Fantasy PANDIT ..THE BLOOD HUNTER...(.ACTION THRILLER SUSPENSE)
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Mai clg se to nikal gya par aj mere dil mai ek tufan umad rha tha ye wo tufan tha jisne saalo pehle mere dil ko chur chur kar diya tha...mai apne hosh mai nhi tha….mujhe yad hai kaise usne mera majk udaya tha uske liye maaf bhi jr deta par meri mohabbat ka jo tamasha usne bnaya tha aur meri aukat mujhe dikhayi thi wo kaise bhul jau...mujhe samajh nhi aa rha tha ki kya kru kya na kru...aj mujhe pehli var daru pine ka man kiya...idhar clg mai do ladkiya..aapas mai jhagd rahi thi...ya yu kha jaye ..do billiya ek dusre ka bal noch rhi thi.
Readers samjh to chuke honge ye do billiya kon hai….chlo bta hi dete hai nhi to koi khega hmara battery down hai samjh na aa rha clear kikha kro…
Ye do billiya aur koi nhi wo anjan ladki aur sonali thi...jo ek dusre se bhid rhi thi..
Anjan ladki- kon hai be tu madhar chod kyu lad rhi hai merese
Sonali- ye to tu bta kalmuhi behen ki loudi shareef ladka dikhta nhi ki oiche pad jati hai
Anjan ladki- randi sali chinal wo mera ex hai
Sonali- hatt behen k loudi sali chinal wo sirf mera hai..
Aur aise hi ekdusre se ye pyar bhari galiyo ka adan pradan krte hue ye ek dusre lad rhe the...
Isi bich kisi farishte ne kisi prof ko bula kar mamala shant kraya
Aur unko alag alag kiya...idhar mai ek alag hi nashe mai dhut pda tha..aur peg par peg uda rha tha….
sala pi rha tha unka gum bhulane ko
taki na dikhe mera dard is jamane ko
par bewfai ye sharab bhi kar gyi
dila di mujhko yad unke har ek afshano ko
..
Akhir maine ek faisla kiya jo ki sayad mujhe av asli blood hunter bnanae wala tha...mai wha sidha se pathan bhai ke adde par pahucha to dekha wha jashn chl rha tha...mai sidha pathan bhai ke pass chla gya..
Pathan me mujhe apni traf aata dekh mujhe bulaya….
Mai - ji bhai
Pathan- aa mere sher…
Mai- ha bhai…
Pathan...aa tujhe mere bhaiyo se milwata hu
Mai- abhi nhi bhai…
Pathan- kyu jya hua
Mai- kuch nhi bhai abhi mai sirf apke sath reh kar sikhna chahta hu aur apne is pehle humle ke bad muhhe lagta hai pehle mujhe training leni chahiye...sirf hath mai gun rakhne se kam nhi chlega…
Pathan ek najar mujhe ghur kar dekhta hai…
Pathan- aa mere sath chal
Mai- ji bhai..
Mai aur pathan ek kamre mai chle jate hai
Pathan- aao baitho
Mai- ji bhai
Pathan- apna maksad bta
Mai - mai kuch samjha nhi bhai
Pathan- kya chahiye tujhko
Mai- ji bhai
Pathan- dar mat khul kar bol
Mai- ye puri duniya apni kadmo mai
Pathan- mtlb mera andaza sahi tha..
Mai- mtlb
Patahan- tujhe dekh kar hi lag gya tha teri manjil bhut bdi hai..
Mai- kaise bhai
Pathan- pehle din aate hi vidhayak ki supadi le li bina dre aur mout se panja ladane gya sirf handgun aur chaku lekar ..na vidhayak ki pahuch pta ki na security ka malumat pucha bas chl diya jung par aisa sirf do log krte hai ya to wo chutiya hota hai ya wo ghayal sher hai ..aur teri aankho mai us ghayl sher ka ubalta hua khun dikhayi deta hai
Mai- ji bhai…
Pathan- kyu chahiye tujhe yai duniya
Mai- tabah krni hai...is duniya ne mujhe barabad kiya ab mai isko karunga aur iske liye kuch bhi krunga
Pathan- passport hai tere pass
Mai- ji bhai…
Pathan- ja samjh le teri jungvki suruwat av tu krne ja rha hai...av de pathan tere sath hai..
