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Bahut bahut shukriya Golu bhai iss anmol prati kriya ke liye.
Aap jaise behtareen writer ki tippani nishchit hi mere liye kisi sanjivani buti se kam nahi hai jo mere hausle ko mag darshan pradan karti hai.

Sheetal ye janti hai ki vo khud hi sadhana hai, rashmi bhi ye janti hai lekin thakurain abhi ye baat nahi janti, thakurain ki nazar me aur baki sab ki nazar me vo sheetal hi hai, isliye iss mouke par vo ye baat nahi kholna chahti kyon ki baato ka rukh dusri taraf hai.

Dusra reason ye bhi hai ki uske papa aur palak pita dono me ye sahmati bani thi ki ye raaz hamesha raaz hi rahega...ye raaz khulte hi baki gade murde bhi ukhad jayenge aur kahani ka rukh badal jayega jo shayad yaha par theek nahi hoga...khair thakurain ko pata chalega agle ek do update me.

Third reason ye bhi hai ki abhi ye confirm nahi hai ki koun sheetal hai aur koun sadhana...mera matlab naam se hai...? ye bhi ek suspense hai.

Aapne jo sawal kiya hai usme bura lagne wali koi baat nahi hai bhai.
Kahani se sambandhit kisi bhi sawal ko puchne ka readers ko swantra adhikar hai aur unke sawalo ka jawab dena writer ka farz.
Sex virus aur poison ka jikra to kahani me kayi baar aaya hai jo hero ki body me inject kiya gaya hai...lekin unka logically ya ilogically vishlesan abhi tak nahi hua hai kahi bhi kahani me.

Poison ki ghatna science ke nazariye se logical hai ya nahi, ye to main nahi janta kintu ye satya ghatna par adharit hai.
Kyon ki ye ghatna meri real elder sister ke sath ghatit ho chuki hai...pahle pain killer ke roop me anandkar naam ki tablet hua karti thi, shayad ab bhi hoti hogi...jab vo bahut choti thi (8-10 yrs) tab use sir dard hua to unhone vo anandkar ki pain killer kha liya jo ki expired date ki thi, uss tablet ne unko reaction kar diya..jisse unko ultiya hone lagi..bar bar behosh ho jati....jab unhe doctor ke paas le jaya gaya aur usne unse pucha ki kya khaya tha tha...? to unhone jawab me itna hi kaha behosh hone se pahle ki'goli'....doctor ne samjha ki chuha maarne wali goli jo aati hai sulphaas ki..unhone vo goli khayi hai..ye soch kar usne turant hi unko poison ka heavy dose injection de diya jisse unki tabiyat bahut jyada bigad gayi...unki tabiyat achanak gambhir hote dekh kar sab bhadak gaye aur ghar walo ne doctor ko kutte ki tarah peeta...unko badi city me turant refer kiya gaya...poore 6 mahine tak vo behosh rahi..uske baad jab hosh aaya to vah kisi ko pahchanti hi nahi thi..lagbhag paglo jaisi unki halat ho gayi thi...poore 5 saal tak vo hospital me admit rahi...jab vo sab ko pahchante lagi, tabiyat kuch normal ho gayi tab unhe discharge kiya gaya...lekin aaj bhi unki body se poison ka asar khatam nahi hua hai...every month uss poison ka jhatka unko aata hi rahta hai. unki body me aaj bhi uss poison ka effect moujud hai..doctor bhi ghutne tek chuke hain..lekin ab mahine me ek do bar hi jhatka aata hai.. pahle se bahut normal hain vo.

Bas issi real ghatna ko maine apni kahani me jagah di hai..jaha tak sex virus ki baat hai to abhi vo kalpanik hi hai..aage dekhta hu ki usko kitna logical sabit kar sakta hu warna kalpanik to rahega hi..

Aapka last point behad sateek hai jaha aapne bahut sahi question kiya hai lekin uska jawab aage aane wale updates me hi dunga..abhi dene se suspense samay se pahle khul jayega aur har cheez apne nirdharit samay par hi achchi lagti hai.
आपकी फेमिली के बारे में सुनकर बहुत ही दुःख हुआ आनन्द भाई । मैं दुआ करुंगा उपर वाले से उसके रोग को जल्द से ठीक करे । ?
 
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Nhi bhai....main aapki is baat se agree nhi karta ki sirf acche writter hi novel likhte hai....

wo professional tabhi kahlate hai jab unka novel market me aaye...uske pahle tak wo sirf writter hi hote hai...bilkul aapki tarah.....

Dekho bhai...ise chane ke jaad par chadana mat bolna....but main ye bolna chahta hu ki aapka mind suspence me kafi accha hai...to ek baar full thriller likhe (no sex) aur use logo ke beech rakhe...saayad fir aapko meri baat sahi lage ki aap bhi professional ho sakte hai....

yahi baat maine ankit bhai ko bhi boli thi....kyoki aap dono me thrill create karne ka sense bahut accha hai....agar aap log chahe to try maar sakte hai.....

Aur haa...yaha likhne me bhi ek professional writter se kam mehnat nhi lagti...usse jyada hi lagti hai....right....

Aur aapki jaankari ke liye bata du ki ankit bhai ki story almost end ki taraf aa gai hai....2 month se new updates hi aa rahe...ok

And last thing......next update ka intzaar rahega....dekhe to ki aap raj ko kaise bachate ho...aur fir us saadhna ka haal bhi dekhns hai....

keep going......
Ankit bhai ki kaun si story running me hai.
 

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KALA KAMRA

Vahi dusri taarf jab mujhe hosh aaya to khud ko kisi aalishan haweli ke makhmali bistar par paya...mujhe hosh me aaya dekh kar vaha teen chaar log turant ekatthe ho gaye jinme teen admi aur ek ladki thi...doctor mujhse mera naam puch raha tha lekin meri kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha, bas sir me tez dard mahsoos ho raha tha aur main jor se cheekh kar phir behosh ho gaya.

Ab aage.....

Raj (dimag par jor dete huye)—mera naam...mera naam...mera naam kya hai... ? kya hai mera naam.... ? aaaaaaaa

Admi—ye to phir se behosh ho gaya... ?

Doctor—maine iske chot ki dressing to kar di hai lekin jaisa ki aapne kaha tha ki main iska koi ilaz na karu to maine dressing ke alawa baki kuch nahi kiya hai…ek baat aur main kahna chahta hu sir..

Admi—kya doctor…?

Doctor— sir, iski condition dekh kar aisa lagta hai jaisi ki iske sir me lagi chot ke sath sath dil aur dimag par koi gahra sadma laga hai..jiski vajah se ye apni yaad dast kho baitha hai.

Admi—hmmm..aur yaad dast vapis aane ke kya chances hain…?

Doctor—kuch kah nahi sakte..

Admi—ok doctor..aur haan, iske baare me kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye doctor..warna tum achchi tarah se jante ho ki main kitna bada paidaaishi kamina admi hu…?

Doctor (darte huye)—aap chinta bilkul na kare sir, meri juban kat jayegi magar khulegi nahi..

Admi—good, yahi achcha bhi hai tumhare liye…ab jao, daily aa kar isko dressing kar dena ..aur haan, jane se pahle apni fees le lo…(hath se ishara karte huye)..uss samne wala bag paiso se bhara hua hai..usme hath daal kar jitna nikaal sakte ho, nikaal lo..jitna tumne nikal liya, vahi tumhari fees hogi..

Doctor (khush ho kar)—thank you sir,…(bag me hath dalte hi)..aaaaaaaaaa……aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Doctor ne darte darte namaste kiya aur vaha se apni fees le kar jaldi khisakne me hi apni bhalayi samjhi…isliye usne jaldi se samne rakhe bag ki chain khol kar paise nikalne ke liye jaise hi hath andar dala vaise hi vaha uski dard bhari cheekh goonj uthi….aur phir agle hi pal vo bejaan ho kar dhadam se niche gir paga aur kuch der tak tadapne ke baad shant ho gaya.

Doctor ke marte hi vo admi khushi se haste huye uss bag tak gaya aur usme hath daal kar kuch bahar khich liya..lekin ye kya….? Uske hath me to ek bhayank kala jahareela naag tha jise usne uss bag me band kar ke rakha tha.

Admi—hahahahahaha….shukriya naag raaj..tumne akhir doctor ko uski fees de hi di…hahahahaha…main aur tum to pakke dost hain….jis tarah tum jahreele naag ho vaise hi main bhi ek jahareela naag hu..akhir dost hi dost ke kaam aata hai… Bhains poonch uthayegi to gaana nahi gayegi….hahahahahaha

Vo admi khushi se mushkuraye ja raha tha, phir usne uss kaale naag ko bag me phir se band kar diya…uss admi ke sath jo ladka aur ek ladki khade the, unhe ye sab bilkul bhi pasand nahi aa raha tha, dono andar hi andat jal kar raakh huye ja rahe the.. doctor ke jate hi unhe bolne ka mouka mil gaya.

Ladki —dad, aap isko le kar yaha kyo aa gaye…? Itna achcha mouka tha, mar jane diya hota sale ko.. hamare raste ka sabse bada kaanta nikal jata jiske liye aap aaj tak koshish kar rahe the raste se hatane ki..aur jab kismat hamare sath thi tab aap use bacha kar yaha le aaye..why dad..why…?

Ladki (narazagi dikhate huye)—haan dad, main bhi aapse bahut naraz hu…akhir kya jarurat thi iss harami ko bachane ki..? yahi vo kamina hai jisne gaon me mere sath badatmizi ki thi jab main mousi se milne gayi thi…ye sala marne ke hi kabil tha..

Admi—tumhe kya lagta hai ki maine ise yu hi marne se bachaya hai…? Nahi, tumhare baap ne koi kachchi gotiya nahi kheli hain...jab iske jaise hazar harami mare honge tab tumhara ye baap paida hua tha...ye mat bhulo ki mera naam bhi abhay hai...
Bhains Poonchh Uthayegi To Gaana Nahi Gayegi.

Ji haan, ye admi aur koi nahi balki abhay hai aur uske sath iss samay baat karne vale dono shakhs uska beta suraj aur uski badi beti tanu hai jo ki apne baap ke faisle se nakhush dikhayi de rahe hain.

