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Last date for posting reviews for the award of best reader is also increased, now you can post your reviews to feature in the best reader award till 15 th March 2023 11:59 Pm.You can also post your reviews After that deadline but they won't be counted for the best readers award. So Cheers.
 

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कहानी- वैलेंटाइन मम्मी के साथ
रचनाकार- IMUNISH महोदय

अब क्या ही कहा जाए इस कहानी के बारे में। मां बेटा जेनर की बहुत सारी कहानियां भरी पड़ी हैं इस फोरम पर।

फिर भी आगे की कहानी के लिए बेस्ट ऑफ लक।।
 

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Surgical Chudai

Pakistan ke army quarters me hamesha ki tarah is jumme bhi daawat h. Aur ye daawat General Bilal Azam ne apne bete ki nikaah ki khushi me di h. Unka beta Babar Azam army me hi colonel h to doosra beta Parvez Azam social activist.

General Bilal Azam Pakistan ke peshwar ke khandaani rahis gharane se h. Paiso ki unhe koi kami nahi. Bilal Azam apne pariwaar ke saath Peshawar me apni badi si kothi me rahte. Ye kothi Army Quarters se kuch hi doori pe h.

Daawat me Pakistan ke bade politicians aur kuch aala afsar bhi maujood the. Par daawat jinki shaadi ke liye rakhi gayi woh kahi nazar nahi aa rahe the. Babar apne kamre me baitha pareshaan tha aur wahi uski nayi begum bhi bahot chidchidi lag rahi thi.

Mujhe muaaf kardo, Gul. Main nahi jaanta tha is baare me. Agar jaanta hota to main kabhi nikaah nahi karta. Main sach kah raha hoo. - Babar

Ab iska koi matlab nahi h ke aap sach bol rahe h ya jhooth. Sach sirf itna h ke aapke aur mere beech ab miya biwi ki tarah koi rishta nahi ho sakta. - Gul

Ha main ek accha shauhar nahi ban sakta par hum dost to ban sakte h. Zindagi aisi hi guzar jaayegi. Aur khandaan ki badnaami bhi nahi hogi. - Babar

Ye aapke liye kahna bahot aasan h kyuki kami aapme h. Par mera kya, maine sapne sajaaye the woh sab chaknachoor ho gaye. Agar mujhme koi aib hota to aap mujhe ek jhatke me tallaq dedete par main woh nahi kar sakti. Mujhe yaha yuhi ghoot ghoot kar jeena hoga. - Gul

Babar bahut sharminda tha. Waise woh army me colonel tha aur duniyake liye mard tha par asliyat me woh ek namard tha. Suhaagraat se lekar do hafte bhar tak uska lund ek pal ke liye bhi nahi utha tha. Aur Gul isi se bahot gussa thi. Dono ne bahot koshish ki par uska lund kisi mare hue sapole ki tarah bejaan rahta. Shayad ye sab use lagi bandook ki goli ke wajah se tha jo border par India ne cross firing me ki thi.

Are tum log yaha ho, chalo jaldi. Sab tumhe pooch rahe h. Abbu ne kaha h aur unke orders to orders h - Parvez ne unke kamre me ghuste kaha

Jee bhaijaan. Hum aate h. Gul ne jaldi se khud ki num aankho ko theek kiya aur woh Babar ke saath army ke ground ke liye chal di.

Daawat me pahuch ke apni jhoothi smile se Gul thak si gayi thi. Use footfoot kar rona aa raha tha aur woh waha se washroom me chali gai. Usne washroom khola aur andar toilet me comod pe baith ke rone lagi.

Kuch aadhe ghante aise hi rone me beet gaye aur jab woh baahar aayi to usne dekha ke ek aadmi tauliya lapete hue adhnanga aaine me khud ko dekh raha h. Gul jo pahle se hi apna mood kharaab kiye hue thi, woh us aadmi pe chilla padi.

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Tumhe jara bhi sharam nahi h. Aise adhnange ghoom rahe ho aur woh bhi yaha - Gul

Aap hoti kaun h jo mujhse sawaal kare. Ulta sawaal mujhe aapse karna chahiye - Woh aadmi

Mujhse sawaal karoge. Besharmi ki bhi hadh hoti h. Ek aawaz lagaoongi to saare army wale tumhe itna maarenge ke pata bhi na chalega. Jaante ho main kaun hoo General Bilal Azam ki bahu. - Gul

Woh aadmi lekin uski baato ko nazarandaaz kartahua use upar se neeche dekhne laga. Ek 20-21 saal ki ladki doodh ki malai se safed. Uski bhoori aankhe, badami oth aur uske sharir ki banavat jo lakhnavi kapdo me ubhar kar aa rahi thi.

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Bade besharam ho. Niklo yahase, tum jaise mard jaanboojhke ladies washroom me aa jate h chedne. - Gul

Ohhooo to aap h Mr. Bilal Azam ki bahuraani, jinki haal hi me shaadi hui h. Aapki jaankaari ke liye bata doo ke ye Gents Washroom h aur aap galat washroom me aa gai h. Ha ab ho sake to chillaiye kyuke logo ko pata chale ke nayi bahu shaadi ke baad bhi dusre mardo ko taakne baahar me interested h - Woh aadmi

Kya bakte ho. Gul bolte hue use thappad maarne ke liye aage aayi par farsh gila hone ki wajah se uska pair fisla aur woh girti usse pahle us aadmi ne use apni baaho me pakad liya. Isi beech bachaav me uska tauliya neeche gir gaya aur woh underwear me apni baaho ko uske kamar me lapete khada tha.

Gul ne apni aankhe kholi to paaya ke woh us aadmi ke haato me h. Woh khadi hui aur apne aaspaas dekhne lagi. Use pata chal gaya ke ye sach kah raha h. Uski toh hawa gul ho gai.

Gul kuch kahti usse pahle us aadmi ne uske otho ko chumna shuru kiya. Gul use dhakel rahi thi par woh hatta katta aadmi na use chod raha tha na uske otho ko. Woh to jaise is ke otho ko kisi shahad ke tarah choos raha tha. Kuch der baad Gul ka zor thama aur woh uske otho ke saath taal milane lagi. Us aadmine uske otho ke saath saath uski sharafat aur haya bhi choos li.

Tabhi darwaze ke baahar kuch logoke aaneki aawaz aayi aur Gul ne ab use jorse door dhakela aur woh sharam ke maare andar shower room me jaldi se bhaagi.

Sameer tu abhi tak tayyar nahi hua, chal jaldi. - Parvez

Ha ho raha hoo bhai. Tum chalo. Main abhi tak nahaya bhi nahi hoo. Ek to dushman desh me aaya hoo. Upar se is army quarters me. Main to London se seedha Mumbai jaanewala tha tere zid pe yaha aaya hoo. - Sameer

Dushman aur main. Tera best friend hoo aur isi desh ka hoo samjha, Saand. Aur tujhe ghar aana nahi h. Abe hum to mehmaannawazi me sabse pahle h. Par tujhe ghar nahi aana toh tujhe yahi milega samjha ...staff washroom."

To theek h na chalega. Tum Pakistani logo ki khatirdaari poori leke hi jaaoonga aaj. - Sameer

Ab jaa fresh ho. Main tere liye naya tauliya laata hoo - Parvez

Sameer shower room me aaya to darwaze ke peeche khadi Gul ko dekh ke usne darwaza lagaya. Aur phir Gul ko apni aur kheech ke uske gaal aur gardan chomne laga.

Chee.. Chodo mujhe tumne mujhe samajh kya rakha h. Main koi bazaaroo nahi hoo .. Gul dheemi aawaz me boli.

Nahi ho tabhi to mere paas ho. Tum bha gayi ho mujhe. Tumhara husn aur ye garmi ufff Kahi meri jaan na lele - Sameer

Kisi ko pata chal gaya to tumhari laash bhi nahi milegi. Ek colonel ki begum aur General ki bahu hoo main. Tum aag se khel rahe ho. Chodo mujhe - Gul phir se chetavani dete hue use boli. Is baar gusse me.

Haai.. Aag se khela nahi to kya khela. Aur rahi baat laash ki to tum jaisi husn ko na chakha to zindagi bhi maut ki tarah hi h. - Sameer

Sameer ne ab uske choochiyo ko dabaya aur uske otho ko choomne laga. Gul aanakaani kar rahi thi par Sameer ki chaudi chaati, uske underwear ka foola hua hissa, uski baate aur uske bekhauff nature se woh prabhavit thi. Aur use apne otho ka woh raspaan kara rahi thi. Sameer ne ab uske zevar aur kurti ko utaar diya aur uske pajame ko bhi kholkar Gul ko sirf bra aur panty me khada kiya. Gul sharma gai aur uske seene se lipat gai. Sameer ne ab uske bra ka hook kholkar uske doodho ko azad kiya.

"Waah kya mast chuchiya h teri." Ye kahke woh unhe masalne laga aur apni laplapati jeebh se chatne laga. Uska ek haath ab uski panty me tha aur woh uske choot ke daane ko masalne laga. Gul mooh se siskiya bhar rahi thi aur Sameer use poora nanga kar raha tha. Sameer ab khud bhi nanga hua aur shower me jaake nahane laga.

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Gul use aur uske lund ko dekhke mohit ho gai thi. Babar ka lund to iska aadha bhi nahi tha. Gul besharmi se aage badhi aur Sameer ke kadmo me baithi aur uska Lund choosne lagi.

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Karib 10 minute ki rasdaar chusai ke baad Sameerne use goadme utha kar shower room ke basin ke platform pe bithaya. Uska lund Gulki kunwari choot ke darwaze ka muayana karne ke baad ek hi jhatke andar ghus jaata h. Gul cheekhne ke liye mooh kholti h par Sameer uska mooh apne otho se pahle hi lock karta h. Woh ek anubhavi khiladi tha. Uska har dhakka Gul ki choot me missile ki tarah ghus raha tha. Gul pahle to bahot chillayi par uski cheekh Sameer ke mooh me hi dab gayi.

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Karib aadhe ghante baad Gul ka dard kam hua aur woh Sameer ke dhakko ko enjoy karne lagi. "Chodo mujhe mere raja, main bahot tadpi hoo. Loot lo mujhe, bana lo mujhe apni raani".

Sameer uski choochiyon ko choos raha tha aur apni kamar poore speed se chala raha tha. Ab usne lund bahar nikala aur woh khud neeche farsh par let gaya. Gul uske lund pe baith gayee. Dono ek doosre ko rhythm me dhakke laga rahe the. Gul ki choochiyon ko Sameer masalte ja raha tha wahi Gul uske lund pe kisi randi ki tarah sawaari kar rahi thi.

