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sab pahele se he fixed tha bhai , bas build-up kafe slow tha, warna kahani toh sab ko malum he tha ki kya hone wala hai , aur bas sex me he kahani nikaljata toh kahani different nahi ho pata bhai.akashx11
Are akash bhai aapne kahani shuru hone se pahle kaha tha it will contain too much sex... Lekin kaha ye thriller wriller ke chakkar me padh gye... Ye sab moh maya hai
Thodha sa to time milta hai ye sab stories padhne ka.. Usme bhi itne lambe lambe sukhe update.
Thodhi bahot hariyali bhi dikhaoo
Akhir akash bhi to ek tharki hi hai ,taras khao yarr
Aur rahi baat dada ji ko kisne mara to dadi hi lag rhi hai
Dadi dhirendra aur akash.. Bhai ek scene to banta hai... Pls
Budhiya ki kamar to tutni chahiye, bagiche me akash ke nana ko aakh maar rhi thi sab smjh rha hu iska chakkar
Lekin apne dhirendra ka character hi aisa banaya hai ki usko manana mushkil hai lekin ye to aapki dhuvida hai
Khuch bhi kro ek scene to lao in teeno ka threesome
Aur ye kaushalya bahot sati savitri hai iski bhi taange kholo yaar, hamare akash ki kaam vasna ko to aap bilkul bhul hi gye wo
Ravi aur Kamini ka bhi to scene chal rha tha yarrr usko bhi band jr diya
Katayi.. Shole bhadka ke namak daal diya
* tharki review completed *
Aur han ye bechari damini , badha taras aata hai yarrr
Pratap ko marna to damini ke dwara zalil pakka karwana usse pahle
Ek dum itne saalo jo dukh diya hai damini ko sab bharpai ho jani chahiye
Vaise mujhe nhi lagta meri upar waali ek bui request ko aap manoge, to kam se kam ye damini waali to maan lena
!!!!! Keep up the good work and keep updating your wonderful story and thanks fir writing this !!!!
Akash bhai next update ka intzar hy
akashx11 bhai waiting for the next update...
Update thode der baadh post hoga ...Waiting for your update
FallenAngel Samaya mila toh Shayad ..Mtlb fir new story will be started
Samaya ka aangan kai karan update time mein nahi de pa raha hu bhai , Sunday bhi free time nahi mil rahaAkash bhai great updates
But updates ki frequency kuchh kam ho gayee hai.
Bhai itni achchi kahani hai, isko timely updates provide karke majedar banate raho
update hasbeen posted Bilal jan bhaiAkash bhai update kab tak aaye ga