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A hero can kill someone to save the world...

but a villain can destroy the world to save one...


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Saamne se - woh jo wakeel hier kiya tha aapne banglore wala.... wahin ke mere ek bande ne bataya hai ki usko kisi ne dara dhamka ke case band karne ko kaha hai.....



Main - uski tention tum mat lo main woh matter sambhaal lunga.... tum yeh pata kro ki chaanbeen karne wale kaun log the.....



Saamne se - thik hai....



phir maine phone cut kar dia.....



Main - ab bahut raat ho gayi.... baaaki ki story kal sunana vandana jiii.....



Vandana - thik hai.....



Dusre din main aur michael phir pahunch gaye vandna ke ghar.... vandana ne phir aage ki story batani shuru ki........



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aise hi dheere dheere time guzarta gaya aur priya aaye din rajesh se milne aa jati thi shuru shuru main toh anamika ne koi aitraaz nahi kya lekin jab yeh silsila badhta chala gaya toh woh bhi sochne par mazboor ho gayi..... ki ho na ho inka koi chakkar hai..... aur yeh baaat ek din confirm ho hi gayi.......



Us din rajesh exam deke hostel jaldi nikal gaya tha..... abhi anamika apni frnds ke saath campus main khadi thi tabhi priya wahan aa gayi.....



Priya - hiiii anamika kaisi ho.....



Anamika - main thik hun tum kaisi ho.....



Priya - main nhi thik hun.....



Anamika - q kya hua.....



Priya - jab tak tum rajesh ki life se chali nahi jaogi.... tabtak main kaise theek ho sakti hun.....



Anamika - yeh kya bakwaas kar rhi ho......Rajesh mujhse pyaar karta hai.... aur ham dono study complete karke.......shadi kar lenge.....



Priya - main kya bakwaas kar rhi hun.....bakwaas toh tum kar rhi ho pyaar shadi......



Anamika - sach main ham dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hain....tumhe maanna ho maano ya na mano.....



Priya - bsss yahi toh museebat hai ki woh tumse pyaar karta hai.... asal main baat yeh hai ki....



Anamika - kya baat hai.....



Priya - meri aur rajesh ki shadi jab uske bhai ki shadi thi tabhi pakki ho gayi hamari mangni bhi ho chuki hai...... main bahut khus thi ki uski study complete hote hai hamari shadi ho jayegi..... isiliye jab main yahan aayi toh mujhe kisi se pata chala ki woh tumse pyaar karta hai...... ab tumhi batao main kya karun..... main tumhare aage haaath jodti hun..... please uski zindagi se chali jao..... main uske bina mar jaungi.....



Anamika - lekin usne mujhe kabhi nahi bataya..... tmhare baare main.....



Priya - kaise batata woh tumse pyaar karta tha.... agar tumhe yakeen nahi ho rha toh yeh dekho mangni ki ring..... aisi hi ring rajesh bhi pehenta hai....woh ring bhi mangni ki hai......



(asal main yeh plan bahut dino se priya ke dimaag main tha isikiye usne rajesh ke jaisi ring kharid li thi)



Anamika - hnnn keh to tum sahi rhi ho..... aisi hi ring pehenta hai woh..... main ek baar rajesh se milke baat karna chahti hun......



Priya - aisa karogiiii..... toh woh mujhe apne paas kabhi bhatakne bhi nahi dega.... plzzz tum use bina bataye yahan se chali jao.... agar woh mujhe nahi mila toh main mar jaungi..... meri zindagi aur mautcab tumhare hathon main hai......



Phir anamika aage kuch bhi bole bina wahan se chali gayiiiii..... priya ka toh samjho kaam ho gaya tha.... woh wahan se apne Ghar ko chal di.......



Anamika hostel jaate hue soch rhi thi ki priya ki baat sach toh lagti hai use uski zindagi se chale jaana chahiye...... usne hostel aake apna saara samaan pack kiya q ki aaj aakhiri exam tha thori der main uske papa waise bhi lene aane wale the..... phir usne ek letter likha aur ek ladki ko bola ki agar rajesh aaye toh use de dena......



kuch der baad anamika ke papa aaye aur woh unke saath chali gayi...... idhar rajesh ko thora fever tha islie woh college se jaldi aa gaya tha.....aur hostel aake so gaya tha sham ko woh so ke utha toh thora acha feel kar rha tha..... woh fresh hua phir chal dia.... Anamika se milne.....



Hostel ke bahar pahuncha toh wahan woh ladki khadi thi JisE anamika ne letter diya tha.... usne jaise hi rajesh ko dekha woh uski tarah chal di aur letter uski aur badha diya......



Rajesh - yeh kya hai.....



Ladki - anamika ne aapko dene ko kaha tha.....



Rajesh - woh q nahi aayi yahan.....



Ladki - woh yahan ho tab aaye na....



Rajesh - q kahan gayi.....



Ladki - uske papa bulane aaye the woh unke saath chali gayi ghar....



Rajesh - kya......



Ladki - hnnnn..... jiiiii....



Rajesh - kamaal hai usne mujhe bataya tak nahi ki aaaj chali jayegi woh...... (mnnn main) ho sakta hai koi urgent kaam aa gaya ho islie bina bataye chali gayi..... usne woh letter apni pocket main rakha aur chal diya wapas hostel ki taraf......



wahin idhar gaon main Upasna aur malti taiyaar thi kahin jaane ke lie.....



Upasna - bahu rajneesh se kaho ki ham log ko chor aaye padhan ji ke ghar tak....



Malti - acha abhi kehti hun.....



phir woh chal di apne room ki taraf jahan rajneesh leta hua tha.....



Malti - aye jiii....



