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Rizwan

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Abh Agge...

Subah ke 7 baj rehe the , ravi , komal ke sath leta hua tha , use bahu me bharke ,

ravi rat rema se batian karne ke bad , kuch pal ghar ke bahar sedyion par betha reha , usne bahut kuch soch liya tha ,

phir voh uth kar apne room me akar komal ke sath let gya tha , komal ka chehra dekh , ravi ke man me ik dard sa utha tha ,

uske gore gore mulam gaal kafi rone se lal hue padhe the , lagta tha , voh beintha royi thi , uska dard , ravi samazta tha ,

lekin abhi uske pas es dard ka koi elaaz nai tha , kyu ki abhi sahi wakht nai aya tha ,

ravi ne jaise hi let kar komal ko bahu me bhara , komal nend me kasmasate hue karvat leker , uske seene me apna chehra chupa phir se so gai ,

phir ravi bhi apni mohhabat ki bahu me do pal skoon ki nend so gya , uski jindgi me chahe hazar dard the , hazaro kate bishe the rahu par , par do pal ke aram ke liye , uske pas janat si god thi ,

subah karib 8 baje seema sabse pehle uthi , or kitchen me jaker sabke liye chaye banai , yeh uski aam si ik adat thi , lekin pichle 3 saalo ka use jayda kuch yad nai tha ,

phir ik ik karke seema ne sabko nend se uthaya or chayi di ,

seema muskrate hue sedyian chad komal or ravi ke room me pahunch gai , yaha uske do do pyar karne wale skoon ki nend so rehe the ,

"komal , ravi , utho subah ho gai hai..." seema ne chaye ke cup pas hi pade ik chote se table par rakhte hue bola ,

seema ki awaz sun komal ne dhere dhere apni akhen kholi , uff jaise hi komal ko ehsas hua , voh apni bhai ki bahu me soyi thi , uski akhen nam ho gai , pyar ke hasen jajbat , akhon se beh nikale , dil dhadkana bhul gya , voh kho sa gai , apne bhai ke masom chehre me ,

use yad na reha , seema use dekh rehi hai , par seema toh seema thi , sab jan gai , sab samaz gai , use ehsas ho gya , do premi rat ko ruthe the , or phir khamoshi se ik dusre se lipat kar so gye the , seema janti thi , ravi , komal se pyar nai kar paya , or komal bhi uski judai me abh asnu baha rehi thi ,

"komal , apne bhai ko utha dena , me ati hu..." seema ne apne behte asnu saf kiye , or palat kar room se bahar chali gai , or apne piche chod gai , do ruthe , do tute , es dunia se alag do premi ,

seema ke jane ke bad komal apne bhai ko dekhne lagi , voh dekhti rehi , dekhti rehi , wakht gujarta gya ,

"ufff , mera bhai , meri jaan , rat ko bol reha tha , map ke liye muze kurban kar dega , yeh sab bolne ke bad , mera bhai kitna tadfa hoga , ander se , kyu bhai , kyu , jab app mere bina ik pal nai reh sakte , toh kyu voh sab bola , jismani prem toh pori dunia karti hai , lekin hamne toh ruhani prem kiya , hasshh , kabhi na kabhi voh wakht ayega , jab ham dono ik honge , i love u bhyiaaa..." komal nam akhon se jajbato me behkar bolti gai ,

phir komal uth kar jane lagi , tabhi ravi ne uska hath kalai se pakad liya , komal ne palat kar piche dekha , or lipat gai apne bhai se , dono ki dhadkane ik ho gai , jajbat ik ho gye , akhon se behta pani ik ho gya , or jalad hi honth bhi ik ho gye ,

phir dono pyar ki aseem gehrai se , apas me mile hontho ko , dhere dhere apas me ragadne lage , hontho ka mulam mass , apas me ragad khata gya , phir komal ko apne nichle honth me kuch geelapan mehsus , tabhi usne mehsus kiya , uska nichla honth , uske bhai ne apne moh me bhar rakha hai , danto me daba rakha hai , voh muskrane lagi , or khud bhi behad shidat , behad skoon se , apne honth chusvane lagi ,

hontho ke pyar bhare ehsas se jab dono alag hue , tab komal ne sharma kar , apne chehra apne bhai ke seene me chupa liya ,

"sorry komal , mane kal rat kuch jayda hi bol diya.." ravi behad pyar se komal ke baalo ko sehla kar bola ,

