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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED
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Vikram singh rana
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Ha ye sahi hai ki wo zamane jyada purana nahi hai.....Thanks so very very much Vikram bro. Very happy with your review.
You are allowed to point things which you found not right.
But the FACTs REMAINS the same as they HAPPENED EXACTLY that way.
Rahi baat butter chicken aur curry ki to butter chicken hi ek kissam ki curry hai bhai. Ussi de roti bhi khaya jata hai aur chawal bhi.
Aur baat sexual feeling ki to kuch ghalat nahin tha kyunke Abhi Ruhi ko apni wife maan chuka tha to ussko apni wife ke saath itna closeness upar upar sex karne ki chaah banta hai.... aap shayad 1986 ko ziada old ya door samajh rahe ho.... bhai uss zamaane mein bahot khulam khula sab kuch hone laga tha..... sabhi 1980's ke movies dekho samajh jaoge.
Ye gana yaad hai nah "khulam khula pyar karenge hum donon, iss dunya se nahin darenge hum donon..... movie Julie yaad hai, shadi se pehle sex kar liya aur pregnant ho gayi thi..... "my heart is beating, keeps on repeating yaad hai Vikram bhai? Uss zamane mein ye sab start ho chuka tha.... sab chalta tha bhai.... Abhi tab ki full modern ladka tha, in tha, trendy tha. To obviously wo sab karna chahta tha apni hone wali wife se.....
Aap kehto ho that is not love.... to aage padhte rehna phir ek din aap ko aaj ki baat yaad dilaunga
Aur haan Ruhi ne Abhi ki pant ke upar haath rakha tha. Apne aap nahin, Abhi ne usska hath apne haath se khinch kar wahan kiya tha.... aur bus halke se haath chalaya tha uss jagah..... Ab Ruhi ne weisa kyun kiya tha wo aap aaj ki update padhne k baad shayad samajh jaoge. Aap ne yahan bhi kaha k uss zamaane ki ladki to weisa nahin karti to aaj ke updates aur baaki k updates padhne k baad your opinion will be changed.
Thanks Vikram bro for reading in depth, I loved it.
OR us samay qo dono gaane jo aapne bataaye aa chuke the....OR Julie film bhi.....
Lekin use bhi sach hai ki jis se ham sach hai wala pyar karte hai.....ham kabhi nahi chahenge ki hamaari kisi bhi chij ya harkato ke kaaran saamne waale par koi aankh aaye ya us par koi ungli bhi uthaaye......ak dusre ka or ak dusre ki man maryada ka khayal rakhenge jab tak ki real me ak na ho jaaye....
Kyoki agar kisi bhi kaaran se alag hue to ladke ka to phir bhi thik hai.....lekin ladki ke liye izzat bahut badi hoti hai....Jo ki uchhal sakti hai....
Lekin jaisa ki aapne kaha ki.....Abhi ruhi ko uski patni maan chuka hai....but isme bhi ak correction hai....
Maan chuka hai....patni hui nahi hai....
Abhi un dono ka relationship....OPEN RELATIONSHIPS hai.....COMMITTED RELATIONSHIP nahi.....
Isliye abhi kiss karna hug karna chal sakta hai lekin....iss se aage....azib lagega....
Last ha aapne meri biography waali baat ka koi jawaab nahi diya....
Thanks
Casi bro ap ne to imotional kardiya akhir ruhi ne apni ghalti bata hi di
Casi bro ap ne to imotional kardiya akhir ruhi ne apni ghalti bata hi di ab dekhna yeh hai ke abhi kia reaction de ga
kamdev99008
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1-exactly yahi mera manna hai.... us jamane mein to in baton ko itna openly accept karna possible hi nahi tha.........
jaisa ki abhi aur ruhi ke beech dikhaya gaya hai..............an open relationship........... and more open affair
kam se kam india me to................. haan background kisi much open desh ki hai to ho sakta hai.... wahan acceptable ho
2-ise poonchhne ki jarurat hi nahi.............. har lekhak ki kahani mein wo khud ko hi likhta hai............apne hi bare mein .... kahin na kahin... kisi na kisi chacter mein khud ko utaarta hai............................ so every story is a biography.......... less or more
kuchh dr sahab ki tarah apna direct role rakhte hain to kuchh use chhupa hi rahne dete hain
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Yaar ye har Fridays ko hi hota hai, koyi kahani nahin padhta kia Fridays ko? Last k 2 Fridays ko bhi update de diya tha ko sirf ekaat logon ne reply kiye the.... sala 3 updates kiya main ne aue kewal 3 replies
Chalo chorro sab weekend manaane mein lage honge.....