Rajneesh - hnnn kya hua....



Malti - woh maa ji keh rhi ki ham logon ko padhan jiii ke yahan chor aaiye....



Rajneesh - wahan kya karne ja rhi ho.....



Malti - woh rajesh ke lie ladki dekhne ja rhe hain.....



Rajneesh - saala uski hi kismat achi hai..... chalo aata hun......



phir woh bahar aaya aur un dono ke pradhan ke ghar tak chor aaya.....



pradhan ka ghar kaafi bada bana hua tha ghar kya haveli kaho use...... woh dono haal main aayi saamne hi Abhijeet pradhan baithe hue the saath main unki dharam patni sudha bhi thi.... jaise hi unhone Upasna ko aata dekha..... uthke unka swagat karne lage......



Phir sab wahan kursiyon par baith gaye..... phir naukraani ne naasta laga diya.... sab log naasta karne lage.....



Malti - abhijeet ji ab beti ko bulwa lijiye.....



Abhijeet - jiiii..... sudha jao Sandhya ko le aao.....



phir sudha wahan se chali gayi..... thori hi der baad ek ladki haathon main tray liye aati hun dikhayi di..... pariyon jaisi Khubsurat thi woh.....Upasna use dekhte hi apni bahu maan chuki thi.....



Upasna - mujhe aapki ladki bahut pasand hai..... aapko koi aapatti toh nhiii is rishte se.....



Abhijeet - nhiii bhabhi jii....mujhe koi aapatti nahi hai.....



Upasna - toh kisi din aake mere bete ko bhi dekh lijiye..... agar pasand aaye toh baat aage badhayenge phir.....



Abhijeet - mujhe aapka ladka pasand hai..... maine use rajneesh ki shadi main dekha tha.... mujhe bahut gudwaan aur acha laga tha..... iskie meri taraf se bhi rishta pakka hai.....



Upasna - theek hai phir mera beta 2 din main aa jayega.... toh phir mangniyki tareek rakh lenge.....



Abhijeet - jaisa aap uchit samjhen......



Upasna - bsss ek vinti hai aapse....



Abhijeet - jii kahiye.....



Upasna - dekhiye rajesh ke babuji ki tabiyat theek nahi rehti iskie woh chahte hain ki unke jeete ji rajesh ki bhi shadi ho jaye.... toh main yeh keh thi ki ho sake tho shadi 1 mahine ke andar hi kar dena......



Abhijeet - aao nischint rahiye.... jaisa aap kehengi waisa hi hoga.... ab aap sandhya se baat karo.... mujhe kuch kaam hai seher main islie mujhe nikalna parega...



Upasna - theek hai aao jaiye...... warna aapko late ho jaega.....



idhar abhijeet nikal gaya seher ke lie udhar hostel main rajesh besudh pada hua apne bed par aankhon se aansoo jaari aur uske sir ke aage ek letter pada hua tha jisme likha tha.....



Aaj ke lie itna hi....

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Saamne se - woh jo wakeel hier kiya tha aapne banglore wala.... wahin ke mere ek bande ne bataya hai ki usko kisi ne dara dhamka ke case band karne ko kaha hai.....



Main - uski tention tum mat lo main woh matter sambhaal lunga.... tum yeh pata kro ki chaanbeen karne wale kaun log the.....



Saamne se - thik hai....



phir maine phone cut kar dia.....



Main - ab bahut raat ho gayi.... baaaki ki story kal sunana vandana jiii.....



Vandana - thik hai.....



Dusre din main aur michael phir pahunch gaye vandna ke ghar.... vandana ne phir aage ki story batani shuru ki........



FLASHBACK CONTINUE



aise hi dheere dheere time guzarta gaya aur priya aaye din rajesh se milne aa jati thi shuru shuru main toh anamika ne koi aitraaz nahi kya lekin jab yeh silsila badhta chala gaya toh woh bhi sochne par mazboor ho gayi..... ki ho na ho inka koi chakkar hai..... aur yeh baaat ek din confirm ho hi gayi.......



Us din rajesh exam deke hostel jaldi nikal gaya tha..... abhi anamika apni frnds ke saath campus main khadi thi tabhi priya wahan aa gayi.....



Priya - hiiii anamika kaisi ho.....



Anamika - main thik hun tum kaisi ho.....



Priya - main nhi thik hun.....



Anamika - q kya hua.....



Priya - jab tak tum rajesh ki life se chali nahi jaogi.... tabtak main kaise theek ho sakti hun.....



Anamika - yeh kya bakwaas kar rhi ho......Rajesh mujhse pyaar karta hai.... aur ham dono study complete karke.......shadi kar lenge.....



Priya - main kya bakwaas kar rhi hun.....bakwaas toh tum kar rhi ho pyaar shadi......



Anamika - sach main ham dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hain....tumhe maanna ho maano ya na mano.....



Priya - bsss yahi toh museebat hai ki woh tumse pyaar karta hai.... asal main baat yeh hai ki....



Anamika - kya baat hai.....



Priya - meri aur rajesh ki shadi jab uske bhai ki shadi thi tabhi pakki ho gayi hamari mangni bhi ho chuki hai...... main bahut khus thi ki uski study complete hote hai hamari shadi ho jayegi..... isiliye jab main yahan aayi toh mujhe kisi se pata chala ki woh tumse pyaar karta hai...... ab tumhi batao main kya karun..... main tumhare aage haaath jodti hun..... please uski zindagi se chali jao..... main uske bina mar jaungi.....



Anamika - lekin usne mujhe kabhi nahi bataya..... tmhare baare main.....



