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Nice update hemya bhaiUPDATE 21
Ek shant jangal tha. Jaha par dhimi hawa se peydo ke jhilmil rahe pattoke sath paani ki khadkhadne aavaj aa rahi thi.
Vaha Achanak aa pahunchi us ladki kuch samajh nahi paayi ki vo kaha hai.
Tabhi use kisi insaan ki aahat hui.
Vo us taraf pahunchi jaha par bahte jharne ke pass ek khubsurat ladki baithi hui thi.
Uske chamkile vastra kisi badi maharani ki tarah the.
Tabhi us sundar ladki ke kandho par ek ladke ka hath pada.
" Amrita tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?."
Meena ye dekh kuch samjh na paayi. voto Kamal ke atit me pahunchni chahiye thi lekin ye do log kon hai vo samajh nahi payi.
Usne bhi Kamal ki tarah galti kar yiti ki aankho me dekh liya ,jo ki vo kamal ko achanak behosh dekh yiti ki aankho me dekh liya.
Lekin ab vo yaha pahunch chuki thi.
Vo thodi aage gayi atit me hone ke karan use koi dekh nahi paa Raha tha naa hi vo kisi chij ko chhuu paa Rahi thi isiliye un dono ladka ladki ke pass chali gayi.
" Pritam, Ab kya Karu tum to apne kaamo me vyast rahti ho isiliye main hi akeli yaha aa gayi."
Tabhi Amrita ke reshmi baalo me Pritam me hath rakha aur tabhi Amrita ne ek lambi saans li.
Usne pichhe dekhne ki koshish ki lekin Pritam ne paani me Amrita ko apni parchhayi dikhate hue baalo me Maagdhi yaani chameli ke foolo ko baalo me lagaya.
Amrita khud ko Us saaf sudhre paani me Pritam ke sath dekh upar se us chameli ki sugandh se khush ho gayi.
" Aap bhi naa mujhe kabhi naraj hone hi dete khudse."
" Bhala kyu hone du , Ab itni Sundar Biwi kise milne vaali hai."
Amrita ke chehre par muskan chhati hui thi.
Jise paani me hi dekh kar Pritam ne apne hatho ko Amrita ki kamar par rakh diya.
Amrita ne bhi Apna bhaar dheere se pritam ke kandho par daal Diya.
" Kash ham dono isi tarah ki jindagi ji paate ."
" Hmm"
Amrita ne najar Pritam se milakar.
" Aap bhi naa? Yahi sab chije to kitni khubsurat hoti hai . Dheere dheere aapke sath chalna . Aapka is tarah mere liye phool laana. Asli pyaar to yahi hai. Naaki jo aapke man me basa rahta hai ."
Pritam Amrita ke taane par muskurakar.
" Meri Jaan mene 'hmm' isiliye kaha kyuki me thoda thak chuka hu Tumhare pasandida phool laane jo gaya tha. Aur vaise bhi sab ki pyaar ki apni apni paribhasha hoti hai."
Is baat par halka sa mukka pritam ko pada.
" Haa pata hai , Apni paribhasha bass ye mat bol Dena ki main tumhe sirf meri khubsurati ke vajah se pasand hu jaan le lungi "
" Aree Jaan lene ki baat mat karo , tum to mujhe har ek baat ke liye pasand ho jo tum me hai ."
" Achha , aur agar vo chije mujhme nahi rahi to ."
Amrita ne badi aankhe kar puchha.
" Achha to ab pariksha lene vaali ho ."
" Nahi bass puchh rahi hu." Amrita ne muskaan dete hue kaha.
" Haa pata hai , vaise me to tumhe
Kisi bhi sharir me pahchan lunga .bhalehi main mujhe kuch yaad naa ho lekin bass tumhara ahasaas hamesha mere sath rahega bhalehi main mar jaau isme koi dohrahi nahi hai ."
" Ye kuch jyada nahi ho gaya.
Kisiko yaad nahi rahta sirf sharir kuch badal jaane par lekin aapto baat sidhe agle janm ki kar rahe ho jaha to aapko kuch yaad bhi nahi rahega."
" Yaad rahe yaa Naa rahe lekin main tumhe dekhkar hi pahchan lunga ."
" Achha mujhe jaise puri baate agle janm tak yaad rahne vaali hai ."
Tabhi Meena ko kisiki aavaj aayi.
"Aap yaha kaise?''
Aavaj sun pichhe mudi to dekha Kamal khada tha.
" Ye kya hai aur vo dono kon hai aur Tumhare atit me kya kar rahe hai "
" Aapko usase kya lena dena ."
Meena Kamal ke aise bartav se irritate ho gai.
"Kyuki main bhi tumhare sath fasi Hui hu , aur ye baat mat bhulo ki main tumhari hone vaali bhabhi ho."
Kamal ne irritate ho kar nadi ki taraf dekha vaha par uska atit Amrita ke sath matargashti kar raha tha.Meena Kamal ko un dono ki taraf is tarah dekhta paakar soch me pad gayi.
Aur dhire dhire budbudane lagi.
" Yadi agar Dadaji ne batayi baat sahi nikli matlab vo Pritam aur Amrita vahi raja aur raani bhi ho sakte hai, aur ham yaha hai iska matlab.."
Ahsaas hote hi Meena ki aankhe badi ho gayi.
Kamal ka is par ekdum thandi pratikriya dekh vo samajh gayi.
" Nahi ye nahi ho sakta tum to .."
Kamal ne ye shabd sun Apani najar Meena ki taraf kar di.
" Kya nahi ho sakta?"
" Yahi ki tum Pritam ho."
Ye bolte hi Meena ko achanak kuch dhyan me aaya .
