Incest Jadui PARIVAR aur main CHUDAKKAD 💜

[hemya]

JADUI PARIVAAR
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[rahlone]

Hemya bhai galat baat bhai aapki
Ek to aap ne bahut dino ke baad reply kiya hai or woh bhi kisi Chutiye ke comment par

Bro update kab aayega

Ak chutiye apni zabaan band hi rakh. As a reader koi bhi story ko start se padh le fir uski comments padhna.

 

[rahlone]

Sorry to disappoint you par ye story incest hai. Isme don-tin sex scene huye hai usme se ek ko aap incest kah sakte hai .
Agar aapko sex pasand nahi aaya to sorry.

main maanta hu ki meri story writing ki style different hai bahut logo ko samjh nahi aayi . Kuch logo ko aayi .ek aadmi ke conversation ke baad dusra conversation start hota hai .agar aapko meri writing style pasnd nahi hai to main kuch nahi kar sakta.
Main koshish kar raha hu ,koi professional writer nahi hu, aap mere jaise Tucche writer ko nahi padh sakte to yaha par isase bhi bahot se achhe lekhak hai .

Rahi baat spelling ki to main check karta hu aur padhne layak bhi hai agar nahi hai to ab tak complaint aa jati ,lekin main sudharne ki puri koshish karunga.

Aapka shukriya criticism ke liye.

Anyway it looks like you are not capable to provide quality content to the readers who wants.

Agar kisi ki complain nahi aayi to iska yeh matlab nahi ki story me logical or spelling mistakes nahi he. khud story ki start se read karna or khud judge karna. Khair this is my last visit and last comment to this story. Anyway good luck to your different style story .

 

[hemya]

Anyway it looks like you are not capable to provide quality content to the readers who wants.

Agar kisi ki complain nahi aayi to iska yeh matlab nahi ki story me logical or spelling mistakes nahi he. khud story ki start se read karna or khud judge karna. Khair this is my last visit and last comment to this story. Anyway good luck to your different style story .

Brother just go for quality content. I am just writer writing for fun, galtiya hai main bhi maanta hu kyuki mera professional kaam nahi hai . confusion hota hoga manta hu. Lekin kuch bhi samjh naa aye aisa bilkul nahi ho skta.
And I hope to read your story I will be happy to review it first .

Thank you for your kind words.

 

[nishu9812]

Bhai update kab aayega 17 din ho gaye

 

[hemya]

UPDATE 20 ​

" Tum aise kyu khade ho?" Amrita Kamal ko apni taraf dekhte hue paakar boli.

Kamal ne bina koi bhav badle sar naa main ghuma kar kuch nahi kaha.

Amrita is baar Kamal ko samjh nahi paayi aur apne kaam karti rahi .vo ek chhote se ghar ke kitchen me Kamal ke sath thi kamal ke liye khana bana rahi thi .

Kamal use hi dekh raha tha . Amrita ko laga ki vo uske sharir ko taad raha hai. Lekin uski aankhe kuch aur hi baya kar rahi thi .

Kamal kya soch raha tha ye jaan naa paakar Amrita thodi mayus ho gayi.

Par Kamal ko is vakt purani yaade vapas aa gayi thi .

Kaise vo bachha tha apni maa ke pichhe pichhe hi rahta tha. Vo apni maa ke liye bachpan me mahatvapurn tha lekin ab sirf uska Bhai hi pure parivar ke liye ek vishesh tha.

Use Bachpan ki yaad aa gayi ki kaise vo apni maa ke pichhe pichhe kitchen me ghumta tha. Pahle apni maa ke jadui se khush hota tha .dhire dhire Kamal apni maa ki najaro me andekha hone laga tha .

Har bachha apni maa ki najro me vishesh hota hai vo use mahsoos hona band ho gaya tha .bass ek bojh ki tarah tha.

Apne is vichar me khoya hua Kamal Amrita nahi jaanti thi use to bass pritam maalum tha jise pyaar aur kaamvasna ke alava kuch nahi sujhata tha.

Isi soch me usne khana banate hue Kamal se puchha .

" Tum Ab hamesha ke liye yaha rahne vaale ho."

" Haa, ab ghar jaane ka man nahi hai aur safe bhi nahi hai ."

Amrita ki rotiya banana tabhi ho gaya aur Amrita ne gas band kar Kamal ki aur mud gayi , us khubsurat chehre par paseena chaya dekh Kamal ko andar se kuch hone laga tha .

" To phir karan kaha rahega ?" Amrita ne apna hath dhote hue sawal Kiya .

" Vo yahi , pass hi main room hai usme bhi kitchen hai , vo kah raha tha ki safe hai ."

" To phir main yaha ruk jau ?" Amrita ki baat sun Kamal ki dhadkane tej ho gayi.lekin khud ki bhavnao ko kabu kar usne bola .

" Nahi tum vahi raho, main milta rahunga "

" Achha to phir Ashu aur Asmita ko kya batau ?" Amrita muskurate hue puchha.

Kamal ke gaal laal ho gaye
"Main mil lunga unse tum phikar mat karo."