Suraj—lekin phir bhi dad isko bachane ki kya jarurat thi...jab hamara manchaha kaam banta dikh raha tha to... ?

Tanu—haan dad, mujhe bhi jaanna hai ki aapne iss harami ke pille ko kyo bachaya..aur koun hai ye.... ?

Abhay—tanu beta, ye apne aap ko tumhare bade papa vivek ka ladka raj kahta hai sabse jabki vo mar chuka hai....aur maine kaha na ki maine bina matlab use nahi bachaya...ye mat bhulo ki maine court me case file kiya hai iske khilaf.. agar court ka case final hone se pahle ye mar jata to iska sara ilzam mere upar aa jata..media wale aur iske ghar wale kahne lagte ki maine marwa diya aur mera bana banaya plan mitti me mil jata..phir ye sari property govt. Apne kabze me le leti ya phir uski bahan sheetal ke naam transfer ho jati jo main bilkul nahi chahta tha., case ka faisla hone tak iska jinda rahna mere liye behad jaruri hai.

Tanu (shocked)—kyaaa..ye bade papa ka ladka hai….?

Abhay—hai nahi, lekin khud ko kahta jarur hai.

Suraj—lekin dad, jab raj already mar chuka hai to iske jinda rahne ya marne se hame bhala kya fark pad sakta hai….?

Abhay—fark padta hai, bahut bada fark padta hai….kyon ki court me case maine iske khilaf daayar kiya hai ki ye raj nahi balki uska koi hum shakal hai jo property ke lalach me raj ban kar sab ko dhokha de raha hai…agar ye mar gaya to ye baar sabit kaise karoge ki ye asli hai ya naqli…? Uss condition me to sab ise asli hi samjhenge aur iski hatya ka jurm mere upar aa jayega.

Tanu—lekin iski to yaad dast ja chuki hai, aise me case iske upar kaise chalega…?

Abhay—yaad dast chali gayi to kya hua..ye to sabit ho hi jayega ki ye naqli hai aur asli raj mar chuka hai..bas ise theek hone tak saza nahi hogi..isko bachane ka dusra karan bhi hai..

Suraj—vo kya…?

Abhay—kisi bhi tarah iski yaad dast hame vapis lani hogi, iske jariye hum vasiyat ka raaz jaan sakte hain aur hame ye bhi pata chal jayega ki asli vasiyat hai kaha….? Isliye jab tak hamara kaam poora nahi hota tum dono ko iska vishesh dhyan rakhna hoga..kaise bhi kar ke iski yaad dast laane ki koshish karo aur haan, tab tak ye yaha se kahi jane na paye..

Suraj—dad, ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki ye yaad dast jane ka natak kar raha ho….?

Abhay—to ise kisi bhi tarah apne vash me kar ke ugalwane ki koshish karo..magar case final hone tak ise kuch hona nahi chahiye…ye jo mangta hai ise do..jo karta hai karne do..bas isko apni nigaho se door mat hone dena..kyon ki jo raaz main iske jariye janna chahta hu vahi black star bhi chahta hai..to ho sakta hai ki vo pata chalte hi kuch gadbad na kar de isliye iss baat ka dhyan rakhna.

Suraj—iska matlab ki black star ki nazar me ye mar chuka hai….?

Abhay—haan, vo to achcha hua ki mere admi iska saaye ki tarah picha kar rahe the…sadhana ne to isko maar hi diya tha, ye bas behosh ho kar khayi me girne hi wala tha ki tab tak mere admi vaha pahuch gaye aur ise bahar nikaal laaye.. ye bhi theek hi hua ki uss samay tak vo ladki vaha se ja chuki thi…ab iske jariye main asani se vasiyat ke uss raaz tak pahuch sakta hu jo kayi saalo se itihaas ke kisi kone me dafan hai…kaam hote hi samjho ki ye khatam.

Abhi vo baate kar hi rahe the ki Tabhi unka dhyan meri taarf gaya kyon ki mere jism me phir se hulchul hone lagi thi aur kuch hi der me mujhe phir hosh aa gaya.

Abhay—ab kaisi tabiyat hai tumhari beta….?

Raj (hairan)—tum log koun ho... ? hum kaha hu... ? ye koun si jagah hai…? Kya tum log mujhe jante ho... ? agar jante ho to batao na ki Mera naam kya hai... ? kya hai mera naam... ? aaaaaa..mujhe kuch yaad kyo nahi aa raha..aaaa... ?

Abhay—apne dimag par jor mat do...tumhara naam raj hai..aur main tumhara chacha abhay hu..ye tumhara bada bhai suraj aur ye tumhari badi bahan tanu hai..tum apne hi ghar me ho beta...

Raj—kya tum sach bol rahe ho... ? phir aur koun koun hai mere ghar me…?

Abhay—beta, tumhare mummy papa bachpan me hi mar gaye the, tab se tum hamare hi paas ho…yaha hum teeno ke alawa tumhari chachi kalyani aur ek aur badi bahan rekha rahti hai…tumhara accident ho gaya tha..isliye tum hame pahchan nahi pa rahe ho..dhire dhire sab yaad aa jayega..abhi araam karo..

Raj—aap meri didi ho…?

Tanu (muh bana kar)—haan, main tumhari tanu didi hu..

Raj (hath pakad kar)—sach me aap kitni achchi ho didi…mujhe akele darr lagta hai didi..aap mujhe chhod kar mat jana..

Abhay—koi tumhe chhod kar kahi nahi jayega..ab tum araam karo..tanu, mujhe thoda bahar jana hai, tum dono iska dhyan rakhna..aur haan akele mat chhodna..Bhains poonch uthayegi to gaana nahi gaayegi.

Suraj—dad, mujhe bhi apne friends ke paas jana hai party me...tanu rahegi iske paas..

Tanu—main hi kyu... ? mujhe bhi kaam hai apni friends se milne jana hai..

Abhay—maine ek bar jo bol diya so bol diya, under stand...

Tanu (mann me)—iss kamine ko to aisa sabak sikhaungi ki hamesha yaad rakhega ki isne badatmizi karne ki himmat kiske sath ki thi..sala harami…

Suraj—tanu main bhi ja raha hu..iska dhyan rakhna..

Uske baad abhay aur uske piche piche suraj bhi vaha se chale gaye...uss aalishan kamre me main aur tanu hi bache the.. unke jate hi vo bhi vaha se uth kar jane lagi.

Raj—didi, aap mujhe chhod kar kaha ja rahi ho... ?

Tanu (jor se)—jahannum me...tujhe bhi pahucha du kya... ?

Raj—ye jahannum kya aur kaisa hota hai didi... ?

Tanu (chillate huye)—mera dimag mat kha..chupchap pada rah samjah, sala harami...(mann me)..dad ne mujhe kaha phasa diya... ?

Uske aise chillane se main chup ho gaya..tanu dusre room me ja kar kisi se phone par baat karne lagi..uske baat karne ke andaz se lag raha tha jaise ki vo apne boy friend se baate kar rahi ho...mujhe bade jor se peshab lagi thi lekin jab lagbhag ek ghante tak tanu bahar nahi aayi to main jis room me vo gayi thi, main bhi usme ghus gaya.

Samne laptop par vo koi english movie dekh rahi thi jisme ek ladka aur ladki ek dusre ke hotho ko khaye ja rahe the lipat kar...Mujhe ye dekh kar hairani huyi ki ye sab kya hai... ??

Raj (hairan)—didi, ye dono kya kar rahe hain... ? ek dusre ka muh kyo kha rahe hain ye.... ?

Tanu (chounk kar gusse me)—tu yaha kya kar raha hai... ? tu aaya kaise mere room me... ? chal bahar nikal yaha se... ? aur dubara kabhi mere room me aana mat..

Raj (sir jhuka ke)—vo didi, mujhe bahut jor se susu lagi hai...aap batao na ki susu kaha karu main... ?

Tanu (chillate huye)—yaha mere sir me kar de...

Raj—achcha theek hai, bas yahi to puch raha tha..

Tanu ki baat sun kar main pant ki chain kholte huye uski taraf badhne laga, mujhe apni taraf aate dekh kar vo chounk kar aur jyada bhadak gayi..

Tanu (jor se)—kamine idhar kaha aa raha ahi.. ? sach me mere sir me hi mootega kya... ?

Raj—mujhe kyo daant rahi ho didi jabki aapne hi to kaha tha ki aap ke sir me susu kar lu…

Tanu (shocked)—kyaaaa…? Chal bhag yaha se ..sala ahrami..sach me kamina mere upar hi mootne chala aa raha hai.. ohh god, dad ne ye namuna kaha se pakad liya…? Abe bewaqoof, vaha bathroom me ja kar moot le…kamine ko ye bhi yaad nahi hai ki kaha mootna chahiye…?

Raj—ye bathroom kya hota hai…? Jaldi batao na didi, nahi to yahi mera susu nikal jayega..

Tanu (hadbadate huye jor se)—arrey nahi nahi, ruk ruk..yaha nahi..yaha nahi...vo raha bathroom..chal idhar aa..yaha kar le..aur baad me ye wala pani daal dena uss par...chal jaldi ja..hey bhagwan, kaha phans gayi..kaise kaise log hain duniya me... ?

Tanu ne bhag kar jaldi se apne bathroom ka darwaja khol kar mujhe ishara kiya..main jaldi se vaha ja kar mootne laga..tab ja kar kuch araam mila...pani dalne ke baad main bathroom se bahar aa gaya.

Tanu—ab chal ja yaha se..

Raj—didi batao na vo dono ek dusre ka muh kyo kha rahe the... ?

Tanu (ankh dikhate huye)—tujhe kya karna hai jaan kar..? chal ab ja yaha se..

Raj—vo mujhe bhi vaise hi karne ka mann ho raha hai didi...hum dono bhi ek bar vaisa hi kare didi... ?

Tanu (shocked)—kyaaa kahaaa... ? chal nikal mere room se bahar harami…aur dubara kabhi mere kamre me aana mat…
“Hoti Nahi Hai Abhi Lulli Khadi, Aur Baate Karta Hai Badi Badi.”

Tanu jaise hi mujhe maarne ke liye uthi to main jaldi se uske room se bahar bhaga, jaise hi bahar nikla vaise hi kisi se takra gaya jor se..

