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Rasprad aur Romanchak kahani ke agle update ki pratiksha.
Well disappointed with using a woman just for favor/gain. Could have used other means to get the same result but well it's your story, keep writing whatever you see fit.Update-69
Akash aur uske daadi jayse he ghar ki aandar sai bahar nikal jate hai pratab apne use aurat sai has ki baath karne lagg jata hai uske kandhe par haath rakh kar thap thapa ta huya ,wo aurat bas kuch na bol kar khadi the aur pratab ki baate sun kar rahe the
pratab-aache lagg rahe hai ise saree main, tu kuch gahene bhi pahen kar ghum ghar par , tahi tu aur bhi sundar lagegi
kaushalya devi-aap kya kar rahe hai ji, ek tarrha sai dekha jaye to wo aap ka pota hai aur aapne usse ise tarha ghar sai nikal dia
prratab- bo humara pota nahi , humare bade bhai ka pota hai aur dono mai kafe fark hai kaushalya devi, humara kono nahi lage bo chora
kaushalya devi-lakin aaysa chalta raha to wo he ise ghar ka bhaishwa banega
pratab- yahe to hum nahi hone dena chahate kaushalya devi , iske liyea hum yea sab kar rahe hai
kaushlya devi-kya aapati hai hai
pratab- aapati yea hai ki wo humare bade bhai ka khoon hai, us bade bhai jisne hume jalil karne ki ek kasar bhi baki nahi choda
wo aurat yea baath sun kar darbaze ki aur dekhne lagti hai
dushre tarraf--
main-mohanlal ji kab jana hai delhi
mohanlal-kal he nikalna hai
main-thik hai main aapki saath chalne kai liyea taiyar hu
mohanlal-aapne sahi faisla lia hai lakin itne jaldi aap ki packing
main-main manage kar lunga aap chinta math karo
mohanlal- thik hai hum kal he pas ki bade saher main milenge main baki sab ko bata deta hu
main-thik hai
main phone cut kar deta hu .
daadi-tu election mai bhag lega ?
main-haan, aur kya main bina election mai ladhe pratab ji ki aage khada rahe sakta hu
daadi thode chup ho gaye
main-yea ilaka(nanaji ganv ka) kis ka hai , raghunath
raghunath-wo aapkai chote dadaji ka zamindaar ji
main-to jitna bhi mai thik sai samajh paya hu ,main baas aapne ilake ka zamindaar hu aur ise ilake mai bas kuch log bhale he mujhe jante ho lakin main kuch kar nahi sakta hai na daadi
daadi-tere dadaji ki pitaje ne is samjhota banbaya tha ki ise ilaka pratab ka hoga aur ispar tumhare dadaji koi hak nahi jata sakte . aur pratab kai kisi ki karya par tumhare dadaji hastakhep nahi karenge
main-greate
daadi tab to kuch nahi bolte hai .sayad raghunath kai aage kuch nahi bolna chahati the. hum gadi main sab santh baithe the . aur thode he derr main gharr jayse he pauche daadi ne mujhe baath karne kai chat parr chalne ko kaha to maine unsai baath karne ki he thani tab ghar kai saare aurate mujhe dekh rahe the main daadi ki saath chat par chala jata hu
daadi-tu pagal ho gaya hai kya? khud kai dadaji kai khilab khada hoga?
main-aur koi chara bachaa hai aapki paas daadi
daadi-iise hum dono kai paribaar ki doori badh jayengi akash
main-aab kon se nazdikiya bache hai daadi, aapki baath maine mann liya aur chup raha ya phir chup rahene ki poore koshish kia ki koi gadbad na ho aur marai wajay sai suraj koi musibat mai na phas jaye lakin huya kya ?, ghanghor baijatti .