Jab Amrita ghar pahunchi us par lakho sawal tane hue the.

Asmita se to jaise raha hi nahi Jaa Raha tha.apne mulayam sharir par gadde par ulta let soyi soch rahi thi.

Use behad dukh ho raha tha.tabhi uske bade kulhe par reshami saree ke upar se thappad pada.

Vo ekdum se chauk gayi pichhe dekhte hi uski aankho se aansu aa gaye .

" Aap yaha?"

Kamal ko dekh vo khush ho gayi aur sidhe Kamal ke sine se lag gayi.
Ab 27-28 saal ki ek behad khubsurat aur sharir se bharpur ladki kahe yaa aurat aur ek 18 saal ka naujawan ladka.

Kamal ke sine se lagte hi Asmita fut fut kar rone lagi.

Kamal ne uske baalo ko sahalaya.

" Ab jyada ro vo mat mujhe Ashu se bhi milna hai."

" Lekin kaha the aap main aapko dhund kyu nahi paa rahi thi."

" Vo sab baad me bataunga pahle ..."
Ye kahte hue Kamal ne Asmita ka pallu hata diya .

Aur piche se gardan ko chumate thano ko dabate hue blouse button kholne laga .

Khulte hi ek aur fekakar chuchiyo ka mardan chaalu ho gaya.

Asmita is hamle se tadpane lagi.

" UmmmmmhhhaaaaaAAaa"

Nipple ko ungliyo me dhar marodne par chikhne vali thi lekin uske muh me saree ka pallu tha .

Thano ko Kamal achhi tarah se masal raha tha.




Saamne girakar isbaar apna bhar Asmita par daal chaati par latke vo do golakar mulayam aur bhari chatiyo par tut pada.

Chuste masalte kar ragdte vakt saree Asmita ke sharir se alag ho gayi.

Asmita aahe bhar hi rahi thi ki.
Kamal ne daanto se chuchiyo ko kaatne laga.



"aaaaaaahhhhmuhhhhAAA"

Apne hi otho ko aavaj na bahar nikle isiliye Asmita kat rahi thi aur tadap rahi thi.
Sahi me use maja bhi aa raha tha use apne maalik ka khilone ki tarah istemal karna gavara nahi tha.
Kamal bhi ye baat jaanta tha isiliye usne koi kasar nhi chhodi .
aakhir me jab use gardan ko kata to vaha par Nishan chhod diye jo hafto tak nhi jaane vaale the .

Kamal Asmita vaise hi letakar Uske muh ki aur kar un gulabi mulayam otho ke bich apna khuta daal Diya.

Jibh chhut ke andar ki deewar ki tarah Kamal ke Lund ko lagi.

Uske muh se aaahhh nikal gayi.

Asmita kuch react kar pati to apna pura vajan daal kamal ka lund puri tarah Asmita ke gale tak chala gaya.

Asmita ke bahut dino se tonsil tak koi chij nhi gayi thi isiliye use ulti se aane lagi.
Jiske liye koi vakt nhi tha Do taraf jhul rahe thano ke side me pair rakhkar muh ko chodne laga.

Asmita ke gale tak jaane ke vajah se aankho se aansu aa gaye .

Kamal pahle ruk gaya phir use samajh aa gaya ki ye ek natural reaction hai agar koi chij andar tak gale me jaaye to .

Phir Bina parvah kiye .

Gwak gwaak ki aavaj ke sath andar bahar hone laga .

Aur kuch hi kshano me Kamal andar gale bhitar jhad gaya.

Jisase viry naak me bhi kuch andar se chala gaya.

Lund bahar nikalte hi Asmita khasne lagi.

Asmita ne jab saree pahnte hue blouse pahan rahi thi tab Kamal ne use godi me bitha diya .

" Aap vaise kaha the?"

Asmita ke sawal par chehra thoda
Gambhir karke.

" Mujhe kharad utha le gaya tha , kaise to bacha "

Uske baad usne saree kahani Asmita ko bata di.

Tabhi darwaje par kisi aahat hui kuch samaj pate tab tak darwaja khul gaya.

Asmita tab apne blouse ke button hi laga rahi thi.

Asmita ko Kamal ki godi me baitha dekh bahar se aayi us aurat ko Asmita chinta janak bhav se dekh rahi thi lekin Kamal shant tha .

Vo khada ho gaya tabhi bahar se Sharada yaani Amrita ki maa aa gayi.

Andar aayi aurat yaani ki Natasha yaani Amrita ki mami Ajib najaro se dekh rahi thi.

Vo dono Kamal ko yaha dekh aascharya chakit thi kyuki abhi unhe niche Amrita bata Rahi thi Kamal nhi aane vaala.

Sabse jyada to Natasha use pata tha ki Asmita kon hai, lekin use apne se Kam umar ke ladke sath dekh use badda lag raha tha.

" Kamal tum kab aaye?" Ye sawal Sharada ne puchha.

Kamal kya jawab de sochte hue ,idhar udhar dekhne laga.

" Abhi aaya hu , Asmita ne dhund liya to aa gaya."

Kamal ki baat sun Asmita bhi haa me haa Milane lagi.


