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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

Rahul

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Rahul ek baat bata yara.
Tumko incest aur sex padhna passand nahin kaha tha tumne. Mann ug gaya hai sex stories padhke kaha tha. Ok sahi hai.
Love story ki farmaayish tumne bhi kiya tha. So likh raha hoon. Magar tumhare update 9 ki reply aur iss 10th ki reply mein mujhe dikh raha hai ke tumko iss kahani ki love se matlab bilkool nahin kyunke tumne donon updates par love ko lekar kuch nahin kaha jabke ye pyar ki kahani hai. Tumhara mood ukhad gaya kyunke Abhi ko Saeed ko paisa dena pada last update mein. Iss update mein tumko dikh raha hai k Abhi bus ki photos se kia karega. Ruhi ka pyar jisske liye Abhi diwana hai wo koyi maene nahin rakh raha tere liye?
Jawaab zaroor dena.
Thanks.
huum to explain karta hun mai bhai ji please gaur karna aap pahli baat to ye hai ruhi se dhokha mila abhi ko aur fir se wahi naam ruhi aa gayi story me jabki is naam se nafrat honi chahiye dil tuta tha uspar usme bhi kai raaz dikh rahe jaise pith piche kya chal raha hai to mujhe abhi jab tak story me khulkar beaten samne nahi aati kya kahun mai confuse hun abhi dusri baat aap jab koi bhi story likhte ho har point bahut strong pakadte ho jaise yahan bus wala kaam uski barik se barik baten mujhe ruhi se jada abhi ke kaam se pyar ho gaya hai.rahi baat ruhi ki to jab real love aayega tab uspar dhyan dunga mai jab koi baat parda me nahi lagegi kya chal raha..agar aapko koi baat buri lagi ho to sorry bhai ji par mai story par hun aur apna vichar rakhta rahunga:dost:
 
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Vikram singh rana

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Update 5 The First Day of Work

Raat ko Abhi thik se so nahin paaya. Sirf uss ladki ko sochta raha, sapne mein ussko dekha bhi jab bhi zara si aankh lagi to. Ussko jaldi tha wahan wapas jaane ki aur wahan kaam shuru karne ki. Sochta raha kaam karega ya din bhar uss ladki ko dekhta rahega. Kia ladki ghar par rahegi har roz? Kia wo college jaati hogi? Ya kahin koyi kaam karti hogi? Yeh sab soch raha tha Abhi aur khud ko tassalli dete hue kaha ke agar kahin bhi jaati hogi subha aur shaam ko ek dusre ko dekh to payenge…. Abhi sochne laga ki wo uss se baat kar paega? Kaise baat shuru karega? Kia kahega uss se? Aur agar ladki ne baat nahin kiya to? Agar ussne Abhi ko jawaab nahin diya to? Thoda sharmilee type lagi thi uss waqt, to kia Abhi ke saamne aaegi bhi? Yeh sab sochta raha abhi raat bhar. Apni diary mein bahot kuch likha. Diary one day page tha ussne 5 pages likh diya, matlab agle 4 din ke page bhi bhar diye aaj ki events ko likh kar, to socha ek naya thick cover ka copy book kharidna hoga sirf inn dinon ko likhne ke liye, jab tak wo wahan kaam karega, uss copy book mein sirf wahan ke events ko likhega.

Subha mamool se bahot pehle uth gaya Abhi aur tayyaar hokar nikla kaam par jaane ke liye. Bus se safar karna tha, ghar se 40 kms ki doorie par thi wo jagah jahan Mehboob ka ghar tha. kaam karne ke liye puarane kapde ek bag mein liya hua tha, aur ek dusre bag mein kaam karne wale kuch auzaar the, aur of course khana bhi tha ek bag mein.

Subha 6.30 ko uss jagah ko reach hua abhi, Saeed bhai aur baaki ke 2 workers bhi aaye thik usske piche.

Bus stop se utar kar marammat karne wale bus tak pahunchne mein koyi 5 minat lagta tha, aur jab uss aangan mein daakhil hua abhi to usski nazar seedhe uss kitchen wale stairs par pahunche, bus par nahin. Chalte waqt bus tak reach hone ke liye abhi ki nazrein idhar udhar dekhta gaya, right mein jo ghar hai matlab jiss ghar mein wo ladki rehti hai, uss ghar ka saamne wale hisse ko ghaur se dekha abhi ne, jo pehla tap tha wahan dekha phir nazron ko uss taraf kiya jahan tap number 2 tha aur ek washing stone bhi tha uss dusre nal ke paas. Aur akhir mein uss jagah pahuncha jahan washroom tha. Aur ab wo washroom to direct uss kitchen ke opposite tha jahan kal Ruhi nazar ayi thi, uss washroom se kitchen ke andar nazar araha tha. Abhi ne ghaur se andar dekha. Koyi bhi nahin tha. Abhi ne sochna shuru kiya ke kal issi kitchen mein wo ladki paka rahi thi jiss waqt usski maa ussko awaaz de rahi thi……. Abhi ne ek vision kiya jo flashback ki tarah usske aankhon ke saamne aaye….

Ussne dekha ke ussi neeli dress mein ladki apni stove ke paas karhaayi mein kuch pakaa rahi hai aur Abhi ussko dekh rahi hai phir Abhi uss se ishaare se baat kar raha hai…..

Vision khatam hone ke baad Abhi ne socha kia aisa kabhi hoga bhi? Kia yeh mumkin hai? 4 se 6 mahinon tak yahin kaam karna hai kuch to baat aaguey badhegi zaroor….. Ek ajeeb si feeling ho raha tha abhi ko, uss kitchen ke andar dekhte hue, soch raha tha jaise usski maa pakaati hai kitchen mein weise hi ladki bhi kal paka rahi thi, ussko pakana ata hai, kia kabi kuch paka kar khilaegi abi ko? Wo sochne laga Abhi, usske haath ka paka hua kaisa lagega? Swadisht hoga? Abhi ussko kitchen stove ke paas dekhna chahta tha, ussko pakaate hue dekhna chahta tha, usska dil kar raha tha ke wo ladki wahan aaye aur abi usske paas jaakar ussko piche se jakre aur uss se pyar kare…. Aise feelings aa rahe the abhi ke dil mein kapde change karte waqt… ye sab sochte hue Abhi ne apne kapde badle, kaam karne wala purana kapda pehna aur baaki ke logon ne bhi wohi kiya aur sab bus ke paas ekatha hue. Saeed bhai ne Abhi se pucha,

“kaise start karna hai?!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“sabse pehle Mehboob bhai se kaho, ek lamba hose chahiye bus ko dhona hai pehle tab todna hai, saare sade hue tin, loha, shisha, andar ke tute hue seats sab nikaalna hai, bus ko sifr chasis mein dikhna hai ab….”

Wohi kiya gaya…. Oonchi awaaz mein sab baat kar rahe the, ke yeh karo, wahan paani dalo, aisa karo, veisa karo, yahan mat aao, wahan jao etc….

Abhi baar baar uss ghar ke taraf dekhe jaa raha thakaam karte hue, soch raha tha kia wo abhi tak so rahi hogi? Ussko dekhne ka bada mann tha abhi ko, magar wo bilkool nazar nahin arahi thi. Kia wo kaam par chali gayi hogi? Kia college gayi hogi? Ya university ki student hogi? Usski maa kayi baar nazar aayi. Mehboob bhi kayi baar aaye, sabse baat kiye, Mehboob ki biwi, Rahima bhi aayi, chai dene aayi sabko phir wapas chali bhi gayi magar wo ladki nahin dikhi thi Abhi ko din ke barah bajne ko tha. Bus ko nanga kar diya gaya tha, sirf bus ki chasis nazar arahe the apne 6 wheels par.

Lunch time aya to abhi gaya apne bag se khana lene ke liye washroom ke paas bag taanga hua tha jiss mein usske khaane ke chizein the; wahan jaate waqt bi abiu ss kitchen mein jhaanka aur ladki ki maa nazar aayi bartan maanjte hue sink ke paas, to jhat se abhi ne nazar hatta liya…. Bus ke andar baith kar sab khaane chale. Khaate waqt bhi Abhi baar baar uss ghar ek taraf dekh raha tha…. aur achanak ussne uss ladki ko Mehboob ke ghar se nikal kar apni kitchen ke taraf jaate hue dekha, aaj ek laal dress mein thi, baal khule hue the, ek nazar ussne bus ke taraf dekha aur apni kitchen mein chali gayi…. Abhi ne khud ko kossa ke kyun ussne ladki ko uss waqt nahin dekha jiss waqt wo apni kitchen se nikal kar Mehboob ke ghar Rahima se milne gayi thi… pata nahin kitne time se wo Mehboob ki biwi se baat kar rahi thi aur abhi ko kuch pata hi nahin chala…..

Khaane ke baad sab main road par gaye tehelte hue cigarette kharidne. 45 mins ka lunch break liye the sabne. Yeh normal tha kahin bhi kaam karte to 45 mins lete the sab.

Jab cigarette pite hue wapas daakhil hue uss aangan mein to Abhi ne laal dress wali l;adki ko ussi kitchen ki stairs par dekha jahan kal usski maa khadi thi. Magar main road se jiss jagah par wo khadi thi kaafi dooe tha to abhi ko wo door dikhi aur abhi chahta tha ke jab wo bus ke paas aaye to wo wahin khadi rahe taake ussko paas se dekh sake, magar jaise jaise weh log bus ke karib hote gaye ladki wapas apne kitchen mein chali gayi. Abhi shuru mein bahot khush hua ussko wahan khadi dekh kar, wo bus ko hi dekh rahi thi, aur ek baar raaste par dekha Abhi ke taraf, magar jab abhi usski cousin ke ghar ke paas reach hua to Ruhi wapas ghuss gayi. Tab abhi udaas hogaya aur pray karta raha ke wo wapas stairs par aaye.

Kaam shuru hua, ab saare puraane tim ko nikala jaa raha tha bus se, sade hue lohe ko kata jaa raha tha, hatode aur baaki auzaar se. bahot shor ho rahe the thaak thok, thik thaak ke awaazein bahot sunaayi de rahe the aur abhi ne socha kia pata ke ladki thoda sone gayi hogi to nahin so paaegi unn logon ke shor karne ki vajah se…. do pahar mein bahot saare log thoda sote heoin khaane ke baad, jab abhi ghar par rehta tha to yeh usski aadat thoi, to ussne socha shayad wo ladki aur usski maa ke bhi weise aadat ho….

Karib 3 baje muhalle ke bahot saare log aaye dekhne Abhi aur team ko kaam karte hue, khaas kar school ke bache log. Un mein se ek ladka Ruihi ka chota bhai tha jo 10th mein tha. wo to abhi ke bilkool pas aake khada ho gaya aur baat karne laga. Abhi ne pucha ke kaun hai kidhar rehta hai kia karta hai vaghaira aur jab ladke ne kaha ke wahin rehta hai to Abhi ko pata chala ke uss ladki ka chota bhai hai. Usska naam pucha tab ahbi ko Khushi hui kyunke ussko pata chala ke yeh Ruhi bhi hindu hi hai kyunke bhai ka naam Mahesh tha. phir Abhi ne pucha ke Mehboob ko chacha kehte hein sab to ussne socha ke Mehboob usske pita ka bhai hai to Mahesh ne kaha,

“hum Mehboob chacha ko ‘chacha’ iss liye bulaate hein kyunke mummy ne kaha ussko weisa bulaane ke liye”

Aur ek baar Ruhi stair par aayi Mahesh ko bulaane ke liye aur yun kaha bus ke taraf Mahesh ko dekhte hue,

“hey Mahesh chai nahin piyega kia? Main ne serve kar diya aakar pile mujhe sab saaf karna hai jaldi aah nah!”

Jiss waqt Ruhi wo sab keh rahi thi Abhi usski chehre mein dekh raha tha, aur Ruhi ne Mahesh ko dekhte hue wo sab kaha tha magar ek do baar usski nazrein Abhi par bhi gayi…. Abhi ne bahot achi tarah se usski nazron ko follow kiya tha.

Abhi ko behad passand aya usska uss tarah se usske taraf dekhna. Usski nazron mein ek komalta dikha Abhi ko, usski awaaz kitni mithi thi, usski muskurahat jaan lewa laga Abhi ko, usski awaaz aur ziada sunne ka mann kiya abhi ko to ussne Mahesh se kaha,

“chai pine ke baad wapas ana thoda baatein karenge.”

Mahesh ne kaha,

“haan wapas ata hoon, mujhe dekhna hai tum log kaise issko bus banaate ho!”

Shaam ko 4 baje to aur kuch log aagaye aangan mein. Log bhade hue the uss jagah. Kabhi kissi ne bus ko bante hue nahin dekha tha, magar abhi to bus ko ujara jaa raha tha, nanga kiya jaa raha tha…. aas paas ke log jo apne apne kaam se wapas agaye the chale aaye the Mehboob ke bus ko dekhne ke liye… aur tab tak bus ko almost nanga kiya jaa chuka tha…. jab bus aya tha to kuch aisa dikh raha tha aangan mein kal



Jangal mein tha to aisa tha

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Aur ab sab tor phor ke baad shaam ko 4 baje bus sirf chasis par tha aur yeh dikh raha tha

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Ab iss par frame banaya jaega din ba din kaam hoga bus ki frame weld karne ke baad alliminium sheets rivets se chipana hoga, sheets ko measurement se kaatna padega etc….

Shaam ke karib paanch baje jab washroom jaana tha sabko to ek baar aur Ruhi ki maa stairs par dikhi aur usski awaaz yun aayi,

“Ruhi aa dekh nah bus kaise bilkool khali ho gayi hai…”

Abhi ne socha ussko ab jaldi se washroom jaana chahiye aur udhar se wo Ruhi ko kitchen mein dekh paega. To jaldi se wo nikla….. usske kapde bilkool maile ho gaye the, chehre par bhi jagah jagah par gandh lage hue the, khud ko wash karna tha wo nahin chahta tha ke ruhi ussko weisa dekhe…..

Abhi weise handsome ladka tha, gora rang, 6.2 feet/1m85 ooncha, kayi log ussko ‘lambu’ bhi bulaate the; usska ek strong personality tha, jaldi se log usske dost ban jaate the aur wo ek centre of attraction tha khud mein hi, log usske taraf nazar karte hi the kissi tarah se bhi, usski oochaayi ki vajah se kuch log ussko dekhte the to kuch log usski personality ki vajah se, to baat yeh hui ke Ruhi ki maa Abhi ko hi dekh rahi thi jab wo washroom ke taraf jaane lage to aur iss se pehle ke wo washroom pahunchta khud Ruhi ki maa ne abhi se kuch kaha…. Kuch log jawaan 22 saall ke ladke se baat karna passand karte hein, kabhi tang khinchaayi karte hein to kabhi umar wale log jawaan logon se buss baat iss liye karte hein ke dekhein wo jawaan kitna kaabil hai….. aur kuch log khud ko jawaanon se dosti karne ke liye baatein karte hein, aur kuch log to jawaanon se akarshit hokar hi baat karte hein….

Abhi ko rukna pada ussko jawaab dene ke liye aur kitchen ke andar se Ruhi abhi ke chehre mein ek muskaan se dekh rahi thi ke usski maa uss se baat kar rahi hai….

