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Subha ka waqt---
Savnam ki needh toothte he wo bed mai baith jate hai tab uske paas koi na tha , dushre kamro sai bachoo ki rone ki aabaze he usko sunai de rahe the . tabhi usko piche raath ka sab kuch yaad aane lagg jata hai ki kayse uski suhagraat guzri aur kayse uska sapna bhi poora ho he gaya . tabhi kamre mai kabita aajati hai
kabita-goodmoring mere pyari bachee
savnam-moring mama
kabita-toh neendh aache aaye aur dard toh nahi ho raha hai na
savnam-na bilkul na
savnam bed sai uuthne ki koshish karti hai ki usko dard hona suru ho jata hai aur kabita samajh jati hai aur usko pakad ki sahara deti hai or pakad leti hai tab waha sunidhi aur sulochana bhi aajati hai
kabita-aare koi baath nahi , pahele baar tha na hota he aaya
savnam-han or bhaiya ka bada tha na toh
kabita-haha, aayse baath kisi or ko nahi batate lakin mujhe bata sakti hai tu hehe, aab tu meri sautan jo bann gaye hai
savnam-heee sautan bolna padega aapko
kabita-hehe sayad, aab chal aur nahane chal , aaj hum tujhe nahalayenge aur uske baadh nasta kha lena tujhe aacha lagega, or teri saheli bhi uuth chuke hai usse bhi baath karle thoda usko aacha lagega
savnam-aap nahalayenge kyu bhala
sunidhi-kyu ki kal tum zamindaar ji ki pyaar paye ho na toh pahele raath kai baadh aaysa karte hai
savnam-hehe toh aap kai saath aaysa kia gaya tha badi maa
kabita-aare kitne sawal puchti hai chal aab
savnam kabita ko ek kiss kar leti hai or kabita sunidhi usko nagalane kai liyea bathroom le jate hai , dushre taraf mujko nahalane kai liyea naani ,kamla , manju mujhe kua kai paas le aayse the jaha main ek lungi pahen kar ek stool par baith jata hu aur naani or kamla maire uper pani dhal kar mujhe nahalane lagg jate hai or manju sukhe kapde pakde humare aur dekh rahe thi. naani ek mug sai maire uper pani dhati huye sabun lagane lagg jati hai
naani-maaf kijiyeaga damad ji , aapki sareer par toh kafe nisan aagaye hai
main-hmm wo parso kai hai , waise aapki dono betioo ka khyal daadi thik sai rakh rahe hai na
naani-haan damad ji , aapki naani kabita aur sunidhi ka har baath manti hai aur unka khayal rakhte hai jayse main apka khyal rakhte hu
main-aacha.. aur aap bhi mere saath saath apne beti kabita ka bhi dhyan rakha kijiyea
naani-ji damad ji main usbhi poore koshish karungi ,aap khade ho jayea damad taki aapko aache sai saaf kar paye, aur tum manju dushre taraf ghum jao, tum kuwari ho toh tum inko inhal mai nahi dekh sakti
manju-ji
manju dushre taraf ghum kar khade ho jati hai aur main stool sai khada ho jata hu ki naani mere lungi ko khol kar mujhe poore tarha nanga kar dete hai or mere niche bhi pani marte huye mere niche bhago par bhi sabun laga kar apne hato sai saaf karne lagg jate hai aur kamla mere saare mai pani dhal kar madat karne mai lagg jati hai .