" Yaani Amrita ki hi Amrita hai . Isiliye tum use jaante ho ."
" Aisa aap ko kyu lagta hai?"
Meena kuch bolne vaali thi phir uske dhyan me aaya ki Kamal ka swar puri tarah se Meena ko tokane vaala tha.
" Tumhe shayad nahi pata lekin meri shaktiyan meri akal hai. Aur ab mujhe tumhara raaj pata ho chuka hai."
" Achha thik hai.aapki tahkikaat ho gayi, ab main kuch puchhu aap vaha kya kar rahi thi."
" Kuch nahi, vo to ham Yiti ko pakdne aaye the , usase hame kaam tha ."
Kamal Meena ki baat sun thoda chakit hua Abby ne to kahi hamse pahle inhe yiti ko pakdne ke liye to nahi bheja hame pata de kar.
Kamal kuch bolta .
" Kamal kya baat hai ? Tumne itni badi baat hamse kyu chhupati ham to tumhare parivar vaale hai naa ."
Kamal Meena ki baat par has diya.
" Kya aapki sach me shaktiya akal hai.agar hai to vo shaktiyan to lagata hi kisi kaam hi nahi rahi."
Meena Kamal ki baat sun samajh gayi ki usne kya kah diya use pata tha ki unhone Kamal ke sath durvyavahar kiya hai lekin us galti ko usne kabhi bhi thik karna sahi nahi samjha .
Tabhi achanak unke aaspass ka gayab hua aur jab Kamal ki aankh khuli to ek kamre me Jamin par leta hua tha.
Aasan pass khun ke dhabbe chhaye hue the.
Use Diwaar par khun se khasitne ke dhabbe dikh rahe the .
Lekin jab uski najar ek almari par padi vaha par uske aayne par ek insaan sar ke tikakar gira hua tha. Aur uski aankho me kach ke tukde the.
Ye koi aur nahi yiti tha aur uska sharir puri tarah se ghisa hua tha . Jis vajah chehra aadha nikal chuka tha . Lekin vo abhi bhi jinda tha.
Kamal ko khada hota dekh Karan ne Yiti ko chhod bola.
"Tune use bahar nikalkar achha kiya varna aaj tere sharir ko ghis kar sabun se bhi chhota kar deta."
Yiti jaise hi niche gira .vo kisiki aur dekh nahi paa Raha tha kyuki uski aankho me kanch fasi Hui thi.
Karan bhi khun me bhiga hua tha. Use dekh Shweta aur guddi to behosh hi ho gayi thi. Rupali ko to jaise ulti aa rahi thi.
Meena ne jab uthakar dekha to thodi rahat ki saans li . Aur apni bahan shweta ko dekhne lagi.
Karan ne Kamal ko sahara dekar uthaya.
" Ye mauka bhi hamare hath se gaya , mar Gaya saala ."
Kamal ne apne aasa pass dekh muh banaya .
Phirse karan bol pada.
" Ye sab kon hai tum inhe jaante ho kya ?"
" Haa meri jaanta hu . Abby ke sath kaam karti hai ."
Ye sun kar Rupali aur Meena ko bura laga. Meena soch rahi thi ki Rupali ko bataye yaa nahi lekin use laga ki ye baat pahle use Kamal se thik se kar leni chahiye.
Vo kuch samajh paate tab tak Kamal aur karan tabhi gayab ho gaye.
Ghar par.
" Mujhe to lagata hai ki Kamal ko koi buri aadat jarur lagi hogi" Sunidhi yaani shweta ki maa bol padi.
Is par Rupali thoda gussa ho gai.
" Nahi aisa bilkul nahi hai , jarur use kisi ki buri sangat lagi hogi." Rupali ne Amrita ki taraf dekhte hue kaha.
" Haa Rupali beta aisa bhi ho sakta hai varna Kamal jaisa ladka akela ghar se door kyu rahega."
Ye baat Meena ko achhi nahi lagi.
" Nahi maa Shayad ye bhi ho sakta hai ki use kisise pyaar vagere ho gaya ho ."
Is par Sab ki najare Ashu ki aur chali gayi.
Ashu thodi gussa ho gayi.
" Aap kyu us par shak kar rahe ho? Vo to aap logo se tang aa kar ghar chhod kar chala gaya aur yaha aap dosh us par mal rahi hai."
Ye baat Shital ko thodi chhubh gayi.use Samajh aa raha tha ki vo ek maa ke roop me kis tarah se haar gayi hai.
Phir jab Rupali apne kamre me pahunchi to Meena bol padi.
" Rupali di aapko nahi lagata ki ham sab ne sach me Kamal ke sath bura bartav kiya hai ."
"Meena ham Bhai bahano ke sath naa kare to kiske sath kare agar use pasand nahi aata to usme hamari galti thodi hai."
" Haa aapki baat sahi hai , lekin isase vo ham sab ko bura Maan ta hoga uska kya ."
" haa ye baat bhi hai"
Rupali ko bhi ab Meena ki baat sahi lagi.
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" Nahi mujhe kuch nahi hua ." Amrita ko apne baare me chinta karta dekh Kamal bola.
" To phir chote kaise aayi." Kamal ne baat ko ghumana chaha.
" Vo tum Ashu ko laani vaale thi Naa apne sath ."
Amrita muskurate hue.
" Kya hua , sharam nahi aati apni ek girlfriend ko dusri girlfriend ko laane ko bol rahe ho ."
Amrita ki baat sun Kamal thoda sharma gaya aur fridge ki taraf chala .
Amrita kuch samajh nahi paayi.
Tabhi vo phir se vapas aa gaya.
