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Fantasy PANDIT ..THE BLOOD HUNTER...(.ACTION THRILLER SUSPENSE)

Jitu kumar

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Update 16

…..hotel ke sarre kam niptane ke bad mai pathan bhai ke adde par mila ...wha unhone mujhe flight ki ticket..di aur ek codeword btaya..mai wha se fir airport ki traf chla gya…..


Sinha Mansion

Sikander- ye kya bakwas hai..Hotel kisi aur ne kharild liya

PA- yes sir

Sikander- kisne kharida

Pa - sir pta nhi koi Arya nam ka aadmi hai..

Sikander- pura nam btao

Pa- sir nhi pta…

Sikander- arya ya fir is se related jo bhi info mile mujhe do…

Pa- sure sir…


Raw headquarters


Shadow- sir i have a plan…

Chief- kya plan hai

Shadow- sir jaisa ki hume gufran ne btaya ki pandit bomb dhamako ke mastermind ke piche pda hai

Chief- ha to ye bat hume pta hai par uska mastermid hai kon kya tumhe pta hai…

Shadow- nhi sir but hum isi bat ka fayda utha sakte hai…

Chief - aur wo kaise

Shadow- sir...agar hum kisi ko mastermind bna kar public ke aage pesh kr de to

Chief- tumhara dimag kharab hai

Shadow- nhi sir ye ek tir se do shikar wali bat hai ..

Chief- jara detail mai btao

Shadow- sir pehla shikar pandit ...wo mastermind ke piche aayega aur hmare hathe chadega...aur dusra shikar asli mastermind.. Uska karnama kisi aur ke nam hua to apne bill se bahar zarror aayega…

Chief- hmm plan mai dum to hai...work on it…



Idhar mai flight pakad chuka tha...11ghantevki flight ke bad london pahucha aur wha se dusri flight se los angeles utra…


Mai wha se exit point ki traf badh gya…..exit point se bahar aate hi ek car mere aage ruki usme 60 saal ka buddha nikla...aur mere pass akar pucha- what is your destiny

Mai- killing machine..


Then wp buddha mujhe follow me bolta hai aur ja kar car mai bauth jata hai and mai bhi uske piche ja kar car ki seat par baith gya..

Phir 4 ghante ki driving ke bad car ek tute hue ghar ke bhar ruki…

Buddha- get down of car

Mai buddhe ki bat man kar niche utar gya. Aur wo car turant hi aage badh gyi…

Yha dur durvtak kuch nhi tha..na koi dusra ghar na koi market na koi log…

Maine ek bar charo traf dekha phir us tute hue ghar ke andar ki traf badh gya..andar ek aur buddha baitha hua tha. .

Mai(man mai sala California aaya hu vridha ashram)

Mai- hii sir

Buddha- indian hai na hindi bol

Mai- payu lagu kaka

Buddha- maine hindi bolne ko kha ha rishta bnane ko

Mai- maaphi chahunga

Budda - niche tehkhane mai jao

Mai uski bat mankar sidha niche ki traf badh gya

Niche ja kar meri aankh aur gand dono fati..aankh isliye fati kibjha upar samshan lag rha tha andar ka najara usse bilkul alag tha yeh ek pura hightech hall tha jha kayi sare kamre bhi the aur bhut se log bhi the..


Mai aage badha tabhi mere aage ek black suit mai bnda aaya

Bnda- hello

Mai- hii

Bnda- my name is johen

Mai- i am pandit..

Bnda- real name??

