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Incest Papa ne mujhe ghar ka mard banaya
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Jabardst update bhai maza karaya eagerly waiting for next update
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Aakash bhai ek request hai ek baar aakash se arundhati aur anjali ki dhamakedar chudai dikha do
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ek hasin shaam ke ant mein ke pramukh kiradaar jaise khud mein jee liye ho ...kabhi dheer ban kar to kabhi reet ban kar . aisi lekhni hai aapki....
aapke dwara likhe gaye har shabd hawaon mein bhi ek nasha bikhed de ki thoda sa jo ye nasha yun readers pe bhi chaane laga....
Haan yahi to hai wo wajah jo har update padhne mein aaye readers ko maza...
Aap jis tarah likhti hai... readers ko baithe bithaye jannat dikha de....
Update ka har ek shadb jaise pehli barish ki bunde ki tarah hai..... padhte waqt lage ki kirdaar jaise ankhon ke samne bhumika nibha rahe ho.... Sach mein jis tarah se erotic roop mein bhumika nibha rahe hai kirdaar, readers ko majboor kar de unke sath judne ke liye... yahin to aapki lekhni ka jaadu hai.... kahani mein ek romance, erotica ke sath sath ek manmahok mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt kahani ki prati dilchaspi badhti jaye...Lage ki kirdaar apne dil mein jo aarman liye khushiya dhund rahe the wo khushiya unhe mil gayi ho.... lage ki khushi aur santushti se yehi to hai kirdaaro Jahan... Anjani rahon mein jo swarg dhoondhante phirte the wo unhe mil hi gaya... ...lage ki dur jinko samjhe the kirdaar.. wo to paas hi the. Jaise yahin ho unka aashiyaana..
aur jo scenes create ki hai kahani ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai.
Kahani aur update sabse badi khubi...?
lekhak har ek kirdaar, har ek pehlu aur har ek mod ke baare mein soch ke kahani aur update ko Kalpanasheel aur varnantmak roop mein pesh karte hai, jishe padhte waqt sach mein aanand mile....
kya kirdaar aur kahani ne a aapko abhi tak kahani ke sath jude rehne ko majboor kiya...?
shat pratishat.... aur shayad aage bhi kayi baar padhu is kahani ko... readers ke yahi bolu ki ek baar aap jarur padhiye is kahani ko.... aap log jitni baar padhenge is kahani ko... utni aapke dil ke karib hoti jayegi ye kahani....
kahani ke jariye kahani ke naam sarthak kar di hai lekhak ji ne... . dusri aham baat jis tarike se ghatit ghatanao ko ek shrinkhala mein ant tak le gaye aur abhi haalhi ek update ke ant mein jo hairangi se bhare situation aur twist create karke jis tarike pesh ki hai wo sach mein apne apme bemisaal hai...
Btw abhi shayad bahot se twists aane wale story pe..
aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye
sabhi Update bahot hi dilchasp aur dilkash the...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant storyline with awesome writing skills
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pratap anjali Jaise kirdaar hote hi kyun story pe..
Btw there were quite exciting twists in the update
The qualities and passion of a writer is that through the character of story , make story's name meaningful. In which you were completely successful
khair...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
aapke dwara likhe gaye har shabd hawaon mein bhi ek nasha bikhed de ki thoda sa jo ye nasha yun readers pe bhi chaane laga....
Haan yahi to hai wo wajah jo har update padhne mein aaye readers ko maza...
Aap jis tarah likhti hai... readers ko baithe bithaye jannat dikha de....
Update ka har ek shadb jaise pehli barish ki bunde ki tarah hai..... padhte waqt lage ki kirdaar jaise ankhon ke samne bhumika nibha rahe ho.... Sach mein jis tarah se erotic roop mein bhumika nibha rahe hai kirdaar, readers ko majboor kar de unke sath judne ke liye... yahin to aapki lekhni ka jaadu hai.... kahani mein ek romance, erotica ke sath sath ek manmahok mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt kahani ki prati dilchaspi badhti jaye...Lage ki kirdaar apne dil mein jo aarman liye khushiya dhund rahe the wo khushiya unhe mil gayi ho.... lage ki khushi aur santushti se yehi to hai kirdaaro Jahan... Anjani rahon mein jo swarg dhoondhante phirte the wo unhe mil hi gaya... ...lage ki dur jinko samjhe the kirdaar.. wo to paas hi the. Jaise yahin ho unka aashiyaana..
aur jo scenes create ki hai kahani ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai.