Abhi to khud ko saaf suthra karke ruhi ke saamne pesh hona chahta tha magar usski maa ne abhi ko ussi haalat mein rok liya to abhi ko acha nahin laga magar kaise mana karta uss aurat ne baat kiya to jawaab to dena tha iss liye majbooran ussko rukna pada aur ruhi ki maa ne muskuraate hue pucha tha,

“kitne dinon mein bus ban jaega?!”

Abhi ne bhi muskuraate hue jawaab diya magar Ruhi ko dekhte hue usski maa ko nahin,

“bahot bada kaam hai yeh, shuruwaat se sab kuch karna padega wo bhi haath se, koyi bhi garage wala machine nahin hai to ziada din lagenge!”

Andar se Ruhi muskuraate hue Abhi ko dekh rahi thi, usski haath mein ek plate tha jissko wo kitchen ki table par rakhne jaa rahi thi magar Abhi ko ruk kar sunne lagi thi, aur abhi ne note kiya ke uss waqt Ruhi ke baal khule hue nahin the, balke bandhe the, kuch iss tarah se ke usski kaandhe par koyi dekhe to lagta tha ke usski baal kaandhe tak katte hue hein, behad khubsurat dikh rahi tho, shayad thoda make kiya hua tha ya cream powder lagaayi thi uss waqt Ruhi ne….. Abhi ne socha ke khud kitna ganda dikh raha hai, maile kapde, maila chehra, baal bikhre hue, aur ruhi ek princess dikh rahi thi…. Abhi ko jaldi tha washroom jaane ki, to ussne kaha,

“Wait main wash karke wapas aata hoon aur aap ko samjhaungi ke kitne kaam hai.

Aur wo chala gaya khud ko saaf karne magar wahan saeed aur baaki ke do log uss se pehle wash kar rahe the to abhi ko wait karna pada tab tak wo kitchen mein dekhta raha, aur Ruhi bhi baar baar usske taraf dekh rahi thi apne kitchen ke kaam karte hue…..

To be continued….. (2600 words)
Woooooo.......
Good update........

ISS UPDATE KO HAM 2 BHAAG ME BAAT SAKTE HAI.....

1-ABHI KI SITUATION....
2-ABHI KA WORKPLACE OR USKI LOVE SEARCH.....

So first......abhi ki situation.....

BAICHAINI......KASHMKASH......

Pahli nishaniya he........ak tarfa pyar ki......
Ha ak tarfa pyar hee kahlaayega abhi tak to......kyo ki abhi tak bas abhi ke hee point of view se hee sab kuch chal raha hai......

Ruhi ka side to abhi tak aaya hee nahi hai......

Lekin ak tarfa pyar ki bhi ak khaasiyat hoti hai......

Sab kuch bilkul.....pyara pyara sa lagta hai.....mind mai har time......fantasies chalti rahti hai......man me ak alag hee khushi see hoti hai......Jo aankhon me dikhaya padti hai....

Dimaag kaam me hota hai.....lekin man uske khayaalo me.....
Saamne waale ka chahra nazar aana.....uski julfe.....uski muskuraati aankhe.....wo hasi......

Bas yanhi sab chalta rahta hai......man me.....har waqt......

Uska wo muskurane.....sharmana......ak nazar dekh kar....nazre churana.....

Bhale hee wo aapko na dekh rahi ho.....lekin aapko hamesha aisa hee lagta hai.....KI uski nazar aap par he....

Uski achchaiyo.....aadat e baare me khud se hee sawaal puchna.....OR khud hee jawaab dena.....

YAHI SAB HO RAHA HE APNE HERO.....ABHI KE SAATH.....

BHAI NAYA NAYA PYAR HE.......BHALE HEE WO......PAHLE WAALI RUHI NA HO.....LEKIN BAS AK NAAM......NAAM HEE SALA AK AISI CHIJ HE JO.....PICHLE BHULA HUA SAB YAAD DILANE KO KAAFI HOTA HAI......

BHALE HEE PHIR CHAHE.....NAAM AK HONE PAR BHI.....SHAKSIYAT ALAG NIKLE......LEKIN AK PAL KE LIYE TO WO NAAM.....AAPKO KISI BHULE BISRE APNE KI YAAD DILANE HEE JATA HAI.....

SHAKESPEARE.....NE KAHA THA NAAM ME KYA RAKHA HAI......LEKIN USE YE NAHI PATA HOGA.....

KI NAAM YADI WO HO.....JIS SE KI AAPKE AATA KE TAAR JUDE HO......TO WO NAAM HEE INSAAN KI DUNIYA BADAL SAKTA HAI......

RUHI.....NAAM NE BHI AISA HEE KIYA.....DUNIYA DAARI KE MAAMLO ME PAD CHUKE.....AK PAISA KAMAANE KI MACHINE BAN CHUKE ABHI KO......WAPAS YAAD DILANE DIYA KI

ABHI WO BHI INSAAN HE.....
AB USKA MAKSAD BAS PAISA KA MANA HEE NAHI.....APNI KHOI HUI RUHI KO BHI WAPAS DHUNDHNA BHI HAI......

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Workplace ki kya baat karu......abhi to kaam start kiya hai.......BUS ka bhi or BEBAS dil ka bhi......

Yu maan lo abhi to bas beej dala hai......use sinchna.....sambhaalna......dekhbhal karna.....baaki he.....

Ha lekin Mahesh ke roop me us3 ak bahana mil gaya......OR saath hee uska ak khabri bhi......

Agar dosti aage badhe to Mahesh kaafi kaam Aa sakta he......OR ho sakta he ki wo ruhi ke baare me kaafi baate bhi bata de.....abhi ko......

Uski pasand napasand.....uski khubiya.....khaamiya.....etc.....

Anyways......
Dekhte he aage kya Hota hai.....

Hamesha ki tarah.....
Well written and very well described act....
Just keep it up....
Thanks.....
 

Vikram singh rana

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Aur wo chala gaya khud ko saaf karne magar wahan Saeed aur baaki ke do log uss se pehle wash kar rahe the to Abhi ko wait karna pada tab tak wo kitchen mein dekhta raha, aur Ruhi bhi baar baar usske taraf dekh rahi thi apne kitchen ke kaam karte hue…..

Ab aaguey…

Abhi ne aine mein apne chehre ko dekha aur khud ko sharam aya usse, usske donon taraf gaal par kaale dhabbe lage hue the, baal bikhre hue the, chehra dhoop mein jhulass gaya tha, gore rang par jaise ek brown colour chipak gaya tha; khud ko dekhte hue abhi ne thoda ghussa kiya ke kyun wo ruka uss aurat se baat karne ko aur kissi ne bhi ussko nahin bataya ke usske chehre par kia laga hua hai, sochne laga ke kia issi liye Ruhi ussko dekh kar muskura rahi thi? Abhi ne khud se kaha,

“kia sochegi mere baare mein? Yehi nah ke main ganda hoon, I am a dirty brat?! Sala log ek ladki ko dekhne jaate hein to smart, handsome ban kar, naha dhokar saaf suthra kapde pehen kar, naye joote, best shirt, khud ko presentable karke ladki ke saamne jaate hein aur main iss tarah se ganda dikh raha hoon kaun passand karega mujhe iss haal mein dhat!!”

Abhi ko sharam feel ho raha tha aur kitchen ke taraf dekhna bandh kar diya apna turn wait kiya khud ko fresh karne ke liye; magar usska dil nahin maan raha tha ke wo Ruhi ko kitchen mein nah dekhe, usska mann tha ke wo ussko dekhe pakaate hue, ussko admire kare, to Abhi ne apne doston ke peeth piche chhup chhup kar Ruhi ko dekhna jaari rakha….. ussne ek baar dekha ke Ruhi ki maa ussko kuch keh rahi thi aur Ruhi zor se hanssi aur usske taraf dekha, wo khilkhila kar hanssi thi, Abhi usski uss hanssi par fida ho gaya, ussko Ruhi ko aur weise hansste hue dekhne ko mann kar raha tha…. hanssne ke baad Ruhi chulhe par ek dish mein mein ek ladki wale spoon se kuch chala rahi thi, matlab mix kar rahi thi, tarkaari paka rahi hogi Abhi ne socha.. aur weise hanssne ke baad Ruhi ke chehre par ek Muskaan baaki tha aur ussne apne niche wale honth ko daanton mein dabaate hue apni maa ke taraf dekha aur ussko kuch kaha, phir ek haath se Ruhi apne chehre se ek latt ko apne sar ke upar kiya tab weise hi ek honth ko daant mein dabaaye hue hi Abhi ke tarraf phir se dekha aur donon ke nazrein mile…. Abhi ke chehre par ek Muskaan ban gaya tha apne aap Ruhi ko admire karte hue.

Ab kyunke ussne dekha ke Ruhi ne usske chehre mein dekha to ab Abhi ne socha ke ‘Ruhi kahin yeh nah samjhe ke main uss se muskura raha hoon, main to usski adaaon par muskura raha hoon….’ Aur abhi ne nazron ko ek taraf kar liya.

Phir Abhi ne khud ko wash kiya aur kapde change kiye. Ab wo apne unn kapdon mein tha jiss se subha bus mein aya tha. jiss kapde se kaam kiya tha ussko wapas ghar lejaane ko pack kiya kyunke wo maile ho gaye the kuch ziada hi. Weise ek hafte tak ek kaam karne wala kapda pehenta hai magar aaj ki baat kuch aur thi kyunke gande bus ko saaf kiya tha to khud maile ho gaye the iss liye kapde ko wapas lejaana pada….

Jitna time Abhi ne liya khud ko dhone, saaf karne ke liye tab tak Saeed tayaar ho gaya tha aur ab Ruhi ki maa uss se baat kar rahi thi. Matlab jo jawaab Abhi ko dena tha wo jawaab Saeed de raha tha Ruhi ki maa ko aur Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi ab stairs par khadi Saeed ki baton ko sun rahi thi apne maa ke saath.

Aur jiss waqt Abhi apne baalon mein kanghi kar raha tha khud ko aine mein dekhte hue ussne dekha ke Ruhi ki nazrein uss par the. Ruhi Abhi ko baal banaate hue dekh rahi thi thoda muskuraate hue. Aur donon ke beech ziada faasla bhi nahin tha, aamne saamne the donon, yeh pehli bar tha ke Abhi Ruhi ko itne karib se dekh raha tha. Bahot hi acha feel hua Abhi ko. Usska dil machalne laga, bahot khush tha wo. Ussne ekaat baar Ruhi ko dekha weise hi muskuraate hue, aur iss baar Ruhi hanss padi Abhi ko dekhte hue, pata nahin kyun ussko hanssee aayi. Abhi ne dobara aine mein dekha Ruhi ko hansste hue dekh kar ke kahin usske chehre mein kuch aur to nahin laga hua hai, sab saaf tha to kyun hanssi wo Abhi ne socha!

Ek blue Jean aur ek white Tshirt mein dressed tha Abhi aur ab ek handsome young man dikh raha tha. ussne khud ko kayi baar aine mein dekha, chehre par haath ferra kayi baar aur Ruhi ki nazrein uss par tikke rahe muskuraate hue. Ruhi ab Saeed ko nahin sirf Abhi ko dekh rahi thi; aur jab Abhi tayaar hua wahan se nikalne ke liye to Mehboob nikla ghar se aur Saeed ke paas khade hokar baat karne laga…. Tab tak Abhi chalte hue Saeed tak reach hua apne bag ko kaandhe par taange hue, aur ek nazar Ruhi par kiye hue. Ruhi ki nazar Abhi par hi thi jab wo ruka, Mehboob se handshake kiya, aur Saeed se wapas chalne ko kaha. Baaki ke do workers chale gaye the tab tak. Saeed ke paas ek aur ladka koyi 27 ya 28 saal ka baat kar raha tha magar usske haath mein ek camera tha jiss se wo bus ki photos le raha tha, kal jab bus aya tha tab bhi ussne kuch photos liye the. Abhi soch raha tha ke wo kaun hoga, shayad Mehboob ka koyi rishtedar hoga ussne socha. Aur ek budha aadmi bhi tha Mehboob ke paas lagbhag 70 saal ka budha jissko Ruhi ne dada kehkar phukara aur ussko kuch dene lagi, tab Abhi ko pata chala ke wo r
Ruhi ki dada ji hai kyunke kal Abhi ne uss budhe ko Ruhi ke ghar ke saamne baraamde mein dekha tha. to jaane se pehle Abhi ne sabse handshake kiye, aur uss budhe se bhi, aur budhe ne abhi se pucha,

“kidhar ka bashinda ho beta? Door jaana hai kia?”

Abhi ne ussko jawaab diya ke koyi 30 kms tak jaana hai aur apne muhalle ka naam bataya dada ji ko. Uss waqt Ruhi dhyaan se muskuraate hue abhi ko dekh rahi thi usske dada ji se baat karte hue. Abhi ko acha laga ke Ruhi kitni der se ussko weise dekh rahi thi.

Aur aakhir mein Abhi ne wapas jaane ki kadam uthaye aur ek nazar Ruhi ke taraf dekha aur ussko bye wave kiya, saath saath usski maa se kaha, “bye aunty, kal milte hein!”

Ruhi ne hanss diye Abhi ko weisa kehte sunkar aur wo ladka jo bus ki chasis ka photos le raha tha wo bhi hanssa Ruhi aur usski maa ke taraf dekhte hue….. Abhi ne to Ruhi ko wave kiya magar Ruhi ne uss se wave ke badle sirf laugh kiye.

Bus mein wapas lautte waqt Abhi ne Saeed se pucha,

“Wo ladka kaun tha jo photos le raha tha bus ki?”

Saeed ne jawaab mein kaha,

“wo uss aurat ka bada beta hai jissko tu taad raha tha kal!”

Abhi heyraan hua aur kaha,

“What? Main kahan taad raha tha uss aurat ko? Aaj wo khud mujhse puch rahi thi ke kab tak bus ka kaam pura hoga!”

Saeed ne tab kaha wo joke kar raha hai,

Abhi ab sochne laga ke Ruhi ka itna bada aur ek bhai hai matlab Ruhi ka bada bhai! Shayad issi liye wo bhi hanssa tha jab Abhi ne usski maa ko bye kaha tha, Abhi ne socha….. aur wo din bhar nazar nahin aaye kyunke wo kahin kaam par gaya hua hoga din bhar iss liye sirf shaam ko nazar aya.

Ghar pahunchne se pehle Abhi ne dukaan se ek mota sa thick cover wala copy book kharida 400 pages wala.

Aur ghar jaate hi baith gaya uss mein likhne. Pehle usski cover par title likha – “The Days I Spent At Ruhi’s Place”

Pages ko number karna shuru kiya, phir jo kal 5 pages ka likha tha apne dairy mein wahan se sab copy kiya uss nayi copy book mein, aur aaj ki din bhar ka event likha Abhi ne. Sab kuch likha. Kiss tarah se Ruhi ussko dekh rahi thi, kiss tarah muskura rahi thi, kiss tarah kitchen mein pakka rahi thi etc . Apne feelings ko likha, ussko kitna acha lagta hai wahan jaana, wahin rehne ko mann karta hai yeh sab kuch likha Abhi ne. Aur yeh lines likh kar aaj ka likhna end kiya;

“I wish I would be living in that village of hers. Thus, I could go there any time and look at her. What could she be doing at this time? Had she already had dinner? Must she be watching TV with her family? How nice it would have been if I suddenly reach there at this time and she gets surprised to see me! Would her mother ask me to get inside and watch TV with them? Would I get a seat close to Ruhi and we both hold each other’s hands and watch TV?”

Ek sapna likh raha tha Abhi, ussko iss sapne ko sach karna tha.

