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Update 11 Abhi Very Happy
Sunday ko din bhar Abhi ne apne diary mein sab kuch likha usske aur Ruhi ke baare mein. Apne feelings ko likha, ussko kia feel ho raha hai, kitna pyar karta hai Ruhi se, usske baghair jee nahin paega yeh sab likha Abhi ne.
Usske ghar mein wo apni choti behen jo 18 saal ki thi uss se bahut close tha. Abhi ussko sab kuch batata tha aur apne diary padhne ko deta tha, matlab usski uss behen ko sab kuch pata tha jo beet raha tha Abhi par. Usski behen ka naam tha Naina. Aur ek uss se bhi choti behen thi Abhi ka. Baaki aur 3 bhai the usske. Naina baaki sabko Abhi ke baare mein bata deti thi siwae usske pita ke. Matlab ghar mein usske pita ke ilawa sabko pata tha ke Abhi pyar mein hai Ruhi se.
Abhi ka din Ruhi ki yaad mein guzra hamesha ki tarah aur agle din savere savere pahunch gaya Ruhi ki aangan mein aur aaj bhi Ruhi gulaab tod rahi thi uss din ki tarah.
Iss baar Abhi ruk gaya garden ke saamne Ruhi ko dekhte hue aur good morning kaha. Ruhi weise hi apni Nightgown mein hi thi. Ek muthi mein kuch gulaab ke phool liye hue the aur dusre haath se aur phool tod rahi thi.
Ruhi ne kuch sharmilee adaa se good morning reply kiya Abhi ko magar bahot hi dhire se. Abhi khada ussko dekhta raha aur Ruhi kabhi ussko dekhti to kabhi mudhkar apne piche ghar ko dekhti ke koyi ussko dekh to nahin raha andar se.
Abhi ne pucha,
“Saturday ko tum kahan gayi thi? Aur mujhko jaane se pehle bataya kyun nahin tha?”
Ruhi muskuraayi, phir hanss padi aur aur apni dheemi, meethi awaaz mein kaha,
“Batana bhool gayi thi Friday ko, uss shaam ko aap chale gaye tab mujhe yaad aya ke aap se kehna bhool gayi thi ke Saturdays ko main ek course follow karne jaati hoon sewing ki.”
Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,
“sewing ki course? Kyun? Silaayi karogi aage chal kar kia?”
To Ruhi ne kaha,
”Aur kia kakrti? 12th ache se pass nahin hui, padhne ko aage mann nahin kiya, to mummy ne kaha silaayi seekh loon shaayad aage kaam ajaye!”
Abhi ne kaha,
“okay achcha bhi hai, magar kidhar gayi thi course follow karne ko? Kahin door kia?”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“West mein jo sheher hai wahan!”
Phir ruhi ne piche mudhkar dekhte hue kaha,
“Aap jao nah ab, aap kyun itne savere aajaate ho? Raat ko sote nahin ho kia? Abhi 6 baje hein kaam to 7 ko start hota hai nah?!”
Abhi ne jawaab diya,
“Neendh to tumne churra liye hein mere to kaise so paunga main? Aur ek baat batao kia tumko nahin passand ke main itne savere aajata hoon? Kumse kum sabke aane se pehle tumse kuch baatein karne ka mauka to mil jata hai, jaise abhi! Aur sach batao kia tum mujhko abhi expect nahin kar rahi thi? Kia tum abhi abhi mujhi ko nahin soch rahi thi?”
Ruhi hanss pari aur kaha,
“Aap mere khayaalon ke andar dekh sakte ho kia?
Abhi: “hmm isska matlab ke haan mere baare mein hi soch rahi thi tum hai nah? main to 24 ghante sirf tumko hi sochta rehta hoon, ghar se bus mein aate waqt tumhi rehti ho mere khayaalon mein to tumko bhi weisa hi sochna chahiye nah!”
Ruhi: “bilkool jhoot main aap ke bare mein bilkool bhi nahin soch rahi thi”
Aur ruhi hanss padi yeh keh kar, phir kaha,
“Aap jaao nah ab. Mera bada bhai yahin hai ussi ke liye flowers le rahi hoon wo photos leta hai apne camera se….”
Abhi ne tab kaha,
“Aur Saturday ko jab tum jaa rahi thi to ek nazar mujhko dekha bhi nahin nazrein bilkool niche jhuke hue the, mujhko ek nazar dekh to sakti thi nah?!”
Ruhi ne weise hi sharmilee andaaz mein gulaab ke phool ko dekhte hue jawaab diya,
“Main kaise nazar utha kar dekhti uss waqt sab ke nazar mujh par the mujhe maloom tha sab mujhi ko dekh rahe the, I felt very shy at that moment on that day! Magar main ne aap ko dekha tha jaate hue thoda sa. Mujhe pata tha ke aap bhi mujhko hi dekh rahe the.”
Abhi bahut khush hua usski answer se aur baat badalte hue kaha,
“Are haan Manoj bus ki bhi photos le raha tha, main ne dekha tha uss din! Wo professional photographer hai kia? Kaam kahan karta hai wo?”
Ruhi ne phir mudhkar ghar ke taraf dekhte hue reply kiya,
“Ussi sheher mein kaam karta hai jahan main silaayi ke liye jaati hoon, aur wo professional photographer to nahin magar usska shauk hai photos lena, ussko ek inaam mila tha ek baar kissi special photo ki ek photography contest mein!”
Abhi: “oh I See! Kia wo mujhe ek copy bus ki photos ka de sakta hai kia?”
Ruhi: “Ussi se maang lena, wo har roz bus ki photos leta hai, bus kaisa tha aur har roz kitna bus banta jaa raha hai, har roz kuch pics leta hai bus ki!”
Abhi: That’s great, wo mera madad kar raha hai ek tarah se, main zaroor uss se photos manguga last din ko.”
Ruhi: “To aap ko ussko pay karna padega photos ke liye!”
Abhi: “of course pay karunga. Kitna leta hai per photo?”
Ruhi: “pata nahin ussi se puch lena….. ab jao nah please, main nahin chahta hoon ke wo mujhse sawaal kare ke aap kia keh rahe the!”
Abhi: “Are to agar wo puche to keh dena ke main uss se bus ki photos kharidna chahta hoon nah!”
Ruhi ne phir hansste hue kaha,
“Bahot honshiyaar ho aap, turant aap ko ek bahana mil jata hai!”
Abhi: “Main to yahan sirf tumhare liye ata hoon; baaki to kaam to bahana hai sweetheart”
Ruhi: “main aap ki sweetheart nahin hoon kyun kehto aap mujhko sweetheart?!”
Abhi muskuraya aur jaane laga. To Ruhi ne kaha,
“Ruko please!”
Abhi: “kabhi jaane ko kehti ho kabhi rukne ko kia yaar!”
Ruhi ne tab hansste hue kaha,
“Mujhe kehna tha ke din mein kaam karte waqt aap baar baar mujhse baat karne mat ana khaas kar jab Mehboob chacha yahan hota hai!”
Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,
“Are wo kyun? Mehboob ne kuch kaha kia?!”
Ruhi: “Haan baad mein bataungi aap ab jao!”
Abhi ne jaate hue kaha,
“Saturday ko tum Qayamat dhaa rahi thi, beauty queen lag rahi thi, itni khubsurat ho socha nahin tha, tum par to kayi mitte honge mere ilawa hai nah? jab uss sheher mein jaati ho to kitnon par Bijli giraati hogi tum hmmm?!”
Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“mujhe kia pata? Aap jaise diwane aur honge kahin to main kia jaanun!”
Abhi: “shukar hai ke mere ilawa kissi aur ka pata nahin tumko varna mujhe takliff hoti!”
Ruhi tab thoda zor se hanss padi aur khud apne muhn par haath rakh kar piche ghar ke taraf dekha aur dhire se phussphussaate hue Abhi se kaha,
“Ab jao please baad mein milti hoon! Jab Manoj chala jaaye tab milna!”
Abhi khush hua aur chala gaya washroom ke taraf.
Washroom ke ke kone se Abhi watch karne laga Ruhi ko aur dekha ke wo terrace se hokar ghar ke saamne ke darwaze ke andar gayi tabhi Manoj ki awaaz sunaayi diya yeh kehte hue,
“are ek do katra paani daalo uss rose par nah tab click karunga”
Abhi samajh gaya ke andar Manoj unn gulaabon ki tasveerin le raha tha.
Bus 10 mins baad Manoj kitchen ke taraf se apne bag kaandhe par taange nikla aur Abhi se hello kaha aur jaane laga to Abhi ne ussko roka, aur Manoj ne muskurate hue kaha,
“Are bus miss ho jaegi shaam ko wapas aunga to baat karenge”
Magar Abhi ne kaha,
“to chalte hue baat karta hoon nah chalo tumko bus stop tak chorr ke ata hoon baat bhi kar lenge.”
Ruhi kitchen ke stairs par aa khadi hui Abhi ko usske bhai se baat karte hue sunkar. Abhi ne ussko dekha aur Ruhi Abhi se muskuraayi. Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi Manoj se bus ki photos ke baare mein baat karna chahta tha.
Aur jab Abhi aur Ruhi ne ek dusre se muskuraaye to Manoj ne donon ko ek dusre se muskuraate hue dekh kar hanssa.
Phir Abhi Manoj ke saath chalte hue bus stop tak gaya aur ussne Manoj se kaha ke jitney bhi photos wo bus ka lega unn sab pics ke ek copy ussko dein aur pucha ke per photo kitna lega. Manoj ne kaha 10 rupay ek photo ki. Abhi ne kaha okay aur tab manoj ne kaha ke,6 Mahinon mein 300 se ziada pics ho jayenge kia Abhi utna pay kar paega Manoj ne pucha, to Abhi ne kaha ke agar 500 pics bhi hue tab bhi pay karega. To Manoj ne kaha okay deal. Phir turant Abhi ne jeb se 500 rupay Manoj ko advance payment kar diya to Manoj ne kaha ke issi hafte mein pehla roll ko develop karega to jitney bus ki pictures hein wo Abhi ko dega.
Abhi kuch door ka soch raha tha is sliye ussko wo bus ki photos chahiye tha aur ussne Monoj se Saeed ko bataane se mana kiya ke Abhi uss se photos le raha hai. Yeh bhi kaha Abhi ne ke kabhi workers ko nahin lena photos mein, Saeed ko to bilkool bhi nahin lena, agar Abhi ko photos mein liya to koyi baat nahin…..
Yeh baad mein pata chalega ke Abhi ko kyun uss bus ke photos shuru se end tak chahiye tha. Abhi ne abhi se hi bade door ka soch rakha tha. Ek din future mein saare photos usske bade kaam aane wale the.
Abhi wapas aangan mein gaya aur Ruhi ko dhundne laga. 6.30 hua thato usske paas 30 mins tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. Washroom se kitchen mein dekha to koyi nahin tha, phir bus ke piche wale hisse se washing stone ke taraf dekha to wahan ke room ka khidki khuli hui dekha… ussko umeed thi ke Ruhi uss kamrre mein hogi…. Kuch himmat karke Abhi chalte hue wahan tak gaya…magar kamre ke andar dekhne ki himmat nahin hui ussko. Bahot ganda lagta kissi ke kamre mein dekhte hue ussne socha…
Ab kyunke Abhi kad ka ooncha tha to ussko sirf kamre mein dekhna tha to sab kuch dikh jata ussko, magar ussne dekha nahin iss niyat se gaya wo uss taraf ke agar Ruhi andar hogi to kum se kum Ruhi to ussko dekh paegi. Aur wohi hua, jaise Ruhi ne Abhi ko uss khidki se guzarte dekha to ussne gala saaf kiya Abhi ko jaise ek ishara kiya ke wo andar hai…. Bed par baithi, haath mein ek kitab liye Ruhi Abhi ko dekh rahi thi muskuraate hue.
Abhi ne ussko dekha, uss kamre a moaena kiya, aur pucha,
“is this your bedroom?!”
Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“It can’t be called a bedroom, too small, but yes I sleep here, this is my bed.”
Abhi: “you can’t understand how lucky I am feeling to be introduced to the bed and place you sleep. It’s an honour for me.!”
Ruhi: “Ah really? Why so?!”
Abhi: “yessss my dear…. What are you reading?”
To Ruhi ne kitab ki cover ko turn karte hue Abhi ko book ki title dikhaayi, book tha ek Mills and Boon wala romantic tale. Cover ke pic par ek aurat thi semi nude ek bina shirt ke hero se lipti hui.
Abhi ne pucha,
“you love to read romantic stories only or any variety in your choice?!”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“nah mujhe sirf romantic hi padhna passand hai, detectives, horror ya police bilkool nahin passand sirf ziada tar mills and boon ya dusre author ke but romantic hi padhti hoon.”
Phir Ruhi ne ek collection dikhaya Abhi ko usski table par. Karib 25 ya 30 books the sab ke sab Mills and Boons collection wale. Abhi ne dekh kar muskuraya aur pucha,
“Abhi hum donon baatein kar rahe hein to ghar ke andar sab sun nahin rahe hein ke tum mujhse baat kar rahi ho?!”
Ruhi ne kaandhe ko uchakte hue kaha,
“To kia hua sunne do!”
Abhi: “tumhari mummy so rahi hai ya jaag gayi hai? Aur tumhare papa ko nahin dekha aaj tak main ne kahan hota hai wo, der raat ko kaam se wapas ata hai kia?!”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“Mera papa Saudi Arabia mein driving ki Naukri karte hein, wo wapas ane hi wala hai kuch mahine baad!”
Abhi: “oh I see! To tum, tumhari mummy, Manoj aur Mahesh rehte ho yahan!”
Ruhi ne add kiya,
“Dadaji bhi!”
Abhi: “are haan dada ji ko bhool gaya main! Aur buss itne hi members hein tumhare family mein?”
Ruhi: “no, meri ek badi behen hein jisski shaadi ho chuki hai wo yahan se 100 kms ki doorie par rehti hai. Kabhi kabhaar aati hai.”
Abhi: “wow great then to have an elder sis!”
Ruhi: “hmmm yes!”
Abhi: “acha yeh batao ke kyun tumne mujhse kaha ke jab Mehboob present ho to tumse baat nah karun? Kia kaha ussne?!”
Ruhi ne kamre mein piche dekha tab awaaz dhimi karke kaha,
“Mere papa aur Mehboob bhai jaise hein. Mere papa ne ussko hum logon ka khayal rakhne ke liye kaha hai, halaan ke bus ke piche wala ghar mere chote chacha ki hai, matlab mere papa ka chota bhai hai, phir bhi Mehboob mere chacha se badhkar hai. Uss ne meri mummy se pucha ke main aap se kyun baar baar baat karti hoon! To mummy ne wo baat mujhse kaha, to main samajh gayi ke unnko nahin achha lagta jab hum donon baat karte hein issi liye aap se kaha ke usski haaziri mein mat baat karna mujhse se”
Abhi: “okay main samajh gaya, usske saamne tumse baat nahin karunga.”
Ruhi: “are eise nahin, jaise hum abhi kar rahe hein aise mat karna but wahan jab sab koyi ek saath hein agar mummy, Mehboob chacha, Rahima chachi, Mahesh sab saath hein tab you can talk, but not like this alone me and you, samjhe aap?!”
Abhi: “thik hai samajh gaya main, magar ek dusre ko dekh to sakte hein nah, tum nazar aati rehna please. Main tumko har baar dekhna passand karta hoon. Agar ek ghanta ho gaya aur tum nazar nahin aayi to mujhe bechaini hone lagti hai to please saamne aaya karna hat baar okay?!”
Ruhi: “mujhe pata hai. Issi liye to aati rehti hoon nah!”
Abhi bahot khush hua aur kaha,
“thanks very much darling, ab chalta hoon weh log aane wale hein ab kaam start karna hoga. Aur dekha nah tumne pucha ke main kyun itne savera ajaata hoon, to ab samjhi, hum donon ko baatein karne ke liye kitna time mil gaya hai nah?!”
Ruhi ne haan mein muskuraate hue gardan hillayi.
Abhi jaane laga, phir wapas aya aur pucha,
“How old are you Ruhi? I am 22 will be 23 this year and you?”
Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,
“ladkiyon ki umar nahin puche jaate, bad manners hihihi”
Abhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“ofo pata hai yaar, par main ne apni age bataya nah tumko so please tell me, kahin tum mujhse badi nikli to?!”
Ruhi zor se hanss padi aur kaha,
“haan main aap se badi hi hoon hihihihihi!!”