Haan ab ata hoon aap ki review par Kaamdev bhai. Senseless, meaningless haan bilkool sahi kaha aap ne bhai. Ladkiyon k akkal ghusse rehte hein kahin....
Magar update to wahan stop kar diya main ne issi liye aap ko aisa jiada laga kyunke turant Abhi ne wohi kaha jo aap ne kaha..... main ne 5000 words likh kar post kiya, late ho gaya iss liye wo parts type hi nahin kiya jo uss conversation mein jaari raha.... agar wo sab post kar dete tab shaayad aap ko senseless aur meaningless nahin lagta Ruhi ka jawaab....
Regarding what you hv said either she had a fiancee etc, well at that point, on that day, at that moment even Abhi did not know anything, so the story is only from his point of view, thus I want readers to know as far as Abhi had knowledge. However Kaamdev bro EVERYTHING will be known and told by the end of the story, that could be aftet 15 to 20 years LATER.
WHY her mother promoted, that is why she encouraged their affair, this will be told SOON may be after 8 more updates......
Hahahaha dekha nah bhai, shuru mein aap Ruhi k side mein the, to main ne kaha tha nah k aage chal kar aap apni raae badal sakte ho
wohi hua nah?Aur haan kuch ladkiyan, auratein bahut asaani se aankh se aansoo nikaal lete hein, kabhi khud apne par beete dukhon ko soch kar to kabhi dusron k dukhon ko soch kar aur unn aasoowon ko istemaal karte hein kissi emotional aadmi ke saamne usski sumpathy haasil karne k liye..... kia Ruhi weisi thi?? Baad mein pata to chalega hi.
Bahot shukriya padhne aur passand karne k liye Kaamdev bhai.
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ye post mujhe confuse karta lekin galti se maine jab pichhla comment kiya to, aaye hue commets padh liye jo ki 25th update me aaye the
mera pura suspense hi kham ho gaya
chalo koi nhi fir bhi padhte hai jaldi jaldi ..
Dekha nah bhai, main itni mehnat se suspense create kar raha hoon aur aap present k replies padh kar suspense bigaar rahe ho to maja kidkida khud kar rahe hi..... issi liye to kahani ko shuru se padhna chahiye, lekhak k saath saath chalna chahiye tab maja ata hai....
Khair a aap ko update 25 ka pata chal gaya phir bich mein padhte waqt aap ko sab samajh mein aata rahega...
Thanks doc sahab.
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Kia kaamdev bhai aap bhi "uss zamaane" keh rahe ho, are bhai unn dinon ko kaho nah aaj bhi Abhi aur Ruhi zinda hai full fit hein.... kia 1986 ko guzre itna bhi zamana hi gaya??1-exactly yahi mera manna hai.... us jamane mein to in baton ko itna openly accept karna possible hi nahi tha.........
jaisa ki abhi aur ruhi ke beech dikhaya gaya hai..............an open relationship........... and more open affair
kam se kam india me to................. haan background kisi much open desh ki hai to ho sakta hai.... wahan acceptable ho
2-ise poonchhne ki jarurat hi nahi.............. har lekhak ki kahani mein wo khud ko hi likhta hai............apne hi bare mein .... kahin na kahin... kisi na kisi chacter mein khud ko utaarta hai............................ so every story is a biography.......... less or more
kuchh dr sahab ki tarah apna direct role rakhte hain to kuchh use chhupa hi rahne dete hain
Aur ek baat kahun? Aap ghalat soch rahe hi ke 1986 mein open relationship nahin hote the, are LIVE IN relationship unnhi dinon ko shuru hua tha. Wohi din the jab ladke ladkiyan ki mixed colleges hona shuru hua tha INDIA mein bhi..... an jitna India USA se influence hota hai to USA mein live in relationship already tha id India mein start ho gaya tha....
Aap ko pata hoga Kaamdev bhai ke Indian film makers filmein unhi subject par banaate hein jo actuality hote hein kia aap maante ho yeh baat?