Vahi dusri taraf……

Sadhana—chacha, suna hai ki check point ke aage kuch rahasyamayi cheeze bhi hain... ?

Buddha—ye sab bakwas hai...uss paar kewal kabile wale aur jungli janwar rahte hain…maine khud ek do bar kabile walo ko dekha hai..vo khud kisi bhoot pret se kam hain kya…? Uss paar jane wala aaj tak jinda lout kar nahi aaya...jab police bhi kisi gayab huye admi ko talash karte huye pati hai ki vo uss paar gaya hai to turant apni investigation band kar deti hai.

Sadhana (shocked)—kyaaaa.... ?

Uss admi ne aise kaha jaise ki use sari sachchayi pata ho…sadhana ne usse ek do sawal aur puche jinka jawab shayad use pahle se hi pata tha..uske baad dono car se hi dhire dhire aage badhne lage.

Thodi door chalne ke baad hi fencing dikhayi padne lagi…vo ek tarah se iss raste ka dead end tha…sadhana ne kuch doori par hi car rok di…raste me unhe do jagah pedo ki aad me do premi yugal jode bhi dikh gaye the, agar vo thoda aur dhyan dete to unhe kuch bhi jode dikh sakte the.

Deepak—(car se utarte huye)..ab…?

Sadhana—main fencing ke uss paar jaungi aur jitna door tak dekh sakti hu, dekhne ki koshish karungi..tum ej ghante tak mera yahi intazar karna..

Deepak—areey, main bhi chalunga..ek ghante me to main yaha pagal ho jaunga..

Sadhana—pagal mat bano..

Deepak—arrey yaar, main kam se kam iss fencing ko to paar kar hi lunga..college me sports champion rah chuka hu..

Sadhana apne jute utar kar fencing par chadhne lagi..vah pair ke anguthe aur hath ki ungliyo ki madad se upar chadh rahi thi…vo jaan bujh kar poori hatheli aur pairo ki madad nahi le rahi thi warna fence me lage kaante dhans sakte the…lekin ungliyo ko vah badi savdhani se kaanto ke beech rakh kar aage badh rahi thi…issi karan usne jute bhi nikaal diye the.

Deepak bhi vaise hi chadhne laga..uss paar pahuchne tak uski ungliya chhil gayi thi..unhone fence ke niche se apne jite khiche aur unhe pahan kar aage badhne lage.

Dono abhi kuch door hi gaye the ki unhe ek dus metr choudi nahar dikhayi di..dekhne se ye ek prakratik nahar lag rahi thi.. jo kisi nadi ki dhara bhatakne se ban gayi lagti thi.

Dekhne se nahat ki gahrayi ka andaza lagana mushkil tha…par unn dono ki samasya ka hal vaha pahle se hi moujud tha.. ek choude ped ke tane ko nahar ke dono taraf se tikaya gaya tha..jahir tha ki koi use aane jane ke liye istemal karta hoga. Sadhana ne hath se tatol kar uss tane ko dekha to ye andaza ho gaya ki tana khokhla nahi tha aur kam se kam ek admi ka bojh to vah araam se utha sakta tha.

Sadhana—bari bari se uss paar jayenge..

Deepak—theek hai..

Sadhana dhire dhire uss tane ke sahare aage badhne lagi..usne apna santulan banaye rakhne ke liye dono hath phaila rakhe the..kuch hi der me dono sahi salamat uss paar pahuch gaye lekin abhi unki samasyayo ka ant nahi hua tha.

Lagbhag sau kadam aage badhne par achanak hi unke samne teen kabile wale aa gaye...unka aana itna apratyashit aur achanak tha ki unko dekhte hi dono chounk kar rah gaye...unhe apni saans rukti huyi mahsoos huyi.

Teeno kabile walo ke hatho me tedhe medhe bhaale the jinka agla bhag nukile pattharo se bana hua tha…unhone ajibo garib kapde apni kamar se upar aur kamar se niche lapet rakhe the...unke vastra kis cheez se bane the ..ye batana namumkin lag raha tha...teeno ka rang koyle ki tarah ekdam kala aur sir par ek bhi baal nahi the..hatho me lakdi ke kade pahne huye the teeno hi.

Unhe dekhte hi sadhana aur deepak thithak kar ruk gaye....par unki ummido ke ulat unhone dono ke khilaf koi aakramak tevar nahi dikhaye…teeno ajib si bhasa me kuch bol rahe the...aur bhaalo se unhe vapis jane ka ishara karne lage.

Unka ishara samajh kar dono ne vapis jana hi uchit samjha..unhe vapis jate dekh teeno kabile walo ne kuch aur nahi kaha, bas unhe vapis jate huye dekhne lage.

Deepak—kya hum issiliye yaha aaye the... ?

Sadhana—jaldbazi me koi kaam safal nahi hota..baad me hum poori taiyari ke sath dubara ayenge….abhi ke liye hame itna to pata chal gaya ki kabile wale itne khatarnak nahi hain jitna ki vo buddha bata raha tha…agar hum jabardasti aage jane ki koshish karte to shayad vo aakramak bhi ho sakte the.

Iss baar deepak ne sabse pahle uss tane par chadh kar nahar ke dusri taraf pahuch gaya..uske uss paar pahuchte hi sadhana ne bhi uss tane ke sahare nahar paar karna shuru kar diya…abhi usne aadha rasta hi paar kiya tha ki tabhi uske kaano me ek awaz takrayi..


“Chal Chal Chal Chal..Chal Mere Yaar..Chal Mere Yaar,

Aa Ja Le Chalu Main Tujhe Nadiya Ke paar

Nadiya Ke Paar Basa Ek Sansar, Ek Sansar

Jaha Dono Karenge Dil Khol Kar Pyar…..”

Awaz dhimi thi par darr ke karan sadhana ki reedh ki haddi me sihran daud gayi…uske dil ki dhadkan asamanya roop se tez ho gayi…use apni saanse phulti huyi mahsoos hone lagi..jisse uska santulan bigad gaya aur vo sidha nahar me ja giri.

Aadhe se kam doori usne tair kar paar ki aur tairte huye jaldi hi kinare par pahuch gayi…uske andar khade hone ki taqat nahi thi, uske pair abhi bhi kaamp rahe the..vo vahi kinare par baith gayi.

Deepak bhi bhag kar uske paas aa gaya…sab kuch itna apratyashit tha ki use samajh hi nahi aaya ki vo kya kare…? Pani me girne ke karan sadhana poori tarah se bheeg gayi thi…uske kapde uske badan se chipak gaye the…jiske karan uske hasin badan ke saare ubhaar spast roop se dikhayi pad rahe the.

Deepak ne jaise hi sadhana ki taraf dekha to uska madak aur khubsurat jism dekhte hi uski ankho me jaise ek chamak si aa gayi aur vah sadhana ke jism ke har ek ubhaar ko bade dhyan aur lalchayi nazro se dekhne laga.

Sadhana ne jaise hi deepak ko apni taraf aise ghurte huye dekha to uska dimag kharab hone laga…kuch der tak deepak use aise hi ghurta raha..phir sadhana ke chillane par uski tandra bhang huyi.

Deepak (hadbada kar)—kkk..kya hua tha…?

Sadhana—tumne kuch suna tha…? Kisi gaane ki awaz…?

Deepak—nahi to, kyo…? Aur tum gir kaise gayi…?

Sadhana—vo..kuch nahi, bas pair fisal gaya tha….chalo vapis chalte hain..

Uske baad dono vapis hotel lout aaye…dinner karne ke baad sadhana bistar par let gayi..lekin neend uski ankho se koso door thi..rah rah ka use vahi gaane ke shabd kaano me goonj rahe the…phir use apni ankho ke samne deepak ka chehra dikhayi dene laga…deepak ka chehra dikhte hi use apne badan par uski nazro ki chubhan mahsoos hone lagi.

Agle din subah uth kar nasta karne ke baad dono phir se apni manzil ki taraf nikal pade…raste me deepak ne kayi bar sadhana se baat karni chahi lekin sadhana ne uski baato ka koi jawab nahi diya..raste me unhe vo dukan bhi dikhayi di, jaha vo kal ruke the..lekin aaj vaha rukne ki unhe koi jarurat nahi thi…nalda check point se kuch pahle hi sadhana ne car rok di.

Deepak—aaj phir kal ki tarah hi chadhna hoga..

Sadhana—aaj hum yaha se aage nahi jayenge…ye iss road ka dead end hai...isliye yaha jyada bheed rahti hai…pahle hum yaha se kuch door left ya right ja kar fencing cross karenge..

Sadhana ne ye kahte huye car se apna bag nikal kar apni pith me baandh liya…aur left side aage badhne lagi..deepak bhi apna bag le kar uske piche chalne laga.

Lagbhag ek km chalne ke baad sadhana kal ki hi tarah upar chadhne ke liye jute utarne lagi…kuch der deepak shant raha lekin jyada der tak nahi..usne sadhana ke bag me rakhi bottle nikalne ke liye hath aage badhaya to sadhana jhunjhla gayi..

Sadhana—kyaa hai…?

Deepak—pani pina hai isliye bottle nikal raha tha..

Sadhana—maine yaha nikalne se pahle tumse kaha tha na ki pani rakh lena…?

Deepak—rakha hai na..lekin vo bag se nikalna padega..tumhara bottle bahar se dikh raha hai..bas do ghoont hi to pina hai..

Sadhana—theek hai thoda sa pina..phir pata nahi ki yaha saaf pani kaha milega ya nahi milega…?

Deepak ke hath me bottle aa chuki thi isliye sadhana se mana karte nahi bana..vo phir se jute kholne me lag gayi ki tabhi deepak ki awaz se uska dhyan bhang ho gaya..

Deepak—aaaaaa

Sadhana—kya hua..chilla kyo rahe ho….?

Uske aise chillane se sadhana ne piche mud kar dekha to uski bottle niche jamin par padi huyi thi aur uska sara pani gir gaya tha, ye dekh kar vo phir se jhunjhla uthi..deepak ko sath laane ke faisle par sadhana ko gussa aa raha tha.

Sadhana—ye kya kiya tumne…?

Deepak—ohh..sorry, mere pairo me kuch tha..

