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Thriller villain

story ki main heroine kaun ho sakti hai??.

  • rashmika

  • mohini

  • kajal

  • nisha

  • some one else


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A hero can kill someone to save the world...

but a villain can destroy the world to save one...


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kehte hai badla bhi ajeeb fanda hota hai.. .... bilkul nashe ki tarah.... Jitni purani utna hi jyada kick mile....
aaj us boss aur avinash ko pachtane ka bhi mauka nahi mila ....
mana ki un dono bhi planning Bahot badhiya banayi par un logo se dash kabam aage raha venky... aisi chaal chali dusman apne hi banaye gaye jaal mein fansh gaye.... aur natiza ek dardnaak maut ....

well kya baat hai.... Venky to baap ban gaya :D
to phir ab se ek achhe baap ki tarah rahna chahiye ushe, nisha ko chhod kisi bhi gair ladki ya aurat ko nazar uthake bhi nahi dekhna chahiye ushe....

sanjana ki mom bhi khauf mei hai... lekin ek baat ye bhi sach hai ki wo waar jarur karegi venky pe... chup to to baithne se rahi..


.. shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan....
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur hum pathako ka manoranjan karte rahiye..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 

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nisha jis room main gayi main usi room main jaane laga aur apna huliya sahi karne laga.... maine dooor khola toh nisha saamne bed pe baithi hui ro rhi thi aur uska baby so rha tha....


main - ro q rhi ho.....


nisha - meri wajah se tumhe itne preshani jhelni padi.... tum marte marte bache.... sab meri gltiiii thi..... mujhe maaaf kar do....


main - maine tumhe pills lene ko bola tha toh liya q nhi tha.....


nisha - maine pills li thi lekin time jab sex kiya tha tab lena bhoool gyiii thi.... bsss wahi gltiiii ho gayiiiiii mujhse..... mujhe jab pata chala ki main pregnant hun toh main ek ladki ke abortion karwane gyiiii thi..... lekin us doctor ne mana kar diya.... aur upar se warden ko bhi bata diya... warden mujhe yahan ghar leke chali aaayi...


main - acha...... chalo koiii niiii..... ab tum azaaad ho in logon se.....


nisha - mujhe kahin nhi jaaana main tmhare saath rehna chahti hun hamesha ke liye tumhara saath chahti hun..... i love you venky.....


main - are mere kehne ka matlab yeh nhi tha ki tum azaad ho jahan chahe jali jao mera kehne ka matlab tha ki tumhe ab in logon se koi problem nhi hogi.... qki sab toh mar gaye..... waise i love u 2.....


nisha - acha..... phir nisha uthke mujhe hug kar leti hai.....


nisha - ham log shadi krenge kya???


main - offfcourse karenge.....


phir main michael ko call lagane lagta hun........


Main - Michael


Michael - hnnnn bhai....


main - kisi pandit ka intezaaam kar.... aur le aa yahan...


Michael - q bhai....


main - shadi krni hai nisha se mujhe aaaj.....8 baje tak le aana....


Michael - theeek hai bhai....


yeh sunke nisha bahut khus ho jaati hai itne main bachcha jag jaata hai aur rone lagta hai.... nisha usko uthane lagti hai... main nisha ke paas ja ke baith jaata hun.... aur bache ko apne haathon main le leta hun......


main - sakal surat se toh mujhpe gaya hai..... naam kya rakha hai iska.....


nisha - abhitak toh main ise venky hi kehti thi.....tumhi rakh do koi acha sa naaam...


main - acha...... Rahul name kaisa rahega...


nisha - thik rehega.....


itne main kajal aa gyiiii wahan.... aur bachche ko mere haathon se leke kehne lagi......


kajal - acha...... toh yahan patni aur bachche ke saath busy the..... waise venky tumhara bachcha tumhari tarah hi dikhta hai.....


main - aur nhi toh kya tumhari tarah dikhega.....


kajal - 😁😁😁....


main - bahar ka kya scene hai....


kajal - sab clear kr dia hai....


main - ek kaaam karo tum aaaj hi sanjana ki khoj main nikal jao aur agar kahin mile toh maar mat dena use...... tumhe sirf use pakad transmitter inject karna hai uske....


kajal - theeek hai.... lekin aaaj nahi kal niklungi....


main - theeek hai..... aaaj meri shadi main bhi shamil ho jao.... ek kaaam kro kajal tum khane ka order de do.....


kajal - matlab itni jldi hai shadi ki... ki aaj hi kar loge.....


main - jldi nhi hai lekin jab krni hai toh yahi kr len.....


kajal - hnnnn yeh bhi sahi hai....


