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Fantasy PANDIT ..THE BLOOD HUNTER...(.ACTION THRILLER SUSPENSE)

Mayaviguru

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Bilkul shuru may yay tha k hiro apni behan ka badla laynay chala hai
Is ko apnay khud turn kar k hiro ko pagal kar dia hai
Logo nay ap ko sport kia k ap nay hiro ko strong dikhaya na k is liy k apnay hiro ko gangster dikhaya
Bhai sorry but jo maine socha hai mai use nhi badal sakta because agr mai end ko change kiya to mujhe meri ye khani incomplete chodni padegi...maine pehle hi kya kya likhna hai sav soch rakha tha..aur rhi bat death ki to itna bta du ending thodi sad jarur hogi par pandit ka dil marne ke bad bhi dhadkega..av bat aati hai pandit ke gangster bnne ki...to uska badla gangster bnne ke bad hi pura hoga..mai koi bhut bda writer to nhi hu..na meri likhne ki style koi dhasu hai par ha meri puri koshis rahegi ki mera content sabse alag ho ....and ek bat jo sabse imp hai pandit marega jarur par kisi gangwar ya encounter mai nahi na koi natural death na koi bimari se wo marega aur mar kar bhi uska dil dhadkega
 

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Update 16

…..hotel ke sarre kam niptane ke bad mai pathan bhai ke adde par mila ...wha unhone mujhe flight ki ticket..di aur ek codeword btaya..mai wha se fir airport ki traf chla gya…..


Sinha Mansion

Sikander- ye kya bakwas hai..Hotel kisi aur ne kharild liya

PA- yes sir

Sikander- kisne kharida

Pa - sir pta nhi koi Arya nam ka aadmi hai..

Sikander- pura nam btao

Pa- sir nhi pta…

Sikander- arya ya fir is se related jo bhi info mile mujhe do…

Pa- sure sir…


Raw headquarters


Shadow- sir i have a plan…

Chief- kya plan hai

Shadow- sir jaisa ki hume gufran ne btaya ki pandit bomb dhamako ke mastermind ke piche pda hai

Chief- ha to ye bat hume pta hai par uska mastermid hai kon kya tumhe pta hai…

Shadow- nhi sir but hum isi bat ka fayda utha sakte hai…

Chief - aur wo kaise

Shadow- sir...agar hum kisi ko mastermind bna kar public ke aage pesh kr de to

Chief- tumhara dimag kharab hai

Shadow- nhi sir ye ek tir se do shikar wali bat hai ..

Chief- jara detail mai btao

Shadow- sir pehla shikar pandit ...wo mastermind ke piche aayega aur hmare hathe chadega...aur dusra shikar asli mastermind.. Uska karnama kisi aur ke nam hua to apne bill se bahar zarror aayega…

Chief- hmm plan mai dum to hai...work on it…



Idhar mai flight pakad chuka tha...11ghantevki flight ke bad london pahucha aur wha se dusri flight se los angeles utra…


Mai wha se exit point ki traf badh gya…..exit point se bahar aate hi ek car mere aage ruki usme 60 saal ka buddha nikla...aur mere pass akar pucha- what is your destiny

Mai- killing machine..


Then wp buddha mujhe follow me bolta hai aur ja kar car mai bauth jata hai and mai bhi uske piche ja kar car ki seat par baith gya..

Phir 4 ghante ki driving ke bad car ek tute hue ghar ke bhar ruki…

Buddha- get down of car

Mai buddhe ki bat man kar niche utar gya. Aur wo car turant hi aage badh gyi…

Yha dur durvtak kuch nhi tha..na koi dusra ghar na koi market na koi log…

Maine ek bar charo traf dekha phir us tute hue ghar ke andar ki traf badh gya..andar ek aur buddha baitha hua tha. .

Mai(man mai sala California aaya hu vridha ashram)

Mai- hii sir

Buddha- indian hai na hindi bol

Mai- payu lagu kaka

Buddha- maine hindi bolne ko kha ha rishta bnane ko

Mai- maaphi chahunga

Budda - niche tehkhane mai jao

Mai uski bat mankar sidha niche ki traf badh gya

Niche ja kar meri aankh aur gand dono fati..aankh isliye fati kibjha upar samshan lag rha tha andar ka najara usse bilkul alag tha yeh ek pura hightech hall tha jha kayi sare kamre bhi the aur bhut se log bhi the..


Mai aage badha tabhi mere aage ek black suit mai bnda aaya

Bnda- hello

Mai- hii

Bnda- my name is johen

Mai- i am pandit..