Mai- arya

Bnda- hmm kya sikhna hai tumko aur kya kya aata hai tumko

Mai- mujhe sav kuch sikhna hai..i know some physical combats

Johen- you have obe chance to prove yourself to stay here

Mai- ok sir

Johen- you have to fight 2 battles and in each battle winner will be declared by the death after the death of your opponent

Mai- what

Johen - kill them to survive here

Mai( mtlb do round ladu aur agle ko mout ke ghat utaru to ye train karega)

Kuch der sochne ke bad

Mai- yes i am ready

Johen first round is of physical combat and second round of weapon combat…

Mai aa to gya tha khud ko train krne par av fat rahi thi...par kuch bda krna hai to mushkilo ka samna karna hi padta hai..aadhe ghante bad mujhe ek room mai bnd kar diya jata hai...pura room white painted tha andar se na gate pta chal rha tha na kuch aisa lag rha tha mano kisi while buob ke andar aa gya hu..tabhi ek diwal upar ki traf uthne lagi...aur dilwal ke us oar bhi same hal tha aur wha meri age ka hi ek ladka khda tha jisne kungfu wale white kapde pehne hue the…

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South extension


Rani- ave yar yha aj itni manhusiyat kyu hai

Avantika- mera assignments likhne se ungli tut rahi hai.aur kisi ko apne unke ek najar ka deedar na hone ka gum hai..

Rani-oooo

Sonali-kya tum dono chup ho sakte hi

Rani- bhai hum to chup ho hi jaenge hume kya

Avantika- waise wo ladki kon thi jis se kal tune jhagda kiya ..aur hua kya tha.

Sonali- nam mat le us randi ka sali behen ki loudi bolti ki arya uska ex hai..aur mere aaroo se chipatne ki koshis kar rhi thi...mai aise kaise chod deti us chinal ko..

Rani- kya pta sahi keh rahi ho...yad kar us din arya ne ek shayri boli thi dard wali..kya pta uske liye hi boli ho

Avantika- hmm bat to rani ki sahi hai..

Sonali- yrr tum log av aur mera shar mat khao...mai dwa khakr sone ja rahi hu

Rani- gn babes is kadkti dhup mai

Avantika -hehehe

Sonali- chup ho jao wrna tum log ki gand mar dungi…

Huh


Aur sonali wha se uthkar dusre kamre mai chli jati hai...



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Idhar amtul pahuchta hai pathan ke adde par...aur ja kar pathan vhai se milne ki koshis krna padta hai...kaphi der bad wo pathan se mil pata hai aur apna parchay deta hai

Pathan- btao kya kar sakta hu

Amtul- bhai arya se milna tha jara

Pathan- av ye mumkin nhi…

Amtul-mtlb

Pathan- arya mar chuka hai…

Amtul- kaise kab kha

Pathan-,vidhayak ka murder krte hue wo record ho gya tha..vidhayak ke bhai ke hatho mara gya..

Amtul- but ye kaise mumkin hai

Pathan- ek choti si bullet agle ka id nhi dekhti..

Amtul- hmmm

Aur amtul wha se kuch sochte hue nikal jata hai…

Pathan ki bat par vishwas krna itna aasan nhi tha uske liye...par pathan ki bat par sawal uthane ki himmat bhi nhi ho rahi thi...aj use wapis lga ki uska sajaya hua khwab fir tut gya hai…


Hotel…….

Manager-yr gand fad gya nya malik to ..do hi to mal thi sala ne unko bhi nikal diya...aur sala dikhta to ye baccha hai par jaisa iska attitude hai gand mar lega...agar hotel top list mai nhi aaya to...lagta hai av kam karne ka waqt aa gya..hai…

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Anjan sakhs-samjhta kya hai khud ko aj clg nhi aaya kal btati hi usko..pyar se mna rhi thi na to nhi man rha tha par av kal dikhati hu usko...waise bhi mujhe uski sirf jarrorat hai jav tak mere classes coverup na ho jay fir btaungi bda attitude dikha rha tha aur wo ladki usko to chodungi nhi sali mujhse ladti hai….

Dono ko dekh lungi…


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Bhai log mega to nhi de paya but 1200 words ka diya hai…

Next update :day after tomorrow



Aaj ke liye itna hi



Aapka apna



Mayaviguru.