Sadhana—bewaqoof ho kya…? Yaha jhadiya hain to koi chota mota kida raha hoga…sara pani gira diya..

Deepak—sorry, yaar..ye lo tum meri bottle rakh lo..

Deepak ne apni bottle sadhana ke bag me vahi par rakh di jaha se usne nikali thi…sadhana ne apni bottle utha kar deepak ko pakda diya..

Sadhana—ye apne paas rakho, jaha bhi nadi, nala mile, pani bhar lena..

Sadhana upar chadhne lagi, kal ki hi tarah..kuch hi der me dono chadhte huye fencing ke uss paar pahuch gaye…aaj sadhana thoda choukanni ho kar aage badh rahi thi…kuch doori chalne par vo ussi nahar ke dusre hisse par pahuch gaye jise unhone kal paar kiya tha.

Yaha nahar me pani kam tha aur saaf tha..ghutno tak moujud pani ko asani se paar kiya ja sakta tha, jise dono ne bina ruke asani se paar bhi kar liya..nahar ke thodi door aage se ghane pedo ki shrinkhla shuru hoti thi…

Abhi vo pahle ped ke aage se gujre hi the ki ek sansanata hua teer unke pairo ke aage aa gira…ye dekh dono turant ek ped ke piche chhip gaye…deepak ne ishare se pucha ki kya hua to sadhana ne use chup rahne ka ishara kiya.

Usne ped ki aad se dekha to use ek kabile wala dikhayi diya jiske ek hath me ek mara hua janwar tha to dusre hath me baans ka bana hua dhanus…ye bhi ussi kabile se tha jiske teen sadasyo se uski mulaqat kal ho chuki thi…sadhana ke dekhte dekhte usne mare huye janwar ko jamin par rakha aur dono hatho se majbuti se dhanus pakad liya.

Phir dabe kadmo se vo unki taraf badhne laga…sadhana ko yakin tha ki iss bar uska nishana nahi chukne wala…vo usse shanti se nipatne ka tarika sochne lagi.

Dhanus par baan chadhaye vo kafi nazdik aa gaya tha…ye dekh kar sadhana ne ek chota sa patthar utha kar dusri disha me phenk diya...uss adiwasi ne ussi taraf teer chala diya…iss bar bhi baan khali gaya..isse pahle ki vo apne tute phute tarkash se dusra teer nikalta, sadhana uss par jhapat padi…usne sadhana ko dhakka de diya jiske karan sadhana aur uska dhanus dono niche gir gaye.

Ab deepak bhi ped ke piche se nikal kar uski taraf jhapta…iss baar vo aadiwasi savdhan tha…usne apne sir se deepak ke sir par takkar mari jisse deepak ka dimag chakra gaya…use sab kuch ghumta hua sa mahsoos hua.

Idhar piche se sadhana bhi uss aadiwasi par jhapat padi...usne niche girte hi uske dhanus ko tod diya tha...taaki mouka milne par bhi vo uska dubara istemal na kar paye…usne aadiwasi ke dono hath piche se pakad kar uske ghutno par jor se kick lagayi jisse vo ghutno par baithne ko majbur ho gaya…phir usne pith par ek laat maar ke use pet ke bal jamin par gira diya.

Sadhana ne ishara kiya to deepak ne uske dono pair pakad liye…ab vo poori tarah se kabu me tha…sadhana ne ek sateek vaar uski gardan ke piche kiya jisse vo behoshi ki duniya me pahuch gaya.

Sadhana use chhod kar vahi jamin par baith kar sustane gayi…aur apni bottle nikal kar pani pine lagi…deepak bhi baith gaya..uska sir abhi tak chakra raha tha.

Uske baad sadhana ne apne bag se nylon ki rassi nikali aur uss aadiwasi ke hath, pair aur muh baandh kar ek ped ke piche chhupa diya…

Aur phir ek ped ki aad me baith kar sustane lagi…use apne jism me kamjori ka anubhav ho raha tha…aaj pahli baar use achanak itni kamjori mahsoos ho rahi thi..Usne deepak ki taraf dekha jo use hi ghurne me laga hua tha..ye dekh kar use bahut jyada gussa aaya..

Sadhana (gusse me)—kyaa hai…? Main kal se dekh rahi hu ki tum mujhe ghur e ja rahe ho... ? kabhi koi ladki nahi dekhi kya... ?

Deepak—mujhe lagta hai ki main tumhe pyar karne laga hu..

Sadhana (gusse me)—shut up..badatmizi ki bhi ek hadh hoti hai..

Sadhana ne vahi deepak ki di huyi bottle nikal kar phir pani piya...Achanak sadhana ka dimag chakrane laga..use laga ki uske pairo me ab bilkul jaan nahi hai...sab kuch dhundhla dhundhla dikhayi dene laga...aur phir dhamm se gir kar vo behosh gayi.

Idhar chodu gang rajasthan pahuch gayi thi...lekin pahuchte pahuchte unhe raat ho chuki thi...to sab jaipur pahuch kar ek hotel me ruk gaye...vaha pahuch kar sabse pahle jitu ne rashmi se baat ki..rashmi ne raj aur sheetal ke gayab hone ki baat bata di..sath me ye bhi ki sadhana unki talash me gayi hai..

Siraj—hum apne mission ki shuruwat kaha se kare kuch samajh nahi aa raha... ?

Sorbobhuk—, mere dimag me ek idea aaya hai..

Jitu—kya…?

Sorbobhuk—kyo na hum raj ke mobile number ki last active location pata kare…? Usse hame ye to pata chal hi jayega ki uska number koun si jagah tak active tha…? Hum apni talash bhi vahi se start karenge..baat hone ke baad sabhi pine me baith gaye..

Firefox—lekin rashmi didi ne bataya ki sadhana bhabhi ke anusar raj unko ghar chhod kar dgp sir sr milne gaya tha jabki dgp sir ka kahna hai ki raj meeting me aaya hi nahi…sab kuch gadbad lag raha hai..

Amtul—mere khyal se hame starting point se hi talash start karni chahiye..sorbobhuk ka kahna sahi hai..pahle hum raj ki last location pata karte hain, phir vahi se talash bhi karenge..

Siraj—main abhi control room me phone kar ke pata karta hu..

MNSHKMR--ye sahi rahega..

Uske baad siraj ne control me phone kar ke apna introduction dene ke baad raj ke number ki last location batane ko kaha aur sab pine me bhid gaye..thodi der baad control room se phone aa gaya to vah baat karne laga.

Iron man—kya hua..kuch pata chala…?

Siraj—haan, raj ki last location arawali ki pahadiyo ke paas mili thi, uske baad uske baad ki koi location nahi hai…

Amtul—to theek hai..kal se hum arawali ki pahadiyo se lage jungle se hi apni talash start karenge..

Idhar sheetal (sadhana) ke achanak gayab ho jane se sabhi behad pareshan aur ghabraye huye the…har jagah dekh lene ke baad bhi jab uska kuch pata nahi chala to ganga ne amit ko utha diya.

Ganga (ghabrayi huyi)—amit utho..jaldi utho..sadhana ghar me nahi hai..

Amit—to isme pareshan hone ki kya baat hai..? hogi yahi kahi..aa jayegi..

Ganga (tension)—maine har jagah dekh liya hai..kahi nahi hai vo…ghar se bahar nikalne ke sab darwaje bhi andar se band hain..sabhi khidkiya andar se band hain, bathroom khula hua hai..lekin sadhana ghar ke andar nahi hai..jane kaha gayab ho gayi sadhana..? kal se raj gayab hai aur aaj sadhana bhi gayab ho gayi…?

Amit (chounk kar)—aise kaise ho sakta hai…? Chalo ek bar phir se dekhte hain..

Sabne poora bunglow chhaan maara lekin sadhana ka kahi kuch pata nahi chala..sabhi ke chehre par ghabrahat aur ek anjana khauf saaf saaf dikh raha tha…amit aur ganga mousi dono apna sir pakad kar baith gaye..maya bhi hairan pareshan thi.

Ganga (ghabrate huye)—jab na vo ghar ke bahar gayi aur na hi ghar ke andar hai, phir meri sadhana beti gayi to gayi kaha..? use dharti nigal gayi ya aas maan kha gaya…? Akhir kaar bina ghar se bahar nikle vo ghar ke andar hi andar kaha gayab ho gayi….?

Baharhal ye samasya to mahatvapurn thi hi ki sadhana chali gayi..lekin isse bhi mahatvapurn aur rahasya ki baat to ye thi ki vo ghar se kis waqt aur kidhar gayi…? Bunglow ka main gate jyo ka tyo band tha..ghar ki sabhi khidkiya andar se band thi..aise me bas ek hi rasta ho sakta tha ki vah gallery ki deewar jo ki saat foot se oonchi thi, usko paar kar ke bahar chali jaye..lekin sheetal (sadhana) jaisi nazuk ladki ke liye saat foot ki deewar par chadhna aur phir use paar karna asaan kaam nahi tha.

Lekin unme se ye koi nahi janta tha ki sheetal ghar se bahar gayi hi nahi thi..balki vo to ghar ke andar se hi kahi gayab ho gayi thi..

Sheetal ko diary ke teen pages me ye saaf hidayat di gayi thi ki raat ke theek 2.30 baje vo uss rahasyamay kaale kamre me pahuch jaye jisme ki tabiz latka hua tha..ekdam 2.30 baje, na to ek minute pahle aur na hi ek minute baad..fix 2.30 baje. Diary me ye bhi likha hua tha ki uska safar vahi ussi kaale kamre se shuru hoga.

Raat me sheetal ne mann hi mann uss kaale kamre me jane ka faisla kar liya tha aur bas 2.30 bajne ka intazar kar rahi thi.. tab tak ghar me sabhi log gahri neend me so chuke the…2.20 bajte hi usne uth kar bistar ki chadar theek ki aur phir dhire se room se nikal kar dhadakte dil ke sath uss rahasyamay kale kamre ke paas ja kar khadi ho gayi.

Jaise hi 2.30 baje usne turant uss kaale kamre ka handle par hath rakhna chaha lekin uska hath darwaje ke handle par nahi pada balki darwaja khud ba khud khul gaya jaise ki darwaje ke piche sheetal ka koi pratikshak khada tha .