dushre taraf savnam nahane kai baadh aapne apne kamre ki taraf jane lagti hai wo bhi langate huye ki taraf usko pinki dekhte hai jo langdate huye aarahe the tab dono ek dushre ko dekh kar khil khila kar hasne lagg jati hai
pinki-hay langdi ghodi hehe
savnam-tu kon si model ki tarha chal rahe hai re hehe, chal mere kamre mai ohhh dard ho raha hai ,
pinki-mujhe bhi re ufff waise first night kayse ravi mere savuu darling
savnam-hai sabji jayse naam sai mat bula baise aache rahe meri hehehehe( sarmate huye bolte hai ) aur teri
pinki-mast, tera bhai toh mujhe dekh kar bas labha nikal raha tha
savnam-hay , aayse baath nahi bolte , badi maa boli the
pinki-aahhh main aapki first experence nahi bata sakti tujhe, so sad ,aab main kisse bolu
savnam-aare bata sakti hai na aakhi hum best friend hai hehe, mere toh fat gaye the kal raath
pinki-ahh mere bhi dard toh kafe huye re. chal ise baath par gale mil
sunidhi-didi wo kal kai liyea mujhe maaf kardo
kabita-tujhe mafi nahi milegi, tu aaysa mere sath kayse kar sakti hai bata ? maine tujhe ek bahen ki tarha pyaar dia , ek maa ki tarha tere dukh main mai teri saath khadi rahe aur tune badlne mai kya kia? kya kia tune , mere samne mere saath chod kar akash sai chudwane lagi
sunidhi-main bhi kya karti , main unko phir sai toh naraj nahi kar sakti the na didi, i am sorry didi
kabita-aab maafi mang kar koi faida nahi , tu baisarm mere beta ka poora maza le rahe the mujhe chidhane kai liyea , aur main hmm , pata nahi wo mujhe kab maaf karega han kiss aur lick sai aage badhe bhi nahi
sundihi-maaf kar denge didi , wo apko jayda pyaar karte hai ise liyea appar apne narajgi dekha rahe hai
kabita-haan yea baath bhi sahi hai, wo mujhe pyaar toh kafe karta hai aur maine uski pyaar ka galat faida uutha kar dhirendra ki aage usse chudhwaye the
sunidhi-kya sach main aapne aaysa kia tha, matlab dhirendra ji kai aage main toh soch bhi nahi sakti
kabita-haan maine aaysa kia tha , taki usko kamini aur sulochana kai liyea taiyar kar payu, wo sarmila tha aur tu yea bath toh janti the na
sunidhi-hmmm , baise aap mana logi , yea toh mujhe pata hai
kabita-baath ghuma li saitan bahen hehehehe
Dushre taraf--
pratab apne bahu anjali kai saath baith kar apne kamo ki charcha kar raha tha aur tab waha jitendra bhi aajate hai aur sab illegal tarike sai zamin hatiyane ka case wo hare bhi toh kayse wahe discuss karne lagg gaye the aur waha sruti ki chutne ki khabar bhi padd gaye the
anjali-babu ji aap us akash ki shadi aayse kayse hone dia ,wo bhi itna sab kuch ho jane kai baadh ,kisi ne humare 9 admi oo ko mout kai ghat utar dia hai aur ek kafe dino sai lapata hai jiske khabar humko mil nahi rahe hai
pratab-main janta hu bahu, main bas ek ache samaya ka intezar he kar sakta hu , main apne shadi hone ka intezar he kar raha hu , pahele ho jane de aur phir
anjali-us sruti ka kya huya jitendra, aakhir waha hamla karne wala tha kon
jitendra-akash
pratab-asambhab uske admi ganv mai dekhegaye the , wo saher kayse ja sakta hai
anjali-kya wo logo ko marne bhi laga hai ?
pratab ka khas admi aate he-haan anjali madam wo zamindaar logo ko mar raha hai , aab toh usko humare ganv ki log darne lagg gaye hai ,
pratab-ganv mai bas ek he gunda rahe sakta hai aur yaha ka main hu aur mere rahete huye wo chora, ahhhhh ( pratab ghusse sai bolta hai )
anjali-sant ho jayea bapu ji , aa damini ja kar pani la
damini ja kar pani ka glass aage badha deti hai
pratab-disha kaha hai , wo khana kha li
damini-haan wo so rahe hai
pratab-so rahe hai aab tak, usko bulaoo uske sakl na dekhu toh mujhe aacha nahi lagta
damini-ji wo aabhi usko
pratab-bola na ja aur bula kar le kar aa
anjali-tujhe sunai nahi de raha hai kya be randi , ja
damini waha khade rahe kar apne ser niche kar deti hai , tab pratab sochne lagta hai ki aakhir damini bula kyu nahi rahe aur ek naukrani ko disha ko niche lane kai liyea bolta hai ,
naukrani-- saheb, saheb ..... Disha bitiya kamre mai nahi hai ( bhagte huye aati hai aur bolte hai )
pratab-toh kaha hai wo kahe aur hai kya
anjali-kahi aur toh usko nahi dekha
tab pratab ghusse sai khada ho jata hai
pratap-damini bol bo kaha hai
jitendara ja kar cc cam check karta hai -- disha bhag gaye
pratap-jayse , itne sare naukar hone par bhi wo yaha sai bhag kayse sakti hai ahhh damini, tune usko
damini-wo yaha par khus nahi the
pratab yea baath sunte he ghuuse sai laal ho jata hai aur damini ko jor ka thappad marta hai jise thapak ki joro ki aabaz kai sang damini chitak kar padti hai
damini-sali randi tune apne beti ko bhaga dia , madar**** randi ,
pratab aage badh kar damini ki zulfo ko pakad leta hai aur usko keech akr usko uuthata hai jisse damini dar jati hai pore tarha
anjali-ise randi ki itne himmat , sali tu bhul gaye hai ki tujhe aur teri beti ko pratab ji ne kharid kar tujpar kitna bada aahesan kia hai
damini-ji unke badle main pratab ji ki rakhel banne kai liyea taiyar huye the lakin mere beti masum hai , wo yea shadi nahi karna chahati the
pratab-sali randi jawan ladati hai .
