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Update 47 The New Penfriend - Navina

Abhi ne pichle 2 Mahinon se kissi bhi penfriends ko reply nahin kiya tha. sabke 2 ya teen repeat letter aa chuke the. To ek subha ko Abhi ne sabko reply karne ko socha aur baith kar sabko sorry kaha aur replies likh kar post kiya.

Abhi har roz ek newspaper kharidta tha bina miss kiye. Aur uss din jab post office se sabke letters post karke wapas ghar aya to papers padh raha tha ke penfriends corner mein kuch nayi ladkiyon ke naam dekha, unn mein do local ladkiyon ko likha Abhi ne. unn mein se ek east ki rehne wali thi, Ruhi ke ghar se 10 kilometres door. Ladki ka naam tha Namita aur ek ka Naam tha Nausheen jo desh ki north se thi. Donon ko ek ek introduction wala letter post kiya Abhi ne. Of course, wo sirf English mein khat likhta tha.

Normally within a week replies aa jaate the hamesha aur Nausheen ke taraf se reply agaya tha 4 din baad magar Namita ke taraf se koyi jawaab nahin aya.

Teen hafte guzar gaye aur Nausheen aur Abhi ki dosti ho gayi, 3 hafton mein 10 se ziada letters aa chuke the Abhi ke paas Nausheen ke taraf se. Magar Namita ka koyi reply nahin aya to Abhi samajh gaya ke Namita ko bahot saare ladkon ke khat aaye honge iss liye ussko apne passand ki saathi mil gayi hogi, to ussne Namita ko ignore kiya.

Magar 2 din baad Abhi ko ek khat mila jissko kissi Navina ne likha tha. Abhi ko heyraani hui ke yeh kaun hai, issko to nahin likha tha main ne…..

English mein likha gaya tha khat, khubsurat handwriting thi, aur uss mein likha tha ke wo Namita ki behen hai, Namita ko bahot saare khat aaye hein iss liye wo Abhi se dosti karna chahti hai. Abhi ne ussko reply kiya.

2 din baad usski reply agayi. Abhi ne phir reply kiya phir 2 din baad usski reply agayi….. jabse Abhi penfriendship karta tha yeh pehli baar aisa hua tha ke do din ke baad koyi ussko reply post kar deti thi….

Abhi ne uss se aur jaankaari jaana chaha ke kaise ussne Namita ki jagah ussko reply kiya aur kia Namita naraaz nahin hui? To Navina ne reply mein yah kaha,

“In fact, we quarrelled over your letter. That is why you got a response after several weeks. Namita is my little sister, I am a year older than her. She had got over 60 letters. We used to share reading and we make fun of the way of writing of the boys. Some do not even know how to write a letter, they write nonsense. So, we were rejecting most of them, the letters were going in the dustbin which Namita would never reply to, and those she liked were kept. And your letter came in my hand, I read it, was impressed by your language and beauty of writing and expressing yourself. When we finished with all, I told her I will reply to this one. She objected and wanted to read your letter, but I refused to give it to her, but she got furious and snatched your letter from me. She read your letter and told me,

“You keep the best for you and all garbages comes to me, why you did not show me this one? He has written to me not to you, so I will reply him!”

Then I turned my face with her and we went to sleep. I so much wanted to correspond with you, that I wished you were my penfriend. I thought the next day she had replied you, I did not know she had not replied. After a week I found your letter on my table. I asked her why that letter was on my table and she told me,

“tum ussko likhne wali thi nah to likho!”

I told her no I will not, keep her penfriends for herself. So, three weeks neither she replied you nor I and finally I decided to write to you. This is how we are now penfriends….. I use to share the reading of your letters with her and she jealously says,

“kitna achcha likhta hai yeh, isski English kitni achchi hai, kitna acha express karta hai, yeh aaj mera penfriend hota nah!”

And I thought she will take back your letters at that moment…. But she did not so we remain friends. Abhi I love your way of writing, your English is so good and you write beautifully that I wish I could read from you every day.”

Abhi ne jab yeh sab padha Navina ke khat mein to agle din ussko express delivery send kiya jo ussi din Navina ko mili aur Navina ne bhi Abhi ko express delivery send kiya jo dusre din Abhi ko mila aur yeh sislsila jaari raha donon ke beech. Ek dusre ko har roz donon letters likhte, aur express post karte, matlab har roz bina miss kiye donon ko ek dusre ke taraf se khat milte….. ek dusre ko har roz khat ka intezaar rehta….. sirf Weekends mein khat nahin aate the Monday se Friday tak har roz ek letter milte donon ko…..

