Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

[Casinar]

Nice update sir ji
Kahi kahi abhi ke baato se lgta h ki us mein thodi attitude hai jis tarah se unse ruhi ke baato(saeed ko uska boss kahna) pe react kiya us se toh yhi lgta hai.saeed apne jagah sahi h ki abhi kaam ke time kuch zyada hi ruhi pe focus kr rha hai jo ki unhe sahi nhi lg rha shayad unko ye daar ho ki is se unki jo reputation h woh kharab ho jaye or jb ye baat bus ke owner ko pta chalegi toh ye kaam unke hath se na chala jaye.
Abhi ko ye bhi baat nhi bhulni chaiye ki woh aaj jis mukam mein hai uska thoda bht shrey saeed ko bhi jata hai kyu ki company band hone ke baad toh abhi jobless hi ho gya tha woh toh saeed tha jo abhi ko apne sath join krne ke liye kaha.
Ruhi mujhe thodi mysterious type lgti hai.aisa lgta hai uske maan mein bht kuch chal rha hai woh kahti kuch or hai or sochti kuch or hai.in fact uski maa ka bhi behavoiur thoda ajeeb hai
Abhi ke pair mein jakhm ho gya jis se abhi ko kafi dard ho rha hai lekin us se zyada dard use is baat se hai ki ruhi ne uska haal chal nhi pucha.ruhi ko pta toh chal hi gya hoga ki abhi ke sath kya hua lekin woh anjaan kyu bani hui hai. is se phle jb abhi ek bar jakhmi hote hote bacha tb toh kafi pareshan ho gyi thi ruhi or use sambhal ke kaam krne ko kaha tha phir aaj kyu woh aisa behave kr rhi hai

Abhi mein bilkool attitude nahin hai, aap ko shaayd yaad nahin ke saeed ne iss kaam ke liye sirf 75 hazaar manga tha abhi ne uskso iss kaam ke liye 3 laakh ka deal karwaya hai

 

[Casinar]

wonderfull update bhaiya ji ek baat kahunga ki jo abhi ka boss ban raha hai ye point kuch jada mud off kiya mera mai wahin se ukhad gaya update me wo pyar se karta baat alag thi mai khudgarji sala sara mud ukhad gaya mera

bahot shukriya Rahul... to kia tumne update pura nahin padha saeed ke part padhne ke baad?
Aur rahi baat p;aison ki to wo 1 lakh rupaya saeed ko hi milta agar cheque nahin hota to, iss liye ke saeed ka bank account nahin hai iss liye ussne abhi ko apne bank acc mein rakhne ko kaha tha, poaisa to Saeed ka hi hai bhai!

 

[Casinar]

Nice update sir ji
Ye kya saeed ko achanak kya ho gya lgta h uske maan mein laalch ghar kr gya h kahi aisa na ho ki last mein ye abhi ka hissa bhi hadap le.aaj ruhi kuch zyada hi khubsurat lg rhi thi is liye sare uski khubsurti mein kho gye.or abhi toh uska shuru se hi diwana hai. ruhi clg student hai shayad or kbhi kbhi class krne jati hogi is liye use lautne mein time lg gya ho

thanks very much Kirti, laalach hai ya kia yeh thode dinon mein sab pata chal jaega Kirti dear padhte rehna miss mat karna kissi bhi update ko varna nahin samjhogi

 

[Casinar]

Khubsurat update bhai. Bahut khub surat update.
Saturday ko kaam 2 baje khatam hota hai. Aur iss din ko kuch jaldi hota hai sabko.
Subha se Ruhi nahin dikhi Abhi ko. Ruhi ki jo routine thi wo alag tha Saturday ko. Usski routine ko aap ne bahut saaf dikhaya hai aap ne.
Aur Abhi dang reh gaya Ruhi ko ban thann ke kahin jaate hue dekh kar. Baaki log bhi aankhen faar kar Ruhi ko dekhne lage the kyun k wo bahut jiada khubsurat lag rahi thi. Tony ne Abhi ko takra kar Ruhi ko dikhaya. Saeed bhi dekh raha tha.
Phir din bhar Ruhi wapas nahin aayi thi aur Abhi udaas laut raha tha.
Bhai Ruhi adaaon ko aap ne kamaal dikhaya hai hab ja rahi thi jiss tarah se usski nazrein jhuki hui thi phir bhi teerchi nazron se sirf Abhi ko dekha tha ussne.
Aur wapas aate waqt bhi jiss adaa se ussne Abhi se muskuraayi, jiss tarah se chali aur shhhh kaha sab jaan lewa the aur samajh sakta hoon Abhi par kia beet raha hoga. Diwana to hoga hi wo.
Bahut hi dilchasp update hai bhai.
Aakhir mein Abhi Tony k saath beer pite hue Ruhi k hi baatein karta raha.
FANTASTIC update.

bahot bahot shukriya appreciation ke liye indian bhai

 

[Casinar]

Bahut hi badhya, shaandaar, lajawab update casi bhai. To Ruhi be aaj sab ko tarsa diya apni khubsurti ki jhalak se yahan tak ke Saeed aur Tony par bhi assar hue.
Saeed Abhi ka maal einth raha hai. Umeed hai k ussko wapas karega. Haan ussi paison mein se hi payment karna tha nah workers ko. Agar cheque nahin mila hota cash hota to wo Saeed k paas hi hota.
Ruhi jab wapas aayi to aakhir Abhi se nazrein to mile aur khushi laut aaye Abhi ke andar k Tony saath pine gaya.
Superb update bhai. Thanks

bahot bahot shukriya Supar bhai appreciation ke liye

 

