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Ashu ki harkate dil chhu gayi yaar haaye ankhe mastani rato ki aur dil unn jazbato me pighala rah gaya :love3: khair :cough: bohot mast update tha ye 6,7,8 bc bohot bhadas wala bhi tha khaskar 7 bc tendua piche tha literally wo bhi jaha ye sab milte nahi lajmi hai kisi ne chore honge :?: ya kisi anhoni ki aashanka hai akhir story ka naam hi pralay hai :devil: khair bc mera bhi samana hua tha siyar se bole to jackle jo kutte jaise dikhate bc mai gaya tha bhoj khane bagal ke purvitole me aur jab mai baith ke khas raha tha to kutte wagerah jidhar patal fekte hai waha patal se jhuthe kha rahe the lekin galti mujhse bhi hui ki bc mere charpayi ke pass ek kutta aagaya aur idhar udhar sunghane laga aur upar se andhera tha bc lekin maine kaha ki thi to maine bachi puri uthayi aur usse kutte ke muh ke pass le gaya bc maine pura muh me sata diya tab bhi na khaa raha tha meri sulgi ki bc isko khila raha aur ye nakhre ke raha to maine uske muh pe pura sata diya puri aur bagal ke jo dost the bc hasne lage aur mai utha aur haath dhokr palta to dekha bahen ka lund lathi dande lekar uss kutte ke piche bhage pade hai baswari me tab mere dost ne batayi ki wo kutta nhi be siyar tha :sweat:
Thanks for Amazing review and personal experience :hehe:
Ashwini din ki chudail raato ki rani he ,uski aur meri alag kahani he :love:

Personal experience sahi tha tumhara, siyar to mene chidiyaghar me he dekhe the par Lomdi ek baar dikha tha gaon ke bahar .
 

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Update 7

June 17, 2018



Clinic se nikal ke sidha Rajan ki dukan ke paas aaya to dekha ke wo mera he wait kar raha tha, fir use leke hum nikle class ki taraf .

Rajan : Kya bhai itna der lagaya tum bhi ? August 2021 me 1st lecture attend kiya apan ne aur aaj January 2023 ko 2nd lecture karne ja re he , aise to ho gayi apni engineering :lol1: Ye writer ko bol kuchh speed weed badhane ko.

Me : Ha bsdke writer to nalla he na apne jaisa, usko to job wob to karni he nahi jo khali update he deta rahega bc.

Rajan : Fir bhi consistency naam ki koi chij to hoti he na bhai :sweat:

Me : Ha to tu review dena uske story ka ,me baat karta usse regular updates ke liye.

Aise he bakchodi karte karte 2no tution pohoche. 2:15 ho rahe the aur classes abhi chalu hone he wale the to bina koi bakchodi kiye hum chuphchaap 2nd floor pe gaye aur mast aage jake baith gaye.

Fir Nilam mam ne aake padhaya kuchh sums solve kiye, fir dusra teacher aaya fir 2ra lecture khatam karte karte dimag bhanna gaya. Classes khatam hui to dekha check kiya 5 bajne wale he aur Nisha ka koi call nahi aaya tha abtak.

Hum dono bike pe baith ke nikal he rahe the ke ek scooty wali aake ekdam se mere samne 2 inch pe ruki , gaur se dekha to helmet jana pechana sa laga .

Renuka : Aur janab aaj badi jaldi me lag rahe ho , bhool gaye kya hume ?

Me : Sorry yaar ,par kahi jana tha to jaldi nikal raha tha. Baki hum kal milte he na.

Re : Arre majak kar rahi thi, muze bhi bahar jana he aaj, aur apni main classes Saturday-Sunday ko he hoti he, Monday se leke Thursday tak regular students ke classes hote he.

Rajan : Ye achha kiya bataya tumne …

Me : Renuka ye Rajan he mera dost, aur rajan ye Renu .

dono ne ek dusre ko hi hello kiya fir next week aane ka bol ke wo chali gayi aur mene bhi gaadi chalu ki.

Rajan : bhai kasam se jab-jab sochta hu ke serious ho jaunga padhai aur career ko leke ,tab tab koi na koi ladki aake jhand kar jati he.

Me : Chup bsdk, saale khud ek jagah focus nahi kar sakta ye nahi bolega aur naam dalega ladki pe, bc jis ladki ke chakkar me ye sab kiya wo kisi aur se set ho gyi aur apan fokat me Vikas chodu se panga le liye, aur wo bhadwa Vikas bc chutiye ne hospital se he meri jindagi ke lavde lagva diye saale ne. pure saal bhar ki padhai paani me gayi wo alag upar se babu ji gariya rahe roj roj wo alag.

Ek tarike se mere andar ka daba hua gussa bahar aa raha tha aur Rajan ye baat janta tha.

Rajat : Sorry bhai, sala me kya janta tha wo ladki ke pichhe itna bada game ho jayega ,upar se Vikas ki jaisi shakal aur aukat he usse bada punch mara tha saale ne, humne usse hospital pohochaya aur wo humra ek saal kha gaya.

Yahi past wali bakchodi karte karte hum uske dukan tak aa gaye.