Aur dhire dhire 2/3 pages ke badle 10 se 15 pages ke letter aane jaane lage ek dusre ko… aur iss tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ke baare mein bata diya Navina ko aur apne diaries ki baat kiye letter mein Abhi ne Navina se… to Navina ne unn diaries ko padhne ki khwahish ki….

Donon ne ek dusre ko apne photos bhi send kiye…. To Abhi ne Navina se milne ki farmaayish kiya, Navina ne agree kiya aur donon pehli baar mile ussi sheher mein jahan Ruhi ki chachi ki super market tha.

Aur milne ke baad Abhi ne Navina ko wo diaries diye jo ussne Ruhi ko diya tha….

Navina Ruhi se bhi chhoti thi kad mein aur Ruhi jitna khubsurat nahin thi. Magar Navina ki khubsurti usske dil ke andar thi aur usski dimaagh ke andar thi…… Navina ek graduated teacher thi, English padhaati thi college mein. Aur issi liye jab Navina Abhi ke letter padhti thi to ek bhi English mistake nahin dikhta tha ussko is vajah se Navina impress hui thi Abhi ke letter writing se.

Jiss din donon pehli baar mile the to sirf 45 mins ek saath the, ek café mein gaye, baithe, thodi der baat kiye, Abhi ne ussko diaries diye aur donon wapas apne apne ghar chale gaye ek dusre ko weise hi express letter send karne ki promise karte hue.

Navina ne jab Abhi ke donon diaries padhe to wo bahot royi. Der ghante mein sab kuch padh liya Navina ne. Abhi ke diaries padhne ke baad Navina samajh gayi ke Abhi ek true lover hai aur Navina ko aisa hi koyi pyar karne wala chahiye tha…. Navina ko Abhi se pyar ho gaya. Navina ne Abhi ko turant likha aur keh diya ke complete diaries padh liya ussne aur bahot royi, aur apni opinion likha Abhi ko ussne….. magar nahin kaha ke ussko Abhi se pyar ho gaya… to agle hafte phir se milne ka plan banaya donon ne kyuke Navina ko Abhi ke diaries wapas karne the…. To donon agle weekend ko phir mile ussi sheher mein. Ussi café mein.

Navina bahot achchi thi, had se ziada achchi. Nek, narm dil, pyar aur araam se baat karne wali, aur uss mein khaas baat yeh thi ke wo bahot dhyaan se sunti thi. Shaayd teacher thi iss liye ussko sunna aata tha. bahot caring thi aur loving bhi. Abhi ussko dost manta tha, magar kyunke Ruhi ki dairies ko Navina ne full padh liya tha to Navina ko Abhi ke baare mein sab kuch pata chal chuka tha ke wo kaisa hai, kitna emotional hai, kitna ghussa hai, etc…. Abhi ki character, personality sab ka pata chal gaya tha Navina ko…. Abhi ne apni diary mein ek jagah last pages mein Ruhi se alag hone aur diary wapas milne ke baad, jab Abhi ne shave kar liya tha tab yeh likha tha diary mein:

Tu hai harjaayi to apna bhi yehi taur sahi

Tu nahin aur sahi, aur nahin, aur sahi

Badi lambi hai zameen

Milenge laakh haseen

Iss zamaane mein sanam

Tu akela hi nahin

Yahan par Navina ne niche likha tha
“YOU ARE RIGHT ABHI”

Ye ghar wapas ghar jaane ke baad Abhi ne dekha tha, kyunke Navina ne ek khat haath mein diya tha Abhi ko jiss din donon mile the, post karne ke bajae kyunke weekend tha to ek dusre ko haath mein khat diye the donon ne aur uss khat mein Navina ne likh diya tha ke kiss kiss page par ussne apne comment likhe hue hein, iss tarah se Abhi ki dairy mein kayi jagahon par Navina ke handwriting paaye gaye….. Navina ke baad Abhi ne kabhi bhi life mein kissi aur ko wo diaries nahin diye….. kyunke Navina Abhi ki wife ban gayi 2 saal baad. Magar Abhi ki wife banne se pehle 2 saalon mein bahot kuch hua. Wo agle update mein pata chalega.

To be continued……
 
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Update 47 The New Penfriend - Navina

Abhi ne pichle 2 Mahinon se kissi bhi penfriends ko reply nahin kiya tha. sabke 2 ya teen repeat letter aa chuke the. To ek subha ko Abhi ne sabko reply karne ko socha aur baith kar sabko sorry kaha aur replies likh kar post kiya.

