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Update 31 The Distance….

Ek haffta aise hi guzra, Saturday ko Ruhi apni tuition ke liye jaati, aur uss waqt sabhi ke nazrein Ruhi par hoti kyunke wo ek apsara lagti thi jab bhi saj sanwar kar nikalti thi. Had se ziada khubsurat dikhti thi, ussko paane ke liye koyi bhi diwana hota uss roop mein Ruhi ko koyi bhi dekhta to.

Sunil ne Abhi ko chedhte hue kaha,

“Abhi dekh, tujhko jalan nahin hoti jab Ruhi eise ban than ke nikalti hai to? Zara dekh to sab ki nazar ussi par tike hue hein, dekh dekh sabko….. ab pata nahin jahan jaa rahi hai wahan uss sheher ke kitne log abhi usske piche padenge….”

Abhi ne buss muskuraate hue Sunil se kaha,

“yaar agar yeh kaam last phase par nahin hota to main ne soch liya tha ke ek Saturday ko main leave leta aur usske saath jata bus mein, aise mujhe pata chal jata ke wo kahan jaati hai sweing course ke liye.”

Sunil: “Isski kia zaroorat hai, usske pita ke aane ke baad usska haath to mang raha hai nah tu? Tab usske baad koyi nahin rokega tumko Ruhi ke saath kahin bhi jaane ke liye tab chale jana araam se!”

Abhi ne khush hote hue kaha,

“bhai issi liye to dhiraj rakh rakha hua hai aaj tak!”

Sunil ne kaha,

“yeh aise din hote hein jo tumhari life ke sabse haseen din honge Abhi, ek ladki ko shaadi se pehle court karna, usske ghar har hafte ko ana , usske liye chocolates vaghaira laana usske parents se milna, lunch ya dinner apne in-laws ke saath karna, jab tak shaadi ke din nah aajaaye… shaadi ke pehle wale life ke behtareen din hote hein wo mere bhai, khub jee bhar ke enjoy karna unn dinon ko!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Sunil bhai aur in dinon ke baare mein kia khayal hai aap ka? Jab se yahan kaam shuru kiya hoon, jiss din se ussko dekha pehli baar, tabse aaj tak laga hua hon usske piche, ussko apna pyar dikhaya, apne pyar ko kabool karwaya, ussko bhi pyar hua hi hai nah? To mere liye yeh din bahot important hein bhai… maana ke jinn dinon ko aap keh rahe ho wo bhi utna hi zaroori hoga aur beshak unn dinon ka bhi intezaar hai mujhe ke sab official ho jaega tab baat aur hogi, jaise ke license mil jaega, aur abhi bina license ke chala raha hoon apni pyar ki gadi ko, ishk alag hi maza hai bhai… aur main hamesha aisa hi pyar chahta tha, ke khud kissi se pyar ho jaaye mujhe aur ussi ke saath sagaayi, phir shadi karun…… it’s a dream come true sunil bhai… magar abhi is dream ko true hone mein kuch time baaki hai“

Sunil ne tab kaha,

“Samajhta hoon bhai main bhi guzar chuka hoon nah iss phase se Ruhi ke sister ke saath…. Magar main kaamyaab nahin hua apne dream ko true karne mein…. Tum zaroor dream ko true karna bhai!”

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Ab dekhte hein 10 aakhri dinon ko jo Abhi ne guzara uss aangan mein. Kyunke har roz same chizein hote rahe to bahot repetition jaisa lagega aur boredom feel hone lagega, except last 10 dinon mein bade differences aaye….. phir Abhi ka wahan kaam khatam karne ke baad kitna kuch hua wo sab dekhna baaki hein, aur bahot kuch hua tha, bahot kuch.


To har subha Abhi ka wahan jana, Ruhi se milna, pyar karna, ghar ke piche wale hisse par apne kone mein jana kiss karna sab chalta raha. Uss aangan ke sabhi logon ka pata chalna, majority ko Abhi aur Ruhi ke pyar ko support karna sab bilkool sahi chalta raha.

Mahesh apne nani ke ghar se wapas agaya tha. Usski dosti Abhi ke saath mast tha aur ussko sab pata tha ke Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre se pyar karte hein. Wo chota bhai tha to ussko koyi problem nahin thi balke Mahesh ne jaise Abhi ko apna brother-in-law maan liya tha unn dinon ko. Jab Ruhi aur Abhi ghar ke piche milte to Mahesh ko pata hota aur koyi uss taraf ata to wo oonche awaaz mein Ruhi aur Abhi ko bata deta tha, matlab Mahesh donon ko support karta tha.

10 din kaam end karne se pehle, malab 15th December ka din tha. Shaam ko ghar jaane se pehle jab Abhi Ruhi se mila to Ruhi ne pyar se abhi se kaha,

“kal main apne nani ke ghar jaungi mummy ke saath”

Abhi ko shock laga aur pucha ke usska kia hoga, to Ruhi ne kaha ke shaam ko wapas ajaegi. To Abhi ne pucha kitne baje ghar se niklegi jaane ko? Ruhi ne kaha subha ko, to Abhi ne kaha usske aane se pehle to hargiz nahin jana jab wo yahan aa jaaye tab ghar se nikalne ko. Ruhi ne kaha ke haan wo Abhi ka wait karegi jab ajaega tab ghar se niklegi apni mummy ke saath. Aur wohi hua…..

Ruhi apni maa ke saath apni nani ke ghar jaa rahi thi subha 8 baje. Abhi ne ussko goodmorning kaha, Ruhi ne nah Abhi ke taraf dekha nah reply kiya, na muskuraayi, sar jhukaaye aaguey badhti gayi. Abhi ko bahot embarrass feel hua. Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi ko dekha aur muskuraayi uss se. Din bhar Abhi sochta raha ke Ruhi ne kyun ajeeb behave kiya tha subha ko jaate waqt. Kehne ki zaroorat nahin ke wo kitni khubsurat dikh rahi thi naye llibaas mein aur kiss tarah se usski khubsurti nikhar kar aa rahi thi, upar se usski jaan lewa adaaein….

Aur din mein Reza ne Abhi se kaha ke Ruhi ki maa ne uss se kaha ke wo kabhi bhi Abhi ka Rishta Ruhi ke liye accept nahin karegi. Yeh baat ne Abhi ko din bhar bahut torture kiya.

Shaam 3 baje Abhi Ruhi ki raah dekhne laga, wo Ruhi ko bahot miss karne laga tha, ussko dekhna chahta tha, usski smile dekhna chahta tha, usski awaaz sunna chahta tha. khud se Abhi ne kaha, “OH MY GOD!!”

Shaam ko 3.30 baje jab Ruhi wapas aayi apne nani ke yahan se to usski rawayya Abhi ke taraf thoda different tha. Wo uss shaam ko Abhi se nahin mili aur Abhi wahan se ghar udaas gaya bina Ruhi se mile, bina kiss kiye jo Abhi ke liye ek pahaad ke ziada bhari wazan ki tarah tha usske seene par.

Raat ko apne diary mein Abhi ne likha ke kia usske nani ke yahan Abhi aur Ruhi ki baat hui aur unhon ne kahin inkaar to nahin kiya iss rishte ko? Aur Abhi ne yaad kiya ke wo Amit jisske baare mein pehle baat kiya gaya tha wo usski nani ke sheher ka hi rehne wala tha. To Abhi sochne laga ke kahin jab Ruhi wahan gayi to wo baat phir se nah chidh gayi ho Ruhi ki mummy aur Ruhi ke saath??!

Abhi ne yeh bhi yaad kiya ke jab Ruhi ne ussko apni virginity wali baat batayi thi tab Abhi ne yeh bhi pucha tha ke Amit wali baat jhoot thi to Ruhi ne kaha tha ke haan sab naatak tha. Magar Ruhi ki maa ne kaha tha ke baat sach thi ke Amit ne shadi ka proposal bheja hai Ruhi ke liye wo jab France se aega to Ruhi ko lekar jaega.
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Agle din Abhi kaam par pahuncha to Ruhi nahin dikhi har subha ki tarah, khidki ke paas nahin thi. Abhi ne apna geet seeti bajaate hue 6 baje se 7 baje tak whistle kiya, magar Ruhi nahin nikli, usski khidki band thi.

Jiss time ko wo terrace aur lounge mein jhadu deti thi wo bhi nahin kiya Ruhi ne, nazar aayi to 11 baje ke karib aur ulta lounge ke saare parde ko bandh rakha Ruhi ne jo kabhi nahin hota tha, sab open hote the aur andar Ruhi har roz nazar aati thi. Magar iss subha ko sab ulta ho raha tha….

Abhi par kia guzar raha tha yeh bayaan ke baahar tha. Suffocation, ghutan, saans lene mein takliff dil ki dhadkanon ka tez badhna, yeh sab ho raha tha Abhi ke saath aur kaam aur bhi ziada mushkil hote jaa raha tha finishing karne ki…..

Lunch time mein bhi Ruhi nahin mili Abhi se. khidki ke paas Abhi wait karta raha magar khidki band rakha Ruhi ne, aur usski maa bhi nahin dikh rahi thi aur nah Mahesh aya tha baahar. Lagta tha sab Abhi ko escape kar rahe the.

Aur shaam ko jab Abhi ne kitchen ke chaukath par dekha tab Ruhi ki ek jhalak dikhaayi diya Abhi ko. Ussne abhi abhi nahaya hua tha, usski baal khule aur bheege hue the jo nazar araha tha.

Jab Abhi washroom ja raha tha khud ko wash karne aur change karne ko to Ruhi kitchen ke stair par khadi Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue muskura rahi thi…… Aisa lag raha tha aaj pehli baar wala moment phir se recreate ho raha tha, lagta tha donon ajnabee hein aur aaj pehli baar ek dusre ko dekh rahe the.