pratab aur ek thappad marta hai jisse damini ki gal mai laal nisan aajata hai
anjali-is randi kai karan aap apne haath gande mat karo babuji isse toh main dekh lungi
pratab-tu chup rahe . wo kaha gaye hai damini?
damini-mujhe nahi pata
pratab tab apne ek admi ko isara deta hai jo ki aage badh kar aata hai aur damini jayse he khadi hoti hai uske pet mai ek jor ka mukka marta hai jiise wo dhadam sai girr jati hai aur dard sai rone lagg jati hai aur khasne lagti hai
pratab-bata di
damini-mujha nahi pata , main sach main kuch nahi janti pratab ji
jitendra-isko pata nahi hoga
anjali-sayad wo zamindaar kai paas chali toh nahi gaye , aakhir wo uske bhai sai pyaar karti hai
pratab-wo choro , jitendra gadi nikalo
jitendra-sayad aapko waha nahi jana chahiyea
pratab-jitna bola jaye utna kar jitendra
jitendra-ji
dushre taraf-- Saher par-
subha ki 8 baje-
Suraj aur disha dono ganv sai bhagne mai kamiyab ho chuke the or dono bus mai baith kar saher pahucha chuke the aur apne ek dost kai waha pahuch chuke the jo dono ki madat karne kai liyea taiyar bhi ho gaya tha, dono waha fresh ho kar aage kya kare unke baare mai he charcha karte ja rahe the. tabhi suraj apne dil ki baath disha sai bol he deta hai
suraj-mai tumsai bahut pyaar karta hu Disha aur yea riste ko aage badhana chahata hu
disha-really , mai bhi tumsai pyaar karti hu
suraj-toh hum shadi karle
disha-lakin suraj yaha hum shadi nahi kar sakte tum toh jante ho na ki ise shaher mai hum safe nahi hai , hume aur bdi saher ki taraf jana padega , sayad delhi jana sahi rahega
suraj-delhi? thik hai tum jaysa chahogi waisa hoga, hum thode he der mai nikal jayege
disha-thankyou ( bol kar disha suraj ki gal mi ek kiss karte hai jisse suraj khus ho jata hai)
aur kuch he der mai dono railway station kai liyea nikal jate hai jaha sai wo delhi kai liyea rabana ho he jate hai
dushre taraf- Ganv par--
main- navin mama suraj kaha hai , wo dekhai kyu nahi de raha
navin-jijaji ,wo subha sai nahi dekh raha hai , sayad kheto ka kaam dekhne kai liyea chala gaya hoga, wo kafe mahnat kar raha hai
tabhi Ravi bhagte huye mere paas aakar mere pair mai gir jata hai jiske piche pinki chal kar aarahe the
Ravi-bhaiya bhaiya mujhe bacha lo plz , main aapki aage hath jodta hu
main-tujhe kya ho gaya
Ravi-wo , wo pinki sai bacha lo mujhe
pinki-bhaiya wo, dekheyea na main inko bas thoda pyaar karna chahati hu aur yea mujsai dur bhag rahe hai
Ravi-yea pyaar nahi hai , bilkul nahi bhaiya , yea pinki mujhe jaan sai maar dalegi , bhaiya mujhe bacha lo
main-Pinki
Pinki-bhaiya kya main aapne pati ko pyaar nahi kar sakte kya, mujhe ek patni hone ka itna bhi hak nahi hai aur main inko bas itne boli ki wo aab humare saath rahe aur humare college mai admission leli taki hum dono ek couple ki tarha college ja sake
Ravi-main nahi rahena chahata , main saher wapas jana chahata hu bhaiya , mujhe plz bhej do
main-pinki sahe bol rahe hai Ravi, aab sayad tumhara naam yaha tranfer karne ka waqt aahe gaya hai
yea sunte he pinki ek badi si smile deti hai
Ravi-bhaiya aaysa na karo, aap jo bologe wo main karunga , yaha kabhi nahi aayunga aur padhai mai poora dhyan lagayunga
Pinki-aaysa na boliyea main inki baigir nahi rahe sakta bhaiya ,main insai bahut pyaar karti hu, aur aapne mujhe ise liyea toh inki saath shadi karwaya hai na bhaiya
Ravi-nahi chudal kahiki mujhe nahi rahena
main-Ravi , aaysa nahi bolte , wo bahu hai aab ghar ki aur wo tujhe pyaar karti hai
Ravi-nahi karti
Main-Ravi ... tumhare liyea yahe sahi hoga. pinki aaj sai iske sare zimmedari tumhari hai , aur han iske padhai ki jimmedari bhi tumhari hai, tum padhai me isse hosiyaar ho toh tum savnam kai saath padhte waqt isko bhi padhai me madat karna
Pinki-main toh inko extra class karwayungi bhaiya , akele mai
Main-mujhe yahe umid hai tumsai pinki
Ravi-aaysa na karo bhaiya , yea dekho maire kya halat ki hai yea ( Ravi apne pet par lage Pinki ki kharocho ki nissan mujhe dekhata hai aur apne gardan kar danto ki nisan dekhane lagg jata hai )
Main-pinki yea sab kya hai ?