Priya - kaise batata woh tumse pyaar karta tha.... agar tumhe yakeen nahi ho rha toh yeh dekho mangni ki ring..... aisi hi ring rajesh bhi pehenta hai....woh ring bhi mangni ki hai......



(asal main yeh plan bahut dino se priya ke dimaag main tha isikiye usne rajesh ke jaisi ring kharid li thi)



Anamika - hnnn keh to tum sahi rhi ho..... aisi hi ring pehenta hai woh..... main ek baar rajesh se milke baat karna chahti hun......



Priya - aisa karogiiii..... toh woh mujhe apne paas kabhi bhatakne bhi nahi dega.... plzzz tum use bina bataye yahan se chali jao.... agar woh mujhe nahi mila toh main mar jaungi..... meri zindagi aur mautcab tumhare hathon main hai......



Phir anamika aage kuch bhi bole bina wahan se chali gayiiiii..... priya ka toh samjho kaam ho gaya tha.... woh wahan se apne Ghar ko chal di.......



Anamika hostel jaate hue soch rhi thi ki priya ki baat sach toh lagti hai use uski zindagi se chale jaana chahiye...... usne hostel aake apna saara samaan pack kiya q ki aaj aakhiri exam tha thori der main uske papa waise bhi lene aane wale the..... phir usne ek letter likha aur ek ladki ko bola ki agar rajesh aaye toh use de dena......



kuch der baad anamika ke papa aaye aur woh unke saath chali gayi...... idhar rajesh ko thora fever tha islie woh college se jaldi aa gaya tha.....aur hostel aake so gaya tha sham ko woh so ke utha toh thora acha feel kar rha tha..... woh fresh hua phir chal dia.... Anamika se milne.....



Hostel ke bahar pahuncha toh wahan woh ladki khadi thi JisE anamika ne letter diya tha.... usne jaise hi rajesh ko dekha woh uski tarah chal di aur letter uski aur badha diya......



Rajesh - yeh kya hai.....



Ladki - anamika ne aapko dene ko kaha tha.....



Rajesh - woh q nahi aayi yahan.....



Ladki - woh yahan ho tab aaye na....



Rajesh - q kahan gayi.....



Ladki - uske papa bulane aaye the woh unke saath chali gayi ghar....



Rajesh - kya......



Ladki - hnnnn..... jiiiii....



Rajesh - kamaal hai usne mujhe bataya tak nahi ki aaaj chali jayegi woh...... (mnnn main) ho sakta hai koi urgent kaam aa gaya ho islie bina bataye chali gayi..... usne woh letter apni pocket main rakha aur chal diya wapas hostel ki taraf......



wahin idhar gaon main Upasna aur malti taiyaar thi kahin jaane ke lie.....



Upasna - bahu rajneesh se kaho ki ham log ko chor aaye padhan ji ke ghar tak....



Malti - acha abhi kehti hun.....



phir woh chal di apne room ki taraf jahan rajneesh leta hua tha.....



Malti - aye jiii....



Rajneesh - hnnn kya hua....



Malti - woh maa ji keh rhi ki ham logon ko padhan jiii ke yahan chor aaiye....



Rajneesh - wahan kya karne ja rhi ho.....



Malti - woh rajesh ke lie ladki dekhne ja rhe hain.....



Rajneesh - saala uski hi kismat achi hai..... chalo aata hun......



phir woh bahar aaya aur un dono ke pradhan ke ghar tak chor aaya.....



pradhan ka ghar kaafi bada bana hua tha ghar kya haveli kaho use...... woh dono haal main aayi saamne hi Abhijeet pradhan baithe hue the saath main unki dharam patni sudha bhi thi.... jaise hi unhone Upasna ko aata dekha..... uthke unka swagat karne lage......



Phir sab wahan kursiyon par baith gaye..... phir naukraani ne naasta laga diya.... sab log naasta karne lage.....



Malti - abhijeet ji ab beti ko bulwa lijiye.....



Abhijeet - jiiii..... sudha jao Sandhya ko le aao.....



phir sudha wahan se chali gayi..... thori hi der baad ek ladki haathon main tray liye aati hun dikhayi di..... pariyon jaisi Khubsurat thi woh.....Upasna use dekhte hi apni bahu maan chuki thi.....



Upasna - mujhe aapki ladki bahut pasand hai..... aapko koi aapatti toh nhiii is rishte se.....



Abhijeet - nhiii bhabhi jii....mujhe koi aapatti nahi hai.....



Upasna - toh kisi din aake mere bete ko bhi dekh lijiye..... agar pasand aaye toh baat aage badhayenge phir.....



Abhijeet - mujhe aapka ladka pasand hai..... maine use rajneesh ki shadi main dekha tha.... mujhe bahut gudwaan aur acha laga tha..... iskie meri taraf se bhi rishta pakka hai.....



Upasna - theek hai phir mera beta 2 din main aa jayega.... toh phir mangniyki tareek rakh lenge.....



Abhijeet - jaisa aap uchit samjhen......



Upasna - bsss ek vinti hai aapse....



Abhijeet - jii kahiye.....



Upasna - dekhiye rajesh ke babuji ki tabiyat theek nahi rehti iskie woh chahte hain ki unke jeete ji rajesh ki bhi shadi ho jaye.... toh main yeh keh thi ki ho sake tho shadi 1 mahine ke andar hi kar dena......



Abhijeet - aao nischint rahiye.... jaisa aap kehengi waisa hi hoga.... ab aap sandhya se baat karo.... mujhe kuch kaam hai seher main islie mujhe nikalna parega...



Upasna - theek hai aao jaiye...... warna aapko late ho jaega.....



idhar abhijeet nikal gaya seher ke lie udhar hostel main rajesh besudh pada hua apne bed par aankhon se aansoo jaari aur uske sir ke aage ek letter pada hua tha jisme likha tha.....



