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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

Casinar

Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
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Pyar bhara update. Romantic sahi mein.
Chalo Abhi ko kuch to raahat mili aakhir. Ruhi k bhai se bhi dosti kar liya. Jiss tarah se bhai ne donon ko ek dusre se muskurate dekh kar hanssa lagta hain ussko bhi pata hai k Abhi Ruhi ko chahta hai .
Abhi ko khub baat karne ka mauka mila aaj aur jaankari bhi hui kuch jiada Ruhi k baare mein.
Nice romantic update bhai.
bahot baot shukriya husein bhai appreciation ke liye
 

Casinar

Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
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Woooooo.......
Good update........

ISS UPDATE KO HAM 2 BHAAG ME BAAT SAKTE HAI.....

1-ABHI KI SITUATION....
2-ABHI KA WORKPLACE OR USKI LOVE SEARCH.....

So first......abhi ki situation.....

BAICHAINI......KASHMKASH......

Pahli nishaniya he........ak tarfa pyar ki......
Ha ak tarfa pyar hee kahlaayega abhi tak to......kyo ki abhi tak bas abhi ke hee point of view se hee sab kuch chal raha hai......

Ruhi ka side to abhi tak aaya hee nahi hai......

Lekin ak tarfa pyar ki bhi ak khaasiyat hoti hai......

Sab kuch bilkul.....pyara pyara sa lagta hai.....mind mai har time......fantasies chalti rahti hai......man me ak alag hee khushi see hoti hai......Jo aankhon me dikhaya padti hai....

Dimaag kaam me hota hai.....lekin man uske khayaalo me.....
Saamne waale ka chahra nazar aana.....uski julfe.....uski muskuraati aankhe.....wo hasi......

Bas yanhi sab chalta rahta hai......man me.....har waqt......

Uska wo muskurane.....sharmana......ak nazar dekh kar....nazre churana.....

Bhale hee wo aapko na dekh rahi ho.....lekin aapko hamesha aisa hee lagta hai.....KI uski nazar aap par he....

Uski achchaiyo.....aadat e baare me khud se hee sawaal puchna.....OR khud hee jawaab dena.....

YAHI SAB HO RAHA HE APNE HERO.....ABHI KE SAATH.....

BHAI NAYA NAYA PYAR HE.......BHALE HEE WO......PAHLE WAALI RUHI NA HO.....LEKIN BAS AK NAAM......NAAM HEE SALA AK AISI CHIJ HE JO.....PICHLE BHULA HUA SAB YAAD DILANE KO KAAFI HOTA HAI......

BHALE HEE PHIR CHAHE.....NAAM AK HONE PAR BHI.....SHAKSIYAT ALAG NIKLE......LEKIN AK PAL KE LIYE TO WO NAAM.....AAPKO KISI BHULE BISRE APNE KI YAAD DILANE HEE JATA HAI.....

SHAKESPEARE.....NE KAHA THA NAAM ME KYA RAKHA HAI......LEKIN USE YE NAHI PATA HOGA.....

KI NAAM YADI WO HO.....JIS SE KI AAPKE AATA KE TAAR JUDE HO......TO WO NAAM HEE INSAAN KI DUNIYA BADAL SAKTA HAI......

RUHI.....NAAM NE BHI AISA HEE KIYA.....DUNIYA DAARI KE MAAMLO ME PAD CHUKE.....AK PAISA KAMAANE KI MACHINE BAN CHUKE ABHI KO......WAPAS YAAD DILANE DIYA KI

ABHI WO BHI INSAAN HE.....
AB USKA MAKSAD BAS PAISA KA MANA HEE NAHI.....APNI KHOI HUI RUHI KO BHI WAPAS DHUNDHNA BHI HAI......

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Workplace ki kya baat karu......abhi to kaam start kiya hai.......BUS ka bhi or BEBAS dil ka bhi......

Yu maan lo abhi to bas beej dala hai......use sinchna.....sambhaalna......dekhbhal karna.....baaki he.....

Ha lekin Mahesh ke roop me us3 ak bahana mil gaya......OR saath hee uska ak khabri bhi......

Agar dosti aage badhe to Mahesh kaafi kaam Aa sakta he......OR ho sakta he ki wo ruhi ke baare me kaafi baate bhi bata de.....abhi ko......

Uski pasand napasand.....uski khubiya.....khaamiya.....etc.....

Anyways......
Dekhte he aage kya Hota hai.....

Hamesha ki tarah.....
Well written and very well described act....
Just keep it up....
Thanks.....