"bhyia , muze bhi maf kar do , apne jo kaha , uska ik ik alfaz sach tha , ham apne jismani pyar ke liye , es bepanah sunder dunia ko kyu tabah hone de , me apse vada karti hu , komal ajj bhi apki hai , or hamesha apki rahegi , chahe uski mout bhi ho jaye , i love uuu , mera bhaii , mera pyara bhaiii..." komal dil ki gehrai me dub kar kuch hasen shabado me boli , uske ik ik lafaz me aseem dard tha , or voh halka halka ro bhi rehi thi ,

"shhh , ham ik honge , kabhi na kabhi , voh wakht bhi ayega.. " ravi ne muskra kar komal ke asnu bhegi gaalo ko jebh se chatte hue bola ,

"bhyiaa , chaye pe lo , thandi ho jaygi.." komal muskrate hue bed se uthte hue boli , or ravi bhi muskra diya ,

karib ik ghante bad , din ke 9 baje , sabhi ghar ke hall me bethe batian kar rehe the , kuch dil se khush the , kuch gehri chinta me dube hue the ,

komal soch rehi thi , use phir se tyag karna hoga , ravi soch reha tha , use phir se jalna hoga komal ki judai me , rema soch rehi thi , kaise voh apne bhai se voh map le sake , seema soch rehi thi , kaise voh ravi or komal ko ik kar sake , khushi soch rehi thi , uski maa or uske pita ka kya haal hua hoga , pichle 3 saalo me , baby soch rehi thi , voh kat ko ravi ka pyar jalad se jalad dilva de , rimi or shurti kuch jayda nai soch rehi thi , voh bus ik dusre ki traf dekh halka halka muskra rehi thi , sab ke sab behad ghambir sochu the , lekin enki soch , enka aseem pyar tha ,

"acha , abh ajj ka kya plan hai.. " seema sabki sochu ka ant karte hue boli ,

"dedi jo bhyia kahege , vahi karge..." komal muskrate hue boli ,

"bhyia batao na , kya kare ajj ke din.." shurti bhi rimi ki traf dekh muskra kar boli ,

"ahh , soch reha hu..." ravi , shurti ki awaz sun , ik dam se hadbada kar bola ,

"ravi , muze shehar jana hai , kat or fari ko lane , me jati hu..." baby etna bol uth kar chali gai ,

"ravi , kya me apni maa se mil ayu , pata nai kya haal hua hoga , apni beti se bichad kar , meri maa ne meri judai ko kaise bardasht kiya hoga , ravi me jau , me khud ko rok nai pa rehi hu..." khushi ne beintha rote hue bola , seema uth kar use apni bahu me bhar shant karne lagi ,

"han khushu , tum jao , lekin apni sachai mat batana , tum samazti ho..." ravi ne uth kar khushi ke pas jaker bola ,

"han , samazti hu , me bhi jati hu..." khushi etna boli or samaye chakar ko jevat kar , us me ghus gai , jo sidha haweli ke bahar jaker khulta tha ,

"ravi , kya kare ajj..." seema abh ravi ki traf dekh kar boli , ravi abhi kuch bolne hi ja reha tha , ke suzi bhagte hue ayi , uski akhon me asnu the , kisi apne ke dard ke ,

"suzi kya hua , sab thik toh hai na..." komal behad chinta me boli ,

"kk..komal , maa ko phir se dora padha hai , voh , voh hospital me admit hain , maa..." suzi beintha rote hue bhag kar komal ke gale lag gai ,

"suzi ki maa , ohhh matlab dr.nelam , ahhh , kaise bhul gya unko me , ufff muze jana hoga , abhi ke abhi..." ravi man hi man dr.nelam ko yad kar , usse milne ko tadafta hua bola ,

"bhyiaa , bhyiaaa ..." komal apne bhai ko jor se awaz dete hue boli , jo kisi soch me kho sa gya tha ,

"ahhan komal..." ravi phir se hadbada kar bola ,

"bhyia app rehan ke sath jao , suzi ki maa ko kuch nai hona chahyie , jao unko yaha leker ayo , varna muzse kabhi bat mat karna..." komal behad udas or dard se dubi awaz me boli , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak uthi ,

par ravi kuch na bola , voh chal padha , ik or premi ko skoon dene , dr.nelam ke sath bitaye kuch pyar bhare palu ko yad karta ,

ravi ghar se bahar aya , toh rehan gadi me beth uska intzar kar reha tha , ravi bhi uske sath beth gya , hala ki uske chehre ki mayusi bata rehi thi , use kitni chinta hai , dr.nelam ki , kya kya beeta hoga , un 4 saalo me ,

"bhai chale , hospital..." rehan ne gadi start karte hue bola , ravi ne bus apna chehra han me hila diya , rehan bhi kuch na bola , or gadi nikal padhi , shehar ke govt hospital ki or ,

jungle se bahar jane tak ravi khamosh reha , lekin voh apne jajbato ko jayda rok na paya , or usne puch hi liya rehan se ,

"acha rehan ik bat batao..."