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Agle subha aur bhi ziada savere uth gaya Abhi. Usske dilo dimaagh mein sirf Ruhi bassa hua tha. Toilet kiya, brush kiya, aur brush karte waqt soch raha tha kia Ruhi uth gayi hogi iss waqt? Subha ke 5 baja tha. ya abhi neendh mein hogi? Aur agar neendh mein hogi to mujhko sapne mein dekh rahi hogi kyunke main ussko yaad kar raha hoon…. Abhi ne baal mein kanghi chalaate hue yaad kiya kiss tarah kal Ruhi ussko dekh rahi thi jab wo kanghi kar raha tha apne baal mein shaam ko, aur socha ke ab shaayad har roz weisa mauka milega ussko kyunke ussi time ko har roz kaam end karna aur wash karne jana hai aur ussi waqt Ruhi kitchen mein cook kar rahi hoti hai, yeh soch kar Abhi ko Khushi hui, dil ko ek sukoon mila.

Abhi ne shave bhi kiya, weise to har do din baad shave karta tha, magar kyunke ab Ruhi ka saamna karna tha ussne shave kiya aur soch liya ke jab tak Mehboob ki bus mein kaam karega har roz shave karega…. Wo chahta tha ke wo Ruhi ko handsome dikhe. Handsome to tha hi Abhi ziada hi hansdsome tha, magar unn dinon clean shaven hona hota tha, jiss ne teen din se ziada shave nahin kiya ussko ganda kaha jata tha…


Ab kaam ke usske saare puraane kapde hote the, magar ussne yeh bhi decide kiya ke ab purane wale kapde nahin pehnega wahan jab tak kaam karega. Ek dark jean aur ek dark blue wala shirt liya kaam karne ke liye. Weise to takriban saal bhar ek set kapda use karta tha, aur 4/5 saal purana kapda use karta tha kaam karne ke liye, magar Ruhi ke liye sab special karna chahta tha. To behtareen kapda liya kaam karne ke liye, wo libaas jo ab tak almost naya tha ussko ek saal tak pehen sakta tha ussne ussko kaam karne ke liye le liya.

Aur aaj subha 6.30 ko abhi reach ho gaya uss muhalle mein. Shop se cigarrte kharida aur kasht maarte hue uss aangan mein dakhil hua, aur Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf dekhte hue aaguey badhta gaya ke achanak ussko garden mein koyi dikha…. Garden right hand side mein hai, plan mein dekh lena update 4 par…. Abhi ne bilkool bhi nahin socha tha ke itne savere wo Ruhi ka saamna karega….. Ruhi night gown mein thi aur garden se gulaab ke phool pick kar rahi thi… usski haath mein ek kainchi thi jiss se wo phool kaat rahi thi, usski left hand mein koyi 4 ya 5 gulaab already the aur wo aur kaat rahi thi, usski nightgown pale blue color ki thi, lambi thi usski pura jism dhaka hua tha niche tak, yahan tak ke usski chappal par uss dress ki last end chhuh rahe the…..

Ab samajh mein nahin aya ke Ruhi Abhi ko dekh kar darr gayi, sharma gayi ya bilkool expect nahin kiya tha ke itne savere koyi ghair usski aangan mein achanak prakat ho jaega, aur usska chehra bilkool badal gaya, sirf ek teerchi nazar se ek baar dekha Abhi ko ek pal ke liye aur turant chehra ek taraf kar liya Ruhi ne, jab tak abhi usske level reach hua, to abhi ne usske taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“Hello, good morning, how are you?!”

Ruhi ne ek shabd bhi nahin kaha. Wo gulaab ke phoolon ko dekhti rahi, Abhi reply expect kar raha tha, magar ruk to nahin sakta tha ussko aaguey badhna tha washroom ke taraf change karne ke liye, agar ruk kar Ruhi se savere savere baat karta to sahi nahin hota Abhi ne socha, kyunke abhi usski jaan pehchaan bhi nahin hui hai uss se, iss liye Abhi aaguey badhta gaya mudhkar Ruhi ke traraf dekhte hue, aur dhire dhire kehta gaya,

“bahot khubsurat gulaab hein, shabnami katrein nazar arahe hein gulaabon ke upar, photos lenge to behad khubsurat lagenge….”

Khuda jaane ke Ruhi ne Abhi ke unn baton ko suna bhi ya nahin, Abhi badhta gaya washroom ke taraf weisa kehte hue…

Abhi washroom mein apne working clothes pehente hue sochne laga ke kal shaam wali Ruhi aur aaj ki garden wali Ruhi mein kitna antar hai. Kal shaam wali Ruhi kitni khil kar dekh rahi thai Abhi ko, ussko bye bhi kiya tha Abhi ne wave karte hue aur wo hanssi thi, aur aaj bilkool alag thi wohi Ruhi….. ek good morning ka jawaab bhi nahin diya savere savere….. Abhi ne khud se kaha,

“Sala ek good morning ka reply karne mein kia jata hai? Mera din ban jata aaj agar ussne mujhe good morning keh diya hota to, din mazedaar guzarta aaj mera… magar ab to mood hi kharab ho gaya savere savere yaar, main kyun aaj itni savere agaya yahan…. Kaash wo ab kitchen mein ajaaye to main dobara ussko good morning karunga aur kahunga ke good morning ka jawaab dete hein khamosh nahin rehte….!”

Washroom se kapde change karne ke baad garden ke taraf jhanka Abhi ne aur dekha ke Ruhi ne phool tod liye aur ghar wapas chali gayi thi saamne wale darwaze se ghar ke andar gayi, kitchen ke taraf nahin aayi… ab ghar ke andar se zaroor kitchen mein aegi to abhi wahin wait karta raha kuch der tak… kitchen ka door open tha magar kitchen mein koyi bhi nahin dikh raha tha…. usski maa bhi nahin thi….

Abhi sochne laga – “kia Ruhi ne hi chai banaaye honge ya usski maa ne? kia Ruhi sabse pehle uthti hai, aur kitchen mein aati hai? Kitchen saaf suthra dikh raha tha…..”

Tab tak Rahima apni kitchen se Abhi ko hello karti hai puchte hue ke itne savere chale aaye….. Rahima ek 30 se 33 saal ki bahot khubsurat aurat thi. Usski ek unique beti thi Farzina naam se jo primary school jaati thi…. Abhi ne ek do baat kiye usske saath Ruhi ke kitchen ke taraf dekhte hue….

Abhi phir sapnon ki dunya mein kho gaya. Ussne kuch aisa socha ke kaash Ruhi kitchen mein aaye aur Abhi se puche ke ussne chai pee liya, aur ek cup chai serve kare abhi ko apne haath se…

Abhi ne itna socha hi tha ke Ruhi ne to nahin magar Rahima ne ek cup chai diya abhi ko, garma garam chai jo abhi abhi banaya tha ussne.

Chai peete hue Abhi Ruhi ke kitchen ke taraf dekhta gaya Ruhi ko sochte hue, aur usski bagiche mein bartaav ko sochte hue…. Abhi ko kuch acha nahin lag raha tha, usska din aaj bahot bura guzrega ussko lagne laga tha….

“kyun Ruhi ne mujhko jawaab nahin diya? Kyun ek taraf dekha ussne? Kal to sab thik tha aaj kia ho gaya? Kia aaj din mein mujhse muskuraegi? Mujhko dekhegi bhi ya nahin? Kyu eisa behave kiya ussne mere saath savere savere? Main kia samjhun? Kia ussne mujhe suna nahin hoga? Aisa keise ho sakta hai, sab khamosh the, fiza thandi, ek awaaz bhi nahin kahin, keise meri awaaz nahin suni hogi IMPOSSIBLE….. achi tarah se suni ussne mere waaz ko magar jaan bujh kar jawaab nahin diya ussne…. Kia main ajnabee hoon? Kia kal humne baat nahin kiye? Usski maa se, usske bhai se, dada ji se, sabse baat to kar liye to ajnabee kaise hua main?!!”

Abhi ko kuch bhi acha nahin feel ho raha tha… usska dil jaise baitha jaa raha tha, himmat nahin ho rahi thi usse aaj kaam karne ki…. Weakness feel karne laga sirf Ruhi ki berukhi ki vajah se….

Kuch der baad wo bus ke paas gaya ek aur cigarrete jala kar, chasis ke charon taraf ghuma aur soch raha tha kahan se shuru karen frame banane ko, tabhi Saeed aur do dusre mulazin haazir hue…..

Abhi ko pata tha, balke laga aaj ka din lamba aur bhaari guzrega…. Welding karna hai aaj din bhar, bus ki chasis par frame weld karna hai…. Tabhi kitchen ke stair par Ruhi aur usski maa nazar aaye. Ruhi ab nightgown mein nahin thi, ussne ek white blouse aur dark skirt pehni hui thi…. Phir turant Ruhi apne ghar ke saamne wale hise par aayi tap one ke paas wahan jharu lagaane aayi, kal bhi wohi kiya tha, ek chota sa baramde par jharu lagaa rahi thi aur Abhi ke bus do kadam ki doorie par thi, jhuk kar jharu lagaa rahi thi aur Abhi ki nazrein uss se hatt hi nahin rahe the…. Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi ussi ko dekhe jaa raha hai, aur ussne nazrein utha kar Abhi ko dekha ek halki si muskaan ke saath. Abhi cigarette pee raha tha, to Ruhi ne apni meethi awaaz mein kaha,

“cigarette pina achi baat nahin hai ji!”

To be continued…………. (3103 words)
Woooooowww......
VERY GOOD I MEAN.....BRILLIANT UPDATE......

I LIKE THIK VERY MUCH.....MOSTLY.....RUHI'S LAST LINES.......
SOMETHING LIKE......

TAPTE DIL KI ZAMIN PAR......
BAARISH KA TOOFAN AA GAYA HO.....

JUST.....WOW.......

PAHALE KE ISI BHI UPDATE ME MAINE UPDATE KE AARE ME JYADA NAHI KAHA.....KYOKI IS SE PAHLE KE SABHI UPDATES.....KE MOST PART ME.....ABHI KI FEELINGS KO EXPRESS KIYA GAYA HAI.....

PAR ISS UPDATE ME FEELINGS.....OR STORY SAATH SAATH THI.....

SO SUCH A NICE UPDATE.....

AB BAAT KARE ABHI OR SCENE KO TO.....

CHAHE US ZAMAANE KI BAAT HO YA ABHI KI.....HAR KOI APNE MEHBOOB SE SAAMNE.....ACHCHA DIKHNA HEE CHAHTA HAI.....OR USKE LIYE MEHNAT BHI KARTA HAI.....

HA LEKIN WO JO ABHI KO GANDE SE LOOK ME DEKHNE KA SEQUENCE THA WO KAAFI ACHCHA THA.......

MOSTLY WLYE HEE HOTA HAI......KHAS KAR LADKI OR PYAAR KE MAAMLO ME.....

JO AAP SOCH SAMAJH KAR KARTE HO.....WO KABHI NAHI HOTA HAI....

WESE ISS BAAT KA KOI KHAS MATLAB BHI NAHI HAI KI......FIRST IMPRESSION ACHCHA HONA CHAHIYE.....

KYOKI BHALE HEE FIRST IMPRESSION KE SATH BHI HI.....PAR KAM SE KAM RUHI KI NAZAR ABHI PAR TO GAYI.....

OR HO SAKTA HAI USNE USE NOTICE BHI KIYA HO......
BHALE HEE WO DIRTY FACE WALA SCENE HO YA ABHI KE DWARA GOODBYE BOLNE WALA SEQUENCE.....NOTICE TO KIYA HEE HOGA.....

OR PHIR AK AASHIK KE LIYE SABSE KHAS CHIJ JO HOTI HAI.....WO HAI.....

APNE MEHBOOB KI AK JHALAK PAANE I BETAABI......USE LAGTA HAI KI WO CHAHRA....HAR SAMAY USKE SAAMNE HEE RAHE......
OR USKA DEEDAR USE HOTA RAHE....

RUHI KA ABHI KO IGNORE KARNA......MUJHE TO ISNE KOI GALAT BAAT NAHI LAGI....

AK ACHCHE GHAR OR SANSKAR WAALI LADKI......APNE HEE GHAR KE AANGAN ME KHADI HO KAR......BHALA KISI AZANABI SE KYO BAAT KAREGI.....

BHALE HEE INKI NAZRE MILI HO......AK DUSRE KO DEKHA HO.....LEKIN HAI TO ABHI BHI AK DUSRE SE ANJAN.......

USKE BAGICHE ME USE KOI.....GHAR WALA YA MUHALLE WALA DEKH SAKTA THA.....AKELE ME ABHI SE BAAT KARTE HUE.......

OR PHIR AAJ KE ZAMAANE ME BHI LADKIYO KO APNI IZZAT OR MAAN MARY ADA KA DARR RAHTA HAI......
WO AISE HEE KISI AZANABI SE BAAT TO NAHI KARTI.....
YE SACH HE KI USNE ABHI KO DEKHA THA .....LEKIN DUR SE OR APNI MAA KE SAATH.....
HO SAKTA HAI....KI WO ABHI KE ITNI SUBAH OR ACHANAK SE USKE PASS AA JAANE SE ASAHAJ HO GAYI HO.....
OR USE SAMAJH NA AAYA HO KI KYA KAHE....YA KYA KARE......


AND AT LAST......
WO ABHI KI PURE DIN KI TADAP OR PHIR ACHANAK SE RUHI KA USKE LIYE KAHE GAYE KUCH SHABD.....

UN KUCH SHABDO NE HEE USKI SAARI THAKAAN.....OR NARAZGI DUR KAR DI......

Anyways
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai.....

WELL WRITTEN AND WELL DESCRIBED ACT.......
THANKS.....
 

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Update 7 And It Continued….


Ruhi ko pata tha ke abhi ussi ko dekhe jaa raha hai, aur ussne nazrein utha kar Abhi ko dekha ek halki si muskaan ke saath. Abhi cigarette pee raha tha, to Ruhi ne apni meethi awaaz mein kaha,

“cigarette pina achi baat nahin hai ji!”

Ab aaguey….

Abhi ne to abhi abhi socha ke din bura guzrega magar sab ulta ho raha tha ussko kitni Khushi hui Ruhi ki uss baat ko sunkar wo bayaan nahin kar sakta….. Abhi ke samajh mein nahin aya ke kia jawaab dein Ruhi ko, wo Abhi ki reply ka wait kar rahi thi, jhaaru lagana bandh kar diya tha khadi thi Abhi ka jawaab paane ke liye ek Muskaan banaaye hue apne honton par…. Abhi ne usski maa ke taraf dekha aur wo Abhi ko hi dekh rahi thi muskuraate hue kyunke ussko pata tha ke Ruhi uss se baat kar rahi hai….

Tab tak Saeed ji Abhi ke paas aa gaye aur kaha,

“Abhi Welding machine ko ek current point mein to lagao, shuru karo yaar!”

To Ruhi ko laga ke wo abhi ko kaam karne ke liye disturb kar rahi hair to wapas jhaaru lagaane lagi Saeed ko dekh kar aur Abhi ne feel kiya ke Saeed bhai ne ussko disturb kiya aur ussko jawaab diya,

“Saeed bhai wo bhi main hi karun? Tony se kaho nah current point mein lagaane ko, mujhe to weld karna hai, aur tubes ko measurement par kaatna hai pehle, aap tubes ki measurement to lelo bhai!”