Mai- shukriya bhai
Pathan - shukriya nhi gale mil .mere sher..allah tujhe teri manzil dilaega…
Kal subah tumhe callifornia nikalna hai tourist vija par
Mai - itni jaldi
Pathan- jung ka muhurat nhi hota bas jung ho jati hai
Ye wo jung hai ja thodi si bhi deri se jan chli jati hai
Mai - ji bhai mai teyyar hu..
Pathan wha tujhe johen nam ka bnda milega..wo tujhe train krega ..agle 1 saal tak...us bich mai tujhse koi contact nhi krunga..na tu koi contact krega….us ke bad jub tu us dharti par kadam rakhega mujhe teri aane ki khabar tujhse nhi newspaper se milni chahiye…
Mai-jarror
Pathan- ja teyyari kr kal sham ko teri flight hai...london ki fir london se los angeles airport par tu utrega….
Mai - ji bhai..
Mai fir pathan ke yha se nikal gya..
Ab mere pass surf kal sham tak ka waqt tha...av maine sabse pehle ja kar apna sara saman sameta...apni sari guns ko secured place par chupa diya aur apni bullet bhi bech daali ..akhir av yha to rehna tha nhi to krta kya...aur apna sara saman pack kiya.
Raw headquarters
Chief- aao gufran aao
Gufran- yes sir
Chief - kya kiya chuttiyo mai barkhurdar
Gufran- kuch khas nhi
Chief- poonam kuch jyada pasand aa gyi hai kya
Gufran- has deta hai
Chief - mudde par aate hai
Gufran- ha boliye
Chief- pandit
Gufran - sorry sir us case se mai apna hath kvka nikal chuka hu
Chief- par tum akele ho jo us se rubaroo hua hai
Gufran- sorry sir but hmare pass aur kabil agents hai aap unko use mai laiye.
chief-tum samajh kyu nhi rhe…
Gufran - sir sav samajh rha hu..
Aap apni nakami mere upar dal rhe hai
Chief- you are going out of your limits
Gufran -sach kadwa hota hai
Chief- get lost…
Gufran - sure sir
……………………….
Aj ek nayi subah ka agaz hua tha...sayad aj ki subah bhut kuch badlne wala tha….
Mai subah ready ho kar bank ke liye nikal liya...wha se maine sara cash nikal aur chl pda auction house ki traf jha 3 hotels ke auction chal rhe the usme se ek ki kimat 3.4 cr thi jo ki ekdum posche area mai tha...jise maine nilami ki wajah se 3.9 cr mai kharida...avi vi mere pas 1.2 cr bche the...par mujhe samjh na aa rha tha...inhe kha invest kru...kyoki mujhe legal way se chlna tha...hotel ko kharidne mai dikkat nhi hui kyoki...maine sara payment on cash kiya tha...mai wha se sidha nikla hotel ki traf. .jha ka sara staff pehle to mujhe pehchana nhi but bad mai jab lawyer ne aakar announce kiya ki mai iska new owner hu...to sabne mujhe greet kiya kaphi log meri pehchan janne ki koshis kr rhr the..mai wha se sidha apne cabin ki traf bdha aur manger ko sath lekar aaya. .
Manager- congrats sir
Mai- yeah thanks
I have some work for you…
Manager- sure sir..
Mai - i need you to turn this hotel past in a bright future. I want it to be in the top counts of delhi...do whatever required but i need result..
Mujhe is hotel ko savse aage dekhna
Manager- sure sir
Mai- you may leave now..and yes send the guards in my office now
Manager- why sir
Mai- you are fired ..aap dusri noukri dudh lijiye ..
Manager- sir but maine kiya kya hai…
Mai- jyada kuch nhi mujhse sawal puchne ki jurrat ki hai..jo mujhe pasand nhi..
Manager- sorry sir aage se aisa nhi hoga...mai abhi bhejta hu guards ko
Mai- isi mai aapki bhalai hai…
Manager wha se chla jata hai aur kuch der mai guards andar aa jate hai..
Mai- aao baitho
Guards- sir hum aise hi thik hai
Mai- maine kha na aao baitho
Guards- ji sir
Mai- hotel ki kya halat hai..
Guards- sir av hum kya bta sakte hai..
Mai- hakikat.wo jo sirf apko pta hoti hai.
