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Mst update, akhir maa bete aamne samne aagye.
Waiting for next edition.
Thank you, next edition kal aayega.
Bahut hi badhiya or shandar update

Starting me jo jamel ha lagta ha aghor ganv per apna taj karna chhahta ha abby ke pita ki mrityu ke bad kya pata ye kharad se mila hua ho

Idhar bhai ye shweta or guddi ki conversation se lagta ha is shweta ko kisi sarthak nam ke ladke se pyar ho gaya ha lekin kya sarthak normal insan ha ya nahi


Idhar asmita ke samne to ashu natak kar rahi thi shayad kamal se akele me romance karna chah rahi thi jo ki kar bhi liya

Or bhai last me kamal ka pura pariwar kamal ko lene aa pahuncha idhar maa fir attitude dikha rahi ha bhai bol to aise rahi thi ki kamal itni asani se man jayega or kamal ko dara dhamake ye use asani se le jayenge kher kamal ne to shital ke muh pe bol diya or use maa se nahi shital ji se sambodhit kiya idhar shital ko jhatka lag gaya kyonki koi beta apni maa ko maa na bole to samjh lo ki uske samne tumhari value kya ha or last me kamal ne apni apbiti ka jara si bate suna di jo ki sach ha ki kabhi kabhi to uske pariwar walon ne use khana bhi nahi diya tha

Or dekha nahi tejaswini chachi abhi bhi apne attitude me ha bhai mujhe to lagta ha ki kamal ko abhi hi in sabke samne apni thodi powers show kar deni chhahiye jisse in sab ko jor ka jhtka dheere se lage

Waiting for next update
Dhanyawad Bhai , main is tarah se vistar se Kya achha laga hai aapko kya nahi is baat ko appreciate karta hu. Audience ke jaise bhi reaction ho, vo jis tarah se sab ke dikh rahe hai use pata chalta hai ki story sahi taraf Jaa Rahi hai isiliye sabka dhanyawad aur aapka bhi.
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UPDATE 25

" Kamal kya tha ye?" Ashu ne Sab ke jaane ke baad kaha. Uski maa jaate vakt gusse bhari aankho se Ashu ko dekh kar gayi thi. Vahi Shital ki aankho me paani bhar aaya tha. Meena bolna chahti thi lekin use bhi shabd nahi sujh rahe the, aur vo baat ko aur bigadna nahi chahti thi. Usne kuch to plan banaya tha vo sab usi hisab se ho aisa chahti thi. Isiliye usne Rupali ko bhi kuch bolne se rok diya.

Yahi Ashu bhi thodi Darr gayi thi ki sidhe is prakar se Apne parivaar ke saamne Kamal ye sab bol diya is vajah se Nirmala yaani Ashu ki maa Ashu par gussa naa ho jaye.

Vo kuch bhi ho jaye lekin apni maa ki taraf ek aadarsh ki tarah dekhti thi isiliye kitni bhi naraj ho maa use mana hi sakti thi.

" Ashu tum chinta mat karo?"

" Kya chinta nahi Karu , main dimag ko lagbhag padh sakti hu mujhe pata hai ki meri maa tum par to naraj hai lekin mujh par hi hai."

" Kya? Tum par kyu naraj hogi bua tumne kya Kiya hai?"

" Vo mujh par tumhare ye sasuji vaale natak se gussa hai,shayad unhe lag raha hoga ki ab tumhari maa is baat ka batangad banayegi." Ashu ne ye baat chinta hatakar kah di.

" Accha Aisa hai?, vo sab chhodo aur ye batao tumhe kya hua tha."
Pahle vo meri baat samjh nahi payi lekin samjhte hi vo Sharma gayi.

" Kuch nahi "

" Are bolo na, kya hua tha?" mere is tarah se jor Dene se gaal uske sharm se laal hone Lage.

" Chhodo mujhe nahi karni koi baat." Ye kahkar vo uthne ko Hui Maine hath se khich kar god me both Diya.

" Ye kya kar rahe ho tum?" Ashu apne aap ko pichhe se baho me pakar. Main ab Bina underwear ke sirf pant pahna hua tha isiliye Ashu ke kulho ki naramayi mujhe mahsoos hone lagi.

" Ye matlab thik hai , apna kaam hote hi kat lo yaha se." Meri baat sun usne apna sar dusri taraf kar muskurane lagi.

" Achha thik hai batati hu, pahle chhodo mujhe."

" Nahi , pahle batao."

" To baat aisi hai ki .." vo bolte bolte sharmane lagi.

" Haa bolo ab kya sharmana sab to ho chuka hai." Meri baat par mujhe kohni pet me maari.

" Darsal us din se mera man in sab ke prati badhta jaa raha hai kya malum kyu?"

" Kiske prati aur kab se." Mene jaan bujhakar tang khichhte hue kaha.

" Usi din se jab hamne ye sab kiya tha tab se, jyada natak mat karo tumhe bhi pata hai main kis chij ki baat kar rahi hu"

" Achha baba sorry, lekin tumne uske agle din to kuch aur kaha tha."

" Haa mujhe pata hai , mujhe laga main apni bhavnaye sambhal paungi lekin bitate dino ke sath meri ichha aur badhne lagi thi , kal raat ko to main so bhi nahi paayi mere pair chalne ke kabil bhi nahi the, main yaha kaise aayi mujhe hi pata hai."

Ashu ki baat sun main puri tarah stabdh ho gaya . Ye kuch jyada hi ho gaya tha. Use kuch samjh nahi aaya lekin abhi ke liye Ashu ko vo darana nahi chahta tha.

" Achha phir itni taklif lene ki kya jarurat thi pahle hi bata deti , chhodo lekin main hu naa usi ke liye. Vaise ye bhi thik hai mujhe to laga tha ki shadi tak rukna padega ki kya malum?" Meri baat sun Ashu gusse se mujhe dekhne lagi.

