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A hero can kill someone to save the world...

but a villain can destroy the world to save one...

 

[Naik]

UPDATE - 32
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - RASHMIKA's HOUSE
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Kajal - chali gayi itni jldi... mujhe bataya tak nahi.....


phir woh rashmika ko call lagati hai toh mobile offf bata rha tha....


Mohini - ufff yeh ldki bhi na..... pata nahi ab kya hua..... jo mobile off krke baithi hai.....


yahan se jaaane ke baad rashmika sidhe apne ghar pahunchi aur room main aake takiye par muh dabake rone lagi..... aaj use bahut jyada takleef ho rhi thi..... ki q usne venky ko pehle nahi bata diya ki main uski rashmika hun.... jisse woh bachpan main bepanaah mohabbat karta tha.....


khair kuch der aise hi padi rhi woh phir uthi aur apne kapde pack kiye.... aur nikal gayi banglore ke liye...... idhar mohini use baar baaar phone laga rhi thi lekin mobile offf hi tha uska......


idhar kolkata main ronit apni family ke saath sham wali flight se hi newyork nikal gaya tha...... aur wahin venky ko kal subah nikalna tha......
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LOCATION - DELHI
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PLACE - BOSS's HOUSE
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NISHA MAIN AUR KAJAL haaal main baithe hue the phir kajal apne rooom main chali gayi rahul so rha tha abhi.....


Main - Nisha tumhe ek baat batani hai.....


Nisha - hnnnn bolo venky.....


Main - dekho piche 2 saalon se kajal aur mere beech sex relation hai...... tumse shadi krne ke baad maine usse kaha tha ki ab hamare beech pehle jaisa kuch nhiiii hoga.... toh usne kaha ki main zindagi bhar tumhare saath rehna chahti hun bhale hi tum mujhse shadi na kro.....


Nisha - dekho venky tum kisi ke bhi saath saririk sambhandh banao mujhe isse koi aapatti nhi hai.... lekin agar tumne kisi aur se shadi kr li toh main tumhe maarke khud mar jaungi.....


Main - areee main shadi kisi aur se nhi karunga.....


Nisha - yahi acha hai tumhare liye......


phir nisha wahan se uthke kitchen ki aur chali gayi.... aur khana lagane lagi itne main michael bhi aa gaya..... aur ham sab khana khake wapas sofe par aake baith gaye......


main - toh kya hua.....


Michael - bhai maine saara drugs jala diya tha..... wahan par ek file mili thi maine woh paison ke saath rakh di gai gaadi main.....


Main - acha kiya.....


Michael - aur kuch samaan agar apne adde par pahunchana ho toh bata dijiye main unhe rawana kar dun.....


Main - hnnnn..... nisha inhe woh bags de do..... ghar main pahuncha denge....


phir nisha ne apne bags unhe de diye aur woh log nikal gaye mumbai ke liye..... phir sab apne room ki taraf chale gaye.....aur main apne room main aake nisha me saath so gaya.....


subah uthke main fresh hua phir sabko jaga diya..... subah 9 baje ki flight thi aur ham kog kal subah pahunchne wale the newyork bahut lambi flight thi.....


idhar sab taiyaar hoke airport ke liye nikle aur wahan se newyork ke liye rawana ho gaye..... aur idhar manohar ke bande yahan boss ke ghar main aaa tapke...... unhone poora ghar chaan maara lekin unhe wahan kuch nahi mila.....


venky ke bandon ne venky ke nikalte hi poore ghar se unke nishaan mita diye the..... lag hi nahi raha tha ki abhi 1 ghante pehle yahan par koi reh raha tha..... phir us admi ne vikram ko call laga di....


vikram - hnnn bol kya huaa avinash mila wahan ya nahiii.....


admi - bhai yahan avinash bhi nahi mila na hi uska koi banda.... aur na hi drugs ki ek packet..... kuch nhiiii mila.....


vikram - theeek hai wahan se niklo aur apne adde pe pahuncho main aake sham main aata hun.....


idhar vikram bhi agra wale ghar main chaanbeen kar rha tha lekin use bhi wahan kuch nhiiii mila.....venky ke bandon se wakayi main apna kaaam bahut safayi se kiya tha koi bhi saboot nahi chora tha.....