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"Ye le raand, poora lele. Tujhe jee bhar ke chodunga"

Gul ab Sameer ke seenepe jhuk gayi aur uski chhaati ko choomne lagi. Uske nipple ko usi tarah choomne lagi jis tarah Sameerne uske nipple ko chooma tha. Sameer ab poore josh me tha usne apni tangei chaudi kar ke apni gand ko upar uthaya jisse uska lund Gulki choot ko chodne poora andar tak chodne laga. Karib 15 minute ki is chudai ke baad Gul jhad gayi aur Sameer bhi.

Gul ne aaj ek paraye mard, paraye mazhab aur dushman desh ke lund ko apni izzat dekar apni jawaani lutaayi thi to wohi Sameer ne bina army ke dushman ke ghar me unki bahu ki surgical style chudai ki.

"Sameer kya kar raha h yaar, jaldi kar" - Parvez ne tauliya darwaze ke upar rakha aur woh chala gaya.

Thodi der baad so bhi bahar aaye.
टिपिकल फोरम के लायक कहानी। कांसेप्ट अच्छा था, और ट्रीटमेंट भी।

रेटिंग 8/10
 

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Bete ka balidaan

Ek hasta khelta pariwar Sharma ji ka. Sharmaji Share market me vhapari the kai Saalon se aur accha khaasa paisa kama lete the. Unki dharam patni sulochna ek pativrata aurat aur dikhne me bhi bahar khoobsurat. In dono ka eklauta beta Sameer jo ki college ki padhai karaha tha. Ghar me koi baat ki chinta nahi thi. Bhagwan ki daya se sab kuch tha aur hasi khushi se din beet rahe the. Lekin wo kehte hai na ki bhagwan kab kismat me kya likhde koi bol nahi sakte. Wo chahe to pal bhar me sab kuch dede, yaa pal bhar me sab cheen le. Sharmaji ne share market me jis company pe sabze zyaada paisa lagaya tha wo company loss me chali gai. Uske share dhadadhad girne lage aur dekhte dekhte jaise Sharma ji ko bhari nuksaan hogaya. Nuksaan itna zyaada tha ka sharmaji kuch hi mahinon me karz me doob gaye. 20 lakh ka karz. Bete ki padhai bhi to chal rahi thi, ghar ka kharch. Sharma hi aur Unki patni gehri chinta me rehne lage. Ghar me maa baap ko pareshan dekh unka Sameer bhi chintit hone laga. Aakhir maa baap ne use itne laad pyar se paal pos ke bada kiya tha. Sharmaji ne faisla liya ki woh is ghar ko bech denge to paise aajayenge 40 lakh tak . Usse karz bhi chukadenge aur fir aage ki zindagi me bhi kaam aayenge. Lekin ye ghar unhone bade hi pyar se banaya tha. Ye baat unki patni aur beta bhi jaante the. Isliye sharma ji ko is faisle ke liye woh rokne lage. Lekin ab doosra raasta bhi kya tha. Sulochana apne sabhi zevar bech bhi de to bhi itne paison ka jugaad ha ho paayega. Bas isi kashmakash me din beet rahe the. Sameer ne ek din internet pe dekha ek ad. Kisi ameer aadmi ne Kidney Donor ke liye ad diya tha. Us aadmi ke ladke ko kidney donor ki zaroorat thi aur jo blood group chahiye tha wo Sameer ke blood group se match karta tha. Sameer ne turant us aadmi ko phone lagaya. Aur usse baat ki. Sameer ns kaha wo kidney donate karne ko tayyar hai par iske badle usko paise chahiye jo ki uske pitaji ka karz door karsake. Us aadmi ne bataya ki wo jitne chahe utne paise dene ko tayyar hai. Bahut din se kidney donor dhoondh raha tha wo. Deal hui 40 lakh ki. Lekin ye baat jab Sameer ne apne maa baap ko bataai to wo dono hairaan hogaye, is majbooree me sharmaji aur sulochana ki aankhon se ansoo nikal gaye. Ye kaise din aagaye the. Apni eklauti aulaad ko kidney bechna padh raha. Bahut samjhaya dono ne sameer ko, lekin sameer to mann bana chuka tha. Usne samjhaya ki insaan ek kidney pe bhi zinda reh sakta Hai. Aur fir jo paise milenge usse hamare sab karz door ho jaayenge. Usne apne maa baap se kasam leli ki usko ruko mat. Aakhir uska bhii kuch farz hai ghar ke liye. Sharmaji aur sulochna ko bete pe garv bhi tha par usko aise majbooree me kidney donate karte dekh ke jaise unke dil bhi to raha tha. Aakhir Sameer ko hospital le jaaya gaya jaha doctor ne pehle uska test kara aur agreement papers sign kare donor ke. Us Ameer aadmi ne operation se pehle hi 40 lakh dediye sameer ke pitaaji ko. Ek taraf paise milne ki khushi, doosree taraf apne hi bete ko kidney daan karte dekhne ka gham sharmaji aur sulochna ko sataaye jaaraha tha. Operation se pehle ek baar sharmaji aur sulochna sameer se milne gaye. Sulochna ne bete ka haath thaama ur kaha " tera yeh karz ham zindagi bhar nahi chuka paayenge beta" Sharmaji ne bhi bola ki bhagwan ne kismat se tujh jaisa beta humko diya hai. Tujhe jo chahiye hoga ham log zindagi bhar denge. Teree har khushi ka khayal rakhenge. Sulochna ne bhi kaha " tujhe jo chahiye mai doongee. Teree har khushi ka khayal rakhoongee beta". Tabhi doctor aaye aur sharmaji aur sulochana ki bole bahar jaane ko. Sameer ko operation theatre lekar chale gaye. Sameer ke dimaag me maa ki kahi wo baat jaise ab bhi ghoom rahi thi " teri har khushi ka khayal rakhoongee". Sameer ek agyakaree ladka tha. Apne maa baap ki bahut izzat kwrta tha. Lekin aakhir wo bhi jawan tha. Kuch do saal se na jaane wo apni maa sulochana se akarshit tha. Sulochana bhi to jaise dikhne me lajawab thi. 42 ki umar me bhi 35 ki lagti thi. Ekdam doodh jaisa gora rang. Lambe ghane baal kamar tak. Badi badi hiran jaisi aankhen, lambi teekhi naak, gulabee honth. Sthan jo ki blouse me bhi uber ubhre nazar aate the. Surahi jaisi gardan. Ekdam gori si kamar jispe side me ek fold padhta tha. Sameer to jaise bas apni maa ko ghar me taakta hi rehtaa tha. Haa bahut baar usko ye sab galat bhi lagta tha lekin ye umar hi aisi thi jab akarshan sahi aur galat ke faasle ko mitaa deta hai. Operation theatre me jaate samay bhi bas apni maa ke baare me hi sonch raha tha Sameer. Uski to bas ek hi iccha thi. Ki kaash wo apni maa Sulochana ke saath ek baar zindagi me jee bhar ke pyar karle. Haa bas ek baar. Chaahe fir bhagwan uski jaan bhi Le le to usko gham nahi tha. Sameer ko operation theatre me behoshi ka injection diya gaya. Yaha sharma ji aur sulochana bhagwan se prarthna karahe the ki sab kuch theek ho. Operation kuch ghanton tak chala. Sameer ki kidney nikal kar usko us aadmi ke bete ke liye rakha gayaa. Doctor sahab operation hote hi bahar aaye aur bole ki " ji operation theekraha. Abhi thodee kamzoree hogi. Par aap log bahut kismat wale ho jo aisa Nek beta mila hai. Is zamane me jaha bacche maa baap ko poochte tak nahi, sameer ne itna bada faisla sirf ghar ke liye, aap logon ke liye liya." Ye sun kar sharmaji aur sulochana fir se jaise ro pade aur daud daude sameer se milne pahunche. Wo so raha tha. Uske bagal me baithke sulochana apne bete ke mathe pe pyar se sehlane lagee. Formalities poori karne sharmaji doctor ke pass gaye . Ek do ghante baad hosh aaya Sameer ko. Sulochana uski aankhon ke saamne thi aankhen kholte hi. " ohh beta, uth gaya tu, kaisa hai abhi kamzoree hai na" . Sameer kuch bola nahi bas apni maa ko utni kareeb se nihaar raha tha. Uski kamzooree bhi mehsoos nahi ho rahee thi usko. " mere laal" bloke sulochana ne sameer ke maathe ko chooma. Apni maa ke honthon ka sparsh jaise sameer ko wo dard kamzoree sab kuch bhula rahaa tha. Wahi baithi rahi sulochana apne bete ko laad karte huve uska sar dabaate huve, aur sameer bas pyar se apni maa ko dekhe hi jaaraha tha. Kuch kehna chahtaa tha, par himmat nahi ho rahee tho usko.

Do din tak hospital me hi rehne ke baad doctor sahab ne bola ki aap sameer ko le jaasakte ho ghar lekin ghar par bhi ek do hafte araam ki zaroorat hai aur khayal rakha jaaye ki bete ko koi bhi stress na ho. Khushi se apne bete ko ghar ke gaye. Ghar pe hi 3 4 din area aram karta raha. Sharmaji ne sabhi karz chuka diye paise se aur bahut bada bojh jaise unke kandhon se utar gaya tha. Sulochana bhi din bhar sameer ki seva me lagee rehti thi. Lekin sameer bhi bas bistar pe leta leta apni maa ko hi niharte rehtaa. Ek din dopahar me. Sameer ne thodi himmat jutaayee aur jab maa usko khaana dekar room me jaarahi thi, sameer ne awaaz lagaayi. " suno na mummy" .... bete ki awaaz sunke sulochana ke kadam ruk gaye aur wo palat ke sameer ke pass aagayi. " has betaa kya baat hai". Sameer ko kuch kehne ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi. Par usne do din se himmat karke apne dil ki baat kaagaz pe likh rakhi thi. Wahi kaagaz usne jeb se nikal kar apni maa ko diya " mummy ye pls aap padh lena. Aur plss mujhpe gussa mat hona. Bas ye meri dil ki icha hai". Kaagaz lete huve sulochana Hairani se boli " arey beta aisi kya baat hai mujhe bata to. Isme likhne ki kya zaroorat. Tujhe kuch chahiye to mai ladoongee ya dilwadoongee na aur fir tere pitaaji ko bolke dikwadoongee"

"Nahi maa. Ye bas aapke liye Hai. Pls aap ek baar room me jaakar padh lijiye pls. " sameer bola. " accha baba padhtee hoon tu araam kar" bolke muskuraakar sulochana room se aagai apne kamre me. Usko kyaa pataa tha us kaagaz me kyaa likhaa tha. Wo araam se bistar pe baithkar Kagaz kholke padhne lagee to jaise uske pairon tale zameen khisakne lagi. Sameer ne jo likha tha shayad wo padhke kisi bhi maa ke hosh udh jaayenge. Sameer usse ek baar pyar karna chahta tha. Pyar jo ek mard ek aurat, ek pati apni patni se kartaa hai. Sulochana ka jaise gala sookh gaya. Uske maathe pe paseena aagaya. Us kaagaz me antim pankiyan kuch yun thi " maa mai jaanta hoon ki aap ye padhke bahut naraaz ho jaao, par mai aapki kitnee izzat kartaa hoon aap jaantee ho na . Par aap se akarshan mera mujhe chain se rehne nahi deta. Aap ki har baat manoonga maa zindagi bhar. Aap is icha ko naa bhi kardo to. Par haa mera dil zaroor toot jaayega. Aapka jo bhi faisla ho mujhe manzoor hai maa. Hamesha aapka Sameer".....

