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Zas23

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Update 11

(Chotu update hai sorry next mega dunga}


Arya nikal gya ...tha...apne pehle bina wajh murder ki traf ...ya wo murder...jis se uske planned criminal ban ne ki suruwat thi...arya sidha vidhayk ke ghar ke liye nikal gya...wha jakar pehle usne security arrangement pta karne ki sochi...to usne pehle bhar se hi pta kiya to pta chla main gate par char guards hai..bunglow ke chat par do guards...first floor ki balcony mai do guards...andar ka scene guess nhi kar pa rha tha..


Maine pehle socha kyu na boundary kud kar andar jau par bounday ki height to kam thi par uske upar katile taaro ki lining thi jo agar hapka sa touch hota to meri gand fatni pakki thi plus..security guards ki bhi najar mai aa jana tha...to filhal mere samajh mai na aa rha tha ki entry kaise maaru jyada herogiri mehngi pad sakti thi...tabhi mere man mai ek kurafti idea aaya...maine fatafat apna rukh apne clg ki aur kiya...wha jar kar auditorium mai drama section ke costume room mai jakar apni inspector wali costume nikali...jo welcome party ke bad drame mai pehni thi….av mere pass jane ka ek jariya mil chuka tha...but av ek problem thi wo tha id card aur jeep...iska mujhe samajh na aa rha tha ki arrangement kaise kru...bhut sochne ke bad bhi mujhe samajh nhi aa rha tha...harkar maine usi trah jane ka decide kiya...mai wapas bangle par pahucha to sham ho chuki thi..maine pass ke ek dukan se cigrette kharidi..aur us se lighter manga…

Aur whi khade ho kar apne cigrette ke mje lene lga…


Dukan wala- salam sahab


Maii- ha salam


Dukan wala- sahab aap yha naye lagte hai ..


Mai- ha kal hi mera transfer yha hua hai..


Dukan wala- acha to aap vidhayk ji se milne aye hai..


Mai- ha av bde logo ke ghar to jana hi padta hai...av noukri hi aisi hai..


Dukan wala .- ha sahab bat to sahi hai...waise jra sawdhan rahiyega...ye vidhayak accha aadmi nhi hai …


Mai- pta hai..par kya kre is se milna jaruri hai par samajh na aa rha kaise milu ..


Dukan wala - sahab 8 bje yha lage guards ki duty change hoti hai...wo tym aap ja sakte hai...wrna baki tym guards jaldi jane nhi dete chahe wo koi bhi ho..


Mai- acha chlo fir mai chlta hu8 bjne wale hai…


Dukan wala- ji sahab


Dukan wale se bat karte hue mai apna plan set kar chuka tha..


Thik 8 bje duty change hui to mai bhi unme se ek ka gateup lekar andar chla gya..fir mai chupte chupate andar ka najra lene laga…


Vidhayk ki bibi mayke ya fir khi bhar gyi thi aur vidhayak apne kamre mai tha...aur hall mai char guards the…


Maine vidhayak se pehle unke guards ka ram nam karne ka socha mai bde hi swadhani se chat par gya aur apne gun mai silencer lga kar dono guards ko dher kar diya...wha par ek sniper padi thi.maine use bde hi swadhani se terrace par lagi grills ke bich mai set kiya aur agle kuch hi palo mai main gate ke charo guards dher ho gye the...par yha mujhse bhul ho gyi un charo guards ke marte hi first floor ke guards alert ho gye aur unhone alarm bja diya…


Av mujhe bhut jyada swadhani se rehna tha..wrna ek bhi bhool hui aur mera safar suru hone se pehle hi khatm ho jata..


Maine apne dono hatho mai guns o change kar liya aur full loaded wali rakh li …


Aur sidhiyo se niche dekhne lga tabhi mujhe ek guards upar ke traf aata dikhayi diya...agar mai use apni goli ka shikar bnata to sambhavta pure guards ko apni traf ane ka invitation card dena tha ….


Maine apni ek gu ko kamar par belt mai fsyaa aur wk chaku nikal liya..aur ghat lga kar baith gya…