Rajan : Chal ek cup chai samosa lele aur mood thik kar le bhai, maana galti ho gayi mere se uss time par maafi bhi to dede yaara.

Me : Chai manga de khali tu aur jane de uss baat ko me bhi bhul gaya hu usko ab.

Chai pite pite maine Nisha ko call ki to usne bataya ke wo aaj uski didi ke pass he rukne wali hai to muze rukne ki jarurat nahi thi .

Rajan ke dukan se me sidha Tehsil office gaya, sham ke 5 baj chuke the aur lagbhag office ke band hone ka he time tha par papa ne jo kaam bataya tha uska puchhna bhi jariri tha.
Par wo kaam bhi nahi hua kyonki kaam ka banda chhutti pe gaya tha to waise he bahar aaya, dopahar ko bhi kuchh dhang se khaya nahi tha to bhukh bhi lagi hui thi, ek restaurant me aake baith gaya aur khana order kiya aur sochne laga ke past me kya galti ki thi maine aur agar me samay me pichhe jata time travel kar ke to kya wo sab hone se rok sakta tha jo hua tha ?

Itne me khana aa gaya aur mene bhi dimag se sare purane khayal nikal diye ,khana kha ke bill pay kiya aur bahar aaya. Bahar restaurant ke samne he beer shop thi to bada man kiya pine ka,

Mera dil : 6 baj rahe he aise to ,ek thandi beer pi lete he aise bhi ghar jate jate 8 bajenge he.

Dimag : last time pi thi tab kya bhasad machai thi wo yaad kar lavde fir bol.


Dil : Wo whisky thi ye beer he, beer se jhanta kuchh nahi hota , aur konsa ghar jake pahad todne wala he tu .

Dimag : mat maan ,gand mara ,muze kya !

Ye sab bakchodi side kar ke me beer shop pe gaya 2 beer leli aur gaon ki taraf nikal liya.

Sheher1 ki boundary se bahar aate he kuchh he der me jungle shuru hone lagta he ,usse pehle 1-2 jagah dhaba aur petrol pump he jaha jyadatar truck driver rukte he, to me bhi waha ek dhaabe pe gaya ,kaaju leke ek jagah baith gaya aur beer ke chhote chhote sip lene laga. Shaam ke 7 baje the aur andhera hone laga tha , dono beer gatakne ke baad me aaram se utha aur bike leke ghar ki taraf nikla .

Beer ka nasha kam he tha aur aise he ghar aaram se ja sakta tha aur jabtak koi aake sungh na le tabtak kisi ko bhi pata nahi chalne wala tha ke mene pi rakhi he. Jungle shuru ho chuka tha aur raasta pura sunsaan tha ,bich bich me 2-4 gaadiya aati jaati rehti thi. Abhi June ka mahina chalu he par barish kaha abhi shuru hui he , bas hawa thodi thandi thi par Saagwaan ke pedo ka jungle hone ke kaaran hawa me garmahat bhi thi . Abhi me jungle ke bich me he tha ke mere mutrashay jisko hum angreji me bladder kehte he usne signal dena chalu kiya ke tanki khali karo. Aur majburi me aake maine gadi ko raaste se niche utara aur wahi paas me mutne laga.


Jaise he meri tanki khali hui aur aankhe kholi to saamne pedo ke upar koi jeev baitha hua lag raha tha jo ki andhere me bilkul bhi nahi dikh raha tha par uski chamakili aankhe uski maujudgi ki gawah thi. Meri saanse usse dekh ke wahi ki wahi atak gayi ,ek anjane darr se hath paon ful gaye ,wo jeev shayad apni mundi hila raha tha jo uski aankho se dikh raha tha , par wo na to gurra raha tha na he ped se niche utar raha tha .

kuchh seconds tak ye sab chalta raha, itni der me maine apna hausla jama kar liya aur ek ek kadam pichhe hatate hue bike ke paas pohocha aur jaise bike ko touch hua me palti maar ki seat pe baitha aur bike start kar ke gaon ki taraf bhagai. Kuchh second baad aisa laga ke mere pichhe koi he aur me akela nahi hu is raaste pe ! Dimag keh raha tha aage chalta reh,pichhe dekhega to pakka gand fatt jayegi, to mene bhi dimag ki suni aur uss sense ko bhula ke bullet daudata raha .

Vatavaran me bullet ki awaj he sunai de rahi thi ke muze firse aisa laga jaise koi mere sath daud raha ho aur iss baar mera dimag muze kuchh kehta usse pehle maine apni aankhe bayi taraf ghumai aur rear view mirror me dekha ke 2 bayi aankhe muzse 5 foot duri se he par thoda pichhe daud rahi thi aur andhere me wo konsa jeev he ye bhi pata nahi chal raha tha ,ke wo sher he ya tendua ya koi Aur ! iss waqt me bullet ko 90 km/hr ki speed se dauda raha tha aur tabhi samne se ek tempo aaya aur uske headlight ki roshni me maine use dekha ….



To be continued…
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Update 7

June 17, 2018



Clinic se nikal ke sidha Rajan ki dukan ke paas aaya to dekha ke wo mera he wait kar raha tha, fir use leke hum nikle class ki taraf .