Sharada idhar udhar dekh rahi thi vahi Natasha ki najar Asmita par tiki hui thi.

Asmita apni taraf is tarah dekhta paa kar chehra puri tarah laal ho gaya tha.

Idhar Ashu Kamal ko dekh bahot khush ho gayi aur Kamal ke gale lag.

" Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata main apne aap ko kuch kar baithti "

" Shh(otho par ungali rakh kar ) aisi baat mat karo mujhe kuch nahi hone vaala."

"Lekin kyu nahi aaye mujhse milne itne dino Tak?"

" Ashu main yaha nahi rah sakta , Kharad ko pata hai ki main yaha rahta hu aur vo hamare Ghar par najar rakhe hue hai varna kaise vo us din mujhe dhund pata."

" Tumhara kahna hai ki hamare Ghar se koi use khabar pahuncha raha hai ." Ashu ne chinta me ye baat kahi thi .

" Haa abhi to pata nahi chal paaya lekin jald hi pata chal jayega."

" Lekin kaise ?"

" Ek yiti naam ka aadmi hai , jiski shaktiya hai ki vo kisi bhi insaan yaa vastu ka bhoot bhavishya vartaman dikha sakta hai ,hame bass use pakadna hai ."

" Thik hai ,lekin agar mujhe tumse milna ho to ."

" Uski chinta tum mat karo main tumse ab roj milne aaunga."

Kuch saal pahle.

" Karan Karan"ek ladki karan ka naam lekar use pukar rahi thi.

" Kya hua Abby aise jor jor se chilla kyu Rahi ho?''

Abby jo karan sahi sahi salamat dekh rahat ki saans li.

" Kuch nahi?mere Pitaji ko sandesha aaya tha ki tumhari kal raat ko ghor se bahar kisi ladayi hui thi aur upar se bhediye bina Gaye the."
Ye jab usne kaha to use Karan ke gale par jalane ke nishan dikhayi diye.

Karan kuch bolta usase pahle Abby bol padi.

" Karan , ye kaise jala? matlab ki vo Jo kah rahe the vo sab sach hai . Tum gaye the us par."

Karan ne apna sar ekdum se niche kar diya. Abby se raha nahi gaya aur ghar ke andar aa kar malam patti lagane lag gayi. Bachpan se Karan ki dost thi uske Dil karan ke liye bahot pyaar tha.

" Ab batao kyu Gaye the vaha?"

Karan ne aankhe niche kar .

" Samiksha se milne gaya tha."

Abby kuch samajh nahi payi .

" Kyu ?"

Karan ne kuch nahi kaha uske aankho se aansu nikal Gaye. Abby sab kuch samajh gayi.
Uski dhadkan ekdum se band ho gayi. Usne Jo bhi sapne dekhe the vo tut rahe the . Usne pruthvi par rahna sirf Karan ke liye chhoda tha kyuki vo karan ke sath rah paaye.

Karan bhi Abby ke aansu dekh samajh Gaya.

" Abby main tumhe kabhi bhi dukh nahi Dena chahta lekin mere liye samiksha behad jaruri hai"

Abby ne apne aansu ponch.

" Koi baat nahi agar tum pyar karte ho samiksha se to main isme kya kar sakti hu. Lekin tumne socha hai ki iska parinam kya hoga vo ek ujale me rahne vaale gaav ke sardaar ki beti hai , vo gaav ke kisi bhi insaan ko jinda nahi chodenge."

" Isiliye mujhe is baat se dukh ho raha hai ."

" To phir kya socha hai , agar tum bhaag jaate ho uske saath to vo tumhe khatam karne ke liye kharad se bhi haat mila sakte hai ."

" Mujhe isi baat ka Darr hai main nahi chahata ki meri vajah se Kharad se vo log mil jaaye ham bhediyo me rahne vaale logo se gussa ho kar "

" Thik hai ek kaam karte hai main is baare me mere pitaji se baat karti hu vo koi Naa koi upaay jarur nikalenge. "

" Iski koi jarurat nahi hai , main bass Samiksha ko aakhri baar milna chahta hu bass .

Inki baat sun bahar khada ek aadmi khush ho gaya.

Jangal me har taraf andhera thaa vaha par ek Sundar si lambe kad vaali ladki kisi ka intejar kar rahi thi tabhiandhera aur bhi badh raha tha .

Tabhi patto ki chap chap ki aavaj hui aur Saamne use Karan ki chhavi dikhayi de gayi.

" Aaj kya hua tum apne sath ise kyu laaye."
Bhediye ko dekhkar Samiksha boli. Ye bhediye unki sanskriti ki pahchan the har insaan ke pass ek bhediya hota tha unme bhi kuch shaktiya alag rahti lekin roshni ko absorb karna unme se ek thi.

" Vo kal raat ko ham par hamla hua vo achha hua kisi ne tumhe nahi dekha lekin aaj aisa naa ho isiliye ise laaya hu ye pahre daari karega jhopdi ke bahar."

Is par samiksha thodi sharma gayi.

Karan aur samiksha puri tarah nagn ek dusre ki baho me the .