Samne andhera tha, sheetal mahaz andaze se uss rahasyamayi kaale kamre me dakhil ho gayi…uske andar ghuste hi darwaja apne aap band bhi ho gaya…sheetal do teen kadam hi andar gayi thi, use samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki vo aage badhe ya phir vahi khadi rahe..? agar aage badhe to kis taraf badhe…? Andhera iss kadar gahra tha ki hath ko hath dikhayi nahi de raha tha.

Vo vahi khadi rahi jisse ki andhere me dekh sakne ki abhyast ho jaye to vah aage badhe….vo andhere me aise hi ankhe phad kar dekh rahi thi ki kuch to nazar aa jaye…use kuch dikha to nahi lekin uski ankhe dhire dhire jarur band hone lagi. Aur phir vo gahri neend me jaise so gayi.

Jab uski ankh khuli to bhi use andhera hi dikhayi de raha tha..phir kuch der baad use uss ghupp andhere me ek roshni timtimati huyi nazar aayi…aisa laga jaise ki door akash par koi akela sitara timtima raha ho…phir dekhte hi dekhte aise sitaro ki sankhya badhti hi chali gayi aur sitaro ki badhti sankhya ke sath madhyam sa ujala bhi phailta chala gaya.

Aur phir vo madhyam roshni dhire dhire saaf hone lagi…sheetal lagatar upar hi dekhe ja rahi thi..roshni dhire dhire badhti hi ja rahi thi….ab sab kuch khule aas maan ki tarah dikhne laga tha..beshumar sitare jagmaga rahe the.

Phir ye roshni itni tez ho gayi ki aisa lagne laga jaise ki achanak hi chaand nikal aaya ho…sath hi tez hawa ka jhoka sheetal ke reshmi baalo ko udate huye chala gaya…aur phir iske sath hi sheetal ko apne pair kisi naram cheez par dhanste huye mahsoos huye.

Ye mahsoos hote hi sheetal ne turant apne pairo ki taraf dekha..phir ghabra kar daaye, phir baaye, upar phir niche dekha.. tab use apne dil ki dhadkane rukti huyi si mahsoos hone lagi..

Sheetal (shocked)—omg…ye main kaha pahuch gayi hu aur kaise…?


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Vahi dusri taarf jab mujhe hosh aaya to khud ko kisi aalishan haweli ke makhmali bistar par paya...mujhe hosh me aaya dekh kar vaha teen chaar log turant ekatthe ho gaye jinme teen admi aur ek ladki thi...doctor mujhse mera naam puch raha tha lekin meri kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha, bas sir me tez dard mahsoos ho raha tha aur main jor se cheekh kar phir behosh ho gaya.

Ab aage.....

Raj (dimag par jor dete huye)—mera naam...mera naam...mera naam kya hai... ? kya hai mera naam.... ? aaaaaaaa

Admi—ye to phir se behosh ho gaya... ?

Doctor—maine iske chot ki dressing to kar di hai lekin jaisa ki aapne kaha tha ki main iska koi ilaz na karu to maine dressing ke alawa baki kuch nahi kiya hai…ek baat aur main kahna chahta hu sir..

Admi—kya doctor…?

Doctor— sir, iski condition dekh kar aisa lagta hai jaisi ki iske sir me lagi chot ke sath sath dil aur dimag par koi gahra sadma laga hai..jiski vajah se ye apni yaad dast kho baitha hai.

Admi—hmmm..aur yaad dast vapis aane ke kya chances hain…?

Doctor—kuch kah nahi sakte..

Admi—ok doctor..aur haan, iske baare me kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye doctor..warna tum achchi tarah se jante ho ki main kitna bada paidaaishi kamina admi hu…?

Doctor (darte huye)—aap chinta bilkul na kare sir, meri juban kat jayegi magar khulegi nahi..

Admi—good, yahi achcha bhi hai tumhare liye…ab jao, daily aa kar isko dressing kar dena ..aur haan, jane se pahle apni fees le lo…(hath se ishara karte huye)..uss samne wala bag paiso se bhara hua hai..usme hath daal kar jitna nikaal sakte ho, nikaal lo..jitna tumne nikal liya, vahi tumhari fees hogi..

Doctor (khush ho kar)—thank you sir,…(bag me hath dalte hi)..aaaaaaaaaa……aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Doctor ne darte darte namaste kiya aur vaha se apni fees le kar jaldi khisakne me hi apni bhalayi samjhi…isliye usne jaldi se samne rakhe bag ki chain khol kar paise nikalne ke liye jaise hi hath andar dala vaise hi vaha uski dard bhari cheekh goonj uthi….aur phir agle hi pal vo bejaan ho kar dhadam se niche gir paga aur kuch der tak tadapne ke baad shant ho gaya.

Doctor ke marte hi vo admi khushi se haste huye uss bag tak gaya aur usme hath daal kar kuch bahar khich liya..lekin ye kya….? Uske hath me to ek bhayank kala jahareela naag tha jise usne uss bag me band kar ke rakha tha.

Admi—hahahahahaha….shukriya naag raaj..tumne akhir doctor ko uski fees de hi di…hahahahaha…main aur tum to pakke dost hain….jis tarah tum jahreele naag ho vaise hi main bhi ek jahareela naag hu..akhir dost hi dost ke kaam aata hai… Bhains poonch uthayegi to gaana nahi gayegi….hahahahahaha

Vo admi khushi se mushkuraye ja raha tha, phir usne uss kaale naag ko bag me phir se band kar diya…uss admi ke sath jo ladka aur ek ladki khade the, unhe ye sab bilkul bhi pasand nahi aa raha tha, dono andar hi andat jal kar raakh huye ja rahe the.. doctor ke jate hi unhe bolne ka mouka mil gaya.

Ladki —dad, aap isko le kar yaha kyo aa gaye…? Itna achcha mouka tha, mar jane diya hota sale ko.. hamare raste ka sabse bada kaanta nikal jata jiske liye aap aaj tak koshish kar rahe the raste se hatane ki..aur jab kismat hamare sath thi tab aap use bacha kar yaha le aaye..why dad..why…?

Ladki (narazagi dikhate huye)—haan dad, main bhi aapse bahut naraz hu…akhir kya jarurat thi iss harami ko bachane ki..? yahi vo kamina hai jisne gaon me mere sath badatmizi ki thi jab main mousi se milne gayi thi…ye sala marne ke hi kabil tha..

Admi—tumhe kya lagta hai ki maine ise yu hi marne se bachaya hai…? Nahi, tumhare baap ne koi kachchi gotiya nahi kheli hain...jab iske jaise hazar harami mare honge tab tumhara ye baap paida hua tha...ye mat bhulo ki mera naam bhi abhay hai...
Bhains Poonchh Uthayegi To Gaana Nahi Gayegi.

Ji haan, ye admi aur koi nahi balki abhay hai aur uske sath iss samay baat karne vale dono shakhs uska beta suraj aur uski badi beti tanu hai jo ki apne baap ke faisle se nakhush dikhayi de rahe hain.

Suraj—lekin phir bhi dad isko bachane ki kya jarurat thi...jab hamara manchaha kaam banta dikh raha tha to... ?

Tanu—haan dad, mujhe bhi jaanna hai ki aapne iss harami ke pille ko kyo bachaya..aur koun hai ye.... ?

Abhay—tanu beta, ye apne aap ko tumhare bade papa vivek ka ladka raj kahta hai sabse jabki vo mar chuka hai....aur maine kaha na ki maine bina matlab use nahi bachaya...ye mat bhulo ki maine court me case file kiya hai iske khilaf.. agar court ka case final hone se pahle ye mar jata to iska sara ilzam mere upar aa jata..media wale aur iske ghar wale kahne lagte ki maine marwa diya aur mera bana banaya plan mitti me mil jata..phir ye sari property govt. Apne kabze me le leti ya phir uski bahan sheetal ke naam transfer ho jati jo main bilkul nahi chahta tha., case ka faisla hone tak iska jinda rahna mere liye behad jaruri hai.

Tanu (shocked)—kyaaa..ye bade papa ka ladka hai….?

Abhay—hai nahi, lekin khud ko kahta jarur hai.

Suraj—lekin dad, jab raj already mar chuka hai to iske jinda rahne ya marne se hame bhala kya fark pad sakta hai….?

Abhay—fark padta hai, bahut bada fark padta hai….kyon ki court me case maine iske khilaf daayar kiya hai ki ye raj nahi balki uska koi hum shakal hai jo property ke lalach me raj ban kar sab ko dhokha de raha hai…agar ye mar gaya to ye baar sabit kaise karoge ki ye asli hai ya naqli…? Uss condition me to sab ise asli hi samjhenge aur iski hatya ka jurm mere upar aa jayega.

Tanu—lekin iski to yaad dast ja chuki hai, aise me case iske upar kaise chalega…?

Abhay—yaad dast chali gayi to kya hua..ye to sabit ho hi jayega ki ye naqli hai aur asli raj mar chuka hai..bas ise theek hone tak saza nahi hogi..isko bachane ka dusra karan bhi hai..

Suraj—vo kya…?

Abhay—kisi bhi tarah iski yaad dast hame vapis lani hogi, iske jariye hum vasiyat ka raaz jaan sakte hain aur hame ye bhi pata chal jayega ki asli vasiyat hai kaha….? Isliye jab tak hamara kaam poora nahi hota tum dono ko iska vishesh dhyan rakhna hoga..kaise bhi kar ke iski yaad dast laane ki koshish karo aur haan, tab tak ye yaha se kahi jane na paye..

Suraj—dad, ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki ye yaad dast jane ka natak kar raha ho….?

Abhay—to ise kisi bhi tarah apne vash me kar ke ugalwane ki koshish karo..magar case final hone tak ise kuch hona nahi chahiye…ye jo mangta hai ise do..jo karta hai karne do..bas isko apni nigaho se door mat hone dena..kyon ki jo raaz main iske jariye janna chahta hu vahi black star bhi chahta hai..to ho sakta hai ki vo pata chalte hi kuch gadbad na kar de isliye iss baat ka dhyan rakhna.

Suraj—iska matlab ki black star ki nazar me ye mar chuka hai….?