Abhi ko thodi si Khushi hui ke kum se kum usske taraf Ruhi ne dekha to, muskuraayi to! Aur Abhi ne haath ke ishaare se pucha ke kia hua kyun nahin dikhi din bhar aur Ruhi ne bhi ishaare se kuch kaha jo Abhi nahin samjha…. To Abhi ne thoda karib jaate hue dobara kehne ko kaha Ruhi se, to Ruhi ne apne seene par apne haath ko rakha aur phir uss haath ko Abhi ke taraf kiya aur munh se bina awaaz ke kaha, “I LOVE YOU!” usske honton ke movements se padhna asaan tha ke 'I love You' hi pronounce kiya Ruhi ne!

Abhi ki Aankhen bhar aayi aur kaampte hue honth se pucha,

“kyun tadpa rahi ho? kyun milne nahin aayi aaj?!”

Ruhi ne haath ke ishaare se nah kiya.

Abhi paagal hota jaa raha tha ke kia keh rahi hai kyun nah keh rahi hai phir bi I love you keh rahi hai kia baat hai, kyun weisa behave kar rahi hai!!

Aabhi ka jaane ka time ho gaya tha to Ruhi ko khidki ke paas aane ko kaha magar Ruhi ne phir nah kaha.

To Abhi usske kitchen ke paas hi gaya, Ruhi muskura to rahi thi, magar ek baar baahar dekha phir apne kadam ko do kadam piche kar liya Ruhi ne, aisa lagta tha ke kissi se darr rahi hai, jais kissi ne ussko abhi se baat karne ke liye mana kiya hua hai, wo to baat karna chahti hai magar kissi ka darr tha ussko, to Abhi ne buss itna kaha,

“kamaal karti ho yaar, subha jab jaa rahi thi to mujhko dekha bhi nahin aur goodmorning ko reply bhi nahin kiya tumne kia yaar!”

Ruhi ne hassnte hue kaha,

“uff main kaise aap ke taraf dekhti, sabhi ke nazar mujh par the, sab mujhi ko dekh rahe the mujhe bahot embarrass feel ho rahi thi issi liye nahin dekha tha aap ko, aap bhi to mujhko hi dekh rahe the nah!..... Ab jao please main andar jaa rahi hoon bye!”

Abhi ko wapas jaana pada, dusra din tha bina mile wapas ghar gaya, magar Ruhi ki “I LOVE YOU “kehne wali baat ko soch kar jaise Abhi ko tassalli ho raha tha.

Ghar jaakar diary mein likha ke kia ab Ruhi ke nani walon ne Abhi aur Ruhi ki baat ko official karne ka faisla kar liya iss liye Ruhi ko Abhi se milne ya baat karne se mana kiya hai? Kia ab jab tak sagayi nahin hogi tab tak kia Ruhi Abhi se baat nahin karegi? Kia unn logon ka koyi rasm riwaj tha kia ke ladke ladki ko mangni se pehle nah milne diya jaaye nah baat karne diya jaaye? Kia yehi baat thi kia?! Abhi yeh sab apni diary mein likhte hue pagla raha tha!!

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Inn last dinon mein ek Saturday tha, 20th December. 19th ko Ruhi ke pita nahin aya, news mili ke wo 23rd ko araha hai flight postpone kiya gaya tha usska. To iss Saturday ko, subha ko jab Abhi wahan reach hua, to Ruhi ko kitchen mein dekha, apne dada ki armchair par apni yellow nightdress mein rest karti hui. 15th se 20th tak ek subha ko bhi Ruhi khidki ke paas nazar nahin aayi, usski khidki bandh rehti thi subha ko ab…. Inn 5 dinon mein Abhi ka dil jaise tukde tukde hue the Ruhi ki distance se… aakhir kyun wo doorie rakh rahi thi Abhi samajh nahin paa raha tha…

Khair iss subha ko jab Abhi ne Ruhi ko kitchen mein dekha to wo Abhi se muskuraayi mudh kar usse dekhte hue. Ajeeb baat yeh laga tha Abhi ko ke usski maa saare kitchen ke kaam kar rahi thi jabke Ruhi armchair par baithi hui thi, to Abhi ne socha shayad Ruhi ki tabiyat thik nahin hogi.

Din ke 10 baje kaam zoron se chal raha tha bus mein aur Abhi ne Ruhi ko lounge mein jhadu lagaate hue dekha, parde ko hattaya Ruhi ne aur bus ke andar Abhi ko dekha. Abhi iss intezaar mein tha ke Ruhi terrace par jhadu lagaane aaye to wo uss se baat karne ki koshish karega…. pichle 5 dinon ko to Ruhi ne ek bhi mauka nahin diya Abhi ko, saamne aayi hi nahin thi pata nahin kyun halaan ke jab aamne saamne hote tab Ruhi muskuraati thi Abhi se.

Aur darwaza khula aur Ruhi terrace par aayi jhadu maarne, to Abhi ne bus ke andar se Ruhi se pucha ishaaron se ke aaj wo apni tuition ko nahin jaegi. Ruhi ne bus ek smile diya Abhi ko, donon ek dusre ko bade pyar se dekh rahe the bina koyi baat kiye.

Usske baad Ruhi nazar aayi apni maa ke paas ek chhoti si chair par baithi jab usski maa kapde dho rahi thi. To ishaare se Abhi ne Ruhi se pucha kia wo bimaar hai? Ruhi nahin samjhi ke Abhi kia keh raha tha to pucha, “WHAT” to Abhi ne haath se wait karne ka ishara kiya aur apne notebook se ek page liya aur uss par likha:

“NOW I LOVE YOU MORE AND MORE THAN I EVER LOVED YOU BEFORE. IN MY LIFE I HAVE NEVER LOVED ANYONE AS MUCH AS I LOVE YOU” signed – Abhi.

Aur uss note ko lekar Abhi wahan gaya Ruhi ke paas jahan kapde dhoti hai hamesha, aur jaise wahan reach hua to Ruhi kuch fikarmand dikhne lagi aur kaha,

“Aap ko yahan nahin ana chahiye tha, dekho sab log idhar dekh rahe hein” magar yeh sab kehte hue Ruhi hanss rahi thi.

Abhi ussko wo note de raha tha magar Ruhi ne nahin liya aur uss kagaz ko khidki ke paas rakh dene ko kaha. Aur Abhi ko ussko ziada dekhne se mana kiya yeh kehte hue ke sab log dekhte hein donon ko. Abhi ne note ko usski khidki ke paas rakh diya aur wapas chala gaya bus ke andar.

Ab Abhi soch raha tha ke yeh sab kia naatak hai, itne dinon se khule aam donon milte aur baat karte the to ab kyun Ruhi kehne lagi ke log donon ko dekhte hein ussko ziada nahin dekhne ko kaha vaghaira vaghaira….

Abhi bus ke andar se wait karne laga ke kab Ruhi wo note padhegi, aur jab Ruhi ne note ko liya, ek nazar Abhi ko dekha bus ke andar aur read kiya….. read karne ke baad Ruhi ne Abhi ko bade pyar bhade nazron se khade hokar dekha, aur Abhi sirf uss se muskuraya. Phir turant Abhi whistle karne laga “pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna” Ruhi ke chehre mein seriously dekhte hue. Ruhi ne note ko dobara padha phir se Abhi ko dekha aur kaha, “mujhko aise mat dekha kijiye please….” Magar Abhi ruka nahin balke fix dekhta raha Ruhi ke chehre mein, to Ruhi hanss padi aur uss note ko lekar ghar ke andar bhaag gayi.

Ruhi ne aur ek baat phir se kaha tha Abhi ko jiss waqt wo note ussko dene gaya tha, kaha tha, “ke haan kitne cigarette pee rahe ho aap sab dekh rahi hoon main” aur Abhi ne ussko jawaab diya ke “buss condition wala din to aane do sab rok dunga wada hai mera.”

Aur Abhi ko thoda ghussa aane laga tha ke kyun ab Ruhi uss se bhaag rahi thi, ab kia ho gaya tha ke logon ki parwah karne lagi thi, itne dinon se to sab khulam khula ho raha tha…. kyun ab Ruhi logon ke saamne Abhi se baat nahin karna chahti thi iss se Abhi ko takliff hone laga tha, ussko baaki mauka hi kahan milega Ruhi se milne aur baat karne ki agar sabke saamne nahin kiya to? Ab jab kuch din reh gaye the kaam ko end karne ke liye to change karna mushkil tha Abhi ke liye, balke ab to Abhi aur bhi ziada Ruhi se baat karna aur milna chahta tha…. Abhi ko bilkool achcha nahin lag raha tha jaise sab kuch hone laga tha ab. Bahut badlaav agaya tha Ruhi ki rawaiye mein…. Abhi ko yeh sab bahot disturb karne laga tha, ussko chain nahin tha, pareshan rehta tha…. usska dimaagh kaam nahin kar raha tha ke ab kaise Ruhi se contact kare.

Shaam ko phone aya S.Arabia se Ruhi ki maa gayi phone lene, tab Ruhi terrace par khadi usski wait kar rahi thi Abhi ko dekhte hue. To Abhi ne uss se pucha ke kia uss note ka koyi reply nahin degi to Ruhi ne sirf nah mein sar hillayi muskuraate hue. Abhi ko ghussa aya. Ruhi Abhi ke kaafi paas aakar khadi hui jahan Abhi kaam kar raha tha. yeh sab chhoti chhoti chizein Abhi ghaur se notice karta tha aur raat ko apne diary mein sab likhta tha. kyun Ruhi sabke saamne ab Abhi se baat karne se inkaar kar rahi thi phir bhi kyun Abhi ke itna karib aakar khadi ho rahi thi yeh Abhi ke samajh mein nahin araha tha.