Karan phir baith gaya aur chadar liye Samiksha so rahi thi.

Karan ne chadar ko niche kiya.
Aur uske Gore stano ko ghurne laga.
Aankhe band kiye Samiksha boli.

" Karan is tarah mujhe ghuro mat"

" Main kaha ghur raha hu."

Tabhi samiksha ne aankhe kholi aur Karan tak lagaye Samiksha ki chhati ki aur dekh raha tha.

Ye dekh vo has di.

" Achha nahi ghur rahe ho." ye kahkar mukka pet me halke se maara.


Karan bhi muskraya aur phir apne oth Samiksha ke otho par rakh diye.


" Chhodo ab kya vahi karte rahna hai kya?"

Karan ne khud ko samiksha se alag kar.

Thoda serious ho gaya.
" Samiksha me soch raha tha hamare rishte ke baare me."

Samiksha ne apne aap ko dhak diya jispar karan muskura diya .

" Kya socha ki yahi naa ki shadi kab karenge, bachhe kab honge."

Samiksha ki baat sun Karan samajh nahi paaya ki kaise ab baat ko aage badhaye.

" Haa lekin tumhe lagta hai ki tumhare pitaji in sab ke liye maanenge "


" Agar vo nahi bhi maante to ham bhaag jayenge."

" Haa lekin Hamare bhagne ke baad vo hame jarur pakad sakte hai."

Is baar Samiksha gussa ho gayi.

" Sidhe sidhe kaho Naa ki tumhe mere sath rahna hi nahi hai."

" Nahi jaanu aisi baat nahi hai . Main to tumhare sath rahne ke liye kuch bhi kurbaan kar du lekin main maasum logo ki jaane kurban nahi kar sakta jis pe mere koi hak nahi hai ."

" Karan isme kisi maasum ki jaan nahi jayegi . Ham dono apni marji se bhage hai aur unhe agar koi shikayat hai to hamari Jaan le le, aur yaad rakhana agar main tumhari nahi hui to apni Jaan bhi de dungi "

Karan kuch kah nahi paaya.

Tabhi bahar bhediye ki chikne ki aavaj aayi jaise koi kutta mar raha ho .

Karan aur samiksha ekdum se bhag kar bahar aaye.

Bahar ghane jangal me aag ki mashale liye hue bahot se log khade the . Pura jangal me dekha jaaye to samiksha ke gaav se sena khadi thi .

Aur jab usne niche dekha to Ek bhediye ki lash padi hui thi.

"To phir aage kya hua " karan ki kahani sun Kamal bol pada.

" Kuch nahi sab kuch tabah ho gaya."

Kamal Karan ke sath ek purane bangle ke niche baitha hua tha.

" Tum vaha se bach kar kaise nikle."

" Main nahi ham dono vaha se bachkar nikle the Samiksha ki shaktiya aur meri shaktiyo ki vajah se , lekin tabhi vaha par achanak Kharad tapak pada aur usne meri Samiksha ki jaan le li."

" Kharad vaha kaise pahuncha ."

" Amrit lok me bahot se samrjya Kharad ko raja mante hai aur bahot se sardar uske khilaf hai jyada tr usase Darr kar hi raja mante hai lekin kuch apne fayde ke liye bhi."

Kamal Karan ki kahani sun sunn padd gaya .Kharad ke baare me vo jitna bhi sochta tha usase jyada bhayanak insaan vo tha.

Phir karan ne khudko shant kar ke.

" Vaise samiksha ki shaktiya bahot jyada thi jise pakar vo bhi takat var ho gya hoga."

" Konsi shaktiya?"

" Vo kisi bhi jadui shakti kaa tod nikal sakti thi jisme asliyat ke sath pherphar karna ek takat hai. Lekin main us kharad ko jinda nahi chhodunga. Aur tumhe Amrit lok ka raja banakar hi rahunga."

Kamal ko Ab karan ke liye bura lag raha tha. Uska samiksha ke siva jindagi me koi nahi tha vo bhi insaan Kharad ki vajah se is duniya me nahi raha .

Phir achanak Karan bol pada.

" Chalo hame Yiti ko pakadna hai.aur vo Kon hai jo tum par najar rakh Raha hai uska pata bhi lagana hai, bass ek baat ka dhyan rakhana yiti ki aankho me galti se mat dekhna varna tum past me fass jaoge jisase bahar niklana mushkil hai ."

" Didi aapko lagta hai hamara plan kaam karega " shweta Meena se baat kar rahi thi.

" Haa maine pata kiya hai , Yiti yahi hoga vo Mathew yaa Abby ke hath lage usase pahle hame use pakadna hoga."

" Lekin didi uski shaktiya hame pata nahi hai ."

" Isiliye to rupali hai , vo uske aaspass pahunchte hi uski shaktiyan pata kar legi. Dekho ham sab ko ek team ki tarah kaam karna hai . Ham sab bahne jis tarah se mushkilo ka samne karte aa rahe hai vaise bhi aage bhi karenge ."

Tabhi shweta hasne lagi ,kyuki uske kaan me guddi kuch to bol gayi.

Rupali ne apni chhoti bahan ko aankh dikhayi .

