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DREAM CATCHER said:
Saare Updates padh liye.....
Awesome.... Jaa rahi hai story....
Isi tarah story line banaye rakhna....

Akhir.... Aarya.... Apne pehle mission pe nikal Gaya hai.....
Puri tayari ke.... Saath.... Waise hosla ho.... Toh sabkuch ho sakta hai....

Toh bidhu.... Jaldi.. see... Next action .... update Dedal Kya..... Bhai...
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Bhai aise rebu pe likhne ka housla nadhta hai...vidhyak ka murder aj ho jaega...meri story ka plot sirf ek nhi hai mai ek gangster ki puri khani likhunga.....mai haqiat se milta hua likh rha hu...meri story mai aisa nahi hoga ki..hero sudha underworld don ban jaega...ya fir ek aisa cop jis se pura underworld drega..kyoki ye reality nhi hoti...underworld mai don banna easy nhi hota..ye bat sayad log bhul gye hai...par av meri story sayad unhe ye bat yad dila de....
 
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DEVILWANTED said:
Bahut hi aeesome update h yr.....

Ab arya us vidhayak ko kese marega aur kya amtul sach me arya ke sath h ya sirf don banne ke liye istemal(use) kar rha h.....

Gjb.....

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Ye to suruwat hai jung ka agaz baki hai.....
Under world mai koi apna nahi hota...koi praya nhi hota..
 
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Gully Boy said:
Zabardast updates the Bhai !!!!!!

Aab aagla action dekhne main mazaa aayega.....

Aarya aur Sonali ki chemistry.... Bhadiya jaa rahi hai....

Padit Aab kaise... Marta hai... Vidhayak ko.... Dekhte hai aage.....

Waiting for next
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Action bhi milega....jabarjast milega...
Abhi to bhut se ladkiya aayengi par sabki kismat mai nhi pandit
 
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Update 11

(Chotu update hai sorry next mega dunga}


Arya nikal gya ...tha...apne pehle bina wajh murder ki traf ...ya wo murder...jis se uske planned criminal ban ne ki suruwat thi...arya sidha vidhayk ke ghar ke liye nikal gya...wha jakar pehle usne security arrangement pta karne ki sochi...to usne pehle bhar se hi pta kiya to pta chla main gate par char guards hai..bunglow ke chat par do guards...first floor ki balcony mai do guards...andar ka scene guess nhi kar pa rha tha..


Maine pehle socha kyu na boundary kud kar andar jau par bounday ki height to kam thi par uske upar katile taaro ki lining thi jo agar hapka sa touch hota to meri gand fatni pakki thi plus..security guards ki bhi najar mai aa jana tha...to filhal mere samajh mai na aa rha tha ki entry kaise maaru jyada herogiri mehngi pad sakti thi...tabhi mere man mai ek kurafti idea aaya...maine fatafat apna rukh apne clg ki aur kiya...wha jar kar auditorium mai drama section ke costume room mai jakar apni inspector wali costume nikali...jo welcome party ke bad drame mai pehni thi….av mere pass jane ka ek jariya mil chuka tha...but av ek problem thi wo tha id card aur jeep...iska mujhe samajh na aa rha tha ki arrangement kaise kru...bhut sochne ke bad bhi mujhe samajh nhi aa rha tha...harkar maine usi trah jane ka decide kiya...mai wapas bangle par pahucha to sham ho chuki thi..maine pass ke ek dukan se cigrette kharidi..aur us se lighter manga…

Aur whi khade ho kar apne cigrette ke mje lene lga…


Dukan wala- salam sahab


Maii- ha salam


Dukan wala- sahab aap yha naye lagte hai ..


Mai- ha kal hi mera transfer yha hua hai..


Dukan wala- acha to aap vidhayk ji se milne aye hai..


Mai- ha av bde logo ke ghar to jana hi padta hai...av noukri hi aisi hai..


Dukan wala .- ha sahab bat to sahi hai...waise jra sawdhan rahiyega...ye vidhayak accha aadmi nhi hai …


Mai- pta hai..par kya kre is se milna jaruri hai par samajh na aa rha kaise milu ..


Dukan wala - sahab 8 bje yha lage guards ki duty change hoti hai...wo tym aap ja sakte hai...wrna baki tym guards jaldi jane nhi dete chahe wo koi bhi ho..


Mai- acha chlo fir mai chlta hu8 bjne wale hai…


Dukan wala- ji sahab


Dukan wale se bat karte hue mai apna plan set kar chuka tha..


Thik 8 bje duty change hui to mai bhi unme se ek ka gateup lekar andar chla gya..fir mai chupte chupate andar ka najra lene laga…


Vidhayk ki bibi mayke ya fir khi bhar gyi thi aur vidhayak apne kamre mai tha...aur hall mai char guards the…


Maine vidhayak se pehle unke guards ka ram nam karne ka socha mai bde hi swadhani se chat par gya aur apne gun mai silencer lga kar dono guards ko dher kar diya...wha par ek sniper padi thi.maine use bde hi swadhani se terrace par lagi grills ke bich mai set kiya aur agle kuch hi palo mai main gate ke charo guards dher ho gye the...par yha mujhse bhul ho gyi un charo guards ke marte hi first floor ke guards alert ho gye aur unhone alarm bja diya…


Av mujhe bhut jyada swadhani se rehna tha..wrna ek bhi bhool hui aur mera safar suru hone se pehle hi khatm ho jata..


Maine apne dono hatho mai guns o change kar liya aur full loaded wali rakh li …


Aur sidhiyo se niche dekhne lga tabhi mujhe ek guards upar ke traf aata dikhayi diya...agar mai use apni goli ka shikar bnata to sambhavta pure guards ko apni traf ane ka invitation card dena tha ….


Maine apni ek gu ko kamar par belt mai fsyaa aur wk chaku nikal liya..aur ghat lga kar baith gya…



Aaj ke liye itna hi…



Aapka apna


Mayaviguru
 
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