Aaj ke liye itna hi…



Aapka apna


Mayaviguru
Nice update
 

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Maine ek guard ko uoar ki aur aate hye dekha to apni ek gun kamar par bndhe belt mai fasa li aur ek hath mai chaky lekar ghat lga kar baith gya. Kyoki us par direct fire krna mtlb tha ki sare guards ko apna location share karne jaisa tha jaise oo bhailog mai yha hu aao mujhpar fire kro isliye mujhe badi sawdhani baratni thi...
Kuch hi dero mai mera intezar khatm hua aur mout ka khel suru...
Mai drwaze ke puche chupa tha wo jaise hi aage aaya maine uske muh par hath rakha aur bde hi pyar se makkhan jaise uska gala chir dala ...par abhi bhi 5 guards baki the jinme se kisi ek bhi goli pandit ko yamraj ke ghar ka flight ticket dekar jati...
Maine niche dekha to guards sare traf dhud rahe the...maine fatafat se sidhi mai ek fire kiya aur chat ka gate jam kar ke body ko raste mai dal kar ke bhaga aur agli side je window roof se kodte hue first floor par aa gya...udhar sare guards sidhiyo ki traf badh rhe the..par av mera man khatra uthane ka man nhi tha...
Maine sidha apna rukh vidhayak ki aur krne ka socha .. aur dbe pao badh gya...maine key hole se dekha to madharjat gun set kar rha tha...apni maine mouka dekhte hue jhatke se darwaza khola sidha vudhayak ke pair par fire kar diya...agle kuch hi palo mai hmare vidhayak ji jamin par fadfa rahe the maine aage badh kar unko uthaya aur unki kannpatti par apni banduk rakhi...goli ki awaz sun kar panncho guards apni gand marane aagye.. Maine chilla kar jo randi ki aulad apne ap ko rajnikant ki aulad samajhta hai wo apne sare ched khol kar sun le..meri goli use rajpal yadav bna degi baki tumhari marji...
Sare guards ne turant hi apni machine guns niche kar diye...aur idhar vidhayak pe pa kar rha tha...mera dimag ghum rha tha...maine ek jhatke mai sabke ooh lala kar dala i mean dharti se nark ka visa lga dala.....av bangle mai do jinda log the warna baki laashe hi thi...
Vidhayak- kon ho tum
Arya- yamdoot hu tera itna jan le
Vidhayak- jo chaiye le lo pls mujhe mat maro
Pandit- kyu kya de sakta hai tu
Vidhayak- tum jitna chaho utna paisa
Arya- paisa !!!hmm yeh bhi to chahiye hi chahiyee
Arya - kitna de sakta hai abhi
Vidhayak- abhi ghar mai 2 cr hai ek suitcase mai agar aur jyada chahiye to thoda time lagega
Arya - kha rakha hai suitcase
Vudhayak- samne drawer mai
Arya - password
Vidhayak- 421124
Arya vidhayak ko ghasita hua drawer ke pass le jata hai aur pause ke milte hi..vidhayak ke sir ke bichobich goli mar deta hai..
Arya-saboot nhi mitaunga is khun ka

Akhir kannon bhi khauf ka nazara dekhega
Av to sara shar ek tamasa dekhega

Mai diwal ke pass gya aur board ke pass bde accharo mai pandit likh bi diya..

Maine suitcase uthaya aur apni room ki traf badh gya...
Aj maine apni life ka pehla bewajah murder kiya tha..but vidhayak ka murder krne ke bad mere andar ek alag hi utsah paida ho rha tha...av maine puri trah se peshewar crime krne mai pehla aur damdar step rakh liya tha..aur pehle step se mujhe apne badle ke liye apni list se paiso ka jugad ki tension kum ho gyi thi par sirf 5cr mai itna bda mission nhi ho sakta ye bhi mujhe pta tha and yu khule paise rakhna bhi khatre se khali nhi tha...paiso ke bare mai maine pehle amtul ko btane ka socha but fir uski salah hi yad aa gyi ki is duniya mai koi kisi ka nhi hota...

(Agla update 1 week bad aayega kyoki abhi mai family issues mai fsa hu...next update 8 may ko aaega aur uske bad se alternate days par regular aayenge deri ke liye savse maphi chahunga...aap logo ka itna sath mil rha hai ki dil kgus ho hata hai.. Mai koi bda lekhak nhi hu mai avi start kiya hai...par suruwat mai hi aaplogo ka itna pyar mil rha hai ki lag hi nhi rha mai nya lekhak hu.
Aap log aise hi sath bne rahiye ...)


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Mayaviguru
Nice update
 

Zas23

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Update 13

Khun ka khel suru ho chuka tha...paiso ko lekar mai sidha apna room mai aaya...aj dil bda khus tha..pass mai paise the aur ab mai maidan e jung mai pehli dafalta hasil thi...maine phn uhaya aur pathan bhai ko phn milaya
Mai- hello
Pathan- ha kam hua kya
Mai- ha bhai kam khatm sath mai sare guards ko bhi swargwas kra diya
Pathan- wah mere lal dil khus kar diya tune bol kya chahiye...
Mai- bhai avi to kuch nhi jav jarrorat hogi to mang loonga
Pathan- chal koi bat nhi kal aade par aa program rakhta hu...
Mai- ji bhai....

Phn cut kar ke maine sabse pehle mutton ka order kiya akhir khud ka pehla success celebrate bhi Krna bnta tha...av bari thi plan banane ki...tabhi mere man mai cctv ka khayal aaya ...jo vidhayak ke ghar mai lge honge aur wo chaiwala yha se meri pehchan pta chal sakti thi...par fir mujhe apne gateup ka khayal aaya jiski wajah se mujhe wo pehchan nhi payenge...
Ab bari to aage ka plan bnanae ki thi...aur aj ki muthbhed ke bad mere samajh mai aa gya tha jyada uchlna thik nhi h...pehle khud ko train krna hoga... Physical conbat mai mujhe dikkat nhi thi but weapons ko lekar hacking ko lekar mai ekdam ullu tha... Sabse pehle mujbe paiso ka sahi istemall krna tha bina kisi ki najar mai aaye...agar bank mai jma krta to police income tax sarkari agencies ka pahad tut jana tha aur itna hard cash khud ke pass rakhna bhi safe nhi tha...in sab ke kal ek Aur musibat tha wo tha clg...jha sonali se bhidna pad sakta tha...maine aisa hi baate sochte sochte so gya ..ek agli subah ke intezar mai jha ek nyi zindagi suruwat hone wali thi...