Tabhi guddi chhoti ho kar aage aage jaane lagi.

Andar ek aadmi aayne me dekh raha tha .

Vo sab khidki pass pahunch chuki thi vo use dekh paa Rahi thi.

Tabhi use kisiki jor se laat pado ye dekh sab bahane chhip gayi.

Laat marne vaale insaan ko vo jaanti nahi thi . Use is insaan ki pith dikhayi de Rahi thi aankho par hath rakh kar vo use pit Raha tha .

Kamal ne pichhe se yiti ko pakade hue tha. Aur uski shaktiya apne andar lene ki koshish kar raha tha. Usne is baar aankhe dhaki hui thi aur karan hath pair pakade hue tha .

Tabhi uski najar saamne khidki par padi jaha par Use meena dikhayi di.

Kamal ka dhyan tuta aur yiti ne Kamal ki ungli kaat Li. Kamal kuch samjh pata lekin uski najar Yiti ki aankho par padi aur kho gaya.

Ek taraf kharad ek budhi aurat ke pass baitha hua tha.

" Kharad tumne kya socha hai phir."

" Dekho Samiksha tum ye sawal mat puchha Karo Main Tumhara hamesha hu aur hameshaa rahunga. "

" Lekin tumhe meri jarurat kaha hai."

" Mujhe tumhari jarurat hai , meri umar nahi badi iska matlab ye nahi ki main ham dono ne bachpan se bitaya pal bhul jaunga . Maine bahut si aurato ka khun Kiya hai lekin agar mujhe Samiksha naam ki aurat ko bhi marana pade to main use nahi maar paunga."



Tabhi vaha par kisi ki aahat hui .

" tripti tum Samiksha ke sath baitho "

Aur Kharad vaha se chala gaya.


" Samiksha idhar aao " tripti ne tabhi idhar udhar dekha .

" Dukhi hone ki koi jarurat nahi hai . Usne tumhara naam samiksha tha isi liye thodi bachaya hai , agar aisa hota to naam badalkar apne sath thodi rakhta ."

Tripti ki aankho me bahot dard bhara hua tha vo samiksha pahchan nahi paayi.Samiksha to bass apne pyaar me kharad ke liye pagal thi.

Vahi tripti yaani ki samiksha to tadap tadap kar jindagi kaat Rahi thi vo bhi naam badal kar. Usne Samiksha vaali jindagi se haar maan li thi . Bass tripti ban kar rah rahi thi.

like kardo . Thodi choti hai kaha tha usase lekin subah kuch jyada likh nhi paaya kal raat likha tha usase bass thoda sa jyada likh paaya agar aur bada likhta to time lag jaata aur aap mujhse naraj ho jate . To isiliye like aur comments karo.

 

[hemya]

Awesome update bhai

Bhai apne hero kamal ke pass shaktiya nhi hai ,jabki uske ghar walon ko pata hai kamal ke baare ki wo ek narmal ladka hai phir bhi usko sab neecha dikhate rahte hai khass ker uske maa aur bahen ,agar aisa hi vyavhar hai ghar me kamal ke sath to ghar kyu jaaye thoda aur tadapne do maa aur bahno ko ,thoda unko bhi ahsaas karwaiye...


Baaki aapke uper aap jaise chahe waisa hi update likhe

Nice update

Bahut hi shaandaar Lajawab update

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai hemya bhai...
Nice and beautiful update....

Nice and fantastic update bhai keep posting

Nice update Bhai

hemya bhai update bhot mjedar dia aaj ka aapne
Lekin bhai plz suru se request ker rha ho aapse ki plz aap plot ko thoda change kro bhai
Jada ter is bat ka confusion hota hai ki kon ky bol rha hai or kisko bol rha hai or kiske lye bol rha hai
Jaise Aaj ke update me dekho ek trf Kamal or Amrita bat kr rhe hote hai ke achnak se aap Karan or Abby ki tarf aajate ho or fir achnak se aap Kamal ki family ke logo ki bat hone lgti hai
Confusion ho skta hai aage chl ke story me bhai isko shi kro aap plz
.
SORRY agar aapko meri bat ka bura lge to

Aapne POOL pe 1 Questions dala hai jante ho mai abi tk uska answer nhi de paya ho
Isi confusion me bhai

poll Question ka usase kya sambandh ,aur plot change matlab kya change kru ,story? main samjha nahi ki aapko kya samjh nhi AA raha .
Jara vistar se bataye.

Love this update

Awesome update

Nice and superb update...

Bhai aap ye smjo ki agar koi character Dailog bol rha hai to pta chle jaise ki
.
KAMAL- hjkooo
Amrita - sjsbdjd
Kharad - wnsjsj
Ashu - jejej
.
Kuch is trh se taki pta chle kn ky bol rha hai kisse bol rha hai
.
Aapne poll me pocha power kisi sbse best hai
To bhai character smj aagya mujhe lekin power smj nhi aay islye bola mai esa

Isiliye character introduction (UPDATE 0)diya hai ki power kiski kya hai ? , Kuch characters ki power reveal nahi ki hai ,vo ho jayegi. Time hai.