Aaj ke lie itna hi....

continue.....
Yeh kyaa nautanki hai. Anamika Rajesh se pyaar karti hai toh usko uske upar bharosa karna chahiye. Koi bhi aake bolega woh Rajesh se pyaar karti hai uski sagai usse hogayi toh woh aur uska vishwaas karlegi. Ek jaisi ring bazaar mein kitni milti hai utni akal nhi hai kyaa usme.

Aur idher Rajesh ke maa baap bhi uske bete ki marzi jaane bina uska rishta kahi aur kar de rahe hai. Gazabbb
 

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Yeh kyaa nautanki hai. Anamika Rajesh se pyaar karti hai toh usko uske upar bharosa karna chahiye. Koi bhi aake bolega woh Rajesh se pyaar karti hai uski sagai usse hogayi toh woh aur uska vishwaas karlegi. Ek jaisi ring bazaar mein kitni milti hai utni akal nhi hai kyaa usme.

Aur idher Rajesh ke maa baap bhi uske bete ki marzi jaane bina uska rishta kahi aur kar de rahe hai. Gazabbb
bhai flashback 80's ke zamaane ka hai toh pehle maa baap hi rishta tay kar dete the.....
 
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aur phir usne apne sab badon ke pair chuke aashirwaad liya..... aur nikal hostel ke lie driver ke saath......



Abhi thori hi der hui thi rajesh ko nikle ki priya ghar main dakhil hui saamne hi use malti dikh gayi apne rooom se bahar aati hui..... woh jaake usse gale mili aur dono wapas room main ghus gayi.....



Priya - kahan hai mera sajan.....



Malti - kaun saajan...



Priya - aree didi aap bhi na itti jldi bhul gayi....



Malti - kya bhul gayi main....



Priya - kal aapne hi toh bataya tha us ladke ke baare main ki woh aapka dewae hai.....



Malti - woh tumhara saajan nahi hai yeh baat achi tarah se samjh lo..... woh tumhe kabhi nahiii apnayega.....



Priya -( priya thori bechain hote hue) lekin q diiii.....



Malti - q woh kisi aur se pyaar karta hai usne aaj subah mujhe bataya tha jab main tumhari baat kar rhi thi usse..... (jhooot)....



priya itna sunte hi wahan se uthke chal di apne ghar malti use pukaarti rhi lekin use piche palat kar nahi dekha shayad apne aansuon ko chupa rhi thi.......



udhar delhi main Rajesh bhi padhai toh mnnn lagakar kar hi rha tha saath main anamika ke saath pyaar ke do pal bhi bitane ko mil jaate the.... aur kya chahiye tha use zindagi main....



Aise hi 4 saal beet gaye malti ki god abhi khali hi thi...... virendra ab kuch jyada beemar rehne laga tha....usne ek din vakeel se milke apni wasiyat banwa li thi.... kya wasiyat thi woh toh baad main pata chalega......



Khair ek din priya aur rajesh ka saamna ho hi gaya..... priya apni kuch se milne idhar st. mary medical college aayi hui thi...... woh garden main apne doston ke saath baithi hui thi tabhi use saamne se rajesh aata hua dikhayi diya..... woh dod ke uske paaas chali gayi.....



Priya - hiiiii....



Rajesh - jiii aap kaun....



Priya - main priya....



Rajesh - kaun priya....



Priya - tumhari bhabhi ki behen....



Rajesh - ohhh acha pehchaan gaya.... shadi main tumne hi mujhe letter diya tha na.....



Priya - shukr hai tumhe yddd toh hun.....



Rajesh - dekho agar tunhara wahi iraada hai toh meri taraf se phir naa hai.....



Priya - nhiiii aisa koi iraada nahi hai...... mujhe didi ne sabkuch bata diya tha..... ki tum kisi aur se pyaaar karte ho.....



Rajesh - ruko tumhe milata hun usse.....



Priya - yahin parhti hai kya woh.....



Rajesh - hnnnn.... mere saath hi parhti hai.....



Priya - acha main kisi aur din mil lungi usse..... abhi mujhe yeh bata do ki main dosti ke layak hun ki nahi aapke.....



Rajesh - isme bhi koi pooochne ki baat hai..... dosti ke lie i am always ready....



phir priya rajesh par kood padi aur use gale se kaga liya..... udhar anamika khadi dekh rhi thi..... woh soch rhi thi ki pata nahi kaun ladki hai jise rajesh gale mil rha hai...... khair woh hostel ki taraf nikal gayi......



Priya - acha main chalti hun..... mujhe late ho rha hai.....



Rajesh - ok jao.....



Priya - okkk byeee..... phir milte hain....



Rajesh - byeee.....



phir woh dono apni apni manzil ki taraf chal diye......idhar ghar main virendra ek bed pe leta hua tha...... upasna paas main baithi hui thi......



Virendra - upasna.....



Upasna - hnnnn jiiiii.....



Virendra - mujhe lagta hai ab main jyada din nahi jiii paunga.....



Upasna - jiiii aisa q bolte ho aap.....



Virendra - mujhe aisa lagta hai.....



Upasna - nhiii aapko kuch nhi hoga.....



Virendra - tumhare chahne se kya hoga..... main chahta hun ki mere jeete jiiii rajesh ki bhi shadi ho jaaye...... uski padhai is saal poori ho jayegi.....



Upasna - aap thik ho jaaiye phir ham saath main jayenge ladki dekhne rajesh ke lie......



Virendra - nhiiiii tum aur malti rajesh ke lie koi ladki dekho.....main jldi se jldi shadi kar dena chahta hun......