[Casinar]

Due to observing Ruhi for so many days, abhi knows when Ruhi will be seen or will be able to talk to him, the advantage is that some time he will give Ruhi and some time to work.
Ruhi looks gorgeous even without makeup and simple dress but today Ruhi is ready to go and our hero is lost in her beauty upon seeing her and Ruhi was blushing in front of Abhi, smiling, showing her style, everything was great.
Ruhi sometimes behaves a bit strangely, why.
Abhi was depressed when he could not see Ruhi's glimpse, but in the end Ruhi entered, and upon seeing Ruhi our Abhi was lost again.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...

thanks very very much Aakash bro for the appreciation my friend

 

[Casinar]

Very very nice and lovely update. Loved it. Loved each and every part.
You enhanced Ruhi's beauty in such a way that I felt watching her walking in the yard. I looked back in the sketch to check what is the distance from the bus to the main road to understand how much Abhi watched her from behind.
Casinar ji, you describe a girl's behaviour and shyness with such beauty and perfection that I feel you must hv been or are a great lover. Only a true lover can praise and describe a woman's beauty this way. You had done the same describing Sanjana and Saanvi.
Very much appreciate the way you described Ruhi bending down her head and looking sideways while smiling bitting her lips while walking pass the bus by Abhi.
That was a very beautiful way of showing another aspect of beauty of a girl. Ruhi has lovely girlish manners which will please any man plus her beauty kills.
The end of the update became more beautiful with the return of Ruhi and again the same shy looks and lip bittings.... just awesome.
Brilliant update casinar ji.
Just loved it too much.

Thanks so very very much for appreciating amity dear

 

[Casinar]

Main ne socha aaj update nahin aega.
Very happy to find it. Now

Bahut pyara update casi bhai. Shaandaar likha hai aap ne.
To Ruhi ki full routine ka pata chal gaya Abhi ko ek hafte mein hi. 5/6 mahinon mein aur kitna kuch pata chal jaega ussko Ruhi k baare mein.
To subha ko ghar mein, terrace par Ruhi jhadu lagaati hai, phir poncha lagaati hai, aur kapde dhoti hai phir shaam ko kitchen mein pakaati hai. Bhai to maa kia karti hai? Sab beti se karwati hai?
Khair choddo.... to Saturdays ko 2 baje kaam khatam karte hein Abhi ka team iss liye rush hota hai aur sab speed mein hota hai iss din ko. Baat samajh mein aa gayi.
Magar subha ko Ruhi ne ghar ka koyi kaam nahin kiya aur Abhi sab dekh raha tha aur Ruhi ko dekhne k liye wo surely betaab tha magar ussko shock laga jab Ruhi ban thann k nikli kahin jaate hue!!
Kia baat hai bhai aap ne Ruhi ki beauty jo describe kiya, usski adaa ko jo dikhaya, usska sharmana, sar jhukaate hue muskana aur Abhi ko teerchi nazron se dekhna wo bahut faadu, jhakaas tha bhai. Kamaal tha kamaal. Pyar ho gaya mujhe bhi Ruhi se. Wah kia varnaan kiya hai aap ne Ruhi ki khubsurti aur ada ki.
Baaki dhaii baje Ruhi ka wapas ana aur dobara ussi ada mein pesh ana Abhi k saath jabardast raha bhai.
Behad enjoy kiya humne
Chalo khushi hui k Abhi ne Ruhi ko dekh liya jaane se pehle varna usdka weekend kharaab jaata.
FANTASTIC, MINDBLOWING update bhai.

bahot bahot shukriya Shambhu bhai iss appreciation ke liye dost

 

[Casinar]

Jhakaas update bidu. Are bidu iss story mein update 1 se ab tak sa ke sab badhya hi update aaye hein aan ek se badhka ek hein. Wow. Superb.
To Saturdays ka program alag hota tha donon taraf se. Ruhi baahar jaati aur Abhi early kaam finish karta.
Aur kia describe kiya hai Ruhi ki khubsurti ko bidu maja agaya. Usski sharmo haya ka kia kehna wah. Usski nazakat aur adaaon ne aur bhi ghaayal kar diya apne hero ko haye.
Shukar hai end mein wapas agayi jab hero ja raha tha aur fir ussi nazakat aur ada se mara Abhi ko ussne.
Ussko baal mujhe bahut passand aaye bidu kyunke mujhe bhi weise lambe baal wali bahut passand hai.
Faadu update hai bidu.

bahot shukriya King bhai appreciate karne ke liye dost

 

[Casinar]

Wonderful update mate.
Very nicely scripted. Marvellously narrated and told.
So that is how Saturdays are spent there.
Since Abhi is now aware of Ruhi's daily routine it was easy for him to spot her whenever he needed but the Saturday surprised him by seeing her leaving beautifully dressed. U hv described her beauty like she just killed. Everybody was stunned seeing her like that.
Your descriptions are awesome my friend. You portrayed her as a beauty queen. Any man would fall in love with such a gal. Her manners, behaviours killed as well.
Thanks Abhi succeeded to see her back and he felt relieved.
Great update.

thanks very very much for the appreciative review vikram bro