Kahani aur update sabse badi khubi...?
lekhak har ek kirdaar, har ek pehlu aur har ek mod ke baare mein soch ke kahani aur update ko Kalpanasheel aur varnantmak roop mein pesh karte hai, jishe padhte waqt sach mein aanand mile....
kya kirdaar aur kahani ne a aapko abhi tak kahani ke sath jude rehne ko majboor kiya...?
shat pratishat.... aur shayad aage bhi kayi baar padhu is kahani ko... readers ke yahi bolu ki ek baar aap jarur padhiye is kahani ko.... aap log jitni baar padhenge is kahani ko... utni aapke dil ke karib hoti jayegi ye kahani....
kahani ke jariye kahani ke naam sarthak kar di hai lekhak ji ne... . dusri aham baat jis tarike se ghatit ghatanao ko ek shrinkhala mein ant tak le gaye aur abhi haalhi ek update ke ant mein jo hairangi se bhare situation aur twist create karke jis tarike pesh ki hai wo sach mein apne apme bemisaal hai...
Btw abhi shayad bahot se twists aane wale story pe..
aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye
sabhi Update bahot hi dilchasp aur dilkash the...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant storyline with awesome writing skills
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That's some unique update . akashx11 ji se jaise yahin aasha rahti hai, bilkul usi mutabik likha hai..absolutely amazing.. . You always try something unique to write, and that's your specialty, hats off to that . . Everything was superb. Flow, Narration, Plot, Presentation. Everything was superb. You have a good grasp over the storyline right from the word go. marvellous & remarkable..
pratap anjali Jaise kirdaar hote hi kyun story pe..
Btw there were quite exciting twists in the update
The qualities and passion of a writer is that through the character of story , make story's name meaningful. In which you were completely successful
khair...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
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Behad hi shanadar or dilchasp update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Waiting for next update
Shandaar zabardast zindabad update ...
Ek Taraf anjali game khel Rahe Hai toh Dushri Taraf akash bhi chaal chal raha Hai.
Ek Taraf anjali game khel Rahe Hai toh Dushri Taraf akash bhi chaal chal raha Hai.
Rasprad aur Rochak. Ab unt kis karvat baithega yeh dekhna hai. Disha ka bharosha tutata hai ya nahi ? Pratiksha agle update ki
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Nice update dostUpdate- 131-B
Akash sab kai saath waqt bitane kai badh akeli mai ek jagha baith kar thoda relex raha tha ki tab waha kamini aajati hai jo ki kab sai akash kai paas ja karr khidi ho jati hai o baath kane lagg jati hai jaha akash uske haath pakad ki usse baath kane lagg jata hai
Akash-ravi thik hai na wo tum sai aayse waise koi baath karne ki koshish toh nahi karr raha?
Kamini-na, na zamindaar ji wo toh sach mai badal gaya hai , wo har waqt pinki kai peeche piche he ghumta raheta hai uske saath college jata hai or aata hai, sach mai badi didi( kabita ) ne kafe aacha faisla lia tha, pinki ravi kai liyea sach mai perfect hai
Akash-aacha, or wo teri choti bahen kaha gaye
kamini-sulochana or rrajesh baharr gaye hai ghumne kai liyea, kal wapas aajayenge
Akash-hmm toh panchi ko ghumna pasand aaraha hai , or dadaji ki pari kahe ghumne nahi gaye, jana chahati ho toh Raghunath sai baath karu?
Kamini-nahi nahi, zamindaarr ji main toh aapki saath he thik hu, ghumne jayungi toh bhi aapki saath
Akash-hmm kafe naughty bicha hai tumhare
Kamini-ji main toh aapki seva karna chahati hu bas
Akash-orr main bhi tumhari seva pana chahata hu kamini, seva kaha sai suru karoge , ghar sai ya baharr sai
kamini sarma jati hai yea bath sun kar
Kamini-aap jaha sai suru karna chahe zamindaar ji
or in dono sai Dur Dhirendra aapne bete ko dekh kar bahut khus hone kai saath saath ek taraf sai dukhi bhi the uske uuthay kuch kadmo ko le kar or ise baare mai wo baath karne kai liyea ek sahi waqt ka intezar kar rahe the , jiswaqt akash akela ho or unke beech koi 3sra unko baath karne sai na roke , or ab kamini ko akash kai saath thode der baath karte dekhne kai baadh wo akash kai paas jate hai , tab akash ne kamini ka ek haath apne hath sai pakad rakha tha orr kamini sarmate huye baath kar rahe the.