Upasna - theeek hai jaisa aap kaho..... main kal se hi uske liye rishta dhoondna shuru kar deti hun.....



priya ke jaane ke baaad rajesh anamika ka wait karta raha wahin khada hoke kekin jab woh wahan tab hi toh aaaye.... woh intezar karta hua..... hostel chal diya..... aur sochne laga ki pata nahi anamika mujhse mile bina q chali gayi aaaj.....



Sham main usne hostel ki ek ladki se anamika ko bulwa bheja..... thori der main anamika bahar aayi woh thora gusse main lag rhi thi.......



Anamika - bolo kya hua.... q bulwaaya.....



Rajesh - yrrr tum mujhe mile bina chali gayi thi.... islie bulwa liya.....



Anamika - q mujhse milkar kya karoge.... jao usi ladki ke gale pado.....



Rajesh - kaun ladki.....



Anamika - wahin jisse chutti ke baad gale mil rhe the.....



Rajesh - areee yrrr woh meri bhabhi ki behen hai..... yahan mujhe dekha toh usi se baaat karne laga tha.....



Anamika - bhabhi ke behen phir gale q lag rhi thi.....



Rajesh - usne mujhe bahut dino baad dekha tha.... islie woh dekhte hi gale lag gyiii mujhse.....



Anamika - acha thik hai....



Rajesh - hmmm....



Anamika - thik hai main ja rhi hun hostel mujhe kaam hai bahut.......



Rajesh - thik hai jao.....



Phir anamika hostel chali gayi aur rajesh chai ke hotel oar chala gaya.... chai ke saath sutta pine.....




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abhi vandana aage kuch batati ki Michael ka mobile bajne laga.....



Michael - hnnn bolo kya hua......



Saamne se - bhai venky bhai se baat karao.....



Michael - acha....



Michael - bhai aapke lie phone hai....



maine uske haath se phone le liya.....



Main - hnnn bolo kya hua.....



Saamne se - bhai avinash ke agra wale adde par aur delhi main boss ke ghar pe kuch log khus kar chaanbeen kar rhe the.....



Main - kaun the kuch pata chala....



Saamne se - bhai yeh toh nahi pata ki kaun the....



Main - theek hai pata karo phir mujhe call kro....



Saamne se - theeek hai....



Main - ab rakho....



Saamne se - bhai ek aur baat batani hai....



Main - jldi bol.....



Saamne se - woh jo wakeel hier kiya tha aapne banglore wala.... wahin ke mere ek bande ne bataya hai ki usko kisi ne dara dhamka ke case band karne ko kaha hai.....



Main - uski tention tum mat lo main woh matter sambhaal lunga.... tum yeh pata kro ki chaanbeen karne wale kaun log the.....



Saamne se - thik hai....



phir maine phone cut kar dia.....



Main - ab bahut raat ho gayi.... baaaki ki story kal sunana vandana jiii.....



Vandana - thik hai.....




aaj ke lie itna hi....

continue....
ab priya sach mein pyar karti hai ya rajesh ki property se ye waqt hi bataye...
ye kya ye to rajesh gale lagne lag gayi udhar anamika bhi shaq hua ye dekh.... lekin sukar hai rajesh Sare doubts clear kar diya...
lekin shayad ye priya yun nahi ayi hai phir se uski jindagi mein... ye kuch na kuch kand jarur karegi....
Udhar rajesh ke pita ki tabiyat din ba din kharab hoti jaa rahi thi, isliye unki ichha anuchar rajesh ki jald hi shaadi hone wali hai...
Lekin idhar to anamika aur rajesh ka pyar pure jor pe hai...
ab aise mein rajesh ko ghar pe uski shaadi tay hone wali pata chalne par kya beetegi uspar...
wo kya karega tab.. kya sach bata dega ki anamika se pyar karta hai..

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Present mein us khabri ne phone karke us wakil kewaha kya ho raha hai aur us delhi wale ghar kya hua uski jaankari de di...
Ab gaur talab baat ye hai ki venky aage kya action lene wala hai..
Well sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath samete huye hai update ke jariye writer sahab ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran kiya hai. .

Bahot dilchasp update sath hi kuch arthpoorn aur manmahok kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 

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Saamne se - woh jo wakeel hier kiya tha aapne banglore wala.... wahin ke mere ek bande ne bataya hai ki usko kisi ne dara dhamka ke case band karne ko kaha hai.....



Main - uski tention tum mat lo main woh matter sambhaal lunga.... tum yeh pata kro ki chaanbeen karne wale kaun log the.....



Saamne se - thik hai....



phir maine phone cut kar dia.....



Main - ab bahut raat ho gayi.... baaaki ki story kal sunana vandana jiii.....



Vandana - thik hai.....



Dusre din main aur michael phir pahunch gaye vandna ke ghar.... vandana ne phir aage ki story batani shuru ki........



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aise hi dheere dheere time guzarta gaya aur priya aaye din rajesh se milne aa jati thi shuru shuru main toh anamika ne koi aitraaz nahi kya lekin jab yeh silsila badhta chala gaya toh woh bhi sochne par mazboor ho gayi..... ki ho na ho inka koi chakkar hai..... aur yeh baaat ek din confirm ho hi gayi.......



Us din rajesh exam deke hostel jaldi nikal gaya tha..... abhi anamika apni frnds ke saath campus main khadi thi tabhi priya wahan aa gayi.....



Priya - hiiii anamika kaisi ho.....



Anamika - main thik hun tum kaisi ho.....



Priya - main nhi thik hun.....



Anamika - q kya hua.....



Priya - jab tak tum rajesh ki life se chali nahi jaogi.... tabtak main kaise theek ho sakti hun.....