daadi-lakin bo tere chote dadaji hai
main-unko dekh kar lagta hai ki main unke pota hone ka koi bhi mann rakhaa ,main to chup raha aur wo, main samajhta tha ki dadaji ne mujhe sabak seekhane kai liyea suraj ko ise muslibat mai dala hai lakin nahi bo to aapki baath nahi sune sune daadi, aab unke paas naanu, naanu naukar bann ki ghum rahe hai
daadi chup ho jati hai thode der
main-aap ki paas iski koi tarkif hai suraj ko bachane kai liyea to boliyea main sunne kai liyea tayar hu
daadi- aabhi nahi hai lakin koi na koi rasta nikal he jayega
main-ek rasta hai dadaji ko goli mar dete hai sara kissa he khatam na bache gi baash na baje ki baasurii
daadi-iise tu
main-wait.... isse main jail chala jayunga ,nana , dadaji hai bo mera main usko maar bhi nahi sakta
daadi-kya bol raha hai beta
main-main bol raha hu aurr koi rasta nahi bachaa hai, unko jabab dene kai liyea unke level par aana he padega ya phir unsai bada banna padega , barna bo nahi sunnenge
daadi-tu yaha rah karr bhi to yea sab kar sakta hai na . aur tune wada kia tha ki tu delhi nahi jayega
main- kab kia tha maine wada ? aapne to koi wada mujsai le nahi the
daadi-to sulochana ka kya jisko maine tere wawale kar dia tha
main-aapko lagta hai ki mere dil mai kaamini aur sulochana kai liyea pyaar hai jiske liyea main delho na jayu
daadi-to tune bas apne kaam nikalne ki liyea
main-sahi samjhe aap
daadi chup ho jati hai ek pal ki liyea lakin phir bolne lagti hai
daadi-lakin waqt kai saath saath halat badal jayenge beta
main-aur kya us waqt tak suraj ko sadhne du jail mai ,, aap ki baath maine mann li aab main khud ki sununga aur delhi jayunga aur pratab dadaji ki khilab khada hunga
daadi ki paas aur koi chara nahi thaa kuch ki akash ne aapna mann bana lia tha ki usko kya karna hai aab
main- jara bataoo ge daadi ki wo aurat kon thi jo humarre aane ki baadh pratab dadaji ki paas gaye the
daadi-damini, uske beti hai wo ladki
main-disha ,.... uske maa dadaji kai saath
daadi-maine bas suna hai ki wo aachanak sai ghar le aaye the unko kuch shaal pahele
main-kya aap sach bol rahe hai
daadi-main sach bol rahi hu beta
main-dadaji ki paas kon sa power tha jo mere paas nahi hai
daadi-tere dadaji ka sara power tere paas hai beta .
main mann he mann mai-hmmmm lakin dadaji bas piche sai support karte the candidate ki lakin mujhe aab aage sai support karna padega jiske liyea mujhe ise election mai candidate kai saath khada hona he padega ...
main yea sochte sochte niche chala jata hu jaha suraj mujhe dekh kar ,merre paas aajata hai
suraj-bhaiya mujhe, mujhe maaf kardo, lakin maine koi galti nahi ki hai maine rp nahi kia
main-wo main janta hu lakin tumne galti to kar di hai beta
suraj-lakin maine...........
akash suraj ka caller pakad kai apne taraf keech leta hai
main- tune us ladki kai saath sex to nahi kia tha na
suraj-ho gaya humarre beech bhaiya
main-to kya ladki virgin the sab hone sai pahele
surarj sochna hai yea kayse baath pooch rahe hai uske bhai , ise tarha ka jabab bo unko kayse dega
main-bata bhi aab kya baki raha hai
suraj-haan ,haan lakin wo khud sex karne ki itcha jataye the aur aur apne virginity loose karne ki aur wo khud mujhe hotel le gaye the
main-kya!! ladki ne khud tujhe apne virginity toodwane kai liyea boli , tu jarurat sai kuch jayda he lucky nahi hai ?
suraj-hum ek dushre sai pyaar karte hai bhaiya aur yea bf gf kai beech
main-ek min kya tere gf disha, mujhe janti hai
suraj- jante to nahi lakin maine photo dekhai the usko ki aap mere bade bhai ho
main suraj kai kandhe par dhere sai haath rakh deta hu
main-aur kya bataya
suraj-ki aap zamindaar ho
aab mujhe lagne laga ki yea koi sanjog to nahi ho sakta ki ladki ko bf mila bhi to mere bhai aur uske saath sex bhi ho gaya . aur sex kai liyea aage badhi bhi kon ? wo ladki disha jiski shadi chote dadaji sai hone wali the aur yea baadh sayad bo ladki bhi jante the , iska matlab disha ne game to nahi khel lia yea shadi sai bachne kai liyea. ya phir sab sanjog hai
suraj-main usse pyar karna hu aur wo mujsai bhaiya , kya pyaar karna gunha hai?