Guards- sir hmari noukri kyu chin rhe hai
Mai- mere hote hue kiski himmat apki noukri par hath dale…
Ap bekhouf ho kar bole..
Guards- ji sahab jara receptionist log sahi se bat nhi krte aur jara staff ki vhi kmi hai…
Mai - acha koi bdi bat
Guards - nhi sir
Mai- ye lijiye mera no hai wo bhi personal..aj se aap yha mere aabkh aur kaan hai .koi bhi bat ho mujhse sudha contact kriyega...thik hai na..
Guards- ji sir
Mai - aur ha aj se apki salart ko 30%increase kiya jata hai…
Guards- ji sir bhout bhout dhanyawad
Mai - dhanywad ki koi bat nhi vus sikayat ka mouka mat dijiyega..
Guards- jarror sahab aap nischint rhe.
Mai- thik hai av aap ja sakte hai…
Fir mai wha se banquet hall mai aa jata hu aur hotel ka ek chakkar lga ta hu...fir mai sham mai reception par pahucha jha maine guards ki bat ko shi paya. Aur mai on the spot dono receptionist ko terminate kar diya..
Aur manager ko sab kuch sahi se mange krne ka bol kar hotel ke luxury room jo owner ke liye reserve tha usme gya aur safe mai apne bche hue paise rakhe aur safe mai ek nya code lock set kiya.
In sav kamo ko niptate hue sham ho chuki thi…
Idhar clg mai do log kbhi aapas mai ghurte kbhi gate ki traf par unhe kya pta tha aj ka intejaar av unge bhut lamba padne wala tha.
Idhar amtul soch rha tha ki arya kha gayab hai ki kuch pta nhi xhl rha khi aisa to nhi pehle murder ke bad dar se underground ho gya..par wo ausa nhi krega itne kand krne ke bad nhi dra..to ek vidhayak ke mout se kya darega..kuch to bat hai pta krna padega..phn uska non trackable ja rha hai...lagta hai av mujhe pathan bhai se milna padega
Aaj ke liye itna hi
Aapka apna
Mayaviguru.
Aaj ka update 1734 words ka hai
Mai clg se to nikal gya par aj mere dil mai ek tufan umad rha tha ye wo tufan tha jisne saalo pehle mere dil ko chur chur kar diya tha...mai apne hosh mai nhi tha….mujhe yad hai kaise usne mera majk udaya tha uske liye maaf bhi jr deta par meri mohabbat ka jo tamasha usne bnaya tha aur meri aukat mujhe dikhayi thi wo kaise bhul jau...mujhe samajh nhi aa rha tha ki kya kru kya na kru...aj mujhe pehli var daru pine ka man kiya...idhar clg mai do ladkiya..aapas mai jhagd rahi thi...ya yu kha jaye ..do billiya ek dusre ka bal noch rhi thi.
Readers samjh to chuke honge ye do billiya kon hai….chlo bta hi dete hai nhi to koi khega hmara battery down hai samjh na aa rha clear kikha kro…
Ye do billiya aur koi nhi wo anjan ladki aur sonali thi...jo ek dusre se bhid rhi thi..
Anjan ladki- kon hai be tu madhar chod kyu lad rhi hai merese
Sonali- ye to tu bta kalmuhi behen ki loudi shareef ladka dikhta nhi ki oiche pad jati hai
Anjan ladki- randi sali chinal wo mera ex hai
Sonali- hatt behen k loudi sali chinal wo sirf mera hai..
Aur aise hi ekdusre se ye pyar bhari galiyo ka adan pradan krte hue ye ek dusre lad rhe the...
Isi bich kisi farishte ne kisi prof ko bula kar mamala shant kraya
Aur unko alag alag kiya...idhar mai ek alag hi nashe mai dhut pda tha..aur peg par peg uda rha tha….
sala pi rha tha unka gum bhulane ko
taki na dikhe mera dard is jamane ko
par bewfai ye sharab bhi kar gyi
dila di mujhko yad unke har ek afshano ko
..
Akhir maine ek faisla kiya jo ki sayad mujhe av asli blood hunter bnanae wala tha...mai wha sidha se pathan bhai ke adde par pahucha to dekha wha jashn chl rha tha...mai sidha pathan bhai ke pass chla gya..
Pathan me mujhe apni traf aata dekh mujhe bulaya….