Anamika - yeh kya bakwaas kar rhi ho......Rajesh mujhse pyaar karta hai.... aur ham dono study complete karke.......shadi kar lenge.....



Priya - main kya bakwaas kar rhi hun.....bakwaas toh tum kar rhi ho pyaar shadi......



Anamika - sach main ham dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hain....tumhe maanna ho maano ya na mano.....



Priya - bsss yahi toh museebat hai ki woh tumse pyaar karta hai.... asal main baat yeh hai ki....



Anamika - kya baat hai.....



Priya - meri aur rajesh ki shadi jab uske bhai ki shadi thi tabhi pakki ho gayi hamari mangni bhi ho chuki hai...... main bahut khus thi ki uski study complete hote hai hamari shadi ho jayegi..... isiliye jab main yahan aayi toh mujhe kisi se pata chala ki woh tumse pyaar karta hai...... ab tumhi batao main kya karun..... main tumhare aage haaath jodti hun..... please uski zindagi se chali jao..... main uske bina mar jaungi.....



Anamika - lekin usne mujhe kabhi nahi bataya..... tmhare baare main.....



Priya - kaise batata woh tumse pyaar karta tha.... agar tumhe yakeen nahi ho rha toh yeh dekho mangni ki ring..... aisi hi ring rajesh bhi pehenta hai....woh ring bhi mangni ki hai......



(asal main yeh plan bahut dino se priya ke dimaag main tha isikiye usne rajesh ke jaisi ring kharid li thi)



Anamika - hnnn keh to tum sahi rhi ho..... aisi hi ring pehenta hai woh..... main ek baar rajesh se milke baat karna chahti hun......



Priya - aisa karogiiii..... toh woh mujhe apne paas kabhi bhatakne bhi nahi dega.... plzzz tum use bina bataye yahan se chali jao.... agar woh mujhe nahi mila toh main mar jaungi..... meri zindagi aur mautcab tumhare hathon main hai......



Phir anamika aage kuch bhi bole bina wahan se chali gayiiiii..... priya ka toh samjho kaam ho gaya tha.... woh wahan se apne Ghar ko chal di.......



Anamika hostel jaate hue soch rhi thi ki priya ki baat sach toh lagti hai use uski zindagi se chale jaana chahiye...... usne hostel aake apna saara samaan pack kiya q ki aaj aakhiri exam tha thori der main uske papa waise bhi lene aane wale the..... phir usne ek letter likha aur ek ladki ko bola ki agar rajesh aaye toh use de dena......



kuch der baad anamika ke papa aaye aur woh unke saath chali gayi...... idhar rajesh ko thora fever tha islie woh college se jaldi aa gaya tha.....aur hostel aake so gaya tha sham ko woh so ke utha toh thora acha feel kar rha tha..... woh fresh hua phir chal dia.... Anamika se milne.....



Hostel ke bahar pahuncha toh wahan woh ladki khadi thi JisE anamika ne letter diya tha.... usne jaise hi rajesh ko dekha woh uski tarah chal di aur letter uski aur badha diya......



Rajesh - yeh kya hai.....



Ladki - anamika ne aapko dene ko kaha tha.....



Rajesh - woh q nahi aayi yahan.....



Ladki - woh yahan ho tab aaye na....



Rajesh - q kahan gayi.....



Ladki - uske papa bulane aaye the woh unke saath chali gayi ghar....



Rajesh - kya......



Ladki - hnnnn..... jiiiii....



Rajesh - kamaal hai usne mujhe bataya tak nahi ki aaaj chali jayegi woh...... (mnnn main) ho sakta hai koi urgent kaam aa gaya ho islie bina bataye chali gayi..... usne woh letter apni pocket main rakha aur chal diya wapas hostel ki taraf......



wahin idhar gaon main Upasna aur malti taiyaar thi kahin jaane ke lie.....



Upasna - bahu rajneesh se kaho ki ham log ko chor aaye padhan ji ke ghar tak....



Malti - acha abhi kehti hun.....



phir woh chal di apne room ki taraf jahan rajneesh leta hua tha.....



Malti - aye jiii....



Rajneesh - hnnn kya hua....



Malti - woh maa ji keh rhi ki ham logon ko padhan jiii ke yahan chor aaiye....



Rajneesh - wahan kya karne ja rhi ho.....



Malti - woh rajesh ke lie ladki dekhne ja rhe hain.....



Rajneesh - saala uski hi kismat achi hai..... chalo aata hun......



phir woh bahar aaya aur un dono ke pradhan ke ghar tak chor aaya.....



pradhan ka ghar kaafi bada bana hua tha ghar kya haveli kaho use...... woh dono haal main aayi saamne hi Abhijeet pradhan baithe hue the saath main unki dharam patni sudha bhi thi.... jaise hi unhone Upasna ko aata dekha..... uthke unka swagat karne lage......



Phir sab wahan kursiyon par baith gaye..... phir naukraani ne naasta laga diya.... sab log naasta karne lage.....



Malti - abhijeet ji ab beti ko bulwa lijiye.....



Abhijeet - jiiii..... sudha jao Sandhya ko le aao.....



phir sudha wahan se chali gayi..... thori hi der baad ek ladki haathon main tray liye aati hun dikhayi di..... pariyon jaisi Khubsurat thi woh.....Upasna use dekhte hi apni bahu maan chuki thi.....



Upasna - mujhe aapki ladki bahut pasand hai..... aapko koi aapatti toh nhiii is rishte se.....



Abhijeet - nhiii bhabhi jii....mujhe koi aapatti nahi hai.....



Upasna - toh kisi din aake mere bete ko bhi dekh lijiye..... agar pasand aaye toh baat aage badhayenge phir.....