main-aab tujhe main kayse samjayu........
suraj maire aur dekh kar uske sawal ka jabab mang raha tha
main-shayad tu galat nahi hai lakin tu aayse jagha phas chuka hai jaha par tera koi featurre he nahi hai , seedhi baat bolu to tera bhabshya gaya, tere uper fir sai bo bhi ek sangin jurm ka aab tujhe koi college admission nahi dega , aab tu ise gine chune ganv kai bahar bhi tu nahi sakta .
suraj maire baath samajhne lagta hai , bo apne ser niche kar ki mere baath sunta ja raha tha
main-aab tere liyea sunidhi ne jitne bhi sapne dekhe the wo ek he pal mai paani mai dhul gaye hai
suraj-aab kuch nahi ho sakta
main-nahi beta , kuch nahi ho sakta aab.. bas main tujhe us char diwar sai bacha kar ise char diwar par rakh sakta hu
tabhi kamini maire nazdik sai guzar rahe thee
main-kamini , ghar kai saare logo ko ekatha karo , mujhe sab sai baath karna hai
kamini-ji, naye zamindaar ji ....
suraj-maaf karna bhaiya ** i am sorry
main-main tera bhai nahi hu yaha, tera baap hu aur yea baath apne kaan mai ghusa le
suraj shock ho kar akash ko dekhta hai lakin wo kuch nahi bol pata
main-aur mere baath manna suru kar de ,aab tu ise ghar main rahega , aur bina izazat bahar kadam bhi nahi rakhega aur nahi us ladki disha sai milega samjha
suraj-samajh gaya
kamini-ji naye zamindaar ji sab hall mai aagaye hai .
main-suraj chal aandar
akash ghar kai hall ki taraf badhta hai jaha ghar ki saare log aikatha ho chuke thee lakin missing the to savnaam the aur waha humara hilauchan ravi bhi mouzud tha
main-savnam kaha hai
rajesh-wo saher gaye hai naye zamindaar ji
main-hmmm tthik hai .. main delhi jane wala hu 1 shaal ki liye
sav shock ho jate hai yea baath sun kar aur sunidhi bhi
kamini-lakin aapko 1 shaal ki liyea jane ki kya jarrat aapadi zamindaar ji
main- election kai liyea, aur suraj ko ise musibat sai bachane kai liyea humko delhi jana he padega
akash aapne baath sab ko batane lagg jata hai aur sab uske baath sunte hai akash ki poore baato ko aur baato ki gaharai bhi samjhne lagte hai
raghunath-lakin aap ki gair hajri main ise ghar ka kya hoga zamindaar ji, ise ghar ko kon sambhalega , bina zmindaar ji ise ghar ka kaam zaaj kon dekhega
rajesh- aabhi to aamma (daadi) ji he sambhalegi , aur unke aalaba kon sambhalega raghunath
main daadi ki aur dekhta hu jin par mujhe aabhi bhi poora bharosha nahi tha , aur unki haath sai kaman dene sai wo bhale he kuch na kare lakin sunidhi ka jeena jarur haram kar degi
main-nahi , daadi aab sai kuch nahi sambhalgi, aab main unko ise daietwya sai poore tarha sai aalag karta hu, aab wo ise ghar ki daasi ka kartabya nibhayenge
daadi shock hokar akash ki aur dekhne lagti hai
rajesh-yea kya bol rahe hai aap zamindaar ji , amma ki jagha main kisi aur ko de he nahi sakta, hai na raghunath
raghunath-ji jamindaar ji sahi kahe rahe hai ,aab daadi ko ise padh mai nahi rahena chaheyea
rajesh-aamma aap he kuch boleyea
main janta tha ki rajesh ise faisle sai khus nahi hoga kyu ki aab ise ghar main rajesh he tha jo daadi ki saath khada tha lakin iska tod tha mere paas jo ki the khud daadi
rajesh ki baath sun kar daadi kuch kahene he wali the ki
main-aab daadii ki jagha mere papa lenge dhirendra , wo he ise ghar ko sambhalenge mere aanetak
daadi apne beta ka naam sun kar chup ho jati hai
daadi-mujhe zamindaar ji ka faisla manjoor hai
akash janta tha ki daadi bhale he kisi ki bhi khilab ho jaye apne bete dhirendra ki khilab kuch bhi nahi bolenge aur nahi khadi honge.
