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A hero can kill someone to save the world...

but a villain can destroy the world to save one...

 

[Naina]

UPDATE - 18
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LOCATION - THAILAND
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PLACE - DANIEL'S HOUSE, Bangchan....
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FLASHBACK.....
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ham log gate par boss ke paas aa gaye the gurads ki body ko uthake andar kiya aur gate ko wapas band kr dia tha.... aas paas dekha toh gate pe ek camera laga hua tha... ham lo chupke chupke andar jaane lage......

andar light jal rhi thi..... ham log ek ek room check krne lage.... ek rooom main sab cctv camera ka security room tha wahan par maine ek bande ko roka....ham log niche poora ghar check kiya niche koi nhiii tha....

ham log stairs se chad ke upar jaaane lage.......upar 4 room the.... teen rooms check kiye usme koi nahi tha.... chauthe main hme ek banda sota hua dikha.... ab confirm karna tha ki yahi deniel hai ya nhiiii....

islie ham log uske paas aaye... aur boss ne use dekhkar clear kr dia ki yahi Daniel maine uske pair pakad ke bed ke neeche kheech liya.... woh hadbadahat main utha......

daniel - kaun hai..... kaun hai....

rocky - ham hain behnchod india se..... bhosdk samjhta tha tujhe koi pakad nhi payega.....

daniel - lekin mujhe q pakad rhe ho maine kuch nhiiii kiya....

boss - acha jaipur main 12 logon ko tere baap ne maara tha kya....

daniel sbko baaton main lagaye hue tha aur apna haath dheere dheere gun ke paas le ja rha tha.... maine yeh notice kiya.... aur uske paas jaaake muh par ek jor ka punch maara....



phir use hathkadi lagake.... wahan se utha laaye.... aate hue security room se aaj ki saari footage bhi delete kr di.....

phir ham log dusre din Bangkok se india laut aaye aur daniel ko jaipur police ke hawale kr dia.....

main bhi rocky ke ghar aa gaya lekin nisha abhi tak nahi aayi thi..... isi tarah 8 - 9 months beet gaye beech main maine bahut saare mission successful kiye mijhse avinash bahut khus tha.....

lekin meri tarakki se boss mujhse jalne laga tha.... mere bhi ab exam aane wale the.... aur main bhi khushi khushi apni zindagi guzaar rha tha.... lekin meri khushi jyada din ki nhiii thi.....

ek din nisha ko uski hostel ki warden ghar le ke aayi.... rocky aur boss wahan baithe hue the.... avinash bhi wahin tha.... itne me main bhi room se nikal aaya nisha ko dekhke mujhe khushi hui lekin jaise hi niche dekha uska pet.... behnchod khushi gaaand main ghus gayiiii.... woh 8 months se pregnant thi .....

main bhi wahan ja ke khada ho gaya aur warden chali gayiiii thiiiii....

rocky - kiska paap hai yeh bata de warna abhi jaan se maar dunga.....

nisha - mujhe nhiiii pata....

rocky - tujhe nahi pata toh kya.....mujhe pata hoga.... kahan muh kaaala karwa ke aayi hai.....

nisha chuochaap baithi hui thi... itne main rocky utha aur apni bandook se nisha ko maarne ke liye trigger dabane wala hi tha.... ki main uske saamne aa gaya...

main - bhai ruk jao yeh maine kiya hai..... meri gltiii hai maine iske saath zabardasti ki thi... aur kaha tha agar kisi ko bataya toh jaan se maar dunga.....

nisha - nhi isme iski koi gltiii nhiii hai.... saari gltiii meri hai.....

main - nhi meri hai.... mujhe maar do.....

rocky - tujhe bhai maana tha aur tune aisa kukarm kiya.....

boss - maarde rocky isko isne teri behen ke saath itna galat kaam kiya hai...

rocky - agar yeh shadi kr le meri behen se toh ise maaf kar dunga.....

boss - nhi aise neech kaam krne wale ko jeene ka koi haq nhi....

boss ne apni bamdook nikaal ke mujhpe fire kr dia goli mere left chest pe lagi thi.... maine apni bandook nikalne ke liye haath piche kiya ki tabhi avinash ne bhi shoot kar dia main ghutno par aa gaya tha apne.... itne main rocky ne bhi mujhpe fire kiya aur abki brrr main... zameen par gir gaya......

nisha roti hui mere paas aayi..... aur mujhe pakad ke rone lagi....rocky mere paas aaya aur usko pakad ke wahan se le gaya......

boss ne apne do bandon ko bulaya aur unse kaha ki ise le jakar bahar phaink do...... woh log mujhe bahar le jaane lage... aur ghar se thori door phaink diya....meri saansein ab bhi chal rhi thi...