Abhi ne bhi hansste hue kaha,
“koyi baat nahin agar badi ho bhi to, umar se kia lena dena!”
Ruhi: “Aap ko koyi farak nahin padega agar main aap se umar mein badi hui to?
Abhi: “bilkool bhi nahin iss mein kaun si badi baat hai? Chalta hai yaar!”
Ruhi: “Acha aur aap ko lagta hai ke main aap se umar mein badi hoon kia?!”
Abhi: “bilkool hi nahin, tum 17, 18 ki lagti ho!! are yaar bata to do, 18 ho chuki ya ab bhi minor ho hehehehe!”
Ruhi: “ho chuki….. hmmmm I am over 19! Will be 20 this year!”
Abhi: “great that’s perfect then, ok see you later”
Aur Abhi chala gaya change karne, tab tak baaki ke sab agaye.
To be continued….. (2750 words)
Iss update ka title bilkool sahi diya hai aap ne Abhi really very happy. Kaise happy nahin hoga? Sab kuch itna romantic chala, Ruhi ne itne mithe mithe baatein kiye iss update mein to sab positive hua Abhi k liye except Mehboob k presence mein baat karne par paabandi lag gaye baaki sab majedaar raha.
Kia Ruhi bhi Abhi se pyar karne lagi hai?
Update 11 Abhi Very Happy
Sunday ko din bhar Abhi ne apne diary mein sab kuch likha usske aur Ruhi ke baare mein. Apne feelings ko likha, ussko kia feel ho raha hai, kitna pyar karta hai Ruhi se, usske baghair jee nahin paega yeh sab likha Abhi ne.
Usske ghar mein wo apni choti behen jo 18 saal ki thi uss se bahut close tha. Abhi ussko sab kuch batata tha aur apne diary padhne ko deta tha, matlab usski uss behen ko sab kuch pata tha jo beet raha tha Abhi par. Usski behen ka naam tha Naina. Aur ek uss se bhi choti behen thi Abhi ka. Baaki aur 3 bhai the usske. Naina baaki sabko Abhi ke baare mein bata deti thi siwae usske pita ke. Matlab ghar mein usske pita ke ilawa sabko pata tha ke Abhi pyar mein hai Ruhi se.
Abhi ka din Ruhi ki yaad mein guzra hamesha ki tarah aur agle din savere savere pahunch gaya Ruhi ki aangan mein aur aaj bhi Ruhi gulaab tod rahi thi uss din ki tarah.
Iss baar Abhi ruk gaya garden ke saamne Ruhi ko dekhte hue aur good morning kaha. Ruhi weise hi apni Nightgown mein hi thi. Ek muthi mein kuch gulaab ke phool liye hue the aur dusre haath se aur phool tod rahi thi.
Ruhi ne kuch sharmilee adaa se good morning reply kiya Abhi ko magar bahot hi dhire se. Abhi khada ussko dekhta raha aur Ruhi kabhi ussko dekhti to kabhi mudhkar apne piche ghar ko dekhti ke koyi ussko dekh to nahin raha andar se.
Abhi ne pucha,
“Saturday ko tum kahan gayi thi? Aur mujhko jaane se pehle bataya kyun nahin tha?”
Ruhi muskuraayi, phir hanss padi aur aur apni dheemi, meethi awaaz mein kaha,
“Batana bhool gayi thi Friday ko, uss shaam ko aap chale gaye tab mujhe yaad aya ke aap se kehna bhool gayi thi ke Saturdays ko main ek course follow karne jaati hoon sewing ki.”
Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,
“sewing ki course? Kyun? Silaayi karogi aage chal kar kia?”
To Ruhi ne kaha,
”Aur kia kakrti? 12th ache se pass nahin hui, padhne ko aage mann nahin kiya, to mummy ne kaha silaayi seekh loon shaayad aage kaam ajaye!”
Abhi ne kaha,
“okay achcha bhi hai, magar kidhar gayi thi course follow karne ko? Kahin door kia?”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“West mein jo sheher hai wahan!”
Phir ruhi ne piche mudhkar dekhte hue kaha,
“Aap jao nah ab, aap kyun itne savere aajaate ho? Raat ko sote nahin ho kia? Abhi 6 baje hein kaam to 7 ko start hota hai nah?!”
Abhi ne jawaab diya,
“Neendh to tumne churra liye hein mere to kaise so paunga main? Aur ek baat batao kia tumko nahin passand ke main itne savere aajata hoon? Kumse kum sabke aane se pehle tumse kuch baatein karne ka mauka to mil jata hai, jaise abhi! Aur sach batao kia tum mujhko abhi expect nahin kar rahi thi? Kia tum abhi abhi mujhi ko nahin soch rahi thi?”
Ruhi hanss pari aur kaha,
“Aap mere khayaalon ke andar dekh sakte ho kia?
Abhi: “hmm isska matlab ke haan mere baare mein hi soch rahi thi tum hai nah? main to 24 ghante sirf tumko hi sochta rehta hoon, ghar se bus mein aate waqt tumhi rehti ho mere khayaalon mein to tumko bhi weisa hi sochna chahiye nah!”
Ruhi: “bilkool jhoot main aap ke bare mein bilkool bhi nahin soch rahi thi”
Aur ruhi hanss padi yeh keh kar, phir kaha,
“Aap jaao nah ab. Mera bada bhai yahin hai ussi ke liye flowers le rahi hoon wo photos leta hai apne camera se….”
Abhi ne tab kaha,
“Aur Saturday ko jab tum jaa rahi thi to ek nazar mujhko dekha bhi nahin nazrein bilkool niche jhuke hue the, mujhko ek nazar dekh to sakti thi nah?!”
Ruhi ne weise hi sharmilee andaaz mein gulaab ke phool ko dekhte hue jawaab diya,
“Main kaise nazar utha kar dekhti uss waqt sab ke nazar mujh par the mujhe maloom tha sab mujhi ko dekh rahe the, I felt very shy at that moment on that day! Magar main ne aap ko dekha tha jaate hue thoda sa. Mujhe pata tha ke aap bhi mujhko hi dekh rahe the.”
Abhi bahut khush hua usski answer se aur baat badalte hue kaha,
“Are haan Manoj bus ki bhi photos le raha tha, main ne dekha tha uss din! Wo professional photographer hai kia? Kaam kahan karta hai wo?”
Ruhi ne phir mudhkar ghar ke taraf dekhte hue reply kiya,
“Ussi sheher mein kaam karta hai jahan main silaayi ke liye jaati hoon, aur wo professional photographer to nahin magar usska shauk hai photos lena, ussko ek inaam mila tha ek baar kissi special photo ki ek photography contest mein!”
Abhi: “oh I See! Kia wo mujhe ek copy bus ki photos ka de sakta hai kia?”
Ruhi: “Ussi se maang lena, wo har roz bus ki photos leta hai, bus kaisa tha aur har roz kitna bus banta jaa raha hai, har roz kuch pics leta hai bus ki!”
Abhi: That’s great, wo mera madad kar raha hai ek tarah se, main zaroor uss se photos manguga last din ko.”
Ruhi: “To aap ko ussko pay karna padega photos ke liye!”
Abhi: “of course pay karunga. Kitna leta hai per photo?”
Ruhi: “pata nahin ussi se puch lena….. ab jao nah please, main nahin chahta hoon ke wo mujhse sawaal kare ke aap kia keh rahe the!”
Abhi: “Are to agar wo puche to keh dena ke main uss se bus ki photos kharidna chahta hoon nah!”
Ruhi ne phir hansste hue kaha,
“Bahot honshiyaar ho aap, turant aap ko ek bahana mil jata hai!”
Abhi: “Main to yahan sirf tumhare liye ata hoon; baaki to kaam to bahana hai sweetheart”
Ruhi: “main aap ki sweetheart nahin hoon kyun kehto aap mujhko sweetheart?!”
Abhi muskuraya aur jaane laga. To Ruhi ne kaha,
“Ruko please!”
Abhi: “kabhi jaane ko kehti ho kabhi rukne ko kia yaar!”
Ruhi ne tab hansste hue kaha,
“Mujhe kehna tha ke din mein kaam karte waqt aap baar baar mujhse baat karne mat ana khaas kar jab Mehboob chacha yahan hota hai!”
Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,
“Are wo kyun? Mehboob ne kuch kaha kia?!”
Ruhi: “Haan baad mein bataungi aap ab jao!”
Abhi ne jaate hue kaha,
“Saturday ko tum Qayamat dhaa rahi thi, beauty queen lag rahi thi, itni khubsurat ho socha nahin tha, tum par to kayi mitte honge mere ilawa hai nah? jab uss sheher mein jaati ho to kitnon par Bijli giraati hogi tum hmmm?!”
Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“mujhe kia pata? Aap jaise diwane aur honge kahin to main kia jaanun!”
Abhi: “shukar hai ke mere ilawa kissi aur ka pata nahin tumko varna mujhe takliff hoti!”
Ruhi tab thoda zor se hanss padi aur khud apne muhn par haath rakh kar piche ghar ke taraf dekha aur dhire se phussphussaate hue Abhi se kaha,
“Ab jao please baad mein milti hoon! Jab Manoj chala jaaye tab milna!”
Abhi khush hua aur chala gaya washroom ke taraf.
Washroom ke ke kone se Abhi watch karne laga Ruhi ko aur dekha ke wo terrace se hokar ghar ke saamne ke darwaze ke andar gayi tabhi Manoj ki awaaz sunaayi diya yeh kehte hue,
“are ek do katra paani daalo uss rose par nah tab click karunga”
Abhi samajh gaya ke andar Manoj unn gulaabon ki tasveerin le raha tha.
Bus 10 mins baad Manoj kitchen ke taraf se apne bag kaandhe par taange nikla aur Abhi se hello kaha aur jaane laga to Abhi ne ussko roka, aur Manoj ne muskurate hue kaha,
“Are bus miss ho jaegi shaam ko wapas aunga to baat karenge”
Magar Abhi ne kaha,
“to chalte hue baat karta hoon nah chalo tumko bus stop tak chorr ke ata hoon baat bhi kar lenge.”
Ruhi kitchen ke stairs par aa khadi hui Abhi ko usske bhai se baat karte hue sunkar. Abhi ne ussko dekha aur Ruhi Abhi se muskuraayi. Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi Manoj se bus ki photos ke baare mein baat karna chahta tha.
Aur jab Abhi aur Ruhi ne ek dusre se muskuraaye to Manoj ne donon ko ek dusre se muskuraate hue dekh kar hanssa.
Phir Abhi Manoj ke saath chalte hue bus stop tak gaya aur ussne Manoj se kaha ke jitney bhi photos wo bus ka lega unn sab pics ke ek copy ussko dein aur pucha ke per photo kitna lega. Manoj ne kaha 10 rupay ek photo ki. Abhi ne kaha okay aur tab manoj ne kaha ke,6 Mahinon mein 300 se ziada pics ho jayenge kia Abhi utna pay kar paega Manoj ne pucha, to Abhi ne kaha ke agar 500 pics bhi hue tab bhi pay karega. To Manoj ne kaha okay deal. Phir turant Abhi ne jeb se 500 rupay Manoj ko advance payment kar diya to Manoj ne kaha ke issi hafte mein pehla roll ko develop karega to jitney bus ki pictures hein wo Abhi ko dega.
Abhi kuch door ka soch raha tha is sliye ussko wo bus ki photos chahiye tha aur ussne Monoj se Saeed ko bataane se mana kiya ke Abhi uss se photos le raha hai. Yeh bhi kaha Abhi ne ke kabhi workers ko nahin lena photos mein, Saeed ko to bilkool bhi nahin lena, agar Abhi ko photos mein liya to koyi baat nahin…..
Yeh baad mein pata chalega ke Abhi ko kyun uss bus ke photos shuru se end tak chahiye tha. Abhi ne abhi se hi bade door ka soch rakha tha. Ek din future mein saare photos usske bade kaam aane wale the.
Abhi wapas aangan mein gaya aur Ruhi ko dhundne laga. 6.30 hua thato usske paas 30 mins tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. Washroom se kitchen mein dekha to koyi nahin tha, phir bus ke piche wale hisse se washing stone ke taraf dekha to wahan ke room ka khidki khuli hui dekha… ussko umeed thi ke Ruhi uss kamrre mein hogi…. Kuch himmat karke Abhi chalte hue wahan tak gaya…magar kamre ke andar dekhne ki himmat nahin hui ussko. Bahot ganda lagta kissi ke kamre mein dekhte hue ussne socha…
Ab kyunke Abhi kad ka ooncha tha to ussko sirf kamre mein dekhna tha to sab kuch dikh jata ussko, magar ussne dekha nahin iss niyat se gaya wo uss taraf ke agar Ruhi andar hogi to kum se kum Ruhi to ussko dekh paegi. Aur wohi hua, jaise Ruhi ne Abhi ko uss khidki se guzarte dekha to ussne gala saaf kiya Abhi ko jaise ek ishara kiya ke wo andar hai…. Bed par baithi, haath mein ek kitab liye Ruhi Abhi ko dekh rahi thi muskuraate hue.
Abhi ne ussko dekha, uss kamre a moaena kiya, aur pucha,
“is this your bedroom?!”
Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“It can’t be called a bedroom, too small, but yes I sleep here, this is my bed.”
Abhi: “you can’t understand how lucky I am feeling to be introduced to the bed and place you sleep. It’s an honour for me.!”
Ruhi: “Ah really? Why so?!”
Abhi: “yessss my dear…. What are you reading?”
To Ruhi ne kitab ki cover ko turn karte hue Abhi ko book ki title dikhaayi, book tha ek Mills and Boon wala romantic tale. Cover ke pic par ek aurat thi semi nude ek bina shirt ke hero se lipti hui.
Abhi ne pucha,
“you love to read romantic stories only or any variety in your choice?!”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“nah mujhe sirf romantic hi padhna passand hai, detectives, horror ya police bilkool nahin passand sirf ziada tar mills and boon ya dusre author ke but romantic hi padhti hoon.”
Phir Ruhi ne ek collection dikhaya Abhi ko usski table par. Karib 25 ya 30 books the sab ke sab Mills and Boons collection wale. Abhi ne dekh kar muskuraya aur pucha,
“Abhi hum donon baatein kar rahe hein to ghar ke andar sab sun nahin rahe hein ke tum mujhse baat kar rahi ho?!”
Ruhi ne kaandhe ko uchakte hue kaha,
“To kia hua sunne do!”
Abhi: “tumhari mummy so rahi hai ya jaag gayi hai? Aur tumhare papa ko nahin dekha aaj tak main ne kahan hota hai wo, der raat ko kaam se wapas ata hai kia?!”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“Mera papa Saudi Arabia mein driving ki Naukri karte hein, wo wapas ane hi wala hai kuch mahine baad!”
Abhi: “oh I see! To tum, tumhari mummy, Manoj aur Mahesh rehte ho yahan!”
Ruhi ne add kiya,
“Dadaji bhi!”
Abhi: “are haan dada ji ko bhool gaya main! Aur buss itne hi members hein tumhare family mein?”
Ruhi: “no, meri ek badi behen hein jisski shaadi ho chuki hai wo yahan se 100 kms ki doorie par rehti hai. Kabhi kabhaar aati hai.”
Abhi: “wow great then to have an elder sis!”
Ruhi: “hmmm yes!”
Abhi: “acha yeh batao ke kyun tumne mujhse kaha ke jab Mehboob present ho to tumse baat nah karun? Kia kaha ussne?!”
Ruhi ne kamre mein piche dekha tab awaaz dhimi karke kaha,
“Mere papa aur Mehboob bhai jaise hein. Mere papa ne ussko hum logon ka khayal rakhne ke liye kaha hai, halaan ke bus ke piche wala ghar mere chote chacha ki hai, matlab mere papa ka chota bhai hai, phir bhi Mehboob mere chacha se badhkar hai. Uss ne meri mummy se pucha ke main aap se kyun baar baar baat karti hoon! To mummy ne wo baat mujhse kaha, to main samajh gayi ke unnko nahin achha lagta jab hum donon baat karte hein issi liye aap se kaha ke usski haaziri mein mat baat karna mujhse se”
Abhi: “okay main samajh gaya, usske saamne tumse baat nahin karunga.”
Ruhi: “are eise nahin, jaise hum abhi kar rahe hein aise mat karna but wahan jab sab koyi ek saath hein agar mummy, Mehboob chacha, Rahima chachi, Mahesh sab saath hein tab you can talk, but not like this alone me and you, samjhe aap?!”
