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Jabrdst update bhai mza aagya suraj ne toh faad k rkh diUPDATE 17
Recap -
Seema ki baat sunker shriya use marne ke liye uske peeche bhagi, dono behene haste hue kheto me hirni ki tarah uchal kud kar rahi thi.
Ab aage -
EXT. TUBEWELL ROOM - FEW DAYS LATER - AFTERNOON
Suraj room me kafi excitement ke saath idher udher ghum raha tha, jab se kal shaam me seema ne uska haath pakad kar apni chut par rakh kar use chut dene ka bola tha uska loda kabu me nahi tha.
Tabhi dhere se gate par dastak hui, suraj ne peeche mud kar dekha to seema kamini muskan hasti hui ander dakhil hui.
SEEMA
Aur chodu lund kabu me he, ya, pant faad ke bhag gaya hihihi
Seema ne suraj ko chedte hue bola.
Suraj jo kafi der se apne lund ko kisi tarah thame tha, wo turant seema ke paas poncha aur jhat se uski kamar pakad kar uske hotho par kas ke chumban jad diya.
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Seema ko suraj ka ye wild andaj behad bhaya, aur usne bhi uske hotho ki kedi chusai karni chalu ki, kafi der tak dono behen bhai hoth chusai karte rahe.
Suraj fir is dar se, zada der na lagate hue, ki kahi ek bar aur uski kismat me lode na bu jaye, jhat pat apne kapne niklan shuru kar diya.
Seema bhi uski is had badi pe muskura di, 5 second ke ander suraj janm jaath nanga ho gaya. Nanga hote hi usne seema ki aur dekha to use abhi kapde pehne paya.
SURAJ
Chudo rani abhi bhi kapde kyu pehne he, zaldi nikal kahi koi aa naa jaye
Suraj aavesh me aate hue bola, seema bina koi harkat kiye kamini muskan deti hui uski aur dekhti rahi.
SEEMA
Mene irada badal liya, tu kapde pehen le me jati hu
Seema kamini muskan deti hui gate ki aur badh gai. Seema ka yu do tuk jwab suraj muh faade dekhta aur sunta raha.
Jaise hi seema ka haath darwaze ke handel tak poncha, suraj ne use peeche se jakad liya.
SURAJ
Sali randi kutiya, lund me aag laga kar nakre karti he, tune aaj tak meri sharafat dekhi he, aaj tujhe apni kamingi dikhaunga, teri chut faad ke bhosda na kar di to mera bhi naam SURAJ nahi
Itna bolne ke saat hi usne ek jhatke me seema ka lower nikal fenka, jiska neeche seema madar jaath nangi thi.
Seema kuch bolne ko hui hi thi, ki suraj ne use jhatke se neeche ghutno ke bal beetha diya, aur ‘gup’ se apna mota bum pilat loda apni nazo palo choti behen ke halak me de diya.
SURAJ
Le raand chus loda, badi garmi chadi he tujhe, aaj sari nikal dunga, PE LODA!
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Suraj ne seema ke baal kaske jakad liye aur laga uski muh thukai karne, ‘guu’ ‘guu’ ‘guu’ ki aawaze kamre me gunj rahi thi, jo loda seema ke halak me jane ki wajah se uthi thi.
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Suraj ne kafi der tak seema ko loda pilaya, jise seema ki halat kharab ho gai, hotho se kone se raal nikal nikal ke zameen par tapak rahi thi.
SURAJ
Apni shirt utar kutti, zaldi kar, nahi to faad dunga, fir nangi jaiyo ghar
Suraj ne gusse me seema se bola, seema ne bhi jhat se t-shirt nikal di, kyuki wo samaj gai thi ki is waqt suraj ke dimag par loda chada hua he, kahi sahi me hi bawla kutta t-shirt faad na de.
T-shirt utarne ke saath hi suraj ne seema ke mote taze mamme misne shuru kar diye.
SURAJ
Chal meri chudo behena, apna farz nibha aur apne bhai ka ab pyaar se chupa maar, zaldi kar.
Suraj ne aadesh dete hue bola, seema ne bhi koi na nukar na ki aur suraj ka mota taza loda thamm se ke ‘gaap’ se muh me bhar liya aur badi ada ke saath, aankho se aankho ko milate hue chupa lagane lagi.
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Suraj ne kuch der apni nazo pali ladli behen ka pyaar bhara chupa enjoy kiya.