Abhi har roz ek newspaper kharidta tha bina miss kiye. Aur uss din jab post office se sabke letters post karke wapas ghar aya to papers padh raha tha ke penfriends corner mein kuch nayi ladkiyon ke naam dekha, unn mein do local ladkiyon ko likha Abhi ne. unn mein se ek east ki rehne wali thi, Ruhi ke ghar se 10 kilometres door. Ladki ka naam tha Namita aur ek ka Naam tha Nausheen jo desh ki north se thi. Donon ko ek ek introduction wala letter post kiya Abhi ne. Of course, wo sirf English mein khat likhta tha.

Normally within a week replies aa jaate the hamesha aur Nausheen ke taraf se reply agaya tha 4 din baad magar Namita ke taraf se koyi jawaab nahin aya.

Teen hafte guzar gaye aur Nausheen aur Abhi ki dosti ho gayi, 3 hafton mein 10 se ziada letters aa chuke the Abhi ke paas Nausheen ke taraf se. Magar Namita ka koyi reply nahin aya to Abhi samajh gaya ke Namita ko bahot saare ladkon ke khat aaye honge iss liye ussko apne passand ki saathi mil gayi hogi, to ussne Namita ko ignore kiya.

Magar 2 din baad Abhi ko ek khat mila jissko kissi Navina ne likha tha. Abhi ko heyraani hui ke yeh kaun hai, issko to nahin likha tha main ne…..

English mein likha gaya tha khat, khubsurat handwriting thi, aur uss mein likha tha ke wo Namita ki behen hai, Namita ko bahot saare khat aaye hein iss liye wo Abhi se dosti karna chahti hai. Abhi ne ussko reply kiya.

2 din baad usski reply agayi. Abhi ne phir reply kiya phir 2 din baad usski reply agayi….. jabse Abhi penfriendship karta tha yeh pehli baar aisa hua tha ke do din ke baad koyi ussko reply post kar deti thi….

Abhi ne uss se aur jaankaari jaana chaha ke kaise ussne Namita ki jagah ussko reply kiya aur kia Namita naraaz nahin hui? To Navina ne reply mein yah kaha,

“In fact, we quarrelled over your letter. That is why you got a response after several weeks. Namita is my little sister, I am a year older than her. She had got over 60 letters. We used to share reading and we make fun of the way of writing of the boys. Some do not even know how to write a letter, they write nonsense. So, we were rejecting most of them, the letters were going in the dustbin which Namita would never reply to, and those she liked were kept. And your letter came in my hand, I read it, was impressed by your language and beauty of writing and expressing yourself. When we finished with all, I told her I will reply to this one. She objected and wanted to read your letter, but I refused to give it to her, but she got furious and snatched your letter from me. She read your letter and told me,

“You keep the best for you and all garbage comes to me, why you did not show me this one? He has written to me not to you, so I will reply him!”

Then I turned my face with her and we went to sleep. I so much wanted to correspond with you, that I wished you were my penfriend. I thought the next day she had replied you, I did not know she had not reply. After a week I found your letter on my table. I asked her why that letter was on my table and she told me,

“tum ussko likhne wali thi nah to likho!”

I told her no I will not, keep her penfriends for herself. So, three weeks neither she replied you nor I and finally I decided to write to you. This is how we are now penfriends….. I use to share the reading of your letter with her and she jealously say,

“kitna achcha likhta hai yeh, isski English kitni achchi hai, kitna acha express karta hai, yeh aaj mera penfriend hota nah!”

And I thought she will take back your letters at that moment…. But she did not so we remain friends. Abhi I love your way of writing, your English is so good and you write beautifully that I wish I could read from you every day.”

Abhi ne jab yeh sab padha Navina ke khat mein to agle din ussko express delivery send kiya jo ussi din Navina ko mili aur Navina ne bhi Abhi ko express delivery send kiya jo dusre din Abhi ko mila aur yeh sislsila jaari raha donon ke beech. Ek dusre ko har roz donon letters likhte, aur express post karte, matlab har roz bina miss kiye donon ko ek dusre ke taraf se khat milte….. ek dusre ko har roz khat ka intezaar rehta….. sirf Weekends mein khat nahin aate the Monday se Friday tak har roz ek letter milte donon ko…..

Aur dhire dhire 2/3 pages ke badle 10 se 15 pages ke letter aane jaane lage ek dusre ko… aur iss tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ke baare mein bata diya Navina ko aur uss diaries ki baat kiye letter mein Abhi ne Navina se… to Navina ne unn diaries ko padhne ki khwahish ki….

Donon ne ek dusre ko apne photos bhi send kiye…. To Abhi ne Navina se milne ki farmaayish kiya, Navina ne agree kiya aur donon pehli baar mile ussi sheher mein jahan Ruhi ki chachi ki super market tha.