Rajan : Kya bhai itna der lagaya tum bhi ? August 2021 me 1st lecture attend kiya apan ne aur aaj January 2023 ko 2nd lecture karne ja re he , aise to ho gayi apni engineering :lol1: Ye writer ko bol kuchh speed weed badhane ko.

Me : Ha bsdke writer to nalla he na apne jaisa, usko to job wob to karni he nahi jo khali update he deta rahega bc.

Rajan : Fir bhi consistency naam ki koi chij to hoti he na bhai :sweat:

Me : Ha to tu review dena uske story ka ,me baat karta usse regular updates ke liye.

Aise he bakchodi karte karte 2no tution pohoche. 2:15 ho rahe the aur classes abhi chalu hone he wale the to bina koi bakchodi kiye hum chuphchaap 2nd floor pe gaye aur mast aage jake baith gaye.

Fir Nilam mam ne aake padhaya kuchh sums solve kiye, fir dusra teacher aaya fir 2ra lecture khatam karte karte dimag bhanna gaya. Classes khatam hui to dekha check kiya 5 bajne wale he aur Nisha ka koi call nahi aaya tha abtak.

Hum dono bike pe baith ke nikal he rahe the ke ek scooty wali aake ekdam se mere samne 2 inch pe ruki , gaur se dekha to helmet jana pechana sa laga .

Renuka : Aur janab aaj badi jaldi me lag rahe ho , bhool gaye kya hume ?

Me : Sorry yaar ,par kahi jana tha to jaldi nikal raha tha. Baki hum kal milte he na.

Re : Arre majak kar rahi thi, muze bhi bahar jana he aaj, aur apni main classes Saturday-Sunday ko he hoti he, Monday se leke Thursday tak regular students ke classes hote he.

Rajan : Ye achha kiya bataya tumne …

Me : Renuka ye Rajan he mera dost, aur rajan ye Renu .

dono ne ek dusre ko hi hello kiya fir next week aane ka bol ke wo chali gayi aur mene bhi gaadi chalu ki.

Rajan : bhai kasam se jab-jab sochta hu ke serious ho jaunga padhai aur career ko leke ,tab tab koi na koi ladki aake jhand kar jati he.

Me : Chup bsdk, saale khud ek jagah focus nahi kar sakta ye nahi bolega aur naam dalega ladki pe, bc jis ladki ke chakkar me ye sab kiya wo kisi aur se set ho gyi aur apan fokat me Vikas chodu se panga le liye, aur wo bhadwa Vikas bc chutiye ne hospital se he meri jindagi ke lavde lagva diye saale ne. pure saal bhar ki padhai paani me gayi wo alag upar se babu ji gariya rahe roj roj wo alag.

Ek tarike se mere andar ka daba hua gussa bahar aa raha tha aur Rajan ye baat janta tha.

Rajat : Sorry bhai, sala me kya janta tha wo ladki ke pichhe itna bada game ho jayega ,upar se Vikas ki jaisi shakal aur aukat he usse bada punch mara tha saale ne, humne usse hospital pohochaya aur wo humra ek saal kha gaya.

Yahi past wali bakchodi karte karte hum uske dukan tak aa gaye.

Rajan : Chal ek cup chai samosa lele aur mood thik kar le bhai, maana galti ho gayi mere se uss time par maafi bhi to dede yaara.

Me : Chai manga de khali tu aur jane de uss baat ko me bhi bhul gaya hu usko ab.

Chai pite pite maine Nisha ko call ki to usne bataya ke wo aaj uski didi ke pass he rukne wali hai to muze rukne ki jarurat nahi thi .

Rajan ke dukan se me sidha Tehsil office gaya, sham ke 5 baj chuke the aur lagbhag office ke band hone ka he time tha par papa ne jo kaam bataya tha uska puchhna bhi jariri tha.
Par wo kaam bhi nahi hua kyonki kaam ka banda chhutti pe gaya tha to waise he bahar aaya, dopahar ko bhi kuchh dhang se khaya nahi tha to bhukh bhi lagi hui thi, ek restaurant me aake baith gaya aur khana order kiya aur sochne laga ke past me kya galti ki thi maine aur agar me samay me pichhe jata time travel kar ke to kya wo sab hone se rok sakta tha jo hua tha ?

Itne me khana aa gaya aur mene bhi dimag se sare purane khayal nikal diye ,khana kha ke bill pay kiya aur bahar aaya. Bahar restaurant ke samne he beer shop thi to bada man kiya pine ka,

Mera dil : 6 baj rahe he aise to ,ek thandi beer pi lete he aise bhi ghar jate jate 8 bajenge he.

Dimag : last time pi thi tab kya bhasad machai thi wo yaad kar lavde fir bol.


Dil : Wo whisky thi ye beer he, beer se jhanta kuchh nahi hota , aur konsa ghar jake pahad todne wala he tu .

Dimag : mat maan ,gand mara ,muze kya !

Ye sab bakchodi side kar ke me beer shop pe gaya 2 beer leli aur gaon ki taraf nikal liya.