Mai - ji bhai
Pathan- aa mere sher…
Mai- ha bhai…
Pathan...aa tujhe mere bhaiyo se milwata hu
Mai- abhi nhi bhai…
Pathan- kyu jya hua
Mai- kuch nhi bhai abhi mai sirf apke sath reh kar sikhna chahta hu aur apne is pehle humle ke bad muhhe lagta hai pehle mujhe training leni chahiye...sirf hath mai gun rakhne se kam nhi chlega…
Pathan ek najar mujhe ghur kar dekhta hai…
Pathan- aa mere sath chal
Mai- ji bhai..
Mai aur pathan ek kamre mai chle jate hai
Pathan- aao baitho
Mai- ji bhai
Pathan- apna maksad bta
Mai - mai kuch samjha nhi bhai
Pathan- kya chahiye tujhko
Mai- ji bhai
Pathan- dar mat khul kar bol
Mai- ye puri duniya apni kadmo mai
Pathan- mtlb mera andaza sahi tha..
Mai- mtlb
Patahan- tujhe dekh kar hi lag gya tha teri manjil bhut bdi hai..
Mai- kaise bhai
Pathan- pehle din aate hi vidhayak ki supadi le li bina dre aur mout se panja ladane gya sirf handgun aur chaku lekar ..na vidhayak ki pahuch pta ki na security ka malumat pucha bas chl diya jung par aisa sirf do log krte hai ya to wo chutiya hota hai ya wo ghayal sher hai ..aur teri aankho mai us ghayl sher ka ubalta hua khun dikhayi deta hai
Mai- ji bhai…
Pathan- kyu chahiye tujhe yai duniya
Mai- tabah krni hai...is duniya ne mujhe barabad kiya ab mai isko karunga aur iske liye kuch bhi krunga
Pathan- passport hai tere pass
Mai- ji bhai…
Pathan- ja samjh le teri jungvki suruwat av tu krne ja rha hai...av de pathan tere sath hai..
Mai- shukriya bhai
Pathan - shukriya nhi gale mil .mere sher..allah tujhe teri manzil dilaega…
Kal subah tumhe callifornia nikalna hai tourist vija par
Mai - itni jaldi
Pathan- jung ka muhurat nhi hota bas jung ho jati hai
Ye wo jung hai ja thodi si bhi deri se jan chli jati hai
Mai - ji bhai mai teyyar hu..
Pathan wha tujhe johen nam ka bnda milega..wo tujhe train krega ..agle 1 saal tak...us bich mai tujhse koi contact nhi krunga..na tu koi contact krega….us ke bad jub tu us dharti par kadam rakhega mujhe teri aane ki khabar tujhse nhi newspaper se milni chahiye…
Mai-jarror
Pathan- ja teyyari kr kal sham ko teri flight hai...london ki fir london se los angeles airport par tu utrega….
Mai - ji bhai..
Mai fir pathan ke yha se nikal gya..
Ab mere pass surf kal sham tak ka waqt tha...av maine sabse pehle ja kar apna sara saman sameta...apni sari guns ko secured place par chupa diya aur apni bullet bhi bech daali ..akhir av yha to rehna tha nhi to krta kya...aur apna sara saman pack kiya.
Raw headquarters
Chief- aao gufran aao
Gufran- yes sir
Chief - kya kiya chuttiyo mai barkhurdar
Gufran- kuch khas nhi
Chief- poonam kuch jyada pasand aa gyi hai kya
Gufran- has deta hai
Chief - mudde par aate hai
Gufran- ha boliye
Chief- pandit
Gufran - sorry sir us case se mai apna hath kvka nikal chuka hu
Chief- par tum akele ho jo us se rubaroo hua hai
Gufran- sorry sir but hmare pass aur kabil agents hai aap unko use mai laiye.
chief-tum samajh kyu nhi rhe…
Gufran - sir sav samajh rha hu..
Aap apni nakami mere upar dal rhe hai
Chief- you are going out of your limits
Gufran -sach kadwa hota hai
Chief- get lost…
Gufran - sure sir
……………………….
Aj ek nayi subah ka agaz hua tha...sayad aj ki subah bhut kuch badlne wala tha….