"han pucho ravi bhyia.."

"nelam ji ko hua kya hai , matlab tum samaz rehe ho na..." ravi behad chinta me bola ,

"bhyia , jab app or apka pariwar yaha se chala gya , toh sasu maa , kai bar yaha ayi , voh apse ik bar milna chahti thi , lagatar 1 saal tak , har mahine voh yaha ati rehi , phir unhonu yaha anna chod diya , karib 2 saal pehle , hame khabar mili , ke unke husband ik car accident me chal base , bus tab se voh tut gai , unhonu apni job chod di , bahut jayda mansik tanah unke dil me beth gya , es mansik bimari ke chalte , voh dher sari medicine khane lagi , me or suzi kai bar unse mil ate , hamne bahut kossih ki , ke voh yaha hamare pas a jaye , but voh nai mani , dher sari medicine khane ke karan , unko dore padhne lage , unka dimagi santulan hil gya , bus jab voh thoda hosh me rehti , apka or apke pariwar ka puch leti , bhyiaa , hame unko bachana hoga , varna voh mar jayegiii..." rehan ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

ravi khamosh sa ho gya , voh kya bolta , yeh sab uske karan hi hua tha , jane anjane me dr.nelam ke karib jaker , usne galti kar di , jab unke pati ki death hui , tab shyad unko ravi ki sabse jayda jarurat thi , par ravi khud musibaton se ghir chuka tha ,

karib 2 ghante bad , ravi or rehan , shehar ke govt hospital pahunch chuke the , yeh vahi hospital tha , yaha dr.anju , khushi , or dr.nelam ki kai yadian uske dil me basi hui thi ,

ravi khud ko tyar kar reha tha , dr.nelam se milne ke liye , akhir lamba wakht gujar chuka tha , ravi ik bar , bus ik bar , dr.nelam ke gale lag , use bahu me bhar , beintha rona chahta tha ,

vahi dusri traf...

khushi haweli ke bahar pahunch chuki thi , haweli ka bada sa darvaja abhi band tha , khushi behad utsuk thi , apni maa se milne ke liye ,

khushi ne phir se samaye chakar ka nirman kiya , voh sidha haweli me , apne room me pahunch gai , behad khubsurat tha , uska apna khud ka sazaya hua room , ik ik cheez vaisi ki vaisi thi , jaise voh chod kar gai thi ,

khushi ne akhen band kar dyan laga kar dekha , uske pita ji ghar ke hall me bethe hue the , voh behad udas the , unka beta kunal or unki beti , pichle dhai saalo se lapta the , ik baap ko es se badkar saza kya mil sakti hai , khushi unki batian sunne lagi ,

"DSP saab , app kuch kar bhi sakte ho ya nai , pichle 3 saal se meri beti kaha hain , kuch pata nai chal reha , apki police kuch kar bhi sakti hai ya nai..." thakur jey dev ne behad gusse me bola ,

"thakur saab , ham pori kossih kar rehe hain , abhi tak apki beti ka kuch pata nai chala , bus ik bar voh ladka ravi mil jaye , apki beti khud ba khud mil jayegi..." DSP shamsher singh ne behad gusse me bola ,

"hmm , ravi , ik bar mil jaye , jinda gad dunga use me..."

"thakur saab , hamare admi , es shehar ke chape chape par nazar rakhe hue hain , app chinta mat karo , kabhi na kabhi , ravi ka pata chal hi jayega..."

"tumne Commissioner rajesh se pucha , voh ravi ka dost tha..."

"kai bar , lekin use bhi kuch nai pata..." abhi shamsher singh , thakur jey dev se bat kar hi reha tha , ke uska phone baj utha , usne jaldi se call pickup kar li ,

"han ramsay bolo..."

"sir , ravi ka pata chal gya hai , voh govt hospital me hai , ham raid karne ja rehe hain , socha apse bat kar le..." inspector Ramsey ne behad khush hote hue bola ,

"hmm , pakad lo , lekin marna mat , kyu khushi kaha hai , yeh sirf vahi janta hai , jaldi se raid karo , me bhi pahunchta hu..." dsp shamsher singh ne phone cut karte hue bola ,

"thakur saab , ravi mil gya hai , me pore shehar ki police uske piche laga dunga , lekin ajj sham tak voh jail me band hoga , me chalta hu..." shamsher singh etna bol uth kar chalne laga ,

"DSP saab , voh ladka bahut tez hai , use kamzor karke pakado..." thakur jay dev muskrate hue bola ,