SURAJ
Aahhh maza aa gaya, chal ab apne moote mammo ke beech loda rakh kar mamma malish de, shuru hoza chudo beheniyaaaaah
Seema ne is baar bhi koi chu chapat na ki, aur jhat se suraj ka mota loda mammo ke beech rakh kar mamma malish shuru kar di.
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SURAJ
Ahhh ohhhh yasssss, maaaazzzaaa aaaa gaayyaaa, randiii meri aankho me dekhhhhh
Suraj ka aadesh sunte hi seema ne uski aankho me dekhte hue mamma malish dene lagi.
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Suraj aur seema dono is waqt tak jeth ke mahine ki garmi me paseeno se tar batar the, seema ka chera kedi muh thukai aur kardi mamme thukai se laal pad gaya tha, aur uske baal uske chere se chipak rahe the, aesa lag raha tha mano hazaro log uske uper chad gaye ho.
Kuch der aur suraj ne mamma malish ka maza liya, aur fir apne mote lode ko seema se alag kiya aur pas padi khath pe beth gaya.
SURAJ
Idher aa
Suraj ne seema se bola.
Seema jaise uski aur chalne lagi, suraj ne use roka.
SURAJ
Aese nahi, waise aa jaisi tu he KUTIYA ki tarah
Seema ki aankhe suraj ki baat sunte hi fel si gai.
SEEMA
Kya bola!
SURAJ
Suna nahi kutiya ki tarah char pairo pe aa, ZALDI KAR
Suraj ne is bar aadesh aur aavesh me kaha, seema marti kya na karti, hatho pao par kutiya ban gai, aut khath pe bethe suraj ki aur badh chali.
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Suraj ke paas ponchane par suraj ne ek kutiya ki tarah uske baalo par hath fere, seema ko bhi ab is naye khel me maza aane laga tha.
SURAJ
Shabash meri kutti, chal bhonk!
Seema me is baar koi hich kichahat nahi thi.
SEEMA
Bho! Bho! Bho!
Seema ne bhonkna shuru kar diya.
SURAJ
Shabash, chal gotte chat kutiya ki tarah
Seema ne suraj ke mote khath se neeche jhulte hue gotte chatne aur chusne shuru kar diye.
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Kuch der gotte chuswane ke baad suraj ne seema ko apne se alag kiya aur khath se neeche khada ho gaya.
SURAJ
Chal meri kutiya behen, chad ja khath pe, kundli ke mutabik teri chudai ka muhrat ho chala he
Seema bhi ek paltu kutiya ki tarah jhat se khath pe chad gai.
SURAJ
Chal apni tange faila, aur dikha apni moti fuli fuddi.
Seema ne muskurate hue apne tange cheer di aur apni bin balo ki chikni fuddi suraj ke aankho se samne paros di.
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Suraj ne seema ki moti tazi fuli fuddi dekh kar apne bum-pilat lode pe thuk mala, aur seema ki jangho ke beech aa gaya.
Suraj ne apna loda seema ki chut ke muh pe rakh diya.
SURAJ
Tayarr he kutiya?, ho ya na ho aaj to teri fat ke rahegi
Suraj ne seema ko aadesh diya, aur ‘dhap’ ke dhaka de mara, par dono chudai khel me noshikya the, loda fisal ke seema ke pet pe aa gaya. Suraj ne ek aur bar kosis ki par nazteeza sunye raha.
Seema bhi ab iritate ho chali thi, usne suraj ka loda jhat se haath me pakad kar aur chodne wale ched pe rakh diya.
SEEMA
Lund dalna aata nahi, karega meri chudai
Seema ne suraj ka tana mara. Suraj ka chera seema ki fatkar se kathor ho gaya.
SURAJ
Sali kutti tujhe ab bata-ta hu chudai kaise hoti ke.
Suraj ne ek prachand dhaka de mara, kyuki is bar loda sahi nishane par tha to loda chut fadte hue chut ki zad tak ja poncha, aut tatte ‘chat’ se seema ki gaand pe lage.
Pura loda ek bar me hi chut me utarte hi, seema ki aankhe fel gai aur muh khula reh gaya kuch der, kuch pal baad jab use ahsaas hua ki loda kaha he, uski zordar ‘aaaaahhhhhhh’ nikal gai.
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Cheenk itni zabaradast thi ki puri fiza me goonj gai, aur aankho se aansu nikalne lage, par suraj bina koi parwah kiya chodne laga, seema ‘aaahhh’ ‘aahhh’ kar rahi thi, aur suraj ‘dhap’ ‘dhap’ dhapa dhap’ chod raha tha.