Aur milne ke baad Abhi ne Navina ko wo diaries diye jo ussne Ruhi ko diya tha….

Navina Ruhi se bhi chhoti thi kad mein aur Ruhi jitna khubsurat nahin thi. Magar Navina ki khubsurti usske dil ke andar thi aur usski dimaagh ke andar thi…… Navina ek graduated teacher thi, English padhaati thi college mein. Aur issi liye jab Navina Abhi ke letter padhti thi to ek bhi English mistake nahin dikhta tha ussko is vajah se Navina impress hui thi Abhi ke letter writing se.

Jiss din donon pehli baar mile the to sirf 45 mins ek saath the, ek café mein gaye, baithe, thodi der baat kiye, Abhi ne ussko diaries diye aur donon wapas apne apne ghar chale gaye ek dusre ko weise hi express letter send karne ki promise karte hue.

Navina ne jab Abhi ke donon diaries padhe to wo bahot royi. Der ghante mein sab kuch padh liya Navina ne. Abhi ke diaries padhne ke baad Navina samajh gayi ke Abhi ek true lover hai aur Navina ko aisa hi koyi pyar karne wala chahiye tha…. Navina ko Abhi se pyar ho gaya. Navina ne Abhi ko turant likha aur keh diya ke complete diaries padh liya ussne aur bahot royi, aur apni opinion likha Abhi ko ussne….. magar nahin kaha ke ussko Abhi se pyar ho gaya… to agle hafte phir se milne ka plan banaya donon ne kyuke Navina ko Abhi ke diaries wapas karne the…. To donon agle weekend ko phir mile ussi sheher mein. Ussi café mein.

Navina bahot achchi thi, had se ziada achchi. Nek, narm dil, pyar aur araam se baat karne wali, aur uss mein khaas baat yeh thi ke wo bahot dhyaan se sunti thi. Shaayd teacher thi iss liye ussko sunna aata tha. bahot caring thi aur loving bhi. Abhi ussko dost manta tha, magar kyunke Ruhi ki dairies ko Navina ne full padh liya tha to Navina ko Abhi ke baare mein sab kuch pata chal chuka tha ke wo kaisa hai, kitna emotional hai, kitna ghussa hai, etc…. Abhi ki character, personality sab ka pata chal gaya tha Navina ko…. Abhi ne apni diary mein ek jagah last pages mein Ruhi se alag hone aur diary wapas milne ke baad, jab Abhi ne shave kar liya tha tab yeh likha tha diary mein:

Tu hai harjaayi to apna bhi yehi taur sahi

Tu nahin aur sahi, aur nahin, aur sahi

Badi lambi hai zameen

Milenge laakh haseen

Iss zamaane mein sanam

Tu akela hi nahin

Yahan par Navina ne niche likha tha
“YOU ARE RIGHT ABHI”

Ye ghar wapas ghar jaane ke baad Abhi ne dekha tha, kyunke Navina ne ek khat haath mein diya tha Abhi ko jiss din donon mile the, post karne ke bajae kyunke weekend tha to ek dusre ko haath mein khat diye the donon ne aur uss khat mein Navina ne likh diya tha ke kiss kiss page par ussne apne comment likhe hue hein, iss tarah se Abhi ki dairy mein kayi jagahon par Navina ke handwriting paaye gaye….. Navina ke baad Abhi ne kabhi bhi life mein kissi aur ko wo diaries nahin diye….. kyunke Navina Abhi ki wife ban gayi 2 saal baad. Magar Abhi ki wife banne se pehle 2 saalon mein bahot kuch hua. Wo agle update mein pata chalega.

To be continued……

:shocked: Casi bhai kahani kahan se kahan agayi achanak :shocked:
ye kia ho gaya , kaise ho gaya sab kuch bahut jaldi nain hua kia?
mujhe jabardast jhatka laga iss update ko padh kar? aisa laga ke ruhi marr gayi usski janja nikla gaya :lotpot:
weise update bahut majedaar aur jabardast hai.....
Navina se shaadi ke pehle jo hua wo janna bahut jaruri hai umeed hai kal sab pata chal jaega
aap ne ek dhamaka de diya iss update se bhai :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:
 

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O Teri ki navina se shadi wo bhi Abhi ki

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Excellent birrilant fantastic good update
 

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Update 47 The New Penfriend - Navina

Abhi ne pichle 2 Mahinon se kissi bhi penfriends ko reply nahin kiya tha. sabke 2 ya teen repeat letter aa chuke the. To ek subha ko Abhi ne sabko reply karne ko socha aur baith kar sabko sorry kaha aur replies likh kar post kiya.

