Incest SAAND

[janu2016]

gajab bhai gajab,

 

[Hornyhunter512]

Thanks for Reading & Supporting.
Update speed slow nahi ho raha hai bhai balki Black star ka role lane se pahle main kuch cheezo ko niptana chahta hu isliye story slow lag rahi hai.
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Today's update is on....667

May be aisa hi ho...
Bcz jab Maine story padhni start ki tab itne update the ki Dil khus ho gaya tha,,, vacation pe tha us dauran to ,,eat ,story read sleep and next day same reapet

 

[Blade axel]

Superbbb update bro...

 

[Janu002]

nice update

 

[Baba27030]

Awesome yaar jabardast maja aa gaya padhkar, waiting next update thoda jaldi dena bhai intezar nahi hota

 

[Jutt mastana]

Nice


Ab Neelam ka birthday celebration kaisa ho ga

 

[Xfan]

Bhai tu jaada aachi yeh story likh sakta hai .... Agar perfection ki taraf jao to bahot kam story milegi .... Agar moderators perfection ki taraf gaye no story on this forum ....

Mujhe lagta hai writers ko bhi thoda space dena chaiye ..... Mein defend nahi kar raha par hakikat bata raha hoon ....

Story may contains some flaws par hum sab usko enjoyments ke liye padhtey aur follow kartey hai examiner ki tarah nahi .... Then while reading the story it's feel you r watchdogs not readers ....


Waiting for next update


Till then keep reading my story ....

https://xforum.live/threads/incest-angrakshak-parvivar-ka-mahi.3758/page-86





Neelam ??


So relaxed

Perfection thodi manga hai maine...
Yaha pe uski khamiya gin raha hu jo wo future mai correct kare aur usse avoid kare iske liye...
Agar aisa hi hota ki padh lo aur nikal lo to phir thik hai...
Abhi to tune bhi is reply mai teri khud ki story ka promotion hi kia hai na...
Kis liye ki tu chahta hai ki teri story hum padhe is liye na...
Exactly hum padhate hai aur reply bhi karte hai apki galtiya bhi batate hai...
Aur tumne mera reply padha nahi hai...uper hi story compliment hai aur nich kucch descrition hai...
Dekh lena...
Aur muze pata hai mai kaisi story likh sakata hu aur koi janm se hi writer nahi paida hota wo likhana chalu karta hai aur dhire dhire experince ana chalu hota hai...
Yaha pe bahot se writer dekhe hai maine jo khud ki fantasy ke liye story likhate hai aur adhuri chhod dete hai...

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Shukriya bhai ki aapne meri story padhi aur pasand bhi aayi.
Bhai hum yaha koi professional writer nahi hain balki kuch na kuch sikhne ke liye likhte hain to aise me mistakes hona koi bahut badi baat nahi hai...hum galtiya karte hain..phir unko sudharte hain aise hi anubhav hota jata hai aur ek din hum mature ho jate hain..to main abhi learning period me hu.
Jyoti ke baare me aapne jo kaha vo jarur meri fault hai..avinash ke dhokhe me ho gaya hoga...khair main usko change kar dunga..remind karane ke liye dhanyawad bhai.
Saand to ab saand ki tarah hi pelega na bhai..phir chahe vo sapna mami ho ya phir koi aur isse farak nahi padta., mujhe title ko bhi matching rakhna hai har jagah.
Rashmi gaon ki ladki hai to gaon ke andar gaon ki chhori ban ke hi rahegi na bhai, shahar ki mem nahi ban jayegi...haan ghar ke bahar bilkul uska character vaisa hi dekhne ko milega jaisa aapne kaha hai.
Ravi naam ka koi character meri kahani me marr ke jinda nahi hua hai bhai..balki raj hua hai lekin usko abhi iss bare me khud bhi pata nahi hai.
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Today's update is on....667

U r right bro...
Galti to hoti rahti hai usme koi bat nahi...
Mere sebhi hui ho ravi wali galti waha pe raj hona chahiye...
Lekin ab maine start se padha to muze maloom hua...
Agar aisa na hota to mai comment hi nahi karta...

Kyunki nice update hai, badhiya hai, aise comment mai nahi karta khali phokat mai...
Jaan pwe ata mere ek hi comment karna...

Thanks for Reading & Supporting.
Dhyan se padho bhai..Pushpa bua hai hero ki jabki lalita uski mousi hai.
Mousi aur bua me antar hota hai bhai..aur flashback dubara padhenge to aap samajh jayenge bhai.
Stay with us.
Today's update is on....667

Ha bhai yaha bhi galti ho gayi...
Baad mai pata chali...
Pushpa bua thi aur malti masi...

 

[Desi Man]

शानदार अपडेट दिये हो दोस्त

 

[sonukale]

Very nice update

 

[Arun Rajput]

superb update