" Mujhe nahi pata tha ki main in sab chijo me main kamjor niklungi." Ashu ki nirasha bhari aavaj sun mene use aur apni aur Kass liya.

" Tum chinta mat karo , tumhara jab bhi man ho ham karenge lekin ek shart par."

Meri baat par pichhe chehra meri taraf kar aashu ne mere gale me hath daale.

" Konsi shart."


" Shart bass itni si hai ki jab tumhara man ho tab to karenge lekin meri man ho tab bhi."

" Nahi nahi, mujhe nahi manjur ye shart tumhara roj bhi man ho sakta hai upar se tumhare pass Asmita, Amrita bhi hai ."

"Aisa nahi mera adhikar tum par bhi utna hi hona chahiye jitna tumhara hai."

" Thik hai ,lekin main Asmita ji yaa Amrita ke sath milkar kuch bhi nahi karungi , ham dono sirf akele."

" Bhala aisa kyu?"

" Nahi , mujhe vaise hi bura lagta hai tumhe baat kar upar se mujhse vo dekha nahi Jaa sakta, mene tumhe hamesha apna akele ka maana hai , mere siva kisika adhikar nahi , isiliye main tumhe dekh nahi sakti kisi aur ke sath."

Mujhe Ashu ki baat sun bura laga.

" Ashu ,Tum ye baat jarur yaad rakho ki tumhari mere dil me ek behad anokhi jagah hai aur vo koi nahi le sakta . Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye." Meri baat sunkar uski mujhe gale laga diya.

" Thank you , mujhe yahi sunna tha."

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Ghanghor andhere me jamal kuch saathiyo ko lekar kahi jaa raha tha.

" Kuch pata chala."

" Nahi malik Ab tak kuch pata nahi chala lekin vo shaitani machhli hame kabhi bhi chakma de sakti hai."

" Satark raho Tambai aur baaki bhediye bhi satark hai hame bass Kaise bhi karke ye ilaka paar karna hai phir hame usase koi khatra nahi."

Ye kahte hi vo sab paani ki tarango ko niharne lage.

Tarange chand ki roshni ki vajah se chamak Rahi thi. Bhediye itne ho kar bhi us roshni par koi prabhav nahi pad sakta tha kyuki vishal kaay samundar me roshni ka bachav karna mushkil tha.

Tabhi paani ki andar se un sab ko kuch dikhayi dene laga.

Vo drishya kuch Aisa tha ki koi bada sa jahaj samudar se upar aa raha ho lekin vo koi jahaj nahi ek badi si machli thi.


Uska sharir ka kuch bhaag samundar se baahar aate hi Bhediye ke muh se tak aavaj aani band ho gayi.

Kisi ki aavaj bhi nahi nikal Rahi thi, jaise unhe lag raha tha ki koi bolega to un ki jaan chali jayegi.

Tabhi jamal ne apna thuk gitakate hue bol pada.

" Kisiko darne ki jarurat nahi ham bass sidhe chalte rahna hai."

Uska aise bolte hi sab Darr ki najar se Jamal ko dekhne lage.
Tambai jo ki ek khunkhar bhediya tha vo Darr kya hota hai Jamal ko dikha rha tha. Saakhoo ke baad koi takatvar bhediya tha to Tambai lekin use is tarah darta dekh uski himmat bhi dol gayi.

Tabhi ek insaan jiska naam Sanjay tha jamal ke pass jaa kar dhire se bola.

"Malik vo shaitani machhli hai , uska hame use sar kis taraf hai kuch nahi pata ye uska konse bhag ki vajah se ubhar aaya hai vo bhi nahi malum . Hamare jahaj se jyada to us shaitan ki chaudai hai aur vo kitna lamba hai ab tak kisi ko nahi pata. "

" To phir kya kare itni mehnat par paani nahi pher sakte."

" aapki baat sahi hai lekin ye Shaitan Kharad se bhi takatvar hai , ham pagalpan me apni Jaan nahi gava sakte , kisi aur din ham niklenge, isase aage gaye to usase hame koi nahi bacha payega."

Jamal bhi bahut Darr Gaya tha, lekin use paar karna hi tha, use ye bhi pata tha ki vah jaanvar se panga lena aatmahatya hogi. isliye usne mudne ka ishara kiya.jis par sabne ek rahat ki saans li aur jaldi se jahaj ko dusri aur modne lage.

Jamal hatash ho kar baith gaya . Aisa dekh Sanjay uske pass pahuncha.

" Jamal hatash hone ki koi baat nahi hai ,ham nayi jagah jald hi dhundenge ham sab ghor vaasiyo ke liye rahne ke liye."

" Lekin kaise pure ghor vaasi purani kathao me uljhe hue hai ki Ghor vaasiyo ko is Ghor ko chhod kar nahi jaana chahiye ."

" Haa lekin ham jarur kuch rasta nikalenge hame ye rasta dhudne me hafto nikal Gaye aur hafte lagakar naya rasta dhundenge jo us samundar ke saanf ke bich naa aaye."

Jamal ne beman se sar niche kar diya.

" Ab kar bhi kya sakte hai , kharad ne aas pass ke gaav le hi liye hai vaha ke sultan aur mukhiyo ke sath milkar ,aur yaha par shabhay labhi bhi Sukaant ke rasto par chal raha hai.isiliye mera gaav ka netrutv karna achha rahega."

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" Aur tumhe lagta hai ye shabhay yaa abhay jo bhi hai, tumhe sultan bana dega gaav ka."

"Mujhe nahi vo to Sukant ke jamai ko sultan banayenge, upar se Hamare pass saakhoo bhi hai. Bhediyon ko raaja." Karan ki baat Kamal ko samjhne me vakt laga.