Ye padhke sulochana jaise bade dharam sankat me fas gai. Ek taraf uska saga beta jisne ghar ke liye itna kuch kiya tha aur doosre taraf uski ye icha jo ki paap tha us jaisi pativrata aurat ke liye aur fir sage bete ke saath aise kaise.... kya jawab doon mai sameer ko. Kyaa kahoon usko. Kaise haa kahoon. Na kahoon kaise usko. Uspe gussa bhi nahi narsaktee na hi ye baat mai uske pitaaji ko batasaktee. Sulochana bas yahi sab sonch me padh gai. Sameer aur sulochana ki is baare me baat nahi hui ek hafte tak. Ek ajeeb si dono ke beech jaise hichkichahat aagai thi. Insab se Sharma ji anjaan the.
Ye din tha 12 october 2022..
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Usse theek ek mahine baad 12 november 2022 ko dopahar ka drishya sharmaji ke ghar me...

Sulochana :: sshh, sameer betaa unhunn mat kar wahaa aadat nai unhunnnn

Sameer:: maa plss thoda hatao na saree plss mere liye

Sulochana: shaitan,unnn sunta kaha badmaash unnn darwaaza bandh karaa ki nahi.

Sameer: haa baba, bahar ki gate bhi bandh hai aur darwaaza bhi bandh hai ab to khush. Chalo ba mummy ab saree plss nikalo to kyun ab tadpaana

Sulochana:: unn nikaltee hoon na kitna utaawala horahaa... arey kheench mat ouch beta are uffoo arey

Sameer: hehe nahi rahaa jaataa mummy..

Sulochana:: arey aahhhh arey sameer.. nahi isshhhh ouchhh arey gudgudee hotee arey ouchhhh matt naiii aahh...........hmmmm...............


Sameer ki maa ki sareee, blouse petticoat sab bistar ke neeche pada tha. Sameer ka shirt pant bhi wahi neeche pada tha. Ghar se kuch kilometre door sharmaji apne office me share bazaar me aaye uchal se munaafe se khush the. Unhe kya pataa tha unke ghar pe kya chal raha hai. Sulochana ne jo faisla liya tha wo sahi ya galat ka sonchke nahi liya tha. Bas usne apne eklaute bete ki khushi ke liye liyaa tha. Sharmaji khush the. Sameer khush tha aur sameer ki khushi me uski maa ki khushi thi. Jab sab log khush ho ek faisle se to to kya sahi kya galat.
Sulochana aunty ka fesala ek dam sahi thi...bete ne jo is itani Kam age me jo maturity se khud ke parivaar ke liye Kiya tha...ye balidan de kar Sameer ghar ka sahi maino me mard ban Gaya tha aur maa ka to ye farj he ki ghar ke mard ko khus rakhe... sulochana thoda aur nakhare kar ke Sameer ki hoti to kahani ko Chand Chand lag jate.....
 

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Superbbb Storyyy. Isko bolte hai asli surgical strike. Aisi surgical strike ke baare mein naa toh kabhi dekha aur naahi kabhi sunna. Jabardasttt surgical strike ki hai sameer ne. Maza aagaya padhke.
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया. सच कहा है किसी ने तारीफ से दिल को बहुत अच्छा लगता है.
 

rathodka8inch

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टिपिकल फोरम के लायक कहानी। कांसेप्ट अच्छा था, और ट्रीटमेंट भी।

रेटिंग 8/10
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद.
 

Riky007

उड़ते पंछी का ठिकाना, मेरा न कोई जहां...
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बड़ी देर कर दी..!

धाड़... धाड़... धाड़... बरामदे में खुलने वाले दरवाजे पर किसी का तो दरवाजे पीटने की आवाज आयी। और उसी के पीछे किसी की मदत की गुहार की आवाज आयी।

"दरवाजा खोलिये। कृपया मुझे अंदर आने दो। कुछ गुंडे मेरा पीछा कर रहे हैं।"

रात के लगभग ग्यारह साढ़े ग्यारह बज रहे होंगे। गली एकदम सुनसान थी। मैं अगले दिन के केस पेपर्स की छानबीन कर रहा था। आवाज जानी पहचानी लग रही थी। शायद वही होनी चाहिए। गिरिजा... मुझे उसका रूप और खुले विचारों वाला स्वभाव बहुत पसंद था। मैं सही समय देख कर उससे शादी करने का प्रस्ताव रखने की सोच रहा था। अब वकीलगिरि में भी मेरी पकड़ मजबूत हो गयी थी। मुझे सरकारी अधिवक्ताओं के एक पैनल पर जगह मिल चुकी थी। फ़िलहाल घर संसार अच्छे से चलाने लायक प्रबंध यक़ीनन हो चूका था।

पर अब..? वह भी इस वक़्त मेरे दरवाजे पर क्यों दस्तक दे रही है...?

मैं उठकर दरवाजा खोलने ही वाला वाला था। उतने में मुझे दाईं ओर की खिड़की से बाहर देखने की जिज्ञासा या फिर दुर्बुद्धि जाग गयी। तीन-चार गुंडे घर के पास दौड़े आ रहे थे। उनके हाथों में चॉपर थे। एक के हाथ में पिस्टल थी। अगर मैंने जल्दी से दरवाजा खोलकर उसे अंदर लिया भी होता, तो भी वे उसे देख लेते। पहले से ही अर्धखुले दरवाजे को तोड़कर अंदर घुसने में उन्हें दो मिनट भी नहीं लगते।

वे शब्बीर भाई के लोग थे। पूरे इलाके में शब्बीर भाई से लड़ने की हिमाक़त किसी में भी नहीं थी, मेरे पसीने छूट रहे थे। मेरे पास जीने के लिए मेरा पूरा जीवन पड़ा था। मैं इन गैंगस्टरों के चॉपर का शिकार नहीं बनना चाहता था।

फिर से एकबार मेरा दरवाजा पिटा गया और उसके पीछे मदत की गुहार की आवाज आयी। इसके बाद एक संघर्ष और गाली-गलौज की आवाज आयी। घर के सामने एक चौपहिया वाहन के आने और रुकने की आवाज आयी। कार के दरवाजे के खुलने और बंद होने की आवाज आ रही थी। मैंने अपना धैर्य बटोरते हुए धीरे-धीरे दरवाजा खोलने की कोशिश की। स्ट्रीट लैंप की मद्धम रोशनी में वह कार में हाथ-पैर झाड़ती नजर आ रही थी। कार स्टार्ट हुई और आगे बढ़ गई। यही उसके जीवन की अंतिम झलक मुझे दिखी थी।

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बाद में उसे अगले दिन भीड़ भरे जमावड़े में देखा गया। मैंने अंदर जाकर देखा। वही थी.. बेजान, अस्तव्यस्त कपड़ों में उसे फेंका गया था। उसका चेहरा मेरी तरफ था। आँखें खुली। मैंने देखा तो उन आंखों में भाव थे। निर्भया के भाव।

ऐसा लग रहा था जैसे उसकी आंखें मुझसे कह रही हो। '..अब आप क्या तमाशा देख रहे हैं..? आप मुझसे शादी करना चाहते थे, है ना..? थू है तुम्हारी मर्दानगी पर।"

सभी को अंदाजा आ गया था कि क्या हुआ होगा। हर कोई निराश होने लगा। सभी को यकीन था कि यह काम शब्बीर भाई ने किया होगा। लेकिन जाहिर तौर पर किसी ने एक शब्द भी नहीं बोला। क्या पता, इस जमावड़े में शब्बीर भाई का कोई आदमी भी हो..? मैं पीछे हट गया। चारों ओर इकट्ठे हुए लोगों की दीवार को भेदती हुयी, मैं उन खुली आँखों को महसूस कर सकता था जो अभी भी मुझे घूर रही थी।

घर आया.. आईने के सामने जाने की मेरी हिम्मत नहीं हुई। आईने में मैं क्या देखना चाह रहा था..? एक कायर और डरपोक युवक जो अपनी प्रिय व्यक्ति को बचाने के लिए दरवाजा खोलने का सरल कार्य भी नहीं कर सका।

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पुलिस ने आकर पंचनामा किया होगा और शव को ले गई होगी। पोस्टमॉर्टम में बताया गया कि उसे बेरहमी से प्रताड़ित किया गया था, ऐसी उड़ती हुयी खबर मेरे कानों पर आयी थी। अबतक पुलिस वाले बेवारिस लड़की की आकस्मिक मौत के रूप में मामला दर्ज कर के मामले को रफ़ा-दफ़ा कर देती। लेकिन कभी नहीं तो इसबार शब्बीर भाई द्वारा बलात्कार और हत्या का गुमनाम पत्र पुलिस और मीडिया तक पहुँच गया। एक उच्च पोलिस अधिकारी जो अभी नया ही थाने में आयुक्त किया गया था और अभी तक शब्बीर भाई के प्रभाव में नहीं था, उसने शब्बीर भाई के ठिकाने पर जाकर उससे पूछताछ की। शब्बीर भाई का मगरुर उत्तर दर्ज किया गया था। भाई ने पड़ोस के घर के सबूतों को नष्ट करने की आवश्यकता भी महसूस नहीं की, जो खाली था लेकिन फ़िलहाल शब्बीर भाई के कब्जे में था।

कई परिस्थितिजन्य सबुत मिले। घर के सामने लगे सीसीटीवी कैमरे में गिरिजा के घर के बगल के दरवाजे से गुंडों से बचने के लिए भागने की रिकॉर्डिंग मिली। शुरू में, गुंडे बहुत पीछे थे। लेकिन उन्होंने तेजी से दौड़कर उसे पकड़ लिया होगा। आख़िरकार पुलिस को रेप और हत्या का केस दर्ज करना पड़ा। सत्ताधारी दल की छाव में पनपनेवाले शब्बीर भाई पर आरोप लगाने के लिए सुरक्षित दूरी से पत्रकार धीरे धीरे साहस दिखाने लगे। लेकिन फिर भी शब्बीर भाई को गिरफ्तारी पूर्व जमानत मिल ही गई।