Dono bhai beheno ke chere par aur shareer paseene se lap path the, chudai itni bhisam ho rahi thi ki, khath bhi ‘char’ ‘char’ ‘chara char’ karne lagi.
SEEMA
Aaaahhhh bhaaiiii chooooddd deee plzzz bahuttt aaahh dard aahh ho aahh raha aahh he
Par suraj to ekdum janwar ban gaya tha, bina koi rehem kiya apni choti ladli behen ko chode ja raha tha.
SURAJ
Sali nakra karti he, ab aur chudegi
Suraj ne seema ki haath apni gardan me dale, aur use leke khada ho gaya, aur seema ko loda ka jhula jhulane laga.
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Fir kuch der isi position me chodne ke baad usne, seema ko deewar ke sahare ghodi bana diya, aur laga uski chadhai karne.
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Seema bechari ek kutiya ki tarah apne bhai ke chudai khel me sanyog deti rahi, kuch der ghodi chudai ke baad, suraj ne apna loda chut se nikala.
SURAJ
Chal khath pe
Aur uski gaand pe ek thapad jad diya.
Seema hafti hui marni hui kutiya ke jaise khath pe pad gai, uski itni kedi chudai se chudai ka sara bhukhar utar gaya tha.
Suraj ne fir uski tange mod kar apne kandhe pe rakh li, aur rajdhani chala di ‘thap’ ‘thap’ ‘thap’ ‘thapa thap’ ki aawze kamre me goonj gai, aur saath ki seema ki ‘aaahh’’mar gaaii’’oohhh’’nahiii’ ki aawaze bhi saath me thi.
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SEEMA
Aaahhhh bhaiii thoda dhereee
Seema ab chodu se bhai pe aai gai, par bhai kaha rukne wala tha, usne dhake aur tez kar diye.
SURAJ
Koi dhere were nahi, aur fategi chut teriii randiii, le loda, aur le, leti rehhh
Suraj ne chudai aur tez kar di, suraj ne uhi seema ko ult palat ke ded (1:30) ghante choda.
SURAJ
Me aanee wala hu raaanndd, zamin pe beth ke jeebh nikal kutiyaa jaise
Seema jhat se zamin par beth gai aur suraj ne loda uske chere pe jhad diyaaaa.
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To Be Continued...




Super Hot update bhai sema ki ache se baja di suraj ne hahahaUPDATE 17
Recap -
Seema ki baat sunker shriya use marne ke liye uske peeche bhagi, dono behene haste hue kheto me hirni ki tarah uchal kud kar rahi thi.
Ab aage -
EXT. TUBEWELL ROOM - FEW DAYS LATER - AFTERNOON
Suraj room me kafi excitement ke saath idher udher ghum raha tha, jab se kal shaam me seema ne uska haath pakad kar apni chut par rakh kar use chut dene ka bola tha uska loda kabu me nahi tha.
Tabhi dhere se gate par dastak hui, suraj ne peeche mud kar dekha to seema kamini muskan hasti hui ander dakhil hui.
SEEMA
Aur chodu lund kabu me he, ya, pant faad ke bhag gaya hihihi
Seema ne suraj ko chedte hue bola.
Suraj jo kafi der se apne lund ko kisi tarah thame tha, wo turant seema ke paas poncha aur jhat se uski kamar pakad kar uske hotho par kas ke chumban jad diya.
![]()
Seema ko suraj ka ye wild andaj behad bhaya, aur usne bhi uske hotho ki kedi chusai karni chalu ki, kafi der tak dono behen bhai hoth chusai karte rahe.
Suraj fir is dar se, zada der na lagate hue, ki kahi ek bar aur uski kismat me lode na bu jaye, jhat pat apne kapne niklan shuru kar diya.
Seema bhi uski is had badi pe muskura di, 5 second ke ander suraj janm jaath nanga ho gaya. Nanga hote hi usne seema ki aur dekha to use abhi kapde pehne paya.
SURAJ
Chudo rani abhi bhi kapde kyu pehne he, zaldi nikal kahi koi aa naa jaye
Suraj aavesh me aate hue bola, seema bina koi harkat kiye kamini muskan deti hui uski aur dekhti rahi.
SEEMA
Mene irada badal liya, tu kapde pehen le me jati hu
Seema kamini muskan deti hui gate ki aur badh gai. Seema ka yu do tuk jwab suraj muh faade dekhta aur sunta raha.
Jaise hi seema ka haath darwaze ke handel tak poncha, suraj ne use peeche se jakad liya.