" Sukant ka jamai? Kon, ...
Ek minute matlab tum Abby se shadi karne vaale ho " is par Amrita ne Abby ki taraf dekha. Abby ne haa me sar hilaya.

" Lekin vaha jaakar karenge kya?" Ye sawal Amrita ne puchha .

" Baat sidhi si hai ,pahle sab logo ko apne vishwas me lenge jisase ham kharad ke khilaf bagwat kar payenge."Karan ki baat par Abby puri tarah se sahmat nahi thi lekin
Uske pass rasta nahi tha.

" Lekin sabka vishwas kaise jitenge." Kamal ne Karan ko sawal Kiya. Jis par Abby boli.

" Unki samsya ka nivaran karke,
hame pahle unki jo samasya hai jaise ki un par jo hamle ho rahe hai ek purani galti ki vajah se, uska nivaran karenge suraksha denge." Ye kahte hue Abby ne Karan ki aur dekha.

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" Didi kya hua?" Guddi aur shweta apni badi bahne rupali aur meena ko achanak sabke chehre utare hue dekh boli.

Tabhi Rupali ne Ashu ki taraf dekhte hue kaha.

" Kya hona tha , iske dulhe raaja naraj hai dhang se kisise baat nhi kar rahe pahchanese inkar kar diya badi maa ko, ab vo behad dukhi hai is baat se. " Rupali ki baat sun sar niche jhukaye Ashu kuch nahi boli. Uska man to bahot ho raha tha par usne chhup rahna hi thik samja.

"Ashu tumhe kya lagta hai jo bhi hua hai vo thik hua hai, isase Nirmala maasi ko kitni taklif hogi tum hi socho." Ashu ne badi hi chalaki se apni baat rakhi.

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Karan aur Abby ke jaane ke baad Kamal Ashu ki baato par soch raha tha. Tabhi uska dhyan Amrita par aaya.
Amrita ko dekh uske man me kuch kuch jarur hota tha lekin usi vajah se uski jyada himmat bhi nahi hoti thi kuch bolne ki .

Isiliye usne Aaj mahnat kar apna hath halke se Amrita ke hath par rakha. Usne apna hath alag kar muskurayi.

" Kya hua? "

" Kuch nahi."

" Vo bass ?" Kahte kahte mere shabd muh me rah gaye.

Amrita phir se muskurate hue boli.

" Achha mat bataiyye, lekin main aapke sath aa rahi hu Amrit lok."

" Achha thik hai."

" Bass mujhe laga aap mans karoge."

" Tum manane kaha vaali ho."

" Vaise aapko Asmita maasi ko bhi sath Lena chahiye."

" Kya? Nahi unki koi jarurat nahi."

" Achha koi jarurat nahi. Vaha aap apni shaktiyo ka bharpur istemal karne vaale ho, uske baad aapko unki jarurat jarur padegi, phir baad me mere pass mat aana main uske liye tayar nhi hu."

Amrita ki baat sun mujhe ahsaas hua ki ye meri shaktiyo ke baare me ye baat mujhe bhi dhyan nahi aayi.

" Aise kya dekh rahe hai aap, main kuch bachakar nhi rakh Rahi bass khudko bacha rahi hu, aapke sath jo bhi sambandh banata hai uski shaktiya badh jaati hai sath hi main uske kuch dushprabhav bhi hote hai main abhi vo nahi chahti."

" Kaise dushparinam?"

" Ashu ke sath hue vo.Vo jhelne ki takat sahi me sirf maasi ke paas hi hai."

" Tumne mujhe pahle kyu bataya."

Amrita ne muskurate hue kaha.
" Aapne mujhse puchha kaha."

" matlab?"
phir ek Amrita ne kutil muskan di.

" Matlab samjhna hai meri baato ka ,to aapko meri kuch baate manani hogi."

" Konsi baate?"

" Main vo aap ko samay par bataungi bass vada kije main aapko aapki shaktiyo ke baare me bhi bataungi aur kuc
h mahatvapurn baate."

" Ye tumhe achanak kya ho gya."

" Aap dariye mat? Aapksefayde ki hi baate hai aur mujhe hua kuch nahi bass aapke karname yaad aaye hai isiliye uski chhoti si saja ."



..Saja thodi khatti mithi hogi jisme aapko jarur maja aayega uski chinta mat kijiye. Baaki apni raay aur like jarur kijiye.dhanyawad
 
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Nice update

Jabardast update bhai 🔥 🔥

Ashu yaha kamal ke pass apni marzi se aayi hai aur nirmala ji bol rahi hai ashu ki Saadi kamal se ker deti phir ashu kyu Milne aayi Kamal se...

Khair Kamal ne accha jawaab diya shital ko abhi thoda aur ahsaas karao in sabko khaas ker maa aur bahno ko .....

Baaki dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

Kya kahna mast Lajawab Jabardast superb ekdum dhasu update

Shandar update

Very good work but very late waiting for next

Super update

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai hemya bhai....
Nice and superb update....

Zabardast update 👍🥰

Bahut hi badhiya or shandar update

Starting me jo jamel ha lagta ha aghor ganv per apna taj karna chhahta ha abby ke pita ki mrityu ke bad kya pata ye kharad se mila hua ho

Idhar bhai ye shweta or guddi ki conversation se lagta ha is shweta ko kisi sarthak nam ke ladke se pyar ho gaya ha lekin kya sarthak normal insan ha ya nahi


Idhar asmita ke samne to ashu natak kar rahi thi shayad kamal se akele me romance karna chah rahi thi jo ki kar bhi liya

Or bhai last me kamal ka pura pariwar kamal ko lene aa pahuncha idhar maa fir attitude dikha rahi ha bhai bol to aise rahi thi ki kamal itni asani se man jayega or kamal ko dara dhamake ye use asani se le jayenge kher kamal ne to shital ke muh pe bol diya or use maa se nahi shital ji se sambodhit kiya idhar shital ko jhatka lag gaya kyonki koi beta apni maa ko maa na bole to samjh lo ki uske samne tumhari value kya ha or last me kamal ne apni apbiti ka jara si bate suna di jo ki sach ha ki kabhi kabhi to uske pariwar walon ne use khana bhi nahi diya tha