Sheher1 ki boundary se bahar aate he kuchh he der me jungle shuru hone lagta he ,usse pehle 1-2 jagah dhaba aur petrol pump he jaha jyadatar truck driver rukte he, to me bhi waha ek dhaabe pe gaya ,kaaju leke ek jagah baith gaya aur beer ke chhote chhote sip lene laga. Shaam ke 7 baje the aur andhera hone laga tha , dono beer gatakne ke baad me aaram se utha aur bike leke ghar ki taraf nikla .

Beer ka nasha kam he tha aur aise he ghar aaram se ja sakta tha aur jabtak koi aake sungh na le tabtak kisi ko bhi pata nahi chalne wala tha ke mene pi rakhi he. Jungle shuru ho chuka tha aur raasta pura sunsaan tha ,bich bich me 2-4 gaadiya aati jaati rehti thi. Abhi June ka mahina chalu he par barish kaha abhi shuru hui he , bas hawa thodi thandi thi par Saagwaan ke pedo ka jungle hone ke kaaran hawa me garmahat bhi thi . Abhi me jungle ke bich me he tha ke mere mutrashay jisko hum angreji me bladder kehte he usne signal dena chalu kiya ke tanki khali karo. Aur majburi me aake maine gadi ko raaste se niche utara aur wahi paas me mutne laga.


Jaise he meri tanki khali hui aur aankhe kholi to saamne pedo ke upar koi jeev baitha hua lag raha tha jo ki andhere me bilkul bhi nahi dikh raha tha par uski chamakili aankhe uski maujudgi ki gawah thi. Meri saanse usse dekh ke wahi ki wahi atak gayi ,ek anjane darr se hath paon ful gaye ,wo jeev shayad apni mundi hila raha tha jo uski aankho se dikh raha tha , par wo na to gurra raha tha na he ped se niche utar raha tha .

kuchh seconds tak ye sab chalta raha, itni der me maine apna hausla jama kar liya aur ek ek kadam pichhe hatate hue bike ke paas pohocha aur jaise bike ko touch hua me palti maar ki seat pe baitha aur bike start kar ke gaon ki taraf bhagai. Kuchh second baad aisa laga ke mere pichhe koi he aur me akela nahi hu is raaste pe ! Dimag keh raha tha aage chalta reh,pichhe dekhega to pakka gand fatt jayegi, to mene bhi dimag ki suni aur uss sense ko bhula ke bullet daudata raha .

Vatavaran me bullet ki awaj he sunai de rahi thi ke muze firse aisa laga jaise koi mere sath daud raha ho aur iss baar mera dimag muze kuchh kehta usse pehle maine apni aankhe bayi taraf ghumai aur rear view mirror me dekha ke 2 bayi aankhe muzse 5 foot duri se he par thoda pichhe daud rahi thi aur andhere me wo konsa jeev he ye bhi pata nahi chal raha tha ,ke wo sher he ya tendua ya koi Aur ! iss waqt me bullet ko 90 km/hr ki speed se dauda raha tha aur tabhi samne se ek tempo aaya aur uske headlight ki roshni me maine use dekha ….



To be continued…
शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai 😍❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😘😘😍😍

Ye yaha to apne hero ki to fati padi हे tendveko ko dekh ke aur ye uske pitaji Aur fad rahe hey 😁😁😁😁

Aur ye ashu to dusro ke lafdo mey kahe fasa rahi hey isko....

Aur ye last mey to bohot hi pyar aarha hey usko to apne hero par to.....

Lagta hey kuch kuch hey uske man mey ya kuch aur bat hey...


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Thakur

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शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai 😍❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😘😘😍😍

Ye yaha to apne hero ki to fati padi हे tendveko ko dekh ke aur ye uske pitaji Aur fad rahe hey 😁😁😁😁

Aur ye ashu to dusro ke lafdo mey kahe fasa rahi hey isko....

Aur ye last mey to bohot hi pyar aarha hey usko to apne hero par to.....

Lagta hey kuch kuch hey uske man mey ya kuch aur bat hey...


😍😘😘❤️❤️❤️😘❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Tendua aise bina bataye racing karega to fategi he na bhai :dazed:
Ashu ke faltu ke lafde wala part kal dalta hu story me.
Baki keep supporting with your awesome reviews :bigboss:
 

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Tendua aise bina bataye racing karega to fategi he na bhai :dazed:
Ashu ke faltu ke lafde wala part kal dalta hu story me.
Baki keep supporting with your awesome reviews :bigboss:
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Update 11- Jhand he sab !





Ghar pohoch ke wo bag leke bye bol ke ghar ke andar chali gayi aur me bhi apne ghar aaya aur bed pe let gaya.

Mobile check kiya to dekha class wali Renuka ka msg tha !

Isne aaj pehli baar muze msg kiya tha aur ab mera dil dhak-dhak karne laga.

Renuka : Hi 😀 I saw u in parking lot today. Tune bataya nahi ke teri gf bhi he !

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To be continued …





Maine uske msg ko notification se he dekh ke screen off kar di, bohot ho gaya BC ! mera aaj ka chutiyapa sehene ka stamina khatam ho gaya he, isko kal he dekhunga me .