Abhi har roz ek newspaper kharidta tha bina miss kiye. Aur uss din jab post office se sabke letters post karke wapas ghar aya to papers padh raha tha ke penfriends corner mein kuch nayi ladkiyon ke naam dekha, unn mein do local ladkiyon ko likha Abhi ne. unn mein se ek east ki rehne wali thi, Ruhi ke ghar se 10 kilometres door. Ladki ka naam tha Namita aur ek ka Naam tha Nausheen jo desh ki north se thi. Donon ko ek ek introduction wala letter post kiya Abhi ne. Of course, wo sirf English mein khat likhta tha.

Normally within a week replies aa jaate the hamesha aur Nausheen ke taraf se reply agaya tha 4 din baad magar Namita ke taraf se koyi jawaab nahin aya.

Teen hafte guzar gaye aur Nausheen aur Abhi ki dosti ho gayi, 3 hafton mein 10 se ziada letters aa chuke the Abhi ke paas Nausheen ke taraf se. Magar Namita ka koyi reply nahin aya to Abhi samajh gaya ke Namita ko bahot saare ladkon ke khat aaye honge iss liye ussko apne passand ki saathi mil gayi hogi, to ussne Namita ko ignore kiya.

Magar 2 din baad Abhi ko ek khat mila jissko kissi Navina ne likha tha. Abhi ko heyraani hui ke yeh kaun hai, issko to nahin likha tha main ne…..

English mein likha gaya tha khat, khubsurat handwriting thi, aur uss mein likha tha ke wo Namita ki behen hai, Namita ko bahot saare khat aaye hein iss liye wo Abhi se dosti karna chahti hai. Abhi ne ussko reply kiya.

2 din baad usski reply agayi. Abhi ne phir reply kiya phir 2 din baad usski reply agayi….. jabse Abhi penfriendship karta tha yeh pehli baar aisa hua tha ke do din ke baad koyi ussko reply post kar deti thi….

Abhi ne uss se aur jaankaari jaana chaha ke kaise ussne Namita ki jagah ussko reply kiya aur kia Namita naraaz nahin hui? To Navina ne reply mein yah kaha,

“In fact, we quarrelled over your letter. That is why you got a response after several weeks. Namita is my little sister, I am a year older than her. She had got over 60 letters. We used to share reading and we make fun of the way of writing of the boys. Some do not even know how to write a letter, they write nonsense. So, we were rejecting most of them, the letters were going in the dustbin which Namita would never reply to, and those she liked were kept. And your letter came in my hand, I read it, was impressed by your language and beauty of writing and expressing yourself. When we finished with all, I told her I will reply to this one. She objected and wanted to read your letter, but I refused to give it to her, but she got furious and snatched your letter from me. She read your letter and told me,

“You keep the best for you and all garbage comes to me, why you did not show me this one? He has written to me not to you, so I will reply him!”

Then I turned my face with her and we went to sleep. I so much wanted to correspond with you, that I wished you were my penfriend. I thought the next day she had replied you, I did not know she had not reply. After a week I found your letter on my table. I asked her why that letter was on my table and she told me,

“tum ussko likhne wali thi nah to likho!”

I told her no I will not, keep her penfriends for herself. So, three weeks neither she replied you nor I and finally I decided to write to you. This is how we are now penfriends….. I use to share the reading of your letter with her and she jealously say,

“kitna achcha likhta hai yeh, isski English kitni achchi hai, kitna acha express karta hai, yeh aaj mera penfriend hota nah!”

And I thought she will take back your letters at that moment…. But she did not so we remain friends. Abhi I love your way of writing, your English is so good and you write beautifully that I wish I could read from you every day.”

Abhi ne jab yeh sab padha Navina ke khat mein to agle din ussko express delivery send kiya jo ussi din Navina ko mili aur Navina ne bhi Abhi ko express delivery send kiya jo dusre din Abhi ko mila aur yeh sislsila jaari raha donon ke beech. Ek dusre ko har roz donon letters likhte, aur express post karte, matlab har roz bina miss kiye donon ko ek dusre ke taraf se khat milte….. ek dusre ko har roz khat ka intezaar rehta….. sirf Weekends mein khat nahin aate the Monday se Friday tak har roz ek letter milte donon ko…..

Aur dhire dhire 2/3 pages ke badle 10 se 15 pages ke letter aane jaane lage ek dusre ko… aur iss tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ke baare mein bata diya Navina ko aur uss diaries ki baat kiye letter mein Abhi ne Navina se… to Navina ne unn diaries ko padhne ki khwahish ki….

Donon ne ek dusre ko apne photos bhi send kiye…. To Abhi ne Navina se milne ki farmaayish kiya, Navina ne agree kiya aur donon pehli baar mile ussi sheher mein jahan Ruhi ki chachi ki super market tha.