Abhi: “thik hai samajh gaya main, magar ek dusre ko dekh to sakte hein nah, tum nazar aati rehna please. Main tumko har baar dekhna passand karta hoon. Agar ek ghanta ho gaya aur tum nazar nahin aayi to mujhe bechaini hone lagti hai to please saamne aaya karna hat baar okay?!”
Ruhi: “mujhe pata hai. Issi liye to aati rehti hoon nah!”
Abhi bahot khush hua aur kaha,
“thanks very much darling, ab chalta hoon weh log aane wale hein ab kaam start karna hoga. Aur dekha nah tumne pucha ke main kyun itne savera ajaata hoon, to ab samjhi, hum donon ko baatein karne ke liye kitna time mil gaya hai nah?!”
Ruhi ne haan mein muskuraate hue gardan hillayi.
Abhi jaane laga, phir wapas aya aur pucha,
“How old are you Ruhi? I am 22 will be 23 this year and you?”
Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,
“ladkiyon ki umar nahin puche jaate, bad manners hihihi”
Abhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“ofo pata hai yaar, par main ne apni age bataya nah tumko so please tell me, kahin tum mujhse badi nikli to?!”
Ruhi zor se hanss padi aur kaha,
“haan main aap se badi hi hoon hihihihihi!!”
Abhi ne bhi hansste hue kaha,
“koyi baat nahin agar badi ho bhi to, umar se kia lena dena!”
Ruhi: “Aap ko koyi farak nahin padega agar main aap se umar mein badi hui to?
Abhi: “bilkool bhi nahin iss mein kaun si badi baat hai? Chalta hai yaar!”
Ruhi: “Acha aur aap ko lagta hai ke main aap se umar mein badi hoon kia?!”
Abhi: “bilkool hi nahin, tum 17, 18 ki lagti ho!! are yaar bata to do, 18 ho chuki ya ab bhi minor ho hehehehe!”
Ruhi: “ho chuki….. hmmmm I am over 19! Will be 20 this year!”
Abhi: “great that’s perfect then, ok see you later”
Aur Abhi chala gaya change karne, tab tak baaki ke sab agaye.
To be continued….. (2750 words)
Indeed Abhi very Happy I can say after reading the update.
All positive things happened this morning for him.
hope all goes fine like this for him every day thus he will have peace of mind.
But I know this will remain like this morning every day
good one bro.
Vikram singh rana
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Update 8 The Next Early Morning
Ruhi ne phir muskuraate hue apni maa ke taraf dekha aur kaha,
“Abhi kuch nahin kehna mujhe, kuch aur din beet jaane do tab bataungi aap ko aur shaayad ussko bhi….”
Ab aaguey….
Wo din kuch weise hi beeta, ek dusre ko dekhte, kabhi kitchen ki stairs par Ruhi aati to kabhi ghar ke piche wale hisse par washing stone ke paas. Donon ek dusre ko dekhte, muskurate, aankhon aankhon se ishaare karte etc.
Sham hui, bahot saare log aa gaye uss aangan mein dekhne ke bus kaise ban rahe hein…. Ruhi ka bada bhai bhi agaya, usska naam tha Manoj. Matlab Ruhi ke bhaiyon ke naam the Manoj aur Mahesh, Kissi firm mein kaam karta tha baaton baaton mein Abhi ko yeh pata chala usske baare mein.
Ruhi ke dada ji bhi kayi baar Abhi se baat karne aya tha usske paas jab Abhi weld kar raha tha. Budhe ko welding ke baare mein kaafi pata tha, uss baare mein baat kar raha tha Abhi se. Aur jab jab Abhi Ruhi ke taraf dekh raha tha to dada ji Abhi ko observe kar raha tha aur andar andar muskura raha tha.
Ab shaam ko ghar wapas jaane ke time kuch ziada log ekatha ho jaate the aangan mein to Ruhi door rehti thi, saamne kum aati thi kyunke sab log notice kar lete unn donon ko. Aur Abhi yeh chahta tha ke usske jaane ke waqt Ruhi usske saamne rahe, jaane se pehle wo Ruhi ko dekhte hue wahan se nikalna chahta tha. aur hua yeh ke jab Abhi washroom gaya khudko fresh karne to Ruhi kitchen mein bhi nahin dikhi.
Manoj aas paas tha iss liye shayad Ruhi doorie barak rahi thi Abhi ne socha, magar kal shaam ko to Manoj ke haziri mein hi Abhi ne Ruhi ko goodbye wave kiya tha to aaj kyun Ruhi door thi, wo thi kahan? Abhi ko kuch bhi acha nahin lag raha tha uss waqt. Bechain ho raha tha aur pray kar raha tha ke jaane se pehle Ruhi usske ssaamne aa jaaye.
Jab Abhi tayyar ho gaya, change kar liya, hair brush kar liya aur kitchen mein dekha to sirf Ruhi ki mummy thi wahan Ruhi nahin thi, Abhi udaas ho gaya aur socha ke kitchen ke stair par ja kar uss se puche ke Ruhi kidhar hai….
Phir abhi ne socha ke kia Ruhi kahin ghar ke andar se ussko dekh to nahin rahi? Kia ussne jaan bujh kar weisa kiya taake dekh sake ke Abhi ussko dhundta hai ya nahin? To Abhi ghar ke andar dekhne laga, khidkiyon ke paas dekhne laga ke koyi pardah hille, magar kuch nahin dikha aur aakhir mein ussko nikalna pada washroom se. Saeed bhai usska wait kar raha tha bus ke paas.
Jab Abhi ne mudhkar kitchen ke stairs par dekha to koyi nahin tha aaj usski maa bhi nahin thi wahan. Abhi ne socha kal kitna haseen shaam thi aur aaj kitna alag hai kyunke Ruhi saamne nahin hai.
Jab Tap number one ke paas aya abhi to ussne Ruhi ke dada ji ko goodbye kaha aur oonchi awaaz mein kaha,
“Acha main ab chalta hoon bade miyan kal milte hein bye!”
Abhi ne jaan bujh kar oonche awaaz mein baat kiya taake andar se Ruhi ussko sunein aur ussko pata chale ke wo wapas ghar jaa raha hai.
Main road par nikalte nikalte abhi ne kayi baar mudhkar stairs par dekha magar Ruhi nahin dikhi, Abhi ne ghar ke piche wale hisse par bhi dekha jahan kapde dhote hein wahan bhi dekha magar Ruhi kahin bhi nahin dikhi aur Abhi bahot udaas nikla wahan se iss shaam ko.
Wahan se ghar jaate waqt bus mein sirf Ruhi ke baare mein sochta gaya, ussko ek ghutan si feel hone laga tha, ek bhaaripan jaisa tha usske seene par, ek bojh feel ho raha tha usse, sirf iss liye ke Ruhi nazar nahin aayi aaj shaam ko. Ruhi ko dil mein basaaye, mann mein bithaaye safar kiya Abhi ne ghar tak.
Aur apni special diary mein sab likhne laga aaj ke din ke baare mein. Khud muskuraate hue likh raha tha ke kiss tarah se aaj Ruhi se baatein hui, kiss tarah uss se puchne gaya tha ke kia usski life mein koyi hai, aur Ruhi ka jawaab bhi likha sab kuch ek ek pal ko likha Abhi ne…….
Sab kuch likhne ke baad bahot der tak sochta raha ke kyun aaj shaam ko Ruhi nazar nahin aayi, yeh baat Abhi ko bahot disturb karne laga tha.
Raat der tak neendh nahin arahe the Abhi ko. Ussko sirf Ruhi nazar arahi thi har jagah. Sote, jaagte, uthte, baithte sirf Ruhi bassa hua tha Abhi ke khayaalon mein, bade mushkil se aankh lagi aur ussko laga ke buss kuch minaton mein subha ho gayi.
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Aangan mein chalte hue daakhil ho raha tha Abhi Ruhi ki yadon mein doobe, aur garden mein dekha ke kahin Wo phir se dikh nah jaaye gulaab pick karte hue. Abhi aate waqt yehi soch liya tha ke kaash aaj bhi wo garden mein dikhe to Abhi aaj ruk kar uss se baat karega aur puchega ke kahan thi kal shaam ko, kyun ussko jaate hue nahin dekha…. Magar Ruhi to aaj subha garden mein thi hi nahin… aur abhi ne khud se kaha,
“sala aisa kyun hota hai har baar? Sab ulta kyun hone lagta hai, jab bhi kuch kehna chahun, to mauka saamne ata hi nahin…”
Aur wo washroom reach hua. Ruhi ke kitchen mein dekha, khaali tha kitchen. Koyi nahin tha wahan. Subha ke 6 baje the. Kaam to 7 baje start hota hai aur 6 baje Abhi wahan pahunch gaya tha, sirf aur sirf Ruhi ke liye. Log so rahe the aur Abhi kaam ke site par aa chuka tha.
Ab Abhi ko Khushi hoti ke Ruhi ussko apne achche kapdon mein dekhti iss se pehle ke wo kaam karne wala purana kapda pehenta. Abhi subha subha fresh tha, dhoop mein jhulsa hua nahin tha, usska skin fresh tha, shave kiya tha aane se pehle, aftershave lagaya tha, thoda perfume bhi lagaya tha shirt par; ek Wrangler Blue Jeans aur ek safed shirt pehna hua tha. ek pair of khubsurat sport shoes mein tha… To chahta tha ke Ruhi ke saamne weise pesh aaye, taake wo Ruhi ko acha dikhe. Abhi yeh bhi soch kar early aya tha ke 6 se 7 baje tak pura ek ghanta hoga usske paas Ruhi se baat karne ko agar wo saamne aati to…. Magar wo dikh hi nahin rahi thi. Sab se pehla sawaal abhi ko yeh karna tha Ruhi se ke kal shaam ko wo kidhar thi, kyun saamne nahin aayi, aur aaj Abhi Ruhi se yeh request karne wala tha ke aaj se har shaam ko jab usska wapas jaane ka time aaye to Ruhi usske saamne rahe, kitchen ke stairs par present rahe taake Abhi ussko goodbye keh sake, ussko wave kar sake. Yeh kehna tha Abhi ko Ruhi se aaj. Magar wo dikhe tab nah?!
Abhi sochne laga kia Ruhi abhi tak so rahi hogi? Kia wo late uthti hogi? Phir abhi ne khud se kaha ke nahin kal to garden mein takriban issi waqt wo gulab tod rahi thi, matlab jaag jaati hai wo savere. Kia ghar ke andar se Ruhi Abhi ko dekh rahi hogi? Kia jaan bujh kar wo Abhi ko tarpa rahi thi? Yeh sab soch raha tha Abhi.
Abhi ne kapde nahin badle, socha ke 7 baje jab sab log ajayenge tab change karega. Weise hi raha. Apna bag rakha, ek cigarrete jalaya aur aangan mein ek walk karne laga. Bus ke piche wale hisse par dekhne gaya ke saeed ne kia kaam kiya hai… aur uss jagah se kapde dhone wale hisse ko dekha, to usske samajh mein aya ke kal jiss jagah par Ruhi khadi apni maa se baat kar rahi thi uss jagah se Ruhi ussko dikhta agar uss waqt Abhi bus ke piche wale hisse par kaam kar raha hota….. to Abhi ab charon taraf aangan ka moaena karne laga…. Dekhne laga ke kiss kiss jagah se kidhar behtar nazara hota hai Ruhi ke ghar, stairs, kitchen, kapde dhone wala place sab kidhar se best dikhta hai. Wo sab check kiya Abhi ne…..
Abhi ne yaad kiya ke first din ko Ruhi ek baar uss jagah se guzri thi jab apni cousin ke ghar se nikal ke apne ghar tak gayi thi, jiss din bus ko tow karke jungle se yahan laaya gaya tha. Ab Abhi ko yaad aya ke uss din ko ussne pehli baar Ruhi ko dekha tha. Uss roz Ruhi ek grey churidar mein thi aur haath mein do books liya hua tha ussne. To Abhi ko yeh bhi yaad aya ke ussne Ruhi ke haath mein ek Sydney Sheldon wala novel dekha tha uss din ko….. Aur ab Abhi samjha ke Ruhi read karti hai… khud Abhi ki taraah Ruhi ko kitabein padhna passand hai, wo apni cousin ke yahan se kitabein lene aayi thi, aur uss roz ghar ke samne wale door se andar gayi thi Ruhi haath mein kitabon ko liye.
To yeh sab yaad karte hue Abhi uss jagah par chal raha tha jahan se Ruhi guzri thi…. uss garden mein dekh raha tha jahan kal Ruhi gulaab tod rahi thi…., uss terrace ko dekh raha tha jahan Ruhi jhadu laga rahi thi, uss pathar ko dekh raha tha jahan usski maa kapde dho rahi thi…. Abhi ko uss aangan se pyar ho gaya jaise. Iss liye ke uss aangan ke har kone mein Ruhi bassi hui thi…
Abhi uss aagan ke chaaron awr dekh raha tha, ussko wo aangan sirf Ruhi ki yaad dila rahe the, Ruhi bassi hui thi wahan ke fiza mein, wahan ke hawa mein, wahan ke phoolon mein. Usski galiyon mein bhi sirf Ruhi bassi hui thi Abhi ke liye. Abhi chal kar main road par gaya. Road se seedha Ruhi ka ghar dikh raha tha, kitchen ki stairs dikh rahe the, Abhi ne socha ke yahan se bhi wo Ruhi ko dekh paega agar wo buss stair par ek baar khadi ho jaaye.. uss gali mein khada hokar Abhi Ruhi ko soch hi raha tha stair par dekhte hue ke jaise ek jaadu hua aur Ruhi nazar aayi stair par seedha main road par dekhte hue!!
Abhi ka dil zor se dhadka Ruhi ko dekh kar. Wo kal wali pale blue night gown mein thi, aur ussne Abhi ko dekh kar turant wapas andar ghuss gayi. To Abhi jaldi jaldi chal kar washroom ke taraf badha iss umeed se ke kitchen mein Ruhi ko dekh paega, wo wahin hogi kyunke uss ne abhi abhi ussko raaste par dekha….
Jab tak chalte hue Abhi washroom reach hua aur kitchen ke andar dekha to koyi bhi nahin tha. Abhi ko thoda ghussa aya. Sochne laga ke kyun chali gayi jab ussko pata hai ke main agaya hoon to?.... Phir Abhi sochne laga ke kia Ruhi sach mein stair par nikli thi ya yeh usska vehem tha? kia wo Ruhi ko itna soch raha tha ke wo usske khayaalon mein aayi thi assal mein wo Stairs par thi hi nahin? Abhi ne socha ke pyar ka aisa bhi assar ho sakta hai ke koyi yahan hai hi nahin phir bhi nazar arahi hai ussko? Wo kahin paagal to nahin hone laga tha? apna dimaaghi santulan khone to nahin laga tha Abhi pyar mei doob kar? Yehi sab soch raha tha Abhi…. 6.20 hue the, Abhi ne socha 45 mins se kum hai ab usske paas, kaash Ruhi kitchen mein aajaaye, wo pray karne laga ke God Ruhi ko kitchen mein bhej de jaldi se…..
Phir achanak Abhi ne khud se kaha,
“are agar wo meri tarah books padhti hai to wo zaroor book padh rahi hogi, matlab kal shaam ko bhi nahin dikhi thi kyunke book padh rahi hogi….”
Abhi khud ek bookworm tha, ussko achi tarah se pata tha book padhne wale ek baar agar padhne baith jaaye to uthte nahin hai, wo nah kuch sunte hai, nah kissi ki awaaz nah koyi shor sharaaba, unke concentration sirf book par hota hai…. Aur phir Abhi ne socha kitna acha pair hoga donon ka, donon ke taste same hein padhne ki latt donon ko hein wo bhi English book padhne ki latt……
6.30 hua aur Abhi himmat haar chuka tha. har ek minat ussko ek ghanta lag raha tha, har ek lamha ek ghata…… ussko yakeen ho gaya ke Ruhi read kar rahi hogi to jab tak wo book ko khatam nahin karegi wo saamne aane wali nahin hai. Wo phir bhi duaein maangta gaya khuda se ke usski Ruhi ko ek baar kitchen mein bhej dein….. aur Abhi ki Khuda se sunli….; duah qubool ho gayi; Ruhi kitchen mein aayi, uss night gown mein nahin balke ek two-piece mein, white blouse aur red skirt mein….