Mai subah ready ho kar bank ke liye nikal liya...wha se maine sara cash nikal aur chl pda auction house ki traf jha 3 hotels ke auction chal rhe the usme se ek ki kimat 3.4 cr thi jo ki ekdum posche area mai tha...jise maine nilami ki wajah se 3.9 cr mai kharida...avi vi mere pas 1.2 cr bche the...par mujhe samjh na aa rha tha...inhe kha invest kru...kyoki mujhe legal way se chlna tha...hotel ko kharidne mai dikkat nhi hui kyoki...maine sara payment on cash kiya tha...mai wha se sidha nikla hotel ki traf. .jha ka sara staff pehle to mujhe pehchana nhi but bad mai jab lawyer ne aakar announce kiya ki mai iska new owner hu...to sabne mujhe greet kiya kaphi log meri pehchan janne ki koshis kr rhr the..mai wha se sidha apne cabin ki traf bdha aur manger ko sath lekar aaya. .
Manager- congrats sir
Mai- yeah thanks
I have some work for you…
Manager- sure sir..
Mai - i need you to turn this hotel past in a bright future. I want it to be in the top counts of delhi...do whatever required but i need result..
Mujhe is hotel ko savse aage dekhna
Manager- sure sir
Mai- you may leave now..and yes send the guards in my office now
Manager- why sir
Mai- you are fired ..aap dusri noukri dudh lijiye ..
Manager- sir but maine kiya kya hai…
Mai- jyada kuch nhi mujhse sawal puchne ki jurrat ki hai..jo mujhe pasand nhi..
Manager- sorry sir aage se aisa nhi hoga...mai abhi bhejta hu guards ko
Mai- isi mai aapki bhalai hai…
Manager wha se chla jata hai aur kuch der mai guards andar aa jate hai..
Mai- aao baitho
Guards- sir hum aise hi thik hai
Mai- maine kha na aao baitho
Guards- ji sir
Mai- hotel ki kya halat hai..
Guards- sir av hum kya bta sakte hai..
Mai- hakikat.wo jo sirf apko pta hoti hai.
Guards- sir hmari noukri kyu chin rhe hai
Mai- mere hote hue kiski himmat apki noukri par hath dale…
Ap bekhouf ho kar bole..
Guards- ji sahab jara receptionist log sahi se bat nhi krte aur jara staff ki vhi kmi hai…
Mai - acha koi bdi bat
Guards - nhi sir
Mai- ye lijiye mera no hai wo bhi personal..aj se aap yha mere aabkh aur kaan hai .koi bhi bat ho mujhse sudha contact kriyega...thik hai na..
Guards- ji sir
Mai - aur ha aj se apki salart ko 30%increase kiya jata hai…
Guards- ji sir bhout bhout dhanyawad
Mai - dhanywad ki koi bat nhi vus sikayat ka mouka mat dijiyega..
Guards- jarror sahab aap nischint rhe.
Mai- thik hai av aap ja sakte hai…
Fir mai wha se banquet hall mai aa jata hu aur hotel ka ek chakkar lga ta hu...fir mai sham mai reception par pahucha jha maine guards ki bat ko shi paya. Aur mai on the spot dono receptionist ko terminate kar diya..
Aur manager ko sab kuch sahi se mange krne ka bol kar hotel ke luxury room jo owner ke liye reserve tha usme gya aur safe mai apne bche hue paise rakhe aur safe mai ek nya code lock set kiya.
In sav kamo ko niptate hue sham ho chuki thi…
Idhar clg mai do log kbhi aapas mai ghurte kbhi gate ki traf par unhe kya pta tha aj ka intejaar av unge bhut lamba padne wala tha.
Idhar amtul soch rha tha ki arya kha gayab hai ki kuch pta nhi xhl rha khi aisa to nhi pehle murder ke bad dar se underground ho gya..par wo ausa nhi krega itne kand krne ke bad nhi dra..to ek vidhayak ke mout se kya darega..kuch to bat hai pta krna padega..phn uska non trackable ja rha hai...lagta hai av mujhe pathan bhai se milna padega
Aaj ke liye itna hi
Aapka apna
Mayaviguru.
Aaj ka update 1734 words ka hai
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awesome update
jaldi hi story main aur maza aane Wala hi
jaldi hi story main aur maza aane Wala hi
Mast update h bhai
Maza a gya
Bade dino baad itna accha update dia h
Maza a gya
Bade dino baad itna accha update dia h