Aur milne ke baad Abhi ne Navina ko wo diaries diye jo ussne Ruhi ko diya tha….

Navina Ruhi se bhi chhoti thi kad mein aur Ruhi jitna khubsurat nahin thi. Magar Navina ki khubsurti usske dil ke andar thi aur usski dimaagh ke andar thi…… Navina ek graduated teacher thi, English padhaati thi college mein. Aur issi liye jab Navina Abhi ke letter padhti thi to ek bhi English mistake nahin dikhta tha ussko is vajah se Navina impress hui thi Abhi ke letter writing se.

Jiss din donon pehli baar mile the to sirf 45 mins ek saath the, ek café mein gaye, baithe, thodi der baat kiye, Abhi ne ussko diaries diye aur donon wapas apne apne ghar chale gaye ek dusre ko weise hi express letter send karne ki promise karte hue.

Navina ne jab Abhi ke donon diaries padhe to wo bahot royi. Der ghante mein sab kuch padh liya Navina ne. Abhi ke diaries padhne ke baad Navina samajh gayi ke Abhi ek true lover hai aur Navina ko aisa hi koyi pyar karne wala chahiye tha…. Navina ko Abhi se pyar ho gaya. Navina ne Abhi ko turant likha aur keh diya ke complete diaries padh liya ussne aur bahot royi, aur apni opinion likha Abhi ko ussne….. magar nahin kaha ke ussko Abhi se pyar ho gaya… to agle hafte phir se milne ka plan banaya donon ne kyuke Navina ko Abhi ke diaries wapas karne the…. To donon agle weekend ko phir mile ussi sheher mein. Ussi café mein.

Navina bahot achchi thi, had se ziada achchi. Nek, narm dil, pyar aur araam se baat karne wali, aur uss mein khaas baat yeh thi ke wo bahot dhyaan se sunti thi. Shaayd teacher thi iss liye ussko sunna aata tha. bahot caring thi aur loving bhi. Abhi ussko dost manta tha, magar kyunke Ruhi ki dairies ko Navina ne full padh liya tha to Navina ko Abhi ke baare mein sab kuch pata chal chuka tha ke wo kaisa hai, kitna emotional hai, kitna ghussa hai, etc…. Abhi ki character, personality sab ka pata chal gaya tha Navina ko…. Abhi ne apni diary mein ek jagah last pages mein Ruhi se alag hone aur diary wapas milne ke baad, jab Abhi ne shave kar liya tha tab yeh likha tha diary mein:

Tu hai harjaayi to apna bhi yehi taur sahi

Tu nahin aur sahi, aur nahin, aur sahi

Badi lambi hai zameen

Milenge laakh haseen

Iss zamaane mein sanam

Tu akela hi nahin

Yahan par Navina ne niche likha tha
“YOU ARE RIGHT ABHI”

Ye ghar wapas ghar jaane ke baad Abhi ne dekha tha, kyunke Navina ne ek khat haath mein diya tha Abhi ko jiss din donon mile the, post karne ke bajae kyunke weekend tha to ek dusre ko haath mein khat diye the donon ne aur uss khat mein Navina ne likh diya tha ke kiss kiss page par ussne apne comment likhe hue hein, iss tarah se Abhi ki dairy mein kayi jagahon par Navina ke handwriting paaye gaye….. Navina ke baad Abhi ne kabhi bhi life mein kissi aur ko wo diaries nahin diye….. kyunke Navina Abhi ki wife ban gayi 2 saal baad. Magar Abhi ki wife banne se pehle 2 saalon mein bahot kuch hua. Wo agle update mein pata chalega.

To be continued……
badhiya update chalo abhi ko koi to dhang ki mil gayi jo use samjhi aur uski sathi bani
 
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bahot bahot shukriya Vikram bhai...
aap ki review to ek update se kum nahin hai... aur aap ko counter reply karne ke liye kuch ziada sochna padta hai :laugh:

bilkool sahi kaha aap ne

EXACTLY bhai aap sahi samjhe yaara


yeh bi sahi hai aap ke taraf se..... magar issko ek din Ruhi khud apni zuban mein batayegi abhi ko :D

yeh baat aage chal kar sahi sahi pata chalega bhai

kia dimaagh lagaya hai aap ne bhai wah, maan gaye yaara

picnic par gayi thi yaar khush to hogi nah :D

sahi pakda bhai aap ne :D

Zafar ki kavita jabardast hai bhai
thanks very veryr much vikram bai
its a real pleasure to read from you dost :love: :hug:
Dimaag lagaya hee kaha hai yar.....1...2 din se mere dimaag mera saath nahi de raha....isliye normal chije hee likh raha hu.....