समय बीतता गया, इस मामले का मुक़दमा अदालत में खड़ा हुआ। मैं आरोपों को साबित करने के लिए सरकारी वकील के रूप में खड़ा रहा। एक सरकारी वकील नौकरी के हिस्से के रूप में मामलों को लड़ता है। शब्बीर भाई को उनके समर्थकों ने यकीन दिलाया होगा कि आरोपी से उनकी कोई निजी दुश्मनी नहीं होती है, सिर्फ वो अपना काम करते है। कम से कम मेरी तो जान बक्श दी जा रही थी। मुझे निजी तौर सख़्त हिदायत दी गई थी कि भाई के आरोपों को साबित करने के काम में ज्यादा जोश दिखाना नहीं है। पुलिस से लेकर जज तक शब्बीर भाई पर मुकदमा चलाने से डरते थे।

शब्बीर भाई का बचाव कर रहे प्रख्यात वकील देशमुख ने कहा कि चूँकि शिकायत शुरुआत में गुमनाम थी, इसलिए पुलिस को इस पर ध्यान देने की कोई जरूरत नहीं थी। मैंने जज साहब को तर्क दिया कि शब्बीर भाई के आतंक, उसके इतिहास और आगे की जाँच में मिले सबूतों के कारण गुमनाम पत्र की नोटिस सुओ मोटो तौर पर लेनी आवश्यक हो गयी होगी। अंत में, देशमुख के दावों को अदालत ने खारिज कर दिया। नहीं तो मुझसे ज्यादा हिम्मत के साथ मेरे द्वारा भेजे गए गुमनाम पत्र का बचाव कौन करता..??

लेकिन मेरा उत्साह देखकर शब्बीर और उसके साथी काफी परेशान दिख रहे थे। बाद में, पहली मुलाक़ात में, मैंने जाँच पुलिस अधिकारी से कहा कि मेरी जान को ख़तरा है। भाई के रूखे दुर्व्यवहार से उन्हें भी दुःख हुआ था। उन्होंने मेरे लिये सही से व्यवस्था की। इस सुरक्षा के कारण यद्यपि शब्बीर गिरोह दूर रहने लगा क्योंकि वे कोई और लफड़ा नहीं चाहते थे, फिर भी वो मुझे शत्रु समझने लगे।

हालांकि मैं गिरिजा को बचा नहीं सका, लेकिन आंशिक रूप से इसकी भरपाई करने के लिए, दोषियों को सख्त से सख्त सजा देकर उसको न्याय दिलाना मेरा लक्ष्य बन गया था। मैंने अदालत में यह बताना शुरू किया कि प्रत्येक परिस्थितिजन्य सबुत शब्बीर भाई पर अपराधी के रूप में उंगली उठा रहे है। अखबारों में भी इसका प्रचार जोर शोर से होना शुरू हुआ और जो लोग पहले डरते थे, वे लोग भी अब शब्बीर भाई के खिलाफ खुलकर बोलने की हिम्मत करने लगे।

इसके विपरीत उनके वकील देशमुख का बचाव अलग तरीके से चल रहा था। उन्होंने इस बात से इनकार नहीं किया कि उस घर में रेप या फिर मर्डर हुआ था। लेकिन उस घर का शब्बीर भाई से कोई लेना-देना नहीं था। गिरिजा वहां खुद अपने एक यार को मिलने के लिये आयी थी। उन्होंने तर्क दिया था कि उसके यार ने पहले उसे भोगा और फिर जब गिरिजा ने उससे शादी की बात कही इसलिए उसके यार ने उसकी हत्या कर दी होगी। उन्होंने जोर देकर कहा कि सरकारी वकील इस तथ्य का फायदा उठा रहे थे कि हत्या का कोई चश्मदीद गवाह नहीं था और अपने निर्दोष पीड़ित को फंसा रहा है।

इसके लिए उन्होंने कहा की गिरिजा को जबरन उठा ले जाते हुए देखने वाला कोई गवाह नहीं था। कोई तो रहा होगा जिसने गिरिजा को उसके घर से मेरे घर की ओर भागते देखा होगा, या कार में घर से निकलते देखा होगा। लेकिन इस तरह गवाही देने की हिम्मत कौन करेगा…? अगर मैंने ऐसा कहा तो क्या होगा…?

तो मैंने इसे पहले क्यों नहीं कहा…? मेरे लिए भूमिकाओं को बदलना और वकील से गवाह बनना कितना उचित होगा…? शायद इससे मामला और कमजोर होता। और फिर...... शब्बीर भाई और मैं बच जाते जाते। पुलिस कब तक मेरी रक्षा करेगी…?

यह कहने के बाद कि उनकी बात का खंडन नहीं किया जा रहा है, सामने के वकील ने इस पर और जोर देना शुरू कर दिया। उन्होंने उन गवाहों को सामने लाना शुरू कर दिया जिन्होंने यह साबित करने के लिए झूठ बोला था कि गिरिजा का किसी के साथ अफेयर चल रहा था।

जज साहब को भी शब्बीर को बरी करने के लिए कोई ठोस कारण चाहिए ही था। एक दो दिन पहले, ऐसी फुसफुसाहट शुरू हुई कि कुछ पैसों का पाकिट उनके पास पहुंच गया है।

अंत में, यह ऐसा था जैसे श्री जज साहब ने मुझसे जिरह करने के लिए प्रश्न पूछ लिया।

"सरकारी वकील महोदय, गिरिजा का घर और हत्या की जगह एक दूसरे के करीब नहीं थे। चलने में कम से कम 15-20 मिनट की दूरी थी। अगर वह अकेली नहीं चल रही थी और गुंडे उसके पीछे कुछ दूरी पर थे, तो फिर पीड़ित महिला किसी से मदद मांग सकती थी। इतने घर बिच में हैं। वह किसी का दरवाजा खटखटा सकती थी। तो उसने ऐसा क्यों नहीं किया...? देशमुख की बात को खारिज क्यों किया जाए...?"

मैंने अपना सिर दुःख से और शर्म से झुका लिया। 'जज साहब, उसने किसी और का नहीं बल्कि मेरा दरवाजा खटखटाया। लेकिन मैं ऐसा किस मुँह से कह सकता हूँ...? क्या मैं अपनी नामर्दगी खुद ही स्वीकार कर लूँ...?'

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अब मेरी शादी हो चुकी है। रात में कभी-कभी दरवाजे पर दस्तक सुनाई देती है। मैं दौड़कर जाकर दरवाजा खोलता हूँ, लेकिन बाहर कोई नहीं रहता। मेरी पत्नी मुझे अविश्वास से घूरती रहती है, 'कहीं मुझे पागलपन का दौरा तो नहीं पड़ गया।'

और उसी पल मेरे कानों में फुसफुसाहट सुनाई देती है.......

"बड़ी देर कर दी वकील साहब, मिस्टर रवि, आपने बड़ी देर कर दी।"

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Capt. Vikram Shorey,
Rajputana Regiment,
Batch ****.

Mein Capt. Vikram aur aaj mein Kai salo se dil ke boj tale dabi wo bat share krne ja rha hu jiski wajah se mein aaj mere pahle pyar jiske liye mene jeene-marne kasme kha rkhi thi, meri JAAN meri INDIAN AARMY.

Aap sab soch rhe honge ki kese ye sab hua, kya usme meri galti thi ya kya tha to dosto aap hi iss pure vakya ko padh ke jarur batayega ki asal me mein sahi tha ya galat.

Bat un dino ki hai jab meri posting kashmir me hui thi. Mujhe naya naya captain banaya gya tha to aek jimmedari bhi thi aur umar bhi aesi thi josh se bhari hui. Mere sath mera puarana yaar vishmbhar rane jiske sath hi mene aarmy ki training start kri thi uski bhi posting mere sath hui thi. Kai bar rule ke khilaf bahar tafri krne nikal jate yha wha vardi ka rof jamate aur fir kisiko pata na chale wese wapis aa jate the.

Par aek din jab ghum-fir ke wapis aa rhe tho humare base camp pe pas hi bala ki khubsurat aek ladki dikhi. Chand jesa safed chahera, wo surkh gulabi honth upar se cury badan pe tight salwar-kamiz abhi bhi wo nazara mere aankho me hub hu chhapa hua hai. Meri usse nazar hi nhi hat rhi thi aur na hi wha se hata ne ka man tha par vishmbhar ne kha chal jaldi warna gadbad ho jayegi... to mujhe na chahte hua bhi wha se chalna pda.

Fir kya tha ankho me nind aa rhi thi na dil me chen, bas usika khayal dil ko machode ja rha tha sach batau to us din mein, mera dil aur mera lund teeno puri rat uss ladki ki yaad me hi khoye huw the. Dusre din subah bhi jab routine military check ke liye nikle to meri aankhe usse hi dhundhne me lagi hu thi aur vishmbhar bhi sabko ye bol rha tha ki "Aaj vikram sir apne personal terrorist ki talash me hai" aur meri khinch rha tha.

Rat hui aur pata nhi wo mera luck tha ya koi sanyog par me aur vishmbhar camp ke pas ped ke niche beth kar cigarette pi rhe the tbhi wo ladki ha wohi ladki jisne kal rat se mere hosh uda rkhe the to daud kr humare hi pas aarhi thi me thoda vichlit hua tbhi vishmbhar bola be yeto tere wali hai na dekh yhi aa rhi hai.

Mujhe bhi phle to aankho ka dokha laga par wo samne aayi aur rote hue hume binati krne lagi ki wo yhi pass me rehti hai aur uske abbu ki tabiyat bahot kharab lag rhi hai aur use hospital le jane me humari madad chahiye. Hum turat khade hue aur apni jeep nikali aur use bethne ko bola aur turant jeet uske ghar le gaye, uska ghar camp ke pas hi tha aur me man me hi bhut khush ho rha tha ki machali samne se jal me fasne aa rhi thi.

Hum turant niche utne aur ghar me ja ke uske abbu ko utha kar jeep me bethaya aur pas hi ke hospital me dakhil karwaya, doctor ne bataya ki heat attack aya tha aur sabko batate wese bataya ki acha hua jald yha pahuch gye warna hum bacha hi pate. Shaziya ha us ladki ka nam shaziya tha mujhe hospital counter pe form bharte waqt pata chala, usne wo hume bhagwan hi man liya aesa lag rha tha rote rote bol rhi aapka bahut bahut shukriya agar aap log madad nhi krte to kash mere abbu jiske siwah mera is duniya me koi nhi unka... aur ro padi.