Main - ek kaaam kro kajal nisha ko le ke chali jao maaal aur ek acha sa dress kharid kar boutique leke chali jaaana.....


kajal - theeek hai..... aur khane ka order.....


main - woh main kar dunga..... aur ydddd se 8baje ke pehle aaa jana....


kajal - acha.... thik hai aaa jaungiiiiii....


phir kajal nisha aur bachche ko leke nikal gyiiiii..... main khane ka order diya.... phir socha thori der so leta hun qki raaat main sone ka moka toh milega nhiiiii..... islie main so gaya.....


wahin dusri taraf....


sanjana - mummy ek kaaam krte hain yahan se koi aur country chalte hain.... warna woh hamne chorega nhiiii.... aur yeh mobile pehle offf kro.....


aurat - pehle tumhare papa ko aaa jane do woh kal ayenge.... tab kuch sochenge....


aur apna mobile switchofff krne lagi....


sanjana - q maarna chahti ho use.... usne kya kiya hai tmhare saaath.... aaaj main yeh jaaanke rahungi.....


us aurat ne use ak jhannatedaar tamacha maara.... jisse sanjana ke gaaal laaal ho gaye the.....


aurat - tu meri beti hoke mujhe hi galat samajh rhi hai.....agar tujhe woh sahi lagta hai..... toh chali ja uske paaas.... lekin yeh soch lena ki teri maa mar gayi hai... aur dobara wapas mat aana....


sanjana - maa maine aisa toh nhi kaha....ki aao galat ho main bsss sachchai jaanna chahti thi....


aurat - kehna bhi mat.... warna main yeh nahi sochungi ki tu meri beti hai... jaaan se tujhe bhi maar dungi.....

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yeh ek bahut hi bada ghar tha ghar main charon taraf kamre bane hue aur beech main ek bahut bada haaal tha.... us ghar ki decoration se lag rha tha ki yeh kisi bahut ameer admi ka ghar hai.... beech main sofe pade hue jispe ek sakhs baitha hua tha.... tabhi wahan ek admi bhaagta hua aaya.....


admi - manohar bhai.....


manohar - mera naam kaise liya be kutte..... tu itna bada ho gaya ki mere naaam se mujhe pukarega.... saaale kutte abhi maar kar kar kutton ke aage phaink dunga...


admi - bhai gltiiii ho gayiiii.... maaf kr do.... aage se aisa nhiiii hoga.....


manohar - chal bhonk kya keh rha tha....


admi - bhai aapko banglore wale rajesh sharma yddd hai.... jiski property aapko abhi tak nhi mil paayi hai... m


manohar - hnnnn pata.... aage bata....


admi - us property ke lie kisi ne court main mukadma daayar kiya hai ki woh property uski hai....


manohar - madarchod kaun bach gaya tha usme jisne meri property par haq jamaya.....


manohar bahut gusse main tha uska chehra poora laaal ho gaya tha.... use kuch samjh nhi raha tha usne apni bandoook nikali aur us admi ko goli maar diii....


manohar - behnchod aisi buri khabar sunata hai.... yeh nhi ki use maarke aata tab mujhe batata.... behnchod....


aaj ke liye itna hi..

continued....
Oh to ye dono shadi kar rahe hai... Acha hi to hai... chalo dono settle ho jayenge... aur ek baat ye achhi huyi hai ki ab venky idhar udhar mih nahi maarega :lol:
Waise indono ki shaadi ki baat jaan kar rashmika kya karegi :D
udhar sanjana ki mom to alag hi roop dikha rahi hai....
ek aur choukane wali baat ye ki sanjana ko pata hai nahi ki akhir venky se dusmani kyun hai.... mazra kya hai....
upar se uski maa ne dhamki deke ushe chup karwa di...
Ye manohar shayad wohi hai jisne property ke liye venky ke pure pariwar ko tabah kar diya... ab mukadma karne ki baat sun shayad mukadma karne wale ko jaan se maarne aane wala hai...

.. shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan....
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur hum pathako ka manoranjan karte rahiye..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 

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Nisha : aaahhhhh yeasss yessss fuck me fuckkk fuckkk I am cumming i am cumming ohhhhh maaaaa AAIIIIII.........


ek baar phir se Nisha ka paani nikal gya..... aur main bhi khud ko rok nahi paya aur jldiiii jldiiii dhakke maarne laga 4 - 5 dhakkon main hi main chut ke andar hi jharne laga..... veerya ki ek ek boond jabtak nikal nhi gayi maine land ko andar hi daale rakha.......


phir maine land ko nikaaalke washrooom gaya.... aur aise hi aake nisha ke saaath so gaya.....


subah main utha toh nisha paas main nhi thi maine time dekha 9 baj rhe the....


main - ohhh teri itni der main kaise sota rha.....


phir main jldi se utha aur fresh hone chala gaya...... main jaise hi washroom se nikla saaamne kajal khadi thi.....


kajal - aaj bahut der tak soye.....


main - hnnn pata nhiiii q aaj itni der tak main sota raha....


kajal - ab raat main tabartod chudai kroge toh late hi toh uthoge..... waise kal room se aawazein bahut aaa rhi thi.....mera bhi mnnn krne laga tha chudne ka.....


main - toh tum bhi aaa jati.... threesome kr lete..... 😜


kajal - acha......


kajal ke baat krne ke tareeke se lag rha tha ki woh dukhi hai.....


main - kya hua kajal tum sad q lag rhi ho.....


kajal - main q sad hungi....


main - dekho mujhse jhoot mat bolo.....


kajal - venky tumhari shadi ho gayi hai nisha ke saath.... isliye ab main tumhare saath nhi reh sakungiiii pehle ki tarah.... yahi soch ke thora dukhi thi.....


main - pagal ho kya..... tu meri jaaan... kya hua agar meri shadi ho gayi toh.... hmara relation pehle ki hi tarah rehega.... samjhiiii....


kajal itna sunte hui khush ho gyiiiii qki use confirmation mil gaya tha kimain use khudse juda nhiiii karunga..... aur woh dodte hue aayi aur mujhe kiss krne lagi....



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phir kuch der hm logon ki kiss chali.....phir maine uske honthon se apne honth hataye hi the ki woh phir se unhe dabochne ki koshish krne lagi.... aur bahut hi kamuk nazron se mujhe dekh rhi thi.....


main - areee chordo kajal.... mujhe bhook lagi hai..... kal raat main bhii maine kuch nhiiii khaya tha.....


phir kajal ne mujhe khud se alag kiya aur ham dono room se bahar nikal aaye... phir main dining table pe aa gaya.... aur nisha mere lie naasta lagane lagi.... rahul ke saath khel rha tha.....



phir maine naasta kiya aur rahul ke paaas gaya aur usko uthake sofe par baith gaya..... woh totli zubaan main mujhe papa bula rha tha...... behnchod yeh shabd sunke bahut jyada khushi ho rhi thi..... maine use godi main bitha liya....


main - michael yahan kuch mila ya nhiiii.....


michael - bhai upar avinash ke rooom main ek tizori hai woh khul nhiii rhi hai.... baaki kevak drugs mile the jinhe maine jalwa diya......


main - bahut acha kiya unhe jala ke..... chalo upar Chalke tizori dekhte hai.....


main aur michael upar jaaane lge.... main dusre room main jaaane lga....


Michael - woh nhiiii yeh wala room hai bhai....


Main - acha.... mujhe lga yeh rooom hai....


phir ham dono us rooom main aa gaye.... saamne deewar se attached ek tizori thi aur woh paasword protected thi.... uspe 4 dot show ho rhe the matlab paasword koi 4 digit ka hi tha..... main sochne laga ki kya ho sakta hai paasword..... phir main hansne lga qki paasword mujhe pata tha......


Michael - boss hans q rhe ho... paasword pata chal gaya kya....


main - hnnn aisa hi kuch hai.... suno....


ek baar main avinash ke saath jab china ke mission par gaya tha..... toh woh baitha hua apne mobile main ek photo dekh rha tha.... tab maine poocha tha ki bhai kaun hai yeh..... tab usne bataya tha ki meri beti hai....


RUHI.....


Michael - bhai toh kya yahi paasword hai kya....


main - off course yahi hai yrrrr....