Bnda- real name??

Mai- arya

Bnda- hmm kya sikhna hai tumko aur kya kya aata hai tumko

Mai- mujhe sav kuch sikhna hai..i know some physical combats

Johen- you have obe chance to prove yourself to stay here

Mai- ok sir

Johen- you have to fight 2 battles and in each battle winner will be declared by the death after the death of your opponent

Mai- what

Johen - kill them to survive here

Mai( mtlb do round ladu aur agle ko mout ke ghat utaru to ye train karega)

Kuch der sochne ke bad

Mai- yes i am ready

Johen first round is of physical combat and second round of weapon combat…

Mai aa to gya tha khud ko train krne par av fat rahi thi...par kuch bda krna hai to mushkilo ka samna karna hi padta hai..aadhe ghante bad mujhe ek room mai bnd kar diya jata hai...pura room white painted tha andar se na gate pta chal rha tha na kuch aisa lag rha tha mano kisi while buob ke andar aa gya hu..tabhi ek diwal upar ki traf uthne lagi...aur dilwal ke us oar bhi same hal tha aur wha meri age ka hi ek ladka khda tha jisne kungfu wale white kapde pehne hue the…

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South extension


Rani- ave yar yha aj itni manhusiyat kyu hai

Avantika- mera assignments likhne se ungli tut rahi hai.aur kisi ko apne unke ek najar ka deedar na hone ka gum hai..

Rani-oooo

Sonali-kya tum dono chup ho sakte hi

Rani- bhai hum to chup ho hi jaenge hume kya

Avantika- waise wo ladki kon thi jis se kal tune jhagda kiya ..aur hua kya tha.

Sonali- nam mat le us randi ka sali behen ki loudi bolti ki arya uska ex hai..aur mere aaroo se chipatne ki koshis kar rhi thi...mai aise kaise chod deti us chinal ko..

Rani- kya pta sahi keh rahi ho...yad kar us din arya ne ek shayri boli thi dard wali..kya pta uske liye hi boli ho

Avantika- hmm bat to rani ki sahi hai..

Sonali- yrr tum log av aur mera shar mat khao...mai dwa khakr sone ja rahi hu

Rani- gn babes is kadkti dhup mai

Avantika -hehehe

Sonali- chup ho jao wrna tum log ki gand mar dungi…

Huh


Aur sonali wha se uthkar dusre kamre mai chli jati hai...



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Idhar amtul pahuchta hai pathan ke adde par...aur ja kar pathan vhai se milne ki koshis krna padta hai...kaphi der bad wo pathan se mil pata hai aur apna parchay deta hai

Pathan- btao kya kar sakta hu

Amtul- bhai arya se milna tha jara

Pathan- av ye mumkin nhi…

Amtul-mtlb

Pathan- arya mar chuka hai…

Amtul- kaise kab kha

Pathan-,vidhayak ka murder krte hue wo record ho gya tha..vidhayak ke bhai ke hatho mara gya..

Amtul- but ye kaise mumkin hai

Pathan- ek choti si bullet agle ka id nhi dekhti..

Amtul- hmmm

Aur amtul wha se kuch sochte hue nikal jata hai…

Pathan ki bat par vishwas krna itna aasan nhi tha uske liye...par pathan ki bat par sawal uthane ki himmat bhi nhi ho rahi thi...aj use wapis lga ki uska sajaya hua khwab fir tut gya hai…


Hotel…….

Manager-yr gand fad gya nya malik to ..do hi to mal thi sala ne unko bhi nikal diya...aur sala dikhta to ye baccha hai par jaisa iska attitude hai gand mar lega...agar hotel top list mai nhi aaya to...lagta hai av kam karne ka waqt aa gya..hai…

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Anjan sakhs-samjhta kya hai khud ko aj clg nhi aaya kal btati hi usko..pyar se mna rhi thi na to nhi man rha tha par av kal dikhati hu usko...waise bhi mujhe uski sirf jarrorat hai jav tak mere classes coverup na ho jay fir btaungi bda attitude dikha rha tha aur wo ladki usko to chodungi nhi sali mujhse ladti hai….

Dono ko dekh lungi…


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Bhai log mega to nhi de paya but 1200 words ka diya hai…

Next update :day after tomorrow



Aaj ke liye itna hi



Aapka apna



Mayaviguru.


 

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Bahuy hi mast uodate diya he bhai bole to ek dum rapchik. Apun ka role bhi mast ja rela he.
Ab jab fight ladega tabhi malum padega hi kaun kitna pani me he.
Waiting 4 next update
 
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