Tehe dil se shukriya Vikaram bhai itni bariki se update ko analuse karne ke liye
mujhe bahot acha laga bhai thanks so very much
 

Casinar

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Woooooowww......
VERY GOOD I MEAN.....BRILLIANT UPDATE......

I LIKE THIK VERY MUCH.....MOSTLY.....RUHI'S LAST LINES.......
SOMETHING LIKE......

TAPTE DIL KI ZAMIN PAR......
BAARISH KA TOOFAN AA GAYA HO.....

JUST.....WOW.......

PAHALE KE ISI BHI UPDATE ME MAINE UPDATE KE AARE ME JYADA NAHI KAHA.....KYOKI IS SE PAHLE KE SABHI UPDATES.....KE MOST PART ME.....ABHI KI FEELINGS KO EXPRESS KIYA GAYA HAI.....

PAR ISS UPDATE ME FEELINGS.....OR STORY SAATH SAATH THI.....

SO SUCH A NICE UPDATE.....

AB BAAT KARE ABHI OR SCENE KO TO.....

CHAHE US ZAMAANE KI BAAT HO YA ABHI KI.....HAR KOI APNE MEHBOOB SE SAAMNE.....ACHCHA DIKHNA HEE CHAHTA HAI.....OR USKE LIYE MEHNAT BHI KARTA HAI.....

HA LEKIN WO JO ABHI KO GANDE SE LOOK ME DEKHNE KA SEQUENCE THA WO KAAFI ACHCHA THA.......

MOSTLY WLYE HEE HOTA HAI......KHAS KAR LADKI OR PYAAR KE MAAMLO ME.....

JO AAP SOCH SAMAJH KAR KARTE HO.....WO KABHI NAHI HOTA HAI....

WESE ISS BAAT KA KOI KHAS MATLAB BHI NAHI HAI KI......FIRST IMPRESSION ACHCHA HONA CHAHIYE.....

KYOKI BHALE HEE FIRST IMPRESSION KE SATH BHI HI.....PAR KAM SE KAM RUHI KI NAZAR ABHI PAR TO GAYI.....

OR HO SAKTA HAI USNE USE NOTICE BHI KIYA HO......
BHALE HEE WO DIRTY FACE WALA SCENE HO YA ABHI KE DWARA GOODBYE BOLNE WALA SEQUENCE.....NOTICE TO KIYA HEE HOGA.....

OR PHIR AK AASHIK KE LIYE SABSE KHAS CHIJ JO HOTI HAI.....WO HAI.....

APNE MEHBOOB KI AK JHALAK PAANE I BETAABI......USE LAGTA HAI KI WO CHAHRA....HAR SAMAY USKE SAAMNE HEE RAHE......
OR USKA DEEDAR USE HOTA RAHE....

RUHI KA ABHI KO IGNORE KARNA......MUJHE TO ISNE KOI GALAT BAAT NAHI LAGI....

AK ACHCHE GHAR OR SANSKAR WAALI LADKI......APNE HEE GHAR KE AANGAN ME KHADI HO KAR......BHALA KISI AZANABI SE KYO BAAT KAREGI.....

BHALE HEE INKI NAZRE MILI HO......AK DUSRE KO DEKHA HO.....LEKIN HAI TO ABHI BHI AK DUSRE SE ANJAN.......

USKE BAGICHE ME USE KOI.....GHAR WALA YA MUHALLE WALA DEKH SAKTA THA.....AKELE ME ABHI SE BAAT KARTE HUE.......

OR PHIR AAJ KE ZAMAANE ME BHI LADKIYO KO APNI IZZAT OR MAAN MARY ADA KA DARR RAHTA HAI......
WO AISE HEE KISI AZANABI SE BAAT TO NAHI KARTI.....
YE SACH HE KI USNE ABHI KO DEKHA THA .....LEKIN DUR SE OR APNI MAA KE SAATH.....
HO SAKTA HAI....KI WO ABHI KE ITNI SUBAH OR ACHANAK SE USKE PASS AA JAANE SE ASAHAJ HO GAYI HO.....
OR USE SAMAJH NA AAYA HO KI KYA KAHE....YA KYA KARE......


AND AT LAST......
WO ABHI KI PURE DIN KI TADAP OR PHIR ACHANAK SE RUHI KA USKE LIYE KAHE GAYE KUCH SHABD.....

UN KUCH SHABDO NE HEE USKI SAARI THAKAAN.....OR NARAZGI DUR KAR DI......

Anyways
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai.....