main-aab aap log apne kaam mai lagh jayea
tabhi main rajesh ki aur jata hu
main-rajesh, tum kuch jayda nahi bol rahe ho
rajesh-ji zamindaar ji wo main amma ki liyea
main-hmmm thik hai wo bhi lakin tum kuch jayda he stress lagg rahe ho aajkal
rajesh-ji main, nahi to aayse baath nahi hai
main-us din mere kuch bolne sai pahele ek aurat ki pallu keechne lagg gaye, waha tumko dekh kar laga nahi ki tum thik ho
rajesh-bo,wo mujsai galti ho gaye naye zamindaar ji
main-mujhe lagta hai yea sab ise liyea ho raha hai kyu ki sulochana thik sai de nahi rahe hai tumko
rajesh-kya!!! kya? yea kya bol rahe hai, ji wo aayse koi baath nahi hai
main-aachaa ?. kamla idhar to aana
main kamla ko aapne paas bulata hu jo mere baath sun kar maire paas aajati hai
kamla-ji, ji malik
main- aagar stress nikalne ho to yea kayse rahegi , rajesh
rajesh- ji , wo aayse kon baath nahi hai
main-to main khama kha tumhare liyea pareshan ho raha tha , koi baath nahi kamla
rajeshi-ji wo, wo
main-haha, koi baath nahi rajesh , karna nahi chahete ho to tumhare marji , aagar chahete ho to.. kamla aaj raath tumhare liyea taiyar hai , hai na kamla
kamla-ji , ji malik
main-dekhoo , kal mouka mile ya na mile
rajesh kamla ki aur dekhne lagta hai sayad uske mote mote boob par uske nazar aate hai tab, main waha sai nikal kar suraj aur sunidhi sai thodi baath chit karne lagg jata hu tab mujhe ek abaz aate hai
ravi-aahhhhh papa math maro aaa
raghunath-ise din dekhne baki tha ki tu itne kaam number laye , itne bura number
ravi-main aage sai poore mahenat karunga beta
ravi ko ek chata padta hai aur chate ki gunz poora kamre mai sunai deta hai
raghunath- aab tere lia kaha sai seat layu bata ravi . aab tera kya karu main
tab raghunath ko kamini bhi nahi rok rahe thee,
kamini-ise liyea yea mark chupaye huye thaa aab takk
ravi-mummy maaf kar do, papa main padhai karunga
akash kamini ki kamre main jayse he pahuchta hai tab raghunath haath mai chappal pakde ravi ko dauda dauda kar kut raha tha jisko dekh kar mujhe hasi aagaye ,aur main thoda dekhne laga
ravi- bhaiya mujhe bacha lijiyea bhaiya
mujko dekhte he raghunath apne chappal niche rakh dete hai
main-kya huya ?
raghunath-bo iska mark kafe kaam aaya hai zamindaar ji aur isko seat bhi nahi mili hai aab iska
main-haan mai janta hu , aab main isko samjhata hu , aur rraghunath , aab sai suraj ki jimmedari tumhari usse khet le jana aur hisab kitab samjha dena
raghunath-ji samajh gaya lakin iska
main-isko(ravi) bahar hostel mai rakhenge aur kya . aaja mere saath bahar ravi
main ravi kai saath thoda bahar tahelta hu , main iska feature bhi barbad nahi hone dena chahata tha , main nahi chahata tha ki kisi bhi wajay se yea bhi suraj ki tarha galat kar baithe
main-ravi... tu mujhe aur tere maa ko us hahal mai dekh kar bhi mujsai ise baare mai baath nahi kia , aaysa kyu ?