Awesome update

Romamchak Update Diyaa Hee
️
Please Keep It Up ️
Besarbi See Interzar Aglaa Update Kaa

Outstanding Fabolous awesome Hot story

Amazing update

Awesome update hemya bhai

Shandar update hemya bhai

Bhai next update kab tak aa jayega

intezaar rahega hemya bhai....

Shandaar update

Bahut badhiya update

Kamal ne ek bat to ha ghar me tahalka machha diya rupali to bahut dukhi kamal ke behavior se agar usne pehle hi ye pyar kamal ko dikha diya hota to ajj ye nobat nahi aati uske sath

Mathew lagta ha amrita ki hi bat kar raha ha or vishal or sunil jarur kuchh karenge use pane ke liye lekin unhe nahi pata ki amrita kon ha

Abby or karan ka bhi lagta ha past me tagda matter lagta ha

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nice update bhai ☺

next update ka intezar rahega

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next update kab tak ayega hemya bhai?

Intejaar hai

intezaar rahega hemya bhai....

Bhai update kab tak aayega

Bro update please

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Koi na aaram se kro

Waiting for update bro

.....kub aaega update....

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Update jaldi do bhai sabar nahi ho raha

Hello, mai manta hu or bhi kam honge apko
But update ke bich me itna gap ho ja rha h ki interest hi nhi rahta
Or itne din bad bol ke bhi update nhi aa rha

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waiting for the next update....

Update kub aaega

Update please....
Bohut din ho gaya.....
Please continue....

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Kya yaar poori story ki maa chod kr rakhdi hai writer ne kab kya likh raha hai spelling itne ki samajh se bahar Or se hero ke aaspaas ki situation ka bhi pata nhi chalta pehle likha ki bike pr nikla gaya pir likhta hai ki meri scooty thi is speed nahi la paya. Yaar samjh sakta hon ki spelling mistakes ho jati hai lekin yahan to poori story ka logic hi nahi samajh pa raha hn. Writer story ko post krne se pehle ek baar khud bhi padh liya karo shayad tumhe khud samajh aa jaye to fir hame bhi samjha skate ho.

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Are Bhai ji apne shi me bhut achhi story likhi h aur thodi bhut mistakes toh ho he jati h ab jise nazarandaz Krna chahiye,,, thanks for such kind a lovely story

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Bhai kabtak ayega update ye bhi batado

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Anyway it looks like you are not capable to provide quality content to the readers who wants.

Agar kisi ki complain nahi aayi to iska yeh matlab nahi ki story me logical or spelling mistakes nahi he. khud story ki start se read karna or khud judge karna. Khair this is my last visit and last comment to this story. Anyway good luck to your different style story .

Bhai update kab aayega 17 din ho gaye

UPDATED

 

[Carry Minati]

UPDATE 4​

Shital Aur vishwas dono milkar paudho ko paani de rahe the . Ek taraf shital ye dekh rahi thi ki sab paudho ko saman paani mile vahi .

Vishwas jaise use bata raha tha ki kis paudhe ko pyas lagi ho .

" Aapne sach me ek behtrin Garden banaya hai aap jitni inka khyal rakhte hai unka koi apne bachho ka bhi nahi rakhta "

" Haa shital lekin is sab me tumhara bhi bada yogdan hai tum bhi ab jaanane lagi ho behad kuch in paudho ke baare me "

" Haa ab mujhe Paudho ki dhadkan sunayi deti hai jo ki jamin se pani upar ki aur jata Hai usase banti hai "


" Vaise Mujhe aaj kamal nahi dikha ."

" Vo Sulochna ji ke yaha gaya hai "

" Sulochana ji kon ?"

" Vo sunny nahi tha kya, Kamal ke sath rahta tha uski maa "

" Haa, vo unke sath behad bura hua , ek lauta beta tha unhe maine suna hai "

" Haa vo to hai lekin unka Apne bete main bhi behad man hai "

" Shital mujhe kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki vo unke ghar jyada rahta hoga hamse jyada "

" Haa vo to hai , aur vo us family me suit bhi karta hai hamare sab jadui logo ke bich vo is parivar ka hissa lagta bhi nahi hai "

" Bechara , Kabhi kabhi to lagta hai ki vo hamara beta hai bhi nahi "

" Aage se aisa kabhi mat boliye gaa vo hamara hi beta hai bhale hi vo ham sabke sath milta julta naa ho ab hote hai is tarah ke family me usme ham kya kar sakte hai "

Tabhi unke kuch gamle niche gir jate hai .vishawas to jaise uska para puri tarah se aasman chhu raha tha.

" Kamal, tumhe ek kaam bhi achha nahi kar sakte to kuch to thik se Kiya Karo "

Main jo abhi abhi unki mere liye baate sun Raha tha , to main bina kuch bole andar jaane laga .

" Kamal ruko, ye sab kya hai , sare paudhe kharab kar diye tumhe pata bhi hai ki kitni mehnat lagi hai inhe sambhalne me "

" Nahi mujhe nahi pata " mujhe unki baat par puri tarah se gussa aa raha tha kahna to chahta tha ki mujhse jyada aapko paudho ki fikar hai to mujhe nahi pata lekin me itna hi bol paya.