Usski maa phone par baat karke agayi thi aur kaha ke 23rd ko Ruhi ke pita ajaega. Ab Ruhi aur usski maa donon Abhi ke bilkool paas khade the, to iss baar Abhi jaan bujh kar wahan se hatt gaya aur bus ke dusre hisse par chala gaya Ruhi se door. Abhi thoda naraaz tha uss waqt kyunke Ruhi ne jiss tarah se inkaar kiya tha ussko note ki reply dene ke liye, uss se Abhi ko ghussa aya tha. To jab Abhi door chala gaya Ruhi se, uss waqt Ruhi Abhi ko ghurr rahi thi, shayad Ruhi samajh gayi thi ke Abhi uss se naraz hai, to Ruhi Abhi ke ghusse ko shayad dekhna chahti thi… Ab Abhi ko ghussa iss liye bhi araha tha kyunke Saturday tha aur shaam ke 4 baj gaye the phir bhi kaam jaari tha…. aur kaam complicated stage par tha, Abhi nervous usski vajah se bhi ho raha tha upar se Ruhi ki berukhi….

4.30 ko Abhi saare tools ko rakhne gaya washroom mein aur khud ko wash karne gaya to Ruhi ussko ghurre jaa rahi thi, Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi ghussa hai. Ruhi ne kabhi bhi Abhi ko uss se ghussa hote nahin dekha tha, yeh pehli baar tha, to Ruhi Abhi ko ghaur se dekh rahi thi, Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi ki nazrein ussi par tikke hue the….

Phir jaane ka waqt hua to Abhi ne Ruhi ko apni kitchen mein bartan dhote hue dekha aur ishaare se pucha,

“TV par film arahi hai you are not watching?”

To Ruhi ne unn bartanon ko dikhaaya Abhi ko. Matlab saaf thi ke usskko bartan dhona hai to kaise film dekhegi, sab ishare se baatein ho rahe the, Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha ke jab wo jaane lage to wo yahin khadi rahe stairs par, ke achanak Rahima aayi aur dekha ke Abhi ishaare se kissi se baat kar rahi hai, wo muskuraayi, aur jab udhar se Ruhi ne Rahima ko dekha to aur zor se hanssne lagi….. iss liye ke Abhi aur Ruhi ki chorri chorri baatein karna pakri gayi thi Rahima se….

Jab abhi tayaar hokar nikla to Ruhi ab kitchen mein nahin thi, Abhi samajh gaya ke wo TV dekhne chali gayi, to Abhi ne khud se kaha thodi der mera wait nahin kar sakti thi!

Abhi jaane laga to Ruhi ke khidki ke taraf dekha to usski maa ko dekha khidki ke paas, Abhi ne uss se pucha ke Ruhi kidhar hai to maa ne jawaab diya “TELEVISON” phir Abhi ne usse Ruhi ko bulaane ko kaha. To Ruhi ki maa gayi Ruhi ko bulaane aur Abhi ko khidki ke paas aane ko kaha tab tak…. Magar jab Abhi khidki ke paas reach hua khush hote hue ke aakhir ab Ruhi se kuch baatein kar paega, magar maa akeli lauti andar se aur kaha,

“Nahin Ruhi nahin aegi kyunke usska Mehbob chacha baahar hai wo Ruhi par chillaega, sorry Abhi!”

Abhi ko phir bina Ruhi se mile wapas jaan pada. Bahot ghusa aya Abhi ko. Soch raha tha kia ho raha hai yeh sab ab? Kyun Mehboob bahar hai to nahin baat karegi Abhi se? Itne dinon se to baat karti aayi hai halaan ke Mehboob saamne hota tha, shuru mein mana kiya tha magar phir baat karti thi Mehboob ke hote hue to ab kia ho gaya hai….. yeh sab sochte Abhi apna sheher reach hua aur sheher mein chaaron taraf Christmass aur New year ka mahaul bana hua tha, saare shops mein tarah tarah se rang birange chizein maujood the, bahot saare bhid the charon taraf…. Saal ke ant ka mahaul tha chaaron taraf…. Aur Aise mein jab Abhi baaki ladkon ko ladkiyon ke saath dekh raha tha to sochta ke kyun iss waqt wo Ruhi ka haath thaame sheher mein ek shop se dusre shop mein ghum nahin sakta, kab usski baari aegi?

To be continued… (3700 words)
 
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Update 31 The Distance….

Ek haffta aise hi guzra, Saturday ko Ruhi apni tuition ke liye jaati, aur uss waqt sabhi ke nazrein Ruhi par hoti kyunke wo ek apsara lagti thi jab bhi saj sanwar kar nikalti thi. Had se ziada khubsurat dikhti thi, ussko paane ke liye koyi bhi diwana hota uss roop mein Ruhi ko koyi bhi dekhta to.

Sunil ne Abhi ko chedhte hue kaha,

“Abhi dekh, tujhko jalan nahin hoti jab Ruhi eise ban than ke nikalti hai to? Zara dekh to sab ki nazar ussi par tike hue hein, dekh dekh sabko….. ab pata nahin jahan jaa rahi hai wahan uss sheher ke kitne log abhi usske piche padenge….”

Abhi ne buss muskuraate hue Sunil se kaha,

“yaar agar yeh kaam last phase par nahin hota to main ne soch liya tha ke ek Saturday ko main leave leta aur usske saath jata bus mein, aise mujhe pata chal jata ke wo kahan jaati hai sweing course ke liye.”

Sunil: “Isski kia zaroorat hai, usske pita ke aane ke baad usska haath to mang raha hai nah tu? Tab usske baad koyi nahin rokega tumko Ruhi ke saath kahin bhi jaane ke liye tab chale jana araam se!”

Abhi ne khush hote hue kaha,

“bhai issi liye to dhiraj rakh rakha hua hai aaj tak!”

Sunil ne kaha,

“yeh aise din hote hein jo tumhari life ke sabse haseen din honge Abhi, ek ladki ko shaadi se pehle court karna, usske ghar har hafte ko ana , usske liye chocolates vaghaira laana usske parents se milna, lunch ya dinner apne in-laws ke saath karna, jab tak shaadi ke din nah aajaaye… shaadi ke pehle wale life ke behtareen din hote hein wo mere bhai, khub jee bhar ke enjoy karna unn dinon ko!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Sunil bhai aur in dinon ke baare mein kia khayal hai aap ka? Jab se yahan kaam shuru kiya hoon, jiss din se ussko dekha pehli baar, tabse aaj tak laga hua hon usske piche, ussko apna pyar dikhaya, apne pyar ko kabool karwaya, ussko bhi pyar hua hi hai nah? To mere liye yeh din bahot important hein bhai… maana ke jinn dinon ko aap keh rahe ho wo bhi utna hi zaroori hoga aur beshak unn dinon ka bhi intezaar hai mujhe ke sab official ho jaega tab baat aur hogi, jaise ke license mil jaega, aur abhi bina license ke chala raha hoon apni pyar ki gadi ko, ishk alag hi maza hai bhai… aur main hamesha aisa hi pyar chahta tha, ke khud kissi se pyar ho jaaye mujhe aur ussi ke saath sagaayi, phir shadi karun…… it’s a dream come true sunil bhai… magar abhi is dream ko true hone mein kuch time baaki hai“

Sunil ne tab kaha,

“Samajhta hoon bhai main bhi guzar chuka hoon nah iss phase se Ruhi ke sister ke saath…. Magar main kaamyaab nahin hua apne dream ko true karne mein…. Tum zaroor dream ko true karna bhai!”

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Ab dekhte hein 10 aakhri dinon ko jo Abhi ne guzara uss aangan mein. Kyunke har roz same chizein hote rahe to bahot repetition jaisa lagega aur boredom feel hone lagega, except last 10 dinon mein bade differences aaye….. phir Abhi ka wahan kaam khatam karne ke baad kitna kuch hua wo sab dekhna baaki hein, aur bahot kuch hua tha, bahot kuch.


To har subha Abhi ka wahan jana, Ruhi se milna, pyar karna, ghar ke piche wale hisse par apne kone mein jana kiss karna sab chalta raha. Uss aangan ke sabhi logon ka pata chalna, majority ko Abhi aur Ruhi ke pyar ko support karna sab bilkool sahi chalta raha.

Mahesh apne nani ke ghar se wapas agaya tha. Usski dosti Abhi ke saath mast tha aur ussko sab pata tha ke Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre se pyar karte hein. Wo chota bhai tha to ussko koyi problem nahin thi balke Mahesh ne jaise Abhi ko apna brother-in-law maan liya tha unn dinon ko. Jab Ruhi aur Abhi ghar ke piche milte to Mahesh ko pata hota aur koyi uss taraf ata to wo oonche awaaz mein Ruhi aur Abhi ko bata deta tha, matlab Mahesh donon ko support karta tha.

10 din kaam end karne se pehle, malab 15th December ka din tha. Shaam ko ghar jaane se pehle jab Abhi Ruhi se mila to Ruhi ne pyar se abhi se kaha,

“kal main apne nani ke ghar jaungi mummy ke saath”

Abhi ko shock laga aur pucha ke usska kia hoga, to Ruhi ne kaha ke shaam ko wapas ajaegi. To Abhi ne pucha kitne baje ghar se niklegi jaane ko? Ruhi ne kaha subha ko, to Abhi ne kaha usske aane se pehle to hargiz nahin jana jab wo yahan aa jaaye tab ghar se nikalne ko. Ruhi ne kaha ke haan wo Abhi ka wait karegi jab ajaega tab ghar se niklegi apni mummy ke saath. Aur wohi hua…..