Or dekha nahi tejaswini chachi abhi bhi apne attitude me ha bhai mujhe to lagta ha ki kamal ko abhi hi in sabke samne apni thodi powers show kar deni chhahiye jisse in sab ko jor ka jhtka dheere se lage

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Romanchak aur Jabardast Update Diyaa Hee 👌✍️👍🤘👏👏
Besarbi See Interzar Aglaa Update Kaa ✌️✋🤷‍♂️😉🤗😎

Mast update Bhai

Awesome updates Bhai

Good update

Kmal ka update h bhai maja aa gya
Awesome 👍

Sandar apdet Bhai

Mast update bhai

Mst update, akhir maa bete aamne samne aagye.
Waiting for next edition.

Nice update...

Bahut badhiya update diya hai

Intezar rahega agle update ka

Intezar rahega aapka

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" Kamal kya tha ye?" Ashu ne Sab ke jaane ke baad kaha. Uski maa jaate vakt gusse bhari aankho se Ashu ko dekh kar gayi thi. Vahi Shital ki aankho me paani bhar aaya tha. Meena bolna chahti thi lekin use bhi shabd nahi sujh rahe the, aur vo baat ko aur bigadna nahi chahti thi. Usne kuch to plan banaya tha vo sab usi hisab se ho aisa chahti thi. Isiliye usne Rupali ko bhi kuch bolne se rok diya.

Yahi Ashu bhi thodi Darr gayi thi ki sidhe is prakar se Apne parivaar ke saamne Kamal ye sab bol diya is vajah se Nirmala yaani Ashu ki maa Ashu par gussa naa ho jaye.

Vo kuch bhi ho jaye lekin apni maa ki taraf ek aadarsh ki tarah dekhti thi isiliye kitni bhi naraj ho maa use mana hi sakti thi.

" Ashu tum chinta mat karo?"

" Kya chinta nahi Karu , main dimag ko lagbhag padh sakti hu mujhe pata hai ki meri maa tum par to naraj hai lekin mujh par hi hai."

" Kya? Tum par kyu naraj hogi bua tumne kya Kiya hai?"

" Vo mujh par tumhare ye sasuji vaale natak se gussa hai,shayad unhe lag raha hoga ki ab tumhari maa is baat ka batangad banayegi." Ashu ne ye baat chinta hatakar kah di.

" Accha Aisa hai?, vo sab chhodo aur ye batao tumhe kya hua tha."
Pahle vo meri baat samjh nahi payi lekin samjhte hi vo Sharma gayi.

" Kuch nahi "

" Are bolo na, kya hua tha?" mere is tarah se jor Dene se gaal uske sharm se laal hone Lage.

" Chhodo mujhe nahi karni koi baat." Ye kahkar vo uthne ko Hui Maine hath se khich kar god me both Diya.

" Ye kya kar rahe ho tum?" Ashu apne aap ko pichhe se baho me pakar. Main ab Bina underwear ke sirf pant pahna hua tha isiliye Ashu ke kulho ki naramayi mujhe mahsoos hone lagi.

" Ye matlab thik hai , apna kaam hote hi kat lo yaha se." Meri baat sun usne apna sar dusri taraf kar muskurane lagi.

" Achha thik hai batati hu, pahle chhodo mujhe."

" Nahi , pahle batao."

" To baat aisi hai ki .." vo bolte bolte sharmane lagi.

" Haa bolo ab kya sharmana sab to ho chuka hai." Meri baat par mujhe kohni pet me maari.

" Darsal us din se mera man in sab ke prati badhta jaa raha hai kya malum kyu?"

" Kiske prati aur kab se." Mene jaan bujhakar tang khichhte hue kaha.

" Usi din se jab hamne ye sab kiya tha tab se, jyada natak mat karo tumhe bhi pata hai main kis chij ki baat kar rahi hu"

" Achha baba sorry, lekin tumne uske agle din to kuch aur kaha tha."

" Haa mujhe pata hai , mujhe laga main apni bhavnaye sambhal paungi lekin bitate dino ke sath meri ichha aur badhne lagi thi , kal raat ko to main so bhi nahi paayi mere pair chalne ke kabil bhi nahi the, main yaha kaise aayi mujhe hi pata hai."

Ashu ki baat sun main puri tarah stabdh ho gaya . Ye kuch jyada hi ho gaya tha. Use kuch samjh nahi aaya lekin abhi ke liye Ashu ko vo darana nahi chahta tha.

" Achha phir itni taklif lene ki kya jarurat thi pahle hi bata deti , chhodo lekin main hu naa usi ke liye. Vaise ye bhi thik hai mujhe to laga tha ki shadi tak rukna padega ki kya malum?" Meri baat sun Ashu gusse se mujhe dekhne lagi.

" Mujhe nahi pata tha ki main in sab chijo me main kamjor niklungi." Ashu ki nirasha bhari aavaj sun mene use aur apni aur Kass liya.

" Tum chinta mat karo , tumhara jab bhi man ho ham karenge lekin ek shart par."

Meri baat par pichhe chehra meri taraf kar aashu ne mere gale me hath daale.

" Konsi shart."


" Shart bass itni si hai ki jab tumhara man ho tab to karenge lekin meri man ho tab bhi."

" Nahi nahi, mujhe nahi manjur ye shart tumhara roj bhi man ho sakta hai upar se tumhare pass Asmita, Amrita bhi hai ."

"Aisa nahi mera adhikar tum par bhi utna hi hona chahiye jitna tumhara hai."