Aur Amrita ke hatho me chameli me phoolo ka gajara de diya.
Amrita khushi ke sath sath samjh bhi nahi paayi.
" Ye kya hai ?"
" Maine suna hai kisiko Chameli ke phool pasand hai ."
Ye sunkar Amrita ki muskurahat aur badh gayi. Uske aankho main achanak aansu aa gaye.
Kamal samajh Gaya ki ye kyu hai.Kuch bolta ki achanak Amrita uske sine se lag kar rone lagi.
Kamal ne apne hatho ko Amrita ke sar par rakha.sahlane ke baad khudse alag kiya .
Tabhi vaha par kisi ki ahat hui.
" Aap yaha kaise aai?"
" Mujhe pata tha ki Amrita jarur tumse hi Milne Jaa Rahi hogi isiliye uska pichha kar aa gayi."
Amrita bhi Meena ko is tarah se vaha dekh chauk gayi.
"Kyu aayi hai aap yaha.?"
" Mujhe tum se baat karni hai , vaha se tum hamse bina mile chale gaye."
" Boliye kya baar karni hai ?"
Amrita ne phir ishare se kaha ki vo jaa Rahi hai. Kamal ne uspar haami bhar di . Meena andar aate hi bed par baith gayi.
" To batao tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?"
" Ye sawal to mujhe aap se puchhna chahiye ki aap yaha kya kar rahi hai main to ab yaha rahta hu ."
" Aise kaise tumhara itna bada ghar hai."
" Sach me aap khudko hoshiyar maanti ho aur itni baat bhi nahi samajh pati ki vaha par koi mera parivar nahi hai."
" Aisa mat kaho , tumhare vajah se Rupali didi ki Shadi sagai nahi hui kyuki tum Ghar par nahi ho."
" Achha matlab meri kimat sirf tyoharo tak hi simit hai."
" Tum hamare liye nhi balki Ashu ke liye to aa hi sakte ho, yaa phir ab koi mil gaya to use bhi bhool Gaye ho "
Is baat par Kamal ko behad gussa aaya.lekin vo kuch nahi bola.
" Achha Maan liya ki ham sab se galti ho gayi "
" Aise kaise ye sab pyaar aap sab me achanak kaise umad aaya.kya ye meri sachhai janne ke baad hua hai."
" Nahi aisi baat nhi balki , tum ham sabse baate chhipane lage ho isiliye."
" Achha ,main chhupane laga hu yaa ab aapko pahli baar farak padne laga hai, shayad mene aap sab se sunny ke marne ki baat bhi chhipayi thi jiski vajah se tab to mere pass koi nahi aaya."
" Dekho Kamal maanti hu ham sab ne tumhe ignore Kiya hai lekin ab main apni galti sudharne ke liye taiyar hu. bass hame ek mauka do sab thik ho jayega."
" Kaise thik ho jayega kya mauka du. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha, ye achanak mehnat kyu ?"
" Tum batao to sahi hame kya karna chahiye hamari galtiya thik karne ke liye."
" Achha aisi baat hai, to thik hai " Kamal ne ek baar Meena ke sharir ko dekha aur bola.
" Apne kapde utariye."
" Kya bakwas kar rahe ho? Sharam nahi aati ?tumhari Bhai ke sath shadi karne vaali hu bahan ki tarah hu ,chhhii"
" Mene kaha naa aap kuch nahi kar sakti chali jaiye "
" Mujhe laga main samjha sakungi lekin aise insaan se to baat karna hi bekar hai .chhhhiii"
Meena gusse me vaha se muh banate hue chali gayi aur Kamal ke chehre par muskan aa gayi.
Bilal jan
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Shandaar updateUPDATE 21
Ek shant jangal tha. Jaha par dhimi hawa se peydo ke jhilmil rahe pattoke sath paani ki khadkhadne aavaj aa rahi thi.
Vaha Achanak aa pahunchi us ladki kuch samajh nahi paayi ki vo kaha hai.
Tabhi use kisi insaan ki aahat hui.
Vo us taraf pahunchi jaha par bahte jharne ke pass ek khubsurat ladki baithi hui thi.
Uske chamkile vastra kisi badi maharani ki tarah the.
Tabhi us sundar ladki ke kandho par ek ladke ka hath pada.
" Amrita tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?."
Meena ye dekh kuch samjh na paayi. voto Kamal ke atit me pahunchni chahiye thi lekin ye do log kon hai vo samajh nahi payi.
Usne bhi Kamal ki tarah galti kar yiti ki aankho me dekh liya ,jo ki vo kamal ko achanak behosh dekh yiti ki aankho me dekh liya.
Lekin ab vo yaha pahunch chuki thi.
Vo thodi aage gayi atit me hone ke karan use koi dekh nahi paa Raha tha naa hi vo kisi chij ko chhuu paa Rahi thi isiliye un dono ladka ladki ke pass chali gayi.
" Pritam, Ab kya Karu tum to apne kaamo me vyast rahti ho isiliye main hi akeli yaha aa gayi."
Tabhi Amrita ke reshmi baalo me Pritam me hath rakha aur tabhi Amrita ne ek lambi saans li.
Usne pichhe dekhne ki koshish ki lekin Pritam ne paani me Amrita ko apni parchhayi dikhate hue baalo me Maagdhi yaani chameli ke foolo ko baalo me lagaya.
Amrita khud ko Us saaf sudhre paani me Pritam ke sath dekh upar se us chameli ki sugandh se khush ho gayi.
" Aap bhi naa mujhe kabhi naraj hone hi dete khudse."
" Bhala kyu hone du , Ab itni Sundar Biwi kise milne vaali hai."