Pinki- wo love bite hai bhaiya, itna toh pyaar kar sakti hu na
main-thik hai yea tum dono pati patni kai beech ki baath hai
Main Ravi ko dekh kar mujhe thoda aajib toh laggne lagg gaya tha lakin Ravi kai liyea yeahe sahi samajh kar pinki ki hawale kar deta hu , kyu ki aagar ravi ko koi sudhar sakti hai toh wo pinki he the aur aache toh toh
Kabita-kya huya Ravi beta , tum unkai pair kyu padke huye ho
Ravi-badi maa aap he kuch karoo.......
Akash se guhar lagane kai baadh Ravi apne badi maa Kabita sai madat mangne lagti hai ki sayad usnke kahene par Pinki apne hukm na chalaye Main waha sai seedha Sulochana ki kamre par jata hu jaha Savnam baith kar padh rahe the..
Main-savnam tumko aab kaysa feel ho raha hai
Savnam-aare bhaiya aayiyea na aandar , mujhe aab thoda aacha feel ho raha hai bhiya , bas dard thoda sa hai aabhi
Main-thik hai , tum aaram karo
Savnam-nahi aap rukia na Bhiaya aap sai thodi baath karne hai ..
Dushre taraf Ravi apne badi maa kabita kai madat mangti hai lakin kabita bhi is mamle mai kuch bolne poora inkar karte huye Pinki ki support karki chali jati hai . jab koi usski baath nahi sunta tab Ravi piche mud kar pinki ko dekhta hai jo ki khade ho kar Ravi ko dekhte hai aur ek Evil si smile deti hai jisko dekh kar Ravi dar jata hai
pinki-tohh tum mere baare mai sab ko sikat karne aagaye kyu ?
Ravi-aayse koi baath nahi hai , main toh
Pinki-hmm toh kayse baath hai, chaliyea mujhe kamre mai ja kar samjhayea
Ravi- nahi mujhe nahi jana
Pinki-kayse nahi jaoge ? tumhare teacher sai toh padhai karne he padegi chalo pyari pati ji, Raghunath papa dekho yea
Ravi-unko mat bulao
bolte huye pinki Ravi ki shirt ko piche sai pakad leti hai aur usko keech kar apne kamre mai le jati hai aur ek ruler scale nikalte hai aur usko Ravi ko dekhane lagg jati hai
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Ravi-isko kyu nikali ho
Pinki-tumko padhane kai liyea
Ravi-iski koi jarurat nahi pinki . plzzz
Pinki-plz nahi chalo, maire sawal ka jabab do
Ravi-dekho tum koi teacher nahi
Pinki-aachaa!!!!
Pinki ruler uuthati hai aur Ravi kai pichwade mai thodi jor se marti hai ki Ravi kud padta hai aur ahhhhhhhhhhh ahhhh ki aabaz nikalne lagta hai
Pinki-toh nahi manoge
Ravi-dekho ouchhhhhhhhhhhh dard hota hai mat maro ... maaaa bachaa lo mujhe
Pinki-bulao jisko bulana hai ?
Ravi-thik hai padh raha hu mere maa , ahhhh mere phuti kismat
Main Savnam sai baath kar he raha tha ki mujhe call aata hai aur main call aatten karta hu
main-kya huya , koi khabar mile kya?
--- nahi zamindaar ji lakin humara admi jisko Pratab ki ghar par nazar rakhne kai liyea bola gaya tha wo behosh mila tha sayad usko neendh ki dawa pilai gaye the
main-pratab ko kuch pata toh nahi chal gaya ?
---- nahi zamindaar ji , uske kahene kai aanusar us pani petane wala koi aur nahi balki apka bhai Suraj tha
main-suraj.. wo waha kya kar raha tha, kafe disha se mi
----wo nahi pata zamindaar ji
tabhi bahar ek naukrati bhagti huye humari kamre ki aur aati hai
Naukrani--maaf kijiyeaga zamindaar ji lakin bahar aapki jarurat hai
Main-wo kyu bhala
Naukrani-Raghunath ji bula rahe hai , aur wo. wo Pratab ji apne logo ko le kar ghar ki samne khade hai
Main-Pratab dada...
Main Savnam ko chod kar ghar ki bahar ki aur nikal jata hu jaha mujhe mere ghar ki bahar aate he mere do bodyguard mere side mai aage badhne lagg jate hai ..