Ruhi apni maa ke saath apni nani ke ghar jaa rahi thi subha 8 baje. Abhi ne ussko goodmorning kaha, Ruhi ne nah Abhi ke taraf dekha nah reply kiya, na muskuraayi, sar jhukaaye aaguey badhti gayi. Abhi ko bahot embarrass feel hua. Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi ko dekha aur muskuraayi uss se. Din bhar Abhi sochta raha ke Ruhi ne kyun ajeeb behave kiya tha subha ko jaate waqt. Kehne ki zaroorat nahin ke wo kitni khubsurat dikh rahi thi naye llibaas mein aur kiss tarah se usski khubsurti nikhar kar aa rahi thi, upar se usski jaan lewa adaaein….

Aur din mein Reza ne Abhi se kaha ke Ruhi ki maa ne uss se kaha ke wo kabhi bhi Abhi ka Rishta Ruhi ke liye accept nahin karegi. Yeh baat ne Abhi ko din bhar bahut torture kiya.

Shaam 3 baje Abhi Ruhi ki raah dekhne laga, wo Ruhi ko bahot miss karne laga tha, ussko dekhna chahta tha, usski smile dekhna chahta tha, usski awaaz sunna chahta tha. khud se Abhi ne kaha, “OH MY GOD!!”

Shaam ko 3.30 baje jab Ruhi wapas aayi apne nani ke yahan se to usski rawayya Abhi ke taraf thoda different tha. Wo uss shaam ko Abhi se nahin mili aur Abhi wahan se ghar udaas gaya bina Ruhi se mile, bina kiss kiye jo Abhi ke liye ek pahaad ke ziada bhari wazan ki tarah tha usske seene par.

Raat ko apne diary mein Abhi ne likha ke kia usske nani ke yahan Abhi aur Ruhi ki baat hui aur unhon ne kahin inkaar to nahin kiya iss rishte ko? Aur Abhi ne yaad kiya ke wo Amit jisske baare mein pehle baat kiya gaya tha wo usski nani ke sheher ka hi rehne wala tha. To Abhi sochne laga ke kahin jab Ruhi wahan gayi to wo baat phir se nah chidh gayi ho Ruhi ki mummy aur Ruhi ke saath??!

Abhi ne yeh bhi yaad kiya ke jab Ruhi ne ussko apni virginity wali baat batayi thi tab Abhi ne yeh bhi pucha tha ke Amit wali baat jhoot thi to Ruhi ne kaha tha ke haan sab naatak tha. Magar Ruhi ki maa ne kaha tha ke baat sach thi ke Amit ne shadi ka proposal bheja hai Ruhi ke liye wo jab France se aega to Ruhi ko lekar jaega.
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Agle din Abhi kaam par pahuncha to Ruhi nahin dikhi har subha ki tarah, khidki ke paas nahin thi. Abhi ne apna geet seeti bajaate hue 6 baje se 7 baje tak whistle kiya, magar Ruhi nahin nikli, usski khidki band thi.

Jiss time ko wo terrace aur lounge mein jhadu deti thi wo bhi nahin kiya Ruhi ne, nazar aayi to 11 baje ke karib aur ulta lounge ke saare parde ko bandh rakha Ruhi ne jo kabhi nahin hota tha, sab open hote the aur andar Ruhi har roz nazar aati thi. Magar iss subha ko sab ulta ho raha tha….

Abhi par kia guzar raha tha yeh bayaan ke baahar tha. Suffocation, ghutan, saans lene mein takliff dil ki dhadkanon ka tez badhna, yeh sab ho raha tha Abhi ke saath aur kaam aur bhi ziada mushkil hote jaa raha tha finishing karne ki…..

Lunch time mein bhi Ruhi nahin mili Abhi se. khidki ke paas Abhi wait karta raha magar khidki band rakha Ruhi ne, aur usski maa bhi nahin dikh rahi thi aur nah Mahesh aya tha baahar. Lagta tha sab Abhi ko escape kar rahe the.

Aur shaam ko jab Abhi ne kitchen ke chaukath par dekha tab Ruhi ki ek jhalak dikhaayi diya Abhi ko. Ussne abhi abhi nahaya hua tha, usski baal khule aur bheege hue the jo nazar araha tha.

Jab Abhi washroom ja raha tha khud ko wash karne aur change karne ko to Ruhi kitchen ke stair par khadi Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue muskura rahi thi…… Aisa lag raha tha aaj pehli baar wala moment phir se recreate ho raha tha, lagta tha donon ajnabee hein aur aaj pehli baar ek dusre ko dekh rahe the.

Abhi ko thodi si Khushi hui ke kum se kum usske taraf Ruhi ne dekha to, muskuraayi to! Aur Abhi ne haath ke ishaare se pucha ke kia hua kyun nahin dikhi din bhar aur Ruhi ne bhi ishaare se kuch kaha jo Abhi nahin samjha…. To Abhi ne thoda karib jaate hue dobara kehne ko kaha Ruhi se, to Ruhi ne apne seene par apne haath ko rakha aur phir uss haath ko Abhi ke taraf kiya aur munh se bina awaaz ke kaha, “I LOVE YOU!” usske honton ke movements se padhna asaan tha ke 'I love You' hi pronounce kiya Ruhi ne!

Abhi ki Aankhen bhar aayi aur kaampte hue honth se pucha,

“kyun tadpa rahi ho? kyun milne nahin aayi aaj?!”

Ruhi ne haath ke ishaare se nah kiya.

Abhi paagal hota jaa raha tha ke kia keh rahi hai kyun nah keh rahi hai phir bi I love you keh rahi hai kia baat hai, kyun weisa behave kar rahi hai!!

Aabhi ka jaane ka time ho gaya tha to Ruhi ko khidki ke paas aane ko kaha magar Ruhi ne phir nah kaha.

To Abhi usske kitchen ke paas hi gaya, Ruhi muskura to rahi thi, magar ek baar baahar dekha phir apne kadam ko do kadam piche kar liya Ruhi ne, aisa lagta tha ke kissi se darr rahi hai, jais kissi ne ussko abhi se baat karne ke liye mana kiya hua hai, wo to baat karna chahti hai magar kissi ka darr tha ussko, to Abhi ne buss itna kaha,

“kamaal karti ho yaar, subha jab jaa rahi thi to mujhko dekha bhi nahin aur goodmorning ko reply bhi nahin kiya tumne kia yaar!”

Ruhi ne hassnte hue kaha,

“uff main kaise aap ke taraf dekhti, sabhi ke nazar mujh par the, sab mujhi ko dekh rahe the mujhe bahot embarrass feel ho rahi thi issi liye nahin dekha tha aap ko, aap bhi to mujhko hi dekh rahe the nah!..... Ab jao please main andar jaa rahi hoon bye!”

Abhi ko wapas jaana pada, dusra din tha bina mile wapas ghar gaya, magar Ruhi ki “I LOVE YOU “kehne wali baat ko soch kar jaise Abhi ko tassalli ho raha tha.

Ghar jaakar diary mein likha ke kia ab Ruhi ke nani walon ne Abhi aur Ruhi ki baat ko official karne ka faisla kar liya iss liye Ruhi ko Abhi se milne ya baat karne se mana kiya hai? Kia ab jab tak sagayi nahin hogi tab tak kia Ruhi Abhi se baat nahin karegi? Kia unn logon ka koyi rasm riwaj tha kia ke ladke ladki ko mangni se pehle nah milne diya jaaye nah baat karne diya jaaye? Kia yehi baat thi kia?! Abhi yeh sab apni diary mein likhte hue pagla raha tha!!

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Inn last dinon mein ek Saturday tha, 20th December. 19th ko Ruhi ke pita nahin aya, news mili ke wo 23rd ko araha hai flight postpone kiya gaya tha usska. To iss Saturday ko, subha ko jab Abhi wahan reach hua, to Ruhi ko kitchen mein dekha, apne dada ki armchair par apni yellow nightdress mein rest karti hui. 15th se 20th tak ek subha ko bhi Ruhi khidki ke paas nazar nahin aayi, usski khidki bandh rehti thi subha ko ab…. Inn 5 dinon mein Abhi ka dil jaise tukde tukde hue the Ruhi ki distance se… aakhir kyun wo doorie rakh rahi thi Abhi samajh nahin paa raha tha…

Khair iss subha ko jab Abhi ne Ruhi ko kitchen mein dekha to wo Abhi se muskuraayi mudh kar usse dekhte hue. Ajeeb baat yeh laga tha Abhi ko ke usski maa saare kitchen ke kaam kar rahi thi jabke Ruhi armchair par baithi hui thi, to Abhi ne socha shayad Ruhi ki tabiyat thik nahin hogi.

Din ke 10 baje kaam zoron se chal raha tha bus mein aur Abhi ne Ruhi ko lounge mein jhadu lagaate hue dekha, parde ko hattaya Ruhi ne aur bus ke andar Abhi ko dekha. Abhi iss intezaar mein tha ke Ruhi terrace par jhadu lagaane aaye to wo uss se baat karne ki koshish karega…. pichle 5 dinon ko to Ruhi ne ek bhi mauka nahin diya Abhi ko, saamne aayi hi nahin thi pata nahin kyun halaan ke jab aamne saamne hote tab Ruhi muskuraati thi Abhi se.

Aur darwaza khula aur Ruhi terrace par aayi jhadu maarne, to Abhi ne bus ke andar se Ruhi se pucha ishaaron se ke aaj wo apni tuition ko nahin jaegi. Ruhi ne bus ek smile diya Abhi ko, donon ek dusre ko bade pyar se dekh rahe the bina koyi baat kiye.