Michael - daaldun phir paasword....


main - hnnn paasword enter kro....


mere itna kehti hi Michael ne woh paasword enter kr diya..... aur phir turant tizori khul gayi .... behnchod tizori main bahut saara paisa bhara pada tha.....


main - saala itna paisa kaha se kamaya in gareebon ne.... par apne ko isse kya lena dena saara paisa nikaal ke apne adde par pahuncha do.....


michael - jiiii bhai....


ohir achanak meri nazar niche wali rake main rakhi ek file par gayiiii.... maine woh file uthaayi aur parhne laga....


main - michael yeh file lo aur agra nikal jaana yahan se wahan pe bhi avinash ke ghar main bahut kuch milega woh bhi wahin le aana.......


phir maine woh file Michael ko dii.... aur niche chala aaaya....


main - nisha packing kr lo ham log abhi 1 ghante main nikal rhe hain...


nisha - jiiiii.....


phir nisha uthke room main chali gayi.....


main - kajal toh tumne kya socha pehle kidhar jaogi.....


kajal - main toh yahin se nikal jaungi unhe dhoonde.....


main - tumhe har jagah nhiii dhoondna hai....woh tumhe kolkata main mil jayenge......


kajal - tum itne vishwaas se kaise keh sakte ho.....


main - bsss main jaanta hun.....



aaj ke liye itna hi....
continued....
Chii chii... kisa insaan hai ye venky abhi abhi nisha se shaadi huyi hai aur agle din kajal ke sath itni gandi harakatein kar raha hai.... hawasi kahi ka... Kitna hawas bhara hai is venky mein:buttkick:

so tharki venky nisha sang nikalne wala hai mumbai, udhar kajal jaa rahi hai sanjana ki khoj mein, idhar Michael nikla agra....
waise us tizori se bahot paise mil gaye hai inlogo ko..


.. shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan....
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur hum pathako ka manoranjan karte rahiye..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 

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phir nisha uthke room main chali gayi.....


main - kajal toh tumne kya socha pehle kidhar jaogi.....


kajal - main toh yahin se nikal jaungi unhe dhoonde.....


main - tumhe har jagah nhiii dhoondna hai....woh tumhe kolkata main mil jayenge......


kajal - tum itne vishwaas se kaise keh sakte ho.....


main - bsss main jaanta hun.....


kajal - toh batao main kahan jaun pehle.....


main kuch bolta usse pehle mera mobile ring krne laga..... maine mobile pocket se nikala.... jo number screen pe flash ho rha tha..... use dekhkar mujhe bahut khusi hui.....


main - namaste....guruji jiii kaise ho.....


doston agar aap bhul gaye ho toh yddd dila dun yeh wahi trainer jinhone mujhe training di thi Newyork main.....


trainer - main thik hun..... tum kaise ho venky..... i mean villain....


main - main bhi thik hun gurujiiii..... aaaj kaise yddd kr lia....


trainer - kisi ne death fight ke lie challenge kiya hai yahan pe.. .... aur tum hi hamare last death fight winner ho.... islie yeh fight tumhe hi ladni padegi..... tumhe koi problem toh nhiiii hai fight se....


main - okkk.... no problem.....


trainer - mujhe tumse yahi ummeed thi......


main - kab aaana hai mujhe.....


trainer - fight 2 din baad hai...... tum aaj sham ya kal subah nikal jaana wahan se........


main - theeek hai mai koshish karunga.... aaj hi nikalne ki.....


trainer - theeeek hai......


main-okkkk


phir main call cut kar deta hun..... tabhi michael wahan aa jata hain....


main - michael aaaj sham tak agra wala kaam niptao..... kal subah ham log newyork ja rhe hain.....


Michael - acha bhai.... lekin newyork main koi kaaam hai kya.....


main - aree death match fight hai..... aur main last winner hun toh mujhe hi fight karna parega..... aur agar main mana kar deta ladne se..... toh yeh meri rooh par ek kalank lag jaata.....


michael - acha bhai.....


main - 4 ticket book karna.....


michael - 4 kyun bhai..... kaun kaun jaega.....


main - nisha aur rahul bhi jayenge saath main.....


michael - acha bhai.... main ticket book karata hun.....


phir michael wahan se uthke chala gaya bahar qki use agra main kaam niptana tha jald se jald....


idhar nisha room main packing kr rhi thi aur rahul bahar garden main kajal ke saath khel raha tha.... main rooom aake bed par baith gaya.....