Amrita ke chehre par muskan chhati hui thi.
Jise paani me hi dekh kar Pritam ne apne hatho ko Amrita ki kamar par rakh diya.
Amrita ne bhi Apna bhaar dheere se pritam ke kandho par daal Diya.
" Kash ham dono isi tarah ki jindagi ji paate ."
" Hmm"
Amrita ne najar Pritam se milakar.
" Aap bhi naa? Yahi sab chije to kitni khubsurat hoti hai . Dheere dheere aapke sath chalna . Aapka is tarah mere liye phool laana. Asli pyaar to yahi hai. Naaki jo aapke man me basa rahta hai ."
Pritam Amrita ke taane par muskurakar.
" Meri Jaan mene 'hmm' isiliye kaha kyuki me thoda thak chuka hu Tumhare pasandida phool laane jo gaya tha. Aur vaise bhi sab ki pyaar ki apni apni paribhasha hoti hai."
Is baat par halka sa mukka pritam ko pada.
" Haa pata hai , Apni paribhasha bass ye mat bol Dena ki main tumhe sirf meri khubsurati ke vajah se pasand hu jaan le lungi "
" Aree Jaan lene ki baat mat karo , tum to mujhe har ek baat ke liye pasand ho jo tum me hai ."
" Achha , aur agar vo chije mujhme nahi rahi to ."
Amrita ne badi aankhe kar puchha.
" Achha to ab pariksha lene vaali ho ."
" Nahi bass puchh rahi hu." Amrita ne muskaan dete hue kaha.
" Haa pata hai , vaise me to tumhe
Kisi bhi sharir me pahchan lunga .bhalehi main mujhe kuch yaad naa ho lekin bass tumhara ahasaas hamesha mere sath rahega bhalehi main mar jaau isme koi dohrahi nahi hai ."
" Ye kuch jyada nahi ho gaya.
Kisiko yaad nahi rahta sirf sharir kuch badal jaane par lekin aapto baat sidhe agle janm ki kar rahe ho jaha to aapko kuch yaad bhi nahi rahega."
" Yaad rahe yaa Naa rahe lekin main tumhe dekhkar hi pahchan lunga ."
" Achha mujhe jaise puri baate agle janm tak yaad rahne vaali hai ."
Tabhi Meena ko kisiki aavaj aayi.
"Aap yaha kaise?''
Aavaj sun pichhe mudi to dekha Kamal khada tha.
" Ye kya hai aur vo dono kon hai aur Tumhare atit me kya kar rahe hai "
" Aapko usase kya lena dena ."
Meena Kamal ke aise bartav se irritate ho gai.
"Kyuki main bhi tumhare sath fasi Hui hu , aur ye baat mat bhulo ki main tumhari hone vaali bhabhi ho."
Kamal ne irritate ho kar nadi ki taraf dekha vaha par uska atit Amrita ke sath matargashti kar raha tha.Meena Kamal ko un dono ki taraf is tarah dekhta paakar soch me pad gayi.
Aur dhire dhire budbudane lagi.
" Yadi agar Dadaji ne batayi baat sahi nikli matlab vo Pritam aur Amrita vahi raja aur raani bhi ho sakte hai, aur ham yaha hai iska matlab.."
Ahsaas hote hi Meena ki aankhe badi ho gayi.
Kamal ka is par ekdum thandi pratikriya dekh vo samajh gayi.
" Nahi ye nahi ho sakta tum to .."
Kamal ne ye shabd sun Apani najar Meena ki taraf kar di.
" Kya nahi ho sakta?"
" Yahi ki tum Pritam ho."
Ye bolte hi Meena ko achanak kuch dhyan me aaya .
" Yaani Amrita ki hi Amrita hai . Isiliye tum use jaante ho ."
" Aisa aap ko kyu lagta hai?"
Meena kuch bolne vaali thi phir uske dhyan me aaya ki Kamal ka swar puri tarah se Meena ko tokane vaala tha.
" Tumhe shayad nahi pata lekin meri shaktiyan meri akal hai. Aur ab mujhe tumhara raaj pata ho chuka hai."
" Achha thik hai.aapki tahkikaat ho gayi, ab main kuch puchhu aap vaha kya kar rahi thi."
" Kuch nahi, vo to ham Yiti ko pakdne aaye the , usase hame kaam tha ."
Kamal Meena ki baat sun thoda chakit hua Abby ne to kahi hamse pahle inhe yiti ko pakdne ke liye to nahi bheja hame pata de kar.
Kamal kuch bolta .
" Kamal kya baat hai ? Tumne itni badi baat hamse kyu chhupati ham to tumhare parivar vaale hai naa ."
Kamal Meena ki baat par has diya.
" Kya aapki sach me shaktiya akal hai.agar hai to vo shaktiyan to lagata hi kisi kaam hi nahi rahi."
Meena Kamal ki baat sun samajh gayi ki usne kya kah diya use pata tha ki unhone Kamal ke sath durvyavahar kiya hai lekin us galti ko usne kabhi bhi thik karna sahi nahi samjha .
Tabhi achanak unke aaspass ka gayab hua aur jab Kamal ki aankh khuli to ek kamre me Jamin par leta hua tha.
Aasan pass khun ke dhabbe chhaye hue the.
Use Diwaar par khun se khasitne ke dhabbe dikh rahe the .
Lekin jab uski najar ek almari par padi vaha par uske aayne par ek insaan sar ke tikakar gira hua tha. Aur uski aankho me kach ke tukde the.
Ye koi aur nahi yiti tha aur uska sharir puri tarah se ghisa hua tha . Jis vajah chehra aadha nikal chuka tha . Lekin vo abhi bhi jinda tha.
