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Akash Bhai, admin has closed that thread which was being written by bbbb...now I guess you are the rightful owner of this story..pls continue and hope you'll give regular updates. Thanks a lot!!
vah vah vah bahut h majedaar aur fataka update hai bhai. bahut bahut mast likhte hai aap
Good update..seems your story is a little bit different from the one posted earlier. Looking forward to the next update..hope you'll update soon. Thanks.
Ek story to already chal rahi hai
Firse kyun........
nice update
Hello dosto Maira naam akash hai.(Maximumx11)
yea mere story jisko main likh raha hu , yea story dushre site par continued hai jisko kisine copy kar kai baadh mai story ulat palat kar di hai. ise liyea main ise site hai apne original story post karna chahata hu aasa karta hu ki aap sahiyog karenge aur mujhe copy paste wala nahi samjhenge .
aapka sahiyog milega to main apne story ko ise site main continued kar payunga .
spelling mai koi galti ho to maf karna .
yea kahani ka suruwat 3 jano sai hote hai
main- akash
maa- kabita
papa-dhirendra
kahani mai aur bhi log hai jin ko mai aane wali update mai introduce karunga.
dhanyabad dost.. aasa karta hu aapko story pasand aayegi ....Good luck dost, i wish ki story jabarjast hogi
Carry on
Intezar rahega age ki updates kaji maire story dushre jagha maine post kia tha jisko kisine edit kar ki post kar dia hai, ......
main original story ko jo ki continued hai(jo ki meri hai) dushre site mai .bo xf par post kar raha hu... dhanyabad ..