"ji thakur saab..." shamsher singh etna bol vaha se chala gya ,

khushi en bation ko sun tut sa gai , voh apni icha se ravi ke sath gai thi , na ki jabardasti , khushi akhon me asnu , dil me gusse ka tufan liye , hospital pahunch gai , use ravi ko bachana tha...

vahi dusri traf...

ravi or rehan hospital ke ander akar , receptionist se dr.nelam ke room ka pata puchne lage , receptionist ne room no.206 bata diya , jo second floor par tha ,

ravi ke man me aya , dr.anju se bhi mil lu , use bhi ravi pichle 2 saal se nai mila tha ,

lekin pehle ravi , dr.nelam ko milna chahta tha , dr.nelam hi ik aurat thi , jisne pakia or kali ko pakadvane me ravi ki help ki thi ,

rehan ne ravi ko us room me jane ke liye bola , or khud vahi bahar khada ho gya , kyu ki rehan , ravi ki takat janta tha , use yakeen tha , ravi hi dr.nelam ko thik kar sakta hai , ravi ik dam se room ke ander ghus gya , vaha usne jab dr.nelam ko dekha , uski akhen nam si ho gai.... or hospital ke bahar abh tak pore shehar ki police pahunch chuki thi , ik akele ravi ko pakadne ke liye , charo traf se hospital ghir chuka tha , kya khushi , ravi ko bacha pati , ya police rehan ke kabile par attack karti ,

abh ravi agar arrest na hota , toh uski takat pora shehar jan jata , lekin abhi toh use , kisi apne ka dard kam karna tha , dr.nelam ko es halat me dekh , ravi ander se kamzor ho gya tha , or shyad police ke liye yeh bat achi hoti....

koi tha mukadar me , jo hamse ruth gya ,
ajj pagal hai ham kisi ki yad me ,
ik sone jaise dil tha , jo hamse tut gya...

dr.nelam ki dardnak halat ne , ravi ko ghutno par zuka diya ,
akhon me asnu the , par rang lal tha ,
mane kal hi kaha tha , mane pyar ki tapash me pigalte dekha hai shetian ko ,
ajj ring ki buri takato ka malik , ghutno par beth ro reha tha ,
ajj khud shetian apne kiye pap dho reha tha..

ravi ke man ki halat ko byan karte kuch shabad hain , jo mane likh diye...

voh mard nai hota , jo aurat ke dard ko dekh ro na sake ,
kisse kahanyion me mard ko hero bata kar , use bedard dikhate ho ,
yeh vahi mard hain , jo kisi apne ki yad me , dunia se chip kar asnu bahate hain ,
ham mardo me bhi dil hota hai , kehdo es jamane me ,
ham ander se tute chahe lakh ho , lekin bhai , pati , baap , bete ka rishta taa umar nibhate hain...

(mere sabhi dosto ke liye , dil se nikale kuch alfaz , ham mardo ka dil bhi naram or kamzor hota hai , hame pyar ki jarurat hai , dhoke or ehsan ki nai , shukriya or aise hi sath dete rehe , happy new year sabhi ko , mere pyare readers ko , or jo dunia se chip kar khamoshi me story read karte hain , un pyare viewers ko bhi happy new year... ham es saal bhi sath bane rehe.. bus yahi dua karuga...)



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Abh Agge...

Subah ke 7 baj rehe the , ravi , komal ke sath leta hua tha , use bahu me bharke ,

ravi rat rema se batian karne ke bad , kuch pal ghar ke bahar sedyion par betha reha , usne bahut kuch soch liya tha ,

phir voh uth kar apne room me akar komal ke sath let gya tha , komal ka chehra dekh , ravi ke man me ik dard sa utha tha ,

uske gore gore mulam gaal kafi rone se lal hue padhe the , lagta tha , voh beintha royi thi , uska dard , ravi samazta tha ,

lekin abhi uske pas es dard ka koi elaaz nai tha , kyu ki abhi sahi wakht nai aya tha ,

ravi ne jaise hi let kar komal ko bahu me bhara , komal nend me kasmasate hue karvat leker , uske seene me apna chehra chupa phir se so gai ,

phir ravi bhi apni mohhabat ki bahu me do pal skoon ki nend so gya , uski jindgi me chahe hazar dard the , hazaro kate bishe the rahu par , par do pal ke aram ke liye , uske pas janat si god thi ,

subah karib 8 baje seema sabse pehle uthi , or kitchen me jaker sabke liye chaye banai , yeh uski aam si ik adat thi , lekin pichle 3 saalo ka use jayda kuch yad nai tha ,

phir ik ik karke seema ne sabko nend se uthaya or chayi di ,

seema muskrate hue sedyian chad komal or ravi ke room me pahunch gai , yaha uske do do pyar karne wale skoon ki nend so rehe the ,