Ussko dekh ke Abhi ka dil achanak zor se dhadka, ek lamba saans liya Abhi ne aur dekha ke Ruhi ke haath mein ek cup tha jiss mein wo chai bhar rahi thi sar mez par jhuki hui thi, baal khule the aur weise hi jhuke hue gardan ke saath Ruhi ne ek halki Muskaan ke saath gardan ko left ki tarah mudhkar Abhi ko dekha. Abhi issi intezaar mein tha ke wo usske taraf dekhe taake wo uss se baat kar sake. Magar doorie 3 metre ke the to kaise baat karta, oonchi awaaz mein baat karna padta iss liye jiss waqt Ruhi ne usske taraf dekha to haath ke ishaare se bina awaaz ke jaise sound mute tha weise abhi ne ishaare se Good Morning kaha Ruhi ko. Ruhi muskuraayi aur weise hi honton ko “good morning” word pronounce karte hue ek khubsurat muskurahat se Ruhi ne bhi wish kiya Abhi ko, aur Ruhi wahin mez ke paas kitchen mein baith gayi chai sip karte hue. Abhi ko achcha laga ke apne kaam karne wale kapde mein change karne se pehle hi ruhi ne ussko ache kapdon mein dekha. Abhi ko pata tha ke wo handsome dikh raha tha aur chahta tha ke Ruhi par ek impression banaaye apni normal dress mein. Ruhi chai peete hue Abhi ke taraf hi dekh rahi thi.
Subha savere ka mausam tha, khamoshi chhaayi hui thi, fiza khubsurat tha, kuch parinde ki awaazein sunaayi de rahe the, ek chidya Ruhi ki kitchen ke upar baitha chun chun kar raha tha. Ziada tar log ab tak so rahe the, bahot kum log the main road par bhi iss waqt. Mehboob bhi abhi tak utha nahin tha aur nah hi Rahima dikh rahi thi halaan ke usski bhi kitchen ka darwaza khula hua tha. To Abhi ne Ruhi ke stairs par jaane ko socha. Socha ke ek do baat phusphussate hue hi kar lega usske saath. Sirf 3 metres ka faasla tey karna tha to Abhi ne kadam badhaya Ruhi ke kitchen ke taraf ussko dekhte hue…..
Jaise Ruhi ne dekha ke Abhi usske taraf aa raha hai to jhat se uth kadhi hui aur haath ke ishaare se nah mein hillaya Abhi ko… Abhi ne kadam rok liya ussko dekhte hue…. Ruhi mudhkar kitchen mein apne piche dekha, phir wapas Abhi ko dekha, to Abhi ne Ruhi ke piche dekha yeh soch kar ke koyi usske piche se ussko dekh raha hoga, iss liye wo jahan tha wahin theher gaya, magar Ruhi ko dekhta raha. Ruhi uss pal khadi ho chuki thi aur baar baar apne piche dekh rahi thi jiss se eisa lag raha tha ke ya to koyi usske taraf ghar ke andar se kitchen mein araha tha ya to koyi ussko dekh raha tha….
Abhi ko bechaini hone laga, ussko Ruhi se kehna tha ke aaj shaam ko wo idhar hi present rahe jiss waqt wo wapas ghar jaane lage. Aur tabhi Rahima apni kitchen mein aayi aur Abhi ko hello kehkar ussko ek cup chai de diya kal subha ki tarah. Rahima apni nighty mein thi. Ek pink colour ki nighty pehni hui thi ussne. Abhi ko disturb feel hua ussko uss libaas mein dekh kar aur apne nazron ko jhuka liya uss ne. Magar Rahima seedha Abhi ke chehre mein dekh rahi thi muskuraate hue. Rahima ki kitchen ka darwaza thik uss washroom mein hi khulta tha, assal mein wo ek separate garage ki tarah tha aur kapde dhone ki ek pathar bhi tha uss washroom mein, washroom naam diya magar tha wo kapde dhone ki jagah jahan sab worker kaam ke baad khud ko wash karte the… matlab Abhi thik ek kadam kitchen ke darwaze ke paas hi tha, aur Ruhi ki kitchen 3 metres ki doorie par tha…. Rahima ne Abhi se kaha,
“Tum bahot savere aajate ho har roz, kitne baje ghar se nikalte ho? aur uthte kitne baje ho hmm?”
Abhi ko uss se baat hi nahin karna tha, wo to Ruhi ko dekh raha tha; phir bhi jawaab to dena tha Rahima ko, to Abhi ne bina Rahima ko dekhe, balke Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue Rahima ko jawaab diya. Kaha ke ussko subha ko savere uthne ki aadat hai aur yahan ka kaam bahot bada hai iss liye jaldi chala aata hai.
Ab udhar se jab Ruhi ne abhi ko baat karte dekha to ussko pata chal gaya ke Rahima ki kitchen mein iss waqt sirf wohi ho sakti hai, to Ruhi ne Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue, apne chai ko khatam karke cup ko thoda zor se mez par patka aur wahan se uth kar andar chali gayi. Abhi ko saaf samajh mein agaya ke Ruhi naraaz ho gayi kyunke wo Rahima se baat kar raha tha. Abhi ne socha are kia baat ho gayi, Rahima malkin hai bus ki, usske yahan kaam karta hoon ussne mujhse baat ki to main kaise ussko reply nah karun?
Ab Abhi ko ghussa aane laga Ruhi ki naarazgi par, aur Abhi ne apne kapde change karne ko socha ab. Tab tak Ruhi wapas aayi, aur thik jab wo kitchen mein aayi to Abhi Rahima ko cup wapas kar raha tha aur kyunke Rahima nighty mein thi usskki nangi baazu dikha Ruhi ko Abhi ke haath se cup lete hue, ussko fir ghussa aya aur wo munh banaate hue phir wapas chali gayi. Iss baar Abhi ne Ruhi ko munh banaate hue dekha aur ab Abhi ko hanssi aayi usski naraazgi par.
Aur Abhi ne change karna shuru kiya tab tak Rahima ghar ke andar chali gayi aur Ruhi phir kitchen mein aayi, Abhi ne shirt utaar diya tha, aur Ruhi ko dekha to wapas shirt ko pehna aur Ruhi ke kitchen ke taraf badha magar phir Ruhi ne haath ke ishaare se ussko wapas jaane ko kaha…. Abhi phir ruka aur ab ussne ishaare se Ruhi ko kuch kaha jo Ruhi nahin samjhi to Ruhi ne apne honthon ko “KIA?” ke form banaate hue Abhi se pucha….
Tab Abhi ne Ruhi ko stairs par aane ka ishara kiya. Ruhi ne munh fula kar nah mein sar hillaya. Abhi ne zid kiya ke ya to wo stairs par aaye ya Abhi usski kitchen ke stairs par aega. Ruhi samajh gayi aur apne piche mudhkar dekha aur Abhi ko ishaare se apne piche ungli se ishara karte hue kuch kaha jo iss baar Abhi nahin samjha. Magar itna abhi samjha ke ishaare se Ruhi shayad kehna chahti hai ke koyi hai wahan par jo ussko dekh raha ya rahi hai….
Aur tab tak Tony agaya, 6.45 ho gaye the. Saeed nahin aya tha tab tak. Ruhi ne Tony ko dekha, Tony ne ussko hello kaha aur Ruhi ne apne sar ko jhukaate hue Tony hello kiya. Phir Abhi ne weise hi ishaare se Ruhi ko piche ke nal ke paas aane ko kaha, aur Ruhi ke okay kaha. To jaldi se Abhi gaya Ruhi ke ghar ke uss hisse par jahan washing stone tha. Wahan ek khidki bhi tha, jiss par Ruhi aayi aur khidki se abhi ko dekhte hue pucha,
“ofo kia keh rahe ho aap main kuch nahin samajh rahi!”
Abhi ne direct pucha,
“Tum kal shaam ko kahan thi jab main ghar wapas jaane laga tha?”
Ruhi ne muskuraate hue pucha,
“kyun? Main kahin bhi rahun aap ko kyun bataun?!”
Abhi ke samajh mein nahin aya ke ab kia kahen, ussne yeh reply to nahin expect kiya tha Ruhi se.
To Ruhi ne khud sawaal kiya,
“Aap abhi kiss se baatein kar rahe the?”
Abhi samajh gaya ke Ruhi Rahima ki baat kar rahi thi. To jawaab diya,
“Tumko to pata hai kiss se main baat kar raha tha to kyun puch rahi ho? Mujhe batao ke tum kal kyun nahin dikhi yaar!”
Ruhi: “wo har subha tumko chai deti hai?”
Abhi: “hmm kal bhi diya tha main savere aajata hoon nah?!”
Ruhi: “hmmm kal matlab jab main gulaab tod rahi thi aur aap ne mujhe good morning kaha tha tab?!”
Abhi: “oh yeh baat hai to tumne suna tha jab main ne tumko good morning kaha tha kal aur mujhse kaha ke kuch suna hi nahin tha tumne! Bad manners for not replying a greeting!”
Ruhi hanss padi aur kaha,
“wo main ghabra gayi thi nah, aap achanak saamne dikh gaye the subha subha to meri samajh mein nahin aya ke main kia karun, main darr gayi thi aap ko achanak dekh kar issi liye meri awaaz hi nahin nikli thi aap ko jawab dene ke liye!”
Abhi ne muskuraya aur pucha,
“ab to bata do ke kal tum kidhar thi shaam ko!”
Ruhi: “kal? Meri aankh lag gayi thi jab aap jaa rahe the.”
Abhi: “shaam 5.30 ko tum so rahi thi? Main nahin maanta, tum andar se mujhko zaroor dekh rahi hogi nah? Tumne jaan bujh kar weisa kiya mujhko tadpaane ke liye hai nah bolo?!”
Ruhi ne apni kehuni ko windows ke kone par tikaate hue kaha,
“Main weisa kyun karungi bhala? Main to har shaam ko kitchen mein mummy ki help karti hoon…… wo kia hai ke main kitab padh rahi thi aur padhte padhte aankh lag gayi thi, thik aap logon ke jaane ke baad main kitchen mein gayi, tab baahar dekha to koyi bhi nahin tha aap log jaa chuke the!”
Abhi ne kaha,
“oh yeh baat hai to ek kaam karna aaj ke baad mere liye; karogi?!”
Ruhi ne muskuraate hue pucha,
“main kyun aap ke liye koyi kaam karungi?” aur hanss padi Ruhi.
Abhi ne phir bhi kaha,
“Please aaj se har shaam ko mere jaane ke waqt tum please mere saamne rehna, ya to stair par present rehna ya yahan iss khidki par rehna, main tumko har roz jaate hue dekhna chahta hoon, tumko bye wave karna chahta hoon, tumhari chehre ko dekhte hue jaana chahta hoon, itna karogi mere liye please?!”
To be continued…. (3850 words)
Woooooowww very good update......
Fantastic and fabulous....as well as.......well written and described.....
Ye update puri tarah se abhi ke pyar ko.....OR iske pyar ki din par din badhti gehraayi ko......dikhata hai......
ABHI KE PYAR KO ITNA GAHRAI SE DIKHAANE KA AAPKA YE BHI REASON HO SAKTA HAI....TAKI READERS BHI US SE JYADA SE JYADA RELATE KAR SAKE.....
OR USKE PYAR KI GAHRAI KO KHUD MEHSUS KAR SAKE.....
AND BELIEVE ME.....THAT IS OUTSTANDING......
Most update me.....aapne isi chij ko pura kiya he.....OR wo kaafi achcha bhi hai....
Actually situation ye hoti hai....KI ak deewane ko...ha jaisi situation hai us hisaab se abhi ko diwana hee kahenge......Jo ki kisi ladki ke prati pagal ho.....
Ko wo jis jagah par dikhai deti hai....wo sochta hai ki wo shayad dubara use......wanhi mil jaayegi......OR iske liye wo wanha par khade ho kar kitna bhi intezar kar sakta hai.....
Wo jagah 1 ya phir kai ho sakti hai.....thats doesn't matter......
OR phir use us jagah se bhi......dhire dhire lagav sa gone lagta hai......same situation abhi ke saath hai.....
Wo sabhi jagah.....janha janha usne Ruhi ko dekha.....ab wo sochta hai ki wo use phir se shaayad wanhi dikhai de.....
Ak jhalak dekhne ki tadap.....Jo ki wo jaldi aakar dekhna chahta tha....lekin ho nahi paya.....
Finally Ruhi dikhai di.....lekin uska mud kar wapas chale jana .....kaafi azib tha.....khair koi na.....
Lekin us samay.....jab wo wapas chali gayi.....tab jo feelings abhi ki thi.....use kaafi achche se samajha jaa sakta hai....
Aap kisi ka dil o jaan se.....bas ak jhalak paane ke liye intezar kare.....OR wo aapko dekh kar ....muh mod kar chala jaaye....
Kaafi bura hota hai...
OR aakhir me Ruhi or abhi ki baat ho hee gayi.....
Ruhi ka Rahima ko dekh kar jalana.....kuch samajh nahi aaya.....
Kyoki rahima ak to uski chachi hai.....OR dusri baat wo abhi se age me bhi kaafi badi hai.....
Mana ki age se farak nahi padta....agar koi relation bana na chahe to.....
Lekin abhi to Ruhi khud bhi ABHI se anjan hai....OR uski me itna possessiveness kaafi odd hai.....
Khas kar tab jab uski khud ki maa bhi ......abhi se..... utna hee interest le kar baat karti hai.....
Isharo isharo me baate shuru ho gayi.....lekin kaafi jaldi nahi ho gaya.....
Abhi tak Ruhi ke baap ko nahi dikhaya hai.....
Kanhi jo situation ABHI ki 2 Ruhi ko lekar hai.....kanhi wo hee to RUHI KE PARIWAR ki ......abhi ko lekar to nahi..?????....
I'M SURE AAP MERA ISHARA SAMAJH GAYE HONGE......
ANYWAYS....
DEKHTE HAI INKA YE ISHARO ISHARO KA KHEL.....KYA RANG LAGA HAI.....
AT LAST....
VERY GOOD UPDATE...
THANKS.....
Sona
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Nice updateUpdate 11 Abhi Very Happy
Sunday ko din bhar Abhi ne apne diary mein sab kuch likha usske aur Ruhi ke baare mein. Apne feelings ko likha, ussko kia feel ho raha hai, kitna pyar karta hai Ruhi se, usske baghair jee nahin paega yeh sab likha Abhi ne.
Usske ghar mein wo apni choti behen jo 18 saal ki thi uss se bahut close tha. Abhi ussko sab kuch batata tha aur apne diary padhne ko deta tha, matlab usski uss behen ko sab kuch pata tha jo beet raha tha Abhi par. Usski behen ka naam tha Naina. Aur ek uss se bhi choti behen thi Abhi ka. Baaki aur 3 bhai the usske. Naina baaki sabko Abhi ke baare mein bata deti thi siwae usske pita ke. Matlab ghar mein usske pita ke ilawa sabko pata tha ke Abhi pyar mein hai Ruhi se.
Abhi ka din Ruhi ki yaad mein guzra hamesha ki tarah aur agle din savere savere pahunch gaya Ruhi ki aangan mein aur aaj bhi Ruhi gulaab tod rahi thi uss din ki tarah.
Iss baar Abhi ruk gaya garden ke saamne Ruhi ko dekhte hue aur good morning kaha. Ruhi weise hi apni Nightgown mein hi thi. Ek muthi mein kuch gulaab ke phool liye hue the aur dusre haath se aur phool tod rahi thi.
Ruhi ne kuch sharmilee adaa se good morning reply kiya Abhi ko magar bahot hi dhire se. Abhi khada ussko dekhta raha aur Ruhi kabhi ussko dekhti to kabhi mudhkar apne piche ghar ko dekhti ke koyi ussko dekh to nahin raha andar se.
Abhi ne pucha,
“Saturday ko tum kahan gayi thi? Aur mujhko jaane se pehle bataya kyun nahin tha?”
Ruhi muskuraayi, phir hanss padi aur aur apni dheemi, meethi awaaz mein kaha,
“Batana bhool gayi thi Friday ko, uss shaam ko aap chale gaye tab mujhe yaad aya ke aap se kehna bhool gayi thi ke Saturdays ko main ek course follow karne jaati hoon sewing ki.”
Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,
“sewing ki course? Kyun? Silaayi karogi aage chal kar kia?”
To Ruhi ne kaha,
”Aur kia kakrti? 12th ache se pass nahin hui, padhne ko aage mann nahin kiya, to mummy ne kaha silaayi seekh loon shaayad aage kaam ajaye!”
Abhi ne kaha,
“okay achcha bhi hai, magar kidhar gayi thi course follow karne ko? Kahin door kia?”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“West mein jo sheher hai wahan!”