Awesome update bhai,
arya to bahot hi dangerous training ke liye gaya hai,
vahi idhar amtul se pathan ne kaha hai ki arya mara gaya hai,
udhar vo ladki kewal apne matlab ke liye aarya ke saath najdiki badhane ki kosish kar rahi thi,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
 

Mayaviguru

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Awesome update bhai,
arya to bahot hi dangerous training ke liye gaya hai,
vahi idhar amtul se pathan ne kaha hai ki arya mara gaya hai,
udhar vo ladki kewal apne matlab ke liye aarya ke saath najdiki badhane ki kosish kar rahi thi,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
Sath bne rahiye...av dhamakedar action suru honge
 

Mayaviguru

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Agla update aj rat ko 12 se 1 bje tak aayega...kyoki aj mera kuch dosto ke sath ghumne ka program hai to wapas aa kar dunga......
Aj apko desi vs chinese action dikhaunga.......tha hunt is on.....
 

Fighter

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Agla update aj rat ko 12 se 1 bje tak aayega...kyoki aj mera kuch dosto ke sath ghumne ka program hai to wapas aa kar dunga......
Aj apko desi vs chinese action dikhaunga.......tha hunt is on.....

Waiting for next bro
 

Mayaviguru

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Update 17

California



Diwal ke upar hote hi samne wala sakhs kaphi teji se meri traf bdha ..aur is pehle mai kuch samjh pata wo kuda aur uska ghutna mere chehre se aa lga aur mere hotho se lahu ki dhara beh nikli...is se pehle ki mai apne bchaw ke bare mai sochta wo mere upar chad gya aur danadan mukke barsane lga...av mujhe gussa aa rha tha par wo mere upar is trah baitha tha ki mere dono hath uske pao se dbe hue the aur wo danadan mukke barsaye ja rha tha….akhir mai maine apne pairo ka sahar liya...aur apna pair puri takat se utha kar jhatka…wo mere upar se ladkhata hua dur ja gira...maine teji se utha aur uski traf marne bdh hi rha tha tabhi announcement hui ...stop….

This is your first lesson...attacks never come with invitation they are always unexpected ...fight every battle not for success but for survival…


( ye tumhara pehla sabak h..humle kabhi nimtran dekar nhi aate..wo achanak hote hai isliye har pal teyyar rho..apni har ladayi ko jitne ke liye nhi jinda rehne ke liye lado)


Phir turant hi resume announce hua..


Mai isbar puri trah satark tha...ek bar fir se hum amne samne khade the...wo wapis teji se meri aur muda usne ek kick mari ...par maine turant hi furti se uska pair pakad kar chatak diya...wo niche gir kar dard se karhane lga...maine use uske hall mai chodkar diwal ki traf bdha..tabhi usne piche se mujhpar war kar diya…

Mere girte hi phir se announcement hua

Lesson 2 never show kindness to your opponent..

(Sabak 2 kbhi apne birodhi par daya mat dilhaw)


Resume…


Av mera matha garam ho chuka tha...avki bar maine apne ap ko defwnd krnw ki jagah attacka kiya ..maine pwhwl slide kar ke kick mari fir turant uski gardan ko apne hatho se bde pyar se marod kar tod diya. ….


Phir announcement hui


Battle one completed….

Tabhi room mai andhera ho gya.. And fir 5 min bad roshni hui…


Is bar mere samne ek doctor aur johen khde the..


Johen- You completed first battle…

Mai- thanks

Johen dr se give him a painkiller

Fir mujhse second battle will start after 6 hrs .