Subah Vidya di ne muze jagaya,

Vidya di : Ajay (dhire se) jaldi uth ,Ajay !

Me : Kya he di, kya chahiye aapko subah subah ?

Didi : Kal tune Diksha ko dekha tha sheher1 ke mall me ?

Me : ha dekha tha, Ashwini ke bhai ke sath movie dekh ke bahar aa rahi thi wo tab dekha tha ,thodi baatchit ki hi hello bol ke chali gayi , bass. Good night .

Didi : chachi Ashwini aapko kaisi lagti he chachi ?

Me : aye didi didi ruko na plz …

Par di kaha ruki ,wo haste hste bahar chali gayi aur me unke pichhe . Subah subah meri nind haram kar di he in sab ne , ab uparwala jane din kaise katega !



Me bahar aangan me aaya ,dekha abhi thik se ujaala bhi nahi hua he.



Me : di please ek baar meri baat to suno na aap

Di : kyo bhai, aakhir kisi baat ka sidha jawab dete bhi ho tum kabhi ? class se ghar aate ho fir sidha apne room me jake gum mho jate ho, kabhi Ashwini ke sath to kabhi Nisha to kabhi koi aur matlab kya ho kya raha bhai ye sab tera .

Me : yaar di me kuchh nahi kar raha hu , bass jo kaam muz ko jo bol raha he wahi kar raha hu, kon mere pass aata he dur jata he muze khud he nahi pata, ab kya bolu me isme !

Didi : Yahi to problem he teri ke tu har kisi ki har baat manta he aur baad me pachhtata he ! Teri life he ye to decision koi aur kyu le ? Koi tere upar chadhega aur tu uske chadhne kyu de ? bata na ?

Me : Kyonki me ab wapas se wahi jhagde firse nahi shuru karna chahta , kam se kam me ye nahi chahta ke meri baato se koi jhagda hoy a muze firse ladai karni pade ! Bohot koshish ki khud ke ego ko upar rakhne ki aur uske fal me bhugat raha hu di, ab sir jhuka raha hu to bhi unke he samne jo iss layak he warna me wahi hu jo pehele tha , bass jitna aapko mere baare me pata he wo to bus trailer he, film na dekhni pade iski dua karna aap !

Mera maatha subah subah tanakne laga tha ,ek to yaha meri nind puri nahi hui thi to aankhe jal rahi thi upar se didi ne mere dwara gaade hue ego ko ukhadna shuru kiya tha jo achha bilkul bhi nahi tha .

Mene rassi se mere kapde nikale aur kone wale open bathroom pe jaake nahane laga.



Didi : wo Diksha ko tune isse pehle bhi kisi ke sath dekha tha na uske flat pe ?

Me : Ha didi, kya usne aapko puchhne ke liye kaha ye ?

Didi : Ha wo thoda ghabrai hui thi to kal se phone pe phone kar rahi thi.

Me : Aap ki ye dost Diksha muze achhi nahi lagi, aap distance bana lo isse.

Didi : kyu bhai, kya kharabi he usme bata jara ?

Me : Di kyu muh khulwa rahi ho aap bhi, jao jo karna he karo aap, me kyu bura banu aapke liye .

Didi : ha muze pata he uska BF tha pehle

Me : Pehele ? abhi pichhle hafte he to uske room pe dekha tha mene usko aur kal Ashwin ke sath movie pe gayi thi wo .

Didi : Ha to kya tum ladko jaise chandaal chokdi bana ke daru pike Pankaj udaas ke gaane sune wo ? bata fir kya kare ? galti ladki ki he ya nahi ye malum nahi par judge aise karte ho jaise high court ka judge ho !

Me : Di aap jao na yaar ab, me bolunga fir aap bura maan jaogi .

Di aise he naak sikod ke chali gayi, mera nahana ho gaya tha to kapde pehen liye aur bike leke jaane he laga tha jo mobile beep hua, Ashwini ka msg tha .

Ashwini : Good morning , nashta karne yaha aana ,papa ne bulaya he .



Mera mood tha subah subah kheto pe jaunga aur ghanta bhar kaam kar ke dosto se milne jaunga par lauda mera ab to .

Me Ashwini ke ghar jaake bahar aangan me baith gaya, thode der me Ashwini ki maa aai, muze dekha fir ghar ke pichhe jaake danda le aai aur muze do fatke jhaad diye !

Me : Arre chachi bawri ho gayi ke, kya subah subah maar rahi ho aap bhi ?

Unhone mera kaan pakda aur boli,

Chachi : Chaddi bhi thik se nahi pehenta tha tu tab yaha aane me koi sharam nahi aati thi laad sahab ko ,ab bade hue he to singh nikal aaye he kyu ? kab se dekh rahi hu aata he chai nashta kar ke nikal jata he, chachi to mar he gayi kyu nigode ?

Me : maafi chachi ,maafi deo :pray: galti ho gayi me he bawla ho gaya tha abse bistar leke yahi rehne aaunga roj raat ko , thik he na ?