Dhirendra- Akash beta, mujhe tumsai kuch jaruri baath karni hai ( akash or kamini dhirendra ki or dekhte hai )
Akash-haan boliyea
Dhirendra-Akele mai bath karna sahi rahega , kamini tum (Dhirendra kamini ki or dekh kar bolte hai)
Akash-kamini kai rahene sai koi fark nahi padega
Dhirendra-isse main ek papa ki tarrha tumsai baath nahi kar payunga beta , agar tum ek zamindaar kai hasiyat sai apne salhakar matlab mujsai baath karna chahate ho toh mujhe koi aapatti nahi hai
Akash Dhirendra ki or dekhta hai or phir Kamini ki taraf dekh kar apne ser hila kar usko waha sai jane kai liyea bol deta hai or kamini bhi ek muskan dete huye waha sai chali jati hai
Akash-kya huye papa aap pareshan lagg rahe ho
Dhirendra akash ki or dekhte huye-main kafe pareshan hu beta or mere pareshani ki wajay tum ho
Akash-maine kuch kia hai kya?
Dhirendra-tum Zamindaar bann kar badal gaye ho beta orr mere pareshani wahi hai
Akash-main aapka wahi akash tu papa main nahi badla
Dhirendra- toh tu pakda kyu gaya tha?
Akash-suraj ne sab kuch toh bata he dia hoga na?
Dhirendra-toh tumko aayse he gun chalana aagaya
Akash-haan
Dhirendra-toh unlogo ka kya jinko tum mar rahe ho bas apne Pratab dada ko neecha dekhane kai liyea
Akash-maine aaysa kuch bhi nahi kia hai
Dhirendra-kya sach mai tum aaysa kuch nahi kar rahe
Akash 1 min kai liyea chup ho jata hai or apne papa ki or dekhta hai -dekhiyea papa main jo bhi kar raha hu wo sab apne logo ko safe rrakhne kai liyea karrr raha hu
Dhirendra-toh tum logo ko maar rahe ho.
Akash-haan main maar raha hu , or kya karun main bolo papa , unko jane du taki wo phir sai lauth kar phir sai koi nuksan pahuchayi
Dhirendra- uske liyea police hai , or tere kaka hai he wo tujhe koi nuksan pahuchane nahi dega
Akash- wo aapki accident ko rok sake? boliyea papa? aapko lagta hai wo prratab ko rok sakenge?
Akash jayse he Dhirendra kai accident ki baath uuthata hai wo chup ho jate hai or akash bhi kuch na bol kar Dhirendra ko dekh raha tha
Dhirendra-main tumsai kuch mangna chahata hu
Akash-aap adesh kijiyea
Dhirendra-tum ise ghar or ghnv mai "Ghar ka mard" hone kai pratha ko khatam karne mai mere madat karo
Akash-kya matlab?
Dhirendra-matlab saaf hai akash , tum apna paadh chod kar sab aurato ko mukt karo or panchayat kai or charo sadashyo sai bhi ise
baare main baath karki ise parampara ko hata do
Akash thode der kai liyea kuch nahi bolta or Dhirendra ki or dekhne lagg jata hai jayse wo soch raha ho ise baare mai or Dhirendra tab samajhte hai ki akash unki baath samajh gaya hai or aab mann bhi jayega
Dhirendrra-tum yea sab hatane kai liyea mere madat karoge na
Akash-nahi
Dhirendra Shocked ho jata hai yea baath sun kar , usko ek pal kai liyea laga tha ki akash khusi khusi mann jayega lakin akash ne ek jhatki main mana kar dia tha
Dhirendra- tum ise baare mai sochna chahate ho toh time lo
Akash-maine soch lia hai , orr mera jabab NO hai
Dhirendra-tum yea kya bol rahe ho akash , tumne he toh mujhe iska idea dia tha or tum toh khud ise sab sai uuthana chahate the
Akash-Maine aaysa kab kaha tha aapko
Dhirendra-sunidhi sai shadi hone sai pahele
Akash-aachaa? , jo bhi ho , lakin aap yea sab bekar ki baath aaj kyu kar rahe ho?
Dhirendra-yea bekar ki baate nahi hai akash , yea ganv ki future kai liyea hai or tumhare furure kai liyea ye jaruri hai ,
Akash-maira feature yehi hai papa, aapne he toh mujhe ise jagha baith kar ise ghar ka mard banaya hai taki main sab aurrato ko khus rakh saku or unko protect kar payu
Dhirendra-maine tumko ise liyea ghar ka mard banata tha taki tum ise ghar ko aache sai sambhal sako or kabita ko wo sab khusi de sako jo main de nahi paya ?
Akash-main janta hu ki aap maa sai pyaar karte ho lakin ghar ki baki aurato ka kya? sunidhi ka kya ? wo aapko unki firk the
Dhirendra-fikar nahi hoti toh tumko sunidhi sai shadi kai liyea kyu manata?