phir mujhe laga kisi ne mujhe uthaya hai aur gaadi main daal ke kahin le ja rha hai.... yeh uthane wala koi aur nhi michael tha jo ki india main hi tha aajkal jab nisha ghar main aayi thi use pregnant dekh kar maine michael ko msg kar dia tha ki ghar ke bahar hi rehna....

isiliye jab woh mujhe phenk ke chale gaye the usne mujhe wahan se uthakar ek hospital main admit karaya.... aur phir mujhe 1 mahina laga theeek hone main.... phir main wahan se mumbai aaa gaya.... aur michael bhi mere saaath wahin rehne laga tha.....

lekin mujhe badla lena tha.... unsabse yahi din raat sochtha rehta tha.... kai baar delhi gaya lekin woh log wahan nhi mile mujhe.... pta kiya toh ota chala woh log ba yahan nhi rehte hain...... phir michael dubai chala gaya aur maine sagar university main admission le liya phir kaise mujhe rocky mila yeh sab toh aap jaante hi hain.....

PRESENT TIME....
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mujhe coma se bahar aaye 8 din ho gaye the.... lekin mere haath main plaster chada hua tha.... mujhe hospital se discharge kr dia gaya tha..... aise hi 5 - 6din aur nikle phir haath ka plaster bhi hata diya gaya....ab bsss shareer main thori kamzori thi.....

sham ko mera partner (michael) aur kajal baithe hue thehalll main.... main bhi sofe par baitha hua tha......

main - hnnnn to batao michael kisne karaya tha..... mera accident......


continue.....

viswas karna muskil hai ki nashile padaarth bechne wale ye log kis adhar par police ke kaam kare rahe the
kya police walo ko pata nahi tha ki ye avinash & gang nashile padaarthon ka dhanda karte hai....
Khair ab kahani mein jo hai so hai

Ye kaisi baat huyi bhala
abhi Rocky kaha ki shaadi karne se maaf kar dega, phir agle hi pal Rocky ka permission ke bina ya kuch soche samajhe goli chala diya venky pe.
chalo maan lu ki wo boss jalta tha venky se par Rocky aur avinash ko kya hua... aur ye tak nahi socha ki venky us hone wale bache ka baap hai...

Hmm. .. to venky ke partner me ushe bacha hi liya...
Dusri taraf present time mein venky coma se bahar aa chuka hai... ab shayad ushe ek jhatka lagne wali hai,
ye baat jaan ke ki uska baap jawani ke dino mein heavy driver tha.... ek sauteli maa aur ek sauteli pagal bahan as a surprise gift ke taur pe chhoda hai uske liye
Venky ki toh maujj ho gayi.....

Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Villain1825]

ab change karke kya faida .... already itne update aa chuke hai.... agar side character hoti to baat alag hoti..

lekin ye kirdaar lead characters mein se hai.... naam change karne se story line ke liye achha na ho....

yeh bhi sahi hai...

 

[Villain1825]

Nhii nhii rehne do. Naam badalne ki jarurat nhi hai. Kyoki jaha tharak aur hawas rehta hai waha Kajal ka naam rehta hi hai.

Aur agar Kajal ke baare mein jaanna hai toh Chutiyadr shahab ki Kajal Series ki stories padh lenaa.

zaroor aaj hi padhte hain

 

[Villain1825]

jaise jaise kahani aage badh rahi hai uske sath hi kuch raaz se parda bhi hat te jaa rahe hai...

yahan ek bahot choukane wala mod aaya hai kahani mein..... ki venky ko uske apne hi maarna chaahtein hai....

Waise.... agar hi dushman nikle to baaki paraye logo pe kya dosh dena... jab venky ko pata chala hoga ki uska koi apna hi ushe maarna chahta hai to kahi na kahi uske dil mein ek tees sir jarur lagi hogi. ..

Sanjana aur uski mom ka kuch to gehra rishta hai venky se.... I think.. wo jo avinash jikar kar raha tha venky ke kisi apne ke baare mein, wo apne shayad ye sanjana aur uski mom hi hai....
Lekin venky sath aisa kyun kar rahe hai wo log... kya bigada hai venky ne unlogo ka jo usko jaan se hi maar dena chaahte hai....

venky ki haalat naazuk hai.... hope ki wo jald se jald thik ho jaaye... kyunki uski is haalat ka faida uske dushman jarur uthayenge.....

Update jaise har rang se bhare ho khas taur par atyadhik thrilling aur emotional situation se...

shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan..
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

thnkq....