antatah jab vikram ko wahan kuch nhiiii mila toh woh bhi wahan se nikal gaya apne adde ki taraf..... idhar jaise hi vikram ke bande boss ke ghar se nikle saamne ek admi khada tha.....


unknown - kise dhoond rhe ho.....


admi - avinash ko.....


unknown - woh nahi milega.....


admi - q nahi milega..... mar gaya kya....


unknown - maaar diya gaya.....


admi - kisne maara.......


unknown - sabko maaar dega woh wohh bahut khatarnaaak hai..... woh shaitaaan hai......


tabhi us admi ke paas vikram ka phone aata hai......


admi - hnnn bhai.....


vikram - kuch pata chala....


admi - hnnnn ek admi mila hai bata rha hai ki avinash ko kisi ne maaar diya hai....


vikram - kya..... use adde pe leke aaao jaldiiiii....


admi - jiii bhai.....


phir woh log us unknown bamde ko ghadi main bitha ke nikal jaate hain adde ki taraf...... wahin aditya banglore pahunchta hai aur court main jaake us advocate ke baare main pata karta haiiiii.....


toh pata chalta hai woh chamber no-6 main baithta hai......aditya door ko kholke andar dakhil hota hai saamne ek admi baitha tha kaala coat pehne hue......


aditya - rameshwar pandit aao hi ho.....


rameshwar - hnnnn ji main hi hun bolo kya kaaam hai.....


aditya - behnchod kaaam poooochta hai....


rameshwar - yeh kaisi language main baat kr rhe ho..... get out from my Chamber....


jaise hi rameshwar yeh kehta hai vikram ke bande andar dakhil hote hain aone haathon main guns liye..... yeh dekhje rameshwar ki gaand fatne lgti hai....


rameshwar - aaap log kaun hai.... aur mujhse kya chahiye..... plzzz mujhe maarna mat mere chote chote bachche hain.....


aditya - ham log manohar ke admi hai..... naam toh suna hoga.....


rameshwar - manoharrrr...... manoharrr.... hnnn bahut suna hai....


aditya - agar hame sab kuch sach sach batayega toh bach jayega......


rameshwar - aaap poocho main sab kuch bataunga.....


aditya - toh bata manohar ki property ko kisne kaha ki yeh uski hai aur usko paane ke liye usne Court main apply kiya......


rameshwar - woh....... woh.....


aaj ke liye itna hi.....
continued.....

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai

 

[Naik]

UPDATE - 33
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LOCATION - BANGLORE
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PLACE - BANGLORE HIGH COURT
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aditya - ham log manohar ke admi hai..... naam toh suna hoga.....


Rameshwar - manoharrrr...... manoharrr.... hnnn bahut suna hai....


aditya - agar hame sab kuch sach sach batayega toh bach jayega......


Rameshwar - aaap poocho main sab kuch bataunga.....


aditya - toh bata manohar ki property ko kisne kaha ki yeh uski hai aur usko paane ke liye usne Court main apply kiya......


Rameshwar - woh....... woh.....


Aditya - abe bolna aage..... ya muh main loda phans gaya hai......


Rameshwar - woh mere paas calll aaya tha..... usne bola ki woh property meri hai uske lie Court main aaply kr do.....


Aditya - kaun tha.... naaam wagairag poocha tha.....


Rameshwar - hnnnn naam bataya tha usne apna.....


Aditya - kya naaam tha.... ab bataoge be....


Rameshwar - venky..... hnnnn yahi bataya tha naaam....


Aditya - tumhari feees kaise di usne.....


Rameshwar - usne account main daal di thi mere.....


Aditya - aur usne kya kaha tha???


Rameshwar - maine usse kaha tha tumhe aana prega..... toh usne mujhse kaha ki jis din uske case ki sunwayi hogi woh usi din ayega....


Aditya - ab is case ki sunwayi kbhiii nahi hogi..... samjh gaya na tu warna teri aawaz ko sunne ke lie teri family taras jayegiiii..... samjha...


Rameshwar - jiii bhai main samjh gaya.....


phir aditya ne apne bande se apna bag maanga aur usme se 5 lacs rupaye nikaalke rameshwar ko dene laga....