Mene mauke ka fayda uthate hua usse kandha diya aur kaha shaziya ye to humara farz hai aur aage bhi tumhe jab bhi jarur pade mujhe bezizak call krna, au mene apna number usko de diya. Wese hume personal phone kam hi use krne ko bola jata hai lekin aaj ye mauka to me nhi jane de skta tha :D.

Fir mene shaziya ko bola ki abhi hum ja rhe hai par kal subhah fir ayenge agar kbhi bhi kuchh bhi jarurt pade me aek call ke hi duri par hu.

Me aur vishambhar camp vapis aagye the par aaj se to kal se bhi jyada kushi thi aaj to us mulayam hatho ko chhua tha aur chand se chere ko kandha diya tha uski ki yaado me kab nind aagyi pata hi nhi chala. Subah jaldi uth kar mein hospital pahuch gye wha doctor ne kha ki shaziya ke abbu naseer shaheb ko thode din yhi rkhna pdega aur jab sab normal ho jayega to leave mil jayegi.

Me shaziya se mila aur usse bataya ki kuchh paiso ki bhi zarurt hoto bezizak bataye par usne kha ki abbu ki savings hai abhi to koi jarurt nhi. Fir humne canteen me sath me khana khaya aur me wapis duty ke liye nikal gya. Aese hi aek do hafte mera yhi routine chala us bich naseer saheb se bhi bate hue, shaziya ne unko bataya ki meri wajah se hi aaj wo bach paye hai. Naseer saheb ne bhi mera bahut shukriya kra.

Aese hi ab shaziya se mulaqat hone lagi hospital me hi sahi lekin ab mera aur uske dhage dhire dhire bunane lage the aur thode din me naseer saheb kobhi hospital se leave mil gyi aur wpis ghar aa gye ab mera shaziya se mila kam ho gya tha par me naseer saheb ki tabiyat janne ke banane kbhi kbhi shaziya se milne chala jata tha.

Par aek din jab me shaziya ke ghar pahucha aur andar ja kar naseer saheb ko dundh ne laga tbhi shaziya aayi aur boli vikramji abbu to dukan gaye hai apko boli to thi ki wo sham ko hi lautate hai, to mene kha par me unse hi thodi tumse bhi to milne ata hu tum to hona yha. Wo boli achhaji mujhse bhi milne aate ho... mene kha to fir tumhe kya laga tha. wo sharma gyi aur boli aap bethiye me badhiya sa kahwa banake lati hu.

Me thodi der betha tbhi shaziya do cup garma garm kahwa layi aur mere pas aakr beth gyi. Mene aek chuski kahwe ki li aur bol wahh shaziya bilkul tumari tarah aekdam stunning banayi ho, wo muskura gyi aur boli "Dhanywad, wese mujhe tajjub hua ki aapko mebhi itni stunning lagti hu". Me bola kyu nhi itni khubsurat ladki mene apni life me kbhi nhi dekhi aur upar se itni sanskari aur family ka itna dhyan rkhne wali, sach khu to kash mujhe aesi mil jaye meto shadi hi krlu usse. Mene bato bato me hi bol diya.

Shaziya bhi uski tarife sun kr attract ho rhi thi aur usi feeeling me mene apni pahla kadam chalaya uske hath pe hath rkhke bola sach me saziya tum bhut khubsurat to allah ne apni fursat me tumhe tarasha hoga tbhi aesa chand ka tukda mujhe aaj dekhne ko mil rha hai.

Wo kuchh bol hi nhi rhi thi sirf sun rhi thi aur sharmaye ja rhi thi ussi bich ussne apne surf hoth mere hotho pe rakh diye mujhe bhi pata nhi chala kese hum dono aek dusre me kho gye. Me uske hoth chus rha tha jese aaj ke bad mujhe kbhi milne nhi wale hai hum dono ki lar ark dusre me ghulmil rhi thi uski hum dono lagbhag 5 se 6 min tak chuste hi rhe fir thodi der ane honth alag krke aek dusre ki ankho me ankhe dal kar dekh rhe the, wo pyaar wo junoon dikh rha tha dono me.

Thodi der bad fir se humare honth aek dusre me lipt gaye, Mere tha uski pith ko sahla rhe the aur mujhe bhi mehsus ho rha tha ki shaziya bhi garam ho rhi hai. Mene uski gard pe chuna start kr diya aur halke se love bite de rha tha aur wo bhi madhosh ho rhi thi. Mere se to ab rha hi nhi ja rha tha meine uske salwar ko thoda upr kra aur uski nabhi ko chumne laga aur sath sath me mere hath uske mummey ko upr se hi sahla rhe the, wo bhi mere balo ko sahla rhi thi. Thodi der me mere khichne se uski salwar fat gyi, hume uspe dhyan na dete hue usko dur kara ab shaziya bas bra aur kamiz me thi mene pichhe apna hath le jake uski bra ko unhook kra, uff kya nazara tha auke do bhare hue kabootar aazad ho gye the uske mote gol gore gore mummo ko dekh meri aakhe moti ho gyi.

Me to turat usse dabod liya aur aek mumme ke gol brown nipple to ab tight ho gye the usse chusne aur katne laga aur dusre sath se dusre mumme ko masal rha tha, Shaziya halki halki siskiya bhar rhi thi aur mujhe bina roke enjoy kr rhi thi. Ab mene apne kapde utar diye aur shaziya hath meri chaddi me le gya aur usee bola dekh shaziya kitna garam kr diya hai tumne isse ab rha nhi jata isse shant krna pdega tumhe, wo sharma gyi aur boli vikramji sab aapka hi hai abse jab chaho shant karwa lena aur mere gale se lag gyi.

Mene shaziya ko sofe pe leta diya ho dhire se uski kamizho uatar aur uske upr aakar uski nazuk gulabi halke balo wali chut ko chatne laga aur apni jeebh adar bahar karne laga, Uski itni tight chut thi ki meri jeebh bhi abdar bahar ho rhi tbhi wo jor jor ki siskiya bhar rhi thi thodi der chut chatai ke bad ab karna tha gamasan war. Mene apna hathiyar hath me liya aur sirf thuk lagake shaziya ko pahla zataka dene ko ready tha, uski chut pe mene apna lund set kra aur phle dhakke meri uski chut me mene apna adha lund ghusa diya wo chikh padi mene uska kuchh na sute hua dusre jatke me pura lund adar dala diya aur halke halke se dhakke lagana start kr diya.

Dhire Dhire dhakke ki speed badh rhi thi aur shaziya ki chikhe bhi sikskiyo me badal rhi thi, Thodi der aesa hi chalta rha aur fir hum dono jad gye mene apna lund bahar nikala aur sara maal uske mummo par dal diya, aaj shaziya nhi balki mere hi intiative tha wo bas mera sath de rhi thi par uska yeh pahli bar tha isliye mene jyada kuchh na krke bas mutual enjoy tak hi simit rkha.

Hume dono hanf rhe the aur fir dono lipt gye aur aek dusre me sama gye, Thodi der bad shaziya jat se uthi aur boli vikramji chaliye aap jaiye abbu kbhi bhi aate honge me sab saf safai kar leti hu. Mene usko baho me bhar liya aur bola shaziya sach batana tumhe maja aya ya nhi wo boli ha bahut maja aya, I love you. Mene kha sach me, i love you too meri jaan. Wo boli jab se apne meri aur abbu ki help kri tab se hi me apko pasnd krne lagi hu par apko kbhi bata nhi payi thi. Mene bola shaziya aajse tu meri hai aur teri haar pareshani meri aur thodi der aese hi lipte rhe.

Bad me mene apne kapde pahne aur jate hue uske mathe pe aek chumma dete hua bola Love you jaan, ab to aesi mulaqat hoti rhegi aur dono muskura gaye. Aur me bahar nikl gya me aaj bhut khush tha kyuki jis ladki ki mene chah kri thi usko mene pa liya tha aur mujhe laga tha ki ab kya chahiye life me sab to mil gya hai aek satisfaction ki feeling aa rhi thi.

Mera chahera bhi khila khila sa rehne laga tha, Mene jo hua sab vishmbhar ko bata diya tha aur wo bhi kush tha mere liye. Ab se roj dopahr ko me shaziya ke wha jata kbhi ghanto bate karte to kbhi ghanto tak aek dusre me kho jate the, ab to shaziya bhi input dene lagi thi to me ab double khush ho gya tha.

Aese hi 3 se 4 mahine bit gaye par aek din mujhe upr se order aya ki meri posting agle mahine rajathan hone wali hai. Me thoda bechen ho gya mene shaziya se bat kri wo boli abhi abbu ki tabiyat itni bhi acchi nhi hui, kahi humari bat kri to unko fir se kuchh ho na jaye. Mene shaziya ko bola me tumare biger nhi reh paunga tum mana krogi to me aarmy bhi chhod dinga par tumhare sath hi rahunga. (Mere par shaziya aur uska pyar itna havi ho gya tha ki mene aarmy chhodne tak ki bat keh di thi)

Shaziya boli nhi tum aarmy mat chhodna me kuchh sochti hu mujhe aap thoda time do, mene kha jo karna jaldi karna waqt nhi hai humare pass aur me wha se chal diya.

Aek do din me usi uljan me fasa tha ki kya kru aur kya nhi, mene upr bhi posting ke regarding bat kri par wha se saf inkar aya. Mujhe kuchh suj nhi rha tha aur uski me aek do din shaziya se milna bhi nhi hua.

Agle hi din mene socha ki shaziya se bat krta hu kya pata usne abbu se bat kri ho, Me shaziya ke ghar pahicha par mene dekha wha tala tha. Mene turat shaziya ko phone ghumaya par wo out of network coverge aa rha tha. Me aur dar gya mujhe laga khi naseer saheb ko shaziya ne humare bare me bataya hoga aur wo humara rista nhi chahte honge to shaziya ko leke khi aur chale gaye honge.

Mene hadbahat me vishmbhar ko call kiya aur use turant shaiziya ke ghar ke pas bulaya aur sab bat batayi. Fir Hum aaspas ke sabhi area me ghume aur shaziya ko dundh ne lage ki kash wo mil jaye jese time bit rha tha wese-wese mera dimag bhi kam krna bandh kr rha tha.

Bhut rat ho gyi thi dundhte dundhte aur vinshbhar ab mujhe kunch kar camp pe wapis le aya. Mujhe bhi ab shaziya ke milne ka koi mauka nhi dikh rha tha, meri ankhe lal ho rkhi thi subah se kuchh khaya nhi vishmbhar thoda sa dudh leke aya par mene mna kar diya kyuki nahi mujhe bukh lag rhi thi nahi pyas. Puri rat me yhi sochta rha ki shaziya kha hogi, mujhe firse milegi bhi ya nhi.