 

[Villain1825]

Avinas ko maar ker Venky ko tow lottery nikal gayi itna saara paisa ab dekhte agra wale gher m kia milta h
Mere hisab se nisha se shadi kerli h tow Kajal se bhi ker lo kia farak padta h or nisha ko bhi koyi pareshani nahi hogi iss baat se
Dekhte h aage kia hota h

thanq...
keep supporting...

 

[Naina]

Nhii nhii rehne do. Naam badalne ki jarurat nhi hai. Kyoki jaha tharak aur hawas rehta hai waha Kajal ka naam rehta hi hai.

Aur agar Kajal ke baare mein jaanna hai toh Chutiyadr shahab ki Kajal Series ki stories padh lenaa.

kahe bechare maasoom writer ko pareshan kar rahe ho...
Us tharki chaalbaaz dhokhebaaz kajal ki story series padhne ke baad kahi villian sahab khud ki kahani ko bhool na jaaye

 

[Villain1825]

viswas karna muskil hai ki nashile padaarth bechne wale ye log kis adhar par police ke kaam kare rahe the
kya police walo ko pata nahi tha ki ye avinash & gang nashile padaarthon ka dhanda karte hai....
Khair ab kahani mein jo hai so hai

Ye kaisi baat huyi bhala
abhi Rocky kaha ki shaadi karne se maaf kar dega, phir agle hi pal Rocky ka permission ke bina ya kuch soche samajhe goli chala diya venky pe.
chalo maan lu ki wo boss jalta tha venky se par Rocky aur avinash ko kya hua... aur ye tak nahi socha ki venky us hone wale bache ka baap hai...

Hmm. .. to venky ke partner me ushe bacha hi liya...
Dusri taraf present time mein venky coma se bahar aa chuka hai... ab shayad ushe ek jhatka lagne wali hai,
ye baat jaan ke ki uska baap jawani ke dino mein heavy driver tha.... ek sauteli maa aur ek sauteli pagal bahan as a surprise gift ke taur pe chhoda hai uske liye
Venky ki toh maujj ho gayi.....

Shaandaar update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

sanjana ki mom venky ki step sis thi aur sanjana venky ki bhanji hai....

 

[Villain1825]

kahe bechare maasoom writer ko pareshan kar rahe ho...
Us tharki chaalbaaz dhokhebaaz kajal ki story series padhne ke baad kahi villian sahab khud ki kahani ko bhool na jaaye

itni tareef kajal ki sunke mujhe toh ab parhna hi prega...

 

[Naina]

sanjana ki mom venky ki step sis thi aur sanjana venky ki bhanji hai....

 

[Villain1825]

UPDATE - 29
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LOCATION - DELHI
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PLACE-BOSS'S HOUSE
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phir nisha uthke room main chali gayi.....


main - kajal toh tumne kya socha pehle kidhar jaogi.....


kajal - main toh yahin se nikal jaungi unhe dhoonde.....


main - tumhe har jagah nhiii dhoondna hai....woh tumhe kolkata main mil jayenge......


kajal - tum itne vishwaas se kaise keh sakte ho.....


main - bsss main jaanta hun.....


kajal - toh batao main kahan jaun pehle.....


main kuch bolta usse pehle mera mobile ring krne laga..... maine mobile pocket se nikala.... jo number screen pe flash ho rha tha..... use dekhkar mujhe bahut khusi hui.....


main - namaste....guruji jiii kaise ho.....


doston agar aap bhul gaye ho toh yddd dila dun yeh wahi trainer jinhone mujhe training di thi Newyork main.....


trainer - main thik hun..... tum kaise ho venky..... i mean villain....


main - main bhi thik hun gurujiiii..... aaaj kaise yddd kr lia....


trainer - kisi ne death fight ke lie challenge kiya hai yahan pe.. .... aur tum hi hamare last death fight winner ho.... islie yeh fight tumhe hi ladni padegi..... tumhe koi problem toh nhiiii hai fight se....


main - okkk.... no problem.....


trainer - mujhe tumse yahi ummeed thi......


main - kab aaana hai mujhe.....


trainer - fight 2 din baad hai...... tum aaj sham ya kal subah nikal jaana wahan se........


main - theeek hai mai koshish karunga.... aaj hi nikalne ki.....


trainer - theeeek hai......


main-okkkk


phir main call cut kar deta hun..... tabhi michael wahan aa jata hain....


main - michael aaaj sham tak agra wala kaam niptao..... kal subah ham log newyork ja rhe hain.....