Kamal ko khada hota dekh Karan ne Yiti ko chhod bola.
"Tune use bahar nikalkar achha kiya varna aaj tere sharir ko ghis kar sabun se bhi chhota kar deta."
Yiti jaise hi niche gira .vo kisiki aur dekh nahi paa Raha tha kyuki uski aankho me kanch fasi Hui thi.
Karan bhi khun me bhiga hua tha. Use dekh Shweta aur guddi to behosh hi ho gayi thi. Rupali ko to jaise ulti aa rahi thi.
Meena ne jab uthakar dekha to thodi rahat ki saans li . Aur apni bahan shweta ko dekhne lagi.
Karan ne Kamal ko sahara dekar uthaya.
" Ye mauka bhi hamare hath se gaya , mar Gaya saala ."
Kamal ne apne aasa pass dekh muh banaya .
Phirse karan bol pada.
" Ye sab kon hai tum inhe jaante ho kya ?"
" Haa meri jaanta hu . Abby ke sath kaam karti hai ."
Ye sun kar Rupali aur Meena ko bura laga. Meena soch rahi thi ki Rupali ko bataye yaa nahi lekin use laga ki ye baat pahle use Kamal se thik se kar leni chahiye.
Vo kuch samajh paate tab tak Kamal aur karan tabhi gayab ho gaye.
Ghar par.
" Mujhe to lagata hai ki Kamal ko koi buri aadat jarur lagi hogi" Sunidhi yaani shweta ki maa bol padi.
Is par Rupali thoda gussa ho gai.
" Nahi aisa bilkul nahi hai , jarur use kisi ki buri sangat lagi hogi." Rupali ne Amrita ki taraf dekhte hue kaha.
" Haa Rupali beta aisa bhi ho sakta hai varna Kamal jaisa ladka akela ghar se door kyu rahega."
Ye baat Meena ko achhi nahi lagi.
" Nahi maa Shayad ye bhi ho sakta hai ki use kisise pyaar vagere ho gaya ho ."
Is par Sab ki najare Ashu ki aur chali gayi.
Ashu thodi gussa ho gayi.
" Aap kyu us par shak kar rahe ho? Vo to aap logo se tang aa kar ghar chhod kar chala gaya aur yaha aap dosh us par mal rahi hai."
Ye baat Shital ko thodi chhubh gayi.use Samajh aa raha tha ki vo ek maa ke roop me kis tarah se haar gayi hai.
Phir jab Rupali apne kamre me pahunchi to Meena bol padi.
" Rupali di aapko nahi lagata ki ham sab ne sach me Kamal ke sath bura bartav kiya hai ."
"Meena ham Bhai bahano ke sath naa kare to kiske sath kare agar use pasand nahi aata to usme hamari galti thodi hai."
" Haa aapki baat sahi hai , lekin isase vo ham sab ko bura Maan ta hoga uska kya ."
" haa ye baat bhi hai"
Rupali ko bhi ab Meena ki baat sahi lagi.
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" Nahi mujhe kuch nahi hua ." Amrita ko apne baare me chinta karta dekh Kamal bola.
" To phir chote kaise aayi." Kamal ne baat ko ghumana chaha.
" Vo tum Ashu ko laani vaale thi Naa apne sath ."
Amrita muskurate hue.
" Kya hua , sharam nahi aati apni ek girlfriend ko dusri girlfriend ko laane ko bol rahe ho ."
Amrita ki baat sun Kamal thoda sharma gaya aur fridge ki taraf chala .
Amrita kuch samajh nahi paayi.
Tabhi vo phir se vapas aa gaya.
Aur Amrita ke hatho me chameli me phoolo ka gajara de diya.
Amrita khushi ke sath sath samjh bhi nahi paayi.
" Ye kya hai ?"
" Maine suna hai kisiko Chameli ke phool pasand hai ."
Ye sunkar Amrita ki muskurahat aur badh gayi. Uske aankho main achanak aansu aa gaye.
Kamal samajh Gaya ki ye kyu hai.Kuch bolta ki achanak Amrita uske sine se lag kar rone lagi.
Kamal ne apne hatho ko Amrita ke sar par rakha.sahlane ke baad khudse alag kiya .
Tabhi vaha par kisi ki ahat hui.
" Aap yaha kaise aai?"
" Mujhe pata tha ki Amrita jarur tumse hi Milne Jaa Rahi hogi isiliye uska pichha kar aa gayi."
Amrita bhi Meena ko is tarah se vaha dekh chauk gayi.
"Kyu aayi hai aap yaha.?"
" Mujhe tum se baat karni hai , vaha se tum hamse bina mile chale gaye."
" Boliye kya baar karni hai ?"
Amrita ne phir ishare se kaha ki vo jaa Rahi hai. Kamal ne uspar haami bhar di . Meena andar aate hi bed par baith gayi.
" To batao tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?"
" Ye sawal to mujhe aap se puchhna chahiye ki aap yaha kya kar rahi hai main to ab yaha rahta hu ."
" Aise kaise tumhara itna bada ghar hai."
" Sach me aap khudko hoshiyar maanti ho aur itni baat bhi nahi samajh pati ki vaha par koi mera parivar nahi hai."
" Aisa mat kaho , tumhare vajah se Rupali didi ki Shadi sagai nahi hui kyuki tum Ghar par nahi ho."
" Achha matlab meri kimat sirf tyoharo tak hi simit hai."
" Tum hamare liye nhi balki Ashu ke liye to aa hi sakte ho, yaa phir ab koi mil gaya to use bhi bhool Gaye ho "
Is baat par Kamal ko behad gussa aaya.lekin vo kuch nahi bola.