Akash-wo toh maa kai liyea kia tha aapne
Dhirendra-wo Sunidhi kai lia bhi kia tha akash
( apne papa ki mu sai Sunidhi ki naam sunn kar akash ko kuch yaad aajata hai , or wo achanak sai bol padta hai )
Akash-Sunidhi kai liyea!! huh aapne kabhi maa ko bachane ki liyea kuch kia bhi tha orr aap sunidhi ki baare mai bol rahe ho, papa ?, aap ne dono ko bacha lia hota toh maa mujhe ise jagha nahi baithati or main unka pahela pasand nahi banta ( akash thode ghusse mai aakar bolta hai)
Dhirendra-akash!! maine kafe kuch kia hai un dono kai liyea
Akash-paisa kamane kai alaba kia bhi kya hai aapne , bolo papa? unke aandar chupe ghusse ko samajhne ki koshish ki aapne bolo, aap kuch kia jisse dono ko wo jindegi na jina padta? aapne kuch kia hai unke liyea toh batayea main sunna chahata hu
Dhirendra-main tumko batana jaruri nahi samajhta
Akash-batane kai liyea kuch hai he nahi aapkai paas, aaptoh daadi ki kahene par sunidhi ko.( akash aachanak sai ruk jata hai or apne aapko kabu karne ki koshish mai lagg jata hai )
Dhirendra-tum baath ko kahi or le kar na jao akash , main tumharra jabab janna chahata hu
Akash-maira ans "NO" hai or maine bata bhi dia hai , main "ghar ka mard" hone ki apne taqat ko kyu thukrau? ise toh mujhe aacha lagta hai ghar ki sab apne muthi mai. jisko jo bhi bolo wo karta hai toh main yea taqat kuy jane du, huh, koi babakuf he hoga jo ise taqat ko thokar marega
tab akash ko yaad aata hai ki ise taqat ko thokar marne wala unke he papa the jo uske aage baithe the, Dushri taraf Dhirendra the jo apne bete ki aankhoo main dekh rahe the wo akash ki yea baath sun kar samajh gaye the ki akash aab panchayat ki dushre sadashyo ki boli bol raha hai or sayad unke tarha aurat ,paisa or power milne sai dushro ki tarha bann raha hai
Dhirendra-tum panchayat ki dushre members ki tarha baath kar rahe ho beta
Akash-toh aap dushro kai aage bhi yea prastab rakh chuke ho? aap toh kafe fast bann rahe ho, aagar yea fast pahele dekhi hoti toh.... baise burai bhi kya hai unke tarha banne mai
Dhirandra-burai yahe hai ki wo dushro ka istemal karte hai akash jaysa tera istamal kar rahe hai apne kaam ko nikalwane kai liyea, wo tumko use kar rahe hai pratab dada ko apne raste sai hatane kai liyea
Akash-wo mmujhe power de rahe hai Papa or yea sab aap nahi samjhogai toh yea baath aage badha kar koi faida nahi hai
Dhirendra- mujhe laga tha ki tum mere baath ko samjhoge lakin main galat tha , i am disappointed in you
Dhirendra ne jo socha tha uska ulta huya tha , wo akash ki baate sunn kar samajh jate hai ki wo usko samajha nahi sakte , toh wo yaha sai uth kar jana he sahi samajhte hai or waha sai jane ki liyea uthte he hai ki akash Dhirenra ki haath ko pakad leta hai aur baithne ko bolta hai
Akash-papa ise sab mai padd kar apne waqt jaya na karo, chaliyea ek normal baath karte hai papa bete kai beech , aapne kya socha hai aapne shadi kai baare mai/ aapko koi ladki mili kya ? ( akash mahol ko thoda thanda karne ki koshish karne kai liyea bolta hai)
Dhirendra-yea kya bol rahe ho? dekho ise taha ki baate karne ka sahi waqt nahi hai yea .
Akash-aare batao na papa kabhi toh aapne liyea socho , , aagar koi nahi mili toh wo Sruti kayse rahegi? jaban hai aachi ladki hai , usko maa bolna aajib lagega lakin kaam chala lunga , baise kafe chejo mai bhi aachi hai ?
Dhirendra-wo mujhe koi mili hai or sayad main unko pasand karne lagg gaya hu or wo bhi mujhe pasand karti hai (apne bete kai poochne sai Dhirendra bhi mahol sahi karne kai liyea bol dete hai )
Akash-aachaa? kon hai wo lakdi ?
Dhirendra-wo Arundhati ji ko main pasand kata hu ( Dhirendra thoda sarma kar bolte hai )
Akash-WTF, Arundhati ..... sach mai?