Usske baad Ruhi nazar aayi apni maa ke paas ek chhoti si chair par baithi jab usski maa kapde dho rahi thi. To ishaare se Abhi ne Ruhi se pucha kia wo bimaar hai? Ruhi nahin samjhi ke Abhi kia keh raha tha to pucha, “WHAT” to Abhi ne haath se wait karne ka ishara kiya aur apne notebook se ek page liya aur uss par likha:

“NOW I LOVE YOU MORE AND MORE THAN I EVER LOVED YOU BEFORE. IN MY LIFE I HAVE NEVER LOVED ANYONE AS MUCH AS I LOVE YOU” signed – Abhi.

Aur uss note ko lekar Abhi wahan gaya Ruhi ke paas jahan kapde dhoti hai hamesha, aur jaise wahan reach hua to Ruhi kuch fikarmand dikhne lagi aur kaha,

“Aap ko yahan nahin ana chahiye tha, dekho sab log idhar dekh rahe hein” magar yeh sab kehte hue Ruhi hanss rahi thi.

Abhi ussko wo note de raha tha magar Ruhi ne nahin liya aur uss kagaz ko khidki ke paas rakh dene ko kaha. Aur Abhi ko ussko ziada dekhne se mana kiya yeh kehte hue ke sab log dekhte hein donon ko. Abhi ne note ko usski khidki ke paas rakh diya aur wapas chala gaya bus ke andar.

Ab Abhi soch raha tha ke yeh sab kia naatak hai, itne dinon se khule aam donon milte aur baat karte the to ab kyun Ruhi kehne lagi ke log donon ko dekhte hein ussko ziada nahin dekhne ko kaha vaghaira vaghaira….

Abhi bus ke andar se wait karne laga ke kab Ruhi wo note padhegi, aur jab Ruhi ne note ko liya, ek nazar Abhi ko dekha bus ke andar aur read kiya….. read karne ke baad Ruhi ne Abhi ko bade pyar bhade nazron se khade hokar dekha, aur Abhi sirf uss se muskuraya. Phir turant Abhi whistle karne laga “pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna” Ruhi ke chehre mein seriously dekhte hue. Ruhi ne note ko dobara padha phir se Abhi ko dekha aur kaha, “mujhko aise mat dekha kijiye please….” Magar Abhi ruka nahin balke fix dekhta raha Ruhi ke chehre mein, to Ruhi hanss padi aur uss note ko lekar ghar ke andar bhaag gayi.

Ruhi ne aur ek baat phir se kaha tha Abhi ko jiss waqt wo note ussko dene gaya tha, kaha tha, “ke haan kitne cigarette pee rahe ho aap sab dekh rahi hoon main” aur Abhi ne ussko jawaab diya ke “buss condition wala din to aane do sab rok dunga wada hai mera.”

Aur Abhi ko thoda ghussa aane laga tha ke kyun ab Ruhi uss se bhaag rahi thi, ab kia ho gaya tha ke logon ki parwah karne lagi thi, itne dinon se to sab khulam khula ho raha tha…. kyun ab Ruhi logon ke saamne Abhi se baat nahin karna chahti thi iss se Abhi ko takliff hone laga tha, ussko baaki mauka hi kahan milega Ruhi se milne aur baat karne ki agar sabke saamne nahin kiya to? Ab jab kuch din reh gaye the kaam ko end karne ke liye to change karna mushkil tha Abhi ke liye, balke ab to Abhi aur bhi ziada Ruhi se baat karna aur milna chahta tha…. Abhi ko bilkool achcha nahin lag raha tha jaise sab kuch hone laga tha ab. Bahut badlaav agaya tha Ruhi ki rawaiye mein…. Abhi ko yeh sab bahot disturb karne laga tha, ussko chain nahin tha, pareshan rehta tha…. usska dimaagh kaam nahin kar raha tha ke ab kaise Ruhi se contact kare.

Shaam ko phone aya S.Arabia se Ruhi ki maa gayi phone lene, tab Ruhi terrace par khadi usski wait kar rahi thi Abhi ko dekhte hue. To Abhi ne uss se pucha ke kia uss note ka koyi reply nahin degi to Ruhi ne sirf nah mein sar hillayi muskuraate hue. Abhi ko ghussa aya. Ruhi Abhi ke kaafi paas aakar khadi hui jahan Abhi kaam kar raha tha. yeh sab chhoti chhoti chizein Abhi ghaur se notice karta tha aur raat ko apne diary mein sab likhta tha. kyun Ruhi sabke saamne ab Abhi se baat karne se inkaar kar rahi thi phir bhi kyun Abhi ke itna karib aakar khadi ho rahi thi yeh Abhi ke samajh mein nahin araha tha.

Usski maa phone par baat karke agayi thi aur kaha ke 23rd ko Ruhi ke pita ajaega. Ab Ruhi aur usski maa donon Abhi ke bilkool paas khade the, to iss baar Abhi jaan bujh kar wahan se hatt gaya aur bus ke dusre hisse par chala gaya Ruhi se door. Abhi thoda naraaz tha uss waqt kyunke Ruhi ne jiss tarah se inkaar kiya tha ussko note ki reply dene ke liye, uss se Abhi ko ghussa aya tha. To jab Abhi door chala gaya Ruhi se, uss waqt Ruhi Abhi ko ghurr rahi thi, shayad Ruhi samajh gayi thi ke Abhi uss se naraz hai, to Ruhi Abhi ke ghusse ko shayad dekhna chahti thi… Ab Abhi ko ghussa iss liye bhi araha tha kyunke Saturday tha aur shaam ke 4 baj gaye the phir bhi kaam jaari tha…. aur kaam complicated stage par tha, Abhi nervous usski vajah se bhi ho raha tha upar se Ruhi ki berukhi….

4.30 ko Abhi saare tools ko rakhne gaya washroom mein aur khud ko wash karne gaya to Ruhi ussko ghurre jaa rahi thi, Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi ghussa hai. Ruhi ne kabhi bhi Abhi ko uss se ghussa hote nahin dekha tha, yeh pehli baar tha, to Ruhi Abhi ko ghaur se dekh rahi thi, Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi ki nazrein ussi par tikke hue the….

Phir jaane ka waqt hua to Abhi ne Ruhi ko apni kitchen mein bartan dhote hue dekha aur ishaare se pucha,

“TV par film arahi hai you are not watching?”

To Ruhi ne unn bartanon ko dikhaaya Abhi ko. Matlab saaf thi ke usskko bartan dhona hai to kaise film dekhegi, sab ishare se baatein ho rahe the, Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha ke jab wo jaane lage to wo yahin khadi rahe stairs par, ke achanak Rahima aayi aur dekha ke Abhi ishaare se kissi se baat kar rahi hai, wo muskuraayi, aur jab udhar se Ruhi ne Rahima ko dekha to aur zor se hanssne lagi….. iss liye ke Abhi aur Ruhi ki chorri chorri baatein karna pakri gayi thi Rahima se….

Jab abhi tayaar hokar nikla to Ruhi ab kitchen mein nahin thi, Abhi samajh gaya ke wo TV dekhne chali gayi, to Abhi ne khud se kaha thodi der mera wait nahin kar sakti thi!

Abhi jaane laga to Ruhi ke khidki ke taraf dekha to usski maa ko dekha khidki ke paas, Abhi ne uss se pucha ke Ruhi kidhar hai to maa ne jawaab diya “TELEVISON” phir Abhi ne usse Ruhi ko bulaane ko kaha. To Ruhi ki maa gayi Ruhi ko bulaane aur Abhi ko khidki ke paas aane ko kaha tab tak…. Magar jab Abhi khidki ke paas reach hua khush hote hue ke aakhir ab Ruhi se kuch baatein kar paega, magar maa akeli lauti andar se aur kaha,

“Nahin Ruhi nahin aegi kyunke usska Mehbob chacha baahar hai wo Ruhi par chillaega, sorry Abhi!”

Abhi ko phir bina Ruhi se mile wapas jaan pada. Bahot ghusa aya Abhi ko. Soch raha tha kia ho raha hai yeh sab ab? Kyun Mehboob bahar hai to nahin baat karegi Abhi se? Itne dinon se to baat karti aayi hai halaan ke Mehboob saamne hota tha, shuru mein mana kiya tha magar phir baat karti thi Mehboob ke hote hue to ab kia ho gaya hai….. yeh sab sochte Abhi apna sheher reach hua aur sheher mein chaaron taraf Christmass aur New year ka mahaul bana hua tha, saare shops mein tarah tarah se rang birange chizein maujood the, bahot saare bhid the charon taraf…. Saal ke ant ka mahaul tha chaaron taraf…. Aur Aise mein jab Abhi baaki ladkon ko ladkiyon ke saath dekh raha tha to sochta ke kyun iss waqt wo Ruhi ka haath thaame sheher mein ek shop se dusre shop mein ghum nahin sakta, kab usski baari aegi?

To be continued… (3700 words)

Update to bahut badhya hai casi ji. Aap ne behtareen likha hai.
Magar ye Ruhi ab firse kyun aise behave karne lagi Abhi k saath?
I love you bhi keh diya fir bhi ajib behave karne lagi kyun?
Kabhi baat karti kabhi muskurati, magar Abhi se door bhag rahi hai kyun?
Apne nani k yahan se wapas aane k baad se tabdili aayi na? To jarur udhat hi kuch kaha gaya hoga....
Abhi kuch jiada samajh mein nahin araha hai, agla update padhna padega jaanne ke liye k aakhit ho kia raha hai.
Great update bhai. Superb writing.
 