Abhijeet - mujhe aapka ladka pasand hai..... maine use rajneesh ki shadi main dekha tha.... mujhe bahut gudwaan aur acha laga tha..... iskie meri taraf se bhi rishta pakka hai.....



Upasna - theek hai phir mera beta 2 din main aa jayega.... toh phir mangniyki tareek rakh lenge.....



Abhijeet - jaisa aap uchit samjhen......



Upasna - bsss ek vinti hai aapse....



Abhijeet - jii kahiye.....



Upasna - dekhiye rajesh ke babuji ki tabiyat theek nahi rehti iskie woh chahte hain ki unke jeete ji rajesh ki bhi shadi ho jaye.... toh main yeh keh thi ki ho sake tho shadi 1 mahine ke andar hi kar dena......



Abhijeet - aao nischint rahiye.... jaisa aap kehengi waisa hi hoga.... ab aap sandhya se baat karo.... mujhe kuch kaam hai seher main islie mujhe nikalna parega...



Upasna - theek hai aao jaiye...... warna aapko late ho jaega.....



idhar abhijeet nikal gaya seher ke lie udhar hostel main rajesh besudh pada hua apne bed par aankhon se aansoo jaari aur uske sir ke aage ek letter pada hua tha jisme likha tha.....



Aaj ke lie itna hi....

continue.....
:lol: :roflol:
ye priya ne to khud ke per pe kulhadi maar li...
perfect planning bhi ki anamika ko rajesh se door karne ki...magarmach wale aansuon ke sath rona dhona bhi kiya anamika ke saamne..
aur bewakoof anamika... itni well educated hoke bhi ek gaon ki gawar ki baaton mein aake bewakoof ban ke rajesh ko chhod ke chali gayi...

Lekin kehte hai na dusro ke liye jo gaddha khodta khud usmi girke marta hai... priya ka bhi haal wohi hone wala hai.. itne chaal chal ke itni mehnat ki usne lekin phal le jaane wali hai wo sandhya :lol: .... sabbash ek tarah se sandhya ke liye hi raasta saaf kar diya usne to :lotpot:
Jab ye baat pata chalegi ushe to uska chehra dekhne layak hoga... Bilkul sada hua tamatar jaisa :roflol:

Well sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath samete huye hai update ke jariye writer sahab ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran kiya hai. .

Bahot dilchasp update sath hi kuch arthpoorn aur manmahok kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 

Luffy

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Saamne se - woh jo wakeel hier kiya tha aapne banglore wala.... wahin ke mere ek bande ne bataya hai ki usko kisi ne dara dhamka ke case band karne ko kaha hai.....



Main - uski tention tum mat lo main woh matter sambhaal lunga.... tum yeh pata kro ki chaanbeen karne wale kaun log the.....



Saamne se - thik hai....



phir maine phone cut kar dia.....



Main - ab bahut raat ho gayi.... baaaki ki story kal sunana vandana jiii.....



Vandana - thik hai.....



Dusre din main aur michael phir pahunch gaye vandna ke ghar.... vandana ne phir aage ki story batani shuru ki........



FLASHBACK CONTINUE



aise hi dheere dheere time guzarta gaya aur priya aaye din rajesh se milne aa jati thi shuru shuru main toh anamika ne koi aitraaz nahi kya lekin jab yeh silsila badhta chala gaya toh woh bhi sochne par mazboor ho gayi..... ki ho na ho inka koi chakkar hai..... aur yeh baaat ek din confirm ho hi gayi.......



Us din rajesh exam deke hostel jaldi nikal gaya tha..... abhi anamika apni frnds ke saath campus main khadi thi tabhi priya wahan aa gayi.....



Priya - hiiii anamika kaisi ho.....



Anamika - main thik hun tum kaisi ho.....



Priya - main nhi thik hun.....



Anamika - q kya hua.....



Priya - jab tak tum rajesh ki life se chali nahi jaogi.... tabtak main kaise theek ho sakti hun.....



Anamika - yeh kya bakwaas kar rhi ho......Rajesh mujhse pyaar karta hai.... aur ham dono study complete karke.......shadi kar lenge.....



Priya - main kya bakwaas kar rhi hun.....bakwaas toh tum kar rhi ho pyaar shadi......



Anamika - sach main ham dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hain....tumhe maanna ho maano ya na mano.....



Priya - bsss yahi toh museebat hai ki woh tumse pyaar karta hai.... asal main baat yeh hai ki....



Anamika - kya baat hai.....



Priya - meri aur rajesh ki shadi jab uske bhai ki shadi thi tabhi pakki ho gayi hamari mangni bhi ho chuki hai...... main bahut khus thi ki uski study complete hote hai hamari shadi ho jayegi..... isiliye jab main yahan aayi toh mujhe kisi se pata chala ki woh tumse pyaar karta hai...... ab tumhi batao main kya karun..... main tumhare aage haaath jodti hun..... please uski zindagi se chali jao..... main uske bina mar jaungi.....



Anamika - lekin usne mujhe kabhi nahi bataya..... tmhare baare main.....



Priya - kaise batata woh tumse pyaar karta tha.... agar tumhe yakeen nahi ho rha toh yeh dekho mangni ki ring..... aisi hi ring rajesh bhi pehenta hai....woh ring bhi mangni ki hai......



(asal main yeh plan bahut dino se priya ke dimaag main tha isikiye usne rajesh ke jaisi ring kharid li thi)



Anamika - hnnn keh to tum sahi rhi ho..... aisi hi ring pehenta hai woh..... main ek baar rajesh se milke baat karna chahti hun......