Dhirendra-hmmm
Akash-kya baath hai papa aapko tez nikal rahe ho, mast maal hai, aachi aurat hai wo
Akash apne papa sai kafe maheno baadh baith kar baath karne ka mouka mila tha ise liyea Dhirendra kai saath thoda hasi mazak karne lagg jata hai jisse Dhirendra ko bhi aacha lagta hai
Dushre taraf kabita raath ki khana pyaarr sai bana mai laggi padi the kamini kai sath mil karr , or ise baar kabita raath ki sone kai planning mai lagi padi the toh kamini soch rahi the ki raath ka khana zamindar ko apne hato sai khila kar he rahegi or ise makasad mai kamiyab hone kai liyea wo kabita ko pata chuki the or kabita ne bhi haan bol dia tha ,jisse wo khus ho gaye the , jab akash khane kai liyea ghar kai aandar aata ki tab usko apne aage Disha dekhti hai jo ki kuch bolne kai liyea akash ki paas aahe rahe the ki akash unko nazar andaz karki khana khane baith jata hai orrr kamini bina deri kia khana parosh leti hai or akash ki paas khadi ho jati hai , akash khane ko dekh kar khus ho jata hai tab kamini sochte hai aab mouka hai
Kamini-ji zamindaar ji kya main aapko khana khila du?
Akash-thik hai
Kamini khus ho jati hai or akash ki taraf badhte hai ki tab piche sai Savnam ki aabaz gunzte hai
Savnam-aaj aapko kahna main khilayungi (daudte huye aati hai or akash ki paas baith jati hai )
Akash-tum toh padhai kar rahe the na
Savnam-ho gaye padhai aab khana kane ki bari , chaliyea mu kholiyea or mere hath sai khana khayeyea
Kamini-hai , tu chuki piche hat main khana khilayungi
Savnam-hato hato , hawa aane do, bas main he khana khilayungi , tum jao
Akash-aaysa nahi bolte ..........
Savnam-nahi bolungi aage sai lakin khana main aakeli he khilayungi plz plz
Akash-thik hai Savnam , kamini Savnam ka khana bhi le aao isko bhi main he khila dunga
Savnam-yes, yea huye na baath , aap toh or pyaar badhega, badi maa aap chahotoh khila sakte ho mere saath milkarr
Kabita-na, na tu he khila de
Disha yea sab dekh rahe the orr soch rrahe the- yea kya sab ise akash ki piche chipkai huye hai , or yea chuhiye aaj toh kuch alag he bann rahe hai kal tak mujhe kaam karne kai liyea bol rahe the orrr aaj yea kisi ko ek sabd bhi nahi bol rahe hai or koi mouka nahi chod rahe hai chipakne ka , yea family he pagal hai sach mai
Kabita ka sapna toh aaj rath apne bete kai sang bitana tha orr iske liyea wo pahele sai he kamini or naani sai baath karrr chiki the ki wo orbachoo ka khayal rakhe or sulochana ghar mai nahi the toh uske kamrre mai savnam soyegi orr akash kabita or sunidhi ki saath akele yea soch kar he wo mann he mann muskara deti hai or apne kamre mai ja kar bed ko thik karne mai lagg jati hai taki aaj raath ghamasan kar sake apne bete kai saath bina ruke or wo taiyar bhi ho kar sunidhi sai baath kar rahe the, or sunidhi bhi tab taiyar the jati hai ki tabhi Savnam bhagte huye room kai aandar ghus jati hai orr bed kai beechoo beech kud jati hai
or uske piche akash bhi kamre mai aajata hai
Kabita-aare aarre, tu kyu ghus aaye , tu ja apne maa ki kamre mi sone ja
Savnam-mujhe akeli nahi sona ,main toh aapne pati kai saath soyungi , mujhe akeli mai darr lagta hai
Sunidhi-tujhe kyu dar lagega ? tu badi ho gaye hai ?
Savnam-nahi banna mujhe badi, main aapki paas he soyungi, badi maa or sunidhi kai beech plz plz plz
Kabita-thik hai thik hai ( Kabita apne dil mai pathaar rakh kar bolti hai or sunidhi ki taraf mu latkate huye dekhte hai )
Savnam-yes, aayo or mere uper leto aap
Akash-tere exam ka kya?