Raw headquarters

Raw chief: sahdow tum yha
Shadow :sir ek vidhayak mra hai
Raw chief- to us se hmara kya lena dena ...police hai is kam ke liye aur jyada matter hua to stf dekh legi
Shadow- murderer ne vidhayak ki body ke paas khun se pandit likha h
Chief- what the fuck...sala ye hai kya chij...ek pal ko japan dusre pal purani delhi aur do din bad vidhayak ka murder...
Harry- sir kya pata koi pandit ka nam istemaal kr rha ho...
Shadow- nhi wo pandit hi tha kyoki koi bhi zinda nhi bcha hai aur vidahyak ko chod kar sabhi guards single goli ka shikar h...
Chief- sala lagta hai...av noukri chod du jindagi jhand ho gyi hai sala waise hi itni musibat chl rhi hai av yhi bcha tha ki kal ka ek lounda aata hai aur bina thuk lgaye hmari gand mar kr chla jata h
.. Chief- kisi ko bhejo is case ke liye bhi ..
Shadow - yes sir

Next morning

Aj news mai vidahyak ke murder ki charcha thi...aur mai idhar mast so rha tha...
Harry ko case ke liye appoint kiya gya tha..police department mai aj afra tafri thi...
Idhar sonali bhi ek alag hi khayalo mai khoyi hui thi ki aaj kya hoga...
Rani aur avantika mje se ready ho rahi thi. .

Amtul aj jaldi uth gya tha..aur pareshan tha ki kal ke bad se maine koi call nhi kiya tha is wajah se

Amtul mujhe call krta hai

Amtul- hello

Mai- ha...

Amtul- kha ho

Mai - jannat mai so rha hu

Amtul- majak nhi

Mai- maine kon sa majak kiya hai so rha hu

Amtul- kal kya hua ??

Mai- whi jo hona tha...news dekhi nhi kya aapne

Amtul- pandit likhne ki kya jarurat thi...ghamand thik nhi hai jab tak khud ki gang na ho jaye

Arya- acha thik hai aage se dhyan rakhunga

Amtul- ha clg kab tak aa rhe ho

Arya- mai 1 bje wale lecture mai aaunga abi sona hai....

Amtul-ok

Phn cut hote hi maine fatafat se uth khada hua aur ready hone lag gya...

Mai ready ho kar sidha bank gya wha ja kar ek locker khulwaya...aur filhal bags submit kar diya...aur 10 lakh rupaye sath rakh liye...

Wha se sidha mai nikla chroma ke liye....wha se maine ek latest lappy aur ek phn liya aur nikal gya bike showroom ki traf ...aj paise the sath mai socha khud je kuch sokh pure kar lu...pehle socha superbike lu...but fir socha ki dikhwa kya krna fir socha kuch to hatke hona chahiye but kuch samajh na aa rha tha...fir ja kar ek bullet nikalwayi...av mere pass 5.5 lacs the...mai nikal gya...sidha pathan bhai ke adde par...

Wha pahuch kar mai pathan bhai ko kal ki details di...aur unhe 8 lakh milne ka btaya...aur 5.5 de diye aur bataya ki baki ka maine bullet aur phn liya hai...aur unke kuch bolne se pehle hi maine bola maaf kar dijiyega aapse bina kuch btaye hi kahrid liya

Pathan- koi bat bhi mere sher mai teri wafadari se khus hu...ye 5 lakh rahim ko de aur 50 hazar tu rakh le...tune sach batya uska inam...aur ha aage se dhyan rakhna...
Mai - ji bhai
Pathan- aj rat ko dawat hai aana zarror aur ha nach gane ka bhi intezam hai to bhulna mat
Mai- ji bhai...

Mai fir wha se sidha clg ke liye nikal gya..
Raste mai maine goggles kharide aur shan se clg mai entry mari...
Mujhe bullet par dekh guard shock ho gya... Fir mai andar ja kar sidha apna class mai bag rakha aur bahr ki traf nikal gya...
Jha ek naya musibat mera intezarvkar rhi thi...

(Suprise element spoiler- wo musibat sonali ya amtul se related nhi hai guess krte jao mai chla baki logo ki updates padhne)



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Aapka apna


Mayavigyru
Nice update
 

Zas23

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Update 14
Mai bag rakh kar class se bhar cantene ki traf nikal gya...tabhi meri aankhe kisi se ja takrai...ye wo sakhs tha jis se maine kbhi mohabbat ki thi ya yu khe ki bepanah mohabbat ki thi.par aj mere liye ye wo sakhs tha jisne mujhe meri zindagi mai meri aukat dikhayi thi…

Hmari nazr milte hi wo sakhs meri traf aane lga...aur mai ek patthar ki murat ki bhati khda tha…


Kuch hi palo mai wo sakhs mere aankho ke aage khda tha..us ko dekh kar dil se sirf ej awaz aa rhi thi katl kr de iska….dikha de apni auqat.. But mai fir bhi chup rha…

.anjan sakhs: oo hello

Mai- chup

Anjan sakhs- pehchana nhi kiya.

Mai- chup rha

Anjan sakhs- are mai hu yad kro tumhare hi gali je last wale ghr mai rehti thi


(Yha meri himmat jawab de rahi thi..man kar rha tha ki chilla du ya fir ro du par khud par control rakhna av mushkil ho rha tha)


Mai- to kya kru

Anjan sakhs- kya bola tumne

Mai - to kya kru ..