Aur bina kuch btaye mujhe wha chod kar chla gya..maine doctor se dwa li...aur na jane kaise mai so gya. .sayad ua dwa mai nind ki dwa bhi thi...waise bhi painkiller khane se nind to aati hi hai…


Jav mai utha to mai ek dusre room mai tha..maine dekha meri body par ek bullet proof jacket hai bagal mai automatic machine gun...pdi thi…




Mai samajh gya dusra round suru ho chuka hai...maine fatafat se machine gun uthayi aur charo traf dekhne lga..ye koi army bunker jaisa tha...maine sabse pehle apni position bdli aur gun ko laod kar ke..ek side mai chup gya tabhi mujhe ek red laser dikhayi di jo us jagah poin ho rhi thi jha mai pehle tha...mai samjh gya meri talash suru ho chuki hai...tabhi mujhe do aur laser beam dikhayi di...iska matlb ye tha ki is bar mera mukabla ek se nhi tin se tha...maine apne aap ko ek jagah set kiya...aur bde hi aram se apne target ko dgudne lga...wo tino tin direction se aa rhe...the agar mai kisi ek ko bhi goli marta to baki do ko pta chl jana tha aur meri mushkile badh jati ...isliye maine wait krne ka socha ...tab tak jab tak tino ek line mai nhi jate...wo pal aane mai jyada time nhi tha jab tino ekkathe ho gye...maone bina kuch soche trigger dba diya...aur tab tak fire krta rha jav tak meri goliya khatm nhi hogi…..


Fir kuch pal.shanti rahi...av mere pass goliya nhi thi...khali gun kis kam ki maine gun fek di aur bahar aa gya. Tabhi announcement hui…


Congratulations Mr Arya…


You are qualified....


Phir ek darwaza khula..jisme se johem bahar aaya aur bola follow me..


Mai bhi bina kuch soche use follow krne lga …

Wo mujhe ek room mai le gya..jha kaphi sare gadgets rakhe the..


Johen- av meri bat dhyan se suno…


Mai- yes sir


Johen--- jung jitne ke liye arms aur physical combat se jyada ..buddhi khatarnak hoti...hai...isliye planning is must ...kuch bhi kro plan it..


Mai- yes sir


Johen- point no 2 ye hai ki tumhara plan sirf tumko pta hona chahiye…


Mai- yes sir but agar meri koi team ho to kya unko


Johen- team ko sirf unka kam batao plan nhi…


Mai- yes sir..


Johen-,always take plan b and plan c...sirf ek ke bharose koi kam nhi hota ..aksar situation bdl jati hai jo expected hota h


Mai- ok sir..


Johen- pura ka pura underworld trust oar chlta hai...par mje ki bat hai ki yha kisi ka trust nhi kiya ja sakta…


Mai- mtlb


Johen- yha business trust par hota h..par koi apka business hathiyane ke lie kbhi bhi apka trustvtod sakta h...isliye bharosa kisi pr na kro..har chij ka double cross kro..


Mai- yes sir.


Johen- ye tha basic gyan...av bat aati hai tumhari training ki…


Mai - ok sir..


Johen- amtor par training suruwati umr se di jati h...agr av tumhe train krna suru kiya jaye to ek sal kya tuhe 5 sal lag jayenge…


Mai- sir fir kya karenge…


Johen- technology,


Mai- mtlb


Johen..tumhare kuch operation karne honge..


Mai- operations???


Johen - jaisa tumne dekha hoga kayi bar ankh ke bina fight krni padti hai us waqt tumhari aankhe tumhara ye kan bnte hai..par av tumhari wo age nhi ki tum apne kano ki sensation power jyada badhai ja sake...ialiye mai tumhare kano mai permanent amplification devicea lagwa rha hu..us device se tum choti se cjoti vibration ko bhi easily mehsosh kr paoge.


Mai - thanks sir


Johen- avi bhut kuch hai sikhne ko...agli class kal se hogi…



Aaj ke liye itna hi


Apka apna


Mayaviguru


Bhai log ajka update 1200 words ka diya hai...apna promise fulfilled.... Apna rebu dena..jaroor...abhi apun sone ja rha..chlta hai..

Aur ha Ramzan ki dher shari shubh kamnaye...khuda apko kdkti dhup mai pyas lagne se bchaye..aur aap humare thread par review dete jaye...
 

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