Aditya - yeh le 5 lacs rupaye aur usko phone karke bolde ki tu yeh case nahi ladega ab..... aur agar tum yahan aaoge.... tabhi main case ladunga..... agar woh aane ke lie raazi hota hai toh mere number pe call karke mujhe bata dena.....samjh gaya....


Rameshwar - jiii aditya bhai.....


phir aditya aur uske bande nikal gaye wahan se.....rameshwar ne apna mobile uthaya aur venky ko call lagane laga uska mobile off aa rha tha..... usne whatsapp pe use text msg kar dia.......


______venky sir court ne aadesh diya hai ki case ki sunwayi se pehle tumhe yahan hazir hona parega...... isliye agar aap nahi aa sakte toh mazburan mujhe yeh case chorna parega...... ______
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LOCATION - PALWAL
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idhar vikram ke bande us unknown bande ko leke palwal wale adde par pahunch gaye the thori der main vikram bhi wahan pahunch gaya..... phir usne apne peeche sabko aane ko kaha woh ek rooom main pahuncha aur wahan pe usne ek button ko dabaya toh saamne ek hidden door khul gaya.....


woh sab usme dakhil ho gaye..... dooor ke saath hi stairs bani hui thi jo ki niche tehkhane tak gayi thi...... neeche ek bahut bada haaal bana hua..... wahan par bahut saara drugs aur guns rakhi hui thi..... phir sab log neeche aaye aur sofe par baith gaye.....


Vikram - hnnn to batao..... tum yeh itne confidence ke saath kaise keh sakte ho ki avinash mar gaya hai......


unknown - qki maine use apni aankhon se marta hua dekha tha...... mere saamne use tadpa tadpa ke maara tha.....phir us unknown bande ne wahan jo bhi hua tha avinash aur boss ke saath fighting se leke bahar fainkne tak sab bata diya.....


Vikram - toh tum bache kaise boss......


Jiiii haaan apne sahi suna yeh unknown bosss hi hai..... ab pata nahi yeh kaise bach gaya......


Boss - mujhe subah avinash ne bataya tha ki aaaj venky idhar aa rela hai islie maine poori taiyari kar li thi maine aur avinash ne bulletproof vests pehna hua tha..... maine ek khaas tarah ki medicine bhi paas rakhli thi jiske khane se admi ka poora badan achet ho jata hai 20 min ke lie.....


lekin avinash ka aisa dardnaak haal dekhke maine chupke se woh tablet kha li jisse unlogon ko laga mujhe heartattack aaya aur main mar gaya hun.... venky ne gusse main mujhe 3 4 goliyaan maari lekin bulletproof vests ki wajah se mujhe goliyaan ka kuch asar nahi hua..... phir venky ne apne Bandon se kaha ki inhe bahar faink aao....


woh log jab gaadi main leke ja rhe the tabhi mujhe hosh aa gaya tha..... lekin main aankhen band kiye pada raha phir unlogon ne hame ek sunsaan jagah par phenk diya...... unke jaate hi maine avinash ko dekha..... woh mar chuka tha....


maine uske baad avinash ka kiryakaram karwaya..... aur wapas aake apne ghar pe nigraani karne laga ki kab woh log wahan se jaayein aur main paisa leke kahin aur chala jaun.....


lekin afsos aaj jab woh log chale gaye toh main wahan gaya lekin wahan mujhe kuch bhi nahi mila itne main kisi ke aane ki aahat hui mujhe laga unhi ke bande hain main khidki se kood ke bahar aa gaya.....


phir main door khada hoke dekhne laga.... aur phir yeh log bahar nikle aur avinash ke baare main poochne lage toh mujhe laga yeh venky ke bande nahi ho sakte q un logon ne avinash ko marte hue dekha tha toh q uske baare main poochenge..... aur phir maine inhe sab bata diya.....


Vikram - bahut hi zulm hua hai tumpar..... tum kuch din yahin ruko ham log saath main badla lenge usse.....


yeh kehke vikram wahan se chala gaya..... aur uske bande lag gaye apne apne kaaam main...... idhar venky abhi bhi plane main hi tha..... lekin ronit apni family ke saath newyork Airport pahunch gaya tha.....
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LOCATION - NEW YORK
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ronit vandana aur sanjana airport ke bahar khade kisi ka wait kr rhe the.... tabhi ek admi unke paas gaadi rokke bahar aaya.....


driver - sorry sir.... thora late ho gaya.....