Ye jo review diya wo bhi jo man mai aaya qo likh kar de diya....jyada socha nahi....iske baare mai....kyoki as I said dimaag kaam nahi kar raha....

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Update 47 The New Penfriend - Navina

Abhi ne pichle 2 Mahinon se kissi bhi penfriends ko reply nahin kiya tha. sabke 2 ya teen repeat letter aa chuke the. To ek subha ko Abhi ne sabko reply karne ko socha aur baith kar sabko sorry kaha aur replies likh kar post kiya.

Abhi har roz ek newspaper kharidta tha bina miss kiye. Aur uss din jab post office se sabke letters post karke wapas ghar aya to papers padh raha tha ke penfriends corner mein kuch nayi ladkiyon ke naam dekha, unn mein do local ladkiyon ko likha Abhi ne. unn mein se ek east ki rehne wali thi, Ruhi ke ghar se 10 kilometres door. Ladki ka naam tha Namita aur ek ka Naam tha Nausheen jo desh ki north se thi. Donon ko ek ek introduction wala letter post kiya Abhi ne. Of course, wo sirf English mein khat likhta tha.

Normally within a week replies aa jaate the hamesha aur Nausheen ke taraf se reply agaya tha 4 din baad magar Namita ke taraf se koyi jawaab nahin aya.

Teen hafte guzar gaye aur Nausheen aur Abhi ki dosti ho gayi, 3 hafton mein 10 se ziada letters aa chuke the Abhi ke paas Nausheen ke taraf se. Magar Namita ka koyi reply nahin aya to Abhi samajh gaya ke Namita ko bahot saare ladkon ke khat aaye honge iss liye ussko apne passand ki saathi mil gayi hogi, to ussne Namita ko ignore kiya.

Magar 2 din baad Abhi ko ek khat mila jissko kissi Navina ne likha tha. Abhi ko heyraani hui ke yeh kaun hai, issko to nahin likha tha main ne…..

English mein likha gaya tha khat, khubsurat handwriting thi, aur uss mein likha tha ke wo Namita ki behen hai, Namita ko bahot saare khat aaye hein iss liye wo Abhi se dosti karna chahti hai. Abhi ne ussko reply kiya.

2 din baad usski reply agayi. Abhi ne phir reply kiya phir 2 din baad usski reply agayi….. jabse Abhi penfriendship karta tha yeh pehli baar aisa hua tha ke do din ke baad koyi ussko reply post kar deti thi….

Abhi ne uss se aur jaankaari jaana chaha ke kaise ussne Namita ki jagah ussko reply kiya aur kia Namita naraaz nahin hui? To Navina ne reply mein yah kaha,

“In fact, we quarrelled over your letter. That is why you got a response after several weeks. Namita is my little sister, I am a year older than her. She had got over 60 letters. We used to share reading and we make fun of the way of writing of the boys. Some do not even know how to write a letter, they write nonsense. So, we were rejecting most of them, the letters were going in the dustbin which Namita would never reply to, and those she liked were kept. And your letter came in my hand, I read it, was impressed by your language and beauty of writing and expressing yourself. When we finished with all, I told her I will reply to this one. She objected and wanted to read your letter, but I refused to give it to her, but she got furious and snatched your letter from me. She read your letter and told me,

“You keep the best for you and all garbage comes to me, why you did not show me this one? He has written to me not to you, so I will reply him!”

Then I turned my face with her and we went to sleep. I so much wanted to correspond with you, that I wished you were my penfriend. I thought the next day she had replied you, I did not know she had not reply. After a week I found your letter on my table. I asked her why that letter was on my table and she told me,

“tum ussko likhne wali thi nah to likho!”

I told her no I will not, keep her penfriends for herself. So, three weeks neither she replied you nor I and finally I decided to write to you. This is how we are now penfriends….. I use to share the reading of your letter with her and she jealously say,

“kitna achcha likhta hai yeh, isski English kitni achchi hai, kitna acha express karta hai, yeh aaj mera penfriend hota nah!”

And I thought she will take back your letters at that moment…. But she did not so we remain friends. Abhi I love your way of writing, your English is so good and you write beautifully that I wish I could read from you every day.”

Abhi ne jab yeh sab padha Navina ke khat mein to agle din ussko express delivery send kiya jo ussi din Navina ko mili aur Navina ne bhi Abhi ko express delivery send kiya jo dusre din Abhi ko mila aur yeh sislsila jaari raha donon ke beech. Ek dusre ko har roz donon letters likhte, aur express post karte, matlab har roz bina miss kiye donon ko ek dusre ke taraf se khat milte….. ek dusre ko har roz khat ka intezaar rehta….. sirf Weekends mein khat nahin aate the Monday se Friday tak har roz ek letter milte donon ko…..