" Kamal apne papa se aise baat karte hai tumhe hamne ye sab sikhaya hai "

" Shital ise samjhakar koi fayda nahi hai , Jao aur vishal ko bulakar lao ham dono baap bete milkar sab thik karne ki koshish karte hai "

Mujhe nahi pata ki duniya sabse buri chij kya hoti hai lekin jo ab mere pitaji ne mere
Liye kahi thi vo mujhe kisi gaali se kam nahi thi . Kaha main inhe maa baap ki tarah samjhta hu aur ye sab to mujhe sirf kisi kiraye daar ki tarah maante hai .

" Vishwas aap jyada chillaiye mat , main abhi Vishal ko bulakar laati hu . Vishal ye sab thik kar dega "

Vishal sab thik kar dega , matlab kya hai .
Main aage kuch nahi bol paya agar kuch bolta to shayad ro deta mera pura gala bhar chula tha .

Mujhe itna dard ho raha tha ki vo kabhi maar se bhi nahi pada tha .

Mere bhagte hue apne kamre gaya aur futfutkar rone laga .

Vishal sabse takatvar hai , meena sabse hoshiyar hai , Payal sabse creative hai . Guddu didi sabse chulbul hai . Shweta di sabse healthy hai .
Baaki sab me kuch Naa kuch khubi hai jo mere parivar vaalo ko pasand aaye lekin ,main ek nakara insaan hu.


Maine rote rote apni khudki tayari ki mujhe khane ke liye bhi nahi puchha gaya .

Main vaise hi bina kuch khaye school chala gaya .

Tabhi mere class ke kuch log mujhe badhai dene lage .

Maine puchha to pata chala ki meri Rupali didi ki engagement hai .

Ye baat mujhe shock karne vaali nahi thi unki sunil bhaiyya ke sath shadi hone hi vaali thi .lekin unhone mujhe samay aane tak kisiko naa batane ko kaha tha .

Engagement is Saturday hi thi . isiliye mere dadaji aur dadi yaha aayi thi Nana Nani bhi aayenge .

Mujhe hi kyu Ghar ka sabse last me pata chalta hai .

Aaj phir se arjun mujhe kal ki maar ke liye chidane laga lekin use bhi mere kuch mukke to jarur Lage .

Ghar par vapas aate vakt Arjun do tin ladko ke sath bike pe aa raha tha . unhone apni bike mere dono taraf se le jaane Lage.

Main darte hue cycle tej chalane laga tabhi meri chain tut gayi aur me gir gaya .

Arjun ke gaadi par uske pichhe baithi uski bahan bhi hasne lagi .

Main apne aankho me aansu le kar cycle ki chain jodkar ghar aa gaya .

Ab mujhse ye sab sahan nahi ho raha tha . Maine soch liya ki main kuch na kuch karke shahar chhod ke chala jaunga .

Vaha par mere haal honge isase battar thodi vaise bhi is tarah ke apne hone se achha hai koi naa hi ho .

Shyam ko khane par meri chachi chacha bua aur unki sab ki puri family thi .

Main dadaji ke pass baitha hua tha subah se maine kuch nahi khaya tha jaise hi khana mere samne aaya main uspar jhaltne laga.

" Kyu kamal is tarah kyu khaa rahe ho , ham tumhara khana chhin thodi lenge " meri Rupali didi mujhe chidane lagi .

" Rupali khane do bichare ko vaise bhi kitana kamjor hai , Lagta hai bhabhi khana nahi khilati hongi " mere chacha ne majak karte hue kaha .

Sab log mere behalf par majak udate hi the isme Naya kya tha .

" Devarji ise kitna bhi khilau , ye vaise ka vaisa hi rahega Vishal thodi banne vala " ye anmol shabd kisi aur ke nahi meri Maa ke the .har baar mujhe vishal ke sath comparison , bass mujhe mauka mile to Vishal ki life battar bana dunga jis tarah se usne meri banayi hai .lekin vo chhup kaha rahane vaala tha.

" Maa tum tension mat lo apne bade bhai ke 1% bhi aaspass aa gaya na to bhi bahut hai " ye kahke sab log hasne lage .


Mere behalf par hasna to in sab kaa kaam hi ho gaya tha .Tabhi meri najar Shweta di par gayi ,



unke solder less dress ne to jaise mujhe bhula hi diya ki kya ho raha hai .

Phir tabhi Rupali di ki shadi ki baat nikli . Dadane bataya ki kuch mehman hai unke khass vo aayenge .

" Lekin pitaji ,khas ka matlab kya aise konse khass mahman hai "

" Haa hai beta khass mahman Amrit lok se kuch log aa rahe hai , Ab aur bhi log aate rahenge vaise bhi hamari betiyo ko is ghar me to rahne nahi de sakte iske liye achha hi hai "

Is baat par jaise kuch logo ka mood kharab ho gaya .khaskar Shweta didi aur guddu didi ka kyuki unhe is ghar se bahar jaana padega unka aisa dikha haara chehra dekh kar kuch to khushi mujhe jarur hui .