Main - nisha....


nisha - hnnnn boliye jiiii.....


Main - ham log kal subah yahan se jayenge.... lekin mumbai nhiii jayenge....


nisha - toh kahan jayenge... kahin aur rehenge kya ab ham log.....


Main - nhiiii pagal..... ham log newyork ja rhe hain kal..... kuch kaaam hai....


nisha - ek baat sunlo venky agar tum newyork pichli baar ki tarah death match fight main ja rhe ho toh main jaane nhiiii dungi......


main - q nahi jaaane dogi.....


nisha - tumhe kuch ho gaya toh mera kya hoga.....


main - tumhe mujhpe bharosa hai....


nisha - hnnnn bahut....


main - toh phir mujhe kuch nhiiii hoga.....


nisha - lekin.....


main - lekin wekin kuch nhiiii.....agar main nhi lada toh meri aur mere trainer ke saath saath us club ki bahut beizzati hogi..... islie main ladunga zarooor.....


nisha - thik hai..... lekin main bhi wahan chalungiiii....


main - hnnn tum toh chalogiiii hi..... main ek kaaam kro zaroorat ka samaan aur kuch kapde ek bag main pack kar lo.... aur baaki samaan dusre bags main pack kr do apne bande mumbai pahuncha denge...... phir nisha ne meri baat maante hue packing phir se start kr di..... aur main wahan se uthke bahar garden ki taraf chal diya......


wahin dusri taraf.....


PLACE - KOLKATA AIRPORT

sanjana aur vandana (venky ki step sis aur sanjana ki mom) kolkata airport ke bahar khadi thi aur kisi ka wait kr rhi thi..... tabhi unhe gate se ek admi bahar aata hua dikhai diya.... jiski age lagbhag 46 ke aaspaas hogi..... use dekhke sanjana haath hilane lagiiii.....us admi ki nazar jaise hi sanjana aur vandana ke upar padi woh unhi ki taraf aaa gaya.....


sanjana - papa itna late kaise ho gaya.....


vandana - hnnnn ronit itni der q lagi..... flight toh kabka land ho chuki thi....


(ronit vandana ka pati hai aur sanjana ka pita)


ronit - areee woh mera luggage nhiii mil rha tha islie late ho gaya..... thora isi chakkar main....


vandana - chalo ghar chalte hain.....


phir woh sab gaadi main baith gaye aur chal diye ghar ki taraf....ronit ko aisa feel ho rha tha ki dono maa beti usse kuch chupa rhi hai qki aamtor par jab woh kahin bahar se aata hai..... toh unki khushi ka thikana nhiiii rehta hai... kekin aaj woh dono kuch gumsum lag rhi thi......


ronit - kya hua hai tum dono ko itni gumsum q ho....


vandana - pehle ghar toh pahunchne do phir baatein hongiiii.....



PLACE - BOSS'S HOUSE


idhar main nisha ke room se nikal ke garden main aa gaya..... jahan nisha aur rahul bauthe hue the.....main bhi undono ke paas jake baith gaya.....


Kajal - michael bata rha tha ki tumlog newyork ja rhe ho.....


main - hnnn ja to rhe hai....


kajal - main bhi chalun kya....


main - tum bhi chalogi saath main.... toh sanjana ka pta kaun lagayega....


Kajal - yrrr venky baad main pata laga lenge..... main tumhe fight karte hue dekhta chahti hun.....


main - abhi kal toh dekha tha fight karte hue...... tum yahan rehke sanjana ka pata lagana....


kajal - theeek hai... 🙄


main - aree main mazak kar rha thaa.... michael se boldo ki tumhara bhi ticket book kar dega.....


nisha - usne already book kar diya hoga.....maine usse pehle hi bol dia tha ki mera bhi ticket book kar lena.... toh pehle usne kaha ki venky nahi manega.... toh maine usse kaha ki venky ka tension mat lo.... main use mana lungi.....


main - you..... naughty.....


aur maine use pakadne ke lie haath lapkaye.... lekin woh uth ke door ki taraf bhaag gayiiiii.... aur wahan khade ho ke mujhe chidane lagi.... aur phir gahr ke andar chali gayi..... phir maine bhi rahul ko god main liya aur main bhi chal diya uske piche......



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hmm..... so venky jaa raha death fight ladne....venky ke sath sath rahul,nisha aur kajal bhi jaa rahe hai.....
waise challenge karne wala koun hai...
Kya venky jab tak haar na jaaye tab aise hi death fight mein challenge karne walo se ladhte rehna hoga...