Anjan sakhs - tum arya hi ho na

Mai- nhi ek tarike se nhi sarrrr to uski hai ruh av kisi shaitan ki hai. Av dfa ho jao

Anjan sakhs- mujhe tumse ye ummud nhi thi

Mai- ummid apno ki rakhi jati hai gairo ki nhi

Yad wfa ki aati hai bewfa ki nhi

Jhakm av tak bhula nhi hu tera

Par av teri yad mai aashu bhate nhi.


Anjan sakhs chup rha aur meri aankho mai dekhne lga


Mai- kya dekhti ho in aankho mai yha sirf nafrat dikhega..av waqt badl chuka hai jald hi tujhe mera auqat pta chlega.

Anjan sakhs- kya tum bhul nhi sakte us bat ko.

Mai- bhul to jata agar bat koi ek hoti

Par yha to jakhmo ka jamawda lga hai

Anjan sakhs- i am sorry

Arya- mre hue se maaphi kya mangte ho
Av to is dil ka janaza guzare bhi ek jamana ho gya
.anjan sakhs- please aisa mat bolo
Mai- to kya bolu
Mera rasta chodo mujhe kam h

Idhar in dono ko baate krte hue sonali ne dekh liya. Aur arya ko kisi aur se bat krta hua dekh wo bhadak uthi..aur man hi man sonali ne us ladki ko apna pakka dushman man liya...

Idhar mera mood kharab ho gya tha mai class ke andar wapas gya bag uthakar bhar ki traf nikal gya...

Raw headquarters

Chief - any updates harry
Harry - chief ad per our info pandit was costumed in a dress of police inspector... And has left nothing much for us..only a wall paint of his name and dead bodies

Chief- sala av foreign attacks se jyada ghar ke masle suljhana padega..kuch kro yar iska

Harry- sir we have only hope that is gufran sir

Chief- call him av kar bhi kya sakte hai..waise use to puri chut mili thi na

Harry - yes sir but aapne ego hurt kiya uska so he quit the case

Chief- sala gand fat gyi hai is kursi par..bula usko av use bhi babu sona krke mnau kya

Harry - yes sir ..mai nikalta hu

.......

Amtul kisi se phn par bat kr rha hota Hai
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Amtul- wo ek aag hai..wo mera badla pura krega..
Unknown........
Amtul- av waqt aa gya hau mai is duniya par raj krunga...
Unknown.....
Amtul- bat to thik hai tumhari ruko mai dekhta hu...
Aur phn cut ho jata hai



Aaj ke liye itna hi

Aapka apna

Mayaviguru

Nice update
 

Zas23

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Update 15

Mai clg se to nikal gya par aj mere dil mai ek tufan umad rha tha ye wo tufan tha jisne saalo pehle mere dil ko chur chur kar diya tha...mai apne hosh mai nhi tha….mujhe yad hai kaise usne mera majk udaya tha uske liye maaf bhi jr deta par meri mohabbat ka jo tamasha usne bnaya tha aur meri aukat mujhe dikhayi thi wo kaise bhul jau...mujhe samajh nhi aa rha tha ki kya kru kya na kru...aj mujhe pehli var daru pine ka man kiya...idhar clg mai do ladkiya..aapas mai jhagd rahi thi...ya yu kha jaye ..do billiya ek dusre ka bal noch rhi thi.


Readers samjh to chuke honge ye do billiya kon hai….chlo bta hi dete hai nhi to koi khega hmara battery down hai samjh na aa rha clear kikha kro…


Ye do billiya aur koi nhi wo anjan ladki aur sonali thi...jo ek dusre se bhid rhi thi..

Anjan ladki- kon hai be tu madhar chod kyu lad rhi hai merese


Sonali- ye to tu bta kalmuhi behen ki loudi shareef ladka dikhta nhi ki oiche pad jati hai


Anjan ladki- randi sali chinal wo mera ex hai


Sonali- hatt behen k loudi sali chinal wo sirf mera hai..


Aur aise hi ekdusre se ye pyar bhari galiyo ka adan pradan krte hue ye ek dusre lad rhe the...

Isi bich kisi farishte ne kisi prof ko bula kar mamala shant kraya


Aur unko alag alag kiya...idhar mai ek alag hi nashe mai dhut pda tha..aur peg par peg uda rha tha….

sala pi rha tha unka gum bhulane ko

taki na dikhe mera dard is jamane ko

par bewfai ye sharab bhi kar gyi

dila di mujhko yad unke har ek afshano ko

..

Akhir maine ek faisla kiya jo ki sayad mujhe av asli blood hunter bnanae wala tha...mai wha sidha se pathan bhai ke adde par pahucha to dekha wha jashn chl rha tha...mai sidha pathan bhai ke pass chla gya..


Pathan me mujhe apni traf aata dekh mujhe bulaya….

Mai - ji bhai

Pathan- aa mere sher…

Mai- ha bhai…

Pathan...aa tujhe mere bhaiyo se milwata hu

Mai- abhi nhi bhai…

Pathan- kyu jya hua

Mai- kuch nhi bhai abhi mai sirf apke sath reh kar sikhna chahta hu aur apne is pehle humle ke bad muhhe lagta hai pehle mujhe training leni chahiye...sirf hath mai gun rakhne se kam nhi chlega…


Pathan ek najar mujhe ghur kar dekhta hai…

Pathan- aa mere sath chal

Mai- ji bhai..