"komal , ravi , utho subah ho gai hai..." seema ne chaye ke cup pas hi pade ik chote se table par rakhte hue bola ,

seema ki awaz sun komal ne dhere dhere apni akhen kholi , uff jaise hi komal ko ehsas hua , voh apni bhai ki bahu me soyi thi , uski akhen nam ho gai , pyar ke hasen jajbat , akhon se beh nikale , dil dhadkana bhul gya , voh kho sa gai , apne bhai ke masom chehre me ,

use yad na reha , seema use dekh rehi hai , par seema toh seema thi , sab jan gai , sab samaz gai , use ehsas ho gya , do premi rat ko ruthe the , or phir khamoshi se ik dusre se lipat kar so gye the , seema janti thi , ravi , komal se pyar nai kar paya , or komal bhi uski judai me abh asnu baha rehi thi ,

"komal , apne bhai ko utha dena , me ati hu..." seema ne apne behte asnu saf kiye , or palat kar room se bahar chali gai , or apne piche chod gai , do ruthe , do tute , es dunia se alag do premi ,

seema ke jane ke bad komal apne bhai ko dekhne lagi , voh dekhti rehi , dekhti rehi , wakht gujarta gya ,

"ufff , mera bhai , meri jaan , rat ko bol reha tha , map ke liye muze kurban kar dega , yeh sab bolne ke bad , mera bhai kitna tadfa hoga , ander se , kyu bhai , kyu , jab app mere bina ik pal nai reh sakte , toh kyu voh sab bola , jismani prem toh pori dunia karti hai , lekin hamne toh ruhani prem kiya , hasshh , kabhi na kabhi voh wakht ayega , jab ham dono ik honge , i love u bhyiaaa..." komal nam akhon se jajbato me behkar bolti gai ,

phir komal uth kar jane lagi , tabhi ravi ne uska hath kalai se pakad liya , komal ne palat kar piche dekha , or lipat gai apne bhai se , dono ki dhadkane ik ho gai , jajbat ik ho gye , akhon se behta pani ik ho gya , or jalad hi honth bhi ik ho gye ,

phir dono pyar ki aseem gehrai se , apas me mile hontho ko , dhere dhere apas me ragadne lage , hontho ka mulam mass , apas me ragad khata gya , phir komal ko apne nichle honth me kuch geelapan mehsus , tabhi usne mehsus kiya , uska nichla honth , uske bhai ne apne moh me bhar rakha hai , danto me daba rakha hai , voh muskrane lagi , or khud bhi behad shidat , behad skoon se , apne honth chusvane lagi ,

hontho ke pyar bhare ehsas se jab dono alag hue , tab komal ne sharma kar , apne chehra apne bhai ke seene me chupa liya ,

"sorry komal , mane kal rat kuch jayda hi bol diya.." ravi behad pyar se komal ke baalo ko sehla kar bola ,

"bhyia , muze bhi maf kar do , apne jo kaha , uska ik ik alfaz sach tha , ham apne jismani pyar ke liye , es bepanah sunder dunia ko kyu tabah hone de , me apse vada karti hu , komal ajj bhi apki hai , or hamesha apki rahegi , chahe uski mout bhi ho jaye , i love uuu , mera bhaii , mera pyara bhaiii..." komal dil ki gehrai me dub kar kuch hasen shabado me boli , uske ik ik lafaz me aseem dard tha , or voh halka halka ro bhi rehi thi ,

"shhh , ham ik honge , kabhi na kabhi , voh wakht bhi ayega.. " ravi ne muskra kar komal ke asnu bhegi gaalo ko jebh se chatte hue bola ,

"bhyiaa , chaye pe lo , thandi ho jaygi.." komal muskrate hue bed se uthte hue boli , or ravi bhi muskra diya ,

karib ik ghante bad , din ke 9 baje , sabhi ghar ke hall me bethe batian kar rehe the , kuch dil se khush the , kuch gehri chinta me dube hue the ,

komal soch rehi thi , use phir se tyag karna hoga , ravi soch reha tha , use phir se jalna hoga komal ki judai me , rema soch rehi thi , kaise voh apne bhai se voh map le sake , seema soch rehi thi , kaise voh ravi or komal ko ik kar sake , khushi soch rehi thi , uski maa or uske pita ka kya haal hua hoga , pichle 3 saalo me , baby soch rehi thi , voh kat ko ravi ka pyar jalad se jalad dilva de , rimi or shurti kuch jayda nai soch rehi thi , voh bus ik dusre ki traf dekh halka halka muskra rehi thi , sab ke sab behad ghambir sochu the , lekin enki soch , enka aseem pyar tha ,