Michael - acha bhai.... lekin newyork main koi kaaam hai kya.....


main - aree death match fight hai..... aur main last winner hun toh mujhe hi fight karna parega..... aur agar main mana kar deta ladne se..... toh yeh meri rooh par ek kalank lag jaata.....


michael - acha bhai.....


main - 4 ticket book karna.....


michael - 4 kyun bhai..... kaun kaun jaega.....


main - nisha aur rahul bhi jayenge saath main.....


michael - acha bhai.... main ticket book karata hun.....


phir michael wahan se uthke chala gaya bahar qki use agra main kaam niptana tha jald se jald....


idhar nisha room main packing kr rhi thi aur rahul bahar garden main kajal ke saath khel raha tha.... main rooom aake bed par baith gaya.....


Main - nisha....


nisha - hnnnn boliye jiiii.....


Main - ham log kal subah yahan se jayenge.... lekin mumbai nhiii jayenge....


nisha - toh kahan jayenge... kahin aur rehenge kya ab ham log.....


Main - nhiiii pagal..... ham log newyork ja rhe hain kal..... kuch kaaam hai....


nisha - ek baat sunlo venky agar tum newyork pichli baar ki tarah death match fight main ja rhe ho toh main jaane nhiiii dungi......


main - q nahi jaaane dogi.....


nisha - tumhe kuch ho gaya toh mera kya hoga.....


main - tumhe mujhpe bharosa hai....


nisha - hnnnn bahut....


main - toh phir mujhe kuch nhiiii hoga.....


nisha - lekin.....


main - lekin wekin kuch nhiiii.....agar main nhi lada toh meri aur mere trainer ke saath saath us club ki bahut beizzati hogi..... islie main ladunga zarooor.....


nisha - thik hai..... lekin main bhi wahan chalungiiii....


main - hnnn tum toh chalogiiii hi..... main ek kaaam kro zaroorat ka samaan aur kuch kapde ek bag main pack kar lo.... aur baaki samaan dusre bags main pack kr do apne bande mumbai pahuncha denge...... phir nisha ne meri baat maante hue packing phir se start kr di..... aur main wahan se uthke bahar garden ki taraf chal diya......


wahin dusri taraf.....

PLACE - KOLKATA AIRPORT

sanjana aur vandana (venky ki step sis aur sanjana ki mom) kolkata airport ke bahar khadi thi aur kisi ka wait kr rhi thi..... tabhi unhe gate se ek admi bahar aata hua dikhai diya.... jiski age lagbhag 46 ke aaspaas hogi..... use dekhke sanjana haath hilane lagiiii.....us admi ki nazar jaise hi sanjana aur vandana ke upar padi woh unhi ki taraf aaa gaya.....


sanjana - papa itna late kaise ho gaya.....


vandana - hnnnn ronit itni der q lagi..... flight toh kabka land ho chuki thi....


(ronit vandana ka pati hai aur sanjana ka pita)


ronit - areee woh mera luggage nhiii mil rha tha islie late ho gaya..... thora isi chakkar main....


vandana - chalo ghar chalte hain.....


phir woh sab gaadi main baith gaye aur chal diye ghar ki taraf....ronit ko aisa feel ho rha tha ki dono maa beti usse kuch chupa rhi hai qki aamtor par jab woh kahin bahar se aata hai..... toh unki khushi ka thikana nhiiii rehta hai... kekin aaj woh dono kuch gumsum lag rhi thi......


ronit - kya hua hai tum dono ko itni gumsum q ho....


vandana - pehle ghar toh pahunchne do phir baatein hongiiii.....


PLACE - BOSS'S HOUSE


idhar main nisha ke room se nikal ke garden main aa gaya..... jahan nisha aur rahul bauthe hue the.....main bhi undono ke paas jake baith gaya.....


Kajal - michael bata rha tha ki tumlog newyork ja rhe ho.....


main - hnnn ja to rhe hai....


kajal - main bhi chalun kya....


main - tum bhi chalogi saath main.... toh sanjana ka pta kaun lagayega....


Kajal - yrrr venky baad main pata laga lenge..... main tumhe fight karte hue dekhta chahti hun.....


main - abhi kal toh dekha tha fight karte hue...... tum yahan rehke sanjana ka pata lagana....


kajal - theeek hai...


main - aree main mazak kar rha thaa.... michael se boldo ki tumhara bhi ticket book kar dega.....


nisha - usne already book kar diya hoga.....maine usse pehle hi bol dia tha ki mera bhi ticket book kar lena.... toh pehle usne kaha ki venky nahi manega.... toh maine usse kaha ki venky ka tension mat lo.... main use mana lungi.....


main - you..... naughty.....


aur maine use pakadne ke lie haath lapkaye.... lekin woh uth ke door ki taraf bhaag gayiiiii.... aur wahan khade ho ke mujhe chidane lagi.... aur phir gahr ke andar chali gayi..... phir maine bhi rahul ko god main liya aur main bhi chal diya uske piche......


continue......