Mai aur pathan ek kamre mai chle jate hai

Pathan- aao baitho

Mai- ji bhai

Pathan- apna maksad bta

Mai - mai kuch samjha nhi bhai

Pathan- kya chahiye tujhko

Mai- ji bhai

Pathan- dar mat khul kar bol

Mai- ye puri duniya apni kadmo mai

Pathan- mtlb mera andaza sahi tha..

Mai- mtlb

Patahan- tujhe dekh kar hi lag gya tha teri manjil bhut bdi hai..

Mai- kaise bhai

Pathan- pehle din aate hi vidhayak ki supadi le li bina dre aur mout se panja ladane gya sirf handgun aur chaku lekar ..na vidhayak ki pahuch pta ki na security ka malumat pucha bas chl diya jung par aisa sirf do log krte hai ya to wo chutiya hota hai ya wo ghayal sher hai ..aur teri aankho mai us ghayl sher ka ubalta hua khun dikhayi deta hai

Mai- ji bhai…

Pathan- kyu chahiye tujhe yai duniya

Mai- tabah krni hai...is duniya ne mujhe barabad kiya ab mai isko karunga aur iske liye kuch bhi krunga

Pathan- passport hai tere pass

Mai- ji bhai…

Pathan- ja samjh le teri jungvki suruwat av tu krne ja rha hai...av de pathan tere sath hai..

Mai- shukriya bhai

Pathan - shukriya nhi gale mil .mere sher..allah tujhe teri manzil dilaega…

Kal subah tumhe callifornia nikalna hai tourist vija par

Mai - itni jaldi

Pathan- jung ka muhurat nhi hota bas jung ho jati hai

Ye wo jung hai ja thodi si bhi deri se jan chli jati hai


Mai - ji bhai mai teyyar hu..


Pathan wha tujhe johen nam ka bnda milega..wo tujhe train krega ..agle 1 saal tak...us bich mai tujhse koi contact nhi krunga..na tu koi contact krega….us ke bad jub tu us dharti par kadam rakhega mujhe teri aane ki khabar tujhse nhi newspaper se milni chahiye…

Mai-jarror

Pathan- ja teyyari kr kal sham ko teri flight hai...london ki fir london se los angeles airport par tu utrega….

Mai - ji bhai..



Mai fir pathan ke yha se nikal gya..


Ab mere pass surf kal sham tak ka waqt tha...av maine sabse pehle ja kar apna sara saman sameta...apni sari guns ko secured place par chupa diya aur apni bullet bhi bech daali ..akhir av yha to rehna tha nhi to krta kya...aur apna sara saman pack kiya.


Raw headquarters


Chief- aao gufran aao


Gufran- yes sir


Chief - kya kiya chuttiyo mai barkhurdar


Gufran- kuch khas nhi


Chief- poonam kuch jyada pasand aa gyi hai kya


Gufran- has deta hai


Chief - mudde par aate hai


Gufran- ha boliye


Chief- pandit


Gufran - sorry sir us case se mai apna hath kvka nikal chuka hu


Chief- par tum akele ho jo us se rubaroo hua hai


Gufran- sorry sir but hmare pass aur kabil agents hai aap unko use mai laiye.


chief-tum samajh kyu nhi rhe…


Gufran - sir sav samajh rha hu..

Aap apni nakami mere upar dal rhe hai


Chief- you are going out of your limits


Gufran -sach kadwa hota hai


Chief- get lost…


Gufran - sure sir


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Aj ek nayi subah ka agaz hua tha...sayad aj ki subah bhut kuch badlne wala tha….


Mai subah ready ho kar bank ke liye nikal liya...wha se maine sara cash nikal aur chl pda auction house ki traf jha 3 hotels ke auction chal rhe the usme se ek ki kimat 3.4 cr thi jo ki ekdum posche area mai tha...jise maine nilami ki wajah se 3.9 cr mai kharida...avi vi mere pas 1.2 cr bche the...par mujhe samjh na aa rha tha...inhe kha invest kru...kyoki mujhe legal way se chlna tha...hotel ko kharidne mai dikkat nhi hui kyoki...maine sara payment on cash kiya tha...mai wha se sidha nikla hotel ki traf. .jha ka sara staff pehle to mujhe pehchana nhi but bad mai jab lawyer ne aakar announce kiya ki mai iska new owner hu...to sabne mujhe greet kiya kaphi log meri pehchan janne ki koshis kr rhr the..mai wha se sidha apne cabin ki traf bdha aur manger ko sath lekar aaya. .


Manager- congrats sir

Mai- yeah thanks

I have some work for you…

Manager- sure sir..


Mai - i need you to turn this hotel past in a bright future. I want it to be in the top counts of delhi...do whatever required but i need result..

Mujhe is hotel ko savse aage dekhna


Manager- sure sir


Mai- you may leave now..and yes send the guards in my office now


Manager- why sir


Mai- you are fired ..aap dusri noukri dudh lijiye ..


Manager- sir but maine kiya kya hai…


Mai- jyada kuch nhi mujhse sawal puchne ki jurrat ki hai..jo mujhe pasand nhi..


Manager- sorry sir aage se aisa nhi hoga...mai abhi bhejta hu guards ko


Mai- isi mai aapki bhalai hai…


Manager wha se chla jata hai aur kuch der mai guards andar aa jate hai..


Mai- aao baitho


Guards- sir hum aise hi thik hai


Mai- maine kha na aao baitho


Guards- ji sir


Mai- hotel ki kya halat hai..