"acha , abh ajj ka kya plan hai.. " seema sabki sochu ka ant karte hue boli ,

"dedi jo bhyia kahege , vahi karge..." komal muskrate hue boli ,

"bhyia batao na , kya kare ajj ke din.." shurti bhi rimi ki traf dekh muskra kar boli ,

"ahh , soch reha hu..." ravi , shurti ki awaz sun , ik dam se hadbada kar bola ,

"ravi , muze shehar jana hai , kat or fari ko lane , me jati hu..." baby etna bol uth kar chali gai ,

"ravi , kya me apni maa se mil ayu , pata nai kya haal hua hoga , apni beti se bichad kar , meri maa ne meri judai ko kaise bardasht kiya hoga , ravi me jau , me khud ko rok nai pa rehi hu..." khushi ne beintha rote hue bola , seema uth kar use apni bahu me bhar shant karne lagi ,

"han khushu , tum jao , lekin apni sachai mat batana , tum samazti ho..." ravi ne uth kar khushi ke pas jaker bola ,

"han , samazti hu , me bhi jati hu..." khushi etna boli or samaye chakar ko jevat kar , us me ghus gai , jo sidha haweli ke bahar jaker khulta tha ,

"ravi , kya kare ajj..." seema abh ravi ki traf dekh kar boli , ravi abhi kuch bolne hi ja reha tha , ke suzi bhagte hue ayi , uski akhon me asnu the , kisi apne ke dard ke ,

"suzi kya hua , sab thik toh hai na..." komal behad chinta me boli ,

"kk..komal , maa ko phir se dora padha hai , voh , voh hospital me admit hain , maa..." suzi beintha rote hue bhag kar komal ke gale lag gai ,

"suzi ki maa , ohhh matlab dr.nelam , ahhh , kaise bhul gya unko me , ufff muze jana hoga , abhi ke abhi..." ravi man hi man dr.nelam ko yad kar , usse milne ko tadafta hua bola ,

"bhyiaa , bhyiaaa ..." komal apne bhai ko jor se awaz dete hue boli , jo kisi soch me kho sa gya tha ,

"ahhan komal..." ravi phir se hadbada kar bola ,

"bhyia app rehan ke sath jao , suzi ki maa ko kuch nai hona chahyie , jao unko yaha leker ayo , varna muzse kabhi bat mat karna..." komal behad udas or dard se dubi awaz me boli , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak uthi ,

par ravi kuch na bola , voh chal padha , ik or premi ko skoon dene , dr.nelam ke sath bitaye kuch pyar bhare palu ko yad karta ,

ravi ghar se bahar aya , toh rehan gadi me beth uska intzar kar reha tha , ravi bhi uske sath beth gya , hala ki uske chehre ki mayusi bata rehi thi , use kitni chinta hai , dr.nelam ki , kya kya beeta hoga , un 4 saalo me ,

"bhai chale , hospital..." rehan ne gadi start karte hue bola , ravi ne bus apna chehra han me hila diya , rehan bhi kuch na bola , or gadi nikal padhi , shehar ke govt hospital ki or ,

jungle se bahar jane tak ravi khamosh reha , lekin voh apne jajbato ko jayda rok na paya , or usne puch hi liya rehan se ,

"acha rehan ik bat batao..."

"han pucho ravi bhyia.."

"nelam ji ko hua kya hai , matlab tum samaz rehe ho na..." ravi behad chinta me bola ,

"bhyia , jab app or apka pariwar yaha se chala gya , toh sasu maa , kai bar yaha ayi , voh apse ik bar milna chahti thi , lagatar 1 saal tak , har mahine voh yaha ati rehi , phir unhonu yaha anna chod diya , karib 2 saal pehle , hame khabar mili , ke unke husband ik car accident me chal base , bus tab se voh tut gai , unhonu apni job chod di , bahut jayda mansik tanah unke dil me beth gya , es mansik bimari ke chalte , voh dher sari medicine khane lagi , me or suzi kai bar unse mil ate , hamne bahut kossih ki , ke voh yaha hamare pas a jaye , but voh nai mani , dher sari medicine khane ke karan , unko dore padhne lage , unka dimagi santulan hil gya , bus jab voh thoda hosh me rehti , apka or apke pariwar ka puch leti , bhyiaa , hame unko bachana hoga , varna voh mar jayegiii..." rehan ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

ravi khamosh sa ho gya , voh kya bolta , yeh sab uske karan hi hua tha , jane anjane me dr.nelam ke karib jaker , usne galti kar di , jab unke pati ki death hui , tab shyad unko ravi ki sabse jayda jarurat thi , par ravi khud musibaton se ghir chuka tha ,

karib 2 ghante bad , ravi or rehan , shehar ke govt hospital pahunch chuke the , yeh vahi hospital tha , yaha dr.anju , khushi , or dr.nelam ki kai yadian uske dil me basi hui thi ,

ravi khud ko tyar kar reha tha , dr.nelam se milne ke liye , akhir lamba wakht gujar chuka tha , ravi ik bar , bus ik bar , dr.nelam ke gale lag , use bahu me bhar , beintha rona chahta tha ,

vahi dusri traf...

