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Fantasy PANDIT ..THE BLOOD HUNTER...(.ACTION THRILLER SUSPENSE)
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Maine ek guard ko uoar ki aur aate hye dekha to apni ek gun kamar par bndhe belt mai fasa li aur ek hath mai chaky lekar ghat lga kar baith gya. Kyoki us par direct fire krna mtlb tha ki sare guards ko apna location share karne jaisa tha jaise oo bhailog mai yha hu aao mujhpar fire kro isliye mujhe badi sawdhani baratni thi...
Kuch hi dero mai mera intezar khatm hua aur mout ka khel suru...
Mai drwaze ke puche chupa tha wo jaise hi aage aaya maine uske muh par hath rakha aur bde hi pyar se makkhan jaise uska gala chir dala ...par abhi bhi 5 guards baki the jinme se kisi ek bhi goli pandit ko yamraj ke ghar ka flight ticket dekar jati...
Maine niche dekha to guards sare traf dhud rahe the...maine fatafat se sidhi mai ek fire kiya aur chat ka gate jam kar ke body ko raste mai dal kar ke bhaga aur agli side je window roof se kodte hue first floor par aa gya...udhar sare guards sidhiyo ki traf badh rhe the..par av mera man khatra uthane ka man nhi tha...
Maine sidha apna rukh vidhayak ki aur krne ka socha .. aur dbe pao badh gya...maine key hole se dekha to madharjat gun set kar rha tha...apni maine mouka dekhte hue jhatke se darwaza khola sidha vudhayak ke pair par fire kar diya...agle kuch hi palo mai hmare vidhayak ji jamin par fadfa rahe the maine aage badh kar unko uthaya aur unki kannpatti par apni banduk rakhi...goli ki awaz sun kar panncho guards apni gand marane aagye.. Maine chilla kar jo randi ki aulad apne ap ko rajnikant ki aulad samajhta hai wo apne sare ched khol kar sun le..meri goli use rajpal yadav bna degi baki tumhari marji...
Sare guards ne turant hi apni machine guns niche kar diye...aur idhar vidhayak pe pa kar rha tha...mera dimag ghum rha tha...maine ek jhatke mai sabke ooh lala kar dala i mean dharti se nark ka visa lga dala.....av bangle mai do jinda log the warna baki laashe hi thi...
Vidhayak- kon ho tum
Arya- yamdoot hu tera itna jan le
Vidhayak- jo chaiye le lo pls mujhe mat maro
Pandit- kyu kya de sakta hai tu
Vidhayak- tum jitna chaho utna paisa
Arya- paisa !!!hmm yeh bhi to chahiye hi chahiyee
Arya - kitna de sakta hai abhi
Vidhayak- abhi ghar mai 2 cr hai ek suitcase mai agar aur jyada chahiye to thoda time lagega
Arya - kha rakha hai suitcase
Vudhayak- samne drawer mai
Arya - password
Vidhayak- 421124
Arya vidhayak ko ghasita hua drawer ke pass le jata hai aur pause ke milte hi..vidhayak ke sir ke bichobich goli mar deta hai..
Arya-saboot nhi mitaunga is khun ka
Akhir kannon bhi khauf ka nazara dekhega
Av to sara shar ek tamasa dekhega
Mai diwal ke pass gya aur board ke pass bde accharo mai pandit likh bi diya..
Maine suitcase uthaya aur apni room ki traf badh gya...
Aj maine apni life ka pehla bewajah murder kiya tha..but vidhayak ka murder krne ke bad mere andar ek alag hi utsah paida ho rha tha...av maine puri trah se peshewar crime krne mai pehla aur damdar step rakh liya tha..aur pehle step se mujhe apne badle ke liye apni list se paiso ka jugad ki tension kum ho gyi thi par sirf 5cr mai itna bda mission nhi ho sakta ye bhi mujhe pta tha and yu khule paise rakhna bhi khatre se khali nhi tha...paiso ke bare mai maine pehle amtul ko btane ka socha but fir uski salah hi yad aa gyi ki is duniya mai koi kisi ka nhi hota...
(Agla update 1 week bad aayega kyoki abhi mai family issues mai fsa hu...next update 8 may ko aaega aur uske bad se alternate days par regular aayenge deri ke liye savse maphi chahunga...aap logo ka itna sath mil rha hai ki dil kgus ho hata hai.. Mai koi bda lekhak nhi hu mai avi start kiya hai...par suruwat mai hi aaplogo ka itna pyar mil rha hai ki lag hi nhi rha mai nya lekhak hu.
Aap log aise hi sath bne rahiye ...)