Guards- sir av hum kya bta sakte hai..


Mai- hakikat.wo jo sirf apko pta hoti hai.


Guards- sir hmari noukri kyu chin rhe hai


Mai- mere hote hue kiski himmat apki noukri par hath dale…

Ap bekhouf ho kar bole..


Guards- ji sahab jara receptionist log sahi se bat nhi krte aur jara staff ki vhi kmi hai…


Mai - acha koi bdi bat


Guards - nhi sir


Mai- ye lijiye mera no hai wo bhi personal..aj se aap yha mere aabkh aur kaan hai .koi bhi bat ho mujhse sudha contact kriyega...thik hai na..


Guards- ji sir


Mai - aur ha aj se apki salart ko 30%increase kiya jata hai…


Guards- ji sir bhout bhout dhanyawad


Mai - dhanywad ki koi bat nhi vus sikayat ka mouka mat dijiyega..


Guards- jarror sahab aap nischint rhe.


Mai- thik hai av aap ja sakte hai…


Fir mai wha se banquet hall mai aa jata hu aur hotel ka ek chakkar lga ta hu...fir mai sham mai reception par pahucha jha maine guards ki bat ko shi paya. Aur mai on the spot dono receptionist ko terminate kar diya..

Aur manager ko sab kuch sahi se mange krne ka bol kar hotel ke luxury room jo owner ke liye reserve tha usme gya aur safe mai apne bche hue paise rakhe aur safe mai ek nya code lock set kiya.

In sav kamo ko niptate hue sham ho chuki thi…

Idhar clg mai do log kbhi aapas mai ghurte kbhi gate ki traf par unhe kya pta tha aj ka intejaar av unge bhut lamba padne wala tha.


Idhar amtul soch rha tha ki arya kha gayab hai ki kuch pta nhi xhl rha khi aisa to nhi pehle murder ke bad dar se underground ho gya..par wo ausa nhi krega itne kand krne ke bad nhi dra..to ek vidhayak ke mout se kya darega..kuch to bat hai pta krna padega..phn uska non trackable ja rha hai...lagta hai av mujhe pathan bhai se milna padega



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Update 16

…..hotel ke sarre kam niptane ke bad mai pathan bhai ke adde par mila ...wha unhone mujhe flight ki ticket..di aur ek codeword btaya..mai wha se fir airport ki traf chla gya…..


Sinha Mansion

Sikander- ye kya bakwas hai..Hotel kisi aur ne kharild liya

PA- yes sir

Sikander- kisne kharida

Pa - sir pta nhi koi Arya nam ka aadmi hai..

Sikander- pura nam btao

Pa- sir nhi pta…

Sikander- arya ya fir is se related jo bhi info mile mujhe do…

Pa- sure sir…


Raw headquarters


Shadow- sir i have a plan…

Chief- kya plan hai

Shadow- sir jaisa ki hume gufran ne btaya ki pandit bomb dhamako ke mastermind ke piche pda hai

Chief- ha to ye bat hume pta hai par uska mastermid hai kon kya tumhe pta hai…

Shadow- nhi sir but hum isi bat ka fayda utha sakte hai…

Chief - aur wo kaise

Shadow- sir...agar hum kisi ko mastermind bna kar public ke aage pesh kr de to

Chief- tumhara dimag kharab hai

Shadow- nhi sir ye ek tir se do shikar wali bat hai ..

Chief- jara detail mai btao

Shadow- sir pehla shikar pandit ...wo mastermind ke piche aayega aur hmare hathe chadega...aur dusra shikar asli mastermind.. Uska karnama kisi aur ke nam hua to apne bill se bahar zarror aayega…

Chief- hmm plan mai dum to hai...work on it…



Idhar mai flight pakad chuka tha...11ghantevki flight ke bad london pahucha aur wha se dusri flight se los angeles utra…


Mai wha se exit point ki traf badh gya…..exit point se bahar aate hi ek car mere aage ruki usme 60 saal ka buddha nikla...aur mere pass akar pucha- what is your destiny

Mai- killing machine..


Then wp buddha mujhe follow me bolta hai aur ja kar car mai bauth jata hai and mai bhi uske piche ja kar car ki seat par baith gya..

Phir 4 ghante ki driving ke bad car ek tute hue ghar ke bhar ruki…

Buddha- get down of car

Mai buddhe ki bat man kar niche utar gya. Aur wo car turant hi aage badh gyi…

Yha dur durvtak kuch nhi tha..na koi dusra ghar na koi market na koi log…

Maine ek bar charo traf dekha phir us tute hue ghar ke andar ki traf badh gya..andar ek aur buddha baitha hua tha. .

Mai(man mai sala California aaya hu vridha ashram)

Mai- hii sir

Buddha- indian hai na hindi bol

Mai- payu lagu kaka

Buddha- maine hindi bolne ko kha ha rishta bnane ko

Mai- maaphi chahunga

Budda - niche tehkhane mai jao

Mai uski bat mankar sidha niche ki traf badh gya

Niche ja kar meri aankh aur gand dono fati..aankh isliye fati kibjha upar samshan lag rha tha andar ka najara usse bilkul alag tha yeh ek pura hightech hall tha jha kayi sare kamre bhi the aur bhut se log bhi the..


Mai aage badha tabhi mere aage ek black suit mai bnda aaya

Bnda- hello

Mai- hii

Bnda- my name is johen

Mai- i am pandit..