Phir ruhi ne piche mudhkar dekhte hue kaha,
“Aap jao nah ab, aap kyun itne savere aajaate ho? Raat ko sote nahin ho kia? Abhi 6 baje hein kaam to 7 ko start hota hai nah?!”
Abhi ne jawaab diya,
“Neendh to tumne churra liye hein mere to kaise so paunga main? Aur ek baat batao kia tumko nahin passand ke main itne savere aajata hoon? Kumse kum sabke aane se pehle tumse kuch baatein karne ka mauka to mil jata hai, jaise abhi! Aur sach batao kia tum mujhko abhi expect nahin kar rahi thi? Kia tum abhi abhi mujhi ko nahin soch rahi thi?”
Ruhi hanss pari aur kaha,
“Aap mere khayaalon ke andar dekh sakte ho kia?
Abhi: “hmm isska matlab ke haan mere baare mein hi soch rahi thi tum hai nah? main to 24 ghante sirf tumko hi sochta rehta hoon, ghar se bus mein aate waqt tumhi rehti ho mere khayaalon mein to tumko bhi weisa hi sochna chahiye nah!”
Ruhi: “bilkool jhoot main aap ke bare mein bilkool bhi nahin soch rahi thi”
Aur ruhi hanss padi yeh keh kar, phir kaha,
“Aap jaao nah ab. Mera bada bhai yahin hai ussi ke liye flowers le rahi hoon wo photos leta hai apne camera se….”
Abhi ne tab kaha,
“Aur Saturday ko jab tum jaa rahi thi to ek nazar mujhko dekha bhi nahin nazrein bilkool niche jhuke hue the, mujhko ek nazar dekh to sakti thi nah?!”
Ruhi ne weise hi sharmilee andaaz mein gulaab ke phool ko dekhte hue jawaab diya,
“Main kaise nazar utha kar dekhti uss waqt sab ke nazar mujh par the mujhe maloom tha sab mujhi ko dekh rahe the, I felt very shy at that moment on that day! Magar main ne aap ko dekha tha jaate hue thoda sa. Mujhe pata tha ke aap bhi mujhko hi dekh rahe the.”
Abhi bahut khush hua usski answer se aur baat badalte hue kaha,
“Are haan Manoj bus ki bhi photos le raha tha, main ne dekha tha uss din! Wo professional photographer hai kia? Kaam kahan karta hai wo?”
Ruhi ne phir mudhkar ghar ke taraf dekhte hue reply kiya,
“Ussi sheher mein kaam karta hai jahan main silaayi ke liye jaati hoon, aur wo professional photographer to nahin magar usska shauk hai photos lena, ussko ek inaam mila tha ek baar kissi special photo ki ek photography contest mein!”
Abhi: “oh I See! Kia wo mujhe ek copy bus ki photos ka de sakta hai kia?”
Ruhi: “Ussi se maang lena, wo har roz bus ki photos leta hai, bus kaisa tha aur har roz kitna bus banta jaa raha hai, har roz kuch pics leta hai bus ki!”
Abhi: That’s great, wo mera madad kar raha hai ek tarah se, main zaroor uss se photos manguga last din ko.”
Ruhi: “To aap ko ussko pay karna padega photos ke liye!”
Abhi: “of course pay karunga. Kitna leta hai per photo?”
Ruhi: “pata nahin ussi se puch lena….. ab jao nah please, main nahin chahta hoon ke wo mujhse sawaal kare ke aap kia keh rahe the!”
Abhi: “Are to agar wo puche to keh dena ke main uss se bus ki photos kharidna chahta hoon nah!”
Ruhi ne phir hansste hue kaha,
“Bahot honshiyaar ho aap, turant aap ko ek bahana mil jata hai!”
Abhi: “Main to yahan sirf tumhare liye ata hoon; baaki to kaam to bahana hai sweetheart”
Ruhi: “main aap ki sweetheart nahin hoon kyun kehto aap mujhko sweetheart?!”
Abhi muskuraya aur jaane laga. To Ruhi ne kaha,
“Ruko please!”
Abhi: “kabhi jaane ko kehti ho kabhi rukne ko kia yaar!”
Ruhi ne tab hansste hue kaha,
“Mujhe kehna tha ke din mein kaam karte waqt aap baar baar mujhse baat karne mat ana khaas kar jab Mehboob chacha yahan hota hai!”
Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,
“Are wo kyun? Mehboob ne kuch kaha kia?!”
Ruhi: “Haan baad mein bataungi aap ab jao!”
Abhi ne jaate hue kaha,
“Saturday ko tum Qayamat dhaa rahi thi, beauty queen lag rahi thi, itni khubsurat ho socha nahin tha, tum par to kayi mitte honge mere ilawa hai nah? jab uss sheher mein jaati ho to kitnon par Bijli giraati hogi tum hmmm?!”
Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“mujhe kia pata? Aap jaise diwane aur honge kahin to main kia jaanun!”
Abhi: “shukar hai ke mere ilawa kissi aur ka pata nahin tumko varna mujhe takliff hoti!”
Ruhi tab thoda zor se hanss padi aur khud apne muhn par haath rakh kar piche ghar ke taraf dekha aur dhire se phussphussaate hue Abhi se kaha,
“Ab jao please baad mein milti hoon! Jab Manoj chala jaaye tab milna!”
Abhi khush hua aur chala gaya washroom ke taraf.
Washroom ke ke kone se Abhi watch karne laga Ruhi ko aur dekha ke wo terrace se hokar ghar ke saamne ke darwaze ke andar gayi tabhi Manoj ki awaaz sunaayi diya yeh kehte hue,
“are ek do katra paani daalo uss rose par nah tab click karunga”
Abhi samajh gaya ke andar Manoj unn gulaabon ki tasveerin le raha tha.
Bus 10 mins baad Manoj kitchen ke taraf se apne bag kaandhe par taange nikla aur Abhi se hello kaha aur jaane laga to Abhi ne ussko roka, aur Manoj ne muskurate hue kaha,
“Are bus miss ho jaegi shaam ko wapas aunga to baat karenge”
Magar Abhi ne kaha,
“to chalte hue baat karta hoon nah chalo tumko bus stop tak chorr ke ata hoon baat bhi kar lenge.”
Ruhi kitchen ke stairs par aa khadi hui Abhi ko usske bhai se baat karte hue sunkar. Abhi ne ussko dekha aur Ruhi Abhi se muskuraayi. Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi Manoj se bus ki photos ke baare mein baat karna chahta tha.
Aur jab Abhi aur Ruhi ne ek dusre se muskuraaye to Manoj ne donon ko ek dusre se muskuraate hue dekh kar hanssa.
Phir Abhi Manoj ke saath chalte hue bus stop tak gaya aur ussne Manoj se kaha ke jitney bhi photos wo bus ka lega unn sab pics ke ek copy ussko dein aur pucha ke per photo kitna lega. Manoj ne kaha 10 rupay ek photo ki. Abhi ne kaha okay aur tab manoj ne kaha ke,6 Mahinon mein 300 se ziada pics ho jayenge kia Abhi utna pay kar paega Manoj ne pucha, to Abhi ne kaha ke agar 500 pics bhi hue tab bhi pay karega. To Manoj ne kaha okay deal. Phir turant Abhi ne jeb se 500 rupay Manoj ko advance payment kar diya to Manoj ne kaha ke issi hafte mein pehla roll ko develop karega to jitney bus ki pictures hein wo Abhi ko dega.
Abhi kuch door ka soch raha tha is sliye ussko wo bus ki photos chahiye tha aur ussne Monoj se Saeed ko bataane se mana kiya ke Abhi uss se photos le raha hai. Yeh bhi kaha Abhi ne ke kabhi workers ko nahin lena photos mein, Saeed ko to bilkool bhi nahin lena, agar Abhi ko photos mein liya to koyi baat nahin…..
Yeh baad mein pata chalega ke Abhi ko kyun uss bus ke photos shuru se end tak chahiye tha. Abhi ne abhi se hi bade door ka soch rakha tha. Ek din future mein saare photos usske bade kaam aane wale the.
Abhi wapas aangan mein gaya aur Ruhi ko dhundne laga. 6.30 hua thato usske paas 30 mins tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. Washroom se kitchen mein dekha to koyi nahin tha, phir bus ke piche wale hisse se washing stone ke taraf dekha to wahan ke room ka khidki khuli hui dekha… ussko umeed thi ke Ruhi uss kamrre mein hogi…. Kuch himmat karke Abhi chalte hue wahan tak gaya…magar kamre ke andar dekhne ki himmat nahin hui ussko. Bahot ganda lagta kissi ke kamre mein dekhte hue ussne socha…
Ab kyunke Abhi kad ka ooncha tha to ussko sirf kamre mein dekhna tha to sab kuch dikh jata ussko, magar ussne dekha nahin iss niyat se gaya wo uss taraf ke agar Ruhi andar hogi to kum se kum Ruhi to ussko dekh paegi. Aur wohi hua, jaise Ruhi ne Abhi ko uss khidki se guzarte dekha to ussne gala saaf kiya Abhi ko jaise ek ishara kiya ke wo andar hai…. Bed par baithi, haath mein ek kitab liye Ruhi Abhi ko dekh rahi thi muskuraate hue.
Abhi ne ussko dekha, uss kamre a moaena kiya, aur pucha,
“is this your bedroom?!”
Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“It can’t be called a bedroom, too small, but yes I sleep here, this is my bed.”
Abhi: “you can’t understand how lucky I am feeling to be introduced to the bed and place you sleep. It’s an honour for me.!”
Ruhi: “Ah really? Why so?!”
Abhi: “yessss my dear…. What are you reading?”
To Ruhi ne kitab ki cover ko turn karte hue Abhi ko book ki title dikhaayi, book tha ek Mills and Boon wala romantic tale. Cover ke pic par ek aurat thi semi nude ek bina shirt ke hero se lipti hui.
Abhi ne pucha,
“you love to read romantic stories only or any variety in your choice?!”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“nah mujhe sirf romantic hi padhna passand hai, detectives, horror ya police bilkool nahin passand sirf ziada tar mills and boon ya dusre author ke but romantic hi padhti hoon.”
Phir Ruhi ne ek collection dikhaya Abhi ko usski table par. Karib 25 ya 30 books the sab ke sab Mills and Boons collection wale. Abhi ne dekh kar muskuraya aur pucha,
“Abhi hum donon baatein kar rahe hein to ghar ke andar sab sun nahin rahe hein ke tum mujhse baat kar rahi ho?!”
Ruhi ne kaandhe ko uchakte hue kaha,
“To kia hua sunne do!”
Abhi: “tumhari mummy so rahi hai ya jaag gayi hai? Aur tumhare papa ko nahin dekha aaj tak main ne kahan hota hai wo, der raat ko kaam se wapas ata hai kia?!”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“Mera papa Saudi Arabia mein driving ki Naukri karte hein, wo wapas ane hi wala hai kuch mahine baad!”
Abhi: “oh I see! To tum, tumhari mummy, Manoj aur Mahesh rehte ho yahan!”
Ruhi ne add kiya,
“Dadaji bhi!”
Abhi: “are haan dada ji ko bhool gaya main! Aur buss itne hi members hein tumhare family mein?”
Ruhi: “no, meri ek badi behen hein jisski shaadi ho chuki hai wo yahan se 100 kms ki doorie par rehti hai. Kabhi kabhaar aati hai.”
Abhi: “wow great then to have an elder sis!”
Ruhi: “hmmm yes!”
Abhi: “acha yeh batao ke kyun tumne mujhse kaha ke jab Mehboob present ho to tumse baat nah karun? Kia kaha ussne?!”
Ruhi ne kamre mein piche dekha tab awaaz dhimi karke kaha,
“Mere papa aur Mehboob bhai jaise hein. Mere papa ne ussko hum logon ka khayal rakhne ke liye kaha hai, halaan ke bus ke piche wala ghar mere chote chacha ki hai, matlab mere papa ka chota bhai hai, phir bhi Mehboob mere chacha se badhkar hai. Uss ne meri mummy se pucha ke main aap se kyun baar baar baat karti hoon! To mummy ne wo baat mujhse kaha, to main samajh gayi ke unnko nahin achha lagta jab hum donon baat karte hein issi liye aap se kaha ke usski haaziri mein mat baat karna mujhse se”
Abhi: “okay main samajh gaya, usske saamne tumse baat nahin karunga.”
Ruhi: “are eise nahin, jaise hum abhi kar rahe hein aise mat karna but wahan jab sab koyi ek saath hein agar mummy, Mehboob chacha, Rahima chachi, Mahesh sab saath hein tab you can talk, but not like this alone me and you, samjhe aap?!”
Abhi: “thik hai samajh gaya main, magar ek dusre ko dekh to sakte hein nah, tum nazar aati rehna please. Main tumko har baar dekhna passand karta hoon. Agar ek ghanta ho gaya aur tum nazar nahin aayi to mujhe bechaini hone lagti hai to please saamne aaya karna hat baar okay?!”
Ruhi: “mujhe pata hai. Issi liye to aati rehti hoon nah!”
Abhi bahot khush hua aur kaha,
“thanks very much darling, ab chalta hoon weh log aane wale hein ab kaam start karna hoga. Aur dekha nah tumne pucha ke main kyun itne savera ajaata hoon, to ab samjhi, hum donon ko baatein karne ke liye kitna time mil gaya hai nah?!”
Ruhi ne haan mein muskuraate hue gardan hillayi.
Abhi jaane laga, phir wapas aya aur pucha,
“How old are you Ruhi? I am 22 will be 23 this year and you?”
Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,
“ladkiyon ki umar nahin puche jaate, bad manners hihihi”
Abhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“ofo pata hai yaar, par main ne apni age bataya nah tumko so please tell me, kahin tum mujhse badi nikli to?!”
Ruhi zor se hanss padi aur kaha,
“haan main aap se badi hi hoon hihihihihi!!”
Abhi ne bhi hansste hue kaha,
“koyi baat nahin agar badi ho bhi to, umar se kia lena dena!”
Ruhi: “Aap ko koyi farak nahin padega agar main aap se umar mein badi hui to?
Abhi: “bilkool bhi nahin iss mein kaun si badi baat hai? Chalta hai yaar!”
Ruhi: “Acha aur aap ko lagta hai ke main aap se umar mein badi hoon kia?!”
Abhi: “bilkool hi nahin, tum 17, 18 ki lagti ho!! are yaar bata to do, 18 ho chuki ya ab bhi minor ho hehehehe!”
Ruhi: “ho chuki….. hmmmm I am over 19! Will be 20 this year!”
Abhi: “great that’s perfect then, ok see you later”
Aur Abhi chala gaya change karne, tab tak baaki ke sab agaye.
To be continued….. (2750 words)
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WoooooowwwUpdate 9 Abhi Got Wounded
“Please aaj se har shaam ko mere jaane ke waqt tum please mere saamne rehna, ya to stair par present rehna ya yahan iss khidki par rehna, main tumko har roz jaate hue dekhna chahta hoon, tumko bye wave karna chahta hoon, tumhari chehre ko dekhte hue jaana chahta hoon, itna karogi mere liye please?!”
Ab aaguey….
Buss itna kaha Ruhi ko Abhi ne ke Saeed ji aate hue dikhaayi diye aur Ruhi ne kaha,
“Piche dekho, tumhara boss tumko dekh raha hai, ab jao ussko passand nahin jab tum kaam chorr kar mujhse baat karne aate ho!”
Abhi ne mudhkar dekha Saeed chalte hue washroom ke taraf badh raha tha, ussne Abhi ko ek bure nazar se dekha jaise sach mein ussko napassand tha ke wo Ruhi se baat kare aur Abhi ne ussko “hi Saeed bhai” kaha, to Saeed ne bhi “Hello” kehte hue aaguey badh gaya, usska chehra dekhne layak tha uss waqt. Aur Ruhi ne abhi se kaha,
“Dekha aap ne wo naakhush hai usske chehre se dikh raha hai!”
Abhi ne jawaab mein kaha,
“Tum usski fikar kyun kar rahi ho? Tum mera fikar karo nah. usska koyi haq nahin hai mujh par, mujhe kuch bhi karne se mana nahin kar sakta wo!”
Ruhi: “Tumhara boss hai nah, tum usske liye kaam karte ho to haq banta hai usska.”
Abhi: “Tumko kiss ne bataya ke main usske liye kaam karta hoon? Main ne uss se sirf kaam seekha hai, abhi wo mera koyi boss voss nahin hai, garage mein mera boss tha yahan nahin, samjhi kia?!”
Ruhi: “Mujhe kia pata mummy ne to kaha ke tum usske niche kaam karte ho!”