Savnam-kal subha he uth kar padhungi na , aayo bhi na or mujhe ek choti si kiss karo
Akash dhere sai bed mai chadta huya Savnam ki uper aajata hai or uske hoth sai hoth laga karr ek kiss deta hai or uske side mai let jata hai jisse Savnam bhi khus hoti hai orr ake ek haath akash ki chati par rakh kar usse chipak kar let jati hai or yea dekh kar kabita niras ho kar apne ser niche karti hai or mu sukha kar bed kai kone mai let jati hai or sunidhi ka bhi wahi haal tha wo bhi dushre kone mai let jati hai
Kabita mann he mann mai - uff yea savnam ko na mana bhi nahi kar sakti, uff raath ka bhi mouka gaya , aaj toh lagg rhaa hai ki savnam sai shadi karrwa karrr main galat kar di hu, haire aaj bhi pyaasi rahe gaye
Aagle din-
pratab kai gharrr main--
Pratab ne apne sari taraf akash or surraj ko khatam karne mai laga lia tha lakin dono aabhi bhi zinda the or yea pareshani usko aandar he aandar khaye ja rahe the, pratab ka political friend kai kafe aadmi mareja chuke the orr jo raita phailaya tha goa mai usko thik karrne aur apna or pratab ka naam ko clear kane mai usne kafe paisa baha dia tha or ise karan usne bhi apne haath ise mamle mai khada kar dia tha .
pratab- ye harrramjada zamindaar itna lucky niklega mujhe malum na tha
Anjali-luck hamesha sath nahi dega uska bapu ji aap chinta mat kijiye , hat kutte ka din aata hai
Pratab-aab toh wo ganv aachuka hai, aab mairrre haath phir sai bandh chuke hai
Anjali-lakin mainre haath toh nahi bandhe hai bapuji , aap jo chahate ho wahi hoga
Kaushalya devi-main toh kaheti hu ,yea sab chod dijiye or usko aapna lijiyea isme he humarri paribar ki bhalai hai
Pratab-tum aapne zuban ko band kyu nahi rrakhti kaushlya, main tumhare baath sunna nahi chahata
kaushalya devi-main toh ise paribar ki bhalai kai liyea bol rahe hu
Anajli-aap bapuji ko tokna bandh kijiyea
Tabhi darbaze ki or sai jitendrrra ghar ki aandar aata hai or kaushalya devi kai pair chuta hai or phir pratab ki pair chuta hai
Pratab-yea pair chu kar dekhaba band karo jitendra ,
jitendra-main dekhaba nahi karta pitaji
Pratab-toh jo kar rahe ho wo kya hai , ek taraf toh tum mere harr baath manne ka dawa karrte ho or mairra ek kaam bhi nahi karte
Jitendra-aap jante ho main aapki har baath mununga bas us baath ko chod kar
Pratab-yahe toh muslik hai
Anjali-yea kisi kaam kai nahi hai bapu ji , mujhe toh aaysa lagg rraha hai ki ek din yea us zamindar kai saath mil ka aapna patta saaf na ka de
Jitendra-ise tarha ki baath bol kar tum paribar ko todne ki koshish math karo Anjali
Pratab-yea paribar paribar ki rrat mat lagaoo orr dafa ho jao maire nazrro sai samne sai
Jitendra-jo aagya
jitendra apne kamre mai chala jata hai or waha anjali bhi thode he der mai aajati hai .
Anjali-dono ko aache jagha chupaya hai , tumko kya laga kisi ko pata nahi chalega ki dono zamindar ki ghar mai hai ?
Jitendra-tum jasusi karrne lagi, tum
Anajli-relex maine aabtak bapuji ko ise baare mai nahi bataya hai , aakhi main aapne pati ki he side mai hu
bol kar anjali jitendrrra ki chati parr apne haath rakh leti hai ,or tab jitendra uske hath pakad ki apne chati sai hala lete hai
Jitendrra-tum kya ho main aache sai janta hu Anjali
Anjali-kya jante ho, huh
Jitendra-main jan chuka hu ki tumne suraj kai saath saath Disha ko bhi marne ka plan bana lia tha
Anjali thoda shocked ho jati hai - aaysa koi plan nahi hai merra
Jitendra-jhooth mat bolo Anjali, mainre paas sabut hai , aagar main chahu toh Bapuji kai aage tumhara parda fash kar sakti hu
Anjali-aacha!!, kar lo mujhe koi darrnahi hai
Jitendra-tum yea sab kyu kar rahe ho Anjali, tumhara maksad kya hai , or akash ko kyu marna chahate ho ,usne tumharre saath kuch burra kia bhi nahi
Anjali-main sab bapuji kai liyea kar rahe hu, orr haan aapne liyea bhi
Jitendra-kya matlab aapne liyea?