Ronit - koi baat nahiiiii.... chalo jldi se ghar chalo main bahut thak gaya hun....


Driver - jiii sir.....


phir driver ne luggage piche rakha aur chal diya gaadi le ke rone ke ghar ki taraf joki jyada door nahi tha airport sd 20 minutes main woh log pahunch gaye..... woh log utarne lage ki unki nazrein paas main lagi bheed ke upar gayi..... jahan par bahut jyada crowd tha....


Ronit - yeh itna crowd q hai.... fight club ke saamne.....


Driver - sir yahan par kal koi indian fighter villain ki deathmatch fight hai usi ki tickets bik rhi hain.....


Ronit - ohhhh acha....


Sanjana - papa mujhe fight dekhni hai.....


Ronit - beta dekh rhi ho kitni bheed hai.... ticket nhi milega..... q bhai ticket milega kya.....


Driver - koshish karunga sir.....


Ronit - theek hai yeh lo paise 3 ticket le lena.....


Phir driver ne paise le liye aur luggage gaadi se nikaalke andar le ke chala gaya.... aur uske peeche ronit, vandana aur sanjana bhiiii.....



Aaj ke liye itna hi....
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Lagta h Boss ki qismat bahot kharab h pichli baar jhoota hirt attack aaya tha lekin abki baar jab venky k saamne aayega hirt attack hi pata nahi kon kon se attack aate h
Tow Ronit & family bhi jayegi Death match dekhne kahi aisa na ho ki uski fght dekh ker in sabko attack aa jaye
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya shaandaar update bhai

 

[Naina]

Naina jiii abhi tak review nahi aaya aapka

 

[Villain1825]

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai

Lagta h Boss ki qismat bahot kharab h pichli baar jhoota hirt attack aaya tha lekin abki baar jab venky k saamne aayega hirt attack hi pata nahi kon kon se attack aate h
Tow Ronit & family bhi jayegi Death match dekhne kahi aisa na ho ki uski fght dekh ker in sabko attack aa jaye
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya shaandaar update bhai

thnk...
keep supporting....

 

[Villain1825]

lekin thora jldi... mera net pack thori der main khatm ho jaega...

 

[Naina]

UPDATE - 33
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LOCATION - BANGLORE
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PLACE - BANGLORE HIGH COURT
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aditya - ham log manohar ke admi hai..... naam toh suna hoga.....


Rameshwar - manoharrrr...... manoharrr.... hnnn bahut suna hai....


aditya - agar hame sab kuch sach sach batayega toh bach jayega......


Rameshwar - aaap poocho main sab kuch bataunga.....


aditya - toh bata manohar ki property ko kisne kaha ki yeh uski hai aur usko paane ke liye usne Court main apply kiya......


Rameshwar - woh....... woh.....


Aditya - abe bolna aage..... ya muh main loda phans gaya hai......


Rameshwar - woh mere paas calll aaya tha..... usne bola ki woh property meri hai uske lie Court main aaply kr do.....


Aditya - kaun tha.... naaam wagairag poocha tha.....


Rameshwar - hnnnn naam bataya tha usne apna.....


Aditya - kya naaam tha.... ab bataoge be....


Rameshwar - venky..... hnnnn yahi bataya tha naaam....


Aditya - tumhari feees kaise di usne.....


Rameshwar - usne account main daal di thi mere.....


Aditya - aur usne kya kaha tha???


Rameshwar - maine usse kaha tha tumhe aana prega..... toh usne mujhse kaha ki jis din uske case ki sunwayi hogi woh usi din ayega....


Aditya - ab is case ki sunwayi kbhiii nahi hogi..... samjh gaya na tu warna teri aawaz ko sunne ke lie teri family taras jayegiiii..... samjha...


Rameshwar - jiii bhai main samjh gaya.....


phir aditya ne apne bande se apna bag maanga aur usme se 5 lacs rupaye nikaalke rameshwar ko dene laga....


Aditya - yeh le 5 lacs rupaye aur usko phone karke bolde ki tu yeh case nahi ladega ab..... aur agar tum yahan aaoge.... tabhi main case ladunga..... agar woh aane ke lie raazi hota hai toh mere number pe call karke mujhe bata dena.....samjh gaya....