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ab ye kya ho raha hai...............

samajh mein nahi a raha

pahle ruhi aur uski maa openly encourage kar rahe the abhi ko.......flirt ke liye
ab ekdam se u-turn le liya...........

milna aur bat karna to dur.......... dekhna bhi mushkil ho gaya
aur ye sab nani ke ghar jane wale din se shuru hua hai

is situation ko jhel pana abhi ke liye bahut mushkil hoga
agar pahle se hi limited access hota abhi ke liye to wo itna frustrate nahin hota
lekin pahle itna kuchh khuleaam hone ke bad achanak..........everything restricted
ye maa-beti kya khel khel rahi hain abhi ke sath

dekhte hain..........ab kya hota hai........aage
 

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Nice update sir
Waiting for next update
And happy rose day:rose:
 

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:superb::good: update casi bhai,
bhai ye:rose: day ko kaisa dil todne wala update diya hai,
Ab to aisa man kar raha hai ki ek saath do teen update aa jaane ke baad hi padhoon,
lekin bagair padhe raha bhi nhi jaayega,
ruhi khud utne dino se sab kuchh khullam khulla kar rahi thi aur ab achanak se sharmayi si, sakuchayi si najuk kali ban gayi hai,
abhi se jyada boldness to sabke saamne vo hi dikhati thi,
ab aisa aakhir kya hua hai jo ruhi abhi ke saath aisa behave kar rahi hai?
aur ye reza to hamesha hi jhaante sulgane waali baatein karta hai,
dekhte hain ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update
 

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This is the storm before the storm and the matter has become so quiet that the gestures are being talked about. I care about innocent Abhi, you will break his heart. Sunil has said absolutely true that no moment comes back, so every moment should be enjoyed openly. If the matter is to ensure the relationship, then nothing can happen till Ruhi's father comes. Reza wants to create a misunderstanding between the two, or tell the truth, I don't know. Even after everything is clear, everything is not clear. Ruhi's nature has changed, there must be a specific reason for this. I have said this before and I am still saying today, it is very difficult to bear separation. There was no problem before seeing people, this is definitely something. From here a new twist is seen in the story. Today's update has confused my mind.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...:heart::heart::heart:
 
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Update 27 Abhi Spent The Night At Ruhi’s

Abhi behad khush tha, yeh ussko sab ek sapna jaisa lagne laga tha. Ussko yakeen nahin ho raha tha ke yeh sab sach mein ho raha hai. Haan ussne yeh sab khayaalon mein kayi baar socha tha magar sab hakikat mein badal jaega yeh ussne bilkool nahin socha tha. Tha to wo bilkool positive, hamesha bhala hi sochta tha, aur umeed karta tha ke jo soch raha hai wo sach aur sahi ho jaaye magar weisa sach mein hoga wo nahin sochta tha. Aur aaj jo ho raha tha usske saath wo buss ek dream come true tha.


Ab aaguey….

Jiss waqt donon bus ke piche uss darkhat ke paas kiss kar rahe the ek donon ko baahon mein bhade tabhi lane mein Shweta ki awaaz sunaayi diye kehte hue,

“naiii main nahin bheegi hoon aap ke sar ke baal bheeg gaye hein”

Ruhi darr gayi aur Abhi ko itna zor se jakra ke Abhi ko laga usski pasliyan tutne wale hein, to Ruhi ne darrte hue kaha,

“uff manoj bhai aur Shweta, agar humko yahan dekh liya to musibat ajaegi ab kia karen Abhi?!”

Abhi ne phusphusate hue kaha,

“Sshhhh andhera hai koyi humko nahin dekh paega, buss niche baith jao yahin aur bilkool khamosh raho, jab donon ghar ke andar chale jaenge tab hum unnke piche jaenge….”

Aur Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ko jakre hue hi baith gaye. Ab of course kyunke andhera tha aur donon buss ke uss taraf the, aur halki si barish bhi thi to Manoj tez kadmon se seedhe apne kitchen ke darwaze tak gaya bina idhar udhar dekhe aur Shweta ko utara kitchen mein…..

Utarte hi Shweta chillaayi,

“Ruhiiiiiiii didiiiiiiiiii main agayiiiiiiii”

Idhar Bus ke kone mein Ruhi ne Abhi se kaha,

“Ufff wo mera hi naam phukaar rahi hai, mujhko dhundne gayi hogi, chalo ab jaldi….”

To donon piche se gaye kitchen mein jaise daakhil hue Shweta andar se wapas laut rahi thi Ruhi ko dhundte hue, andar Ruhi ki maa ne Shweta se kaha ke Ruhi ghar par nahin hai iss liye wo wapas kitchen mein arahi thi aur jaise Abhi ko dekha wahin ruk gayi jahan reach hui thi achanak! Phir zor se “Abhiiiiiiii” chilaate hue usske taraf badhi donon baahon ko khole to Abhi apne tangon par baith gaya usske nanhi baahon ko apne kaandon par lene ke liye….

Tab tak Manoj toilet gaya hua tha aur ussne andar se Shweta ko Abhi ka naam utna zor se chillaate hue suna to ussko taahjub hua ke Abhi iss waqt yahan kaise.

Tab tak Ruhi ki maa bhi kitchen mein agayi thi. Abhi ne tab Ruhi ko wo plastic bag thama diya aur tangon par baithe hue baby Shweta ke hug mein gum raha. Ussko zor se seene se lagaya hua tha. Dada ji bhi aaye apni Tv program chorr kar aur Abhi aur Shweta ko dekh kar bola;

“Bahot lagao ho gaya isski Abhi ke saath, ho bhi kyun nahin Abhi bada pyara bacha khud hai”

Iss baat ko Manoj ne suna kyunke tab tak wo baahar nikal chuka tha toilet se aur khada Shweta ko Abhi ke baahon mein dekh raha tha, aur muskura raha tha Ruhi ko aur apni maa ko dekhte hue. Ussne ishaare se Ruhi se pucha ke Abhi iss waqt yahan kaise. To Ruhi ne phusphussate hue kaha,

“aaj hamare yahan rahega!”

To manoj Ruhi ko dekh kar hanssa aur andar chala gaya.

Tab Ruhi ne Shweta se kaha,

“Ari wah re Shwetu, ab bhi mujhse nahin mili tu, phukaar to mujhe rahi thi aur Abhi ke paas chali gayi jao main tumse baat nahin karungi, katti!”

Shweta ne Ruhi ke taraf dekh kar ‘hihihi” kiya aur Abhi ke sar ke baalon par haath ferrte hue kaha,

“Aap ke baal bhi bheeg gaye hai aap baahar the nah? Manoj bhai ke baal bhi bheeg gaye main nahin bheegi bilkool!”

To Abhi ne Shweta ko chumte hue kaha,

“Hmm sach hai; jao ab tum apni Ruhi didi ke paas varna wo tumse baat bhi nahin karegi aur dekho usske paas kitne saare cakes hein wo tumko nahin degi!”

Shweta nahin chorr rahi thi Abhi ko aur kaha,

“naiii main aap ke saat hi rahungi, aap aaj yahin rahoge?!”

Abhi ne mudhkar Ruhi ke taraf dekha, phir usski maa ko dekha, donon bade pyar se Abhi aur Shweta ko dekh rahe the aas paas khade, Dadaji bhi wahin khada dekh raha tha, uss waqt Abhi aur Shweta main attraction bane hue the kitchen mein.

Abhi ne Shweta ko pyar se jawaab diya ke haan aaj wo yahin rukega. Tab tak ek towel se apne baal ko ponchte hue Manoj ghar se kitchen mein aya aur Ruhi se kaha,

“tum kab jaogi shooting dekhne, jaogi bhi ya nahin?!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue apne kaandhon ko uchkaya, to Ruhi ki maa ne manoj se kaha,

“Abhi ko towel dedo, dekho usske baal bhi bheege hue hein!”

To Manoj aur Abhi ne ek dusre ko dekha aur ussne Abhi ko muskuraate hue towel diya….. Abhi ne towel se apne baal par rub kiya to Shweta ne kaha,

“Mujhe do main ponchti hoon!”

Ab Abhi ek to tangon par baitha hua tha, ab Shweta ne usske haath se towel le liya to Abhi ko apne sar ko aur niche jhukana para taake Shweta usske baal ko rub kare towel se…..

Manoj wapas andar chala gaya TV dekhne, aur dada ji bhi usske piche gaya.

Kitchen mein Ruhi ne Shweta ke haath se towel liya aur ussne Abhi ke baalon mein towel rub kiya usske baal sukhaane ke liye. Abhi ke sar par bahot baal the, usske baal bhi thick the aur usska hairstyle khubsurat tha jiss se usska look aur bhi behtar hota tha. bahot baal the Abhi ke sar par, full kale baal jo usske gore rang ko bada suit karta tha. Ruhi jab usske sar ko rub kar rahi thi to Shweta Abhi ke kaan ko apne muthi mein pakar kar noch rahi thi, jaise ek khilona tha abhi ke kaan, aur Ruhi ne Shweta ke muthi par chotta sa chamaat lagate hue kaha,

“kyun mere Abhi ke kaan noch rahi ho tum!”

Abhi ko wo moment bahot pyara lag raha tha ke Ruhi usske baalon mein towel rub kar rahi thi, ussko lag raha tha wo apne ghar mein hai aur usski patni wo sab kar raha tha…..

Shweta ne jawaab diya Ruhi ko,

“kia yeh aap ki Abhi hai? Kyun yeh aap ka Abhi hai didi?!”

To jaldi se Ruhi ne Shweta ke munh par apne haath rakha taake andar se Manoj usski awaaz nah sunein, aur Ruhi ki maa hanssne lagi.

Ab Manoj se kyun Ruhi, Abhi ke saath apna rishta chhupa rahi thi yeh wohi jaane, magar Manoj ko sab dikh to raha tha kyunke shuru se jab bhi Abhi aur Ruhi baat karte ya aas paas hote the to Manoj donon ko dekh kar muskurata tha hamesha, matlab ussko personally pata tha ke donon ek dusre ko pasand karte hein, phir bhi pata nahin kyun Manoj se Ruhi ya to darrti thi ya chhupana chahti thi. Manoj Ruhi ka bada bhai tha, ghar ka bada beta tha, Mahesh, Ruhi se chhota tha, aur badi behen jisski shadi ho chuki hai wo Manoj ke baad thi. Matlab Manoj pehla aulad tha uss family ka.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne Ruhi se ahiste se kaha ke ussko nahana hai, aur underwear nahin hai usske paas, aur raat ko sone ke liye kapde bhi nahin hai.