Akash jayse he seema ki bahar nikalta hai tab bahar ka nazara dekhne layak tha , bahar Akash sai aur 2 body guard apne gun ki poing aage ki taraf rakh kar khade the aur ganv kai 20 aadmi bhi the jo ki rifel pakad kai khad ethe aur kuch aadmi aabhi bhi bhagte aa rahe the aur nisane par the Pratab dada jo ki apne haath mai ek lakdi ki chadi pakad ki maire aur dekh rahe the aur jitendra kaka jo ki apne dono haath apne pocket mai rakh kar khade the aur unke piche unke 30 admi jo ki apne gun ki poing humare taraf kia huye the
Main-yaha ho kya raha hai Pratab dada , aab yaha kar kya rahe ho
raghunath-maine inko yea sawal poch zamindaar ji lakin yea bas aapko pukar rahe the
Pratab-yea toh main janna chahata hu, ki aakhir tum santi ka prastab rakh kar mere ladki ko yaha apne paas le aaye ho
Main-aap bolna kya chahate ho Pratab dada
Pratab- Disha kaha hai zamindaar
Main-Disha , aapki baath main samajh nahi
Pratab-natak mat karo zamindar tum , mujsai badla lene kai liyea yea sab kar rahe ho na ,iska anjam bahut bura hoga
jitendra-pitaji sayad inko kuch
Pratab-tu chup kar aandar ghus kar Disha ko le kar aa
tabhi gani ki aur 30 log khade ho jate hai aur apne banduk pakde pratab ki aur nisana lagalete hai aur dushre taraf police bhi waha aajati hai jo pratab aur zamindaar ki ghutt ko santh karane mai lagg jati hai lakin koi hatiyar niche karne ka naam he nahi le raha tha
Inspector-pratab ji app santh ho jayea yaha yea sab hangama hone sai baath uper bhi pahuch sakti hai
Pratab- aab iske parwha nahi hai hume , jitendra disha ko dhundo
main-koshish kar ki dekho pratab , ek bhi tumhara admi zinda ghar nahi pahuch payega
tav bahar ki sour sunn kar dhirendra bhi bahar aajate hai aur wo apne bhai ko waha dekh kar shocked ho jate hai
Dhirendra-jitu tu yaha kya kar raha hai aur yea sab kya hai
jitendra-bade bhai, wo disha kahi chali gaye hai
Main-aur aapko kyu lagta hai ki disha yaha hogi
Jitendra-Suraj kai karan , wo kaha hai akash
Main-Raghunath , suraj ko call karki bulao
Raghuanth-uska phone subha sai switchoff dekha raha hai zamindaar ji aur wo Khet mai bhi nahi hai , wo disha ko kai saath kahi
Pratab-aagar teri bhai dekha toh main usko chodunga nahi
yea baath bole huye Pratab u turn markar gadi main baith jata hai aur uske gadi waha sai nikal jati hai aur Jitendra apne bade bhai ki taraf badhte hai tab zamindar ki adki jitendra ki uper banduk tan dete hai lakin jitendra ise baath ki parwha kia bina dhirendra ki paas ja kar uske pair chuta hai aur waha sai nikal jata hai
main-tum log ganv ka chappa chappa chap maro aur suraj jaha kahi bhi ho usko pakad ki seedha ghar lao, us par jaan ka khatra hai , jao
akash ki yea kahene parhe ganv kai sare ghar ki talashi hone lagg jati hai aur zamindaar ko kuch admi gadi nikal ki paas ki ganv ki taraf nikal padte hai aur akash ghar ki andar ki taraf jane lagg jata hai , tab uske dimag mai ek baath strike karta hai ki pichli raath suraj zamindaar ki admi ko neend ki dabai khilaya tha aur iska matlab aab akash ki liyea saaf tha ki yea sab ki piche suraj ka he haath hai . aaur tab akash ghusse mai aajata hai
main-raghunath, jao aur sab ko puch tach karo aur suraj kai baare mai pata lagao
Raghunath-ji zamindaar ji
Kabita-kya huya akash bahar yea sab sour saraba kaysa tha
Main-sunidhi kaha hai maa bulo usse
Sunidhi-ji main yaha hu
main-suraj kaha hai ?