Rameshwar - jiii aditya bhai.....


phir aditya aur uske bande nikal gaye wahan se.....rameshwar ne apna mobile uthaya aur venky ko call lagane laga uska mobile off aa rha tha..... usne whatsapp pe use text msg kar dia.......


______venky sir court ne aadesh diya hai ki case ki sunwayi se pehle tumhe yahan hazir hona parega...... isliye agar aap nahi aa sakte toh mazburan mujhe yeh case chorna parega...... ______
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LOCATION - PALWAL
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idhar vikram ke bande us unknown bande ko leke palwal wale adde par pahunch gaye the thori der main vikram bhi wahan pahunch gaya..... phir usne apne peeche sabko aane ko kaha woh ek rooom main pahuncha aur wahan pe usne ek button ko dabaya toh saamne ek hidden door khul gaya.....


woh sab usme dakhil ho gaye..... dooor ke saath hi stairs bani hui thi jo ki niche tehkhane tak gayi thi...... neeche ek bahut bada haaal bana hua..... wahan par bahut saara drugs aur guns rakhi hui thi..... phir sab log neeche aaye aur sofe par baith gaye.....


Vikram - hnnn to batao..... tum yeh itne confidence ke saath kaise keh sakte ho ki avinash mar gaya hai......


unknown - qki maine use apni aankhon se marta hua dekha tha...... mere saamne use tadpa tadpa ke maara tha.....phir us unknown bande ne wahan jo bhi hua tha avinash aur boss ke saath fighting se leke bahar fainkne tak sab bata diya.....


Vikram - toh tum bache kaise boss......


Jiiii haaan apne sahi suna yeh unknown bosss hi hai..... ab pata nahi yeh kaise bach gaya......


Boss - mujhe subah avinash ne bataya tha ki aaaj venky idhar aa rela hai islie maine poori taiyari kar li thi maine aur avinash ne bulletproof vests pehna hua tha..... maine ek khaas tarah ki medicine bhi paas rakhli thi jiske khane se admi ka poora badan achet ho jata hai 20 min ke lie.....


lekin avinash ka aisa dardnaak haal dekhke maine chupke se woh tablet kha li jisse unlogon ko laga mujhe heartattack aaya aur main mar gaya hun.... venky ne gusse main mujhe 3 4 goliyaan maari lekin bulletproof vests ki wajah se mujhe goliyaan ka kuch asar nahi hua..... phir venky ne apne Bandon se kaha ki inhe bahar faink aao....


woh log jab gaadi main leke ja rhe the tabhi mujhe hosh aa gaya tha..... lekin main aankhen band kiye pada raha phir unlogon ne hame ek sunsaan jagah par phenk diya...... unke jaate hi maine avinash ko dekha..... woh mar chuka tha....


maine uske baad avinash ka kiryakaram karwaya..... aur wapas aake apne ghar pe nigraani karne laga ki kab woh log wahan se jaayein aur main paisa leke kahin aur chala jaun.....


lekin afsos aaj jab woh log chale gaye toh main wahan gaya lekin wahan mujhe kuch bhi nahi mila itne main kisi ke aane ki aahat hui mujhe laga unhi ke bande hain main khidki se kood ke bahar aa gaya.....


phir main door khada hoke dekhne laga.... aur phir yeh log bahar nikle aur avinash ke baare main poochne lage toh mujhe laga yeh venky ke bande nahi ho sakte q un logon ne avinash ko marte hue dekha tha toh q uske baare main poochenge..... aur phir maine inhe sab bata diya.....


Vikram - bahut hi zulm hua hai tumpar..... tum kuch din yahin ruko ham log saath main badla lenge usse.....


yeh kehke vikram wahan se chala gaya..... aur uske bande lag gaye apne apne kaaam main...... idhar venky abhi bhi plane main hi tha..... lekin ronit apni family ke saath newyork Airport pahunch gaya tha.....
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LOCATION - NEW YORK
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ronit vandana aur sanjana airport ke bahar khade kisi ka wait kr rhe the.... tabhi ek admi unke paas gaadi rokke bahar aaya.....


driver - sorry sir.... thora late ho gaya.....