To Saeed bhai chala gaya Tubes ke taraf aur Abhi wapas Ruhi ko dekha aur kaha,

“sunon please, ek baat puchni hai!”

Ruhi do kadam Abhi ke taraf muskuraati hui aayi aur pucha,

“kia? Cigarrte kyun nahin pina yeh puchoge aap?”

Abhi ne hansste hue kaha,

“are nahin puchna yeh hai ke aap ko main ne kuch der pehle good morning kaha to aap ne jawaab kyun nahin diya?!”

Ruhi heyrani se abhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue pucha,

“What? Aap ne kab mujhse baat kiye, baat to main ne aap se kiya abhi abhi?!”

Abhi: “are yaar, jab tum garden se roses pick kar rahi thi aur main araha tha tab tumko good morning kaha tha nah?!”

Ruhi: “Really? Main ne to kuch nahin suna, sorry then, very good morning to you too and do have a nice day.”

Abhi bahot khush hua aur kaha,

“wow that’s great then, same to you my dear!”

Ruhi ne niche dekhte hue dhire se kaha,

“I am not your ‘dear’ aur aap to acha English bol lete ho to eisa kaam kyun karte ho aap?!”

Abhi: “Why? Iss kaam mein kia buraayi hai bhala?”

Ruhi: “meri mummy kehti hai yeh kaam sahi nahin hai kyunke iss mein future nahin hai!”

Abhi ne usski maa ke taraf dekha aur Ruhi ko jawaab diya,

“tumhari mummy ghalat kehti hai, this job is a perfect one.”

Tab tak Saeed wapas agaya aur thoda bossy hote hue Abhi se kaha,

“Abhi yeh baatein karne ka time nahin kaam karne ka waqt hai nah?!”

Saeed ki baat ko sunkar wahan se Ruhi bhaag chali!

Abhi ko acha nahin laga jiss tone mein Saeed ne Abhi ko Ruhi ke saamne weisa kaha. Magar Ruhi se batein karke Abhi bahot hi khush tha aur ab khud se kaha ke usska din ab bahot majedaar guzrega aaj to.

Abhi phir kaam par lag gaya. Kaam karte waqt of course baar baar Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf dekh raha tha. Abhi ne ek measurement tape lekar bus ki front side ka measurement liya, aur usske motabik lohe ko kaata bus ke front side ki frame weld karne ke liye. Saeed ne wohi kaam bus ki back side par kiya aur jo helper Tony tha wo Abhi ka saath raha aur ek dusra ladka tha Vinay naam se wo Saeed ka help kar raha tha.

Ab front side ke liye lohe ko curve karna tha weld karne se pehle. Yeh kaam garage mein ek bada sa machine mein hota tha, bade bade lohe ko kissi bhi form mein moda jaata tha tab bus ki chasis par weld kiya jata tha, ab yahan sab kaam haathon se karna tha to Abhi ne measure par kaate hue lohe ko ek bada sa hathode se ek dusre purane bus ki engine par rakh kar ek taraf Tony se hold karwaya aur uss lohe par hatoda maarta gaya ussko curve form dene ke liye. Uss se bahot shor ho raha tha. Koyi ek ghante tak abhi ko time hi nahin mila Ruhi ko dekhne ki magar Abhi ko pata nahin tha ke Ruhi apne ghar ke andar se khirki ke paas parde ke kone se Abhi ko wo kaam karte dekh rahi thi aur usski maa bhi dekh rahi thi Abhi ko uss lohe ko form dene ke liye kiss taraah hatoda maar raha tha. Ab wo loha Tony se sambhala nahin jaa raha tha kyun ke jab Abhi uss par hathoda maar raha tha to Tony ke haath mein shock lag raha tha iss liye kayi baar loha uss ke haath se chuth gira, aur ek baar loha jab Tony ke haath se chhuta to wo end wapas Abhi ke thik chehre ke paas laut kar ruka aur jhat se Abhi ne kuch kadam piche liya varna ussko gehra choat lag jata. Ruhi ne wo sab dekha aur usski aah nikli jiss waqt wo loha wapas Abhi ke chehre ke paas gaye to….

Kyunke jab loha bounce hokar gira ek ajeeb sa shor hua aur Tony zor se abhi ka naam chillaya ussko warn karne ke liye to Saeed, Vinay, Mehboob, Ruhi ka dada, Ruhi ki maa sab turant baahar aaye dekhne ko ke kia hua…..

Haath mein wo bada sa hatoda liye jiss action se upar chalaang laga kar Abhi kuda tha uss lohe se bachne ke liye, phir jiss jagah jaa kar Abhi land hua tha haath mein hathode sameth wo ek heroic action tha jissko Ruhi ne admire kiya. Hero lag raha tha Abhi uss action ko karte hue. Aur jahan land hua tha Abhi uss chalaang ke baad wo Ruhi ki terrace par tha, aur thik ussi jagah se ruhi Abhi ko jhaank rahi thi. Aur ussne turant khirki ki parde ko hatta kar abhi se kaha,

“Bahot dangerous hai yeh kaam, aap bahot khatarnaak tarike se abhi hurt ho sakte the, mujhko bahot darr laga jab main ne uss lohe ko aap ke sar ke taraf udh kar aate hue dekha to, mujhe laga ke aap ko lag gayi…. Aap bahot flexible body ke malik ho gymnastic karte ho kia aap? Aap wahan se kaise, jaise udhkar yahan pahunche?!”

Abhi ko bahot hi acha laga Ruhi ko wo sab kehte hue sun kar aur jawaab diya ke garage mein ek sophisticated machine hai jo lohe ko modta hai, yahan kuch nahin hai iss liye haath se karna pad raha hai varna kaam bilkool dangerous nahin hai…. Phir bhi Ruhi ki maa ne bhi join kiya Ruhi ko aur kaha ke dangerous hai yeh kaam. Tab tak Saeed aur Mehboob bhi Abhi ke paas aagaye to Saeed ne kaha ke Tony ki ghalti hai ussko kissi bhi keemat par lohe ko chorrna nahin chahiye tha. Aur Saeed ne Abhi se kaha ke wo khud tony ke jagah ab lohe ko hold karega taake Abhi uss par hathoda maar sake. Jab dobara Abhi jaane laga hatoda maarne to apni meethi awaz mein ruhi ne darte hue abhi se kaha,

“be vey careful please, I am feeling scared!”

Abhi ka dil machal gaya Ruhi ki uss caring words se. kitna khayal rakh rahi thi wo Abhi ka. Abhi ko itna acha laga ke usska dil andar jaise jhomne laga tha.

Kaam jaari rakha gaya…. Aur ek ghanta laga abhi ko bus ki front side ke tamaam lohon ko curve form dene ke liye usske baad ussne welding karna shuru kiya chasis par unn kaate hue aur mode hue tamaam lohon ko. Baar baar Ruhi ke ghar ke andar jhank bhi raha tha ke kahin Ruhi dikhegi ya nahin….

Ruhi nazar nahin aayi magar dusri nal ke paas Ruhi ki maa nazar aayi pathar par kapde dhote hue, aur pata chala ke wo kissi se baat karte hue kapde dho rahi thi to Abhi samajh gaya ke ruhi wahin hogi ghar ke piche wale hisse mein jahan se Abhi ko wo nazar nahin arahi thi…..

Abhi jo lohe tubes weld kiye jaa rahe the bus ki chasis par, wo base the frame ki. Ab uss base se upar aur tubes jode jayenge jo upar tak bus ka form lega. Wo sab karne mein ek mahina lag jaega. Abhi to kaam ki shuruwaat thi.

Der ghante beet gaye aur ek do baar Abhi ne dekha ke ghar ke piche se ek do baar Ruhi ne ussko dekha weld karte hue. Buss jhank rahi thi phir ghar ke piche ho jaati thi, same time apni maa se baat kar rahi thi….. Abhi ko pyas laga aur dekha ke nal hai to ek khali botal lekar gaya paani bharne, ussi bahane Ruhi se ek do baat kar leta, magar usska plan fail hua kyunke tap number one tha yahin bus ke paas, to kyun karib ke tap ko chorr kar piche wale tap mein paani bharne jata?! Phir bhi pani lene se pehle Ruhi ki maa se permission liya ke kia uss nal se paani le sakta hai…. Jiss waqt Ruhi ki maa Abhi ko reply kar rahi thi, Ruhi saamne aayi Abhi ko dekhne ke usski maa se kia keh raha tha wo. Muskura rahi thi aur jab abhi pani bharne laga botal mein to Ruhi ne kaha,

“pani maangte nahin hein, buss le lete hein, agli baar puchna nahin buss nal kholna aur bhar lena okay?!”

Abhi ne muskuraate hue thanks kaha, thik tabhi Ruhi ki maa ne Ruhi se kuch kaha, aur turant Ruhi ne Abhi se kaha,

“Hello? Juice piyoge? Thoda sa juice bana doon kia?!”

Yehi bat keh rahi thi Ruhi se usski maa ke kyun nah thoda sa juice de diya jaaye unn logon ko…

Magar Abhi ne Ruhi se muskuraate hue kaha,

“suno dear, juice sahi hai magar ek problem ho jaega!”

Ruhi heyrani se Abhi ko dekhte hue pucha,

“What? Juice se kia problem ho jaega bhala?”

To abhi ne kaha,

“juice piyunga to cigarrete pine ka mann karega kyunke juice sweet hoga nah? tab tum kahogi ke cigarrte pina acha nahin!”

Abhi ki reply sunkar Ruhi ki maa zor se hanss padi, aur Ruhi ne munh banaate hue kaha,

“to phir thik nahin nahin banaugi juice mat pina cigarrete phir!”

Phir bhi Ruhi ki maa ne Ruhi ko juice serve karne ke liye kaha ussko, magar haath ke ishaare se Abhi ne mana kiya.

Jab Abhi wapas kaam karne laga to Tony ne Abhi se kaha,

“tum ne kaise pata liya uss ladki ko yaar? Kitni khubsurat hai, pyari bhi hai, ek din mile aur tumne ladki pata liye wah yaar!”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue Tony ko jawaab diya,

“abhi pataya kahan hai yaar, abhi to sirf baat cheet chal rahi hai, normal, casual baatein ho rahe hein, pataana to abhi door ki baat hai ….”

Tony ne kaha,

“are bhai saaf dikh raha hai ke wo tumko kitna passand karti hai. Pahaad par chadhne ki zaroorat nahin yeh pata karne ke liye ke ladki tumko kitna passand karti hai saath mein maa bhi hahaha, wife aur saas donon mil gaya tujhe to!”

Abhi ne khush hote hue Tony se kaha,

“tere munh mein ghee shakar yaar, kaash yeh sab sach ho jaaye! Wo mujhko bahot passand hai yaar, I am really in love with her!”

Tony ne kaha,

“yeh bhi saaf dikh raha hai ke you are in love with her, magar tumko shaayad nahin dikh raha magar mujhko dikh raha ke she is also in love with you bhai!!”

Abhi bahot hi khush hua Tony ke baton ko sun kar…. Aur phir aur bi ziada Ruhi ke taraf dekhne laga Abhi. Magar Abhi ko nahin lagta tha ke Ruhi bhi uss se pyar karne lagi hai. Ussko lagta tha ke shayad thoda aakarshit hui hai Abhi se, shayad handsome hai iss liye magar pyar karne lagi yeh nahin dikh raha tha Abhi ko. Abhi ko karna yeh tha ke ussko Ruhi ko khud se pyar karwana tha, Abhi chahta tha ke Ruhi ko bhi Abhi se weise hi pyar ho jaise Abhi ko uss se hone laga hai….

Abhi ne socha phir wo Ruhi ko apne dil ki baat bataega. Abhi Ruhi ke aur paas jaana chahta tha. Abhi to kewal do din hue the; aur Ruhi Abhi ko jaanta bhi kahan hai, donon ek dusre ko achchi tarah se jaan lenge tab Abhi baat ko cherrega aisa socha hai Abhi ne.

Tony ne kaha,

“ziada der mat karna bhai kahin koyi aur baazi nah maar le!”

Yeh sunkar Abhi ko jhatka laga. Pareshan hua wo, aur Ruhi ke chehre mein dekhne laga….. aisa fix dekha Ruhi ke chehre ko ke khud Ruhi hayraan hui aur ishaare se Ruhi ne hi pucha, “kia hua?!”

Abhi ke chehre mein ek udaasi chaah gayi thi, jo shayad Ruhi ne note kiya, Abhi lagataar ussko dekhe jaa raha tha aur Ruhi uncomfortable feel karne lagi…. Ruhi ne phir Abhi ko dekha aur haath ke ishaare se pucha kia hua to Abhi ne naah mein sar hillaya matlab kuch bhi nahin kaha….. phir Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi ki maa taar par kapde sukhne ke liye taang rahi thi to jaldi sse Abhi bina kuch soche samjhe Ruhi ke taraf gaya…

Abhi ko apne taraf aate dekh kar Ruhi ka chehra laal ho gaya jaise ussko pata tha Abhi uss se kia kehne araha hai, Ruhi kabhi apni maa ko dekhti to kabhi bus mein dusre logon ko kaam karte dekhti phir Abhi ko dekhti… wo kuch ghabra si gayi….

Bus ke andar se Saeed bhai Abhi ko ghusse se dekh raha tha. ussko nahin passand tha ke kaam ke waqt Abhi idhar udhar jaaye…

Abhi Ruhi ke bilkool karib pahuncha aur dheemi awaaz mein, aashikana andaz mein pucha,

“Tumhari life mein koyi hai? Please sach batana? Agar hai to be jhijhak batado please.”

Ruhi hanss padi, chehra laal to hua hi tha aur Abhi ki baat sun kar wo hanssne lagi phir pucha,

“iss sawaal ka ek sawaal se jawaab doon?!”

Abhi usski hanssi ko admire karne laga, kitni khubsurat dikhti hai Ruhi hansste hue. Phir Abhi ne kaha,

“okay wohi sahi bolo to!”

Ruhi ne hansste hue hi pucha,

“yeh sawaal kyun? Jaan sakti hoon?!”

Abhi ne bilkool heyraan hote hue kaha,

“Areeee?! Kamaal hai, yeh koyi jawaab hai? Sawaal bhi nahin fit baithta ab…. Mera sawaal to sawaal hi reh gaya nah?!”

Ruhi ki maa donon ko muskuraate hue dekh rahi thi kapde taar par taangte hue.

Abhi ne phir dhire se kaha,

“please batao nah mere liye ye bahot important hai bolo nah please.”

Ruhi ne intelligently jawaab diya,

“kaise important ho sakta hai bhala? Hum ek dusre ko jaante bhi nahin, abhi do din hue ek dusre se baat kiye hue to kia important ho sakta hai do dinon mein? Mujhe nahin yakeen ke kuch bhi important hai abhi, I don’t believe you!”

Abhi ne socha wo bhi sahi tha.

Ruhi ab blush karne lagi aur apne jeeb ko apne upper lip ke andar se honth ko fullaya, phir muskuraayi Abhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue….. donon ek dusre ke aankhon ki gehraayi mein dekh rahe the… Abhi ne note kiya ke Ruhi ki nazrein usske chehre ko chaaro taraf dekh rahe the, usski peshaani ko dekha usski nazar ne, phir usske gaal ko dekha, tab usske chehre ko dekha tab usske aankhon mein wapas dekha….. aur Abhi ne kaha,

“samajhdaar ko ishara kaafi hai, mujhe jo kehna tha so main ne keh diya, aaguey tumhari marzi miss Ruhi”

Yeh keh kar Abhi mudhne wala tha wapas bus ke paas jaane ke liye magar Ruhi ne ussko yeh kehkar roka,

“bilkool nahin, aap ne kuch bhi kaha nahin, aap ne ek sawaal kiya tha mujhse, kuch kehne aur sawaal karne mein antar hote hein mister Abhi!”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke aankhon ki gehraayi mein dekhte hue kaha,

“mera sawaal hi ishara tha meri baat ka, uss sawaal se ishara mil gaya hoga, samajhdaar to ho tum, to ishara kaafi hai tumko hehehehe!”