SURAJ
Sali randi kutiya, lund me aag laga kar nakre karti he, tune aaj tak meri sharafat dekhi he, aaj tujhe apni kamingi dikhaunga, teri chut faad ke bhosda na kar di to mera bhi naam SURAJ nahi
Itna bolne ke saat hi usne ek jhatke me seema ka lower nikal fenka, jiska neeche seema madar jaath nangi thi.
Seema kuch bolne ko hui hi thi, ki suraj ne use jhatke se neeche ghutno ke bal beetha diya, aur ‘gup’ se apna mota bum pilat loda apni nazo palo choti behen ke halak me de diya.
SURAJ
Le raand chus loda, badi garmi chadi he tujhe, aaj sari nikal dunga, PE LODA!
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Suraj ne seema ke baal kaske jakad liye aur laga uski muh thukai karne, ‘guu’ ‘guu’ ‘guu’ ki aawaze kamre me gunj rahi thi, jo loda seema ke halak me jane ki wajah se uthi thi.
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Suraj ne kafi der tak seema ko loda pilaya, jise seema ki halat kharab ho gai, hotho se kone se raal nikal nikal ke zameen par tapak rahi thi.
SURAJ
Apni shirt utar kutti, zaldi kar, nahi to faad dunga, fir nangi jaiyo ghar
Suraj ne gusse me seema se bola, seema ne bhi jhat se t-shirt nikal di, kyuki wo samaj gai thi ki is waqt suraj ke dimag par loda chada hua he, kahi sahi me hi bawla kutta t-shirt faad na de.
T-shirt utarne ke saath hi suraj ne seema ke mote taze mamme misne shuru kar diye.
SURAJ
Chal meri chudo behena, apna farz nibha aur apne bhai ka ab pyaar se chupa maar, zaldi kar.
Suraj ne aadesh dete hue bola, seema ne bhi koi na nukar na ki aur suraj ka mota taza loda thamm se ke ‘gaap’ se muh me bhar liya aur badi ada ke saath, aankho se aankho ko milate hue chupa lagane lagi.
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Suraj ne kuch der apni nazo pali ladli behen ka pyaar bhara chupa enjoy kiya.
SURAJ
Aahhh maza aa gaya, chal ab apne moote mammo ke beech loda rakh kar mamma malish de, shuru hoza chudo beheniyaaaaah
Seema ne is baar bhi koi chu chapat na ki, aur jhat se suraj ka mota loda mammo ke beech rakh kar mamma malish shuru kar di.
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SURAJ
Ahhh ohhhh yasssss, maaaazzzaaa aaaa gaayyaaa, randiii meri aankho me dekhhhhh
Suraj ka aadesh sunte hi seema ne uski aankho me dekhte hue mamma malish dene lagi.
![]()
Suraj aur seema dono is waqt tak jeth ke mahine ki garmi me paseeno se tar batar the, seema ka chera kedi muh thukai aur kardi mamme thukai se laal pad gaya tha, aur uske baal uske chere se chipak rahe the, aesa lag raha tha mano hazaro log uske uper chad gaye ho.
Kuch der aur suraj ne mamma malish ka maza liya, aur fir apne mote lode ko seema se alag kiya aur pas padi khath pe beth gaya.
SURAJ
Idher aa
Suraj ne seema se bola.
Seema jaise uski aur chalne lagi, suraj ne use roka.
SURAJ
Aese nahi, waise aa jaisi tu he KUTIYA ki tarah
Seema ki aankhe suraj ki baat sunte hi fel si gai.
SEEMA
Kya bola!
SURAJ
Suna nahi kutiya ki tarah char pairo pe aa, ZALDI KAR
Suraj ne is bar aadesh aur aavesh me kaha, seema marti kya na karti, hatho pao par kutiya ban gai, aut khath pe bethe suraj ki aur badh chali.
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Suraj ke paas ponchane par suraj ne ek kutiya ki tarah uske baalo par hath fere, seema ko bhi ab is naye khel me maza aane laga tha.
SURAJ
Shabash meri kutti, chal bhonk!
Seema me is baar koi hich kichahat nahi thi.
SEEMA
Bho! Bho! Bho!
Seema ne bhonkna shuru kar diya.
SURAJ
Shabash, chal gotte chat kutiya ki tarah
Seema ne suraj ke mote khath se neeche jhulte hue gotte chatne aur chusne shuru kar diye.
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Kuch der gotte chuswane ke baad suraj ne seema ko apne se alag kiya aur khath se neeche khada ho gaya.