Priya - aisa karogiiii..... toh woh mujhe apne paas kabhi bhatakne bhi nahi dega.... plzzz tum use bina bataye yahan se chali jao.... agar woh mujhe nahi mila toh main mar jaungi..... meri zindagi aur mautcab tumhare hathon main hai......



Phir anamika aage kuch bhi bole bina wahan se chali gayiiiii..... priya ka toh samjho kaam ho gaya tha.... woh wahan se apne Ghar ko chal di.......



Anamika hostel jaate hue soch rhi thi ki priya ki baat sach toh lagti hai use uski zindagi se chale jaana chahiye...... usne hostel aake apna saara samaan pack kiya q ki aaj aakhiri exam tha thori der main uske papa waise bhi lene aane wale the..... phir usne ek letter likha aur ek ladki ko bola ki agar rajesh aaye toh use de dena......



kuch der baad anamika ke papa aaye aur woh unke saath chali gayi...... idhar rajesh ko thora fever tha islie woh college se jaldi aa gaya tha.....aur hostel aake so gaya tha sham ko woh so ke utha toh thora acha feel kar rha tha..... woh fresh hua phir chal dia.... Anamika se milne.....



Hostel ke bahar pahuncha toh wahan woh ladki khadi thi JisE anamika ne letter diya tha.... usne jaise hi rajesh ko dekha woh uski tarah chal di aur letter uski aur badha diya......



Rajesh - yeh kya hai.....



Ladki - anamika ne aapko dene ko kaha tha.....



Rajesh - woh q nahi aayi yahan.....



Ladki - woh yahan ho tab aaye na....



Rajesh - q kahan gayi.....



Ladki - uske papa bulane aaye the woh unke saath chali gayi ghar....



Rajesh - kya......



Ladki - hnnnn..... jiiiii....



Rajesh - kamaal hai usne mujhe bataya tak nahi ki aaaj chali jayegi woh...... (mnnn main) ho sakta hai koi urgent kaam aa gaya ho islie bina bataye chali gayi..... usne woh letter apni pocket main rakha aur chal diya wapas hostel ki taraf......



wahin idhar gaon main Upasna aur malti taiyaar thi kahin jaane ke lie.....



Upasna - bahu rajneesh se kaho ki ham log ko chor aaye padhan ji ke ghar tak....



Malti - acha abhi kehti hun.....



phir woh chal di apne room ki taraf jahan rajneesh leta hua tha.....



Malti - aye jiii....



Rajneesh - hnnn kya hua....



Malti - woh maa ji keh rhi ki ham logon ko padhan jiii ke yahan chor aaiye....



Rajneesh - wahan kya karne ja rhi ho.....



Malti - woh rajesh ke lie ladki dekhne ja rhe hain.....



Rajneesh - saala uski hi kismat achi hai..... chalo aata hun......



phir woh bahar aaya aur un dono ke pradhan ke ghar tak chor aaya.....



pradhan ka ghar kaafi bada bana hua tha ghar kya haveli kaho use...... woh dono haal main aayi saamne hi Abhijeet pradhan baithe hue the saath main unki dharam patni sudha bhi thi.... jaise hi unhone Upasna ko aata dekha..... uthke unka swagat karne lage......



Phir sab wahan kursiyon par baith gaye..... phir naukraani ne naasta laga diya.... sab log naasta karne lage.....



Malti - abhijeet ji ab beti ko bulwa lijiye.....



Abhijeet - jiiii..... sudha jao Sandhya ko le aao.....



phir sudha wahan se chali gayi..... thori hi der baad ek ladki haathon main tray liye aati hun dikhayi di..... pariyon jaisi Khubsurat thi woh.....Upasna use dekhte hi apni bahu maan chuki thi.....



Upasna - mujhe aapki ladki bahut pasand hai..... aapko koi aapatti toh nhiii is rishte se.....



Abhijeet - nhiii bhabhi jii....mujhe koi aapatti nahi hai.....



Upasna - toh kisi din aake mere bete ko bhi dekh lijiye..... agar pasand aaye toh baat aage badhayenge phir.....



Abhijeet - mujhe aapka ladka pasand hai..... maine use rajneesh ki shadi main dekha tha.... mujhe bahut gudwaan aur acha laga tha..... iskie meri taraf se bhi rishta pakka hai.....



Upasna - theek hai phir mera beta 2 din main aa jayega.... toh phir mangniyki tareek rakh lenge.....



Abhijeet - jaisa aap uchit samjhen......



Upasna - bsss ek vinti hai aapse....



Abhijeet - jii kahiye.....



Upasna - dekhiye rajesh ke babuji ki tabiyat theek nahi rehti iskie woh chahte hain ki unke jeete ji rajesh ki bhi shadi ho jaye.... toh main yeh keh thi ki ho sake tho shadi 1 mahine ke andar hi kar dena......



Abhijeet - aao nischint rahiye.... jaisa aap kehengi waisa hi hoga.... ab aap sandhya se baat karo.... mujhe kuch kaam hai seher main islie mujhe nikalna parega...



Upasna - theek hai aao jaiye...... warna aapko late ho jaega.....



idhar abhijeet nikal gaya seher ke lie udhar hostel main rajesh besudh pada hua apne bed par aankhon se aansoo jaari aur uske sir ke aage ek letter pada hua tha jisme likha tha.....



Aaj ke lie itna hi....

continue.....
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Lekin idhar to anamika aur rajesh ka pyar pure jor pe hai...
ab aise mein rajesh ko ghar pe uski shaadi tay hone wali pata chalne par kya beetegi uspar...
wo kya karega tab.. kya sach bata dega ki anamika se pyar karta hai..
Yeh toh waqt batayega ki kya hoga....
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