khushi haweli ke bahar pahunch chuki thi , haweli ka bada sa darvaja abhi band tha , khushi behad utsuk thi , apni maa se milne ke liye ,

khushi ne phir se samaye chakar ka nirman kiya , voh sidha haweli me , apne room me pahunch gai , behad khubsurat tha , uska apna khud ka sazaya hua room , ik ik cheez vaisi ki vaisi thi , jaise voh chod kar gai thi ,

khushi ne akhen band kar dyan laga kar dekha , uske pita ji ghar ke hall me bethe hue the , voh behad udas the , unka beta kunal or unki beti , pichle dhai saalo se lapta the , ik baap ko es se badkar saza kya mil sakti hai , khushi unki batian sunne lagi ,

"DSP saab , app kuch kar bhi sakte ho ya nai , pichle 3 saal se meri beti kaha hain , kuch pata nai chal reha , apki police kuch kar bhi sakti hai ya nai..." thakur jey dev ne behad gusse me bola ,

"thakur saab , ham pori kossih kar rehe hain , abhi tak apki beti ka kuch pata nai chala , bus ik bar voh ladka ravi mil jaye , apki beti khud ba khud mil jayegi..." DSP shamsher singh ne behad gusse me bola ,

"hmm , ravi , ik bar mil jaye , jinda gad dunga use me..."

"thakur saab , hamare admi , es shehar ke chape chape par nazar rakhe hue hain , app chinta mat karo , kabhi na kabhi , ravi ka pata chal hi jayega..."

"tumne Commissioner rajesh se pucha , voh ravi ka dost tha..."

"kai bar , lekin use bhi kuch nai pata..." abhi shamsher singh , thakur jey dev se bat kar hi reha tha , ke uska phone baj utha , usne jaldi se call pickup kar li ,

"han ramsay bolo..."

"sir , ravi ka pata chal gya hai , voh govt hospital me hai , ham raid karne ja rehe hain , socha apse bat kar le..." inspector Ramsey ne behad khush hote hue bola ,

"hmm , pakad lo , lekin marna mat , kyu khushi kaha hai , yeh sirf vahi janta hai , jaldi se raid karo , me bhi pahunchta hu..." dsp shamsher singh ne phone cut karte hue bola ,

"thakur saab , ravi mil gya hai , me pore shehar ki police uske piche laga dunga , lekin ajj sham tak voh jail me band hoga , me chalta hu..." shamsher singh etna bol uth kar chalne laga ,

"DSP saab , voh ladka bahut tez hai , use kamzor karke pakado..." thakur jay dev muskrate hue bola ,

"ji thakur saab..." shamsher singh etna bol vaha se chala gya ,

khushi en bation ko sun tut sa gai , voh apni icha se ravi ke sath gai thi , na ki jabardasti , khushi akhon me asnu , dil me gusse ka tufan liye , hospital pahunch gai , use ravi ko bachana tha...

vahi dusri traf...

ravi or rehan hospital ke ander akar , receptionist se dr.nelam ke room ka pata puchne lage , receptionist ne room no.206 bata diya , jo second floor par tha ,

ravi ke man me aya , dr.anju se bhi mil lu , use bhi ravi pichle 2 saal se nai mila tha ,

lekin pehle ravi , dr.nelam ko milna chahta tha , dr.nelam hi ik aurat thi , jisne pakia or kali ko pakadvane me ravi ki help ki thi ,

rehan ne ravi ko us room me jane ke liye bola , or khud vahi bahar khada ho gya , kyu ki rehan , ravi ki takat janta tha , use yakeen tha , ravi hi dr.nelam ko thik kar sakta hai , ravi ik dam se room ke ander ghus gya , vaha usne jab dr.nelam ko dekha , uski akhen nam si ho gai.... or hospital ke bahar abh tak pore shehar ki police pahunch chuki thi , ik akele ravi ko pakadne ke liye , charo traf se hospital ghir chuka tha , kya khushi , ravi ko bacha pati , ya police rehan ke kabile par attack karti ,

abh ravi agar arrest na hota , toh uski takat pora shehar jan jata , lekin abhi toh use , kisi apne ka dard kam karna tha , dr.nelam ko es halat me dekh , ravi ander se kamzor ho gya tha , or shyad police ke liye yeh bat achi hoti....