To Ruhi ne yeh baat apni maa se kaha to maa ne Mahesh ka ek underwear, short aur Tshirt diya Abhi ko.

Jab Abhi nahane jaa raha tha thik tabhi Manoj bhi apne kamre se nikla towel aur underwear ke saath, aur dekha Abhi nahane jaa raha hai to Abhi se kaha,

“okay pehle tum ho aao,” Aur Abhi ne kaha, “nahin its okay pehle tum ho aao tab main naha lunga”

Magar aakhir mein Abhi hi gaya nahane.

Jab Abhi naha raha tha tab Manoj ne Ruhi ke saamne apni maa se sawaal kiya,

“Meri samajh mein nahin araha ke kyun aur kaise aaj Abhi hamare yahan thehra hai, aap samjao mujhe maa!”

Maa ne Ruhi ko dekha aur Ruhi apni maa ko. To Manoj ne Ruhi se pucha,

“Tu bata sakti hai? Kia yeh tere kehne par ruka hai? Ya tere liye ruka hai?!”

Maa ne jawaab diya,

“are ahin ussko late ho gaya tha aaj aur usske sheher jaane wale buses miss ho gaye to main ne hi kaha ke kyun taxi ko pata nahin kitna paisa dena padega, to hamare yahan ruk jaaye!”

Manoj ne phir bhi Ruhi ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Magar tu badi khush ho rahi ke wo yahan thehra hai kyun? Kahan gaye the tum donon mere ghar aane se pehle?!”

Ruhi sar jhukaaye hue niche dekh kar hanssi aur kaha,

“wo apne ghar phone karke bataane gaye the ke wo aaj ghar nahin arahe hein!”

Tab Manoj ne kaha,

“magar usska taxi ka bhaada to Mehboob ko dena chahiye tha nah? ya ussko Mehboob ke yahan rukna tha hamare ghar kyun aya yeh jaanna chahta hoon main!”

Maa ne kaha,

“are tum kyun itne sawaal karne lage main ne khud ussko yahan rukne ke liye kaha kaun si badi baat ho gayi?”

Tab Manoj ne Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue hi kaha,

“badi baat yeh hai ke Ruhi ke liye ruka hamare yahan wo aur Ruhi khush hai ke Mehboob ke bajae hamare yahan ruka!”

Ruhi ne dhime awaaz mein kaha,

“To kia hua bhai?!”

Manoj: “kia lagta hai wo tera?!”

Ruhi: “kuch nahin!”

Manoj: “to tujhe kyun Khushi hai ke wo hamare yahan ruke?!”

Ruhi: “main ne kab kaha ke mujhe Khushi hai?!”

Manoj: “dikh raha hai mujhe!”

Maa ne donon ko rokte hue kaha

“Chhup ho jao tum donon, are Manoj donon dost hein, humumar hein ek dusre se baatein karte hein din mein ek dusre se jaan pehchaan ho gaye hein to kia ho gaya?!”

Manoj: “maa ya aur koyi baat hai? Main kuch aisi waisi baat nahin sunna chahta hoon, agar mujhe kuch aisi waisi baat ka pata baad mein chala to mujhse bura koyi nahin hoga keh deta hoon. Aaj ruk gaya hai, ghar aaye mehmaan ko kuch nahin keh sakta, magar khabardaar agar aayinda aisa hua to!”

Itna kehkar Manoj wahan se nikal gaya aur Ruhi rone lagi apni maa ke seene se lag kar. Maa ne uss se kaha,

“Chhup kar wo aisa hi hai usski fikar mat kar…. “

Dinner ke time sab kitchen mein ekatha hue. Aur Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi uss se doorie kiye hue hein. Abhi baar baar Ruhi ke taraf dekh raha tha aur ussko acha nahin lag raha tha ke Ruhi uss se door hai. Ruhi ko bhi pata tha ke Abhi ko acha nahin lag raha hoga to usska mann behlaane ke liye ussne Shweta ko Abhi ke paas jaane ko kaha dhire se.

Shweta jab Abhi ke paas gayi to Abhi ke goad mein ghuss ke baith gayi, Ruhi aur usski maa dinner serve karne lage. Ruhi ne dhire dhire apne maa se kuch kaha serve karte waqt. Dada ji ko, Manoj ko aur khud maa ne apne liye serve kar liya table par. Abhi ko nahin serve kiya. To dada ji ne pucha,

“Are Abhi ko bhi khane do nah!”

Tab Ruhi ne kaha,

“hum kamre mein khayenge dada ji!”

Aur Manoj ne ek nazar Ruhi ko dekha magar kuch nahin kaha.

Ruhi ne tab uss din ki tarah khud ki aur Abhi ka khana apni room mein legayi aur Abhi ko aane ko kaha. Shweta Ruhi ke maa ke saath chali gayi. Aur Abhi gaya Ruhi ke room mein.

Abhi yehi to chahta tha, usski dili tamanna thi ke donon akele ek saath khana kaaye aur ussi kamre mein khane ka mann tha usse yehi baat Ruhi se kehne ko socha tha nahate waqt magar naha kar wapas nikla to mauka nahin mila ussko Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. To kitna khush hua yeh dekh kar ke Ruhi ne bhi bilkool wohi socha jo Abhi ke dil mein tha. Donon ke beech jaise ek anjana connection hota tha, Jo Abhi sochta hota tha wohi Ruhi bhi sochti thi. Donon ke beech ek gehra connection tha…. roohani thi ya kia tha magar donon ek dusre se jaise bandhe hue the kissi tarah se. Aisa Abhi ko lagta tha aur sochta tha wo.

Jab donon Ruhi ke kamre mein chale gaye to Manoj shuru hua kitchen mein.

“Yeh kia hai? Kyun ussko especial treatment diya ja raha hai? Ghar ka jamai raja hai kia wo? Kyun Ruhi ke saath dinner karna chahiye usse? Hamaare saath yahan nahin kha sakta wo?!”

Dada ji ne kaha,

“are bache hein donon khane do ek saath kia burai hai?!”

Manoj ne apne dada ji ko bade bade aankhon se dekhte hue kaha,

“aap to chhup hi raho to behtar hai aap ki raye nahin maanga hai main ne!”

Budha dada chhup ho gaya, aur chup chaap khane laga. Usski jaise koyi ehmiyat hi nahin thi ghar mein. Budha tha 77 years ka, kamzor tha, patla sa tha, apne mein hi gum rehta tha magar ussko sab dikhta tha. Aur ussko pata tha ke Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ko passand karte hein aur ussko rishta passand tha.magar uss ghar mein usska koyi nahin sunta tha, sab ussko ignore maarte the, jaise wo tha hi nahin uss ghar mein.

Manoj ne apni maa se dobara pucha ke kyun Abhi aur Ruhi kamre mein khaa rahe hein, to maa ne bhi chhutkara paane ke liye kaha,

“Tu khud jaa kar Ruhi se kyun nahin puchta? Puch sakta hai? Jaa wahan jaakar puch le Ruhi se”

Maa ko pata tha ke Manoj itna to budtamiz nahin ke ek ghar aaye mehmaan ke samne jaakar kuch ghalat karega.

Raat ko kuch der baad sab log TV ke saamne baite serial dekh rahe the, unn dinon “HUM LOG” chalta tha har roz, jiss mein Ashok kumar kahani ko bayan karta tha. Bahot prachalit aur successful serial raha tha wo. Ab yaad nahin ke repeat tha ya first telecast tha. – Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ke bagal mein baithe the aur chhupa kar haath pakre hue the ek dusre ke. Jiss jagah par Manoj baita tha ussko nazar nahin ata donon ka haath pakarna.

Phir baat hui ke Abhi kahan soyega. Abhi ka bada mann tha ke Ruhi ke saath soye magar ussko pata tha ke wo mumkin nahin tha. Phir bhi kuch pal wo Ruhi ke aaghosh mein beetana chahta tha.

Ruhi ne kaha ke dada ji ke kamre mein soyega Abhi. Wahan ek bed khali tha iss liye. Ruhi ko pata tha ke ussne kyun dada ji ke kamre mein Abhi ko sone ko kaha. Usska kamra thik Ruhi ke kamre ke side mein tha, aur kabhi bhi Abhi Ruhi ke paas aa sakta tha ya Ruhi usske paas jaa sakti thi.

Karib 10 baje Manoj chala gaya sone aur Ruhi ki maa bhi Shweta ko lekar chali gayi apni kamre mein. Dada ji, Ruhi aur Abhi baithe rahe TV ke saamne. Ab Abhi ne Ruhi ko bahon mein bhar liya tha, donon kiss karte to kabhi phussur phussur baat karte, ke suna dada ji armchair par kharaate maar rahe hein to Ruhi ne ussko jagaya aur apne kamre mein jaane ko kaha. Ussi time Abhi ke bed ko bhi tayaar kar diya Ruhi ne aur donon gaye Ruhi ke kamre mein usski bed par kuch der saath rehne ke liye.

Kuch der sath baith kar ek dusre ko caress kiya, kiss kiya aur Ruhi ne kaha ussko change karna hai, apni nightdress pehenna tha usse. To ussi kamre mein Abhi ke maujoodgi mein Ruhi ne dress chahge kiya magar almaari ke darwaze ko khol kar usski aadh mein change kiya…. Phir bhi Abhi usski jism ke kuch hisson ko dekh paa raha tha jaise usski peeth, kaandhe par bra ke strap aur Ruhi ne bra utara jo Abhi ne full dekha, aur wo utejit hua….