" Thik hai ,lekin main Asmita ji yaa Amrita ke sath milkar kuch bhi nahi karungi , ham dono sirf akele."

" Bhala aisa kyu?"

" Nahi , mujhe vaise hi bura lagta hai tumhe baat kar upar se mujhse vo dekha nahi Jaa sakta, mene tumhe hamesha apna akele ka maana hai , mere siva kisika adhikar nahi , isiliye main tumhe dekh nahi sakti kisi aur ke sath."

Mujhe Ashu ki baat sun bura laga.

" Ashu ,Tum ye baat jarur yaad rakho ki tumhari mere dil me ek behad anokhi jagah hai aur vo koi nahi le sakta . Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye." Meri baat sunkar uski mujhe gale laga diya.

" Thank you , mujhe yahi sunna tha."

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Ghanghor andhere me jamal kuch saathiyo ko lekar kahi jaa raha tha.

" Kuch pata chala."

" Nahi malik Ab tak kuch pata nahi chala lekin vo shaitani machhli hame kabhi bhi chakma de sakti hai."

" Satark raho Tambai aur baaki bhediye bhi satark hai hame bass Kaise bhi karke ye ilaka paar karna hai phir hame usase koi khatra nahi."

Ye kahte hi vo sab paani ki tarango ko niharne lage.

Tarange chand ki roshni ki vajah se chamak Rahi thi. Bhediye itne ho kar bhi us roshni par koi prabhav nahi pad sakta tha kyuki vishal kaay samundar me roshni ka bachav karna mushkil tha.

Tabhi paani ki andar se un sab ko kuch dikhayi dene laga.

Vo drishya kuch Aisa tha ki koi bada sa jahaj samudar se upar aa raha ho lekin vo koi jahaj nahi ek badi si machli thi.


Uska sharir ka kuch bhaag samundar se baahar aate hi Bhediye ke muh se tak aavaj aani band ho gayi.

Kisi ki aavaj bhi nahi nikal Rahi thi, jaise unhe lag raha tha ki koi bolega to un ki jaan chali jayegi.

Tabhi jamal ne apna thuk gitakate hue bol pada.

" Kisiko darne ki jarurat nahi ham bass sidhe chalte rahna hai."

Uska aise bolte hi sab Darr ki najar se Jamal ko dekhne lage.
Tambai jo ki ek khunkhar bhediya tha vo Darr kya hota hai Jamal ko dikha rha tha. Saakhoo ke baad koi takatvar bhediya tha to Tambai lekin use is tarah darta dekh uski himmat bhi dol gayi.

Tabhi ek insaan jiska naam Sanjay tha jamal ke pass jaa kar dhire se bola.

"Malik vo shaitani machhli hai , uska hame use sar kis taraf hai kuch nahi pata ye uska konse bhag ki vajah se ubhar aaya hai vo bhi nahi malum . Hamare jahaj se jyada to us shaitan ki chaudai hai aur vo kitna lamba hai ab tak kisi ko nahi pata. "

" To phir kya kare itni mehnat par paani nahi pher sakte."

" aapki baat sahi hai lekin ye Shaitan Kharad se bhi takatvar hai , ham pagalpan me apni Jaan nahi gava sakte , kisi aur din ham niklenge, isase aage gaye to usase hame koi nahi bacha payega."

Jamal bhi bahut Darr Gaya tha, lekin use paar karna hi tha, use ye bhi pata tha ki vah jaanvar se panga lena aatmahatya hogi. isliye usne mudne ka ishara kiya.jis par sabne ek rahat ki saans li aur jaldi se jahaj ko dusri aur modne lage.

Jamal hatash ho kar baith gaya . Aisa dekh Sanjay uske pass pahuncha.

" Jamal hatash hone ki koi baat nahi hai ,ham nayi jagah jald hi dhundenge ham sab ghor vaasiyo ke liye rahne ke liye."

" Lekin kaise pure ghor vaasi purani kathao me uljhe hue hai ki Ghor vaasiyo ko is Ghor ko chhod kar nahi jaana chahiye ."

" Haa lekin ham jarur kuch rasta nikalenge hame ye rasta dhudne me hafto nikal Gaye aur hafte lagakar naya rasta dhundenge jo us samundar ke saanf ke bich naa aaye."

Jamal ne beman se sar niche kar diya.

" Ab kar bhi kya sakte hai , kharad ne aas pass ke gaav le hi liye hai vaha ke sultan aur mukhiyo ke sath milkar ,aur yaha par shabhay labhi bhi Sukaant ke rasto par chal raha hai.isiliye mera gaav ka netrutv karna achha rahega."

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" Aur tumhe lagta hai ye shabhay yaa abhay jo bhi hai, tumhe sultan bana dega gaav ka."

"Mujhe nahi vo to Sukant ke jamai ko sultan banayenge, upar se Hamare pass saakhoo bhi hai. Bhediyon ko raaja." Karan ki baat Kamal ko samjhne me vakt laga.

" Sukant ka jamai? Kon, ...
Ek minute matlab tum Abby se shadi karne vaale ho " is par Amrita ne Abby ki taraf dekha. Abby ne haa me sar hilaya.

" Lekin vaha jaakar karenge kya?" Ye sawal Amrita ne puchha .

" Baat sidhi si hai ,pahle sab logo ko apne vishwas me lenge jisase ham kharad ke khilaf bagwat kar payenge."Karan ki baat par Abby puri tarah se sahmat nahi thi lekin
Uske pass rasta nahi tha.

" Lekin sabka vishwas kaise jitenge." Kamal ne Karan ko sawal Kiya. Jis par Abby boli.

" Unki samsya ka nivaran karke,
hame pahle unki jo samasya hai jaise ki un par jo hamle ho rahe hai ek purani galti ki vajah se, uska nivaran karenge suraksha denge." Ye kahte hue Abby ne Karan ki aur dekha.