Ronit - koi baat nahiiiii.... chalo jldi se ghar chalo main bahut thak gaya hun....


Driver - jiii sir.....


phir driver ne luggage piche rakha aur chal diya gaadi le ke rone ke ghar ki taraf joki jyada door nahi tha airport sd 20 minutes main woh log pahunch gaye..... woh log utarne lage ki unki nazrein paas main lagi bheed ke upar gayi..... jahan par bahut jyada crowd tha....


Ronit - yeh itna crowd q hai.... fight club ke saamne.....


Driver - sir yahan par kal koi indian fighter villain ki deathmatch fight hai usi ki tickets bik rhi hain.....


Ronit - ohhhh acha....


Sanjana - papa mujhe fight dekhni hai.....


Ronit - beta dekh rhi ho kitni bheed hai.... ticket nhi milega..... q bhai ticket milega kya.....


Driver - koshish karunga sir.....


Ronit - theek hai yeh lo paise 3 ticket le lena.....


Phir driver ne paise le liye aur luggage gaadi se nikaalke andar le ke chala gaya.... aur uske peeche ronit, vandana aur sanjana bhiiii.....



Aaj ke liye itna hi....
Continued....

mujhe is kahani aur har update mein ek baat behad pasand aayi hai.... wo ye ki writer bina wajah matter ko zyada lamba nahi khinchte, jitni jarurat hoti hai ushi hisap se kirdaaro ke bich ki baatcheet ya activities ko pesh karte hai.... maine bahot se stories pe ye cheej notice ki hai.... update bada karne ke chakkar mein kayi baar aanchahe topics ko lamba khinch dete hai...
par is kahani mein aisa bilkul nahi hai.... ch aahe update chhota hi sahi lekin wohi important baatein add hoti link by link jiski jaruat hoti hai ek kahani ko flow ke hisap se aage badhane ke liye
so us boss ki jaan to billiyo ki 9 jindagi jaisi nikli hai.... marta hi nahi...
koi na galtiyaan insaan se hi hoti, venky se bhi ho gayi...
vikram ko pata chal gaya hai to ye khabar manohar tak bhi pahunchne wali hai.... udhar aditya ko bhi pata chal gaya ki case kisne kiya tha.....
matlab saaf hai.....Ek taraf avinash ko maut di....udhar manohar ke nashile cheejo ko jala diya aur ab ye case.....
manohar ko bhadkane ke liye kaafi ye activities....
yaani manohar aur venky bahot jald takraane wale hai...
udhar shayad kismat venky ke sath hai.... fight club mein uski jholi mein vandana aur sanjana aake girne wale hai... agar venky in dono ko pakad liya to kya jaan se maar dega..?

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

lekin thora jldi... mera net pack thori der main khatm ho jaega...

Chal jhutha
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[Villain1825]

mujhe is kahani aur har update mein ek baat behad pasand aayi hai.... wo ye ki writer bina wajah matter ko zyada lamba nahi khinchte, jitni jarurat hoti hai ushi hisap se kirdaaro ke bich ki baatcheet ya activities ko pesh karte hai.... maine bahot se stories pe ye cheej notice ki hai.... update bada karne ke chakkar mein kayi baar aanchahe topics ko lamba khinch dete hai...
par is kahani mein aisa bilkul nahi hai.... ch aahe update chhota hi sahi lekin wohi important baatein add hoti link by link jiski jaruat hoti hai ek kahani ko flow ke hisap se aage badhane ke liye
so us boss ki jaan to billiyo ki 9 jindagi jaisi nikli hai.... marta hi nahi...
koi na galtiyaan insaan se hi hoti, venky se bhi ho gayi...
vikram ko pata chal gaya hai to ye khabar manohar tak bhi pahunchne wali hai.... udhar aditya ko bhi pata chal gaya ki case kisne kiya tha.....
matlab saaf hai.....Ek taraf avinash ko maut di....udhar manohar ke nashile cheejo ko jala diya aur ab ye case.....
manohar ko bhadkane ke liye kaafi ye activities....
yaani manohar aur venky bahot jald takraane wale hai...
udhar shayad kismat venky ke sath hai.... fight club mein uski jholi mein vandana aur sanjana aake girne wale hai... agar venky in dono ko pakad liya to kya jaan se maar dega..?