WELL WRITTEN AND WELL DESCRIBED ACT.......
THANKS.....

bahot shukriya ek baar aur Vikram bhai...
kahani 1986 ki hai... ussi year mein yeh sab hua tha
aur kuch songs bhi aane wale hein unn dion ke jo Abhi ke zehen mein bass chuke hein jisse wo aaj bji sunta hai to usske aankeh nam ho jaate hein aur jism ke rowan uth jaate hein
thanks very much bhai for the detailed review, very much appreciated bro :hug:
 

Casinar

Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
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Woooooowww
As always very good and fantabulous update.......

So first of all....let's talk about update.....

Mujhe ye wala update......thoda khicha hua sa laga.......jaise ki aapne ise badi jaldi me speed dekar likh diya ho......

Kyoki ye update pahle aaye sabhi updates ke mukaable kaafi fast chala......OR ak ke baad ak kaafi events or incidents isme aate gaye.....

Ruhi or abhi confrontation sequence or bhi better ho sakta tha ......agar use detail daal kar banaya jata.....jaise ki abhi tak ke updates hua hai.......

Ha hero ka small action buildup kaafi achcha tha......

Update me thoda suspence bhi dala gaya hai.....

Now for the act.......

Baat ki jaaye hero ki......to kisi pyar karne waale ko......koi ladki....saamne se aakar kuch baat karegi to wo shock to hoga hee.....

OR khas kar tab jab wo ladki wahi ho jise wo pyar karta ho......OR upar se wo use ignore kar rahi ho......

Aise me achanak se uska saamne se khud aakar.....aage se baat karna......
Dimaag or dil dono ko bang kar deta hai.....total shock.......

To Abhi ka shock hona tay hee tha.....

Baat kare saeed ki to mujhe uski baat me kuch galat nahi laga......aakhir Mehboob bhai ne use dekh kar hee tender diya tha.....to use to jaldi hogi hee kaam ki......upar se payment bhi 300000......Jo ki usne ZAMAANE ke hisaab se kaafi hai.....

Tony......ye character mujhe thoda azib laga......kyoki ise aaj hee dikhaya hai.....OR iski here wajah se hero ko chot lag sakti thi......
Wese ye mana jaa sakta hai ki wo haadsa tha.....lekin phir kya hee din me usne abhi or Ruhi ko observe kar liya......Jo itna sure hai......

Baat kar Ruhi ki......
To sabse jyada ye hee suspicious hai......pahle to usne abhi ke good morning ka jawaab nahi diya.....koi na....
Lekin use ye bhi pata nahi ki abhi ne us se baat ki.....

Is me kaafi bada jhhol hai.......2 baate ho sakti hai.....
1 twins ka chakkar......lekin agar ye hai to phir 2 din me dusri waali bas ak bar hee ghar se bahar nikli......ye to possible nahi......
2.memory loss ya personality split.......OR may be mood swing.......in tino me se koi ak bimaari.......

Jo ki Ruhi or uski maa ki baato se bhi pata chal raha hai ki kuch to baat hai.....

Anyways
dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai
Thanks....

iss liye fast laga yeh update aap ko ke main ne socha ke kahin readers bore nah ho jaaye iss update tak bhi same abhi ki emotions aur feelings ko padhte hue, is liye thoda aage badh gaya bhai, soch liya hoon ke break karke beech beech mein wapas aya karunga abhi ke feelings par bhi :D
thanks from the depth of my heart vikaram bhai
 

Casinar

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Another beautiful update Casinar ji.
Very well written and narrated.
Happy to read both talking so well in the early morning when she was again picking flowers. She was like afraid to talk. But still she answered all his questions which must hv been great pleasure for Abhi.
Abhi was longing for such moments with her and got them.
Even he was introduced to her bedroom. Being tall he could see all into her room from outside.
And another good and sweet conversation took place among them. Ruhi was sweet to him and this is what Abhi needed her care and love. She said that is why she shows herself every now and then as she knows that he longs to see her. So nice of Ruhi has she also started loving him or is she doing all that only to please Abhi?
We will know gradually am sure.
Very sweet romantic update dear. Keep it up.

thanks very very much for the appreciation Amity dear :love:
 

Casinar

Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
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Casinar

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Iss update ka title bilkool sahi diya hai aap ne Abhi really very happy. Kaise happy nahin hoga? Sab kuch itna romantic chala, Ruhi ne itne mithe mithe baatein kiye iss update mein to sab positive hua Abhi k liye except Mehboob k presence mein baat karne par paabandi lag gaye baaki sab majedaar raha.
Kia Ruhi bhi Abhi se pyar karne lagi hai?

bahot shukriya dost
 

Casinar

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Woooooowww very good update......
Fantastic and fabulous....as well as.......well written and described.....