Anjali-us Disha kai jinda rahe ya nahi usme tumko kyu fark padne laga? , tum aakhirr usko kyu bacha rahe ho or us akash ko
Jitendra- akash mera bade bhai ka beta hai orr ise liyea main usko bacha rraha hu
Anjali-hmm aur merrra reason bhi same he hai
Jitendra-tum aabhi bhi us ghusse ko apne aandar dabaye rakhe ho? past mai itna sab kuch mere badi bhai kai sath karki bhi tumhara mann nahi bhara jo tum aab akash ki piche padi huye ho, tumko ek pal ki liyea bhi sarm nahi aati
Anajli-maere aandar sai sarm tab chali gaye the jab tumhare bhade bhai ne mere pyaar ko thukraya tha wo bhi poore college kai samne , logg haste the mujparr wo bhi tumhare bhai ki wajay sai
Jitendra-or tumne iska badla lene kai liyea Dhirendra bhai ka accident karrwa chuki ho , toh phir sai yea sab
Anjali-mujhe mat sikaoo ki mujko kya karna hai , aagar mujsai chutkarrra pana chahate ho toh mujhe maarr do , yehi ek lauta rasta hai
itna he bol kar Anjali Jitendrra ki bleazer kai aandar haath dal kar uske pistol nikal leti hai orr usko Jitendra ki hath mai thama kar , gun point ko apne serr par rakh deti hai or goli chanane ko bolti hai lakin Jitendra bas dekhta raheta hai
Anjali-tum kayar ho jo apne bhai ko taklif pahuchane wale insan ko bhi nahi mar sakta , tum sach mai kisi layak nahi ho Jitendrra
Jitendra kuch nahi bol pata tab Anjali waha sai chali jati hai
Dushre tarraf--
Zamindaar ki aane ki khabar sunte he Ghar par ganv kai logo ki bheed jut gaye the or akash sab sai ek ek karki milne mai laga huyea tha , wo apne parreshani batane lagg jate the or akash uska hal batane mai lagg gaya tha, ganv zamindaar ka tha or koi bhi problem hoti toh zamindaar ka farz banta tha ki uske lia koi hal nikale or akash wahe karne mai laga pada tha , or Dushre tarrraf Ravi ka dakhila Savnam or pinki ki college mai ho jane kai karan wo pinki or savnam ki saath he college jaya karta tha or waha Pinki savnam ko chod kar Ravi kai side mai he baith karte the orr uske paas sai bhi kisi ko bhatakne nahi deti the Savnam ko chod kar ,, Savnam apne bhai ki sakl dekh kar usko bhi thoda bura lagne lagg jata hai or ise baare mai wo Pinki ko bolti bhi hai
Savnam-tu ravi bhaiya kai saath kuch jaysa he nahi kar rahe hai , kam sai kaam dushro sai baath karne toh de unko
Ravi-thankyou Savnam tu he mere aache choti bahen hai
Savnam-thanks bhai, or tu Pinki
Pinki-aaysa mat bol , tu meri besty hai na?, or Ravi ji kai jagha aagar akash ji hote toh tu kya unko kisi or kai paas baithne deti ? Bata mujhe
Savnam-na na bilkul bhi nahi, tumhari baath mai dam hai..,thik hai jo karna hai karo
Ravi-ek minute mai palat gaye tu bhi
Pinki-chaliye chaliyea mere lia chocolate kharid kar la dijiyea,
Savnam-mere lia bhi
Ek taraf Savnam phirrr sai apne Saheli pinki ki side ho jati hai , toh dushre tarraf uski maa sulochana or rajesh ghar lauth aate hai or sulochana ghar lauth he or Akash thode der dono sai baath karne lagg jata hai . tab Disha akash ko dekh rahe the or wo soch rahe the ki wo kare bhi toh kya? kyu ki usko koi rasta dekh he nahi raha tha , Anjali ka call or apne maa ki dekhi huye tasbir usko bar baar pareshan karti ja rahe the , wo kya kare kayse kare usko kuch samajh mai nahi aaraha tha , wo kisi na kisi bahar sai akash ki paas jane ki koshi karte hai lakin akash usko avoid karta ja raha tha . or jayda tar time Sruti sai baath karne bitata taki usko bhi aacha lage
kuch din baadh--
in dino mai Akash Disha kai saath koi bhi bathchit karne sai bach raha tha jisse Disha bhi pareshan hoti ja rahe the, Disha jab bhi akash ko akeli dekh kar akash ki paas jati akash waha sai uth karr chala jata or sochta ki akhirr yea disha ka kare bhi toh kya ? ek taraf wo uske bhai ki patni bann chuke the or dushre taraf akash Disha ko bhi samajhne lagg gaya tha ki wo jo bhi karr rahe hai apne maa ki liyea kar rahe hai or iske liyea akash ki aandar hamdardi paida ho rahe the . kuch dino kai rrest kai baadh akash apne ghar kai logo ko khus karrna ka sochta hai taki ghar ka mahol thoda phir sai aacha bane tab uske mann mai ek idea aata hai or wo family pandit ko hajir karne ka hukm deta hai or khud ghar ki hall mai chala jata hai or ghar kai sab sadashyo ko bulane ka hukm deta hai or kuch he der mai sare member waha aajate hai orr pandit bhi aajata hai .