Subah mein akela fir se nikal pada aur dopar tak usse dundha yha wha sab jagah, tbhi mere phone pe call aya ki mujhe base camp bula rhe hai. Me jat se camp pahucha wha bahut afra-tafri machi hui thi. Mene aek subedar se puchha to unhone bataya ki humre secret ammo base compromise ho gya hai aur wha pe aabhi hamna hua tha aur humre 4 officer ki on site death ho gyi hai aur kai ghayal hai.

Meri fat ke char ho gyi kyuki vishmbhar aur meri dono ki duty thi aaj wha pe kuchh checking krne jana tha aur me subah se shaziya ko dundh rha tha par vishmbhar wha gya hoga, mene turat jeep nikali aur wha ki aur chal pata wha pahuchte hi dhua, afra=tafri aur bhagdaud ke bich mene aek officer ko puchha ki vishmbhar sir kha se to wo nichi aawaj me bola sir... sir wo ab nhi rhe. Mere halak se na aawaj nikl rhi thi na chikh, me whi beth gya mujhe laga ki kash me vishmbhar ke sath hota to aesa nhi hota.

Tbhi mujhe call pe bola gya ku mujhe turant upr reporting karna hai, Me tuat head office pahucha wha sab upri officers ne bataya ki RAW ke sutro ke anusar tumhari wajah se apni secrect base compromised hui hai aur isiliye tumne suspend kiya jata, tumhe abhi isi waqt sab documnets and uniform sumbit karke aarmy camp chhodna hoga.

Meri kuchh samjh nhi aarha tha, me turant apne colonal anubhavsinh joki mere mentor the unke pas gya aur usko puchh ki sir ye sab kya hai apko to pata hai ki me kitna desh bhakt hu aur me kbhi bhi aesa nhi krunga chahe mujhe marna hi kyu na pade. Wo bole me janta hu vikram par tumhe kya pata hai ki tumhare sath dokha hua hai wo shaziya jiske pichhe tum pade the aur yha to sab ko pata hai ki tum dono ke bich kya kya gul khil rhe the, RWA ko shak hua hai ki wo dusre dekh ki jasoos hai aur tumhare throug hi ye sab hua hai. Tum abhi sab shant hone do mujhe pata hai ki isme tumhari koi galti nhi hai par ab tumpe court caes chalega whi sab dekehnge, dekho me tumhari puri help krne ki try krunga lekin abhi me kuchh nhi kr skta.

Mere to pairo take jameen khishk gyi thi abhi jisko dilo jan se pyar krta tha jisko dundhne ke liye jammen-assamn aek kar diya tha, jiske liye me apne pahle pyar aarmy tak ko chhodne ko taiyar tha usne hi mujhe dhokha diya. Mujhe abhi bhi yhi lag rha tha ki RAW ne pkka nhi kha unko bas shak hai par mujhe andar se pata tha ki jab mein aur shaziya aek dusre me mil jate the tab mujhe kuch hosh nhi rehta tha aur wo jo puchti me batate chale jata tha kyuki mujhe uspe itna vishvash ho gya tha jitna mujhe khud pe kbhi nhi tha.

Me jiske pas aek hafte phale sab tha, aarmy ki acchi post ka officer jiske pasaek husn pari jesi gf thi aur aek har waqt sath dene wala dost. Aur aaj Wo husn pari jisne mera sab chhin liya mera pyar, mera dost aur meri naukri... Do gante bad me apne kapde pack krke ghar ki train me nikal pada.

Ghar aane se pahle sab ko yhi bola tha ki lambi chhuti leke aarha hu apse milne. Maa se milne ke bad thodi shanti mili lekin abhi bhi vishmbhar, shaziya aur meri wardi mere man se ja hi nhi rhi thi. Thode din aese bartaw kra jese kuchh hua hi nhi par kab tak fir maa aur family me sab ko bataya sab ne support kara wohi to family hai aaj pata chala ki 'family is alway their for you in your good or bad'.

Thode din aese hi bite court se order aya, case ke silsile me mein anubhav sir se mila unhone ne upr bat kri aur RAW ne bhi tab tak sare reports jama kar liye the. Aarmy Court me meri peshi hui sab reports ko dekh yhi samne aya ki shaziya aek jasoss thi jisne mujhe fasaya yani mera honeytrap kiya tha par aarmy ke rule ke hisab se me kisi ko bhi yha tak ki apni family walo se bhi secret share nhi kar skta joki mene kiye the to us hisab se mujhe saja to honi thi par mere purane records aur medal kode nazar me rkhte hua aur anubhavsir ke recomandation par mujhe 6 month ki jail aur aarmy barkhast bhi kar diya gya.

Mujhe iss bat ka dukh nhi tha ki mene shaziya se pyar kiya aur usne dokha diya mujhe uss bat ka bahut affsos hai ki mene jisko jan se bhi payari mana tha uss wardi ko dokha diya tha.

Kya shaziya galat thi, kya mera pyar galat tha ya mehi galat tha. Kbhi kbhi to mujhe lagta hai ki kya mene shaziya ki aankho me jo pyar dekho wobhi galat tha kyuki agar me usse dundhne nhi jata to shyad me bhi vishmbhar ke sathh hota.

Aaj bhi vishmbhar ka chehra mujhe rat rat bhar sone nhi deta hai. Me abhi anubhav sir ki recomandation se training institut me trainer hu. Family wale bahut force kar rhe hai lekin ab pyar shabd se hi nafrat si hone lagi hai.

Khair kai salo se dil pe boj liye betha hu socha ki aa isse sabdo me utar hi du, Me aek writer to nhi isliye apni pen se nhi balki apni feeling se likhne koshish kri hai,apke jawab ke itezar rahega.


Ex Capt. Vikram Shorey,
Singing Off.



(Hi, Kiara Roy here. Me koi professtional lekhika nhi hu par apni aur se puri try ki hai taki aap iss kahani ko enjoy kar sako, iski feeling ko samjh sako. Kahani me captain vikram ne aek sawal puchhe hai to unko unka answer dene ki try jarur krna, Thank you:heart:!)
सब्जेक्ट अच्छा है कहानी का, पता नही कितने जवान हर साल इस हनी ट्रैप में फस कर अपनी जिंदगी तबाह कर लेते हैं। इस कहानी में विक्रम तो फिर भी प्रेम के ठगा गया, कई तो अपनी ठरक में देश से गद्दारी करते हैं। फिर भी विक्रम जैसे लोगों को बहुत ही सावधान रहने की जरूरत है।

ट्रीटमेंट थोड़ा और अच्छा हो सकता था, और कियारा जी इस फोरम पर प्रोफेशनल राइटर शायद ही कोई हो, प्रोफेशनल पैसे के लिए काम करते हैं। कोशिश अच्छी थी आपकी।

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An Adultery Story of Cancer Affected Husband's Wife

The Story is going around three character, Mr. Arun Roy, his wife Mrs. Monisha Roy (who will later become Mrs. Monisha Sen) , and his best friend cum family friend Mr. Rabi Sen. Arun and Monisha had a love affair before marriage. But their family didn't allow them to get married because they belong to a different caste. So, they planned to run away from their respective houses to get married. Arun's best friend Rabi helped them to abscond. Then they married at a temple with the help of Ravi. Their families are against their marriage. So, they became separated from their respective families, and started to live together happily.

Arun gets a private job with an average salary, but they still manage to run their small happy married family, as we all know when there is love, there is a will to be happy. On the other hand, Rabi is doing a high paid salary job, and has good financial stability. Sometimes Rabi helped Arun by giving him money as a loan. Rabi becomes the only relative of them who always stood with them in every situation. Also Rabi is a single bachelor.

After some days, Arun and Monisha become parents of a baby girl. They give their daughter's name as Pari. Everything was going well, but Arun got cancer. After receiving a biopsy test report, they came to know that Arun was in his advanced stage of cancer. Arun had very few times to live his life. Monisha was broken down, as was Rabi. But Arun took a hard decision for the sake of his family. He told Ravi to take responsibility for Monisha and his daughter Pari. At first Ravi didn't agree with Arun on his weird proposal, he refused it. But Arun made him understand his point of view.

Arun asked Ravi about who will take care of his wife and daughter after his death? His family needs a secure shelter, which Ravi only can provide them. Ravi is bachelor single, Monisha is too much beautiful girl with decent nature, what else Ravi wants from a girl as his future wife? After a lot of cross-argument, Ravi finally agreed. Arun then convinced his wife Monisha after a long and plenty of cross-arguments. Arun made her understand that she should marry Ravi for the sake of their daughter's future as Arun was sacked from his small private job due to his illness. With the help of Ravi, they are now surviving.

Anyway, at last after giving plenty of reasons by Arun to Monisha, Monisha finally agreed half-heartedly. But Arun didn't want to get any chance. So, he filed for a mutual divorce. Then after getting divorce, he himself gives his wife's hand (then it would be his ex wife) to his friend Ravi. Ravi and Monisha got married in presence of Arun, after their divorce. Ravi has started to live with them, as he is now Monisha's official husband. That's why he shifted to Arun's place.

But Monisha still feels for Arun, not for Ravi at all. That's why Arun told Manisha to share her room with Ravi, and he and his daughter Pari would shift to the adjacent room. Monisha again kind of force to share her bedroom with Rabi, while Arun and Pari were sleeping in another room. Monisha made a verbal contract with Ravi that despite the fact that they are married now, still Ravi shouldn't demand his husband's rights from her. Ravi agreed to her words, as he also knows that Monisha still loves Arun, which is very natural. Their marriage had happened due to weird circumstances.

Days passed, Monisha and Ravi shared one bed but they slept at both the corner ends of the bed. So, there was a huge gap between them in the bed. One day Ravi tried to cross his limits, but Monisha firmly rejected him, and confronted him. Then there were lots of ups and downs, lots of emotional dramas happened in the house. Arun got to know about that incident. But being a sensible man, he can understand his friend's sexual urge. So, Arun went to Monisha to convince her to accept Rabi as her full fledged husband by accepting Rabi's every requirements. He told her that he is a temporary person in this earth, but Rabi will stay with her forever. So, she should accept Rabi and his desires.

By listening Arun's thoughtful words, Monisha was stuck into dilemma. But finally Monisha gave up her chastity due to the requirement of her own sexual desire, as cancer affected Arun can't be bed with her to do sex. She was not having sex since Arun had cancer. She had sex with Ravi and do the actual duty of a wife in bed with her official husband, in presence of Arun. Because at night, Arun was sleeping in the adjacent room. So, Arun heard some noises from his room. When he went to check, he saw Monisha with his best friend without having any clothes on their body, although they didn't notice him watching.