Abhay—haan, vo to achcha hua ki mere admi iska saaye ki tarah picha kar rahe the…sadhana ne to isko maar hi diya tha, ye bas behosh ho kar khayi me girne hi wala tha ki tab tak mere admi vaha pahuch gaye aur ise bahar nikaal laaye.. ye bhi theek hi hua ki uss samay tak vo ladki vaha se ja chuki thi…ab iske jariye main asani se vasiyat ke uss raaz tak pahuch sakta hu jo kayi saalo se itihaas ke kisi kone me dafan hai…kaam hote hi samjho ki ye khatam.

Abhi vo baate kar hi rahe the ki Tabhi unka dhyan meri taarf gaya kyon ki mere jism me phir se hulchul hone lagi thi aur kuch hi der me mujhe phir hosh aa gaya.

Abhay—ab kaisi tabiyat hai tumhari beta….?

Raj (hairan)—tum log koun ho... ? hum kaha hu... ? ye koun si jagah hai…? Kya tum log mujhe jante ho... ? agar jante ho to batao na ki Mera naam kya hai... ? kya hai mera naam... ? aaaaaa..mujhe kuch yaad kyo nahi aa raha..aaaa... ?

Abhay—apne dimag par jor mat do...tumhara naam raj hai..aur main tumhara chacha abhay hu..ye tumhara bada bhai suraj aur ye tumhari badi bahan tanu hai..tum apne hi ghar me ho beta...

Raj—kya tum sach bol rahe ho... ? phir aur koun koun hai mere ghar me…?

Abhay—beta, tumhare mummy papa bachpan me hi mar gaye the, tab se tum hamare hi paas ho…yaha hum teeno ke alawa tumhari chachi kalyani aur ek aur badi bahan rekha rahti hai…tumhara accident ho gaya tha..isliye tum hame pahchan nahi pa rahe ho..dhire dhire sab yaad aa jayega..abhi araam karo..

Raj—aap meri didi ho…?

Tanu (muh bana kar)—haan, main tumhari tanu didi hu..

Raj (hath pakad kar)—sach me aap kitni achchi ho didi…mujhe akele darr lagta hai didi..aap mujhe chhod kar mat jana..

Abhay—koi tumhe chhod kar kahi nahi jayega..ab tum araam karo..tanu, mujhe thoda bahar jana hai, tum dono iska dhyan rakhna..aur haan akele mat chhodna..Bhains poonch uthayegi to gaana nahi gaayegi.

Suraj—dad, mujhe bhi apne friends ke paas jana hai party me...tanu rahegi iske paas..

Tanu—main hi kyu... ? mujhe bhi kaam hai apni friends se milne jana hai..

Abhay—maine ek bar jo bol diya so bol diya, under stand...

Tanu (mann me)—iss kamine ko to aisa sabak sikhaungi ki hamesha yaad rakhega ki isne badatmizi karne ki himmat kiske sath ki thi..sala harami…

Suraj—tanu main bhi ja raha hu..iska dhyan rakhna..

Uske baad abhay aur uske piche piche suraj bhi vaha se chale gaye...uss aalishan kamre me main aur tanu hi bache the.. unke jate hi vo bhi vaha se uth kar jane lagi.

Raj—didi, aap mujhe chhod kar kaha ja rahi ho... ?

Tanu (jor se)—jahannum me...tujhe bhi pahucha du kya... ?

Raj—ye jahannum kya aur kaisa hota hai didi... ?

Tanu (chillate huye)—mera dimag mat kha..chupchap pada rah samjah, sala harami...(mann me)..dad ne mujhe kaha phasa diya... ?

Uske aise chillane se main chup ho gaya..tanu dusre room me ja kar kisi se phone par baat karne lagi..uske baat karne ke andaz se lag raha tha jaise ki vo apne boy friend se baate kar rahi ho...mujhe bade jor se peshab lagi thi lekin jab lagbhag ek ghante tak tanu bahar nahi aayi to main jis room me vo gayi thi, main bhi usme ghus gaya.

Samne laptop par vo koi english movie dekh rahi thi jisme ek ladka aur ladki ek dusre ke hotho ko khaye ja rahe the lipat kar...Mujhe ye dekh kar hairani huyi ki ye sab kya hai... ??

Raj (hairan)—didi, ye dono kya kar rahe hain... ? ek dusre ka muh kyo kha rahe hain ye.... ?

Tanu (chounk kar gusse me)—tu yaha kya kar raha hai... ? tu aaya kaise mere room me... ? chal bahar nikal yaha se... ? aur dubara kabhi mere room me aana mat..

Raj (sir jhuka ke)—vo didi, mujhe bahut jor se susu lagi hai...aap batao na ki susu kaha karu main... ?

Tanu (chillate huye)—yaha mere sir me kar de...

Raj—achcha theek hai, bas yahi to puch raha tha..

Tanu ki baat sun kar main pant ki chain kholte huye uski taraf badhne laga, mujhe apni taraf aate dekh kar vo chounk kar aur jyada bhadak gayi..

Tanu (jor se)—kamine idhar kaha aa raha ahi.. ? sach me mere sir me hi mootega kya... ?

Raj—mujhe kyo daant rahi ho didi jabki aapne hi to kaha tha ki aap ke sir me susu kar lu…

Tanu (shocked)—kyaaaa…? Chal bhag yaha se ..sala ahrami..sach me kamina mere upar hi mootne chala aa raha hai.. ohh god, dad ne ye namuna kaha se pakad liya…? Abe bewaqoof, vaha bathroom me ja kar moot le…kamine ko ye bhi yaad nahi hai ki kaha mootna chahiye…?

Raj—ye bathroom kya hota hai…? Jaldi batao na didi, nahi to yahi mera susu nikal jayega..

Tanu (hadbadate huye jor se)—arrey nahi nahi, ruk ruk..yaha nahi..yaha nahi...vo raha bathroom..chal idhar aa..yaha kar le..aur baad me ye wala pani daal dena uss par...chal jaldi ja..hey bhagwan, kaha phans gayi..kaise kaise log hain duniya me... ?

Tanu ne bhag kar jaldi se apne bathroom ka darwaja khol kar mujhe ishara kiya..main jaldi se vaha ja kar mootne laga..tab ja kar kuch araam mila...pani dalne ke baad main bathroom se bahar aa gaya.

Tanu—ab chal ja yaha se..

Raj—didi batao na vo dono ek dusre ka muh kyo kha rahe the... ?

Tanu (ankh dikhate huye)—tujhe kya karna hai jaan kar..? chal ab ja yaha se..

Raj—vo mujhe bhi vaise hi karne ka mann ho raha hai didi...hum dono bhi ek bar vaisa hi kare didi... ?

Tanu (shocked)—kyaaa kahaaa... ? chal nikal mere room se bahar harami…aur dubara kabhi mere kamre me aana mat…
“Hoti Nahi Hai Abhi Lulli Khadi, Aur Baate Karta Hai Badi Badi.”

Tanu jaise hi mujhe maarne ke liye uthi to main jaldi se uske room se bahar bhaga, jaise hi bahar nikla vaise hi kisi se takra gaya jor se..

Vahi dusri taraf……

Sadhana—chacha, suna hai ki check point ke aage kuch rahasyamayi cheeze bhi hain... ?

Buddha—ye sab bakwas hai...uss paar kewal kabile wale aur jungli janwar rahte hain…maine khud ek do bar kabile walo ko dekha hai..vo khud kisi bhoot pret se kam hain kya…? Uss paar jane wala aaj tak jinda lout kar nahi aaya...jab police bhi kisi gayab huye admi ko talash karte huye pati hai ki vo uss paar gaya hai to turant apni investigation band kar deti hai.

Sadhana (shocked)—kyaaaa.... ?

Uss admi ne aise kaha jaise ki use sari sachchayi pata ho…sadhana ne usse ek do sawal aur puche jinka jawab shayad use pahle se hi pata tha..uske baad dono car se hi dhire dhire aage badhne lage.

Thodi door chalne ke baad hi fencing dikhayi padne lagi…vo ek tarah se iss raste ka dead end tha…sadhana ne kuch doori par hi car rok di…raste me unhe do jagah pedo ki aad me do premi yugal jode bhi dikh gaye the, agar vo thoda aur dhyan dete to unhe kuch bhi jode dikh sakte the.

Deepak—(car se utarte huye)..ab…?

Sadhana—main fencing ke uss paar jaungi aur jitna door tak dekh sakti hu, dekhne ki koshish karungi..tum ej ghante tak mera yahi intazar karna..

Deepak—areey, main bhi chalunga..ek ghante me to main yaha pagal ho jaunga..

Sadhana—pagal mat bano..

Deepak—arrey yaar, main kam se kam iss fencing ko to paar kar hi lunga..college me sports champion rah chuka hu..

Sadhana apne jute utar kar fencing par chadhne lagi..vah pair ke anguthe aur hath ki ungliyo ki madad se upar chadh rahi thi…vo jaan bujh kar poori hatheli aur pairo ki madad nahi le rahi thi warna fence me lage kaante dhans sakte the…lekin ungliyo ko vah badi savdhani se kaanto ke beech rakh kar aage badh rahi thi…issi karan usne jute bhi nikaal diye the.

Deepak bhi vaise hi chadhne laga..uss paar pahuchne tak uski ungliya chhil gayi thi..unhone fence ke niche se apne jite khiche aur unhe pahan kar aage badhne lage.

Dono abhi kuch door hi gaye the ki unhe ek dus metr choudi nahar dikhayi di..dekhne se ye ek prakratik nahar lag rahi thi.. jo kisi nadi ki dhara bhatakne se ban gayi lagti thi.

Dekhne se nahat ki gahrayi ka andaza lagana mushkil tha…par unn dono ki samasya ka hal vaha pahle se hi moujud tha.. ek choude ped ke tane ko nahar ke dono taraf se tikaya gaya tha..jahir tha ki koi use aane jane ke liye istemal karta hoga. Sadhana ne hath se tatol kar uss tane ko dekha to ye andaza ho gaya ki tana khokhla nahi tha aur kam se kam ek admi ka bojh to vah araam se utha sakta tha.

Sadhana—bari bari se uss paar jayenge..

Deepak—theek hai..