Vo kuch bolti uske pahle Rupali didi bol padi ,vo to jaise is baat ko lekar behad exited thi aur unki abhi tak sunil ke sath aankh me chholi chal hi rahi thi jaise Meena mere bhai ki taraf dekh rahi thi .

" Dadaji inka matlab vo sab shakti shali honge hamari tarah " usne ye baat jaise mujhe chhidate hue kahi agar naa bhi chidate hue kahti to mujhe buri hi lagti .

"Haa kuch log hai kuch log nahi hai "

" Phir to achha hai main ek jhatke main sare rishte daaro ki shakti pata kar lungi maja aayega "

" Maja kyu nahi ana hai vaise bhi vo tumhari hi shadi hai "

Rupali didi bass sharmane lagi .mujhe aaj Ashu ki yaad aane lagi vo bhi kuch is tarah mere aaspas rahti thi .uski shadi mujhse bachpan me hi fix ho gayi thi .
Kyuki mere umar ke hisab se koi dusri ladki nahi thi sivay meri sagi bahan ke.
Sab log muskura rahe the mujhe chhod kar tabhi dadaji bol pade.


" Ab sab log suno ,ye jaruri baat hai "

Sab log shant hokar sunne lage .

" To jaisa ki tumhe pata hai ki ham mrutyu lok se nahi hai Amrit lok se hai "

Ye baat mujhe nahi pata thi bass sab log kuch alag hai bass itni ,Amrit lok vaali kahani kal maine suni bhi thi .mujhe ye thoda exciting laga.sabke haa kahne par aage bole .

" vaise to main in bachho ke nana aur nani ke sath milkar tum sabko ye baat batata lekin unhe aane Mai time hai , isiliye mahman yaha aane se pahle jaan lo "

" Amrit lok se jo log aa rahe hai , vo darasal kuch saalo pahle hi yaha bhag kar aaye the , ab sab log settle ho chuke hai unke bachhe yaha ke school me padhte hai koi to apni Puri jindagi yaha hi raha hai.

Ye sab isliye kyuki Kharad jo ki ab Amrit lok pe atyachar kar raha hai usase bhag kar aur kuch parivar ki jaane bhi le raha hai apne fayde ke liye.

Usi tarah vo hamari jaan bhi lene vaala tha lekin main apni shaktiyo ka sauda karke tum sab ki jaan bachakar yaha le aaya "

"Aapki shaktiyo ka sauda karke matlab aap ke pass bhi shaktiya thi pahle " ye meri shakti jigyasak rupali didi boli .

" Haa lekin Ye shakti ke piche Jo ki tum sabme se kisi pass bhi naa ho usase jyada thi ,vo shaktiya mujhe use deni padi varna vo meri jaan le kar vo shakti hasil kar leta ,
Usne jiski bhi shaktiya li hai Uski shakti uske agle kayi janmo Tak us insaan ko nahi mil sakti "

" Iska matlab dadaji Us kharad ke pass apni khudki shaktiya nahi hai vo bass dusro ki takato par jita hai , sahi na" phir se rupali didi unhe behad jyada gyat tha vo samaj sakti thi ki ye shaktiya kaise kaam karti hai .

" Haa usne ye shaktiya bahut hi gande tariko se kamayi hai ,jisme usne khudki beto ki jaan tak le li hai "

Dadaji ye sab kahte hue rone lage , dadi unke kandhe par sahlate hue unhe shant karne lagi .Dadaji apna Ghar khoya tha shayad iska dard yaha par koi nahi samaj sakta tha sivay dadi ke main to bilkul nahi main parivar se shabd se bhi nafrat karta hu .

Shant hone ke baad bole .

" To Baaki sab bhi us Kharad se bachkar yaha pe aaye hai unhe hame apne parivaar ki tarah rakhna hamari jimmedari vo shadi tak yahi par rukenge unke swagat ki tayyari dhum dham se ho ,yahi meri ichha hai "


Like maaro bhai log ,is update me bahut si chije clear karne vaala tha lekin kuch chijo ka setup karna bhi jaruri tha , aap chahe to guess kar sakte ho ki kya hone vaala hai bahut se clues de diye hai aur mujhe comments me batana .

Ye abhi pdhna chalu Kiya hai....


Mst story hai....


Ky ye story ka writer bhai bich me se chod ke gya hai.....


Maf Krna sb achi story bich me chod ke jate hai is liye puch rha hu...


Dekhte h aage ky hota h

 

[Skb21]

Good work

 

[hemya]

Ye abhi pdhna chalu Kiya hai....


Mst story hai....


Ky ye story ka writer bhai bich me se chod ke gya hai.....


Maf Krna sb achi story bich me chod ke jate hai is liye puch rha hu...


Dekhte h aage ky hota h

Nahi Aaj hi update di hai padho. Dhanyawad aapko pasand aayi kahani.

 

[Carry Minati]

Nahi Aaj hi update di hai padho. Dhanyawad aapko pasand aayi kahani.

Thodi der lgegi

Abhi 6 update chal rha h...