" Achha Maan liya ki ham sab se galti ho gayi "
" Aise kaise ye sab pyaar aap sab me achanak kaise umad aaya.kya ye meri sachhai janne ke baad hua hai."
" Nahi aisi baat nhi balki , tum ham sabse baate chhipane lage ho isiliye."
" Achha ,main chhupane laga hu yaa ab aapko pahli baar farak padne laga hai, shayad mene aap sab se sunny ke marne ki baat bhi chhipayi thi jiski vajah se tab to mere pass koi nahi aaya."
" Dekho Kamal maanti hu ham sab ne tumhe ignore Kiya hai lekin ab main apni galti sudharne ke liye taiyar hu. bass hame ek mauka do sab thik ho jayega."
" Kaise thik ho jayega kya mauka du. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha, ye achanak mehnat kyu ?"
" Tum batao to sahi hame kya karna chahiye hamari galtiya thik karne ke liye."
" Achha aisi baat hai, to thik hai " Kamal ne ek baar Meena ke sharir ko dekha aur bola.
" Apne kapde utariye."
" Kya bakwas kar rahe ho? Sharam nahi aati ?tumhari Bhai ke sath shadi karne vaali hu bahan ki tarah hu ,chhhii"
" Mene kaha naa aap kuch nahi kar sakti chali jaiye "
" Mujhe laga main samjha sakungi lekin aise insaan se to baat karna hi bekar hai .chhhhiii"
Meena gusse me vaha se muh banate hue chali gayi aur Kamal ke chehre par muskan aa gayi.
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Kal aa rahi hai agli update shayad aaj bhi aa sakti hai , bhai kya karu ab time nahi milta. aage se 15 din nahi 7 din me ek update Dene ki koshish karunga.
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UPDATE 22
" Meena tum ye kya baat kar rahi ho , Kamal is tarah ki chij kabhi bhi nahi kah sakta " Meena ne jab use Kamal ne kya kaha bataya to Rupali ko bharosa nahi ho raha tha.
" Nahi Didi main bilkul sahi kah rahi hu, Use jab maine kaha ki main uski kya madat kar sakti hu in sab to usne sidhe mujhe bahut ajib najar se tada aur mujhe kapde utarne ko bola ."
" Kyu? Aisa kyu karega vo , Tum uske Bhai se shadi karogi bachpan se ham ek parivar hai vo aisa soch bhi kaise sakta hai, jarur kuch bure kaam vo kar raha hai us din vo jis insaan ke sath tha dekha nahi kis tarah se usne Yiti ki jaan li."
" Haa main isiliye to Darr rahi hu , kahi hamare hath se naa nikal jaaye ."
" Haa , vo ham sab se baat bhi nahi karna chahta ,itni nafrat kaise kar sakta hai koi upar se Shital mami ki halat bhi bahot kharad hai Kab se bass roye Jaa Rahi hai aur khud ko koss rahi hai ."
" Haa Meena baat sahi hai , lekin ham is tarah use chhod bhi nahi sakte kuch to jarur sochna padega."
" In sab me shayad hamari madat sulochna ji hi kar sakti hai Kamal unko maanta bhi hai ."
" Lekin vo bhi to hamse thik se baat nahi karti "
" Vo baat hamse Is liye nahi karti kyuki Kamal ne ham sab ke baare me galat salat unhe bataya ki ham uske sath bura vyavahar karte hai ."
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Tripti yaani atit ki Samiksha samandar ki laharon me Badi si jahaj me baith dekh rahi thi.
" Tripti kya soch rahi ho?"
Achanak Aavaj sun vo us taraf mudi vaha par Sujaan khada tha.
Vo pass aakar tripti ke pass baith gaya.
" Kya baat hai Tripti , phir se apni Jaan dene kaa irada to nahi hai naa ."
Tripti ne sujaan ki baat par nakli hasi dikhakar.
" Ab tum marne thodi doge , us din tumne mujhe bachakar galti ki kitni himmat se apno aap ko khatam karne vaali thi ."
Tripti ke chehre dukh saaf najar aa raha tha.
" Lekin kyu ? Tumhare sath jo bhi hua galat hua lekin tum badal nahi sakti in sabko Tumhe un sab ko bhoolkar nayi jindagi shuru karni chahiye "
Ye kahte hue Sujaan ne apna sar Tripti ki aur badhaya .
Tripti ko jab dhyan aaya ki Sujaan kya karne vaala hai . Usne dhakkka de kar use khudse door kiya .
"Sujaan ye kya kar rahe ho?"
" Nayi shuruwat mujhe pata hai ki tum Usase kitni nafrat karti ho , main tumhe yaha se bahot door le jaunga phirse tumhe ek nayi jindagi jine ka mauka milega."
" Sujaan sapne dekhna band karo , aur aage se mere pass bhi mat aana .tum kharad ka naam bhi lene se darte ho aur tum mujhe yaha se bachaoge . tum achhe insaan ho lekin mere jindagi me pyaar naam ki chij khatam ho chuki hai."
Kuch vakt baad jab tripti Kharadke pass pahunchi vo bade se hall me jo jahaj ke andar tha kuch logo ke sath khaana khane baitha hua tha . Laal rang ki saree pahan vaha par Tripti khadi thi .
Tripti ko dekh kharad muskura diya .Tripti bhi jhuti muskan use dikhane me mahir ho gayi thi.
Tripti kharad se thodi door mahman delh baith gayi. Kuch mahmaan the vaha shayad koi bade mahatvpurn log the.
" Tripti yaha aao baitho mere pass ." Kharad ki baat sun tripti muskurate hue mahmano ki taraf dekhne lagi .