Dusri taraf ek baat to saaf hai ki ronit ko dono maa beti kya gul khila rahi hai, uske baare mein abhi tak anjan hai...
Khair...
.. shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan....
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur hum pathako ka manoranjan karte rahiye..
Let's see what happens next
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jald se jald venky ke mom dad aur uski bahan ki entry karwaiye story pe.... :bat:

aur sanjana ki mom itni amir kaise ho gayi :mad2:
lagta hai koi chakla chalati hogi haarman :mad2:
khair chhodo is kamini aurat ki baatein, iski baat purani :buttkick:

ye avinash boss ko hi machli ka chada banake venky ko fanshane ke chakkar mein hai....
are dhett teri ki udhar is baat se venky & team anjan hai...
are ab kya hoga
Khair

.. shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan...
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur hum pathako ka manoranjan karte rahiye..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
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kehte hai badla bhi ajeeb fanda hota hai.. .... bilkul nashe ki tarah.... Jitni purani utna hi jyada kick mile....
aaj us boss aur avinash ko pachtane ka bhi mauka nahi mila ....
mana ki un dono bhi planning Bahot badhiya banayi par un logo se dash kabam aage raha venky... aisi chaal chali dusman apne hi banaye gaye jaal mein fansh gaye.... aur natiza ek dardnaak maut ....

well kya baat hai.... Venky to baap ban gaya :D
to phir ab se ek achhe baap ki tarah rahna chahiye ushe, nisha ko chhod kisi bhi gair ladki ya aurat ko nazar uthake bhi nahi dekhna chahiye ushe....

sanjana ki mom bhi khauf mei hai... lekin ek baat ye bhi sach hai ki wo waar jarur karegi venky pe... chup to to baithne se rahi..


.. shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan....
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur hum pathako ka manoranjan karte rahiye..
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hmm..... so venky jaa raha death fight ladne....venky ke sath sath rahul,nisha aur kajal bhi jaa rahe hai.....
waise challenge karne wala koun hai...
Kya venky jab tak haar na jaaye tab aise hi death fight mein challenge karne walo se ladhte rehna hoga...

Dusri taraf ek baat to saaf hai ki ronit ko dono maa beti kya gul khila rahi hai, uske baare mein abhi tak anjan hai...
Khair...
.. shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan....
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur hum pathako ka manoranjan karte rahiye..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
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UPDATE - 30
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LOCATION - DELHI
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PLACE - BOSS'S RESIDENCE
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main - abhi kal toh dekha tha fight karte hue...... tum yahan rehke sanjana ka pata lagana....


kajal - theeek hai... 🙄


main - aree main mazak kar rha thaa.... michael se boldo ki tumhara bhi ticket book kar dega.....


nisha - usne already book kar diya hoga.....maine usse pehle hi bol dia tha ki mera bhi ticket book kar lena.... toh pehle usne kaha ki venky nahi manega.... toh maine usse kaha ki venky ka tension mat lo.... main use mana lungi.....


main - you..... naughty.....


aur maine use pakadne ke lie haath lapkaye.... lekin woh uth ke door ki taraf bhaag gayiiiii.... aur wahan khade ho ke mujhe chidane lagi.... aur phir gahr ke andar chali gayi..... phir maine bhi rahul ko god main liya aur main bhi chal diya uske piche......

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LOCATION - KOLKATA
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PLACE - VANDANA'S HOME
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ghar pahunch ke ronit room main chala gaya fresh hone..... aur sanjana vandana haal main sofe par baith gayiiii......


sanjana - mummy ab papa aa gaye hain....ab kuch socho venky ke baare main....


vandana - pehle sablog ka khana peena ho jaaye tab aaram se baithke baat ho.... khana ..... tu khana laga tabtak papa bhi fresh hoke aa jayenge.....


phir sanjana khana lagane lagi..... aur thori der main ronit bhi aaa gaya.... phir teeno ne shanti se khana khaya..... phir teeno haal main jake sofe par viraajman ho gaye.....


Ronit - ab batao kya baaat hai....


vandana - tum jab yahan nhi the toh sanjana ne venky ka accident karwaya usme bhi woh bach nikla aur coma main chala gaya....... lekin yeh bewakoof ldki hospital main jake apna chittha khol aayi..... phir maine ise yahan bula liya.... aur avinash se baat ki..... avinash toh yddd hoga tumhe???