Aur dhire dhire 2/3 pages ke badle 10 se 15 pages ke letter aane jaane lage ek dusre ko… aur iss tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ke baare mein bata diya Navina ko aur uss diaries ki baat kiye letter mein Abhi ne Navina se… to Navina ne unn diaries ko padhne ki khwahish ki….

Donon ne ek dusre ko apne photos bhi send kiye…. To Abhi ne Navina se milne ki farmaayish kiya, Navina ne agree kiya aur donon pehli baar mile ussi sheher mein jahan Ruhi ki chachi ki super market tha.

Aur milne ke baad Abhi ne Navina ko wo diaries diye jo ussne Ruhi ko diya tha….

Navina Ruhi se bhi chhoti thi kad mein aur Ruhi jitna khubsurat nahin thi. Magar Navina ki khubsurti usske dil ke andar thi aur usski dimaagh ke andar thi…… Navina ek graduated teacher thi, English padhaati thi college mein. Aur issi liye jab Navina Abhi ke letter padhti thi to ek bhi English mistake nahin dikhta tha ussko is vajah se Navina impress hui thi Abhi ke letter writing se.

Jiss din donon pehli baar mile the to sirf 45 mins ek saath the, ek café mein gaye, baithe, thodi der baat kiye, Abhi ne ussko diaries diye aur donon wapas apne apne ghar chale gaye ek dusre ko weise hi express letter send karne ki promise karte hue.

Navina ne jab Abhi ke donon diaries padhe to wo bahot royi. Der ghante mein sab kuch padh liya Navina ne. Abhi ke diaries padhne ke baad Navina samajh gayi ke Abhi ek true lover hai aur Navina ko aisa hi koyi pyar karne wala chahiye tha…. Navina ko Abhi se pyar ho gaya. Navina ne Abhi ko turant likha aur keh diya ke complete diaries padh liya ussne aur bahot royi, aur apni opinion likha Abhi ko ussne….. magar nahin kaha ke ussko Abhi se pyar ho gaya… to agle hafte phir se milne ka plan banaya donon ne kyuke Navina ko Abhi ke diaries wapas karne the…. To donon agle weekend ko phir mile ussi sheher mein. Ussi café mein.

Navina bahot achchi thi, had se ziada achchi. Nek, narm dil, pyar aur araam se baat karne wali, aur uss mein khaas baat yeh thi ke wo bahot dhyaan se sunti thi. Shaayd teacher thi iss liye ussko sunna aata tha. bahot caring thi aur loving bhi. Abhi ussko dost manta tha, magar kyunke Ruhi ki dairies ko Navina ne full padh liya tha to Navina ko Abhi ke baare mein sab kuch pata chal chuka tha ke wo kaisa hai, kitna emotional hai, kitna ghussa hai, etc…. Abhi ki character, personality sab ka pata chal gaya tha Navina ko…. Abhi ne apni diary mein ek jagah last pages mein Ruhi se alag hone aur diary wapas milne ke baad, jab Abhi ne shave kar liya tha tab yeh likha tha diary mein:

Tu hai harjaayi to apna bhi yehi taur sahi

Tu nahin aur sahi, aur nahin, aur sahi

Badi lambi hai zameen

Milenge laakh haseen

Iss zamaane mein sanam

Tu akela hi nahin

Yahan par Navina ne niche likha tha
“YOU ARE RIGHT ABHI”

Ye ghar wapas ghar jaane ke baad Abhi ne dekha tha, kyunke Navina ne ek khat haath mein diya tha Abhi ko jiss din donon mile the, post karne ke bajae kyunke weekend tha to ek dusre ko haath mein khat diye the donon ne aur uss khat mein Navina ne likh diya tha ke kiss kiss page par ussne apne comment likhe hue hein, iss tarah se Abhi ki dairy mein kayi jagahon par Navina ke handwriting paaye gaye….. Navina ke baad Abhi ne kabhi bhi life mein kissi aur ko wo diaries nahin diye….. kyunke Navina Abhi ki wife ban gayi 2 saal baad. Magar Abhi ki wife banne se pehle 2 saalon mein bahot kuch hua. Wo agle update mein pata chalega.

To be continued……
Kitni jaldi Sab Kuchh Ho Gaya abhi ko Naveena ke roop mein Ek naye friend bhi Mili aur donon ki ki shaadi bhi ho gai per yah sab Kuchh Hua Kaise janne ki utsukta hai
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