" Tripti unki taraf mat dekho sabko pata hai hamare rishte ke baare me, tum god me bhi baithogi to koi kuch nahi bolega " ye bolkar kharad hasne laga sath hi main baaki log bhi hasne lage the.
Kharad Tripti ko naa hilta dekh.
" Tripti lagta hai , tum mujhse in logo ka nuksaan karvana chahti ho" kharad ki baat par uske saamne baitha ek mota insan jhuti muskan ke sath hasne laga. kyuki use bhi pata tha ki kharad ki is baat kya matlab hai.
Vo mota insaan tripti ko aankho se hi vinti karne laga . Tripti phir haar man uthi aur Kharad ke pass baith gayi.
" Dekha koi kuch bola?kuch hua? kuch nahi ."
Tripti ne apna sar niche kar haa me hilaya. Kharad se use khudki jaan ka nahi balki bakiyo ki jaan ka tha . Jise bhi vo Tripti ke liye marta Tripti uska jimmedar khudko maanti jis tarah vo Karan ki maut ka jimmedar khudko maanti thi ki uske liye kharad ne Karan ko maar diya hai.
Tabhi ekdum se sabke upar khun ki chhite ud gayi.
Tripti ne aage dekha vo motha sa aadmi us lohe ki kursi se puri tarah pichak gaya tha.
Kharad ye dekh hasne laga.
'' kya ye har baar isi tarah ki filme kyu dekhti ho?, Hero ne heroine ko bachaya aur pyaar ho gaya."
beti ke hath se remote lete hue Sulochana boli.
" Maa aap bhi naa aapko agar koi chij pasand nahi hai isaka matlab nahi ki aap har chij ko galat bolti jaaye."
Sulochana jise tv serial dekhni thi . Divya ko samjhta hue.
" Jaao dekho tumhe jo dekhna hai , koi achhi serial lagaati to achha hota usme bhi heroine ko ek amir ladka bachata hai."
" Nahi mujhe ye dekhne do serial ka episode kal dopahar ko bhi dekh sakti hai aap ."Sulochana apni beti se Tv channel badlne par jhagda kar rahi thi.
" Vaise maa aapko pata hai, vo Rajat uncle gayab hai mujhe meri dost bata rahi thi jo unke ghar ke pass rahti hai ."
Divya ki baat sun sulochana chinta me chali gayi.usne upar se kitne din hue the Kamal ko tak nahi dekha tha.
" Divya beta Kamal bhaiyya nahi dikhte kya school me ."
" Nahi naa pata nahi Kamal ji ko kya hua ."
" Ye kamal ji kya hai , bhaiyya bola karo bhai hai ."
" Nahi mera bhai sirf sunny hi hai."
Divya ki baat sun Sulochana aankh badi kar dikhane lagi.
" Vo mera dost hai sabse achha , bhai ka bhi to achha dost tha."
Tabhi bahar se aavaj aaya.
" Divya ka bhi dost hai , kon dosti karna chahega aisi chudel se."
Achanak Kamal ki aavaj sun Divya bhagkar Kamal ke sine se lag gayi.Kamal ko itni dino baad dekh Sulochana khush hui aur gussa bhi ho gayi lekin itne dino baad Kamal aaya hai soch use bhagana nahi chahti thi.
" Kamal ji ham sab aapke hi baare me baat kar rahe the ."
Kamal ne Divya ke muh se bhaiyya na sunkar muh bana liya .
" Kamalji bhai ko aise naam se thodi bulate hai ."
" Lekin aap mere bhai thodi hai aap to mere dost hai."
" Achha matlab main tumhara Bhai nahi hu."
Divya ko samajh aa gaya ki Kamal ko ye bura laga isiliye vo maafi mangne lagi.
" Nahi Aisi baat nahi hai , main to majak kar rahi thi abhi maa ke sath vahi baat chalu thi isiliye maine aapse majak kar li."
" Ye majak mujhe to bilkul pasand nahi aaya .mere liye tum hi ek lauti bahan ho ."
Tabhi Sulochana boli.
" Achha mahashay ko dukh ho raha hai aur itne dino se gayab the uska kya naa milna naa kuch kaha the ."
" Vo darasal main dusre shahar gaya hua tha."
" To batakar to jaana tha tumhare parivar se bhi log tumhe yaha dekhne aaye the unhe nahi to mujhe to batakar jaate ."
Kamal ne dimag daudakar karan dhundne laga.
" Vo main us din yahi batane aaya tha lekin bata nahi paya."
" Kyu?" Sulochana ke muh se nikalte hi use dhyan aaya ki aakhri baar jab Kamal usase mila tha to kya hua tha.
" Thik hai tum hath per dho lo tumhare liye khana lagati hun aaj tum yahi sovoge ."
Divya achanak kya hua samajh nahi payi.
Jab hath pair dhone bathroom me bahar se sulachana ne aavaj diya . Darwaja kholkar Kamal ne ishare se puchha 'kya hua?'
" Kamal shayad mere bhav dekh us din hamari ye baat rah gayi lekin tum mujhe bina bataye aage se kahi nahi Jaa sakte kahi nahi . Aur bhalehi agar mujhse koi galti hui ho to tum mujhe koi bhi saja do lekin aise kabhi bhi mat jaana."
Sulochana ko is tarah dekh Kamal jhut bolne par pachtava ho raha tha. Lekin vo kaise batata isiliye mood thik karne ke liye majak karte hue bola.
" Nahi , uski koi jarurat nahi hai , is umar me mujhase maar khayegi achha thodi lagega "
" Achha , matlab mujhse galti hui to saja ke taur par marne vaale ho mujhe nahi ."