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

thnkq....
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[Villain1825]

UPDATE - 34
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LOCATION - NEW YORK
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PLACE - RONIT's HOUSE
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Ronit - beta dekh rhi ho kitni bheed hai.... ticket nhi milega..... q bhai ticket milega kya.....


Driver - koshish karunga sir.....


Ronit - theek hai yeh lo paise 3 ticket le lena.....


Phir driver ne paise le liye aur luggage gaadi se nikaalke andar le ke chala gaya.... aur uske peeche ronit, vandana aur sanjana bhiiii....ghar ke andar driver ne luggage wahan rakh diya.....


itne main ghar ka caretaker wahan aa gaya.... saath main uski wife bhi thi..... (ronit ne yahan pe india ke 2 logon ka rakha hua tha ghar ki dekhbhaal ke liye.....Rakhi aur Ajay) rakhi turant kitchen main chali gayi kuch khane pine ki cheez Lane......


Ajay - namaste sir.....


Ronit - namaste..... kaise ho ajay.....


Ajay - theeek hun malik..... aapka jaise hi call aaya maine yahan ki saaf safai karwa di thi aur sab zaroorat ka samaan mangwa liya tha.....


Ronit - goood.... bahut acha kiya.....


Ajay - maalik bahut dino se main apne ghar apne bharat nahi gaya hun..... agar aapki anumati ho toh main 1 hafte ke liye chala jaun......


Ronit - theeek hai ajay chale jao.... waise bhi ham log abhi kuch din yahin rukenge.....


Ajay - theeek hai.....


Ronit - lekin jldiii aane ki koshish karna......


Ajay - bsss 1 hafte main aa jayenge maalik.....


itne main ajay ki dharampatni rakhi ne naasta table pe laga diya.... aur ronit vandana and sanjana naasta karne lage......


Ronit - tum log jao ajay..... packing kro main sham ki ticket kara deta hun.....


Ajay - theek hai.....


phir ajay aur rakhi apne room ki taraf chale jate hain jo main door ke paas tha..... unke jaate hi......


Vandana - unko india q bhej rhe hain abhi..... khana main banaungiiii kya......


Ronit - vandu dekho woh log kitne saalon se yahan hai.... unka bhi mnnnn karta hoga ki kuch din apni family ke saath bitayen......


Sanjana - hnnn papa sahi kaha..... waise mummy aao tension mat lo main saare kaam kar dungi..... theeeek hai.....


Vandana - aaaj tak apna ek kapda toh dhula nhi hai..... saare kaaam kregi.... huhhhh....


Sanjana - papa.....


Ronit - vandana jab tak yeh sikhegiii nhiiii toh kar kaise payegiiii kuch...... aur phir shadi ke baad ise taane sunne ko milenge...... tum iski help karna aise yeh bhi khana banana aur dusre kaaam karna seekh jayegi......


Vandana - theeek hai jiiii.....


abhi yeh log baatein kar hi rhe the ki woh driver andar aaya aur ronit ke paas aake use ticket dene laga.....


Driver - yeh lijiye sir bahut mushqil se mile hain..... yahan par villain ka bahut craze hai.... islie bahut jyada bheed thi ticket line main.....


Sanjana - ohhh acha..... waise yeh villain hai kaun....


Driver - kehte hain ki yeh india main delhi se hai.... bahut deadly fighter pichli baar isne apne opponents ko koi mauka hi nahi diya tha..... aur kuch hi der main maar dala tha.....


Sanjana /vandana - uffff.... aisi bhi fight hoti hai kya jisme jaan se hi maar dete hain.....


Ronit - aur nhiii toh kiya..... tum logke sunke hi rongte khade ho gaye..... isiliye mana kar rha tha ticket lene ko.....mujhe pata tha tum log nahi dekh paogi.....


Sanjana - nhiiii paa main dekhungi.....


Ronit - theeek hai.....


Phir woh driver wahan se chala gaya..... aur idhar yeh log bhi apne rooms main chal diye rest krne.........


idhar aditya manohar ke ghar main batha hua soch rha tha ki manohar bhai ko abhi us venky ka naam nahi bataunga use pakad ke seedha bhai ke saamne haazir karunga.......agar naam bata diya uska toh bhai kehenge ki pakad ke q nahi laaya use aur phir ho skata hai gusse main mujhe bhi maar den.....


thori der main manohar stairs se neeche ki aur aata hua dikhayi diya..... aditya apni jagah pe khada ho gaya...... manohar paas aaya uske aur usko baithne ka ishara karke khud bhi baith gaya ek sofe pe......