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" Didi kya hua?" Guddi aur shweta apni badi bahne rupali aur meena ko achanak sabke chehre utare hue dekh boli.

Tabhi Rupali ne Ashu ki taraf dekhte hue kaha.

" Kya hona tha , iske dulhe raaja naraj hai dhang se kisise baat nhi kar rahe pahchanese inkar kar diya badi maa ko, ab vo behad dukhi hai is baat se. " Rupali ki baat sun sar niche jhukaye Ashu kuch nahi boli. Uska man to bahot ho raha tha par usne chhup rahna hi thik samja.

"Ashu tumhe kya lagta hai jo bhi hua hai vo thik hua hai, isase Nirmala maasi ko kitni taklif hogi tum hi socho." Ashu ne badi hi chalaki se apni baat rakhi.

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Karan aur Abby ke jaane ke baad Kamal Ashu ki baato par soch raha tha. Tabhi uska dhyan Amrita par aaya.
Amrita ko dekh uske man me kuch kuch jarur hota tha lekin usi vajah se uski jyada himmat bhi nahi hoti thi kuch bolne ki .

Isiliye usne Aaj mahnat kar apna hath halke se Amrita ke hath par rakha. Usne apna hath alag kar muskurayi.

" Kya hua? "

" Kuch nahi."

" Vo bass ?" Kahte kahte mere shabd muh me rah gaye.

Amrita phir se muskurate hue boli.

" Achha mat bataiyye, lekin main aapke sath aa rahi hu Amrit lok."

" Achha thik hai."

" Bass mujhe laga aap mans karoge."

" Tum manane kaha vaali ho."

" Vaise aapko Asmita maasi ko bhi sath Lena chahiye."

" Kya? Nahi unki koi jarurat nahi."

" Achha koi jarurat nahi. Vaha aap apni shaktiyo ka bharpur istemal karne vaale ho, uske baad aapko unki jarurat jarur padegi, phir baad me mere pass mat aana main uske liye tayar nhi hu."

Amrita ki baat sun mujhe ahsaas hua ki ye meri shaktiyo ke baare me ye baat mujhe bhi dhyan nahi aayi.

" Aise kya dekh rahe hai aap, main kuch bachakar nhi rakh Rahi bass khudko bacha rahi hu, aapke sath jo bhi sambandh banata hai uski shaktiya badh jaati hai sath hi main uske kuch dushprabhav bhi hote hai main abhi vo nahi chahti."

" Kaise dushparinam?"

" Ashu ke sath hue vo.Vo jhelne ki takat sahi me sirf maasi ke paas hi hai."

" Tumne mujhe pahle kyu bataya."

Amrita ne muskurate hue kaha.
" Aapne mujhse puchha kaha."

" matlab?"
phir ek Amrita ne kutil muskan di.

" Matlab samjhna hai meri baato ka ,to aapko meri kuch baate manani hogi."

" Konsi baate?"

" Main vo aap ko samay par bataungi bass vada kije main aapko aapki shaktiyo ke baare me bhi bataungi aur kuc
h mahatvapurn baate."

" Ye tumhe achanak kya ho gya."

" Aap dariye mat? Aapksefayde ki hi baate hai aur mujhe hua kuch nahi bass aapke karname yaad aaye hai isiliye uski chhoti si saja ."



..Saja thodi khatti mithi hogi jisme aapko jarur maja aayega uski chinta mat kijiye. Baaki apni raay aur like jarur kijiye.dhanyawad
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" Kamal kya tha ye?" Ashu ne Sab ke jaane ke baad kaha. Uski maa jaate vakt gusse bhari aankho se Ashu ko dekh kar gayi thi. Vahi Shital ki aankho me paani bhar aaya tha. Meena bolna chahti thi lekin use bhi shabd nahi sujh rahe the, aur vo baat ko aur bigadna nahi chahti thi. Usne kuch to plan banaya tha vo sab usi hisab se ho aisa chahti thi. Isiliye usne Rupali ko bhi kuch bolne se rok diya.

Yahi Ashu bhi thodi Darr gayi thi ki sidhe is prakar se Apne parivaar ke saamne Kamal ye sab bol diya is vajah se Nirmala yaani Ashu ki maa Ashu par gussa naa ho jaye.

Vo kuch bhi ho jaye lekin apni maa ki taraf ek aadarsh ki tarah dekhti thi isiliye kitni bhi naraj ho maa use mana hi sakti thi.

" Ashu tum chinta mat karo?"

" Kya chinta nahi Karu , main dimag ko lagbhag padh sakti hu mujhe pata hai ki meri maa tum par to naraj hai lekin mujh par hi hai."

" Kya? Tum par kyu naraj hogi bua tumne kya Kiya hai?"

" Vo mujh par tumhare ye sasuji vaale natak se gussa hai,shayad unhe lag raha hoga ki ab tumhari maa is baat ka batangad banayegi." Ashu ne ye baat chinta hatakar kah di.

" Accha Aisa hai?, vo sab chhodo aur ye batao tumhe kya hua tha."
Pahle vo meri baat samjh nahi payi lekin samjhte hi vo Sharma gayi.

" Kuch nahi "

" Are bolo na, kya hua tha?" mere is tarah se jor Dene se gaal uske sharm se laal hone Lage.

" Chhodo mujhe nahi karni koi baat." Ye kahkar vo uthne ko Hui Maine hath se khich kar god me both Diya.

" Ye kya kar rahe ho tum?" Ashu apne aap ko pichhe se baho me pakar. Main ab Bina underwear ke sirf pant pahna hua tha isiliye Ashu ke kulho ki naramayi mujhe mahsoos hone lagi.

" Ye matlab thik hai , apna kaam hote hi kat lo yaha se." Meri baat sun usne apna sar dusri taraf kar muskurane lagi.