Sharada chachi : Bass bass itna bhi maska mat maar ,aur andar aake baith chupchap.



Waah kya shuruat hui mere din ki ,mene upar dekh ke hath jode uday hote surya ko namaskar kiya aur andar hall me aake baith gaya .

Chachi andar se nashta le aai fir chai aur hamari yu he baate shuru hui ke kya kar raha tha itne din se , chacha ke kheto ka kaam jyada to nahi he na , fir chacha ke pith ke dard ki ramkahani shuru hui aur chalti rahi …

Mene nashta kar liya aur chai pine baitha, chachi plate leke kitchen me gayi. Mene chai ki ek chuski bhari he thi ke saamne se Ashwini night gown jo pura pura dhakta kandhe se pair tak wo pehne bahar aayi , uske jo darshan hue ke muh se chai bahar nikal aayi ! Sahi me wo abhi uske asli chudail wale avtar me thi, laal aankho me thodi si nind ,naak laal,baal bikhre hue ,matlab full chudail he kaho !


Wo jaise he muze dekhi fir khud ko dekhi aur ulte paon apne room me bhag gayi . me muskura ke chai ka cup niche rakha aur bahar aangan me aaya , phone pe bakchodi ki gaon ke dosto ko phone kiya to pata chala ye bhi Rajan jaise khud ka kuchh na kuchh kaam dhanda jama rahe he bc . Hume lagta he kisi ka education sahi se nahi hua to uska kya hoga, koi dost faltu ke chij me atka he to uska kya hoga etc etc ,par reality ye he har koi kese na kese kar ke khud ki naiya paar lagata he hai, jisne chonch di he wo daana bhi deta he hai !



Me aisa he timepass karta raha fir Shambhu chacha bahar aaye naha dho ke, unko namaste wagere kiya ,

Chacha : Ab shiva to uski biwi ke gaon gaya he to bail-bajar ja nahi sakte par ek kaam kar jo pani ke pump ka bataya than a uss din wo dekh ke aa aur 4 pump lene he muze aur tumhare liye bhi 1 lene ka kaha he Harish( mere babu ji) ne, to sheher1 jaoge to sahi se bhaav karna uska.

Me : Ji thik he .

Chacha : aur ye check leke jana ussi paas ke gaon wale bank me jaha hum gaye the aur waha ke manager se tum mile the ,aur usse paise le lena , thik he na ?

Me : Ha thik he, me chalta hu fir .

Me bike leke nikla aur ussi gaon ki taraf badha jaha bail-bajar aur wo bank he , lekin bich raste me mene kisi ko dekha to ruk gaya .

Me : Vinod , oo Vinod.

Me Nisha ke pati Vinod ko pichhe se aawaj laga raha tha par wo aise aage chale ja raha tha ke behra ho, fir yaad aaya ke isi ke baap ke dukaan pe mene iski gardan pakdi thi pichhle hafte ,tab to iska reaction natural he bhai !

Mene bike sidha jaake uske aage roki tab usne jo muze ghura ke kya kahu, aisa laga jaise saand laal kapde ko ghutra ho.

Vinod : Raasta chhod mera bc

Ab ye 3ri baa rho raha he jo subah se ,har koi aake mere sabar ka bhang-bhosda he kiye ja raha he jaise ke dunia me problems unhi ke khate me jama hoti ho.



Me : dekh bhai uss din jo hua uske liye maafi par tu khud sochle jinke sath tu ghume he wo kal se thane me lath khawe he , nahi yakin to baith ja khatare pe ,dikha ke laata hu.

Vinod : muze mat sikha saale, janta hu teri najar meri biwi pe he isiliye hamare ghar me ghusne aata he baar baar.

Me : Dekh Vinod ab me jyada bolunga nahi aur sununga bhi nahi, tu khud soch le 4 mahine pehle tu khud kaha tha aur aaj kaha he aur kiski wajah se he, agar kaam chahiye to sham ko 7 baje aa jana chowk pe warna tera nasib.

Mene bike ghumayi aur nikal gaya dusre gaon ki taraf,bc jiska achha karne jao wo khud he apni mara raha he aur sath me madat karne wale ko bhi gaali bakk raha he ,sahi me log chutiye hote he bc !

Gaon wale bank me jaake me sidha manager se mila to usne rukne ko kaha aur udhar ke he cashier ko check deke cash laane ko bola .

Me : Are sir ji ek aur kaam tha aap se .

Bank Manager : are boliye to sahi aap, hamare hath me hoga to karenge he .

Me : EK ladka he hamare yaha ka usko nokri chahiye, pehle karta tha wo par abhi aap samaz jaiye ab khud he matlab…

B.M. : Hmm aise to he yaha pe jagah khali aap leke aaiye usko kal fir dekhte he, kyu ?

Me : Arre sir ji bass kya aap bhi ,me laata hu usko kal he fir.



Chalo ek to kaam achha hua aaj ke liye :sweat:

B.M : ye lijiye aapki cash, gin lijiye , achha aap yahi pehelwan chacha ke gaon me rehte he na ?