Abhi: “ofo, kia hai yaar ab tumhari mummy ko kaise yeh sab batein pata hai? Chorro inn baton ko tum yeh batao ke tumko mera naamm kaise pata chala? Tumne jab kal mujhe “Abhi” bulaya tha tabhi main puchne wala tha magar bhool gaya!”
Ruhi: “Are yeh bhi koyi puchne ki baat hai kia? Sab log itne zor zor se aapko bulaate rehte hein ke Abhi yeh karo, Abhi wo karo, Abhi kidhar ho, Abhi yahan aao, Abhi issko uthao, Abhi;Abhi; Abhi; iss aangan mein, hamare aangan mein sirf Abhi ka naam hi sunaayi deta hai aaj kal; jaise Abhi ka naam liye bina kissi ka kaam hi nahin hota uss bus mein; to kaise mujhe pata nahin chalega wo Abhi aap ho?!”
Abhi hanssne laga Ruhi ne jiss adaa se wo sab kuch kaha tha.
Aut thik tabhi Saeed ji ne kaha,
“ABHI ajao shuru karte hein yaar!”
Wo sunkar donon Abhi aur Ruhi hanns pade aur Ruhi ne zor se hansste hue kaha,
“Dekha main ne kaha nah sirf Abhi ka naam sunaayi deta hai iss aangan mein ab jao aap ka boss bula rahe hein aap ko!”
Abhi ki hanssi nahin ruk rahe the, Ruhi bhi ussko weise hansste dekh kar hanssti jaa rahi thi Abhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue aur Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha,
“I love your smile and the way you laugh.”
Aur Ruhi ne kaha;
“And I love your smile and your laughs, keep laughing always!”
Abhi ka dil garden garden ho gaya Ruhi ki baat sunkar aur kaha,
“Okay then chalta hoon shaam ko nazar aana zaroor okay?”
Ruhi ne haan mein sar hillaya aur aaj Ruhi ne Abhi ko wave kiya apni khubsurat kalaayi ko hillate hue phir kaha,
“wish you a very nice day”
Abhi jaane laga tha aur mudhkar kaha,
“Wish you the same Sweetheart!”
Sweetheart word kehkar Abhi wahaan se tez kadmon ke raftaar se nikla, aur Ruhi ne muskuraate hue sar khidki ke baahar nikal kar kaha,
“I am NOT your Sweetheart!” aur Ruhi hanssne lagi jab dekha ke Abhi bhaag gaya…. Ruhi wahin khadi rahi khidki ke paas kuch der aur usski aankhein bhar aaye, ekaat boondh aansso ke usske gaal par tapke jissko wo ponch hi rahi thi ke dekha usske saamne Abhi ussko dekh raha hai!
Abhi khada sab dekh raha tha, Ruhi ke aankhon ka bharna, aansoowon ka tapakna aur gaal par behna sab dekha Abhi ne…. Ruhi ne iss liye nahin dekha ke Abhi wapas aya tha kyunke uss pal ko wo aasmaan mein dekhte hue kuch soch rahi thi jiss waqt usske aankhen bhar aaye the…. Abhi ko dekhte hue Ruhi ne apne gaal saaf kiye aur Abhi ne ekdum serious hokar pucha,
“Kia hua? Ari hua kia? Tum abhi to hanss rahi to rone kyu lagi ahcaanak? Kia hua kia?
Ruhi ne buss negative mein sarr hillate hue kaha,
“It’s ok kuch bhi nahin main aisi hi hoon kabhi bhi ro padti hoon, buss samajhlo ke yeh Khushi ke aansoo hein!”
Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,
“kiss baat par royi tum? Last word to tum ne Khushi se mujhe kaha ke tum meri sweetheart nahin ho tab tumhare aankhen bharr aaye main ne sab dekha…. Kia sochne lagi thi tum mujhe reply karne ke baad? Kyun aasmaan mein dekh rahi thi? Batao nah kia baat hai!”
Ruhi ne Abhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue kaha,
“Meri bahot buri kismat hai, samajh lo ke main manhoos hoon, mujhko khushiyan raas nahin aati, iss liye rona agaya mujhe!”
Abhi ne kaha,
“Please aise mat rona mujhe dukh ho raha hai tumko rote dekh kar, aur yeh kitaabi baatein to mat hi karo mujhse ke buri kismat hai, manhoos ho, khushiyan raas nahin aati etc… bahot ziada novels padhti ho tum ussi ka assar hai aisi baatein !”
Saeed ji ki awaaz phir aayi,
“Are ABHI aao nah yaar kaam nahin karna kia aaj!!”
Ruhi phir hanss padi aur kaha,
“hahahaha, lo phir tumhara naam phukara jaa raha hai meri aangan mein ab jao tum ABHI SAHAB!!
Abhi ne hansste hue kaha,
“haan aise hi hansste rehna dekho kitni khubsurat dikh rahi ho hansste hue, keep laughing sweetheart, muuuuaaah!”
Tab tak iss baar sach mein Abhi jaa chuka tha aur dobara Ruhi ne sar khidki ke baahar nikal kar kaha,
“I AM NOT YOUR SWEETHEART ABHI”
Aur Ruhi badbadaayi,
“Kyun sweetheart keh rahe ho mujhe tum? Main nahin ban sakti tumhari sweetheart Abhi. Nahin ban sakti main!”
Ab aisa kyun kaha Ruhi ne? Buss jo bhi munh mein ata bol deti hai ya koyi baat thi aisa kehne ke liye? Abhi ke saamne nahin kaha usske peeth ke piche kaha, agar weisi koyi baat hai to uss se saaf kehdo nah?
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Udhar Abhi aur team ne kaam start kar diye the. Abhi weld kar raha tha. Tony ussko help kar raha tha. Ab wahan ek aisa mauka aya jabke Abhi ko puraane chasis se pehle wale chipke hue lohe ko pighla kar giraana tha taake naye lohe ko us jagah par chipkaaye. Ek ghante tak weisa karte jaa raha tha. Ekaat baar ussne Ruhi ko chaaron taraf dekha magar wo dikh nahin rahi thi. Ab welding kar raha tha to welding mask hota hai nah, wo chehre ke saamne tha aur bahot concentration se kaam kar raha tha ke ussko dikha bhi nahin ke Ruhi usske bagal se guzar gayi kahin jaate hue. Usski maa bhi sath thi, Tony ne bhi nahin dekha unn donon ko jaate hue magar Saeed ne dekha.
Abhi khada, tha welding stick se ek purane chipke hue lohe ko pighla kar giraane ke liye, wo pighla hu loha niche girr rahe the, aur accidentally ek baar ek pighle hue lohe ka ball Abhi ke payr par girra, aur ussko pata hi nahin chala, aur jab pighla hua lohe se Abhi ki payr ki chamri mein jalan feel hua tab wo jaldi se apne payr par dekha, tab tak wo lohe ka pighla hua ball jo almost aag ka gola tha Abhi ke joote ke andar pighalte hue ghuss gaya Abhi ne dard ke maare haath se mask aur welding stick feinka aur chilla utha, aur jaldi se joota nikaalne ko baitha, jitna time ussne liya joota utaarne mein tab tak wo garam pighla hua loha jo aag ka gola tha usske payr ke chamri mein dhansste chala jar aha tha, Abhi chilla utha aur jab joota nikaal liya to socks mein ek hole ho chuka tha dhuan nikal raha tha aur wo pighla loha abhi ke payr ke gosht ko pighla raha tha, ek hole usske payr mein ho chuka tha tab tak Tony ne botal ka paani dala Abhi ke peyr par…. aur Abhi ne apne tang ko ek jhatka diya to wo garam Pighla hua loha ek taraf girra…..
Abhi dard se tadap raha tha, uss haalat mein bhi wo sirf Ruhi ko hi yaad kar raha tha, usske dil ki ek ichcha thi ke Ruhi uss waqt usske paas aaye aur ussko dilaasha de…. Magar Ruhi to thi hi nahin wahan aur Abhi soch raha tha wo ghar ke andar hai. Abhi ke payr par ek chedh jaisa ho gaya tha aur laal mass ka tukda dikhne laga tha….. Saeed bhai ne turant Abhi ko hospital jaane ko kaha kyunke injection lagwana bahot zaroori tha uss ghav ke liye, khoon beh rahe the aur Abhi ko uss jagah par bahot jalan feel ho rahi thi…. wo thik se chal bhi nahin paa raha tha….
To Mehboob ki wife, Rahima ne kaha,
“Dispensary hai yahin kuch door, main road par wahan lejao koyi Abhi ko, injection ho jaega.”
Abhi, Ruhi ke ghar ke andar dekh raha tha ke kyun koyi nahin araha tha ussko dekhne, ussko ajeeb laga ke aisa haadsa ho gaya aur unn logon ko kuch bhi sunaayi nahin diya ab tak?
Wahan ke logon mein se jo log shaam ko sab kuch dekhne aate hein unn mein se ek aadmi aaj kaam par nahin gaya tha shukar hai ke wo ussi waqt aangan ke andar aa raha tha, aur ussko jab sab pata chala to kaha ke wo apne car lekar turant ata hai Abhi ko dispensary lejaane ke liye.
Aur Abhi ko dispensary lejaya gaya. Marham patti kiya gaya usske payr mein. Ek injection lagaya gaya kulhe mein aur 3 injection har roz aakar lagana tha.
Ab payr mein patti bandh gayi to joota pehnna namumkin tha to aate aate Abhi ne ek pair of chappal kharid kar pehna. Aur wapas kaam par aaya. Saeed ne ussko ghar wapas jaane ko kaha rest karne ko kaha. Agar kahin aur kaam kar raha hota Abhi to turant ghar chala jaata magar yahan to Ruhi thi to wo hargiz nahin jaana chahega nah….
Wapas aane ke baad Rahima ne ussko juice diya au ek cigarette jala kar Abhi baitha aur Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf dekhne laga. Sochne laga ke kyun koyi bhi nazar nahin araha tha. Aur kuch der baad dada ji aya aur Abhi se pucha ke kaise yeh sab hua. Abhi ne socha agar dada ji ko pata chal gaya to Ruhi aur usski maa ko to pata zaroor chala hoga to kyun Ruhi ussko dekhne ko nahin aya Abhi yeh sochne laga.
Aur kaam start kiya Abhi ne baaki ke welding ko continue karte hue…. Phir lunch time hua, aur jab Abhi khana khane ja raha tha to main road se Ruhi aur usski maa ko aate hue dekha. Ruhi ne ek bahot khubsurat dress pehni hui thi aur pari jaisi dikh rahi thi. Behad khubsurat nazar arahi thi. Abhi wahin khada reh gaya ussko dekhte hue, aur apne payr ke dard ko bhool gaya. Sab log khaane chale gaye magar Abhi wait karta raha ke Ruhi usske karib aaye to wo ussko kuch to bole…. Ruhi ne jab Abhi ko khada dekha to muskuraane lagi aur sar niche jhuka liya. Wo aaguey chal rahi thi aur usski maa piche thi. Ruhi ke haath mein ek bag tha aur usski maa ke haath mein ek uss se bhi bada bag tha. kuch kharidne gaye the shayad Abhi ne socha. Aur jab Ruhi karib agayi to Abhi ne buss kaha,
“kamaal hai tum kab gayi ke mujhe pata hi nahin chala!”
Ruhi ne buss kaha,
“Aap kaam mein busy the jab main jaa rahi thi; yahin se guzri thi, khanssi bhi thi main aap ko agah karne ke liye magar aap ki welding machine shor kar rahi thi to shaayad aap ne suna hi nahin, to main kia karti?”
Tab tak usski maa ne ussko join karte hue kaha,
“ab chal bhi!”
To Ruhi ko jaana para…. Abhi ne aur kuch nahin kaha, ussne socha tha ke Ruhi ussko bina joota ke dekh kar heyraan hogi aur usske payr mein patti dekh kar sawaal karegi magar Ruhi ne kuch nahin pucha to Abhi sad hua aur khaane chala gaya.
Abhi ko Khushi hoti ke Ruhi usska care karta, aur dekhna chahta tha ke Ruhi ki expression kaisi hoti yeh jaan kar ke Abhi ko gehra choat laga hai aur injection karne gaya tha….. khair khana khaate waqt Abhi yeh expect karne laga ke ab Ruhi ke dada se Ruhi aur usski maa ko pata chal jaega to baad mein jab baat karne ka mauka milega to Ruhi zaroor puchegi Abhi se uss baare mein.
Magar uss din ko Ruhi ne ek baar bhi nahin pucha Abhi se ke usske payr mein kia hua, kayi baar shaam tak Ruhi aur Abhi ke nazrein mile, ek baar to donon aap paas the jab shaam ko Ruhi apni terasse par apni cousin sister se baat kar rahi thi, abhi wahin tha bus ke paas bilkool aamne saamne aur Ruhi baat karte waqt baar baar Abhi ko dekh rahi thi , donon ke nazrein mil rahe the magar ek baar bhi Ruhi ne nahin pucha Abhi se ke kyun payr mein patti bandhi hui hai aur choat kaise lagi. Iss se Abhi bahot disappoint hua.
Aur aya time ghar wapas jaane ka tab Ruhi stairs par aayi to, usski maa bhi wahin thi, aur jab Abhi wapas jaane laha to wave to kiya Ruhi ko, Ruhi muskura rahi thi Abhi ko dekhte hue aur halaan ke Abhi chappal mein ghar wapas jaa raha tha, shoes nahin pehna tha phir bhi Ruhi ne kuch nahin pucha aur nah usski maa ne pucha ke kyun chappal mein ghar jaa raha hai….
Abhi niraash hokar wahan se ghar wapas gaya iss din ko.
Ghar aakar apne disappointment ko likha Diary mein Abhi ne. udaas tha, phir bhi dil mein Ruhi ke liye bahot sara pyar samaya hua tha aur AbHi ne socha ke ho sakta hai ke dada ji ne bataya hi nahin ho ke Abhi ke payr jal gaye the, magar usske payr mein patti to dekhe honge Ruhi aur usski maa ne bhi to kyun donon mein se kissi ne bhi nahin pucha ke kia hua usske payr mein.
Abhi ne phir bhi ignore kiya aur Ruhi ki approach aur usski Muskaan, aur nazron ko socha ke kitni pyar se har baar wo Abhi ko dekh rahi thi aaj din bhar… wo sab yaad karte hue Abhi sone gaya; iss umeed se ke kal din behtar hoga. Kal Ruhi uss se puchegi ke usske payr mein kia hua, kal Ruhi usska ziada khayal karegi, kal Ruhi ko bahut afsos hoga yeh jaan kar ke Abhi ko choat lagi hai kaam mein, kal jab injection karwane jaega to Ruhi shayad usske sath jaegi ya ussko jaate waqt dekhegi, aur Abhi khud Ruhi ko apne saath chalne ko kahega…. Yeh sab sochte, Ruhi ko dil mein bassa kar Abhi ko neendh agayi, ussko apne payr ka dard bhi mehsoos nahin hua itna khoya hua tha Ruhi ki yaad mein.
To be continued…. (2652 words)
AS ALWAYS VERY WELL WRITTEN UPDATE......
JYADA ACHCHA ISLIYE NAHI KAHUNGA KYOKI MUJHE JRA SA DISAPPOINTING LAGA.....
ISKE 2 REASON HAI.....
1. RUHI KO JAB PATA HEE HAI KI.....ABHI OR WO AK HO JAAYE.....YE CHIJ POSSIBLE NAHI HAI.....
OR SHAAYAD ISILIYE HEE USKA BEHAVIOUR DONO BAR......AK BAR GARDEN ME OR DUBARA BALKANI ME.....RUDE THA.....
TO JAB USE YE PATA HEE HAI....TO PHIR WO KYO US SE BAAT KARTI HAI.....USKE ISHARO KA JAWAAB DETI HAI....OR KYO USE BADHAWA DETI HAI.....
JABKI USE BHI ACHCHI TARAH SE PATA HAI KI....YE USE JYADA DUKH HEE DEGA....
2.AAPNE YE CHIJ .....KI RUHI OR ABHI KO SEPARATE HONA HAI....YE KUCH JYADA HEE JALDI REVEALE KAR DIYA....
I MEAN YE BAAT TO HAR KOI READER JAANTA HAI.....OR JAISA KI STORY KE TITLE SE BHI LAGTA HAI....
KI FINALLY RUHI OR ABHI KO SEPARATE HONA HEE HAI.....OR JITNI AASANI SE YE SAB CHAL RAHA HAI....