Aur Abhi jaane laga wapas, to Ruhi hanssne lagi aur kaha,

“bahot honshiyaar samajhte ho aap apne aap ko nah Abhi?!”

Tab tak Abhi bus ke paas reach ho chuka tha aur mudhkar Ruhi se kaha,

“samajhta nahin hoon Miss Ruhi, main HOON. Honshiyaar hoon main!”

Ruhi ussko dekhti rahi kaafi der tak hansste hue. Apni jagah se baar baar Abhi muskuraate hue Ruhi ko dekhe jaa raha tha weld karte hue, aur Ruhi bhi ab bade pyar se Abhi ko dekhti jaa rahi thi…….

Kapde taar par sukhne ke liyne taangne ke baad Ruhi ki maa ne Ruhi se hansste hue pucha,

“kia keh raha tha Abhi?”

Ruhi thodi sharmaayi aur kaha,

“Puch raha tha ke kia koyi meri life mein hai kia? Hahahaha!”

Ruhi ki maa ne bus ke taraf Abhi ko dekhte hue Ruhi se kaha,

“Kaafi tez hai yeh ladka, yeh puchne agaya bus do din ki mulakaat mein? Hmmm aur tumne kia kaha usse?”

Ruhi ne balkhaate hue kaha,

“kuch nahin kaha main ne, main ne usske sawaal par sawaal se jawaab diya ke wo kyun yeh sawaal kar raha hai mujhse hihihihi!”

Maa: “Aur phir wo chala gaya kia?!”

Ruhi: “nahin bahot tez hai wo sach mein, padha likha lagta hai, English bhi acha bolta hai maa, ussne mujhe kaha ke samajhdar ko ishara kafi hai, aur kaha ke main samajhdar to hoon so samajh jaungi ke ussne ye sawaal kyun kiya mujhse, sach mein honshiyaar hai khud bhi kaha ussne hehehehe!”

Maa ne Ruhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue pucha,

“to ab tu kia karegi? Bata? Kia wo pasand hai tujhe?”

Ruhi ne ek gehri saans lete hue Abhi ke taraf dekha, phir apni maa ke chehre mein ek ajeeb si sikanjh chehre par laate hue kaha,

“pata nahin maa, pata nahin mujhe, kitna handsome hai, hai nah maa? Padha likha bhi hai aur strong hai, kitna lamba hai maa!! Main kia karun maa?!”

Maa ne bhi ek gehri saans liye aur kaha,

“Mujhe kia pata mujhse kyun puch rahi hai, tu bol kia karna hai ab?!”

Ruhi ne phir muskuraate hue apni maa ke taraf dekha aur kaha,

“Abhi kuch nahin kehna mujhe, kuch aur din beet jaane do tab bataungi aap ko aur shaayad ussko bhi….”

To be continued…. (3225 words)

Woooooowww
As always very good and fantabulous update.......

So first of all....let's talk about update.....

Mujhe ye wala update......thoda khicha hua sa laga.......jaise ki aapne ise badi jaldi me speed dekar likh diya ho......

Kyoki ye update pahle aaye sabhi updates ke mukaable kaafi fast chala......OR ak ke baad ak kaafi events or incidents isme aate gaye.....

Ruhi or abhi confrontation sequence or bhi better ho sakta tha ......agar use detail daal kar banaya jata.....jaise ki abhi tak ke updates hua hai.......

Ha hero ka small action buildup kaafi achcha tha......

Update me thoda suspence bhi dala gaya hai.....

Now for the act.......

Baat ki jaaye hero ki......to kisi pyar karne waale ko......koi ladki....saamne se aakar kuch baat karegi to wo shock to hoga hee.....

OR khas kar tab jab wo ladki wahi ho jise wo pyar karta ho......OR upar se wo use ignore kar rahi ho......

Aise me achanak se uska saamne se khud aakar.....aage se baat karna......
Dimaag or dil dono ko bang kar deta hai.....total shock.......

To Abhi ka shock hona tay hee tha.....

Baat kare saeed ki to mujhe uski baat me kuch galat nahi laga......aakhir Mehboob bhai ne use dekh kar hee tender diya tha.....to use to jaldi hogi hee kaam ki......upar se payment bhi 300000......Jo ki usne ZAMAANE ke hisaab se kaafi hai.....

Tony......ye character mujhe thoda azib laga......kyoki ise aaj hee dikhaya hai.....OR iski here wajah se hero ko chot lag sakti thi......
Wese ye mana jaa sakta hai ki wo haadsa tha.....lekin phir kya hee din me usne abhi or Ruhi ko observe kar liya......Jo itna sure hai......

Baat kar Ruhi ki......
To sabse jyada ye hee suspicious hai......pahle to usne abhi ke good morning ka jawaab nahi diya.....koi na....
Lekin use ye bhi pata nahi ki abhi ne us se baat ki.....

Is me kaafi bada jhhol hai.......2 baate ho sakti hai.....
1 twins ka chakkar......lekin agar ye hai to phir 2 din me dusri waali bas ak bar hee ghar se bahar nikli......ye to possible nahi......
2.memory loss ya personality split.......OR may be mood swing.......in tino me se koi ak bimaari.......

Jo ki Ruhi or uski maa ki baato se bhi pata chal raha hai ki kuch to baat hai.....

Anyways
dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai
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Casinar

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huum to explain karta hun mai bhai ji please gaur karna aap pahli baat to ye hai ruhi se dhokha mila abhi ko aur fir se wahi naam ruhi aa gayi story me jabki is naam se nafrat honi chahiye dil tuta tha uspar usme bhi kai raaz dikh rahe jaise pith piche kya chal raha hai to mujhe abhi jab tak story me khulkar beaten samne nahi aati kya kahun mai confuse hun abhi dusri baat aap jab koi bhi story likhte ho har point bahut strong pakadte ho jaise yahan bus wala kaam uski barik se barik baten mujhe ruhi se jada abhi ke kaam se pyar ho gaya hai.rahi baat ruhi ki to jab real love aayega tab uspar dhyan dunga mai jab koi baat parda me nahi lagegi kya chal raha..agar aapko koi baat buri lagi ho to sorry bhai ji par mai story par hun aur apna vichar rakhta rahunga:dost:
Are Rahul yaar kahan se pehli Ruhi se dhoka mila tha Abhi ko? Ruhi chhoti thi, lottery usski baap ki lagi, baap ne desh chorra aur Canada chala gaya bussne to Ruhi ne kaise dhoka diya Abhi ko jo Abhi Ruhi naam se nafrat kare??!! Ghalat samjhe tum uss Ruhi ko. Wo haalaat ke haaton hua tha uss Ruhi se judaayi. Uss Ruhi se itna pyar karta tha ke uss naam ne Abhi par wo assar kiya ke wo uss naam ke taraf khiincha gaya, uss naam se pyar tha to nafrat kaise karta bhala?
Rahi baat Abhi ki kaam ki to haan isska IMPORTANT role hai hi Ruhi aur Abhi ki love story mein. Thik hai to tum inn ke pyar ko mat padho Abhi k kaam par hi focus karte chalo.
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Are Rahul yaar kahan se pehli Ruhi se dhoka mila tha Abhi ko? Ruhi chhoti thi, lottery usski baap ki lagi, baap ne desh chorra aur Canada chala gaya bussne to Ruhi ne kaise dhoka diya Abhi ko jo Abhi Ruhi naam se nafrat kare??!! Ghalat samjhe tum uss Ruhi ko. Wo haalaat ke haaton hua tha uss Ruhi se judaayi. Uss Ruhi se itna pyar karta tha ke uss naam ne Abhi par wo assar kiya ke wo uss naam ke taraf khiincha gaya, uss naam se pyar tha to nafrat kaise karta bhala?
Rahi baat Abhi ki kaam ki to haan isska IMPORTANT role hai hi Ruhi aur Abhi ki love story mein. Thik hai to tum inn ke pyar ko mat padho Abhi k kaam par hi focus karte chalo.
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:lotpot:are bhai abhi hamari kaam karne ki umar hai to usi me dimag jata hai baad me pyar bhi kar lengen:lotpot:
 

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Update 11 Abhi Very Happy

Sunday ko din bhar Abhi ne apne diary mein sab kuch likha usske aur Ruhi ke baare mein. Apne feelings ko likha, ussko kia feel ho raha hai, kitna pyar karta hai Ruhi se, usske baghair jee nahin paega yeh sab likha Abhi ne.

Usske ghar mein wo apni choti behen jo 18 saal ki thi uss se bahut close tha. Abhi ussko sab kuch batata tha aur apne diary padhne ko deta tha, matlab usski uss behen ko sab kuch pata tha jo beet raha tha Abhi par. Usski behen ka naam tha Naina. Aur ek uss se bhi choti behen thi Abhi ka. Baaki aur 3 bhai the usske. Naina baaki sabko Abhi ke baare mein bata deti thi siwae usske pita ke. Matlab ghar mein usske pita ke ilawa sabko pata tha ke Abhi pyar mein hai Ruhi se.

Abhi ka din Ruhi ki yaad mein guzra hamesha ki tarah aur agle din savere savere pahunch gaya Ruhi ki aangan mein aur aaj bhi Ruhi gulaab tod rahi thi uss din ki tarah.

Iss baar Abhi ruk gaya garden ke saamne Ruhi ko dekhte hue aur good morning kaha. Ruhi weise hi apni Nightgown mein hi thi. Ek muthi mein kuch gulaab ke phool liye hue the aur dusre haath se aur phool tod rahi thi.

Ruhi ne kuch sharmilee adaa se good morning reply kiya Abhi ko magar bahot hi dhire se. Abhi khada ussko dekhta raha aur Ruhi kabhi ussko dekhti to kabhi mudhkar apne piche ghar ko dekhti ke koyi ussko dekh to nahin raha andar se.

Abhi ne pucha,

“Saturday ko tum kahan gayi thi? Aur mujhko jaane se pehle bataya kyun nahin tha?”

Ruhi muskuraayi, phir hanss padi aur aur apni dheemi, meethi awaaz mein kaha,

“Batana bhool gayi thi Friday ko, uss shaam ko aap chale gaye tab mujhe yaad aya ke aap se kehna bhool gayi thi ke Saturdays ko main ek course follow karne jaati hoon sewing ki.”

Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,

“sewing ki course? Kyun? Silaayi karogi aage chal kar kia?”

To Ruhi ne kaha,

”Aur kia kakrti? 12th ache se pass nahin hui, padhne ko aage mann nahin kiya, to mummy ne kaha silaayi seekh loon shaayad aage kaam ajaye!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“okay achcha bhi hai, magar kidhar gayi thi course follow karne ko? Kahin door kia?”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“West mein jo sheher hai wahan!”

Phir ruhi ne piche mudhkar dekhte hue kaha,

“Aap jao nah ab, aap kyun itne savere aajaate ho? Raat ko sote nahin ho kia? Abhi 6 baje hein kaam to 7 ko start hota hai nah?!”

Abhi ne jawaab diya,

“Neendh to tumne churra liye hein mere to kaise so paunga main? Aur ek baat batao kia tumko nahin passand ke main itne savere aajata hoon? Kumse kum sabke aane se pehle tumse kuch baatein karne ka mauka to mil jata hai, jaise abhi! Aur sach batao kia tum mujhko abhi expect nahin kar rahi thi? Kia tum abhi abhi mujhi ko nahin soch rahi thi?”

Ruhi hanss pari aur kaha,

“Aap mere khayaalon ke andar dekh sakte ho kia?

Abhi: “hmm isska matlab ke haan mere baare mein hi soch rahi thi tum hai nah? main to 24 ghante sirf tumko hi sochta rehta hoon, ghar se bus mein aate waqt tumhi rehti ho mere khayaalon mein to tumko bhi weisa hi sochna chahiye nah!”

Ruhi: “bilkool jhoot main aap ke bare mein bilkool bhi nahin soch rahi thi”

Aur ruhi hanss padi yeh keh kar, phir kaha,

“Aap jaao nah ab. Mera bada bhai yahin hai ussi ke liye flowers le rahi hoon wo photos leta hai apne camera se….”

Abhi ne tab kaha,

“Aur Saturday ko jab tum jaa rahi thi to ek nazar mujhko dekha bhi nahin nazrein bilkool niche jhuke hue the, mujhko ek nazar dekh to sakti thi nah?!”

Ruhi ne weise hi sharmilee andaaz mein gulaab ke phool ko dekhte hue jawaab diya,

“Main kaise nazar utha kar dekhti uss waqt sab ke nazar mujh par the mujhe maloom tha sab mujhi ko dekh rahe the, I felt very shy at that moment on that day! Magar main ne aap ko dekha tha jaate hue thoda sa. Mujhe pata tha ke aap bhi mujhko hi dekh rahe the.”

Abhi bahut khush hua usski answer se aur baat badalte hue kaha,

“Are haan Manoj bus ki bhi photos le raha tha, main ne dekha tha uss din! Wo professional photographer hai kia? Kaam kahan karta hai wo?”

Ruhi ne phir mudhkar ghar ke taraf dekhte hue reply kiya,

“Ussi sheher mein kaam karta hai jahan main silaayi ke liye jaati hoon, aur wo professional photographer to nahin magar usska shauk hai photos lena, ussko ek inaam mila tha ek baar kissi special photo ki ek photography contest mein!”

Abhi: “oh I See! Kia wo mujhe ek copy bus ki photos ka de sakta hai kia?”

Ruhi: “Ussi se maang lena, wo har roz bus ki photos leta hai, bus kaisa tha aur har roz kitna bus banta jaa raha hai, har roz kuch pics leta hai bus ki!”

Abhi: That’s great, wo mera madad kar raha hai ek tarah se, main zaroor uss se photos manguga last din ko.”

Ruhi: “To aap ko ussko pay karna padega photos ke liye!”

Abhi: “of course pay karunga. Kitna leta hai per photo?”

Ruhi: “pata nahin ussi se puch lena….. ab jao nah please, main nahin chahta hoon ke wo mujhse sawaal kare ke aap kia keh rahe the!”

Abhi: “Are to agar wo puche to keh dena ke main uss se bus ki photos kharidna chahta hoon nah!”

Ruhi ne phir hansste hue kaha,

“Bahot honshiyaar ho aap, turant aap ko ek bahana mil jata hai!”

Abhi: “Main to yahan sirf tumhare liye ata hoon; baaki to kaam to bahana hai sweetheart”

Ruhi: “main aap ki sweetheart nahin hoon kyun kehto aap mujhko sweetheart?!”

Abhi muskuraya aur jaane laga. To Ruhi ne kaha,

“Ruko please!”

Abhi: “kabhi jaane ko kehti ho kabhi rukne ko kia yaar!”

Ruhi ne tab hansste hue kaha,

“Mujhe kehna tha ke din mein kaam karte waqt aap baar baar mujhse baat karne mat ana khaas kar jab Mehboob chacha yahan hota hai!”

Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,

“Are wo kyun? Mehboob ne kuch kaha kia?!”

Ruhi: “Haan baad mein bataungi aap ab jao!”

Abhi ne jaate hue kaha,

“Saturday ko tum Qayamat dhaa rahi thi, beauty queen lag rahi thi, itni khubsurat ho socha nahin tha, tum par to kayi mitte honge mere ilawa hai nah? jab uss sheher mein jaati ho to kitnon par Bijli giraati hogi tum hmmm?!”

Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“mujhe kia pata? Aap jaise diwane aur honge kahin to main kia jaanun!”

Abhi: “shukar hai ke mere ilawa kissi aur ka pata nahin tumko varna mujhe takliff hoti!”

Ruhi tab thoda zor se hanss padi aur khud apne muhn par haath rakh kar piche ghar ke taraf dekha aur dhire se phussphussaate hue Abhi se kaha,

“Ab jao please baad mein milti hoon! Jab Manoj chala jaaye tab milna!”

Abhi khush hua aur chala gaya washroom ke taraf.

Washroom ke ke kone se Abhi watch karne laga Ruhi ko aur dekha ke wo terrace se hokar ghar ke saamne ke darwaze ke andar gayi tabhi Manoj ki awaaz sunaayi diya yeh kehte hue,

“are ek do katra paani daalo uss rose par nah tab click karunga”

Abhi samajh gaya ke andar Manoj unn gulaabon ki tasveerin le raha tha.

Bus 10 mins baad Manoj kitchen ke taraf se apne bag kaandhe par taange nikla aur Abhi se hello kaha aur jaane laga to Abhi ne ussko roka, aur Manoj ne muskurate hue kaha,

“Are bus miss ho jaegi shaam ko wapas aunga to baat karenge”

Magar Abhi ne kaha,

“to chalte hue baat karta hoon nah chalo tumko bus stop tak chorr ke ata hoon baat bhi kar lenge.”

Ruhi kitchen ke stairs par aa khadi hui Abhi ko usske bhai se baat karte hue sunkar. Abhi ne ussko dekha aur Ruhi Abhi se muskuraayi. Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi Manoj se bus ki photos ke baare mein baat karna chahta tha.

Aur jab Abhi aur Ruhi ne ek dusre se muskuraaye to Manoj ne donon ko ek dusre se muskuraate hue dekh kar hanssa.

Phir Abhi Manoj ke saath chalte hue bus stop tak gaya aur ussne Manoj se kaha ke jitney bhi photos wo bus ka lega unn sab pics ke ek copy ussko dein aur pucha ke per photo kitna lega. Manoj ne kaha 10 rupay ek photo ki. Abhi ne kaha okay aur tab manoj ne kaha ke,6 Mahinon mein 300 se ziada pics ho jayenge kia Abhi utna pay kar paega Manoj ne pucha, to Abhi ne kaha ke agar 500 pics bhi hue tab bhi pay karega. To Manoj ne kaha okay deal. Phir turant Abhi ne jeb se 500 rupay Manoj ko advance payment kar diya to Manoj ne kaha ke issi hafte mein pehla roll ko develop karega to jitney bus ki pictures hein wo Abhi ko dega.

Abhi kuch door ka soch raha tha is sliye ussko wo bus ki photos chahiye tha aur ussne Monoj se Saeed ko bataane se mana kiya ke Abhi uss se photos le raha hai. Yeh bhi kaha Abhi ne ke kabhi workers ko nahin lena photos mein, Saeed ko to bilkool bhi nahin lena, agar Abhi ko photos mein liya to koyi baat nahin…..

Yeh baad mein pata chalega ke Abhi ko kyun uss bus ke photos shuru se end tak chahiye tha. Abhi ne abhi se hi bade door ka soch rakha tha. Ek din future mein saare photos usske bade kaam aane wale the.

Abhi wapas aangan mein gaya aur Ruhi ko dhundne laga. 6.30 hua thato usske paas 30 mins tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. Washroom se kitchen mein dekha to koyi nahin tha, phir bus ke piche wale hisse se washing stone ke taraf dekha to wahan ke room ka khidki khuli hui dekha… ussko umeed thi ke Ruhi uss kamrre mein hogi…. Kuch himmat karke Abhi chalte hue wahan tak gaya…magar kamre ke andar dekhne ki himmat nahin hui ussko. Bahot ganda lagta kissi ke kamre mein dekhte hue ussne socha…

Ab kyunke Abhi kad ka ooncha tha to ussko sirf kamre mein dekhna tha to sab kuch dikh jata ussko, magar ussne dekha nahin iss niyat se gaya wo uss taraf ke agar Ruhi andar hogi to kum se kum Ruhi to ussko dekh paegi. Aur wohi hua, jaise Ruhi ne Abhi ko uss khidki se guzarte dekha to ussne gala saaf kiya Abhi ko jaise ek ishara kiya ke wo andar hai…. Bed par baithi, haath mein ek kitab liye Ruhi Abhi ko dekh rahi thi muskuraate hue.

Abhi ne ussko dekha, uss kamre a moaena kiya, aur pucha,

“is this your bedroom?!”

Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“It can’t be called a bedroom, too small, but yes I sleep here, this is my bed.”

Abhi: “you can’t understand how lucky I am feeling to be introduced to the bed and place you sleep. It’s an honour for me.!”

Ruhi: “Ah really? Why so?!”

Abhi: “yessss my dear…. What are you reading?”

To Ruhi ne kitab ki cover ko turn karte hue Abhi ko book ki title dikhaayi, book tha ek Mills and Boon wala romantic tale. Cover ke pic par ek aurat thi semi nude ek bina shirt ke hero se lipti hui.

Abhi ne pucha,

“you love to read romantic stories only or any variety in your choice?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“nah mujhe sirf romantic hi padhna passand hai, detectives, horror ya police bilkool nahin passand sirf ziada tar mills and boon ya dusre author ke but romantic hi padhti hoon.”

Phir Ruhi ne ek collection dikhaya Abhi ko usski table par. Karib 25 ya 30 books the sab ke sab Mills and Boons collection wale. Abhi ne dekh kar muskuraya aur pucha,

“Abhi hum donon baatein kar rahe hein to ghar ke andar sab sun nahin rahe hein ke tum mujhse baat kar rahi ho?!”

Ruhi ne kaandhe ko uchakte hue kaha,

“To kia hua sunne do!”

Abhi: “tumhari mummy so rahi hai ya jaag gayi hai? Aur tumhare papa ko nahin dekha aaj tak main ne kahan hota hai wo, der raat ko kaam se wapas ata hai kia?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Mera papa Saudi Arabia mein driving ki Naukri karte hein, wo wapas ane hi wala hai kuch mahine baad!”

Abhi: “oh I see! To tum, tumhari mummy, Manoj aur Mahesh rehte ho yahan!”

Ruhi ne add kiya,

“Dadaji bhi!”

Abhi: “are haan dada ji ko bhool gaya main! Aur buss itne hi members hein tumhare family mein?”

Ruhi: “no, meri ek badi behen hein jisski shaadi ho chuki hai wo yahan se 100 kms ki doorie par rehti hai. Kabhi kabhaar aati hai.”

Abhi: “wow great then to have an elder sis!”

Ruhi: “hmmm yes!”

Abhi: “acha yeh batao ke kyun tumne mujhse kaha ke jab Mehboob present ho to tumse baat nah karun? Kia kaha ussne?!”

Ruhi ne kamre mein piche dekha tab awaaz dhimi karke kaha,

“Mere papa aur Mehboob bhai jaise hein. Mere papa ne ussko hum logon ka khayal rakhne ke liye kaha hai, halaan ke bus ke piche wala ghar mere chote chacha ki hai, matlab mere papa ka chota bhai hai, phir bhi Mehboob mere chacha se badhkar hai. Uss ne meri mummy se pucha ke main aap se kyun baar baar baat karti hoon! To mummy ne wo baat mujhse kaha, to main samajh gayi ke unnko nahin achha lagta jab hum donon baat karte hein issi liye aap se kaha ke usski haaziri mein mat baat karna mujhse se”

Abhi: “okay main samajh gaya, usske saamne tumse baat nahin karunga.”

Ruhi: “are eise nahin, jaise hum abhi kar rahe hein aise mat karna but wahan jab sab koyi ek saath hein agar mummy, Mehboob chacha, Rahima chachi, Mahesh sab saath hein tab you can talk, but not like this alone me and you, samjhe aap?!”

Abhi: “thik hai samajh gaya main, magar ek dusre ko dekh to sakte hein nah, tum nazar aati rehna please. Main tumko har baar dekhna passand karta hoon. Agar ek ghanta ho gaya aur tum nazar nahin aayi to mujhe bechaini hone lagti hai to please saamne aaya karna hat baar okay?!”

Ruhi: “mujhe pata hai. Issi liye to aati rehti hoon nah!”

Abhi bahot khush hua aur kaha,

“thanks very much darling, ab chalta hoon weh log aane wale hein ab kaam start karna hoga. Aur dekha nah tumne pucha ke main kyun itne savera ajaata hoon, to ab samjhi, hum donon ko baatein karne ke liye kitna time mil gaya hai nah?!”

Ruhi ne haan mein muskuraate hue gardan hillayi.

Abhi jaane laga, phir wapas aya aur pucha,

“How old are you Ruhi? I am 22 will be 23 this year and you?”

Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,

“ladkiyon ki umar nahin puche jaate, bad manners hihihi”

Abhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“ofo pata hai yaar, par main ne apni age bataya nah tumko so please tell me, kahin tum mujhse badi nikli to?!”

Ruhi zor se hanss padi aur kaha,

“haan main aap se badi hi hoon hihihihihi!!”

Abhi ne bhi hansste hue kaha,

“koyi baat nahin agar badi ho bhi to, umar se kia lena dena!”

Ruhi: “Aap ko koyi farak nahin padega agar main aap se umar mein badi hui to?

Abhi: “bilkool bhi nahin iss mein kaun si badi baat hai? Chalta hai yaar!”

Ruhi: “Acha aur aap ko lagta hai ke main aap se umar mein badi hoon kia?!”

Abhi: “bilkool hi nahin, tum 17, 18 ki lagti ho!! are yaar bata to do, 18 ho chuki ya ab bhi minor ho hehehehe!”

Ruhi: “ho chuki….. hmmmm I am over 19! Will be 20 this year!”

Abhi: “great that’s perfect then, ok see you later”

Aur Abhi chala gaya change karne, tab tak baaki ke sab agaye.

To be continued….. (2750 words)

Another beautiful update Casinar ji.
Very well written and narrated.
Happy to read both talking so well in the early morning when she was again picking flowers. She was like afraid to talk. But still she answered all his questions which must hv been great pleasure for Abhi.
Abhi was longing for such moments with her and got them.
Even he was introduced to her bedroom. Being tall he could see all into her room from outside.
And another good and sweet conversation took place among them. Ruhi was sweet to him and this is what Abhi needed her care and love. She said that is why she shows herself every now and then as she knows that he longs to see her. So nice of Ruhi has she also started loving him or is she doing all that only to please Abhi?
We will know gradually am sure.
Very sweet romantic update dear. Keep it up.
 

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Update 11 Abhi Very Happy

Sunday ko din bhar Abhi ne apne diary mein sab kuch likha usske aur Ruhi ke baare mein. Apne feelings ko likha, ussko kia feel ho raha hai, kitna pyar karta hai Ruhi se, usske baghair jee nahin paega yeh sab likha Abhi ne.

Usske ghar mein wo apni choti behen jo 18 saal ki thi uss se bahut close tha. Abhi ussko sab kuch batata tha aur apne diary padhne ko deta tha, matlab usski uss behen ko sab kuch pata tha jo beet raha tha Abhi par. Usski behen ka naam tha Naina. Aur ek uss se bhi choti behen thi Abhi ka. Baaki aur 3 bhai the usske. Naina baaki sabko Abhi ke baare mein bata deti thi siwae usske pita ke. Matlab ghar mein usske pita ke ilawa sabko pata tha ke Abhi pyar mein hai Ruhi se.

Abhi ka din Ruhi ki yaad mein guzra hamesha ki tarah aur agle din savere savere pahunch gaya Ruhi ki aangan mein aur aaj bhi Ruhi gulaab tod rahi thi uss din ki tarah.

Iss baar Abhi ruk gaya garden ke saamne Ruhi ko dekhte hue aur good morning kaha. Ruhi weise hi apni Nightgown mein hi thi. Ek muthi mein kuch gulaab ke phool liye hue the aur dusre haath se aur phool tod rahi thi.

Ruhi ne kuch sharmilee adaa se good morning reply kiya Abhi ko magar bahot hi dhire se. Abhi khada ussko dekhta raha aur Ruhi kabhi ussko dekhti to kabhi mudhkar apne piche ghar ko dekhti ke koyi ussko dekh to nahin raha andar se.

Abhi ne pucha,

“Saturday ko tum kahan gayi thi? Aur mujhko jaane se pehle bataya kyun nahin tha?”

Ruhi muskuraayi, phir hanss padi aur aur apni dheemi, meethi awaaz mein kaha,

“Batana bhool gayi thi Friday ko, uss shaam ko aap chale gaye tab mujhe yaad aya ke aap se kehna bhool gayi thi ke Saturdays ko main ek course follow karne jaati hoon sewing ki.”

Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,

“sewing ki course? Kyun? Silaayi karogi aage chal kar kia?”

To Ruhi ne kaha,

”Aur kia kakrti? 12th ache se pass nahin hui, padhne ko aage mann nahin kiya, to mummy ne kaha silaayi seekh loon shaayad aage kaam ajaye!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“okay achcha bhi hai, magar kidhar gayi thi course follow karne ko? Kahin door kia?”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“West mein jo sheher hai wahan!”

Phir ruhi ne piche mudhkar dekhte hue kaha,

“Aap jao nah ab, aap kyun itne savere aajaate ho? Raat ko sote nahin ho kia? Abhi 6 baje hein kaam to 7 ko start hota hai nah?!”

Abhi ne jawaab diya,

“Neendh to tumne churra liye hein mere to kaise so paunga main? Aur ek baat batao kia tumko nahin passand ke main itne savere aajata hoon? Kumse kum sabke aane se pehle tumse kuch baatein karne ka mauka to mil jata hai, jaise abhi! Aur sach batao kia tum mujhko abhi expect nahin kar rahi thi? Kia tum abhi abhi mujhi ko nahin soch rahi thi?”

Ruhi hanss pari aur kaha,

“Aap mere khayaalon ke andar dekh sakte ho kia?

Abhi: “hmm isska matlab ke haan mere baare mein hi soch rahi thi tum hai nah? main to 24 ghante sirf tumko hi sochta rehta hoon, ghar se bus mein aate waqt tumhi rehti ho mere khayaalon mein to tumko bhi weisa hi sochna chahiye nah!”

Ruhi: “bilkool jhoot main aap ke bare mein bilkool bhi nahin soch rahi thi”

Aur ruhi hanss padi yeh keh kar, phir kaha,

“Aap jaao nah ab. Mera bada bhai yahin hai ussi ke liye flowers le rahi hoon wo photos leta hai apne camera se….”

Abhi ne tab kaha,

“Aur Saturday ko jab tum jaa rahi thi to ek nazar mujhko dekha bhi nahin nazrein bilkool niche jhuke hue the, mujhko ek nazar dekh to sakti thi nah?!”