Sadhana dhire dhire uss tane ke sahare aage badhne lagi..usne apna santulan banaye rakhne ke liye dono hath phaila rakhe the..kuch hi der me dono sahi salamat uss paar pahuch gaye lekin abhi unki samasyayo ka ant nahi hua tha.

Lagbhag sau kadam aage badhne par achanak hi unke samne teen kabile wale aa gaye...unka aana itna apratyashit aur achanak tha ki unko dekhte hi dono chounk kar rah gaye...unhe apni saans rukti huyi mahsoos huyi.

Teeno kabile walo ke hatho me tedhe medhe bhaale the jinka agla bhag nukile pattharo se bana hua tha…unhone ajibo garib kapde apni kamar se upar aur kamar se niche lapet rakhe the...unke vastra kis cheez se bane the ..ye batana namumkin lag raha tha...teeno ka rang koyle ki tarah ekdam kala aur sir par ek bhi baal nahi the..hatho me lakdi ke kade pahne huye the teeno hi.

Unhe dekhte hi sadhana aur deepak thithak kar ruk gaye....par unki ummido ke ulat unhone dono ke khilaf koi aakramak tevar nahi dikhaye…teeno ajib si bhasa me kuch bol rahe the...aur bhaalo se unhe vapis jane ka ishara karne lage.

Unka ishara samajh kar dono ne vapis jana hi uchit samjha..unhe vapis jate dekh teeno kabile walo ne kuch aur nahi kaha, bas unhe vapis jate huye dekhne lage.

Deepak—kya hum issiliye yaha aaye the... ?

Sadhana—jaldbazi me koi kaam safal nahi hota..baad me hum poori taiyari ke sath dubara ayenge….abhi ke liye hame itna to pata chal gaya ki kabile wale itne khatarnak nahi hain jitna ki vo buddha bata raha tha…agar hum jabardasti aage jane ki koshish karte to shayad vo aakramak bhi ho sakte the.

Iss baar deepak ne sabse pahle uss tane par chadh kar nahar ke dusri taraf pahuch gaya..uske uss paar pahuchte hi sadhana ne bhi uss tane ke sahare nahar paar karna shuru kar diya…abhi usne aadha rasta hi paar kiya tha ki tabhi uske kaano me ek awaz takrayi..


“Chal Chal Chal Chal..Chal Mere Yaar..Chal Mere Yaar,

Aa Ja Le Chalu Main Tujhe Nadiya Ke paar

Nadiya Ke Paar Basa Ek Sansar, Ek Sansar

Jaha Dono Karenge Dil Khol Kar Pyar…..”

Awaz dhimi thi par darr ke karan sadhana ki reedh ki haddi me sihran daud gayi…uske dil ki dhadkan asamanya roop se tez ho gayi…use apni saanse phulti huyi mahsoos hone lagi..

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Vahi dusri taarf jab mujhe hosh aaya to khud ko kisi aalishan haweli ke makhmali bistar par paya...mujhe hosh me aaya dekh kar vaha teen chaar log turant ekatthe ho gaye jinme teen admi aur ek ladki thi...doctor mujhse mera naam puch raha tha lekin meri kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha, bas sir me tez dard mahsoos ho raha tha aur main jor se cheekh kar phir behosh ho gaya.

Ab aage.....

Raj (dimag par jor dete huye)—mera naam...mera naam...mera naam kya hai... ? kya hai mera naam.... ? aaaaaaaa

Admi—ye to phir se behosh ho gaya... ?

Doctor—maine iske chot ki dressing to kar di hai lekin jaisa ki aapne kaha tha ki main iska koi ilaz na karu to maine dressing ke alawa baki kuch nahi kiya hai…ek baat aur main kahna chahta hu sir..

Admi—kya doctor…?

Doctor— sir, iski condition dekh kar aisa lagta hai jaisi ki iske sir me lagi chot ke sath sath dil aur dimag par koi gahra sadma laga hai..jiski vajah se ye apni yaad dast kho baitha hai.

Admi—hmmm..aur yaad dast vapis aane ke kya chances hain…?

Doctor—kuch kah nahi sakte..

Admi—ok doctor..aur haan, iske baare me kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye doctor..warna tum achchi tarah se jante ho ki main kitna bada paidaaishi kamina admi hu…?

Doctor (darte huye)—aap chinta bilkul na kare sir, meri juban kat jayegi magar khulegi nahi..

Admi—good, yahi achcha bhi hai tumhare liye…ab jao, daily aa kar isko dressing kar dena ..aur haan, jane se pahle apni fees le lo…(hath se ishara karte huye)..uss samne wala bag paiso se bhara hua hai..usme hath daal kar jitna nikaal sakte ho, nikaal lo..jitna tumne nikal liya, vahi tumhari fees hogi..

Doctor (khush ho kar)—thank you sir,…(bag me hath dalte hi)..aaaaaaaaaa……aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Doctor ne darte darte namaste kiya aur vaha se apni fees le kar jaldi khisakne me hi apni bhalayi samjhi…isliye usne jaldi se samne rakhe bag ki chain khol kar paise nikalne ke liye jaise hi hath andar dala vaise hi vaha uski dard bhari cheekh goonj uthi….aur phir agle hi pal vo bejaan ho kar dhadam se niche gir paga aur kuch der tak tadapne ke baad shant ho gaya.

Doctor ke marte hi vo admi khushi se haste huye uss bag tak gaya aur usme hath daal kar kuch bahar khich liya..lekin ye kya….? Uske hath me to ek bhayank kala jahareela naag tha jise usne uss bag me band kar ke rakha tha.

Admi—hahahahahaha….shukriya naag raaj..tumne akhir doctor ko uski fees de hi di…hahahahaha…main aur tum to pakke dost hain….jis tarah tum jahreele naag ho vaise hi main bhi ek jahareela naag hu..akhir dost hi dost ke kaam aata hai… Bhains poonch uthayegi to gaana nahi gayegi….hahahahahaha

Vo admi khushi se mushkuraye ja raha tha, phir usne uss kaale naag ko bag me phir se band kar diya…uss admi ke sath jo ladka aur ek ladki khade the, unhe ye sab bilkul bhi pasand nahi aa raha tha, dono andar hi andat jal kar raakh huye ja rahe the.. doctor ke jate hi unhe bolne ka mouka mil gaya.

Ladki —dad, aap isko le kar yaha kyo aa gaye…? Itna achcha mouka tha, mar jane diya hota sale ko.. hamare raste ka sabse bada kaanta nikal jata jiske liye aap aaj tak koshish kar rahe the raste se hatane ki..aur jab kismat hamare sath thi tab aap use bacha kar yaha le aaye..why dad..why…?

Ladki (narazagi dikhate huye)—haan dad, main bhi aapse bahut naraz hu…akhir kya jarurat thi iss harami ko bachane ki..? yahi vo kamina hai jisne gaon me mere sath badatmizi ki thi jab main mousi se milne gayi thi…ye sala marne ke hi kabil tha..

Admi—tumhe kya lagta hai ki maine ise yu hi marne se bachaya hai…? Nahi, tumhare baap ne koi kachchi gotiya nahi kheli hain...jab iske jaise hazar harami mare honge tab tumhara ye baap paida hua tha...ye mat bhulo ki mera naam bhi abhay hai...
Bhains Poonchh Uthayegi To Gaana Nahi Gayegi.

Ji haan, ye admi aur koi nahi balki abhay hai aur uske sath iss samay baat karne vale dono shakhs uska beta suraj aur uski badi beti tanu hai jo ki apne baap ke faisle se nakhush dikhayi de rahe hain.

Suraj—lekin phir bhi dad isko bachane ki kya jarurat thi...jab hamara manchaha kaam banta dikh raha tha to... ?

Tanu—haan dad, mujhe bhi jaanna hai ki aapne iss harami ke pille ko kyo bachaya..aur koun hai ye.... ?

Abhay—tanu beta, ye apne aap ko tumhare bade papa vivek ka ladka raj kahta hai sabse jabki vo mar chuka hai....aur maine kaha na ki maine bina matlab use nahi bachaya...ye mat bhulo ki maine court me case file kiya hai iske khilaf.. agar court ka case final hone se pahle ye mar jata to iska sara ilzam mere upar aa jata..media wale aur iske ghar wale kahne lagte ki maine marwa diya aur mera bana banaya plan mitti me mil jata..phir ye sari property govt. Apne kabze me le leti ya phir uski bahan sheetal ke naam transfer ho jati jo main bilkul nahi chahta tha., case ka faisla hone tak iska jinda rahna mere liye behad jaruri hai.

Tanu (shocked)—kyaaa..ye bade papa ka ladka hai….?

Abhay—hai nahi, lekin khud ko kahta jarur hai.

Suraj—lekin dad, jab raj already mar chuka hai to iske jinda rahne ya marne se hame bhala kya fark pad sakta hai….?

Abhay—fark padta hai, bahut bada fark padta hai….kyon ki court me case maine iske khilaf daayar kiya hai ki ye raj nahi balki uska koi hum shakal hai jo property ke lalach me raj ban kar sab ko dhokha de raha hai…agar ye mar gaya to ye baar sabit kaise karoge ki ye asli hai ya naqli…? Uss condition me to sab ise asli hi samjhenge aur iski hatya ka jurm mere upar aa jayega.

Tanu—lekin iski to yaad dast ja chuki hai, aise me case iske upar kaise chalega…?

Abhay—yaad dast chali gayi to kya hua..ye to sabit ho hi jayega ki ye naqli hai aur asli raj mar chuka hai..bas ise theek hone tak saza nahi hogi..isko bachane ka dusra karan bhi hai..

Suraj—vo kya…?

Abhay—kisi bhi tarah iski yaad dast hame vapis lani hogi, iske jariye hum vasiyat ka raaz jaan sakte hain aur hame ye bhi pata chal jayega ki asli vasiyat hai kaha….? Isliye jab tak hamara kaam poora nahi hota tum dono ko iska vishesh dhyan rakhna hoga..kaise bhi kar ke iski yaad dast laane ki koshish karo aur haan, tab tak ye yaha se kahi jane na paye..

Suraj—dad, ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki ye yaad dast jane ka natak kar raha ho….?