ABHI....RUHI KA MILAN UTNA BHI AASANI NAHI HAI.....OR JIS HISAAB SE UN DONO KA.....BACHPAN ME SEPARATION HUA THA.....
US HISAAB SE TO KAAFI MUSHQIL HOGA UNKA MILNA....
I MEAN TO SAY.....JAB AAP ABHI KE LIVE SIDE KO ITNI GAHRAI SE DIKHAANE RAHE HAI.....USKI HAR FEELING....HAR EMOTION KO AAPNE BAKHUBI DIKHAYA HAI.....SHAAYAD JOYA BHI HAI....LIKHTE TIME....
TO PHIR ISME RUHI KAHA HAI.....USKA PYAR KAHA HAI....USKI FEELINGS.....EMOTIONS KAHA HAI.....
RUHI KI LOVE SIDE TO PURI TARAH SE HIDDEN HEE HAI....ABHI TAK.....
BHALE HEE RUHI KA AK SIDE WEIRD HO....BUT OTHER SIDE TO KAAFI ACHCHA HAI.....JO KI SHAAYAD ABHI KO PASAND BHI KARTA HAI.....
MERA MATLAB YE THE KI AGAR AAP KUCH TIME OR LEKAR.....AGAR RUHI KE LOVE SIDE KO THODA JYADA EXPRESS KARTE.....THODA OR EXPLORE KARTE TO....
READERS JIS TARAH SE ABHI KI FEELINGS KO SAMAJH PAA RAHE HAI....KHUD KO US SE RELATE KAR PA RAHE HAI.....
THIK WAISE HEE RUHI KI FEELINGS KE SAATH BHI KHUD KO JOD PAATE.....KHUD FEEL KAR PAAYE USKI LIFE KE UPS AND DOWNS.....TO ABHI KE JAISE IS SE BHI RELATE KAR PAAYE KHUD KO.....
AGAR RUHI KE PYAR KO BHI KUCH TIME TAK....ABHI KI TARAH DIKHAYA JATA OR PHIR LAST ME JAAKAR YE HOTA TAB....
SAARE READERS KO SHOCK LAGTA.....OR WO SITUATION AK BLAST KI TARAH HOTI STORY KE LIYE....
STORY KE VIEWS....REVIEWS SAB BADHTE....
ALL I MEAN.....KAAFI JALDI KAR DIYA.....
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AB BAAT KARE BAAKI KE UPDATE KI TO.....ABHI KA ACCIDENT....
ABHI KA DHYAAN BHALE HEE KAAM ME HO.....LEKIN PAKKA USKA DIMAAG RUHI KE BAARE ME SOCH RAHA THA....
ISI LIYE YE GHATNA HUI.....
OR UPAR SE RUHI NE BHI ABHI KI CHOT KE RATI UDASINTA DIKHAI.....TO ABHI KO OR BHI JYADA TAKLEEF HUI.....
AB YE TO HO NAHI SAKTA KI USNE USKI CHOT YA PHIR ABHI KI PATTI NA DEKHI HO.....
LEKIN PHIR BHI WO KUCH NAHI BOLI YA USKA HAAL NAHI PUCHA....
MAY BE USKA OTHER SIDE.....JO KI PAHLE BHI DIKHAYA GAYA HAI....US PAR WO HAAVI HO GAYA HO....
RUHI KI BAAT KO ABHI NE BHI SUN LIYA.....LEKIN RUHI NE USKA DHYAAN US TARAF SE HATA DIYA.....WESE BHI JAB AADMI PYAR ME HOTA HAI....TO JIN CHIJO PAR DHYAN DENA HOTA HAI....UNHE IGNORE KARTA HAI....
OR PYAR ME AADMI YE BHI IMAGINE KARTA HAI KI AANE WALA KAL USKE LIYE JYADA KHUSHIYAN LEKAR AAYEGA....JAISA KI ABHI KAR RAHA HAI....
AB DEKHNA YE YE KI.....RUHI KA YE DOUBLE BEHAVIOUR OR ABHI KA PYAR KYA RANG LATA HAI....
ANYWAYS....
HAMESHA KI TARAH WELL WRITTEN UPDATE....
DEKHTE HAI RUHI KA PYAR CHIPANA OR ABHI KA PYAR DIKHANA KYA RANG LAGA HAI....
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AS ALWAYS VERY WELL WRITTEN UPDATE......
JYADA ACHCHA ISLIYE NAHI KAHUNGA KYOKI MUJHE JRA SA DISAPPOINTING LAGA.....
ISKE 2 REASON HAI.....
1. RUHI KO JAB PATA HEE HAI KI.....ABHI OR WO AK HO JAAYE.....YE CHIJ POSSIBLE NAHI HAI.....
OR SHAAYAD ISILIYE HEE USKA BEHAVIOUR DONO BAR......AK BAR GARDEN ME OR DUBARA BALKANI ME.....RUDE THA.....
TO JAB USE YE PATA HEE HAI....TO PHIR WO KYO US SE BAAT KARTI HAI.....USKE ISHARO KA JAWAAB DETI HAI....OR KYO USE BADHAWA DETI HAI.....
JABKI USE BHI ACHCHI TARAH SE PATA HAI KI....YE USE JYADA DUKH HEE DEGA....
2.AAPNE YE CHIJ .....KI RUHI OR ABHI KO SEPARATE HONA HAI....YE KUCH JYADA HEE JALDI REVEALE KAR DIYA....
I MEAN YE BAAT TO HAR KOI READER JAANTA HAI.....OR JAISA KI STORY KE TITLE SE BHI LAGTA HAI....
KI FINALLY RUHI OR ABHI KO SEPARATE HONA HEE HAI.....OR JITNI AASANI SE YE SAB CHAL RAHA HAI....
ABHI....RUHI KA MILAN UTNA BHI AASANI NAHI HAI.....OR JIS HISAAB SE UN DONO KA.....BACHPAN ME SEPARATION HUA THA.....
US HISAAB SE TO KAAFI MUSHQIL HOGA UNKA MILNA....
I MEAN TO SAY.....JAB AAP ABHI KE LIVE SIDE KO ITNI GAHRAI SE DIKHAANE RAHE HAI.....USKI HAR FEELING....HAR EMOTION KO AAPNE BAKHUBI DIKHAYA HAI.....SHAAYAD JOYA BHI HAI....LIKHTE TIME....
TO PHIR ISME RUHI KAHA HAI.....USKA PYAR KAHA HAI....USKI FEELINGS.....EMOTIONS KAHA HAI.....
RUHI KI LOVE SIDE TO PURI TARAH SE HIDDEN HEE HAI....ABHI TAK.....
BHALE HEE RUHI KA AK SIDE WEIRD HO....BUT OTHER SIDE TO KAAFI ACHCHA HAI.....JO KI SHAAYAD ABHI KO PASAND BHI KARTA HAI.....
MERA MATLAB YE THE KI AGAR AAP KUCH TIME OR LEKAR.....AGAR RUHI KE LOVE SIDE KO THODA JYADA EXPRESS KARTE.....THODA OR EXPLORE KARTE TO....
READERS JIS TARAH SE ABHI KI FEELINGS KO SAMAJH PAA RAHE HAI....KHUD KO US SE RELATE KAR PA RAHE HAI.....
THIK WAISE HEE RUHI KI FEELINGS KE SAATH BHI KHUD KO JOD PAATE.....KHUD FEEL KAR PAAYE USKI LIFE KE UPS AND DOWNS.....TO ABHI KE JAISE IS SE BHI RELATE KAR PAAYE KHUD KO.....
AGAR RUHI KE PYAR KO BHI KUCH TIME TAK....ABHI KI TARAH DIKHAYA JATA OR PHIR LAST ME JAAKAR YE HOTA TAB....
SAARE READERS KO SHOCK LAGTA.....OR WO SITUATION AK BLAST KI TARAH HOTI STORY KE LIYE....
STORY KE VIEWS....REVIEWS SAB BADHTE....
ALL I MEAN.....KAAFI JALDI KAR DIYA.....
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AB BAAT KARE BAAKI KE UPDATE KI TO.....ABHI KA ACCIDENT....
ABHI KA DHYAAN BHALE HEE KAAM ME HO.....LEKIN PAKKA USKA DIMAAG RUHI KE BAARE ME SOCH RAHA THA....
ISI LIYE YE GHATNA HUI.....
OR UPAR SE RUHI NE BHI ABHI KI CHOT KE RATI UDASINTA DIKHAI.....TO ABHI KO OR BHI JYADA TAKLEEF HUI.....
AB YE TO HO NAHI SAKTA KI USNE USKI CHOT YA PHIR ABHI KI PATTI NA DEKHI HO.....
LEKIN PHIR BHI WO KUCH NAHI BOLI YA USKA HAAL NAHI PUCHA....
MAY BE USKA OTHER SIDE.....JO KI PAHLE BHI DIKHAYA GAYA HAI....US PAR WO HAAVI HO GAYA HO....
RUHI KI BAAT KO ABHI NE BHI SUN LIYA.....LEKIN RUHI NE USKA DHYAAN US TARAF SE HATA DIYA.....WESE BHI JAB AADMI PYAR ME HOTA HAI....TO JIN CHIJO PAR DHYAN DENA HOTA HAI....UNHE IGNORE KARTA HAI....
OR PYAR ME AADMI YE BHI IMAGINE KARTA HAI KI AANE WALA KAL USKE LIYE JYADA KHUSHIYAN LEKAR AAYEGA....JAISA KI ABHI KAR RAHA HAI....
AB DEKHNA YE YE KI.....RUHI KA YE DOUBLE BEHAVIOUR OR ABHI KA PYAR KYA RANG LATA HAI....
ANYWAYS....
HAMESHA KI TARAH WELL WRITTEN UPDATE....
DEKHTE HAI RUHI KA PYAR CHIPANA OR ABHI KA PYAR DIKHANA KYA RANG LAGA HAI....
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Bahot bahot shukriya tamaan replies k liye Vikram bhai. Aap ussi tarah se reviews dete ho jiss tarah se detail mein main likhta hoon. Aur ye mujhe BEHAD PASSAND HAI BHAI. THANKS VERY VERY FROM THE DEPTH OF MY HEART.
Main aap ki iss review ko pehle reply karta hoon, baaki baad mein karunga.
Bhai iss liye Ruhi k baare mein jiada detail nahin hai kyunke Abhi k taraf se ye kahani hai. Jo kuch Abhi par beeta wohi bataya jaa raha hai kahani mein. Jo kuch Abhi ko pata hai, jo usske saath hua, jo uss par beeta jo Abhi ko pata hai sirf wo bayaan kiya ja raha hai. Ye Kahani main 1st person mein likhne wala tha, matlab khub Abhi sunata apni kahani, magar main third person mein likhna bahot ziada passand karta hoon.
Ab aap sochiye jab khud Abhi ko nahin pata Ruhi k baare mein to ab tak jahan reach hue hein kaise pata chalega Ruhink baare mein. Jab jab aur jaise jaise Abhi ko Ruhi k baare mein jiada pata chalega sirf tabhi Ruhi k bare mein likha jayega. Abhi jitna usske karib hoga utna usske baare mein jaanega tabhi likha jaega.... weise yeh kahani issi k baare mein hai k koyi kaise pyar paane k liye tadapta hai, pyar ho jata hai, dusri taraf se hope milti hai, encouragement milne lagta hai, pyar ho jata hai magar kiss reason se success nahin milta.....
Ziada nahin bata sakta kyunke yehi to kahani hai nah bhai.....
Aap buss yun samajh lijiye ke aap Abhi ho aur wohi sab ho raha hai aap ke saath jo kuch Abhi k saath hua hai ab tak. To kia aap ko Ruhi ke baare mein kuch pata hai. Wo kyun weise behave karti hai, kyun kabhi pyar dikhati aur kyun kabhi ruthi si rehti hai kia Abhi ko pata hai? Nahin nah..... to issi perspective se likha ja raha hai.... Abhi k point of view se hai ye kahani.... wohi sab jhel raha hai, ussi par sab beet raha, ussi ko pata chalega baat kia hai tabhi readers ko bhi pata chalega Vikram bhai.....
Agar Ruhi k baare mein pehle se bata diya gaya to Abhi ka role feeka ho jaega aur Ruhi will win the show where as the hero is the main character of the story....
Aur bhai ye Ruhi wo wala Ruhi nahin jo Ruhi Abhi ki pehla pyar tha...... hope aap ne shuru se thik se read kiya hai
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Bahut acha laga ye wala update.Update 11 Abhi Very Happy
Sunday ko din bhar Abhi ne apne diary mein sab kuch likha usske aur Ruhi ke baare mein. Apne feelings ko likha, ussko kia feel ho raha hai, kitna pyar karta hai Ruhi se, usske baghair jee nahin paega yeh sab likha Abhi ne.
Usske ghar mein wo apni choti behen jo 18 saal ki thi uss se bahut close tha. Abhi ussko sab kuch batata tha aur apne diary padhne ko deta tha, matlab usski uss behen ko sab kuch pata tha jo beet raha tha Abhi par. Usski behen ka naam tha Naina. Aur ek uss se bhi choti behen thi Abhi ka. Baaki aur 3 bhai the usske. Naina baaki sabko Abhi ke baare mein bata deti thi siwae usske pita ke. Matlab ghar mein usske pita ke ilawa sabko pata tha ke Abhi pyar mein hai Ruhi se.
Abhi ka din Ruhi ki yaad mein guzra hamesha ki tarah aur agle din savere savere pahunch gaya Ruhi ki aangan mein aur aaj bhi Ruhi gulaab tod rahi thi uss din ki tarah.
Iss baar Abhi ruk gaya garden ke saamne Ruhi ko dekhte hue aur good morning kaha. Ruhi weise hi apni Nightgown mein hi thi. Ek muthi mein kuch gulaab ke phool liye hue the aur dusre haath se aur phool tod rahi thi.
Ruhi ne kuch sharmilee adaa se good morning reply kiya Abhi ko magar bahot hi dhire se. Abhi khada ussko dekhta raha aur Ruhi kabhi ussko dekhti to kabhi mudhkar apne piche ghar ko dekhti ke koyi ussko dekh to nahin raha andar se.
Abhi ne pucha,
“Saturday ko tum kahan gayi thi? Aur mujhko jaane se pehle bataya kyun nahin tha?”
Ruhi muskuraayi, phir hanss padi aur aur apni dheemi, meethi awaaz mein kaha,
“Batana bhool gayi thi Friday ko, uss shaam ko aap chale gaye tab mujhe yaad aya ke aap se kehna bhool gayi thi ke Saturdays ko main ek course follow karne jaati hoon sewing ki.”
Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,
“sewing ki course? Kyun? Silaayi karogi aage chal kar kia?”
To Ruhi ne kaha,
”Aur kia kakrti? 12th ache se pass nahin hui, padhne ko aage mann nahin kiya, to mummy ne kaha silaayi seekh loon shaayad aage kaam ajaye!”
Abhi ne kaha,
“okay achcha bhi hai, magar kidhar gayi thi course follow karne ko? Kahin door kia?”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“West mein jo sheher hai wahan!”
Phir ruhi ne piche mudhkar dekhte hue kaha,
“Aap jao nah ab, aap kyun itne savere aajaate ho? Raat ko sote nahin ho kia? Abhi 6 baje hein kaam to 7 ko start hota hai nah?!”
Abhi ne jawaab diya,
“Neendh to tumne churra liye hein mere to kaise so paunga main? Aur ek baat batao kia tumko nahin passand ke main itne savere aajata hoon? Kumse kum sabke aane se pehle tumse kuch baatein karne ka mauka to mil jata hai, jaise abhi! Aur sach batao kia tum mujhko abhi expect nahin kar rahi thi? Kia tum abhi abhi mujhi ko nahin soch rahi thi?”
Ruhi hanss pari aur kaha,
“Aap mere khayaalon ke andar dekh sakte ho kia?
Abhi: “hmm isska matlab ke haan mere baare mein hi soch rahi thi tum hai nah? main to 24 ghante sirf tumko hi sochta rehta hoon, ghar se bus mein aate waqt tumhi rehti ho mere khayaalon mein to tumko bhi weisa hi sochna chahiye nah!”
Ruhi: “bilkool jhoot main aap ke bare mein bilkool bhi nahin soch rahi thi”
Aur ruhi hanss padi yeh keh kar, phir kaha,
“Aap jaao nah ab. Mera bada bhai yahin hai ussi ke liye flowers le rahi hoon wo photos leta hai apne camera se….”