Me : Ji ji,kuchh kaam he kya aapka , agar he to bataiye karenge kuchh na kuchh aapke liye bhi :D

BM : Hamare ek rishtedaar he wo sheher1 me rehti he, govt employee he aur yaha ke area ke inspection ke liye duty lagayi he, to unke liye rehne ko ghar chahiye tha .

Me : Dekhta hu me ,isi gaon me chahiye ya hamare wale me ?

BM : isi gaon me chahiye aur paise ka koi tension nahi he wo ho jayega , wo darasal ekdam imandaar aurat he aur yahi chij bhari padi he unko, isiliye upar se taar ghumake unko yaha bheja gaya he, aur yaha ke sarkari quarters to angrejo ke jamane ke he jo kab sir pe gire ya pataal me ghuse iska koi pata nahi .

Me : Me lagata hu koi na koi jugaad. Chaliye fir ,kal milta hu hamare ladke aur aapke ghar ke sath .



Saala aaj sahi me vishwas ho gaya ke koi fokat me kisi ko puchhta tak nahi, ab is vinod ke liye muze ghar ghar bhi khelna padega :banghead:



Mera pura din fir to pani ke pump ki bakchodi, tehsil office ke chakkar fir Rajan ke sath bakchodi me gaya , wo pehle to muze mall me dekh ke chauka par maafi mang ke chhut gaya . Me bhi kya bolta ab, bus sham tak wapas apne gaon aaya aur hath muh dho kar gaon ke chauk pe gaya jaha Vinod ko bulaya tha.

Subah se leke shaam tak jo circus chali uske kaaran hath pair dard kar rahe the par aaj iska chapter close karna he karna he bass. Meri soch se pare Vinod waha pe khada mila, aaj uska chehra utra hua nahi lag raha tha aur na he nashe me dikh raha tha .

Me : Aur bhai ekdam ready hoke baitha he tu to.

Vinod : Kaam kya bata de yaar ,bakchodi karne ka time nahi he mere pass .

Me bhi socha kyu formality pe time waste karna ,

Me : Muze Ashwini ne bola tha tere liye kuchh kar isiliye bulaya he bata deta hu, ab mudde ki baat Bank me jagah he paas wale , kaam kya he peon , jhaduwala ya kuchh aur muze nahi malum bass jagah khali he aur wo aadmi ready he tuze rakhne ko ,ab tu bata.

Vinod : Muze chahiye ye job kaise bhi kar ke bass tu dila de bhai ,bohot ehsaan honge tere muz pe, please !

Uske badle sur dekh ke me samaz gaya ke wo kitna desperate hoga , jitna mene mere dosto se suna tha wo ek side he lag rahi thi aur baki sab dhundla sa dikh raha tha.

Me : Thik he fir, kal subah aata hu tuze lene ,taiyar reh aur document ho jo bhi wo bhi nikal ke rakh.

Wo ha bol diya to me bhi nikal gaya apne ghar, raaste me Ashwini ka ghar dekha jaha wo bahar baithi thi kuchh logo ke sath, rishtedaar honge shayad kyonki bahar car bhi khadi thi .

Usne muze dekh ke smile kiya aur wapas unhi me lag gayi to me bhi bina ruke apne ghar aaya. Babu ji se baat ki tehsil wale kaam ki fir pump dikhaye aur khana kha ke so gaya .



Subah 6 baje alarm se meri nind khuli, thakan abhi bhi sharir me thi par kaam bhi to karna he yahi soch ke uth gaya aur aangan me he naha liya ,fir maa ko bata ke nikal gaya Nisha ke ghar.

Vinod pehle se he taiyar baitha tha aur uske sath Nisha bhi thi , usko dkeh mene sirf smile kiya halka sa aur Vinod ko leke baju ke gaon ki or nikla .

Me : Abhi humlog ek aur kaam se ja rahe he udhar , uss bank manager ke jaan pehchan wale ko gaon me kuchh 2-3 mahine ke liye rehne ke liye ghar chahiye aur hume wahi ghar dhundna he udhar jaake .

Vinod : Mil jayega bhai , mere dost udhar he rehte he to ho jayega kaam apna .

Mene bhi mundi hila di ke thik he ,iske dost kaise bhi ho bass abhi apna kaam ho raha wahi sab kuchh he bass.

Uske bataye pate pe jaake hum uske dost ke ghar gaye, usse mile fir gaon bhar me agle 3 ghante dar-dar ghumte rahe bhaade ke ghar ya kholi ke liye.

Akhirkaar ek ghar mila jo sahi tha matlab akeli aurat ke rehne ke liye aur bhada bhi kam tha. Wahi ghar me hath muh dho ke hum dono fir bank gaye .

Me : Andar aau sir ji ?

BM : Arre aao Ajay, yahi he kya wo jisko nokri chaiye ?

Me : Ha ,ye Vinod he.

Fir Vinod ne namaste kiya aur fir wahi documents wagera dikhaye aur end me usko ek temporary post mili. Vinod ko waha ke staff ke sath sikhne ke liye bhej diya manager ne ,

BM : Iska koi criminal record nahi he na ?