pandit ko waha dekh kar sab dekhne lagte hai aur sochne lagg jate hai ki aakhir chal kya raha hai? waha saree ghar wale khade the daadi aur naani , daadi aab sawal puchna bandh kar chuki the toh .. waha manju aur uske maa bhi khadi ho kar dekhne lagg gaye the
kabita-Akash , yea yea kya chal raha hai or pandit aap yaha
pandit-mujhe toh kuch bhi pata nahi malkin, main toh ghar mai khana khane baitha tha aur zamindaar ji kai aadmi mujhe uutha kar yaha le aaye
kabita akash ko dekhte hai aur uske taraf ja karr khadi ho jati hai or savnam bhi akash ki paas chali jati hai
kabita-akash ( pyaar sai aapne akash ka naam leti hai )
Savnam- aap mujhe kahi ghumane le jane ka program toh nahi rakh rahe hai na?
pinki-uske liyea pandit ko kyu bulayenge re pagli
Savnam-hehe
Akash- sabr karo, mama kaha hai, or raghunath
tabhi mama navin waha aajate hai or aate he akash usko paas bulata hai
navin-jija ji aapne mujhe bulaya ? or yaha yea sab kya ho raha hai or pandit hi
main-aapki shadi ki taiyari ho rahe hai sale saheb
navin yea sun kar shocked ho jata hai aur kabita aur sunidhi bhi yea sunte he shocked ho jate hai aur akash ki aur dekhne lagg jate hai
navin-main kuch samajha nahi jijaji , main aur shadi
main-aap hamesha sai kafe aache mama rahe hai ise liyea aapki shadi main karwana chahata hu jo ki jald sai jald karwana sahi samajhta hu
navin-ji lakin mainre jayse insan jiske paas rahne kai liyea khud ka ghar he nahi hai ussai kon shadi karega
main-manju, aapki shadi manju sai hogi mamaji . aur haan raghunath ki bhi shadi hone uske pyaar kai saath
yea sun kar daadi chock toh jati hai lakin kuch bol nahi pati .. orr ise main manju bhi shocked ho kar khadi the bo kya bole kuch samajh he nahi pa rahe the
navin manju ki aur dekhne lagg jata hai aur manju navin ko dekh kar sarma jati hai , tab navin bharosha nahi karpata ki uske shadi ho rahe hai .
Akash-kya huya manju pasand nahi aapko
Navin-aayse koi baath nahi hai ( mama sarmate huye bolte hai )
kabita -aare dekhoo toh mera bhai kayse sarrrma raha hai oye hoye
Sunidhi-haan , maine Nabin ko itna sarmate kabhi nahi dekha
suraj-mama aapki shadi mai toh mai nachunga
Akash-haan papa ki shadi bhi jald hogi wo bhi Arundhati kai saath , dono main pyaar hai orr main dono kai pyaar ko manjuri deta hu
yea baath sunte he Dhirendra akash ki aur aakhr fad kar dekhte hai or baki log Dhirendra ki or shocked ho kar dekhte hai or sochte hai ki aakhir Dhirendra ki shadi Arundhati sai kayse ho sakti hai , dono kai beech kuch chakkar kayse chal sakta hai . sab log Dhirendra ko ise sab sai dur rahene wala insan mante the lakin aaj sab ki aankhe khul he jati hai , or sab ko apne or dekh kar dhirendra kya bole kuch samajh nahi pate orr wo akash ka naam le karr akash ki paas jane he wali the ki akash sab ko apne kaam mai lagg jane ko bolta hai or kisi ki baath na sun kar waha sai nikal jata hai jisse Dhirendra usse ise baare mai baath bhi nahi kar pate.
Akash chath ki or jane ka soch kar seedhi ki or si uper ki taaraf jane lagta hai ki tabhi Disha daudte huye aati hai orr akash ki samne khadi ho jati hai jisko akash avoide kar ki side sai nikalne wala tha ki Disha akash ki haath ko pakad leti hai
Disha-mujko avoid matt karo
Akash-abhi mai tumharre kisi tarha ki baath sune ki mood mai nahi hu
Disha-sunna he padega , mera matlab main aapsai jarrui baath karna chahati hu
Akash-main janta hu tum kya bolna chahati ho
Disha-nahi, tum nahi jante .. main batana chahati hu ki ... ki ........ I love you ...............
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