" Achha thik hai batati hu, pahle chhodo mujhe."

" Nahi , pahle batao."

" To baat aisi hai ki .." vo bolte bolte sharmane lagi.

" Haa bolo ab kya sharmana sab to ho chuka hai." Meri baat par mujhe kohni pet me maari.

" Darsal us din se mera man in sab ke prati badhta jaa raha hai kya malum kyu?"

" Kiske prati aur kab se." Mene jaan bujhakar tang khichhte hue kaha.

" Usi din se jab hamne ye sab kiya tha tab se, jyada natak mat karo tumhe bhi pata hai main kis chij ki baat kar rahi hu"

" Achha baba sorry, lekin tumne uske agle din to kuch aur kaha tha."

" Haa mujhe pata hai , mujhe laga main apni bhavnaye sambhal paungi lekin bitate dino ke sath meri ichha aur badhne lagi thi , kal raat ko to main so bhi nahi paayi mere pair chalne ke kabil bhi nahi the, main yaha kaise aayi mujhe hi pata hai."

Ashu ki baat sun main puri tarah stabdh ho gaya . Ye kuch jyada hi ho gaya tha. Use kuch samjh nahi aaya lekin abhi ke liye Ashu ko vo darana nahi chahta tha.

" Achha phir itni taklif lene ki kya jarurat thi pahle hi bata deti , chhodo lekin main hu naa usi ke liye. Vaise ye bhi thik hai mujhe to laga tha ki shadi tak rukna padega ki kya malum?" Meri baat sun Ashu gusse se mujhe dekhne lagi.

" Mujhe nahi pata tha ki main in sab chijo me main kamjor niklungi." Ashu ki nirasha bhari aavaj sun mene use aur apni aur Kass liya.

" Tum chinta mat karo , tumhara jab bhi man ho ham karenge lekin ek shart par."

Meri baat par pichhe chehra meri taraf kar aashu ne mere gale me hath daale.

" Konsi shart."


" Shart bass itni si hai ki jab tumhara man ho tab to karenge lekin meri man ho tab bhi."

" Nahi nahi, mujhe nahi manjur ye shart tumhara roj bhi man ho sakta hai upar se tumhare pass Asmita, Amrita bhi hai ."

"Aisa nahi mera adhikar tum par bhi utna hi hona chahiye jitna tumhara hai."

" Thik hai ,lekin main Asmita ji yaa Amrita ke sath milkar kuch bhi nahi karungi , ham dono sirf akele."

" Bhala aisa kyu?"

" Nahi , mujhe vaise hi bura lagta hai tumhe baat kar upar se mujhse vo dekha nahi Jaa sakta, mene tumhe hamesha apna akele ka maana hai , mere siva kisika adhikar nahi , isiliye main tumhe dekh nahi sakti kisi aur ke sath."

Mujhe Ashu ki baat sun bura laga.

" Ashu ,Tum ye baat jarur yaad rakho ki tumhari mere dil me ek behad anokhi jagah hai aur vo koi nahi le sakta . Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye." Meri baat sunkar uski mujhe gale laga diya.

" Thank you , mujhe yahi sunna tha."

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Ghanghor andhere me jamal kuch saathiyo ko lekar kahi jaa raha tha.

" Kuch pata chala."

" Nahi malik Ab tak kuch pata nahi chala lekin vo shaitani machhli hame kabhi bhi chakma de sakti hai."

" Satark raho Tambai aur baaki bhediye bhi satark hai hame bass Kaise bhi karke ye ilaka paar karna hai phir hame usase koi khatra nahi."

Ye kahte hi vo sab paani ki tarango ko niharne lage.

Tarange chand ki roshni ki vajah se chamak Rahi thi. Bhediye itne ho kar bhi us roshni par koi prabhav nahi pad sakta tha kyuki vishal kaay samundar me roshni ka bachav karna mushkil tha.

Tabhi paani ki andar se un sab ko kuch dikhayi dene laga.

Vo drishya kuch Aisa tha ki koi bada sa jahaj samudar se upar aa raha ho lekin vo koi jahaj nahi ek badi si machli thi.


Uska sharir ka kuch bhaag samundar se baahar aate hi Bhediye ke muh se tak aavaj aani band ho gayi.

Kisi ki aavaj bhi nahi nikal Rahi thi, jaise unhe lag raha tha ki koi bolega to un ki jaan chali jayegi.

Tabhi jamal ne apna thuk gitakate hue bol pada.

" Kisiko darne ki jarurat nahi ham bass sidhe chalte rahna hai."

Uska aise bolte hi sab Darr ki najar se Jamal ko dekhne lage.
Tambai jo ki ek khunkhar bhediya tha vo Darr kya hota hai Jamal ko dikha rha tha. Saakhoo ke baad koi takatvar bhediya tha to Tambai lekin use is tarah darta dekh uski himmat bhi dol gayi.

Tabhi ek insaan jiska naam Sanjay tha jamal ke pass jaa kar dhire se bola.

"Malik vo shaitani machhli hai , uska hame use sar kis taraf hai kuch nahi pata ye uska konse bhag ki vajah se ubhar aaya hai vo bhi nahi malum . Hamare jahaj se jyada to us shaitan ki chaudai hai aur vo kitna lamba hai ab tak kisi ko nahi pata. "

" To phir kya kare itni mehnat par paani nahi pher sakte."

" aapki baat sahi hai lekin ye Shaitan Kharad se bhi takatvar hai , ham pagalpan me apni Jaan nahi gava sakte , kisi aur din ham niklenge, isase aage gaye to usase hame koi nahi bacha payega."

Jamal bhi bahut Darr Gaya tha, lekin use paar karna hi tha, use ye bhi pata tha ki vah jaanvar se panga lena aatmahatya hogi. isliye usne mudne ka ishara kiya.jis par sabne ek rahat ki saans li aur jaldi se jahaj ko dusri aur modne lage.

