Perfection thodi manga hai maine...
Yaha pe uski khamiya gin raha hu jo wo future mai correct kare aur usse avoid kare iske liye...
Agar aisa hi hota ki padh lo aur nikal lo to phir thik hai...
Abhi to tune bhi is reply mai teri khud ki story ka promotion hi kia hai na...
Kis liye ki tu chahta hai ki teri story hum padhe is liye na...
Exactly hum padhate hai aur reply bhi karte hai apki galtiya bhi batate hai...
Aur tumne mera reply padha nahi hai...uper hi story compliment hai aur nich kucch descrition hai...
Dekh lena...
Aur muze pata hai mai kaisi story likh sakata hu aur koi janm se hi writer nahi paida hota wo likhana chalu karta hai aur dhire dhire experince ana chalu hota hai...
Yaha pe bahot se writer dekhe hai maine jo khud ki fantasy ke liye story likhate hai aur adhuri chhod dete hai...
U r right bro...
Galti to hoti rahti hai usme koi bat nahi...
Mere sebhi hui ho ravi wali galti waha pe raj hona chahiye...
Lekin ab maine start se padha to muze maloom hua...
Agar aisa na hota to mai comment hi nahi karta...
Kyunki nice update hai, badhiya hai, aise comment mai nahi karta khali phokat mai...
Jaan pwe ata mere ek hi comment karna...
Ha bhai yaha bhi galti ho gayi...
Baad mai pata chali...
Pushpa bua thi aur malti masi...