sunidhi-usko toh humne pichle raath sai nahi dekha ji
Kabita- han wo raath ko shadi ki mandap par he khada tha
Main-Disha gayab hai aur suraj bhi
sunidhi-kya? aayse kayse ho sakta hai, usne mujhe wada kia tha ki wo mujhe bina bataye ganv kai bahar kadam bhi nahi rakhega
Main-aur uske tumhara nahi balki mera bhi biswas toda hai sunidhi , tum sab uska kamra ki chanbin karo
Inspector-sir hum aapki dadaji kai mout ki investigation karne kai liyea aaye hai, aur sayad thode poochtaach bhi kar sakte hai aur iske liyea aapki izazat chahiyea
main-hmmm jo karna hai karo
Inspector-ok sir
police apna kaam suru kar deti hai aur ghar ki aurate suraj ki saman dhundhne mai lage the
sunidhi-suraj ka kuch saman gayab hai ji ,mujhe uske chinta hone lagg gaye hai
tabhi kabita kamre sai bhagti huye aati hai
kabita-akash beta mujhe yea kagaz dressing table par rakha mila hai kaha sunidhi ka naam likha huyua hai
main-usko padhao
kabita jayse he kagaz kholti hai waha sai ek sim nikal kar niche zameen par paddte hai jo ki suraj ki tha
Kabita-dear maa .. maine aapsai wada kia tha ki main aapko bata kar kahi nahi jayunga ise liyea main yea khat aapko likha raha hu taki aap meri fikar na karo, aap bhaiya ki saath kafe khus ho aur isse badi khusi mere liyea kuch nahi ho sakti ise liyea main aapko bina bataye he ja raha hu, aap mujhe kabhi samajhne ki koshish nahi ki aur mere pyaar kai baare mai bhaiya ko samjhane ki koshish bhi nahi ki phir bhi baath ka mujhe dukh nahi hai . sayad bhaiya sahi hai yaha rahene sai main aapna pyaar ko kabhi hasil nahi kar payunga iseliyea main apne pyar disha kai saath yaha sai dur bhag jane ka mann bana lia hai, aur hum yaha sai kahe dur ja kar apne ghar basane ka bhi soch lia hai
aasa karta hu ki aap mere aur disha kai phaisle sai khus honge aakhir bhaiya bhi toh yahe chahate hai , aur disha bhi . kher aap khus rahega , aap ka pyara beta Suraj
main-yea pagal kahika
Sunidhi yea sunte he zameen par baith jati hai - uskai jaan ka khatra hai , wo aayse yaha sai kayse bhag sakta hai? . kya main uspar dhyan nahi de ise liyea wo bhag gaya? main ek buri maa , han yea galti meri hai galti mere he hai
kabita-santh ho jaoo sunidhi ,
tabhi sunidhi ki aansu nikal aate hai ,jisko kabita aur baki aurate santh karne mai laggg jate hai ... aur dushre taraf akash ka ghussa disha kai liyea badhne lagg gaya tha
Main-wo Disha ...
Suraj janta tha ki ise sim kai wajay se akash uspar aaram sai pahucha sakta hai ise liyea usne apne sim nikl dia tha aur akash ise baath ko samajh bhi chuka tha
Sunidhi-plz mere bete ko dhund layea jii, wo mere zigger ka tokda hai
sunidhi rote rote akash ki gale lagg jati hai aur akash usko santh karne mai lagg jata hai
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Jabardast update mitrUpdate-8
shadi ka din aachuka tha or bahar mandap sajh bhi chuka tha , jayse he shadi ka muhurat najdik aaraha thaa waise waise maire baichani badhte he ja rahe thee, pata nahi kyu mai kho sa gaya tha ki aab maire shadi ke aarman poore kayse honge ,maine jo shadi ki liyea jo sapne bune the bo kayse poore honge aab?, "kyu ki aab mai shadi kisi ladki sai nahi balki apne mousi sai karne ja raha hu". kya mai bo pyar pa sakunga jo ek ladki sai shadi karne sai milta hai.
kya mousi mujhe us tarha aapna payegi jis tarha ek ladki ek ladkai ko aapnati hai?, kya mujhe apne mousi sai shadi karne chaheyea?
mousi sai shadi?,hmmm,mousi to mujsai lafe badi hai umar mai lakin mousi khubsurat to hai he aur jaban bhi ,aabhi bhi unko dekh kar nahi lagta ki bo 37 shaal ki hai aur ek 18 shaal ladka ki maa bhi.
tab mujhe badi bua ki baath yaad aagaye "ab to mousi sai shadi phir suhagrat"
yea sochte he maire lund pant ki aandar khada apne poore roop mai
main mann he mann mai-mai yea kya sooch raha hu , bo mere mousi sai aur meri bhai suraj ki maa bhi, lakin shadi to ussai ho he rahe hai
maira mann kuch na kuch sooch raha tha lakin mera dil aur dimag mujko yea sab soochnai sai rok raha tha or bol raha tha ki bo tere mousi sai yea sab mat sooch unke baare mai , tabhi maa maire kamre mai aagaye aur bo tayar ho chuni thee
maa-akash, akash beta
main-umm, haan, haan maa
maa-kyu sooch raha hai tu itne der tak yaha baithe, koi pareshani hai kya?