Jab Ruhi wapas aayi bed par apni nightdress mein, wo lamba tha full niche tak, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke andar bra nahin pehna tha Ruhi ne aur usski gori baahein dikh rahe the pura kyunke dress sleevless tha.

Abhi ne Ruhi ko jakar liya aur bed par leyta kar chumne laga. Ruhi ne surrender kar diya tha khud ko, jaise wo chahti thi ke Abhi uss se humbistar hoe. Abhi ka haath dhire dhire kiss ke dauraan Ruhi ke baazu ko sehlaate hue upar usski kaandhe tak ruke, phir dusra haath Ruhi ke dress ke niche usski tang par ferrte hue kaafi upar usski jaanghon tak pahunch chuka tha aur iss se pehle ke aur upar jata Ruhi ne usska haath rok liya apne haath ko upar se daba kar.

Abhi Ruhi ke upar chadh chuka tha, aur ab wo Ruhi ke gardan par apne jeeb ferr raha tha, Ruhi hanff rahi thi aur Abhi ka ek haath ab usski urujon ko daba raha tha, to Ruhi ne tadapti awaaz mein ahiste se kaha,

“please ruk jao, Stop Abhi mujh se saha nahin jaega, main khud ko rok nahin paungi, please stop nah!

Ruhi ke boobs ko aur dabaate hue Abhi ne ghurrate hue kaha,

“yehi to main chahta hoon sweetheart, khud ko mere hawaale kardo nah, puri tarah se….”

Abhi ki awaaz daba hua tha, usske bhi saansein jaise full rahe the, aur usska haath iss baar Ruhi ke dress ko itna upar utha chuka tha jiss se ruhi ke boobs Abhi ke saamne tha, tab Abhi ne niche ke taraf dekha to Ruhi ki pantie dikh raha tha, Abhi ko khud pata nahin chala ke kab ussne usski nightdress ko utna upar utha liya tha….. Ruhi ko adhnangi dekh kar Abhi sharminda hua aur jaldi se usski dress ko niche karke ussko dhaank diya aur Ruhi se sorry kaha.

Ruhi ne Abhi ke gaal ko sehlaate hue pyar se usske chehre mein dekhte hue kaha,

“You do not have to be sorry Abhi, I was letting you move up my dress, main aap rok nahin rahi thi, issme tumhari koyi ghalati nahin hai.”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke gaalon ko chumte hue kaha,

“mujhe hosh hi nahin tha ke main ne itna utha diya tha tumhare dress ko, pata hota to nahin karta…. Sorry again.”

Ruhi Abhi ko ghaur se dekhte hue kaha,

“Abhi samajh lo ke yeh hamari first night hai shadi ke baad tab bhi tum aisa karte kia?!”

Abhi ne bade pyar se Ruhi ko chumte hue kaha,

“Tab baat aur hoti, tab main tumhare nahin apne ghar mein hota, aur tab sab official hota nah? hamare pas yeh sab karne ki license hota, abhi alag baat hai nah!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke chaati ko chumte hue kaha,

“uss din to tum kuch ziada hi karna chahte the to aaj kyun nahin?!”

Abhi: “pata nahin aaj mahaul alag lag raha hai, uss din ghar par koyi nahin tha, aaj dimaagh mein yeh baat hai ke Manoj hai, aunty hai, Shweta bhi hai…to mahaul bilkool alag hai aaj aur upar se raat hai aaj!!”

Lag raha tha aaj Ruhi utejit ho rahi thi, kyunke ussne khud apne haath ko Abhi ke short ke upar usske ling ke upar rakha aur ek rijhaati hui ada mein kaha,

“uss din to aap ne mere haath ko khinch kar yahan rakha tha aur mujhse kuch aur chahte the aap, aaj wo nahin chahiye aap ko?!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans lete hue, aur Ruhi ki tarasti nazron ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Sweetheart chahiye to mujhe bahot kuch, bahot ziada kuch chahiye tumse, tumhari gehraayi mein samaa jaane ko dil karta hai, tumhare saanson mein ghul jaane ko maan karta hai, tumhare aahon mein mil jaane ko mann karta hai, tumhare dil mein utar jaane ko mann karta hai, tumhare ek ek ang ko apne angon mein basaane ko mann karta hai magar darrta hoon; darta hoon ke tumko ruswa nah kardun, dar hai ke yeh sab karke tumko kho nah baithun, darrta hoon ke kal tum yeh nah kaho ke main ne ghalat faeda uthaya tumhara iss liye behtar hai ke uss kamre mein chala jaun ab!”

Abhi dada ji ke kamre mein sote hue soch raha tha ke aaj ussne Ruhi ko pyasa chorr diya. Usski pyas nahin bujhayi ussne. Ruhi pyasi thi isska ehsaas ho raha tha Abhi ko.

Abhi gehri neendh mein thi, bich raat mein Ruhi teen baar usske paas aayi thi isska Abhi ko bilkool pata nahin chala, pata chala to yeh ke Ruhi ussko subha 6 baje jaga rahi thi uthne ke liye, kaam par jaane ke liye.

To be continued…. (3520 words)
Woooooowww....
Very well written update.....
Well described....mostly swati's part....very good....

To aaj ham update ke bare me baad me baat karenge pahle iss update ke title ki baat kar lete hai.....

Ha to update ka nam hai...NIGHT AT THE RUHI'S PLACE.....
Ye kuch kuch NIGHT AT THE MUSEUM ki tarah sound nahi karta....:lol1:

Mujhe to waisa hee laga.....or dono me similarities bhi to hai.....
Usme saare namune hee bhare hai....hero ko chhod kar....
OR isme bhi saare namune hee bhare hai....hero ko chhod kar.....

Ruhi ki maa ka character to waise hee mysterious tha....khair uska koi na.....uske liye to Aapne bhi kaha tha ki ye azib lagega....OR lag bhi raha hai.....

Par Mahesh......ye mujhe samajh nahi aaya bilkul.....ak dum out of my mind....

Dada ko to waise hee aadha kiya hua hai....wo bechara wanha bas khaane pr sone ka liye hai....baaki koi use nahi puchta....

Baap hai nahi....matlab yanha....

Bas ak character hai Shweta jo thik hai....lekin mujhe us par bhi doubt hai.....

Isliye mujhe iska naam NIGHT AT THE MUSEUM jyada thik laga....:rock1:


Or ye bhi achcha hua....jaise Abhi ko last moment par Ruhi ne pyasa chhod diya tha.....waise hee Abhi ne bhi Ruhi ko last moment par pyasa chhod diya....

Ise kahte hai....TIT FOR TAT.....JAISE KO TAISA......:lol1:



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Ha to sir ab baat karte hai update ki......

To excited koi bhi ho sakta hai.....jaruri nahi bas ladko ko hee aisi feeling hoti hai.....
Wo baat alag hai ki ladko me jyada hoti hai.....lekin girls me bhi hoti hai.....OR isme koi galat baat nahi hai....

To same ye hee situation Ruhi ke saath thi.....May be usne Abhi ke saamne kapde bhi isliye change kiye ho....jis se ki abhi use dekhe or excite ho......OR phir dono akele hee to hai room mai....
To ho sakta hai ki abhi excitement ke maare uske saath physical ho jaaye......

Ak tarah se dekha jaaye to ye pura Ruhi ka plan tha......Abhi ko seduce karne ka......

Abhi ko dada ke room me sulana....taaki pass rahe....
Dada ke room me sulane ka subhav bhi usi ne diya tha....
OR waise over aged hai to ak bar so gaya to jaagega bhi nahi.....

Ye sab baatein ishara hai ki us time Ruhi super excited thi.....


Ab baat kare Ruhi ki maa ki to......uska behaviour same hai....pahle ki tarah...na kisi baat se lena na koi dena....
Lekin Ruhi ko puri tarah support karti hai...lekin agar use Abhi itna hee pasand hai to usne Manoj ko kyo nahi dhamkaya.....
Jabki agar ak hisaab dekha jaaye to Mahesh ki baat sahi thi....kisi bhi bhai ko bura lag jaayega jab uski bahan or maa aisi harkte karengi....

Ha mujhe sabse achcha part laga Shweta ka....uski harkate....uski baate....uski masumiyat ne mujhe mere kisi apne ki yaad dila di.....very good....

Ab baat kare Manoj ki.....to....
AK bhai hone hisaab se usne jo kuch bhi kaha sab sahi tha.....uska Ruhi par chillana....uski maa ko Sunana.....sab

OR usne Abhi ko kuch nahi kaha.....balki uske saamne sahi se bartav kiya....kyoki Abhi ghar par aaya hua mehman hai....ye bhi thik hai.....
Aapne uska ye roop jo dikhaya hai wo apni jagah bilkul sahi hai......

Lekin mujhe problem hai Manoj ki uss roop se jise ki aapne nahi dikhaya....

Kya Ruhi or Abhi ko baat karte kya usne pahle nahi dekha..????...
Kya Jab Ruhi Abhi ke liye kiss bhijwati hai kisi or ke jariye tab nahi dekha tha..???...
Kya dono ko ishaare me baat karte pahle nahi dekha...??...

Jab ye sab kuch pahle se chalta aa raha hai to phir aaj kya ho gaya....aaj kese uske andar ka bhai jaag gaya....very strange....


OR dusri chij jo mujhe pasand aayi pure update me wo hai....ki abhi dhire dhire samajh dar ho raha hai....responsible ho raha hai....

OR ye baat usne Ruhi ko aage badhne se roke kar saabit kar di...OR phir jaise use samjhaya....that was awesome......

Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Anyways
Fantastic update....
Thanks......
 
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