu aa gaye.

    Kajal:- Atul...

    Atul:- Please tum jaao abb...Mujhe akela chhod do.

    Kajal:- Lekin tumhe aise kaise.

    Atul:- (Gusse se) Ek baar me sunti nahi ho...Just go.

    Kajal:- Nahi...Mai tumhe iss haal me...

    Atul:- Taras khaa rahi ho tum mujh par...Just go...Jaao yaha se.

    Atul ka gussa dekh iss baar Kajal bhi dar gayi.

    Kajal:- Please apna khayal rakhna.

    Itna keh kar Kajal waha se chali gayi...Atul ki haalat par usse bhi bura lag raha tha aur man hi man wo bhi dua kar rahi thi ki Atul khud kk sambhaal sake.

    Kajal ke jaate hi Atul se raha nahi gaya...Pehle to jameen me wo punch maarta raha...Aur jab tak jakhmi naa ho gaya tab tak maarta raha.

    Fir baccho ki tarah rone laga...Apni kismat aur apni haalaath par.

    Kyu? Kyu mere saath hi aisa hota hai? Pyar karna gunaah hai kya? Kitne sapne thhe? Kitne armaan thhe? Lekin hua kya? Kaanch ki tarah dil toot gaya...Jo abb kabhi nahi judega...Sab kuch khatm ho gaya...Sab khatm.





    Tu hi mera saccha dost hai...Dost hi to dost ke kaam aate hai?

    Ajay:- Hello Atul...Hello.

    Atul:- Mai hi bol raha hu.

    Ajay:- Tune peeya hai?

    Atul:- Nahi...Dasru aur kismat yahi mujhe pee rahe hai...

    Ajay:- Kaha hai tu? Ruk mai aa raha hu.

    Atul:- Ghar me hu...Aaja yaar..Jaldi se aa...Akela ho gaya hu mai...Baatein karni hai...Please aa jaa.

    Fir Atul ek cigarette jala kar chhat me jaata hai.

    Chhat me kuch hi der hua tha ki.

    Atul.

    Kaan me ye tej aawaj padte hi.

    Atul:- (With smile) Aaj sach me chhadh gayi hai...Nisha wo bhi iss vakt...Sach me chhadh gaya hai.

    Atul!!!

    Gusse se bhari iss aawaj se Atul Nisha ki taraf palta.

    Atul:- Are Nisha tum...Matlab tum sach me ho.

    Nisha:- Ye sab kya hai...Mana kiya tha na tumhe.

    Atul:- Aaj pee lene do...Aaj gham ko bhula lene do.

    Itna keh kar Atul chup ho gaya...Nisha ke man me jo dar tha wo abb aur badh gaya.

    Nisha:- Kya hua? Bolo Kajal ne kya kaha?

    Atul:- Kya kahegi? Aur kyu kahegi?

    Nisha:- Saaf saaf bolo.

    Atul:- Thukra diya mujhe...Mere pyar ko...Kya kya sapne dekhe thhe...Lekin ek pal me thukra diya mujhe.

    Fir Atul ladkhadaate hue Nisha ke paas pahunch gaya.

    Atul:- Sharif insaan banna hi duniya ka sabse bada paap hai...Kabhi bhi dhokha khaa jaate hai aur koi bhi dhokha de dete hai.

    Ham jaise jitne bhi sachcha pyar kyu naa kare ham sirf best friend hi bante hai...Aur baazi koi aur maar jaata hai?

    Bas bahut ho gaya sharaafat...Agar ladki pataana hai to I have to be badass.

    Nisha:- Ye tum kya bol rahe ho.

    Atul:- Sach bol raha hu...Aur yahi accha hai...No one cares about true love...And no one will see it...Dekhna bhi nahi chaahte.

    Aaj mujhe khud ki baat me sacchaai dikh rahi hai...Pyar se bada chutiyapa aur kuch nahi...Be single and love yourself.

    Atul baahar se bhale hi gussa tha lekin andar se toot chuka tha...Upar se daaru ki nasha...Kuch bhi bole jaa raha tha...Bas apna dard ko bhulaane ki koshish kar raha tha.

    Saamne Nisha ka bhi haal kuch thik nahi tha...Naa hi apne dil ki baat bol paa rahi thi...Aur naa hi Atul ko iss haal me dekh paa rahi thi...Bas kisi tarah Atul ko sambhaalne ki nakaam koshish kar rahi thi.
     
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    Friends Update 72 is posted...Please read and give your valuable feedbacks.
     
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    Aab to aise hona hi tha na...:dazed: kyun ki atul bhale hi ishq ki raah par chal raha tha lekin sachha pyar kisi dusre disha me thi. Aur atul bethasha pyar ke naam kanhi aur bhag raha tha. Aab to disha kya puri raah hi badal gayi...muskurate phulte gaalon par aansoon hi lakeer ban gayi...woh kahte hain na " ISHQ EK GUNAH HAI JISKI SHURUWAT DO MASUM BEGUNAHON SE HOTI HAI" wohi hua aaj Atul ke saath. Aaj uski najar me Ishq phirse gunah ban gaya. Lekin kahte hain naa saath me sachha pyar ho har asambhav sambhav hai . Bhale hi Nisha ke pash uska pyar ek dost ke rup me ho uske saath to hai aab to wohi ish namunkin ko mumkin karke dikhayegi.....

    Nisha tumhe atul ko pana hai to bohot kuch kar gujarna padega...ye ishq hai iski kayi rang hai...
     
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    Review bhi diya hai padh jaake....:slap:
     
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    pyar me koi jor nahi hai... Ab atul jor jabar jasti to kajal ke pyar ko nahi paa sakta.. jo Kajal ke na karne ke kaaran devdas banke nisha aage apna bhadash nikal raha hai.... ab pyar nahi hai to nahi hai... isme itna panic hona kya jaruri hai....
    kya bolte hai.. haan pyar aag ki dariya... ish me dub jana chahiye... atul ko purani baat bhulke nisha ke pyar me dub jana chahiye...
    Btw brilliant update champ ji.... Keep it up