Me : Nahi he sir ji, aur aap bhi kya ab use rakhne ke baad puchh rahe ho :D

BM : Arre ye sir var chhodo, tum ab jaan pehchaan ke ho to khali Manoj he bulao ,khali 6-7 saal he bada hu tumse.

Me : Chalo thik he Manoj ji, ab aap kahe to yahi sahi,baki aapka ghar wala kaam bhi ho gaya he aur rent bhi ekdam kam he .

BM (Manoj) : Kya keh raho ho yaar tum ? mene itna dhunda to koi dene ka naam nahi le rha tha aur tumnne ek he din me dhundh bhi liya ,bhai wah .

Me : Bass ab jab aapko apne rishtedaar ko jab ghar dikhana ho tab phone karna muze iss number pe aur hum final kar denge .

Abhi hamari baatchit puri nahi hui thi ke ek lady unke office me aayi jinka chehra thoda sa dekha dekha sa lag raha tha, par yaad nahi aa raha tha . Itne me unke pichhe pichhe ek ladki bhi aayi jisko dekh ke me shock ho gaya ,

Renuka ….







To be continued….










 

Thakur

असला हम भी रखते है पहलवान 😼
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Sandar update bhai jabarjast bas kafi din baad aaye to hame pick up karne me time lgega... Vaise apne hero ko vo bnane ki dhamki dekr gya hai dr, Dekhte hai Agli mulakat me kya kahta hai or uska jvaab kya deta hai apna hero...

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Awesome update bhai

Sandar story hai bhai

Nice update bro and waiting for next update aur mujy lagta hai ajy my Kuch power bi ho gi

Nice story

superb update

Badhia update bhai .. vese kuch bhi clear nhi ho rha

Very nice story
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Thakur sir, please visit my story & guide me, thanks


Vijay Thakur tow Ajay k baap or apni pol kholne per tule huwe Thai
Yeh doctor tow kuch ziada bol ker chala Gaya ahsan kerne ka koyi zamana hi nahi Raha
Baherhal dekhte hai aage kia hota h
Shaandar update bhai

कहानी का विषय वस्तु ही अचानक से बदल गया। एक बार लगा था यह कहानी 21वीं सदी के ग्रामीण परिवेश मे चल रहे नायक अजय ठाकुर की कहानी होगी। उसकी आत्मकथा होगी।
लेकिन इस कहानी का समयकाल सीधे फर्स्ट वर्ल्ड वार पर जा पहुंचाया आपने। फ्रांस , ब्रिटेन का जर्मन के साथ युद्ध और स्पेनिश फ्लू के समयकाल से बिल्कुल मेल खा रहा इस भाग का फ्लैशबैक।

प्रलय का अर्थ होता है सृष्टि का सर्वनाश। इस कहानी मे ऐसा कुछ होने की आशंका नही है लेकिन 2nd विश्व युद्ध मे हिरोशिमा और नागासाकी का जो हाल एटॉमिक बम से हुआ था , वो किसी प्रलय से कम भी नही था।

1918 और 2023 मे दो चीजें ऐसी थी जो समानांतर था।
फर्स्ट तेंदुआ और सेकेंड शिवराज ठाकुर।
शिवराज साहब का सम्बन्ध किसी न किसी रूप मे हरिश ठाकुर और अजय ठाकुर से रहा होगा।
1918 मे शिवराज साहब का सामना तेंदुआ से हो चुका था और शायद उस तेंदुए की वजह से उनकी मृत्यु भी हो गई हो , और 2023 मे अजय का भी प्रत्यक्ष सामना तेंदुआ से हो चुका है। शायद तेंदुए ने अजय को भी मार दिया होता यदि उसके पास बुलेट मोटरसाइकिल न होती।

शिवराज साहब ने एक युरोपियन लड़के की जान बचाई थी जिसका नाम जेम्स था। लेकिन यह 105 साल पहले की बात थी। वो शायद अब जिंदा न भी हो ! लेकिन क्या उनके किसी संतान का भी इस कहानी मे जिक्र होगा ? जेम्स वो शख्स था जो मरते मरते कई बार बचा था। इनका या इनके किसी वारिस का इम्पोरटेंट रोल्स अवश्य होना चाहिए !

ग्रामीण परिदृश्य का लाजवाब वर्णन किया है आपने। कच्चे रास्ते , खेत- खलिहान , बाग - बगीचे , पशु का मेला , हफ्ते मे सिर्फ कुछेक दिन लगने वाले बाजार ; गांव की मिट्टी और खुशबु की यादे ताजा करा दे रहे है।

इस कहानी मे बहुत स्कोप है। यह कहानी एक उपन्यास का शक्ल अख्तियार कर सकती है। आप की राइटिंग स्किल तो अच्छी है ही। इस कहानी पर थोड़ा मेहनत कीजिए ठाकुर साहब ! फोरम की अद्भुत रचना बन सकती है यह स्टोरी।

आउटस्टैंडिंग ।
और जगमग जगमग अपडेट।

Thodi familly badi honi chahiye thi chachi nahi bua nahi atleast 2 3 sagi aur chacha ki 2 betiya bhi chahiye thi. Taki familly me jyada maja ata rahe
Update 11 posted :announce:
 
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