main-haan maa
maa-pareshan kyu hai mera raja beta mujko bhi to bata de
main-bo main mousi sai shadi karne ko le kar pareshan hu
maa-maine bola tha na ki ise baare mai pareshan na ho
main-lakin kayse na hu maa?, bo mere mousi hai aur mujsai badi hai ,kya bo mujhe apna payegi
maa- kayse nahi apnayagi koi mere raja bete ko, maine to apna lia toh bo kyu nahi aapnayegi
yea bol kar maa ne maire gal ko chum lia aur has kar boli
maa-aab itna mat sooch aur tayar ho ja tere shadi ka muhurat najdik aaraha hai
main-thik hai maa, ek baath bolu
maa-han bol
main-aap kafe khubsrat lag rahe hai ise saare mai
maa-sukriya
maa muskarate huye chali gaye aur mai tayar hone lagg gaya tabhi mere mann mai ek sawal aaya , maa ne aaysa kyu kaha ki "maine to apna lia toh bo kyu nahi apnayegi" yea soch te huye mai tayar ho he raha tha ki tab maa ki chote bhai mere mamaji bhi aagaye
mama-jija ji
mai mud kar dekha to bo mama ji the
main-mamaji aap
mama-yea lijiyea aapke kapde yea pahen kar tayar ho jayea
main-mama ap mujhe naam sai he bulayea
mama-nahi ab aap mere jija banne bale hai to mai apko naam sai nahi bula sakta
main-mama, bo mujko aajib sa lag raha hai
mama-aap ise baare mai math sochyea aur aap tayar ho jayeyea samaya ho gaya hai aur kisi baath ki jarurat hai to mujko batayea, aagar kuch pena hai aapko to, sarab
main-nahi, nahi, mai yea sab nahi peeta
mama-wah , yea to bahut aache baath hai , iska matlab maire bahen aache ghar ja rahe hai
main-aaye mat boleyea, aur mama ap plz maire paas raheyea ga
mama-ap chinta math kijiyea aaj mujko aapki paas rahene kai liyea he bola gaya hai, taki aap ise shadi sai bhag na jayo
main hasne laga yea baath sun kar aur atayar hone lagg gaya mama sai baath karte karte , dhere dhere sham hone lagg gaye aur shadi ka muhurat aagaya aur mai sherwani pahen kar shadi ki liyea tayar bhi ho gaya ,mujko maire kapde dekh kar mahesus ho raha tha ki mere shadi hai lakin mujko aabhi bhi bo shadi wali feel nahi ho rahe the.
mama-chaliyea jijaji
main mama ki piche piche bahar jane laga aur bahar aate he dekha ki mandap sajh chuka tha aur pandit bhi baithe huye the aur waha bas ghar ki he saare log mouzud the.
main aage aage badhta gaya aur mandap par ja kar baith gaya ghar ki saare log mandap gher kar khade the mujhe azib sa to lagg he raha tha aur sarm bhi aarahe the pata nahi kyu?, daadi to aage baith kar shadi dekh rahe the aur pandit ne apna kaam suru kar dia aur bo mantra padhne lagg gaya ,mujko baichani se ho rahe thee aur mujko lagg he raha thaa ki aab shadi rok deta hu.
tabhi maa ki sakal dekhai de aur uske side mai mousi ek dulhan ki red saree mai sajh
dhaj kar dhere dhere mandap ki aur badh rahe the unko dekh kar mai sab bhul gaya mousi ko maine takriban 3,4 shalo sai nahi dekha tha, bo shadi ki jode mai bahut khubsurat lagg rahe the, mai bhul sa gaya ki bo maire mousi hai ,bo mujhe ek jaban aur ek kamal ki figure wali ladki ki tarha dekhai dene lagg gaye ,main bas unko he dekhta rahe gaya ,bo maire paas aakar baith gaye aur pandit ji mantra padhte chale gaye aur mai to sab bhul he chuka tha ki mai apne sai badi aurat kai saath shadi kar raha hu, maire aandar ka mard pata nahi kyu jagg gaya tha aur aandar he aandar kafe khus tha samaya jayse bhag he raha tha maire aage sai aur mujko malum bhi nahi chal raha thaa.
pandit-beta , beta
main hosh mai aaya
main-haan
pandit-khade ho jayo beta shadi ki rasam pura karna hai
main-haan han
main side mai dekha to mousi khadi the aur maire paas he unki sakal dekh kar mai khus ho gaya aandar he aandar sai aur pandit kai kahene aanusar sab kuch karne lagg gaya
pandit-shadi samparna huya
main-itne jaldi
pandit-5 ghante ho gaye hai beta
main-ohh
mujko samaya ka pata he nahi chala tha tab tak , tab mai aur mousi mil kar sab ka aasirbad lene lagg gaye , daadi ka phir naana ,naani ka aur phir papa maa ka
papa-khus raho
maa-sada khus raho akash aur mere pyari bahen sunidhi
mujko tab yaad aaya ki maire shadi to mere mousi sai huye hai, lakin aab tak kafe der ho chuki thee, main mousi ki bete ko nazro sai dhundne lagg laga lakin mousi ka beta kahi nazar nahi aaraha thaa tab socha sahi huya , kyu ki yea azib sa pal hota uske liyea ki uske maa uske bhai sai shadi kar rahe hai.