Manohar - toh kya pata chala aditya......


Aditya - bhai maine court pahunchke us advocate ke baare main pata lagaya phir pata chala ki uska naam rameshwar hai aur pahunch gaya uske chamber main...... jahan ja ke main usse mila toh usne bataya ek call aaya tha uske paas aur usi ne aisa karne ko kaha tha......


Manohar - kuch naaam waam bataya tha usne.....


Aditya - nhiiii bhai naaam usko bhi nahi pata hai.... maine usko yeh case ladne ko mana kar dia hai..... aur usse bola maine ki usko phone kar aur yahan milne ko bula..... rameshwar ne kaha tha jaise hi woh aane ko kehega sabse pehle mujhe hi khabar karega......


Manohar - theeek hai..... us rameshwar par nazar rakhna aur jald se jald jisne case kiya tha usko mere saamne hazir kana.... samajh gaye.....


Aditya - hnnnn bhai aisa hi hoga......


Phir aditya wahan se uthke bahar aa gaya....... bahar halka halka andhera hone laga tha...... woh jaise hi bahar nikla achanak woh kisi se takra gaya..... saamne dekha toh vikram tha......


Aditya - kya hua vikram bhai kahan khoye hue ho.....


Vikram - kahin nahi yrrrr..... bsss bhai ke paas ja rha tha...itne main tum aa gaye saamne se......


Aditya - theeek hai jao......


vikram ne Aditya se jhoot bol diya tha lekin woh abhi soch main gum tha ki bhai ko kya jawaaab dun..... yahi sochte hue woh manohar ke paas aake chupchaap khada ho gaya......


Manohar - kya hua.... khade hi rahoge ya baithoge bhiiiiii......


yeh sunke vikram baith jaata hai lekin uske chehre pe chinta ki lakeer saaf dikh rhi thi.....


Manohar - kya hua kuch preshan dikh rhe ho.....


Vikram - hnnnn bhai baat hi kuch aisi hai..... main agra aur delhi gaya tha avinash ki talaash main jahan jaake pata chala ki avinash ko kisi ne maar diya hai.....


Manohar - aur drugs ka kya hua......


Vikram - bhai hmne avinash ke dono addon par chaanbeen ki lekin hame thora sa bhi drugs nahi mila phir hame delhi main avinash ka partner mila usne bataya ki unlogon ne avinash ko maaarke drugs ko jala diya tha......


drugs jalne ki baaat sunkar manohar bahut gussa aaya uski aankhein laal ho gayi usne uthke vikram ke gale ko pakad ke zor se dabane laga......


Manohar -behnchod tu jaaanta hai ki mere drugs ko kisne jalaya phir bhi tu use maarke aane ke bajaaay mujhe aakar yeh bata rha hai ki mera drugs usne jala diya....


vikram ki aankhein aankhein bahar aane lagi thi yeh dekhke manohar ne uski gardan ko chor diya..... vikram khaanste hue apni saansein durust karne laga.....


Vikram - bhai main use maarke hi aata lekin mere paaas wahan bande kam the aur hathiyaar bhi nahi the..... islie yahan se lene aaya tha......


Manohar - yeh baaat pehle nahi bata sakta tha..... jab mar jaata tab batata.... ab jaa jiski bhi zaroorat ho le ke jaa....


yeh sunke vikram wahan se jaane laga abhi woh door ke paas pahuncha tha ki manohar phir bol para aur woh piche dekhne laga.....


Manohar - agar aise hi wapas aa gaya.... toh tujhe main zinda jala dunga.... maarke aana ya marke aana.....


Vikram - thik hai bhai......


Aur phir vikram bahar chala gaya..... agle din sham main venky ki flight newyork main land hui..... woh log airport se bahar nikale hi the ki tabhi wahan venky ka trainer aake unke paas khada ho gaya......


trainer - welcome again in newyork ViLLAiN.....


Aaj ke liye itna hi.....
contunued.....

 

[Villain1825]

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