After watching his wife (Ex-wife) sex with his friend, his health became deteriorate. After some days, he was admitted to the hospital, where he took his last breath. After his death, Monisha became pregnant of Ravi's child. Ravi took Manisha and Pari with him and shifted to Mumbai from Kolkata, where no one else would know them, so they can start their life with a fresh mind in a new city, keeping the old life behind in Kolkata.
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Mein Capt. Vikram aur aaj mein Kai salo se dil ke boj tale dabi wo bat share krne ja rha hu jiski wajah se mein aaj mere pahle pyar jiske liye mene jeene-marne kasme kha rkhi thi, meri JAAN meri INDIAN AARMY.

Aap sab soch rhe honge ki kese ye sab hua, kya usme meri galti thi ya kya tha to dosto aap hi iss pure vakya ko padh ke jarur batayega ki asal me mein sahi tha ya galat.

Bat un dino ki hai jab meri posting kashmir me hui thi. Mujhe naya naya captain banaya gya tha to aek jimmedari bhi thi aur umar bhi aesi thi josh se bhari hui. Mere sath mera puarana yaar vishmbhar rane jiske sath hi mene aarmy ki training start kri thi uski bhi posting mere sath hui thi. Kai bar rule ke khilaf bahar tafri krne nikal jate yha wha vardi ka rof jamate aur fir kisiko pata na chale wese wapis aa jate the.

Par aek din jab ghum-fir ke wapis aa rhe tho humare base camp pe pas hi bala ki khubsurat aek ladki dikhi. Chand jesa safed chahera, wo surkh gulabi honth upar se cury badan pe tight salwar-kamiz abhi bhi wo nazara mere aankho me hub hu chhapa hua hai. Meri usse nazar hi nhi hat rhi thi aur na hi wha se hata ne ka man tha par vishmbhar ne kha chal jaldi warna gadbad ho jayegi... to mujhe na chahte hua bhi wha se chalna pda.

Fir kya tha ankho me nind aa rhi thi na dil me chen, bas usika khayal dil ko machode ja rha tha sach batau to us din mein, mera dil aur mera lund teeno puri rat uss ladki ki yaad me hi khoye huw the. Dusre din subah bhi jab routine military check ke liye nikle to meri aankhe usse hi dhundhne me lagi hu thi aur vishmbhar bhi sabko ye bol rha tha ki "Aaj vikram sir apne personal terrorist ki talash me hai" aur meri khinch rha tha.

Rat hui aur pata nhi wo mera luck tha ya koi sanyog par me aur vishmbhar camp ke pas ped ke niche beth kar cigarette pi rhe the tbhi wo ladki ha wohi ladki jisne kal rat se mere hosh uda rkhe the to daud kr humare hi pas aarhi thi me thoda vichlit hua tbhi vishmbhar bola be yeto tere wali hai na dekh yhi aa rhi hai.

Mujhe bhi phle to aankho ka dokha laga par wo samne aayi aur rote hue hume binati krne lagi ki wo yhi pass me rehti hai aur uske abbu ki tabiyat bahot kharab lag rhi hai aur use hospital le jane me humari madad chahiye. Hum turat khade hue aur apni jeep nikali aur use bethne ko bola aur turant jeet uske ghar le gaye, uska ghar camp ke pas hi tha aur me man me hi bhut khush ho rha tha ki machali samne se jal me fasne aa rhi thi.

Hum turant niche utne aur ghar me ja ke uske abbu ko utha kar jeep me bethaya aur pas hi ke hospital me dakhil karwaya, doctor ne bataya ki heat attack aya tha aur sabko batate wese bataya ki acha hua jald yha pahuch gye warna hum bacha hi pate. Shaziya ha us ladki ka nam shaziya tha mujhe hospital counter pe form bharte waqt pata chala, usne wo hume bhagwan hi man liya aesa lag rha tha rote rote bol rhi aapka bahut bahut shukriya agar aap log madad nhi krte to kash mere abbu jiske siwah mera is duniya me koi nhi unka... aur ro padi.

Mene mauke ka fayda uthate hua usse kandha diya aur kaha shaziya ye to humara farz hai aur aage bhi tumhe jab bhi jarur pade mujhe bezizak call krna, au mene apna number usko de diya. Wese hume personal phone kam hi use krne ko bola jata hai lekin aaj ye mauka to me nhi jane de skta tha :D.

Fir mene shaziya ko bola ki abhi hum ja rhe hai par kal subhah fir ayenge agar kbhi bhi kuchh bhi jarurt pade me aek call ke hi duri par hu.

Me aur vishambhar camp vapis aagye the par aaj se to kal se bhi jyada kushi thi aaj to us mulayam hatho ko chhua tha aur chand se chere ko kandha diya tha uski ki yaado me kab nind aagyi pata hi nhi chala. Subah jaldi uth kar mein hospital pahuch gye wha doctor ne kha ki shaziya ke abbu naseer shaheb ko thode din yhi rkhna pdega aur jab sab normal ho jayega to leave mil jayegi.

Me shaziya se mila aur usse bataya ki kuchh paiso ki bhi zarurt hoto bezizak bataye par usne kha ki abbu ki savings hai abhi to koi jarurt nhi. Fir humne canteen me sath me khana khaya aur me wapis duty ke liye nikal gya. Aese hi aek do hafte mera yhi routine chala us bich naseer saheb se bhi bate hue, shaziya ne unko bataya ki meri wajah se hi aaj wo bach paye hai. Naseer saheb ne bhi mera bahut shukriya kra.

Aese hi ab shaziya se mulaqat hone lagi hospital me hi sahi lekin ab mera aur uske dhage dhire dhire bunane lage the aur thode din me naseer saheb kobhi hospital se leave mil gyi aur wpis ghar aa gye ab mera shaziya se mila kam ho gya tha par me naseer saheb ki tabiyat janne ke banane kbhi kbhi shaziya se milne chala jata tha.

Par aek din jab me shaziya ke ghar pahucha aur andar ja kar naseer saheb ko dundh ne laga tbhi shaziya aayi aur boli vikramji abbu to dukan gaye hai apko boli to thi ki wo sham ko hi lautate hai, to mene kha par me unse hi thodi tumse bhi to milne ata hu tum to hona yha. Wo boli achhaji mujhse bhi milne aate ho... mene kha to fir tumhe kya laga tha. wo sharma gyi aur boli aap bethiye me badhiya sa kahwa banake lati hu.

Me thodi der betha tbhi shaziya do cup garma garm kahwa layi aur mere pas aakr beth gyi. Mene aek chuski kahwe ki li aur bol wahh shaziya bilkul tumari tarah aekdam stunning banayi ho, wo muskura gyi aur boli "Dhanywad, wese mujhe tajjub hua ki aapko mebhi itni stunning lagti hu". Me bola kyu nhi itni khubsurat ladki mene apni life me kbhi nhi dekhi aur upar se itni sanskari aur family ka itna dhyan rkhne wali, sach khu to kash mujhe aesi mil jaye meto shadi hi krlu usse. Mene bato bato me hi bol diya.

Shaziya bhi uski tarife sun kr attract ho rhi thi aur usi feeeling me mene apni pahla kadam chalaya uske hath pe hath rkhke bola sach me saziya tum bhut khubsurat to allah ne apni fursat me tumhe tarasha hoga tbhi aesa chand ka tukda mujhe aaj dekhne ko mil rha hai.

Wo kuchh bol hi nhi rhi thi sirf sun rhi thi aur sharmaye ja rhi thi ussi bich ussne apne surf hoth mere hotho pe rakh diye mujhe bhi pata nhi chala kese hum dono aek dusre me kho gye. Me uske hoth chus rha tha jese aaj ke bad mujhe kbhi milne nhi wale hai hum dono ki lar ark dusre me ghulmil rhi thi uski hum dono lagbhag 5 se 6 min tak chuste hi rhe fir thodi der ane honth alag krke aek dusre ki ankho me ankhe dal kar dekh rhe the, wo pyaar wo junoon dikh rha tha dono me.

Thodi der bad fir se humare honth aek dusre me lipt gaye, Mere tha uski pith ko sahla rhe the aur mujhe bhi mehsus ho rha tha ki shaziya bhi garam ho rhi hai. Mene uski gard pe chuna start kr diya aur halke se love bite de rha tha aur wo bhi madhosh ho rhi thi. Mere se to ab rha hi nhi ja rha tha meine uske salwar ko thoda upr kra aur uski nabhi ko chumne laga aur sath sath me mere hath uske mummey ko upr se hi sahla rhe the, wo bhi mere balo ko sahla rhi thi. Thodi der me mere khichne se uski salwar fat gyi, hume uspe dhyan na dete hue usko dur kara ab shaziya bas bra aur kamiz me thi mene pichhe apna hath le jake uski bra ko unhook kra, uff kya nazara tha auke do bhare hue kabootar aazad ho gye the uske mote gol gore gore mummo ko dekh meri aakhe moti ho gyi.

Me to turat usse dabod liya aur aek mumme ke gol brown nipple to ab tight ho gye the usse chusne aur katne laga aur dusre sath se dusre mumme ko masal rha tha, Shaziya halki halki siskiya bhar rhi thi aur mujhe bina roke enjoy kr rhi thi. Ab mene apne kapde utar diye aur shaziya hath meri chaddi me le gya aur usee bola dekh shaziya kitna garam kr diya hai tumne isse ab rha nhi jata isse shant krna pdega tumhe, wo sharma gyi aur boli vikramji sab aapka hi hai abse jab chaho shant karwa lena aur mere gale se lag gyi.

Mene shaziya ko sofe pe leta diya ho dhire se uski kamizho uatar aur uske upr aakar uski nazuk gulabi halke balo wali chut ko chatne laga aur apni jeebh adar bahar karne laga, Uski itni tight chut thi ki meri jeebh bhi abdar bahar ho rhi tbhi wo jor jor ki siskiya bhar rhi thi thodi der chut chatai ke bad ab karna tha gamasan war. Mene apna hathiyar hath me liya aur sirf thuk lagake shaziya ko pahla zataka dene ko ready tha, uski chut pe mene apna lund set kra aur phle dhakke meri uski chut me mene apna adha lund ghusa diya wo chikh padi mene uska kuchh na sute hua dusre jatke me pura lund adar dala diya aur halke halke se dhakke lagana start kr diya.