Ruhi ne weise hi sharmilee andaaz mein gulaab ke phool ko dekhte hue jawaab diya,

“Main kaise nazar utha kar dekhti uss waqt sab ke nazar mujh par the mujhe maloom tha sab mujhi ko dekh rahe the, I felt very shy at that moment on that day! Magar main ne aap ko dekha tha jaate hue thoda sa. Mujhe pata tha ke aap bhi mujhko hi dekh rahe the.”

Abhi bahut khush hua usski answer se aur baat badalte hue kaha,

“Are haan Manoj bus ki bhi photos le raha tha, main ne dekha tha uss din! Wo professional photographer hai kia? Kaam kahan karta hai wo?”

Ruhi ne phir mudhkar ghar ke taraf dekhte hue reply kiya,

“Ussi sheher mein kaam karta hai jahan main silaayi ke liye jaati hoon, aur wo professional photographer to nahin magar usska shauk hai photos lena, ussko ek inaam mila tha ek baar kissi special photo ki ek photography contest mein!”

Abhi: “oh I See! Kia wo mujhe ek copy bus ki photos ka de sakta hai kia?”

Ruhi: “Ussi se maang lena, wo har roz bus ki photos leta hai, bus kaisa tha aur har roz kitna bus banta jaa raha hai, har roz kuch pics leta hai bus ki!”

Abhi: That’s great, wo mera madad kar raha hai ek tarah se, main zaroor uss se photos manguga last din ko.”

Ruhi: “To aap ko ussko pay karna padega photos ke liye!”

Abhi: “of course pay karunga. Kitna leta hai per photo?”

Ruhi: “pata nahin ussi se puch lena….. ab jao nah please, main nahin chahta hoon ke wo mujhse sawaal kare ke aap kia keh rahe the!”

Abhi: “Are to agar wo puche to keh dena ke main uss se bus ki photos kharidna chahta hoon nah!”

Ruhi ne phir hansste hue kaha,

“Bahot honshiyaar ho aap, turant aap ko ek bahana mil jata hai!”

Abhi: “Main to yahan sirf tumhare liye ata hoon; baaki to kaam to bahana hai sweetheart”

Ruhi: “main aap ki sweetheart nahin hoon kyun kehto aap mujhko sweetheart?!”

Abhi muskuraya aur jaane laga. To Ruhi ne kaha,

“Ruko please!”

Abhi: “kabhi jaane ko kehti ho kabhi rukne ko kia yaar!”

Ruhi ne tab hansste hue kaha,

“Mujhe kehna tha ke din mein kaam karte waqt aap baar baar mujhse baat karne mat ana khaas kar jab Mehboob chacha yahan hota hai!”

Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,

“Are wo kyun? Mehboob ne kuch kaha kia?!”

Ruhi: “Haan baad mein bataungi aap ab jao!”

Abhi ne jaate hue kaha,

“Saturday ko tum Qayamat dhaa rahi thi, beauty queen lag rahi thi, itni khubsurat ho socha nahin tha, tum par to kayi mitte honge mere ilawa hai nah? jab uss sheher mein jaati ho to kitnon par Bijli giraati hogi tum hmmm?!”

Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“mujhe kia pata? Aap jaise diwane aur honge kahin to main kia jaanun!”

Abhi: “shukar hai ke mere ilawa kissi aur ka pata nahin tumko varna mujhe takliff hoti!”

Ruhi tab thoda zor se hanss padi aur khud apne muhn par haath rakh kar piche ghar ke taraf dekha aur dhire se phussphussaate hue Abhi se kaha,

“Ab jao please baad mein milti hoon! Jab Manoj chala jaaye tab milna!”

Abhi khush hua aur chala gaya washroom ke taraf.

Washroom ke ke kone se Abhi watch karne laga Ruhi ko aur dekha ke wo terrace se hokar ghar ke saamne ke darwaze ke andar gayi tabhi Manoj ki awaaz sunaayi diya yeh kehte hue,

“are ek do katra paani daalo uss rose par nah tab click karunga”

Abhi samajh gaya ke andar Manoj unn gulaabon ki tasveerin le raha tha.

Bus 10 mins baad Manoj kitchen ke taraf se apne bag kaandhe par taange nikla aur Abhi se hello kaha aur jaane laga to Abhi ne ussko roka, aur Manoj ne muskurate hue kaha,

“Are bus miss ho jaegi shaam ko wapas aunga to baat karenge”

Magar Abhi ne kaha,

“to chalte hue baat karta hoon nah chalo tumko bus stop tak chorr ke ata hoon baat bhi kar lenge.”

Ruhi kitchen ke stairs par aa khadi hui Abhi ko usske bhai se baat karte hue sunkar. Abhi ne ussko dekha aur Ruhi Abhi se muskuraayi. Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi Manoj se bus ki photos ke baare mein baat karna chahta tha.

Aur jab Abhi aur Ruhi ne ek dusre se muskuraaye to Manoj ne donon ko ek dusre se muskuraate hue dekh kar hanssa.

Phir Abhi Manoj ke saath chalte hue bus stop tak gaya aur ussne Manoj se kaha ke jitney bhi photos wo bus ka lega unn sab pics ke ek copy ussko dein aur pucha ke per photo kitna lega. Manoj ne kaha 10 rupay ek photo ki. Abhi ne kaha okay aur tab manoj ne kaha ke,6 Mahinon mein 300 se ziada pics ho jayenge kia Abhi utna pay kar paega Manoj ne pucha, to Abhi ne kaha ke agar 500 pics bhi hue tab bhi pay karega. To Manoj ne kaha okay deal. Phir turant Abhi ne jeb se 500 rupay Manoj ko advance payment kar diya to Manoj ne kaha ke issi hafte mein pehla roll ko develop karega to jitney bus ki pictures hein wo Abhi ko dega.

Abhi kuch door ka soch raha tha is sliye ussko wo bus ki photos chahiye tha aur ussne Monoj se Saeed ko bataane se mana kiya ke Abhi uss se photos le raha hai. Yeh bhi kaha Abhi ne ke kabhi workers ko nahin lena photos mein, Saeed ko to bilkool bhi nahin lena, agar Abhi ko photos mein liya to koyi baat nahin…..

Yeh baad mein pata chalega ke Abhi ko kyun uss bus ke photos shuru se end tak chahiye tha. Abhi ne abhi se hi bade door ka soch rakha tha. Ek din future mein saare photos usske bade kaam aane wale the.

Abhi wapas aangan mein gaya aur Ruhi ko dhundne laga. 6.30 hua thato usske paas 30 mins tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. Washroom se kitchen mein dekha to koyi nahin tha, phir bus ke piche wale hisse se washing stone ke taraf dekha to wahan ke room ka khidki khuli hui dekha… ussko umeed thi ke Ruhi uss kamrre mein hogi…. Kuch himmat karke Abhi chalte hue wahan tak gaya…magar kamre ke andar dekhne ki himmat nahin hui ussko. Bahot ganda lagta kissi ke kamre mein dekhte hue ussne socha…

Ab kyunke Abhi kad ka ooncha tha to ussko sirf kamre mein dekhna tha to sab kuch dikh jata ussko, magar ussne dekha nahin iss niyat se gaya wo uss taraf ke agar Ruhi andar hogi to kum se kum Ruhi to ussko dekh paegi. Aur wohi hua, jaise Ruhi ne Abhi ko uss khidki se guzarte dekha to ussne gala saaf kiya Abhi ko jaise ek ishara kiya ke wo andar hai…. Bed par baithi, haath mein ek kitab liye Ruhi Abhi ko dekh rahi thi muskuraate hue.

Abhi ne ussko dekha, uss kamre a moaena kiya, aur pucha,

“is this your bedroom?!”

Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“It can’t be called a bedroom, too small, but yes I sleep here, this is my bed.”

Abhi: “you can’t understand how lucky I am feeling to be introduced to the bed and place you sleep. It’s an honour for me.!”

Ruhi: “Ah really? Why so?!”

Abhi: “yessss my dear…. What are you reading?”

To Ruhi ne kitab ki cover ko turn karte hue Abhi ko book ki title dikhaayi, book tha ek Mills and Boon wala romantic tale. Cover ke pic par ek aurat thi semi nude ek bina shirt ke hero se lipti hui.

Abhi ne pucha,

“you love to read romantic stories only or any variety in your choice?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“nah mujhe sirf romantic hi padhna passand hai, detectives, horror ya police bilkool nahin passand sirf ziada tar mills and boon ya dusre author ke but romantic hi padhti hoon.”

Phir Ruhi ne ek collection dikhaya Abhi ko usski table par. Karib 25 ya 30 books the sab ke sab Mills and Boons collection wale. Abhi ne dekh kar muskuraya aur pucha,

“Abhi hum donon baatein kar rahe hein to ghar ke andar sab sun nahin rahe hein ke tum mujhse baat kar rahi ho?!”

Ruhi ne kaandhe ko uchakte hue kaha,

“To kia hua sunne do!”

Abhi: “tumhari mummy so rahi hai ya jaag gayi hai? Aur tumhare papa ko nahin dekha aaj tak main ne kahan hota hai wo, der raat ko kaam se wapas ata hai kia?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Mera papa Saudi Arabia mein driving ki Naukri karte hein, wo wapas ane hi wala hai kuch mahine baad!”

Abhi: “oh I see! To tum, tumhari mummy, Manoj aur Mahesh rehte ho yahan!”

Ruhi ne add kiya,

“Dadaji bhi!”

Abhi: “are haan dada ji ko bhool gaya main! Aur buss itne hi members hein tumhare family mein?”

Ruhi: “no, meri ek badi behen hein jisski shaadi ho chuki hai wo yahan se 100 kms ki doorie par rehti hai. Kabhi kabhaar aati hai.”

Abhi: “wow great then to have an elder sis!”

Ruhi: “hmmm yes!”

Abhi: “acha yeh batao ke kyun tumne mujhse kaha ke jab Mehboob present ho to tumse baat nah karun? Kia kaha ussne?!”

Ruhi ne kamre mein piche dekha tab awaaz dhimi karke kaha,

“Mere papa aur Mehboob bhai jaise hein. Mere papa ne ussko hum logon ka khayal rakhne ke liye kaha hai, halaan ke bus ke piche wala ghar mere chote chacha ki hai, matlab mere papa ka chota bhai hai, phir bhi Mehboob mere chacha se badhkar hai. Uss ne meri mummy se pucha ke main aap se kyun baar baar baat karti hoon! To mummy ne wo baat mujhse kaha, to main samajh gayi ke unnko nahin achha lagta jab hum donon baat karte hein issi liye aap se kaha ke usski haaziri mein mat baat karna mujhse se”

Abhi: “okay main samajh gaya, usske saamne tumse baat nahin karunga.”

Ruhi: “are eise nahin, jaise hum abhi kar rahe hein aise mat karna but wahan jab sab koyi ek saath hein agar mummy, Mehboob chacha, Rahima chachi, Mahesh sab saath hein tab you can talk, but not like this alone me and you, samjhe aap?!”

Abhi: “thik hai samajh gaya main, magar ek dusre ko dekh to sakte hein nah, tum nazar aati rehna please. Main tumko har baar dekhna passand karta hoon. Agar ek ghanta ho gaya aur tum nazar nahin aayi to mujhe bechaini hone lagti hai to please saamne aaya karna hat baar okay?!”

Ruhi: “mujhe pata hai. Issi liye to aati rehti hoon nah!”

Abhi bahot khush hua aur kaha,

“thanks very much darling, ab chalta hoon weh log aane wale hein ab kaam start karna hoga. Aur dekha nah tumne pucha ke main kyun itne savera ajaata hoon, to ab samjhi, hum donon ko baatein karne ke liye kitna time mil gaya hai nah?!”

Ruhi ne haan mein muskuraate hue gardan hillayi.

Abhi jaane laga, phir wapas aya aur pucha,

“How old are you Ruhi? I am 22 will be 23 this year and you?”

Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,

“ladkiyon ki umar nahin puche jaate, bad manners hihihi”

Abhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“ofo pata hai yaar, par main ne apni age bataya nah tumko so please tell me, kahin tum mujhse badi nikli to?!”

Ruhi zor se hanss padi aur kaha,

“haan main aap se badi hi hoon hihihihihi!!”

Abhi ne bhi hansste hue kaha,

“koyi baat nahin agar badi ho bhi to, umar se kia lena dena!”

Ruhi: “Aap ko koyi farak nahin padega agar main aap se umar mein badi hui to?

Abhi: “bilkool bhi nahin iss mein kaun si badi baat hai? Chalta hai yaar!”

Ruhi: “Acha aur aap ko lagta hai ke main aap se umar mein badi hoon kia?!”

Abhi: “bilkool hi nahin, tum 17, 18 ki lagti ho!! are yaar bata to do, 18 ho chuki ya ab bhi minor ho hehehehe!”

Ruhi: “ho chuki….. hmmmm I am over 19! Will be 20 this year!”

Abhi: “great that’s perfect then, ok see you later”

Aur Abhi chala gaya change karne, tab tak baaki ke sab agaye.

To be continued….. (2750 words)

Abhi k iss khushi ko kissi ki najar nah lage.
Bahut pyara update bhai.
Written with love for love.
Ruhi ke mann mein Abhi ke liye pyar ubhar raha hai lagta hai.
Umeed hai k donon aise hi rahe hanesha.
 

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Update 11 Abhi Very Happy

Sunday ko din bhar Abhi ne apne diary mein sab kuch likha usske aur Ruhi ke baare mein. Apne feelings ko likha, ussko kia feel ho raha hai, kitna pyar karta hai Ruhi se, usske baghair jee nahin paega yeh sab likha Abhi ne.

Usske ghar mein wo apni choti behen jo 18 saal ki thi uss se bahut close tha. Abhi ussko sab kuch batata tha aur apne diary padhne ko deta tha, matlab usski uss behen ko sab kuch pata tha jo beet raha tha Abhi par. Usski behen ka naam tha Naina. Aur ek uss se bhi choti behen thi Abhi ka. Baaki aur 3 bhai the usske. Naina baaki sabko Abhi ke baare mein bata deti thi siwae usske pita ke. Matlab ghar mein usske pita ke ilawa sabko pata tha ke Abhi pyar mein hai Ruhi se.

Abhi ka din Ruhi ki yaad mein guzra hamesha ki tarah aur agle din savere savere pahunch gaya Ruhi ki aangan mein aur aaj bhi Ruhi gulaab tod rahi thi uss din ki tarah.

Iss baar Abhi ruk gaya garden ke saamne Ruhi ko dekhte hue aur good morning kaha. Ruhi weise hi apni Nightgown mein hi thi. Ek muthi mein kuch gulaab ke phool liye hue the aur dusre haath se aur phool tod rahi thi.

Ruhi ne kuch sharmilee adaa se good morning reply kiya Abhi ko magar bahot hi dhire se. Abhi khada ussko dekhta raha aur Ruhi kabhi ussko dekhti to kabhi mudhkar apne piche ghar ko dekhti ke koyi ussko dekh to nahin raha andar se.

Abhi ne pucha,

“Saturday ko tum kahan gayi thi? Aur mujhko jaane se pehle bataya kyun nahin tha?”

Ruhi muskuraayi, phir hanss padi aur aur apni dheemi, meethi awaaz mein kaha,

“Batana bhool gayi thi Friday ko, uss shaam ko aap chale gaye tab mujhe yaad aya ke aap se kehna bhool gayi thi ke Saturdays ko main ek course follow karne jaati hoon sewing ki.”

Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,

“sewing ki course? Kyun? Silaayi karogi aage chal kar kia?”