ravi-wo wo
main-kya tujhe kamini sai koi lagab nahi
ravi- wo aayse koi baath.. nahi hai bhaiya
main-to saaf saaf bol ,main kuch bhi kisi sai nahi batayunga aaj mujhe apna dost maan kar baath baath karrr
ravi- wo .. woo mujhe maa ko nangi dekhna tha
main-kya?!!! haaha kya kamini ko nangi dekhne kai liyea tujhe mere aur kamini ki riste mai tujhe koi problem nahi
yea ravi to sach mai hilauchan nikla
ravi-wo.. nahi bhaiya
main-to kya karega aab kamini ko phir sai dekhne ki koshish karega aur yuhe hila hila kar aapna bhabshwa barbad karne ka socha hai
ravi-ji nahi bhaiya main. main poore koshish karunga aur padai karunga
main-koshish karte karte to tu itna dugla ho gaya hai aab kya... marna hai tujhe
ravi kuch nahi bolta aur chup chap khada ho jata hai ,mujhe usko dekh kar daya aati hai
main-karna chahata hai kamini ko
ravi shock hokar maire taraf dekhta hai
ravi-wo wo, main . yea kya bol rahe ho bhaiya
main-sach bata
ravi-bo main... main socha nahi main bas dekhna chahata tha aur iske aage maine kabhi socha nahi
main-to tu ek kaam kar ,tu yaha sai dur ja aur hostel mai rah aur mujhe ise ek shaal ki baath tu aapna result dekha
ravi-ji
main-aur aagar tera result sahi raha to main tujhe kamini kai saath wo karne ka mouka dunga jo tu soch raha hai
ravi-main , main bas dekhna
main-teri marji , tu dekhna chahata hai ya kuch aur bhi karna chahata hai teri marji lakin pahele result dekha bol karega
ravi- haan haan main aapna result main jarur sudhar layunga ( ravi thoda khus ho jata hai )
main-itna khus math ho ... aagar rusult thik nahi aaya to tu ise ghar sai bahar jayega uske baadh hilate rahena sari zindage
ravi ki hasi gayab ho jati hai yea sun kar
main-aab ja aur padhna suru kar
ravi seedha apne kamre main chala jata hai , aur main aapne kamre mai jata hu jaha sunidhi maire kapdo ki packing kar rahe thee
sunidhi-ji kya aap sach mai jane wali ho
main-haan aur bas kuch he ghanto mai nikalne wala hu , aur jate jate maa sai bhi to milna hai
sunidhi-lakin aapki baigir main
main-lakin tere bete ki liyea itna to karna he padega na , aakhir main aapne patni ki beta ko salakhoo ki peeche kayse dekh sakta hu aur tere aankh mai aansu bhi to nahi dekh sakta
sunidhi kuch na bol kar packing karrrne lagti hai main uski aurr dekhta hu, aur darbaza bandh kar ki apne shirt ki button khol kar apne sirt uutar deta hu aur sunidhi kai peeche khada ho jata hu aurr uske kandhe main haath rakh karr uske peeth par kiss dene lagg jata hu aur gardan par bhi
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sunidhi- ji yea kya kar rahe hai aap ji
main sunidhi ki pet main apne haath rakh deta hu
main-Tere kogh mai bachee dene ki koshish ........ main aaj tere kogh mai bachaa dena chahata hu sunidhi
sunidhi-lakin wo didi
main-terre baadh main unke paas he jayunga , aakhir 3 mahene sai jayda ka waqt ho chuka hai . aur main yea ek saal tum dono ki yaad mai bitana nahi chahata
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Note-family intro 1 page par di diya hai taki pareshani na ho
Bro Update?
Well disappointed with using a woman just for favor/gain. Could have used other means to get the same result but well it's your story, keep writing whatever you see fit.
Will read other chapters later and reply my opinion.
Akash bhai shaandaar update hai
Waise kiya story mai sunidhi aur kabita ki ek hi time par ek hi bister par ek sath akash acha se chudai karaga bhi ya nahi
Waise dadi ko maaki dasi kyu nahi bana deta aur nani ko sunidhi ki seva mai laga do