Aaj ke liye itna hi
Aapka apna
Mayaviguru
Maine ek guard ko uoar ki aur aate hye dekha to apni ek gun kamar par bndhe belt mai fasa li aur ek hath mai chaky lekar ghat lga kar baith gya. Kyoki us par direct fire krna mtlb tha ki sare guards ko apna location share karne jaisa tha jaise oo bhailog mai yha hu aao mujhpar fire kro isliye mujhe badi sawdhani baratni thi...
Kuch hi dero mai mera intezar khatm hua aur mout ka khel suru...
Mai drwaze ke puche chupa tha wo jaise hi aage aaya maine uske muh par hath rakha aur bde hi pyar se makkhan jaise uska gala chir dala ...par abhi bhi 5 guards baki the jinme se kisi ek bhi goli pandit ko yamraj ke ghar ka flight ticket dekar jati...
Maine niche dekha to guards sare traf dhud rahe the...maine fatafat se sidhi mai ek fire kiya aur chat ka gate jam kar ke body ko raste mai dal kar ke bhaga aur agli side je window roof se kodte hue first floor par aa gya...udhar sare guards sidhiyo ki traf badh rhe the..par av mera man khatra uthane ka man nhi tha...
Maine sidha apna rukh vidhayak ki aur krne ka socha .. aur dbe pao badh gya...maine key hole se dekha to madharjat gun set kar rha tha...apni maine mouka dekhte hue jhatke se darwaza khola sidha vudhayak ke pair par fire kar diya...agle kuch hi palo mai hmare vidhayak ji jamin par fadfa rahe the maine aage badh kar unko uthaya aur unki kannpatti par apni banduk rakhi...goli ki awaz sun kar panncho guards apni gand marane aagye.. Maine chilla kar jo randi ki aulad apne ap ko rajnikant ki aulad samajhta hai wo apne sare ched khol kar sun le..meri goli use rajpal yadav bna degi baki tumhari marji...
Sare guards ne turant hi apni machine guns niche kar diye...aur idhar vidhayak pe pa kar rha tha...mera dimag ghum rha tha...maine ek jhatke mai sabke ooh lala kar dala i mean dharti se nark ka visa lga dala.....av bangle mai do jinda log the warna baki laashe hi thi...
Vidhayak- kon ho tum
Arya- yamdoot hu tera itna jan le
Vidhayak- jo chaiye le lo pls mujhe mat maro
Pandit- kyu kya de sakta hai tu
Vidhayak- tum jitna chaho utna paisa
Arya- paisa !!!hmm yeh bhi to chahiye hi chahiyee
Arya - kitna de sakta hai abhi
Vidhayak- abhi ghar mai 2 cr hai ek suitcase mai agar aur jyada chahiye to thoda time lagega
Arya - kha rakha hai suitcase
Vudhayak- samne drawer mai
Arya - password
Vidhayak- 421124
Arya vidhayak ko ghasita hua drawer ke pass le jata hai aur pause ke milte hi..vidhayak ke sir ke bichobich goli mar deta hai..
Arya-saboot nhi mitaunga is khun ka
Akhir kannon bhi khauf ka nazara dekhega
Av to sara shar ek tamasa dekhega
Mai diwal ke pass gya aur board ke pass bde accharo mai pandit likh bi diya..
Maine suitcase uthaya aur apni room ki traf badh gya...
Aj maine apni life ka pehla bewajah murder kiya tha..but vidhayak ka murder krne ke bad mere andar ek alag hi utsah paida ho rha tha...av maine puri trah se peshewar crime krne mai pehla aur damdar step rakh liya tha..aur pehle step se mujhe apne badle ke liye apni list se paiso ka jugad ki tension kum ho gyi thi par sirf 5cr mai itna bda mission nhi ho sakta ye bhi mujhe pta tha and yu khule paise rakhna bhi khatre se khali nhi tha...paiso ke bare mai maine pehle amtul ko btane ka socha but fir uski salah hi yad aa gyi ki is duniya mai koi kisi ka nhi hota...
(Agla update 1 week bad aayega kyoki abhi mai family issues mai fsa hu...next update 8 may ko aaega aur uske bad se alternate days par regular aayenge deri ke liye savse maphi chahunga...aap logo ka itna sath mil rha hai ki dil kgus ho hata hai.. Mai koi bda lekhak nhi hu mai avi start kiya hai...par suruwat mai hi aaplogo ka itna pyar mil rha hai ki lag hi nhi rha mai nya lekhak hu.
Aap log aise hi sath bne rahiye ...)
Aaj ke liye itna hi
Aapka apna
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Update toh bahut umda trike se likha gaya but ek shikayat hai ki thoda chhota update h. Anyway its amazing Character "PANDIT".
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