Bnda- real name??

Mai- arya

Bnda- hmm kya sikhna hai tumko aur kya kya aata hai tumko

Mai- mujhe sav kuch sikhna hai..i know some physical combats

Johen- you have obe chance to prove yourself to stay here

Mai- ok sir

Johen- you have to fight 2 battles and in each battle winner will be declared by the death after the death of your opponent

Mai- what

Johen - kill them to survive here

Mai( mtlb do round ladu aur agle ko mout ke ghat utaru to ye train karega)

Kuch der sochne ke bad

Mai- yes i am ready

Johen first round is of physical combat and second round of weapon combat…

Mai aa to gya tha khud ko train krne par av fat rahi thi...par kuch bda krna hai to mushkilo ka samna karna hi padta hai..aadhe ghante bad mujhe ek room mai bnd kar diya jata hai...pura room white painted tha andar se na gate pta chal rha tha na kuch aisa lag rha tha mano kisi while buob ke andar aa gya hu..tabhi ek diwal upar ki traf uthne lagi...aur dilwal ke us oar bhi same hal tha aur wha meri age ka hi ek ladka khda tha jisne kungfu wale white kapde pehne hue the…

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Rani- ave yar yha aj itni manhusiyat kyu hai

Avantika- mera assignments likhne se ungli tut rahi hai.aur kisi ko apne unke ek najar ka deedar na hone ka gum hai..

Rani-oooo

Sonali-kya tum dono chup ho sakte hi

Rani- bhai hum to chup ho hi jaenge hume kya

Avantika- waise wo ladki kon thi jis se kal tune jhagda kiya ..aur hua kya tha.

Sonali- nam mat le us randi ka sali behen ki loudi bolti ki arya uska ex hai..aur mere aaroo se chipatne ki koshis kar rhi thi...mai aise kaise chod deti us chinal ko..

Rani- kya pta sahi keh rahi ho...yad kar us din arya ne ek shayri boli thi dard wali..kya pta uske liye hi boli ho

Avantika- hmm bat to rani ki sahi hai..

Sonali- yrr tum log av aur mera shar mat khao...mai dwa khakr sone ja rahi hu

Rani- gn babes is kadkti dhup mai

Avantika -hehehe

Sonali- chup ho jao wrna tum log ki gand mar dungi…

Huh


Aur sonali wha se uthkar dusre kamre mai chli jati hai...



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Idhar amtul pahuchta hai pathan ke adde par...aur ja kar pathan vhai se milne ki koshis krna padta hai...kaphi der bad wo pathan se mil pata hai aur apna parchay deta hai

Pathan- btao kya kar sakta hu

Amtul- bhai arya se milna tha jara

Pathan- av ye mumkin nhi…

Amtul-mtlb

Pathan- arya mar chuka hai…

Amtul- kaise kab kha

Pathan-,vidhayak ka murder krte hue wo record ho gya tha..vidhayak ke bhai ke hatho mara gya..

Amtul- but ye kaise mumkin hai

Pathan- ek choti si bullet agle ka id nhi dekhti..

Amtul- hmmm

Aur amtul wha se kuch sochte hue nikal jata hai…

Pathan ki bat par vishwas krna itna aasan nhi tha uske liye...par pathan ki bat par sawal uthane ki himmat bhi nhi ho rahi thi...aj use wapis lga ki uska sajaya hua khwab fir tut gya hai…


Hotel…….

Manager-yr gand fad gya nya malik to ..do hi to mal thi sala ne unko bhi nikal diya...aur sala dikhta to ye baccha hai par jaisa iska attitude hai gand mar lega...agar hotel top list mai nhi aaya to...lagta hai av kam karne ka waqt aa gya..hai…

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Anjan sakhs-samjhta kya hai khud ko aj clg nhi aaya kal btati hi usko..pyar se mna rhi thi na to nhi man rha tha par av kal dikhati hu usko...waise bhi mujhe uski sirf jarrorat hai jav tak mere classes coverup na ho jay fir btaungi bda attitude dikha rha tha aur wo ladki usko to chodungi nhi sali mujhse ladti hai….

Dono ko dekh lungi…


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Bhai log mega to nhi de paya but 1200 words ka diya hai…

Next update :day after tomorrow



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Update 17

California



Diwal ke upar hote hi samne wala sakhs kaphi teji se meri traf bdha ..aur is pehle mai kuch samjh pata wo kuda aur uska ghutna mere chehre se aa lga aur mere hotho se lahu ki dhara beh nikli...is se pehle ki mai apne bchaw ke bare mai sochta wo mere upar chad gya aur danadan mukke barsane lga...av mujhe gussa aa rha tha par wo mere upar is trah baitha tha ki mere dono hath uske pao se dbe hue the aur wo danadan mukke barsaye ja rha tha….akhir mai maine apne pairo ka sahar liya...aur apna pair puri takat se utha kar jhatka…wo mere upar se ladkhata hua dur ja gira...maine teji se utha aur uski traf marne bdh hi rha tha tabhi announcement hui ...stop….

This is your first lesson...attacks never come with invitation they are always unexpected ...fight every battle not for success but for survival…


( ye tumhara pehla sabak h..humle kabhi nimtran dekar nhi aate..wo achanak hote hai isliye har pal teyyar rho..apni har ladayi ko jitne ke liye nhi jinda rehne ke liye lado)


Phir turant hi resume announce hua..