To Ruhi ne kaha,

”Aur kia kakrti? 12th ache se pass nahin hui, padhne ko aage mann nahin kiya, to mummy ne kaha silaayi seekh loon shaayad aage kaam ajaye!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“okay achcha bhi hai, magar kidhar gayi thi course follow karne ko? Kahin door kia?”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“West mein jo sheher hai wahan!”

Phir ruhi ne piche mudhkar dekhte hue kaha,

“Aap jao nah ab, aap kyun itne savere aajaate ho? Raat ko sote nahin ho kia? Abhi 6 baje hein kaam to 7 ko start hota hai nah?!”

Abhi ne jawaab diya,

“Neendh to tumne churra liye hein mere to kaise so paunga main? Aur ek baat batao kia tumko nahin passand ke main itne savere aajata hoon? Kumse kum sabke aane se pehle tumse kuch baatein karne ka mauka to mil jata hai, jaise abhi! Aur sach batao kia tum mujhko abhi expect nahin kar rahi thi? Kia tum abhi abhi mujhi ko nahin soch rahi thi?”

Ruhi hanss pari aur kaha,

“Aap mere khayaalon ke andar dekh sakte ho kia?

Abhi: “hmm isska matlab ke haan mere baare mein hi soch rahi thi tum hai nah? main to 24 ghante sirf tumko hi sochta rehta hoon, ghar se bus mein aate waqt tumhi rehti ho mere khayaalon mein to tumko bhi weisa hi sochna chahiye nah!”

Ruhi: “bilkool jhoot main aap ke bare mein bilkool bhi nahin soch rahi thi”

Aur ruhi hanss padi yeh keh kar, phir kaha,

“Aap jaao nah ab. Mera bada bhai yahin hai ussi ke liye flowers le rahi hoon wo photos leta hai apne camera se….”

Abhi ne tab kaha,

“Aur Saturday ko jab tum jaa rahi thi to ek nazar mujhko dekha bhi nahin nazrein bilkool niche jhuke hue the, mujhko ek nazar dekh to sakti thi nah?!”

Ruhi ne weise hi sharmilee andaaz mein gulaab ke phool ko dekhte hue jawaab diya,

“Main kaise nazar utha kar dekhti uss waqt sab ke nazar mujh par the mujhe maloom tha sab mujhi ko dekh rahe the, I felt very shy at that moment on that day! Magar main ne aap ko dekha tha jaate hue thoda sa. Mujhe pata tha ke aap bhi mujhko hi dekh rahe the.”

Abhi bahut khush hua usski answer se aur baat badalte hue kaha,

“Are haan Manoj bus ki bhi photos le raha tha, main ne dekha tha uss din! Wo professional photographer hai kia? Kaam kahan karta hai wo?”

Ruhi ne phir mudhkar ghar ke taraf dekhte hue reply kiya,

“Ussi sheher mein kaam karta hai jahan main silaayi ke liye jaati hoon, aur wo professional photographer to nahin magar usska shauk hai photos lena, ussko ek inaam mila tha ek baar kissi special photo ki ek photography contest mein!”

Abhi: “oh I See! Kia wo mujhe ek copy bus ki photos ka de sakta hai kia?”

Ruhi: “Ussi se maang lena, wo har roz bus ki photos leta hai, bus kaisa tha aur har roz kitna bus banta jaa raha hai, har roz kuch pics leta hai bus ki!”

Abhi: That’s great, wo mera madad kar raha hai ek tarah se, main zaroor uss se photos manguga last din ko.”

Ruhi: “To aap ko ussko pay karna padega photos ke liye!”

Abhi: “of course pay karunga. Kitna leta hai per photo?”

Ruhi: “pata nahin ussi se puch lena….. ab jao nah please, main nahin chahta hoon ke wo mujhse sawaal kare ke aap kia keh rahe the!”

Abhi: “Are to agar wo puche to keh dena ke main uss se bus ki photos kharidna chahta hoon nah!”

Ruhi ne phir hansste hue kaha,

“Bahot honshiyaar ho aap, turant aap ko ek bahana mil jata hai!”

Abhi: “Main to yahan sirf tumhare liye ata hoon; baaki to kaam to bahana hai sweetheart”

Ruhi: “main aap ki sweetheart nahin hoon kyun kehto aap mujhko sweetheart?!”

Abhi muskuraya aur jaane laga. To Ruhi ne kaha,

“Ruko please!”

Abhi: “kabhi jaane ko kehti ho kabhi rukne ko kia yaar!”

Ruhi ne tab hansste hue kaha,

“Mujhe kehna tha ke din mein kaam karte waqt aap baar baar mujhse baat karne mat ana khaas kar jab Mehboob chacha yahan hota hai!”

Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,

“Are wo kyun? Mehboob ne kuch kaha kia?!”

Ruhi: “Haan baad mein bataungi aap ab jao!”

Abhi ne jaate hue kaha,

“Saturday ko tum Qayamat dhaa rahi thi, beauty queen lag rahi thi, itni khubsurat ho socha nahin tha, tum par to kayi mitte honge mere ilawa hai nah? jab uss sheher mein jaati ho to kitnon par Bijli giraati hogi tum hmmm?!”

Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“mujhe kia pata? Aap jaise diwane aur honge kahin to main kia jaanun!”

Abhi: “shukar hai ke mere ilawa kissi aur ka pata nahin tumko varna mujhe takliff hoti!”

Ruhi tab thoda zor se hanss padi aur khud apne muhn par haath rakh kar piche ghar ke taraf dekha aur dhire se phussphussaate hue Abhi se kaha,

“Ab jao please baad mein milti hoon! Jab Manoj chala jaaye tab milna!”

Abhi khush hua aur chala gaya washroom ke taraf.

Washroom ke ke kone se Abhi watch karne laga Ruhi ko aur dekha ke wo terrace se hokar ghar ke saamne ke darwaze ke andar gayi tabhi Manoj ki awaaz sunaayi diya yeh kehte hue,

“are ek do katra paani daalo uss rose par nah tab click karunga”

Abhi samajh gaya ke andar Manoj unn gulaabon ki tasveerin le raha tha.

Bus 10 mins baad Manoj kitchen ke taraf se apne bag kaandhe par taange nikla aur Abhi se hello kaha aur jaane laga to Abhi ne ussko roka, aur Manoj ne muskurate hue kaha,

“Are bus miss ho jaegi shaam ko wapas aunga to baat karenge”

Magar Abhi ne kaha,

“to chalte hue baat karta hoon nah chalo tumko bus stop tak chorr ke ata hoon baat bhi kar lenge.”

Ruhi kitchen ke stairs par aa khadi hui Abhi ko usske bhai se baat karte hue sunkar. Abhi ne ussko dekha aur Ruhi Abhi se muskuraayi. Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi Manoj se bus ki photos ke baare mein baat karna chahta tha.

Aur jab Abhi aur Ruhi ne ek dusre se muskuraaye to Manoj ne donon ko ek dusre se muskuraate hue dekh kar hanssa.

Phir Abhi Manoj ke saath chalte hue bus stop tak gaya aur ussne Manoj se kaha ke jitney bhi photos wo bus ka lega unn sab pics ke ek copy ussko dein aur pucha ke per photo kitna lega. Manoj ne kaha 10 rupay ek photo ki. Abhi ne kaha okay aur tab manoj ne kaha ke,6 Mahinon mein 300 se ziada pics ho jayenge kia Abhi utna pay kar paega Manoj ne pucha, to Abhi ne kaha ke agar 500 pics bhi hue tab bhi pay karega. To Manoj ne kaha okay deal. Phir turant Abhi ne jeb se 500 rupay Manoj ko advance payment kar diya to Manoj ne kaha ke issi hafte mein pehla roll ko develop karega to jitney bus ki pictures hein wo Abhi ko dega.

Abhi kuch door ka soch raha tha is sliye ussko wo bus ki photos chahiye tha aur ussne Monoj se Saeed ko bataane se mana kiya ke Abhi uss se photos le raha hai. Yeh bhi kaha Abhi ne ke kabhi workers ko nahin lena photos mein, Saeed ko to bilkool bhi nahin lena, agar Abhi ko photos mein liya to koyi baat nahin…..

Yeh baad mein pata chalega ke Abhi ko kyun uss bus ke photos shuru se end tak chahiye tha. Abhi ne abhi se hi bade door ka soch rakha tha. Ek din future mein saare photos usske bade kaam aane wale the.

Abhi wapas aangan mein gaya aur Ruhi ko dhundne laga. 6.30 hua thato usske paas 30 mins tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. Washroom se kitchen mein dekha to koyi nahin tha, phir bus ke piche wale hisse se washing stone ke taraf dekha to wahan ke room ka khidki khuli hui dekha… ussko umeed thi ke Ruhi uss kamrre mein hogi…. Kuch himmat karke Abhi chalte hue wahan tak gaya…magar kamre ke andar dekhne ki himmat nahin hui ussko. Bahot ganda lagta kissi ke kamre mein dekhte hue ussne socha…

Ab kyunke Abhi kad ka ooncha tha to ussko sirf kamre mein dekhna tha to sab kuch dikh jata ussko, magar ussne dekha nahin iss niyat se gaya wo uss taraf ke agar Ruhi andar hogi to kum se kum Ruhi to ussko dekh paegi. Aur wohi hua, jaise Ruhi ne Abhi ko uss khidki se guzarte dekha to ussne gala saaf kiya Abhi ko jaise ek ishara kiya ke wo andar hai…. Bed par baithi, haath mein ek kitab liye Ruhi Abhi ko dekh rahi thi muskuraate hue.

Abhi ne ussko dekha, uss kamre a moaena kiya, aur pucha,

“is this your bedroom?!”

Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“It can’t be called a bedroom, too small, but yes I sleep here, this is my bed.”

Abhi: “you can’t understand how lucky I am feeling to be introduced to the bed and place you sleep. It’s an honour for me.!”

Ruhi: “Ah really? Why so?!”

Abhi: “yessss my dear…. What are you reading?”

To Ruhi ne kitab ki cover ko turn karte hue Abhi ko book ki title dikhaayi, book tha ek Mills and Boon wala romantic tale. Cover ke pic par ek aurat thi semi nude ek bina shirt ke hero se lipti hui.

Abhi ne pucha,

“you love to read romantic stories only or any variety in your choice?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“nah mujhe sirf romantic hi padhna passand hai, detectives, horror ya police bilkool nahin passand sirf ziada tar mills and boon ya dusre author ke but romantic hi padhti hoon.”

Phir Ruhi ne ek collection dikhaya Abhi ko usski table par. Karib 25 ya 30 books the sab ke sab Mills and Boons collection wale. Abhi ne dekh kar muskuraya aur pucha,

“Abhi hum donon baatein kar rahe hein to ghar ke andar sab sun nahin rahe hein ke tum mujhse baat kar rahi ho?!”

Ruhi ne kaandhe ko uchakte hue kaha,

“To kia hua sunne do!”

Abhi: “tumhari mummy so rahi hai ya jaag gayi hai? Aur tumhare papa ko nahin dekha aaj tak main ne kahan hota hai wo, der raat ko kaam se wapas ata hai kia?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Mera papa Saudi Arabia mein driving ki Naukri karte hein, wo wapas ane hi wala hai kuch mahine baad!”

Abhi: “oh I see! To tum, tumhari mummy, Manoj aur Mahesh rehte ho yahan!”

Ruhi ne add kiya,

“Dadaji bhi!”

Abhi: “are haan dada ji ko bhool gaya main! Aur buss itne hi members hein tumhare family mein?”

Ruhi: “no, meri ek badi behen hein jisski shaadi ho chuki hai wo yahan se 100 kms ki doorie par rehti hai. Kabhi kabhaar aati hai.”

Abhi: “wow great then to have an elder sis!”

Ruhi: “hmmm yes!”

Abhi: “acha yeh batao ke kyun tumne mujhse kaha ke jab Mehboob present ho to tumse baat nah karun? Kia kaha ussne?!”

Ruhi ne kamre mein piche dekha tab awaaz dhimi karke kaha,

“Mere papa aur Mehboob bhai jaise hein. Mere papa ne ussko hum logon ka khayal rakhne ke liye kaha hai, halaan ke bus ke piche wala ghar mere chote chacha ki hai, matlab mere papa ka chota bhai hai, phir bhi Mehboob mere chacha se badhkar hai. Uss ne meri mummy se pucha ke main aap se kyun baar baar baat karti hoon! To mummy ne wo baat mujhse kaha, to main samajh gayi ke unnko nahin achha lagta jab hum donon baat karte hein issi liye aap se kaha ke usski haaziri mein mat baat karna mujhse se”

Abhi: “okay main samajh gaya, usske saamne tumse baat nahin karunga.”

Ruhi: “are eise nahin, jaise hum abhi kar rahe hein aise mat karna but wahan jab sab koyi ek saath hein agar mummy, Mehboob chacha, Rahima chachi, Mahesh sab saath hein tab you can talk, but not like this alone me and you, samjhe aap?!”

Abhi: “thik hai samajh gaya main, magar ek dusre ko dekh to sakte hein nah, tum nazar aati rehna please. Main tumko har baar dekhna passand karta hoon. Agar ek ghanta ho gaya aur tum nazar nahin aayi to mujhe bechaini hone lagti hai to please saamne aaya karna hat baar okay?!”

Ruhi: “mujhe pata hai. Issi liye to aati rehti hoon nah!”

Abhi bahot khush hua aur kaha,

“thanks very much darling, ab chalta hoon weh log aane wale hein ab kaam start karna hoga. Aur dekha nah tumne pucha ke main kyun itne savera ajaata hoon, to ab samjhi, hum donon ko baatein karne ke liye kitna time mil gaya hai nah?!”

Ruhi ne haan mein muskuraate hue gardan hillayi.

Abhi jaane laga, phir wapas aya aur pucha,

“How old are you Ruhi? I am 22 will be 23 this year and you?”

Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,

“ladkiyon ki umar nahin puche jaate, bad manners hihihi”

Abhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“ofo pata hai yaar, par main ne apni age bataya nah tumko so please tell me, kahin tum mujhse badi nikli to?!”

Ruhi zor se hanss padi aur kaha,

“haan main aap se badi hi hoon hihihihihi!!”

Abhi ne bhi hansste hue kaha,

“koyi baat nahin agar badi ho bhi to, umar se kia lena dena!”

Ruhi: “Aap ko koyi farak nahin padega agar main aap se umar mein badi hui to?

Abhi: “bilkool bhi nahin iss mein kaun si badi baat hai? Chalta hai yaar!”

Ruhi: “Acha aur aap ko lagta hai ke main aap se umar mein badi hoon kia?!”

Abhi: “bilkool hi nahin, tum 17, 18 ki lagti ho!! are yaar bata to do, 18 ho chuki ya ab bhi minor ho hehehehe!”

Ruhi: “ho chuki….. hmmmm I am over 19! Will be 20 this year!”

Abhi: “great that’s perfect then, ok see you later”

Aur Abhi chala gaya change karne, tab tak baaki ke sab agaye.

To be continued….. (2750 words)

Romantic, pyar bhara update hai bidu. To ab to sab thik chalne laga Abhi aur Ruhi k bich mein. Ruhi ne bade pyar se baatein kiye, aur meethi batein kiye Abhi se. Haan magar Mehboob k saamne uss se baat karne ko mana kiya.
Magar fir bhi jitna aaj gujra donon k bich wo padh ke acha laga. Ab dekhna aage kia hota hai.
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