Ronit - jisne venky ko maarne ke liye pehle bhi phine kiya tha wahi na....


vandana - hnnn.... wahi.... maine usse baat ki aur kaha ki agar woh venky ko maar dega toh main bahut paise dungi..... usne kaha ki woh kal hi venky ko maarne ka plan bana chuka hai..... phir dusre din maine use phone kiya toh pata chala ki baazi ulti pad gayi avinash ki..... aur phir venky ne mujhe dhamki di ki main kahin bhi hun mujhe dhoond lega woh...... ab tumhi batao main kya karun.....


ronit - tumse pehle bhi bola thi ki use maaf kardo..... isme uski kya gltiiii hai bechare ki jo tum use maarne ke peeche padi ho.....


vandana - gltiiii uski nhiiii hai .... lekin uske maa baap ki toh hai..... islie jab tak woh mar nahi jaata mujhe sukoon nhiii milega.....


ronit - thik hai maar lena lekin abhi nhiiiii.... kuch din ke liye kahin aur chalte hain.... ek kaam kro packing kro... ham log kal hi newyork chalte hain... kuch dino ke liye.... isi bahane ghoom aaunga tum logon ke saath.... bahut dino se kahin gaya bhi nahi hun tum logon ko leke.....


vandana - thik hai..... kab nikalna hai.....


ronit - kal.....


sanjana - (khush HoTe hue).... ohhhh papa you are the best.....
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wahin dusri taraf Michael agra pahunch gaya tha.....usne raaste main hi sabke tickets book kar diye the..... agra main avinash ke adde par pahunche toh gate par guards khade the.....


guard - jiii kisse milna hai aaoko??


michael - aapke avinash sir ne bheja hai..... hme kuch kaaam hai ghar mein....


guard - lekin avinash sir ne andar kisi ko bhi jaane se mana kiya hai.... aap baat kara do avinash sir se tab hi aap ja sakte ho....


yeh sunke michael soch main pad gaya.... usne piche mudke apne Bandon se kuch ishara kiya..... aur palak jhapakte hi dono guards zameen par pade the..... phir guards ki bodies ko andar utha laye...... phir sab ghar ki chanbeen karne lage..... ek room main unhe locker mil gaya..... yeh bhi paasword protected tha..... michael ne wahi paasword daal diya..... aur locker khul gaya......


Michael - behnchod itna saara drugs...... bhai ko batana prega......


phir michael ne apna mobile nikaaal ke mujhe call laga di....


Michael - hello bhai....


main - haan bolo... Michael kya hua....


Michael - bhai yahan sirf drugs mila hai.... kya karna hai iska....


Main - karna kya hai..... drugs ko jala do.... aur apne Bandon ke saath yahin laut aao.....


Michael - OK bro.....


phir michael ne saaara drugs jala diya..... aur apne Bandon ke saath wapas chal diya delhi ki liye.......

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PLACE - UNKNOWN
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manohar apne ghar main 2 logon ke saath baitha hua tha.... usme se 1 tha vikram jo ki manohar ke drugs ke dhandhe kk dekhta tha aur dusra tha aditya jo ki kidnpping aur sharab ka dhanda dekhta tha.... inke alawa manohar ke 3 aur khaas aadmi the jinka zikr baad main hoga story main.....


manohar - vikram drugs ka dhandha kaisa chal rha hai......


vikram - bhai delhi aur agra ko chorke har taraf acha chal rha hai....


manohar - q yahan kya problem hai.... avinash maal nahi utha rha hai kya....


vikram - kuch dino se maaal bhi nahi uthaya hai.... aur na hi paise bhijwaye hain....upar se mobile bhi off karke baitha hai.....


manohar - tum jake millo usse ek baar....


vikram - thik hai..... kal jaaata hun....


phir woh uthke chala jaata hai.....


manohar - aditya.... pata karo banglore main kis advocate ne mere khilaaf case lad rha hai.....


aditya - jiii bhai.... uske baad karna kya hai uska....


manohar - pata karo.... aur use yahan utha lao.....


aditya - jiii bhai.....


phir woh bhi wahan se nikal jaata hai..... aur manohar aankhein band krke kisi soch main doob jata hai......
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aaj ke liye itna hi.....

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