Mai isbar puri trah satark tha...ek bar fir se hum amne samne khade the...wo wapis teji se meri aur muda usne ek kick mari ...par maine turant hi furti se uska pair pakad kar chatak diya...wo niche gir kar dard se karhane lga...maine use uske hall mai chodkar diwal ki traf bdha..tabhi usne piche se mujhpar war kar diya…

Mere girte hi phir se announcement hua

Lesson 2 never show kindness to your opponent..

(Sabak 2 kbhi apne birodhi par daya mat dilhaw)


Resume…


Av mera matha garam ho chuka tha...avki bar maine apne ap ko defwnd krnw ki jagah attacka kiya ..maine pwhwl slide kar ke kick mari fir turant uski gardan ko apne hatho se bde pyar se marod kar tod diya. ….


Phir announcement hui


Battle one completed….

Tabhi room mai andhera ho gya.. And fir 5 min bad roshni hui…


Is bar mere samne ek doctor aur johen khde the..


Johen- You completed first battle…

Mai- thanks

Johen dr se give him a painkiller

Fir mujhse second battle will start after 6 hrs .

Aur bina kuch btaye mujhe wha chod kar chla gya..maine doctor se dwa li...aur na jane kaise mai so gya. .sayad ua dwa mai nind ki dwa bhi thi...waise bhi painkiller khane se nind to aati hi hai…


Jav mai utha to mai ek dusre room mai tha..maine dekha meri body par ek bullet proof jacket hai bagal mai automatic machine gun...pdi thi…




Mai samajh gya dusra round suru ho chuka hai...maine fatafat se machine gun uthayi aur charo traf dekhne lga..ye koi army bunker jaisa tha...maine sabse pehle apni position bdli aur gun ko laod kar ke..ek side mai chup gya tabhi mujhe ek red laser dikhayi di jo us jagah poin ho rhi thi jha mai pehle tha...mai samjh gya meri talash suru ho chuki hai...tabhi mujhe do aur laser beam dikhayi di...iska matlb ye tha ki is bar mera mukabla ek se nhi tin se tha...maine apne aap ko ek jagah set kiya...aur bde hi aram se apne target ko dgudne lga...wo tino tin direction se aa rhe...the agar mai kisi ek ko bhi goli marta to baki do ko pta chl jana tha aur meri mushkile badh jati ...isliye maine wait krne ka socha ...tab tak jab tak tino ek line mai nhi jate...wo pal aane mai jyada time nhi tha jab tino ekkathe ho gye...maone bina kuch soche trigger dba diya...aur tab tak fire krta rha jav tak meri goliya khatm nhi hogi…..


Fir kuch pal.shanti rahi...av mere pass goliya nhi thi...khali gun kis kam ki maine gun fek di aur bahar aa gya. Tabhi announcement hui…


Congratulations Mr Arya…


You are qualified....


Phir ek darwaza khula..jisme se johem bahar aaya aur bola follow me..


Mai bhi bina kuch soche use follow krne lga …

Wo mujhe ek room mai le gya..jha kaphi sare gadgets rakhe the..


Johen- av meri bat dhyan se suno…


Mai- yes sir


Johen--- jung jitne ke liye arms aur physical combat se jyada ..buddhi khatarnak hoti...hai...isliye planning is must ...kuch bhi kro plan it..


Mai- yes sir


Johen- point no 2 ye hai ki tumhara plan sirf tumko pta hona chahiye…


Mai- yes sir but agar meri koi team ho to kya unko


Johen- team ko sirf unka kam batao plan nhi…


Mai- yes sir..


Johen-,always take plan b and plan c...sirf ek ke bharose koi kam nhi hota ..aksar situation bdl jati hai jo expected hota h


Mai- ok sir..


Johen- pura ka pura underworld trust oar chlta hai...par mje ki bat hai ki yha kisi ka trust nhi kiya ja sakta…


Mai- mtlb


Johen- yha business trust par hota h..par koi apka business hathiyane ke lie kbhi bhi apka trustvtod sakta h...isliye bharosa kisi pr na kro..har chij ka double cross kro..


Mai- yes sir.


Johen- ye tha basic gyan...av bat aati hai tumhari training ki…


Mai - ok sir..


Johen- amtor par training suruwati umr se di jati h...agr av tumhe train krna suru kiya jaye to ek sal kya tuhe 5 sal lag jayenge…


Mai- sir fir kya karenge…


Johen- technology,


Mai- mtlb


Johen..tumhare kuch operation karne honge..


Mai- operations???


Johen - jaisa tumne dekha hoga kayi bar ankh ke bina fight krni padti hai us waqt tumhari aankhe tumhara ye kan bnte hai..par av tumhari wo age nhi ki tum apne kano ki sensation power jyada badhai ja sake...ialiye mai tumhare kano mai permanent amplification devicea lagwa rha hu..us device se tum choti se cjoti vibration ko bhi easily mehsosh kr paoge.


Mai - thanks sir


Johen- avi bhut kuch hai sikhne ko...agli class kal se hogi…



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Bhai log ajka update 1200 words ka diya hai...apna promise fulfilled.... Apna rebu dena..jaroor...abhi apun sone ja rha..chlta hai..
Aur ha Ramzan ki dher shari shubh kamnaye...khuda apko kdkti dhup mai pyas lagne se bchaye..aur aap humare thread par review dete jaye...
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