Dhire Dhire dhakke ki speed badh rhi thi aur shaziya ki chikhe bhi sikskiyo me badal rhi thi, Thodi der aesa hi chalta rha aur fir hum dono jad gye mene apna lund bahar nikala aur sara maal uske mummo par dal diya, aaj shaziya nhi balki mere hi intiative tha wo bas mera sath de rhi thi par uska yeh pahli bar tha isliye mene jyada kuchh na krke bas mutual enjoy tak hi simit rkha.

Hume dono hanf rhe the aur fir dono lipt gye aur aek dusre me sama gye, Thodi der bad shaziya jat se uthi aur boli vikramji chaliye aap jaiye abbu kbhi bhi aate honge me sab saf safai kar leti hu. Mene usko baho me bhar liya aur bola shaziya sach batana tumhe maja aya ya nhi wo boli ha bahut maja aya, I love you. Mene kha sach me, i love you too meri jaan. Wo boli jab se apne meri aur abbu ki help kri tab se hi me apko pasnd krne lagi hu par apko kbhi bata nhi payi thi. Mene bola shaziya aajse tu meri hai aur teri haar pareshani meri aur thodi der aese hi lipte rhe.

Bad me mene apne kapde pahne aur jate hue uske mathe pe aek chumma dete hua bola Love you jaan, ab to aesi mulaqat hoti rhegi aur dono muskura gaye. Aur me bahar nikl gya me aaj bhut khush tha kyuki jis ladki ki mene chah kri thi usko mene pa liya tha aur mujhe laga tha ki ab kya chahiye life me sab to mil gya hai aek satisfaction ki feeling aa rhi thi.

Mera chahera bhi khila khila sa rehne laga tha, Mene jo hua sab vishmbhar ko bata diya tha aur wo bhi kush tha mere liye. Ab se roj dopahr ko me shaziya ke wha jata kbhi ghanto bate karte to kbhi ghanto tak aek dusre me kho jate the, ab to shaziya bhi input dene lagi thi to me ab double khush ho gya tha.

Aese hi 3 se 4 mahine bit gaye par aek din mujhe upr se order aya ki meri posting agle mahine rajathan hone wali hai. Me thoda bechen ho gya mene shaziya se bat kri wo boli abhi abbu ki tabiyat itni bhi acchi nhi hui, kahi humari bat kri to unko fir se kuchh ho na jaye. Mene shaziya ko bola me tumare biger nhi reh paunga tum mana krogi to me aarmy bhi chhod dinga par tumhare sath hi rahunga. (Mere par shaziya aur uska pyar itna havi ho gya tha ki mene aarmy chhodne tak ki bat keh di thi)

Shaziya boli nhi tum aarmy mat chhodna me kuchh sochti hu mujhe aap thoda time do, mene kha jo karna jaldi karna waqt nhi hai humare pass aur me wha se chal diya.

Aek do din me usi uljan me fasa tha ki kya kru aur kya nhi, mene upr bhi posting ke regarding bat kri par wha se saf inkar aya. Mujhe kuchh suj nhi rha tha aur uski me aek do din shaziya se milna bhi nhi hua.

Agle hi din mene socha ki shaziya se bat krta hu kya pata usne abbu se bat kri ho, Me shaziya ke ghar pahicha par mene dekha wha tala tha. Mene turat shaziya ko phone ghumaya par wo out of network coverge aa rha tha. Me aur dar gya mujhe laga khi naseer saheb ko shaziya ne humare bare me bataya hoga aur wo humara rista nhi chahte honge to shaziya ko leke khi aur chale gaye honge.

Mene hadbahat me vishmbhar ko call kiya aur use turant shaiziya ke ghar ke pas bulaya aur sab bat batayi. Fir Hum aaspas ke sabhi area me ghume aur shaziya ko dundh ne lage ki kash wo mil jaye jese time bit rha tha wese-wese mera dimag bhi kam krna bandh kr rha tha.

Bhut rat ho gyi thi dundhte dundhte aur vinshbhar ab mujhe kunch kar camp pe wapis le aya. Mujhe bhi ab shaziya ke milne ka koi mauka nhi dikh rha tha, meri ankhe lal ho rkhi thi subah se kuchh khaya nhi vishmbhar thoda sa dudh leke aya par mene mna kar diya kyuki nahi mujhe bukh lag rhi thi nahi pyas. Puri rat me yhi sochta rha ki shaziya kha hogi, mujhe firse milegi bhi ya nhi.

Subah mein akela fir se nikal pada aur dopar tak usse dundha yha wha sab jagah, tbhi mere phone pe call aya ki mujhe base camp bula rhe hai. Me jat se camp pahucha wha bahut afra-tafri machi hui thi. Mene aek subedar se puchha to unhone bataya ki humre secret ammo base compromise ho gya hai aur wha pe aabhi hamna hua tha aur humre 4 officer ki on site death ho gyi hai aur kai ghayal hai.

Meri fat ke char ho gyi kyuki vishmbhar aur meri dono ki duty thi aaj wha pe kuchh checking krne jana tha aur me subah se shaziya ko dundh rha tha par vishmbhar wha gya hoga, mene turat jeep nikali aur wha ki aur chal pata wha pahuchte hi dhua, afra=tafri aur bhagdaud ke bich mene aek officer ko puchha ki vishmbhar sir kha se to wo nichi aawaj me bola sir... sir wo ab nhi rhe. Mere halak se na aawaj nikl rhi thi na chikh, me whi beth gya mujhe laga ki kash me vishmbhar ke sath hota to aesa nhi hota.

Tbhi mujhe call pe bola gya ku mujhe turant upr reporting karna hai, Me tuat head office pahucha wha sab upri officers ne bataya ki RAW ke sutro ke anusar tumhari wajah se apni secrect base compromised hui hai aur isiliye tumne suspend kiya jata, tumhe abhi isi waqt sab documnets and uniform sumbit karke aarmy camp chhodna hoga.

Meri kuchh samjh nhi aarha tha, me turant apne colonal anubhavsinh joki mere mentor the unke pas gya aur usko puchh ki sir ye sab kya hai apko to pata hai ki me kitna desh bhakt hu aur me kbhi bhi aesa nhi krunga chahe mujhe marna hi kyu na pade. Wo bole me janta hu vikram par tumhe kya pata hai ki tumhare sath dokha hua hai wo shaziya jiske pichhe tum pade the aur yha to sab ko pata hai ki tum dono ke bich kya kya gul khil rhe the, RWA ko shak hua hai ki wo dusre dekh ki jasoos hai aur tumhare throug hi ye sab hua hai. Tum abhi sab shant hone do mujhe pata hai ki isme tumhari koi galti nhi hai par ab tumpe court caes chalega whi sab dekehnge, dekho me tumhari puri help krne ki try krunga lekin abhi me kuchh nhi kr skta.

Mere to pairo take jameen khishk gyi thi abhi jisko dilo jan se pyar krta tha jisko dundhne ke liye jammen-assamn aek kar diya tha, jiske liye me apne pahle pyar aarmy tak ko chhodne ko taiyar tha usne hi mujhe dhokha diya. Mujhe abhi bhi yhi lag rha tha ki RAW ne pkka nhi kha unko bas shak hai par mujhe andar se pata tha ki jab mein aur shaziya aek dusre me mil jate the tab mujhe kuch hosh nhi rehta tha aur wo jo puchti me batate chale jata tha kyuki mujhe uspe itna vishvash ho gya tha jitna mujhe khud pe kbhi nhi tha.

Me jiske pas aek hafte phale sab tha, aarmy ki acchi post ka officer jiske pasaek husn pari jesi gf thi aur aek har waqt sath dene wala dost. Aur aaj Wo husn pari jisne mera sab chhin liya mera pyar, mera dost aur meri naukri... Do gante bad me apne kapde pack krke ghar ki train me nikal pada.

Ghar aane se pahle sab ko yhi bola tha ki lambi chhuti leke aarha hu apse milne. Maa se milne ke bad thodi shanti mili lekin abhi bhi vishmbhar, shaziya aur meri wardi mere man se ja hi nhi rhi thi. Thode din aese bartaw kra jese kuchh hua hi nhi par kab tak fir maa aur family me sab ko bataya sab ne support kara wohi to family hai aaj pata chala ki 'family is alway their for you in your good or bad'.

Thode din aese hi bite court se order aya, case ke silsile me mein anubhav sir se mila unhone ne upr bat kri aur RAW ne bhi tab tak sare reports jama kar liye the. Aarmy Court me meri peshi hui sab reports ko dekh yhi samne aya ki shaziya aek jasoss thi jisne mujhe fasaya yani mera honeytrap kiya tha par aarmy ke rule ke hisab se me kisi ko bhi yha tak ki apni family walo se bhi secret share nhi kar skta joki mene kiye the to us hisab se mujhe saja to honi thi par mere purane records aur medal kode nazar me rkhte hua aur anubhavsir ke recomandation par mujhe 6 month ki jail aur aarmy barkhast bhi kar diya gya.

Mujhe iss bat ka dukh nhi tha ki mene shaziya se pyar kiya aur usne dokha diya mujhe uss bat ka bahut affsos hai ki mene jisko jan se bhi payari mana tha uss wardi ko dokha diya tha.

Kya shaziya galat thi, kya mera pyar galat tha ya mehi galat tha. Kbhi kbhi to mujhe lagta hai ki kya mene shaziya ki aankho me jo pyar dekho wobhi galat tha kyuki agar me usse dundhne nhi jata to shyad me bhi vishmbhar ke sathh hota.

Aaj bhi vishmbhar ka chehra mujhe rat rat bhar sone nhi deta hai. Me abhi anubhav sir ki recomandation se training institut me trainer hu. Family wale bahut force kar rhe hai lekin ab pyar shabd se hi nafrat si hone lagi hai.

Khair kai salo se dil pe boj liye betha hu socha ki aa isse sabdo me utar hi du, Me aek writer to nhi isliye apni pen se nhi balki apni feeling se likhne koshish kri hai,apke jawab ke itezar rahega.


Ex Capt. Vikram Shorey,
Singing Off.



(Hi, Kiara Roy here. Me koi professtional lekhika nhi hu par apni aur se puri try ki hai taki aap iss kahani ko enjoy kar sako, iski feeling ko samjh sako. Kahani me captain vikram ne aek sawal puchhe hai to unko unka answer dene ki try jarur krna, Thank you:heart:!)
real jaisi hai kahani ..aisa hota hai aksar kuch bade ohde wale logo ke saath ..honeytrap ka shikar ban jaate hai wo aur apni secrets bata dete hai jiska natija baadme bhugatna padta hai .
shajiya uski jagah sahi hai kyunki wo apne desh ke liye kar rahi thi par vikram ki najar me galat kyunki shajiya ki wajah se uska dost shahid hua ,army se naukri chali gayi jisse wo dil o jaan se pyar karta tha .
 
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