Ye update puri tarah se abhi ke pyar ko.....OR iske pyar ki din par din badhti gehraayi ko......dikhata hai......

ABHI KE PYAR KO ITNA GAHRAI SE DIKHAANE KA AAPKA YE BHI REASON HO SAKTA HAI....TAKI READERS BHI US SE JYADA SE JYADA RELATE KAR SAKE.....
OR USKE PYAR KI GAHRAI KO KHUD MEHSUS KAR SAKE.....
AND BELIEVE ME.....THAT IS OUTSTANDING......

Most update me.....aapne isi chij ko pura kiya he.....OR wo kaafi achcha bhi hai....

Actually situation ye hoti hai....KI ak deewane ko...ha jaisi situation hai us hisaab se abhi ko diwana hee kahenge......Jo ki kisi ladki ke prati pagal ho.....
Ko wo jis jagah par dikhai deti hai....wo sochta hai ki wo shayad dubara use......wanhi mil jaayegi......OR iske liye wo wanha par khade ho kar kitna bhi intezar kar sakta hai.....
Wo jagah 1 ya phir kai ho sakti hai.....thats doesn't matter......

OR phir use us jagah se bhi......dhire dhire lagav sa gone lagta hai......same situation abhi ke saath hai.....

Wo sabhi jagah.....janha janha usne Ruhi ko dekha.....ab wo sochta hai ki wo use phir se shaayad wanhi dikhai de.....

Ak jhalak dekhne ki tadap.....Jo ki wo jaldi aakar dekhna chahta tha....lekin ho nahi paya.....

Finally Ruhi dikhai di.....lekin uska mud kar wapas chale jana .....kaafi azib tha.....khair koi na.....
Lekin us samay.....jab wo wapas chali gayi.....tab jo feelings abhi ki thi.....use kaafi achche se samajha jaa sakta hai....

Aap kisi ka dil o jaan se.....bas ak jhalak paane ke liye intezar kare.....OR wo aapko dekh kar ....muh mod kar chala jaaye....
Kaafi bura hota hai...

OR aakhir me Ruhi or abhi ki baat ho hee gayi.....
Ruhi ka Rahima ko dekh kar jalana.....kuch samajh nahi aaya.....
Kyoki rahima ak to uski chachi hai.....OR dusri baat wo abhi se age me bhi kaafi badi hai.....

Mana ki age se farak nahi padta....agar koi relation bana na chahe to.....

Lekin abhi to Ruhi khud bhi ABHI se anjan hai....OR uski me itna possessiveness kaafi odd hai.....
Khas kar tab jab uski khud ki maa bhi ......abhi se..... utna hee interest le kar baat karti hai.....

Isharo isharo me baate shuru ho gayi.....lekin kaafi jaldi nahi ho gaya.....

Abhi tak Ruhi ke baap ko nahi dikhaya hai.....

Kanhi jo situation ABHI ki 2 Ruhi ko lekar hai.....kanhi wo hee to RUHI KE PARIWAR ki ......abhi ko lekar to nahi..?????....

I'M SURE AAP MERA ISHARA SAMAJH GAYE HONGE......

ANYWAYS....
DEKHTE HAI INKA YE ISHARO ISHARO KA KHEL.....KYA RANG LAGA HAI.....

AT LAST....
VERY GOOD UPDATE...
THANKS.....

dil ki gehraayi se aapp ka shukriya ada karta hoon Vikram bhai... aap ne bahot saare chizon ko sahi kaha hai...main ziada nahin bol sakta abhi :D
possesivenes ruhi ki prati aap ko odd lage, magar bhai kaise kahoon..... aisa hua tha bhai!!:laugh:
kuch ladkiyan aise hote hein ke dil se kissi ko behad pyar karte hein magar dikhaate nahin aur hamesha yeh dikhaate hein ke ussko pyar se koyi matlab nahin.... buss kissi aur ladki se baat karlo thoda sa to unnke jalne lagte hein, its reality of life bhai.... yehi hua tha jab Abi Rahima se baat kar rahi thi, aur nightie ein thi, usski nangi bazu ko dekha tha ruhi ne , aur phir ek aur baat hai ruhi ki jalan ki vaja jo baad ke update mein aap ko pata chalega ke kyun ruhi jali thi jab ussne Abhi ko Rahima se close dekha tha
tha sk very much Vikram bhai
 
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