main mousi ki sakal dekhne laga ki bo ise shadi sai dukhi to nahi hai lakin unke sakal mai koi uudasi nazar nahi aarahe thee
main sochne laga ki "mousi mujsai shadi karne kai liyea mann kayse gaye"
daadi- akash tum idhar aayo
main daadi ki aur badhne laga jaha papa bhi khade thee aur sab mere aur dekh rahe the
daadi- tere dadaji kai sarth kai aanusar tumhari shadi sunidhi sai ho chuki hai aur aab tum ise papers par apne dastakhat kar ki ise zayadat ka mailk bann jayo
main aage badha aur daadi ki maire aur kuch paper badhaya aur papa ne isare mai unpar dastakhat karne kai liyea kaha jis par maine deri na kia dastakhat kar dia
daadi- mubarak ho, aab tum ise ghar ki sare zayadat kai malik bann gaye ho, aab tum aandar chalo
main daadi ki peeche piche ek kamre mai gaya jaha bas ek chair pada huya tha jaha daadi ne mujko baithne ko kaha, main us chair mai baith gaya aur daadi kuch rasam karne lagg gaye
main-yea kya rasam hai
daadi-yea rasam ghar ka mard kai liyea kia jata hai ab mujko rasam poora karne do
yea bol kar bo apne kaam karne lagi takriban 20 min kai baadh bo mere chakkar katne lagi
daadi- sare aurate aajayo
main sochne laga ki "yea kya ho raha hai" tab maa, mousi ,badi bua aur choti bua bhi aagaye aur aage khadi ho gaya aur maire uupar phool phekne lagi daadi ki kahene aanusar
daadi- aab sab doodh ka glass uuthao aur akash ko pilayo
yea bolte he pahele badi aur choti bua maire aage badhi aur maire aur doodh ka glass badhaye
daadi- akash ek ghuth peo
mai glass sai ek ghut pe lia phir unke pichee choti bua ne mujhe doodh ki ek ek ghoot pilaye aur maire aage khadi ho gaya aur daadi ne baki sare doodh ko dono ko pene ko kaha aur dono apne aapne glass sai doodh pe lia
aab daadi ne maire choti bua aur badi bua ko mare pair chuke ko kaha aur bo dono nai waisa he kia
daadi-aabsai akash dhirendra ki jagha le raha hai aur sunidhi akash ki patni bann chuki hai ise liyea kabita aur sunidhi ko yea sab cheze karne nahi padegi
maa maire paas aaye aur mujko gale sai laga lia aur maine bhi jor sai kas kar lagg gaya aur thode der baadh daadi ki piche bahar aagaya
daadi ne ghar ki sare logo ne aage ailan kar dia
daadi- main akash ko ise ghar ka mard banati hu, aab ise ghar ka jo bhi faisla lia jayega bo akash he lega , aab sab ki zimadari main akash kai haath mai dati hu
yea baath sunn kar papa aur maa khus ho gaye aur maa mousi ko le kar aandar chali gaye aur unke saath sare aurate bhi .
daadi-akash ab tumne kya soocha hai, tumne aab ise ghar ka mard bann gaye ho aur ab tum yaha ka sab sambhalna suru karlo
main-nahi muko saher mai thoda apna job kuch mahene karna padega uske baadh he main ganv mai rahene aayunga
daadi-thik hai, mai tab tak ghar ko thik karwa lati hu taki tum aakar rahe sako
main-thik hai
daadi-ab tum ghar ki mard bann gaye ho to ise ghar ko tumhari gairhajari mai kon sambhalega iska faisla le lo
main-aap he sambhaleyea maire lauthne tak
daadi-thik hai jaysa tum bolo
daadi yea bol kar chali gaye
badi bua ki pati- kya akash ji aab to ghar aapka hai ab to humare lia kuch karo
main-le aaiyea jo chaheyea aur paise daadi sai le lijiyeaga
badi bua ki pati-kya aab aap hai ise ghar ki malik aur hum aapki daadi sai mange
main-ek baar aadat lagg jane dijiyea uske baadh aap mujsai mangeyeaga
kafe der bhi ho chuki the iseliyea mai thoda aaram karne chala gaya kyu ki aagle din humare wapas jane ka train bhi tha , aab to maire shadi bhi ho chuke the aur main ghar ka mard bann chuka tha, aab pata nahi kyu maire aandar ki ghabrahat gayab ho chuke the .
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Mera bhi yahi maanna hai ki lead character ko zabardasti mahan banaya ja raha hai , yahan sirf Ravi ko hi useless scum nahi banaya balki poore pariwar ke har mard ko gaandu banaya gaya hai
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