" Nahi maine aisa thodi kaha main to bass ye kah raha tha ki marna aapko achha nahi lagta ."
" Achha , maar Lena achha dikhne se kya matlab ."
Kamal aur sulochna ekdusre ki baat par phir has diye. Sulochana ko Kamal ke muh se aise baate sun ajib to laga lekin vo kuch bolna nahi chahti thi.
Har jagah rakh thi , ghor jal raha tha.
"Oowooooooo"
Bhediyon ki chikhe sunai dene lagi.
Karan puri tarah hatash tha. Usi ke saamne Kharad ne uski jindagi khatam kar di thi.
Khun se lathpath Samiksha niche padi hui thi uska naam lekar Karan ro raha tha.
Sath hi gusse se puri takat ke sath Kharad ki aur badha.
Kharad jo Ab tak kutil muskan liye khada tha. Karan ke muh se Samiksha ka naam sun. Teji se karan ki taraf dauda.
Agle pal Karan kuch Samajh pata Vo ek Anjan jagah par pahoch chuka tha. Phir bhi Apni premika ko pukarata raha.
" Samiksha"
"Samiksha"
"Sami...
Yahi chikhte hue Karan ki nind khuli.
Jab usne apne pass dekha to paya Abby baithi hui thi.
Vo puri tarah se karan par chidi hui thi.
" Karan ye sab kya ho raha hai?"
" Kya ? Main kuch samjha nahi "
" Yahi Tum kya karne vaale ho ,Tumne Yiti ki jaan le li .Tumne kabhi gaav ki raksha ke liye kisiki jaan nahi li lekin ab "
Karan bina kuch bole khada hua . Shirt ke bina Karan ko dekh Abby ka hath apne muh pe chala gaya.
" Karan ye kya hai?"
Karan ne khud par najar daal kar muskurate hue bola.
" Kuch nahi , bass main hu ."
Abby jo gussa hone aai lekin Karan ki ye halat dekh Dukhi ho gayi.
" Karan Tum in sab ghao ke sath jinda kaise ho?"
" Main jinda hu hi nahi ,main to usi din mar gaya tha bass us kharad ki maut dekh jo bacha hai vo bhi mit jayega."
" Nahi Karan , Main tumhari galtiyo par maaf karti hu lekin tum apni jindagi sirf khun aur badle ke liye nahi ji sakte , tumhari vajah se bhi bahot si jindagi tabah hui hai Lekin "
Abby aage kuch bol naa payi.
" Mere vajah se jo bhi jindagi tabah hui hai usme meri galti nahi thi, agar tumhe lagta hai ki meri galti thi to main ye vichar badlna nahi chahunga ,lekin Main jinda sirf Mera badla lene ke liye hu baaki koi karan nahi hai tum mujhse vo bhi nahi chhin sakti "
Abby Karan ki baat sun shant ho gayi. Jis insaan ko vo chahti thi jiske liye pyaar tha use is tarah dekh nahi paa Rahi thi. Isiliye bhari man se bol padi.
" To kya socha hai ,Main bhi apne pita ki jaan ka badla Lena chahti hu lekin Kharad ko maarna lagbhag naamumkin hai."
" Kharad ko Maarne me hamara sabse bade hathiyar Kamal aur tum hi Abby "
Abby chaukte hue " Main? Kaise?"
" Use maarne ke liye hame sirf use nahi uske samrajya ko nashta karna hoga jisase vo galtiya jarur karega kyuki uske sabse pyaari chhij Uska Ahankar hai "
" Lekin usme main kyaa kaam aaungi? , tum Pritam ke naam par sena bana sakte ho Abhi bhi bahot log hai jo usme maante hai"
"Tum me bhi to kuch log maante hai."
Abby ko jab Karan kya kah raha hai samaj aaya vo gusse me bol padi.
" Tum Ghor gaav ke sochna bhi un logo ne Tumhari galti ki vajah se kitna Saha hai main tumhe aur kuch karne nahi dungi ."
" Jaise ki Kharad phir se kuch gaav vaalo ke sath kuch karne nahi vaala , aas pass ke bahot se gaav ke rajaone usase hath mila liya hai , use agar janta ki najaro me Devta Banna hai to aor bhi Rajao ko apne sath laana padega jisase chhote chhote Rajya par apna niyantran aur bhi majboot kar sake iske liye vo Ghor vaasiyo ko bali ka bakra jarur banayega.
Isiliye Tumhe apna adhikar apne pitake pad par rakhna chahiye "
" Nahi tum pagal ho chuke ho , main apne pita ki jagah kaise le sakti hu Sultan sirf mard ban sakta hai aurat nahi "
Abby ne jo kaha tha vo ekdum sahi tha , us gaav me ladki sultan nahi ban sakti thi jise log puri tarah se maante the.
" Lekin damad to jarur ban sakta hai "
" Kya?" Abby kyu pata nahi thodi khush ho gayi, bhalehi ab paristhithi badal gayi thi lekin Karan usase shadi karega, ye baat usne kitni baar sapno me dekhi thi socha tha bass vahi janti thi.
" Haa , mujhe pata hai ki tumhe main pasand nahi hu is vakt lekin hamari shadi sirf un logo ko dikhane ke liye hogi jisase main Sultan banunga aur ham dono aage kya karna hai kar payenge."
like kardo ,apne apne opinion batao.
Story me konsa character achha laga kon bura hai is baare me batao main jaldi sabko replys dunga. Story aapko dark lag rahi hai aur dark chalega yaa yahi bass batao. Agli Update aap sabko bharosa nahi hoga mujhpe lekin 27 28 tarikh ko aayegi tab main free hu tab aayegi.
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