Abhi ne tab kaha,
“Aur Saturday ko jab tum jaa rahi thi to ek nazar mujhko dekha bhi nahin nazrein bilkool niche jhuke hue the, mujhko ek nazar dekh to sakti thi nah?!”
Ruhi ne weise hi sharmilee andaaz mein gulaab ke phool ko dekhte hue jawaab diya,
“Main kaise nazar utha kar dekhti uss waqt sab ke nazar mujh par the mujhe maloom tha sab mujhi ko dekh rahe the, I felt very shy at that moment on that day! Magar main ne aap ko dekha tha jaate hue thoda sa. Mujhe pata tha ke aap bhi mujhko hi dekh rahe the.”
Abhi bahut khush hua usski answer se aur baat badalte hue kaha,
“Are haan Manoj bus ki bhi photos le raha tha, main ne dekha tha uss din! Wo professional photographer hai kia? Kaam kahan karta hai wo?”
Ruhi ne phir mudhkar ghar ke taraf dekhte hue reply kiya,
“Ussi sheher mein kaam karta hai jahan main silaayi ke liye jaati hoon, aur wo professional photographer to nahin magar usska shauk hai photos lena, ussko ek inaam mila tha ek baar kissi special photo ki ek photography contest mein!”
Abhi: “oh I See! Kia wo mujhe ek copy bus ki photos ka de sakta hai kia?”
Ruhi: “Ussi se maang lena, wo har roz bus ki photos leta hai, bus kaisa tha aur har roz kitna bus banta jaa raha hai, har roz kuch pics leta hai bus ki!”
Abhi: That’s great, wo mera madad kar raha hai ek tarah se, main zaroor uss se photos manguga last din ko.”
Ruhi: “To aap ko ussko pay karna padega photos ke liye!”
Abhi: “of course pay karunga. Kitna leta hai per photo?”
Ruhi: “pata nahin ussi se puch lena….. ab jao nah please, main nahin chahta hoon ke wo mujhse sawaal kare ke aap kia keh rahe the!”
Abhi: “Are to agar wo puche to keh dena ke main uss se bus ki photos kharidna chahta hoon nah!”
Ruhi ne phir hansste hue kaha,
“Bahot honshiyaar ho aap, turant aap ko ek bahana mil jata hai!”
Abhi: “Main to yahan sirf tumhare liye ata hoon; baaki to kaam to bahana hai sweetheart”
Ruhi: “main aap ki sweetheart nahin hoon kyun kehto aap mujhko sweetheart?!”
Abhi muskuraya aur jaane laga. To Ruhi ne kaha,
“Ruko please!”
Abhi: “kabhi jaane ko kehti ho kabhi rukne ko kia yaar!”
Ruhi ne tab hansste hue kaha,
“Mujhe kehna tha ke din mein kaam karte waqt aap baar baar mujhse baat karne mat ana khaas kar jab Mehboob chacha yahan hota hai!”
Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,
“Are wo kyun? Mehboob ne kuch kaha kia?!”
Ruhi: “Haan baad mein bataungi aap ab jao!”
Abhi ne jaate hue kaha,
“Saturday ko tum Qayamat dhaa rahi thi, beauty queen lag rahi thi, itni khubsurat ho socha nahin tha, tum par to kayi mitte honge mere ilawa hai nah? jab uss sheher mein jaati ho to kitnon par Bijli giraati hogi tum hmmm?!”
Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“mujhe kia pata? Aap jaise diwane aur honge kahin to main kia jaanun!”
Abhi: “shukar hai ke mere ilawa kissi aur ka pata nahin tumko varna mujhe takliff hoti!”
Ruhi tab thoda zor se hanss padi aur khud apne muhn par haath rakh kar piche ghar ke taraf dekha aur dhire se phussphussaate hue Abhi se kaha,
“Ab jao please baad mein milti hoon! Jab Manoj chala jaaye tab milna!”
Abhi khush hua aur chala gaya washroom ke taraf.
Washroom ke ke kone se Abhi watch karne laga Ruhi ko aur dekha ke wo terrace se hokar ghar ke saamne ke darwaze ke andar gayi tabhi Manoj ki awaaz sunaayi diya yeh kehte hue,
“are ek do katra paani daalo uss rose par nah tab click karunga”
Abhi samajh gaya ke andar Manoj unn gulaabon ki tasveerin le raha tha.
Bus 10 mins baad Manoj kitchen ke taraf se apne bag kaandhe par taange nikla aur Abhi se hello kaha aur jaane laga to Abhi ne ussko roka, aur Manoj ne muskurate hue kaha,
“Are bus miss ho jaegi shaam ko wapas aunga to baat karenge”
Magar Abhi ne kaha,
“to chalte hue baat karta hoon nah chalo tumko bus stop tak chorr ke ata hoon baat bhi kar lenge.”
Ruhi kitchen ke stairs par aa khadi hui Abhi ko usske bhai se baat karte hue sunkar. Abhi ne ussko dekha aur Ruhi Abhi se muskuraayi. Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi Manoj se bus ki photos ke baare mein baat karna chahta tha.
Aur jab Abhi aur Ruhi ne ek dusre se muskuraaye to Manoj ne donon ko ek dusre se muskuraate hue dekh kar hanssa.
Phir Abhi Manoj ke saath chalte hue bus stop tak gaya aur ussne Manoj se kaha ke jitney bhi photos wo bus ka lega unn sab pics ke ek copy ussko dein aur pucha ke per photo kitna lega. Manoj ne kaha 10 rupay ek photo ki. Abhi ne kaha okay aur tab manoj ne kaha ke,6 Mahinon mein 300 se ziada pics ho jayenge kia Abhi utna pay kar paega Manoj ne pucha, to Abhi ne kaha ke agar 500 pics bhi hue tab bhi pay karega. To Manoj ne kaha okay deal. Phir turant Abhi ne jeb se 500 rupay Manoj ko advance payment kar diya to Manoj ne kaha ke issi hafte mein pehla roll ko develop karega to jitney bus ki pictures hein wo Abhi ko dega.
Abhi kuch door ka soch raha tha is sliye ussko wo bus ki photos chahiye tha aur ussne Monoj se Saeed ko bataane se mana kiya ke Abhi uss se photos le raha hai. Yeh bhi kaha Abhi ne ke kabhi workers ko nahin lena photos mein, Saeed ko to bilkool bhi nahin lena, agar Abhi ko photos mein liya to koyi baat nahin…..
Yeh baad mein pata chalega ke Abhi ko kyun uss bus ke photos shuru se end tak chahiye tha. Abhi ne abhi se hi bade door ka soch rakha tha. Ek din future mein saare photos usske bade kaam aane wale the.
Abhi wapas aangan mein gaya aur Ruhi ko dhundne laga. 6.30 hua thato usske paas 30 mins tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. Washroom se kitchen mein dekha to koyi nahin tha, phir bus ke piche wale hisse se washing stone ke taraf dekha to wahan ke room ka khidki khuli hui dekha… ussko umeed thi ke Ruhi uss kamrre mein hogi…. Kuch himmat karke Abhi chalte hue wahan tak gaya…magar kamre ke andar dekhne ki himmat nahin hui ussko. Bahot ganda lagta kissi ke kamre mein dekhte hue ussne socha…
Ab kyunke Abhi kad ka ooncha tha to ussko sirf kamre mein dekhna tha to sab kuch dikh jata ussko, magar ussne dekha nahin iss niyat se gaya wo uss taraf ke agar Ruhi andar hogi to kum se kum Ruhi to ussko dekh paegi. Aur wohi hua, jaise Ruhi ne Abhi ko uss khidki se guzarte dekha to ussne gala saaf kiya Abhi ko jaise ek ishara kiya ke wo andar hai…. Bed par baithi, haath mein ek kitab liye Ruhi Abhi ko dekh rahi thi muskuraate hue.
Abhi ne ussko dekha, uss kamre a moaena kiya, aur pucha,
“is this your bedroom?!”
Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“It can’t be called a bedroom, too small, but yes I sleep here, this is my bed.”
Abhi: “you can’t understand how lucky I am feeling to be introduced to the bed and place you sleep. It’s an honour for me.!”
Ruhi: “Ah really? Why so?!”
Abhi: “yessss my dear…. What are you reading?”
To Ruhi ne kitab ki cover ko turn karte hue Abhi ko book ki title dikhaayi, book tha ek Mills and Boon wala romantic tale. Cover ke pic par ek aurat thi semi nude ek bina shirt ke hero se lipti hui.
Abhi ne pucha,
“you love to read romantic stories only or any variety in your choice?!”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“nah mujhe sirf romantic hi padhna passand hai, detectives, horror ya police bilkool nahin passand sirf ziada tar mills and boon ya dusre author ke but romantic hi padhti hoon.”
Phir Ruhi ne ek collection dikhaya Abhi ko usski table par. Karib 25 ya 30 books the sab ke sab Mills and Boons collection wale. Abhi ne dekh kar muskuraya aur pucha,
“Abhi hum donon baatein kar rahe hein to ghar ke andar sab sun nahin rahe hein ke tum mujhse baat kar rahi ho?!”
Ruhi ne kaandhe ko uchakte hue kaha,
“To kia hua sunne do!”
Abhi: “tumhari mummy so rahi hai ya jaag gayi hai? Aur tumhare papa ko nahin dekha aaj tak main ne kahan hota hai wo, der raat ko kaam se wapas ata hai kia?!”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“Mera papa Saudi Arabia mein driving ki Naukri karte hein, wo wapas ane hi wala hai kuch mahine baad!”
Abhi: “oh I see! To tum, tumhari mummy, Manoj aur Mahesh rehte ho yahan!”
Ruhi ne add kiya,
“Dadaji bhi!”
Abhi: “are haan dada ji ko bhool gaya main! Aur buss itne hi members hein tumhare family mein?”
Ruhi: “no, meri ek badi behen hein jisski shaadi ho chuki hai wo yahan se 100 kms ki doorie par rehti hai. Kabhi kabhaar aati hai.”
Abhi: “wow great then to have an elder sis!”
Ruhi: “hmmm yes!”
Abhi: “acha yeh batao ke kyun tumne mujhse kaha ke jab Mehboob present ho to tumse baat nah karun? Kia kaha ussne?!”
Ruhi ne kamre mein piche dekha tab awaaz dhimi karke kaha,
“Mere papa aur Mehboob bhai jaise hein. Mere papa ne ussko hum logon ka khayal rakhne ke liye kaha hai, halaan ke bus ke piche wala ghar mere chote chacha ki hai, matlab mere papa ka chota bhai hai, phir bhi Mehboob mere chacha se badhkar hai. Uss ne meri mummy se pucha ke main aap se kyun baar baar baat karti hoon! To mummy ne wo baat mujhse kaha, to main samajh gayi ke unnko nahin achha lagta jab hum donon baat karte hein issi liye aap se kaha ke usski haaziri mein mat baat karna mujhse se”
Abhi: “okay main samajh gaya, usske saamne tumse baat nahin karunga.”
Ruhi: “are eise nahin, jaise hum abhi kar rahe hein aise mat karna but wahan jab sab koyi ek saath hein agar mummy, Mehboob chacha, Rahima chachi, Mahesh sab saath hein tab you can talk, but not like this alone me and you, samjhe aap?!”
Abhi: “thik hai samajh gaya main, magar ek dusre ko dekh to sakte hein nah, tum nazar aati rehna please. Main tumko har baar dekhna passand karta hoon. Agar ek ghanta ho gaya aur tum nazar nahin aayi to mujhe bechaini hone lagti hai to please saamne aaya karna hat baar okay?!”
Ruhi: “mujhe pata hai. Issi liye to aati rehti hoon nah!”
Abhi bahot khush hua aur kaha,
“thanks very much darling, ab chalta hoon weh log aane wale hein ab kaam start karna hoga. Aur dekha nah tumne pucha ke main kyun itne savera ajaata hoon, to ab samjhi, hum donon ko baatein karne ke liye kitna time mil gaya hai nah?!”
Ruhi ne haan mein muskuraate hue gardan hillayi.
Abhi jaane laga, phir wapas aya aur pucha,
“How old are you Ruhi? I am 22 will be 23 this year and you?”
Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,
“ladkiyon ki umar nahin puche jaate, bad manners hihihi”
Abhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“ofo pata hai yaar, par main ne apni age bataya nah tumko so please tell me, kahin tum mujhse badi nikli to?!”
Ruhi zor se hanss padi aur kaha,
“haan main aap se badi hi hoon hihihihihi!!”
Abhi ne bhi hansste hue kaha,
“koyi baat nahin agar badi ho bhi to, umar se kia lena dena!”
Ruhi: “Aap ko koyi farak nahin padega agar main aap se umar mein badi hui to?
Abhi: “bilkool bhi nahin iss mein kaun si badi baat hai? Chalta hai yaar!”
Ruhi: “Acha aur aap ko lagta hai ke main aap se umar mein badi hoon kia?!”
Abhi: “bilkool hi nahin, tum 17, 18 ki lagti ho!! are yaar bata to do, 18 ho chuki ya ab bhi minor ho hehehehe!”
Ruhi: “ho chuki….. hmmmm I am over 19! Will be 20 this year!”
Abhi: “great that’s perfect then, ok see you later”
Aur Abhi chala gaya change karne, tab tak baaki ke sab agaye.
To be continued….. (2750 words)
Aaj to jaise Abhi ka din tha.
Sab sahi hua aur khub baat hue Ruhi se.
Abhi khush to main bhi khush bhai.
Pyar bhara update tha aaj ka.
Superb.
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Bahot bahot shukriya tamaan replies k liye Vikram bhai. Aap ussi tarah se reviews dete ho jiss tarah se detail mein main likhta hoon. Aur ye mujhe BEHAD PASSAND HAI BHAI. THANKS VERY VERY FROM THE DEPTH OF MY HEART.
Main aap ki iss review ko pehle reply karta hoon, baaki baad mein karunga.
Bhai iss liye Ruhi k baare mein jiada detail nahin hai kyunke Abhi k taraf se ye kahani hai. Jo kuch Abhi par beeta wohi bataya jaa raha hai kahani mein. Jo kuch Abhi ko pata hai, jo usske saath hua, jo uss par beeta jo Abhi ko pata hai sirf wo bayaan kiya ja raha hai. Ye Kahani main 1st person mein likhne wala tha, matlab khub Abhi sunata apni kahani, magar main third person mein likhna bahot ziada passand karta hoon.
Ab aap sochiye jab khud Abhi ko nahin pata Ruhi k baare mein to ab tak jahan reach hue hein kaise pata chalega Ruhink baare mein. Jab jab aur jaise jaise Abhi ko Ruhi k baare mein jiada pata chalega sirf tabhi Ruhi k bare mein likha jayega. Abhi jitna usske karib hoga utna usske baare mein jaanega tabhi likha jaega.... weise yeh kahani issi k baare mein hai k koyi kaise pyar paane k liye tadapta hai, pyar ho jata hai, dusri taraf se hope milti hai, encouragement milne lagta hai, pyar ho jata hai magar kiss reason se success nahin milta.....
Ziada nahin bata sakta kyunke yehi to kahani hai nah bhai.....
Aap buss yun samajh lijiye ke aap Abhi ho aur wohi sab ho raha hai aap ke saath jo kuch Abhi k saath hua hai ab tak. To kia aap ko Ruhi ke baare mein kuch pata hai. Wo kyun weise behave karti hai, kyun kabhi pyar dikhati aur kyun kabhi ruthi si rehti hai kia Abhi ko pata hai? Nahin nah..... to issi perspective se likha ja raha hai.... Abhi k point of view se hai ye kahani.... wohi sab jhel raha hai, ussi par sab beet raha, ussi ko pata chalega baat kia hai tabhi readers ko bhi pata chalega Vikram bhai.....
Agar Ruhi k baare mein pehle se bata diya gaya to Abhi ka role feeka ho jaega aur Ruhi will win the show where as the hero is the main character of the story....
Aur bhai ye Ruhi wo wala Ruhi nahin jo Ruhi Abhi ki pehla pyar tha...... hope aap ne shuru se thik se read kiya hai
BHAI MAINE AISA SIRF IS LIYE HEE KAHA....KYOKI AAP STORY KO AS A....
THIRD PERSON LIKH RAHE HO....
AGAR AAP ISE KHUD LIKHTE.....I MEAN ABHI KARKE YA.....MAIN.....KARKE LIKHTE TAB ME YE BAAT NAHI KAHTA.....
OR AS A THIRD PERSON AAP....DONO KE BAARE MAI LIKH SAKTE HAI....
PHIR BHI.....KOI NA...
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