Jamal hatash ho kar baith gaya . Aisa dekh Sanjay uske pass pahuncha.

" Jamal hatash hone ki koi baat nahi hai ,ham nayi jagah jald hi dhundenge ham sab ghor vaasiyo ke liye rahne ke liye."

" Lekin kaise pure ghor vaasi purani kathao me uljhe hue hai ki Ghor vaasiyo ko is Ghor ko chhod kar nahi jaana chahiye ."

" Haa lekin ham jarur kuch rasta nikalenge hame ye rasta dhudne me hafto nikal Gaye aur hafte lagakar naya rasta dhundenge jo us samundar ke saanf ke bich naa aaye."

Jamal ne beman se sar niche kar diya.

" Ab kar bhi kya sakte hai , kharad ne aas pass ke gaav le hi liye hai vaha ke sultan aur mukhiyo ke sath milkar ,aur yaha par shabhay labhi bhi Sukaant ke rasto par chal raha hai.isiliye mera gaav ka netrutv karna achha rahega."

_____

" Aur tumhe lagta hai ye shabhay yaa abhay jo bhi hai, tumhe sultan bana dega gaav ka."

"Mujhe nahi vo to Sukant ke jamai ko sultan banayenge, upar se Hamare pass saakhoo bhi hai. Bhediyon ko raaja." Karan ki baat Kamal ko samjhne me vakt laga.

" Sukant ka jamai? Kon, ...
Ek minute matlab tum Abby se shadi karne vaale ho " is par Amrita ne Abby ki taraf dekha. Abby ne haa me sar hilaya.

" Lekin vaha jaakar karenge kya?" Ye sawal Amrita ne puchha .

" Baat sidhi si hai ,pahle sab logo ko apne vishwas me lenge jisase ham kharad ke khilaf bagwat kar payenge."Karan ki baat par Abby puri tarah se sahmat nahi thi lekin
Uske pass rasta nahi tha.

" Lekin sabka vishwas kaise jitenge." Kamal ne Karan ko sawal Kiya. Jis par Abby boli.

" Unki samsya ka nivaran karke,
hame pahle unki jo samasya hai jaise ki un par jo hamle ho rahe hai ek purani galti ki vajah se, uska nivaran karenge suraksha denge." Ye kahte hue Abby ne Karan ki aur dekha.

______

" Didi kya hua?" Guddi aur shweta apni badi bahne rupali aur meena ko achanak sabke chehre utare hue dekh boli.

Tabhi Rupali ne Ashu ki taraf dekhte hue kaha.

" Kya hona tha , iske dulhe raaja naraj hai dhang se kisise baat nhi kar rahe pahchanese inkar kar diya badi maa ko, ab vo behad dukhi hai is baat se. " Rupali ki baat sun sar niche jhukaye Ashu kuch nahi boli. Uska man to bahot ho raha tha par usne chhup rahna hi thik samja.

"Ashu tumhe kya lagta hai jo bhi hua hai vo thik hua hai, isase Nirmala maasi ko kitni taklif hogi tum hi socho." Ashu ne badi hi chalaki se apni baat rakhi.

_______


Karan aur Abby ke jaane ke baad Kamal Ashu ki baato par soch raha tha. Tabhi uska dhyan Amrita par aaya.
Amrita ko dekh uske man me kuch kuch jarur hota tha lekin usi vajah se uski jyada himmat bhi nahi hoti thi kuch bolne ki .

Isiliye usne Aaj mahnat kar apna hath halke se Amrita ke hath par rakha. Usne apna hath alag kar muskurayi.

" Kya hua? "

" Kuch nahi."

" Vo bass ?" Kahte kahte mere shabd muh me rah gaye.

Amrita phir se muskurate hue boli.

" Achha mat bataiyye, lekin main aapke sath aa rahi hu Amrit lok."

" Achha thik hai."

" Bass mujhe laga aap mans karoge."

" Tum manane kaha vaali ho."

" Vaise aapko Asmita maasi ko bhi sath Lena chahiye."

" Kya? Nahi unki koi jarurat nahi."

" Achha koi jarurat nahi. Vaha aap apni shaktiyo ka bharpur istemal karne vaale ho, uske baad aapko unki jarurat jarur padegi, phir baad me mere pass mat aana main uske liye tayar nhi hu."

Amrita ki baat sun mujhe ahsaas hua ki ye meri shaktiyo ke baare me ye baat mujhe bhi dhyan nahi aayi.

" Aise kya dekh rahe hai aap, main kuch bachakar nhi rakh Rahi bass khudko bacha rahi hu, aapke sath jo bhi sambandh banata hai uski shaktiya badh jaati hai sath hi main uske kuch dushprabhav bhi hote hai main abhi vo nahi chahti."

" Kaise dushparinam?"

" Ashu ke sath hue vo.Vo jhelne ki takat sahi me sirf maasi ke paas hi hai."

" Tumne mujhe pahle kyu bataya."

Amrita ne muskurate hue kaha.
" Aapne mujhse puchha kaha."

" matlab?"
phir ek Amrita ne kutil muskan di.

" Matlab samjhna hai meri baato ka ,to aapko meri kuch baate manani hogi."

" Konsi baate?"

" Main vo aap ko samay par bataungi bass vada kije main aapko aapki shaktiyo ke baare me bhi bataungi aur kuc
h mahatvapurn baate."

" Ye tumhe achanak kya ho gya."

" Aap dariye mat? Aapksefayde ki hi baate hai aur mujhe hua kuch nahi bass aapke karname yaad aaye hai isiliye uski chhoti si saja ."



..Saja thodi khatti mithi hogi jisme aapko jarur maja aayega uski chinta mat kijiye. Baaki apni raay aur like jarur kijiye.dhanyawad
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