koi tha mukadar me , jo hamse ruth gya ,
ajj pagal hai ham kisi ki yad me ,
ik sone jaise dil tha , jo hamse tut gya...

dr.nelam ki dardnak halat ne , ravi ko ghutno par zuka diya ,
akhon me asnu the , par rang lal tha ,
mane kal hi kaha tha , mane pyar ki tapash me pigalte dekha hai shetian ko ,
ajj ring ki buri takato ka malik , ghutno par beth ro reha tha ,
ajj khud shetian apne kiye pap dho reha tha..

ravi ke man ki halat ko byan karte kuch shabad hain , jo mane likh diye...

voh mard nai hota , jo aurat ke dard ko dekh ro na sake ,
kisse kahanyion me mard ko hero bata kar , use bedard dikhate ho ,
yeh vahi mard hain , jo kisi apne ki yad me , dunia se chip kar asnu bahate hain ,
ham mardo me bhi dil hota hai , kehdo es jamane me ,
ham ander se tute chahe lakh ho , lekin bhai , pati , baap , bete ka rishta taa umar nibhate hain...

(mere sabhi dosto ke liye , dil se nikale kuch alfaz , ham mardo ka dil bhi naram or kamzor hota hai , hame pyar ki jarurat hai , dhoke or ehsan ki nai , shukriya or aise hi sath dete rehe , happy new year sabhi ko , mere pyare readers ko , or jo dunia se chip kar khamoshi me story read karte hain , un pyare viewers ko bhi happy new year... ham es saal bhi sath bane rehe.. bus yahi dua karuga...)



to be counited....
Awesome update..... sab nikl geye apni manjil ki taraf.......khushi ghar geya or eavi kk bachane ke liye hospital aaya....or ravi khud kamzorvpadh grya.....dekhte hai ravi kaise police se bachta hai......waiting for next update
 
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Abhi

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Superb update
Us mystery lady ne ravi ko 7 dino ka samay diya .
Use map wapas dene ke liye nhi to uska anjam le liye tyair rahne ko
Ab is part me sirf 7 dino ka varnan hoga.
Rema bhi ravi se map dene ke liye kah rahi hai.
Usse ravi jeet nhi skta hai.
Agle din sabhi apne soch me gum the.
Ravi ko dr neelam ke bare me pata chla jiski tabiyat bhaut kharab hai.
Ravi usse milne hospital me gaya.
Khushi apne maa baap se milne haweli gayi.
Vahan use pta chla ki ravi ko hospital me pakde puri police team gayi hai.
Ab vo aage kya krti hai.
 
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voh mard nai hota , jo aurat ke dard ko dekh ro na sake ,
kisse kahanyion me mard ko hero bata kar , use bedard dikhate ho ,
yeh vahi mard hain , jo kisi apne ki yad me , dunia se chip kar asnu bahate hain ,
ham mardo me bhi dil hota hai , kehdo es jamane me ,
ham ander se tute chahe lakh ho , lekin bhai , pati , baap , bete ka rishta taa umar nibhate hain...

(mere sabhi dosto ke liye , dil se nikale kuch alfaz , ham mardo ka dil bhi naram or kamzor hota hai , hame pyar ki jarurat hai , dhoke or ehsan ki nai , shukriya or aise hi sath dete rehe , happy new year sabhi ko , mere pyare readers ko , or jo dunia se chip kar khamoshi me story read karte hain , un pyare viewers ko bhi happy new year... ham es saal bhi sath bane rehe.. bus yahi dua karuga...)



to be counited....
Bhai apki likhi line humlog ke halat bayan krte hai.
Hum bhi pyar ki jarorat hoti hai.
Lakin kissi se kah nhi pate.
 
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शानदार अपडेट मित्र शुक्रिया आपका बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद
अगले अपडेट का इंतिजार रहे गा
ऐसे ही लिखते रहें।
 
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Wah kya gajab ka update diya he bhai. Maja a gya padh kr. Har koi apne gum ya khushi me busy he. Yahi to galti karte he ki bas apne me hi jite he. Are jara dusaro ke gum ko apna bana kr to dekho. Unki khusi me sarik hoker to dekho. Sala jindagi jine ka maza aa jayega. Bhai aapne sabke jajbaat bahut achhi tarah se dikhaye he. Usake alawa jo aapne mardo ke bare me btaya he wo bilkul 100 aane sach kaha he jiska jita jagta sabut me khud hu jo kisi movie me bhi agar emotional scene aa jaye to ro deta hu.
Waiting 4 next update
 
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