SURAJ
Chal meri kutiya behen, chad ja khath pe, kundli ke mutabik teri chudai ka muhrat ho chala he
Seema bhi ek paltu kutiya ki tarah jhat se khath pe chad gai.
SURAJ
Chal apni tange faila, aur dikha apni moti fuli fuddi.
Seema ne muskurate hue apne tange cheer di aur apni bin balo ki chikni fuddi suraj ke aankho se samne paros di.
![]()
Suraj ne seema ki moti tazi fuli fuddi dekh kar apne bum-pilat lode pe thuk mala, aur seema ki jangho ke beech aa gaya.
Suraj ne apna loda seema ki chut ke muh pe rakh diya.
SURAJ
Tayarr he kutiya?, ho ya na ho aaj to teri fat ke rahegi
Suraj ne seema ko aadesh diya, aur ‘dhap’ ke dhaka de mara, par dono chudai khel me noshikya the, loda fisal ke seema ke pet pe aa gaya. Suraj ne ek aur bar kosis ki par nazteeza sunye raha.
Seema bhi ab iritate ho chali thi, usne suraj ka loda jhat se haath me pakad kar aur chodne wale ched pe rakh diya.
SEEMA
Lund dalna aata nahi, karega meri chudai
Seema ne suraj ka tana mara. Suraj ka chera seema ki fatkar se kathor ho gaya.
SURAJ
Sali kutti tujhe ab bata-ta hu chudai kaise hoti ke.
Suraj ne ek prachand dhaka de mara, kyuki is bar loda sahi nishane par tha to loda chut fadte hue chut ki zad tak ja poncha, aut tatte ‘chat’ se seema ki gaand pe lage.
Pura loda ek bar me hi chut me utarte hi, seema ki aankhe fel gai aur muh khula reh gaya kuch der, kuch pal baad jab use ahsaas hua ki loda kaha he, uski zordar ‘aaaaahhhhhhh’ nikal gai.
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Cheenk itni zabaradast thi ki puri fiza me goonj gai, aur aankho se aansu nikalne lage, par suraj bina koi parwah kiya chodne laga, seema ‘aaahhh’ ‘aahhh’ kar rahi thi, aur suraj ‘dhap’ ‘dhap’ dhapa dhap’ chod raha tha.
Dono bhai beheno ke chere par aur shareer paseene se lap path the, chudai itni bhisam ho rahi thi ki, khath bhi ‘char’ ‘char’ ‘chara char’ karne lagi.
SEEMA
Aaaahhhh bhaaiiii chooooddd deee plzzz bahuttt aaahh dard aahh ho aahh raha aahh he
Par suraj to ekdum janwar ban gaya tha, bina koi rehem kiya apni choti ladli behen ko chode ja raha tha.
SURAJ
Sali nakra karti he, ab aur chudegi
Suraj ne seema ki haath apni gardan me dale, aur use leke khada ho gaya, aur seema ko loda ka jhula jhulane laga.
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Fir kuch der isi position me chodne ke baad usne, seema ko deewar ke sahare ghodi bana diya, aur laga uski chadhai karne.
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Seema bechari ek kutiya ki tarah apne bhai ke chudai khel me sanyog deti rahi, kuch der ghodi chudai ke baad, suraj ne apna loda chut se nikala.
SURAJ
Chal khath pe
Aur uski gaand pe ek thapad jad diya.
Seema hafti hui marni hui kutiya ke jaise khath pe pad gai, uski itni kedi chudai se chudai ka sara bhukhar utar gaya tha.
Suraj ne fir uski tange mod kar apne kandhe pe rakh li, aur rajdhani chala di ‘thap’ ‘thap’ ‘thap’ ‘thapa thap’ ki aawze kamre me goonj gai, aur saath ki seema ki ‘aaahh’’mar gaaii’’oohhh’’nahiii’ ki aawaze bhi saath me thi.
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SEEMA
Aaahhhh bhaiii thoda dhereee
Seema ab chodu se bhai pe aai gai, par bhai kaha rukne wala tha, usne dhake aur tez kar diye.
SURAJ
Koi dhere were nahi, aur fategi chut teriii randiii, le loda, aur le, leti rehhh
Suraj ne chudai aur tez kar di, suraj ne uhi seema ko ult palat ke ded (1:30) ghante choda.
SURAJ
Me aanee wala hu raaanndd, zamin pe beth ke jeebh nikal kutiyaa jaise
Seema jhat se zamin par beth gai aur suraj ne loda uske chere pe jhad diyaaaa.
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To Be Continued...