Agar maante ho to yaad karo Raj kapoor ki "Bobby" jo 1970's mein bani thi ladka ladki openly milte the aur bahot kuch openly karte the..... uss se bhi pehle 1960's ki film "hare kanch ki chudiyan" blockbuster movie thi 60's ki, famous songs the iss movie ki google kar lena.... isski ek famous dialogue the jo utna hi mashoor hua tha jitna Sholay film ke dialogues hein wo dialogue ye hai "ari oh Mohini ye kia kar diya tune" ye baap apni beti ko tadapte hue kehta hai?? Kyun? Iss liye ke ladki shaadi se pehle pregnant ho jaati hai.... bhai agar 1960's mein ladka ladki iss had tak jaa sakte the to 1986 mein kitna aage badh chuke the aap ko andaza nahin kyun ke aap shayad the nahin unn dinon, MAIN THA bhai. Mujhr pata hai, main ne sab dekha hua hai Kaamdev bhai.
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Awesome updates casi bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
casi bhai mujhe lagta hai ki aap mera heart fail karwa kar hi rahoge,
bhai aapne story itna deep mein likha hai ki na chahte hue bhi story se emotionally connect ho hi jata hoon, vaha jab abhi ka dil toota hai to aisa lag raha hai jaise mera dil toot gaya hai bhai,
abhi ne shweta se bhi uske mummy papa ke baare mein information nikal liya hai,
lekin use phir bhi doubt hai,
idhar ye dono maa beti to abhi ki jaan lene par tuli hui hai,
ruhi usase pyaar bhi karti hai aur uski maa ko bhi pata hai lekin shaadi nhi kar sakti,
ye to mujhe pahle se hi pata tha ki ruhi virgin nahi hai,
lekin itni si baat ke liye to vo itna adhik pareshan nahi ho sakti hai,
ab dekhte hain ki ruhi ki poori kahaani kya hai,
Waiting for next update bhai
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
casi bhai mujhe lagta hai ki aap mera heart fail karwa kar hi rahoge,
bhai aapne story itna deep mein likha hai ki na chahte hue bhi story se emotionally connect ho hi jata hoon, vaha jab abhi ka dil toota hai to aisa lag raha hai jaise mera dil toot gaya hai bhai,
abhi ne shweta se bhi uske mummy papa ke baare mein information nikal liya hai,
lekin use phir bhi doubt hai,
idhar ye dono maa beti to abhi ki jaan lene par tuli hui hai,
ruhi usase pyaar bhi karti hai aur uski maa ko bhi pata hai lekin shaadi nhi kar sakti,
ye to mujhe pahle se hi pata tha ki ruhi virgin nahi hai,
lekin itni si baat ke liye to vo itna adhik pareshan nahi ho sakti hai,
ab dekhte hain ki ruhi ki poori kahaani kya hai,
Waiting for next update bhai
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1986 mein 8th class mein padhta tha..... mein abhi jitna bada nahi tha............... lekin itna samajhdar tha ki hindi-english-urdu ke newspapers, magazines, novels padhta tha........ movies 1st day-1st show dekhta tha............... india ke national capital delhi mein rahta tha..............apne bare mein bahut kuchh apse fb par bhi bataya tha..........to jindgi ke bahut achchhe aur bure pahlu dekh chuka tha tab tak................. daily drinker aur chain smoker ban chuka tha...........
aur......... school mein affair bhi tha mera..........upper ya lower financial status nahi tha mere guardians ka.......... lekin middle class atmosphere me raha hoon.......aapne abhi aur ruhi ka bhi elite....status symbol high profile nahi dikhaya..... jo ap bata rahe ho wo cheejein unmein hua karti thi so called new rich businessman, politicians, beaurocrats and royal families.............
lekin jo meine practically dekha tha.........jo mahaul hota tha un dino..........middle class ya yu kaho ki common peoples ka............ khule-aam nahi chhupa ke hi ya strange locality me.......... parents ke samne ghar par khule aam ek dusre ko isharebaji nahi hoti thi.............
ab aap kahan the............ ye mujhe nahi pata.... lekin mein delhi mein tha....capital of india....shayad us samay india ka dusra bada shahar tha......bombay ke bad...............ab pahle sthan par hai
leave it.................. basically i'm more interesting in the developments arising out of your story.............. because i've gone through these phases not a lot of times.......but some times.......... in my life i've 7 lovers....more than 100 fuck mates........ and only 1 life mate---my wife