Abhay—to ise kisi bhi tarah apne vash me kar ke ugalwane ki koshish karo..magar case final hone tak ise kuch hona nahi chahiye…ye jo mangta hai ise do..jo karta hai karne do..bas isko apni nigaho se door mat hone dena..kyon ki jo raaz main iske jariye janna chahta hu vahi black star bhi chahta hai..to ho sakta hai ki vo pata chalte hi kuch gadbad na kar de isliye iss baat ka dhyan rakhna.

Suraj—iska matlab ki black star ki nazar me ye mar chuka hai….?

Abhay—haan, vo to achcha hua ki mere admi iska saaye ki tarah picha kar rahe the…sadhana ne to isko maar hi diya tha, ye bas behosh ho kar khayi me girne hi wala tha ki tab tak mere admi vaha pahuch gaye aur ise bahar nikaal laaye.. ye bhi theek hi hua ki uss samay tak vo ladki vaha se ja chuki thi…ab iske jariye main asani se vasiyat ke uss raaz tak pahuch sakta hu jo kayi saalo se itihaas ke kisi kone me dafan hai…kaam hote hi samjho ki ye khatam.

Abhi vo baate kar hi rahe the ki Tabhi unka dhyan meri taarf gaya kyon ki mere jism me phir se hulchul hone lagi thi aur kuch hi der me mujhe phir hosh aa gaya.

Abhay—ab kaisi tabiyat hai tumhari beta….?

Raj (hairan)—tum log koun ho... ? hum kaha hu... ? ye koun si jagah hai…? Kya tum log mujhe jante ho... ? agar jante ho to batao na ki Mera naam kya hai... ? kya hai mera naam... ? aaaaaa..mujhe kuch yaad kyo nahi aa raha..aaaa... ?

Abhay—apne dimag par jor mat do...tumhara naam raj hai..aur main tumhara chacha abhay hu..ye tumhara bada bhai suraj aur ye tumhari badi bahan tanu hai..tum apne hi ghar me ho beta...

Raj—kya tum sach bol rahe ho... ? phir aur koun koun hai mere ghar me…?

Abhay—beta, tumhare mummy papa bachpan me hi mar gaye the, tab se tum hamare hi paas ho…yaha hum teeno ke alawa tumhari chachi kalyani aur ek aur badi bahan rekha rahti hai…tumhara accident ho gaya tha..isliye tum hame pahchan nahi pa rahe ho..dhire dhire sab yaad aa jayega..abhi araam karo..

Raj—aap meri didi ho…?

Tanu (muh bana kar)—haan, main tumhari tanu didi hu..

Raj (hath pakad kar)—sach me aap kitni achchi ho didi…mujhe akele darr lagta hai didi..aap mujhe chhod kar mat jana..

Abhay—koi tumhe chhod kar kahi nahi jayega..ab tum araam karo..tanu, mujhe thoda bahar jana hai, tum dono iska dhyan rakhna..aur haan akele mat chhodna..Bhains poonch uthayegi to gaana nahi gaayegi.

Suraj—dad, mujhe bhi apne friends ke paas jana hai party me...tanu rahegi iske paas..

Tanu—main hi kyu... ? mujhe bhi kaam hai apni friends se milne jana hai..

Abhay—maine ek bar jo bol diya so bol diya, under stand...

Tanu (mann me)—iss kamine ko to aisa sabak sikhaungi ki hamesha yaad rakhega ki isne badatmizi karne ki himmat kiske sath ki thi..sala harami…

Suraj—tanu main bhi ja raha hu..iska dhyan rakhna..

Uske baad abhay aur uske piche piche suraj bhi vaha se chale gaye...uss aalishan kamre me main aur tanu hi bache the.. unke jate hi vo bhi vaha se uth kar jane lagi.

Raj—didi, aap mujhe chhod kar kaha ja rahi ho... ?

Tanu (jor se)—jahannum me...tujhe bhi pahucha du kya... ?

Raj—ye jahannum kya aur kaisa hota hai didi... ?

Tanu (chillate huye)—mera dimag mat kha..chupchap pada rah samjah, sala harami...(mann me)..dad ne mujhe kaha phasa diya... ?

Uske aise chillane se main chup ho gaya..tanu dusre room me ja kar kisi se phone par baat karne lagi..uske baat karne ke andaz se lag raha tha jaise ki vo apne boy friend se baate kar rahi ho...mujhe bade jor se peshab lagi thi lekin jab lagbhag ek ghante tak tanu bahar nahi aayi to main jis room me vo gayi thi, main bhi usme ghus gaya.

Samne laptop par vo koi english movie dekh rahi thi jisme ek ladka aur ladki ek dusre ke hotho ko khaye ja rahe the lipat kar...Mujhe ye dekh kar hairani huyi ki ye sab kya hai... ??

Raj (hairan)—didi, ye dono kya kar rahe hain... ? ek dusre ka muh kyo kha rahe hain ye.... ?

Tanu (chounk kar gusse me)—tu yaha kya kar raha hai... ? tu aaya kaise mere room me... ? chal bahar nikal yaha se... ? aur dubara kabhi mere room me aana mat..

Raj (sir jhuka ke)—vo didi, mujhe bahut jor se susu lagi hai...aap batao na ki susu kaha karu main... ?

Tanu (chillate huye)—yaha mere sir me kar de...

Raj—achcha theek hai, bas yahi to puch raha tha..

Tanu ki baat sun kar main pant ki chain kholte huye uski taraf badhne laga, mujhe apni taraf aate dekh kar vo chounk kar aur jyada bhadak gayi..

Tanu (jor se)—kamine idhar kaha aa raha ahi.. ? sach me mere sir me hi mootega kya... ?

Raj—mujhe kyo daant rahi ho didi jabki aapne hi to kaha tha ki aap ke sir me susu kar lu…

Tanu (shocked)—kyaaaa…? Chal bhag yaha se ..sala ahrami..sach me kamina mere upar hi mootne chala aa raha hai.. ohh god, dad ne ye namuna kaha se pakad liya…? Abe bewaqoof, vaha bathroom me ja kar moot le…kamine ko ye bhi yaad nahi hai ki kaha mootna chahiye…?

Raj—ye bathroom kya hota hai…? Jaldi batao na didi, nahi to yahi mera susu nikal jayega..

Tanu (hadbadate huye jor se)—arrey nahi nahi, ruk ruk..yaha nahi..yaha nahi...vo raha bathroom..chal idhar aa..yaha kar le..aur baad me ye wala pani daal dena uss par...chal jaldi ja..hey bhagwan, kaha phans gayi..kaise kaise log hain duniya me... ?

Tanu ne bhag kar jaldi se apne bathroom ka darwaja khol kar mujhe ishara kiya..main jaldi se vaha ja kar mootne laga..tab ja kar kuch araam mila...pani dalne ke baad main bathroom se bahar aa gaya.

Tanu—ab chal ja yaha se..

Raj—didi batao na vo dono ek dusre ka muh kyo kha rahe the... ?

Tanu (ankh dikhate huye)—tujhe kya karna hai jaan kar..? chal ab ja yaha se..

Raj—vo mujhe bhi vaise hi karne ka mann ho raha hai didi...hum dono bhi ek bar vaisa hi kare didi... ?

Tanu (shocked)—kyaaa kahaaa... ? chal nikal mere room se bahar harami…aur dubara kabhi mere kamre me aana mat…
“Hoti Nahi Hai Abhi Lulli Khadi, Aur Baate Karta Hai Badi Badi.”

Tanu jaise hi mujhe maarne ke liye uthi to main jaldi se uske room se bahar bhaga, jaise hi bahar nikla vaise hi kisi se takra gaya jor se..

Vahi dusri taraf……

Sadhana—chacha, suna hai ki check point ke aage kuch rahasyamayi cheeze bhi hain... ?

Buddha—ye sab bakwas hai...uss paar kewal kabile wale aur jungli janwar rahte hain…maine khud ek do bar kabile walo ko dekha hai..vo khud kisi bhoot pret se kam hain kya…? Uss paar jane wala aaj tak jinda lout kar nahi aaya...jab police bhi kisi gayab huye admi ko talash karte huye pati hai ki vo uss paar gaya hai to turant apni investigation band kar deti hai.

Sadhana (shocked)—kyaaaa.... ?

Uss admi ne aise kaha jaise ki use sari sachchayi pata ho…sadhana ne usse ek do sawal aur puche jinka jawab shayad use pahle se hi pata tha..uske baad dono car se hi dhire dhire aage badhne lage.

Thodi door chalne ke baad hi fencing dikhayi padne lagi…vo ek tarah se iss raste ka dead end tha…sadhana ne kuch doori par hi car rok di…raste me unhe do jagah pedo ki aad me do premi yugal jode bhi dikh gaye the, agar vo thoda aur dhyan dete to unhe kuch bhi jode dikh sakte the.

Deepak—(car se utarte huye)..ab…?

Sadhana—main fencing ke uss paar jaungi aur jitna door tak dekh sakti hu, dekhne ki koshish karungi..tum ej ghante tak mera yahi intazar karna..

Deepak—areey, main bhi chalunga..ek ghante me to main yaha pagal ho jaunga..

Sadhana—pagal mat bano..

Deepak—arrey yaar, main kam se kam iss fencing ko to paar kar hi lunga..college me sports champion rah chuka hu..

Sadhana apne jute utar kar fencing par chadhne lagi..vah pair ke anguthe aur hath ki ungliyo ki madad se upar chadh rahi thi…vo jaan bujh kar poori hatheli aur pairo ki madad nahi le rahi thi warna fence me lage kaante dhans sakte the…lekin ungliyo ko vah badi savdhani se kaanto ke beech rakh kar aage badh rahi thi…issi karan usne jute bhi nikaal diye the.

Deepak bhi vaise hi chadhne laga..uss paar pahuchne tak uski ungliya chhil gayi thi..unhone fence ke niche se apne jite khiche aur unhe pahan kar aage badhne lage.

Dono abhi kuch door hi gaye the ki unhe ek dus metr choudi nahar dikhayi di..dekhne se ye ek prakratik nahar lag rahi thi.. jo kisi nadi ki dhara bhatakne se ban gayi lagti thi.

Dekhne se nahat ki gahrayi ka andaza lagana mushkil tha…par unn dono ki samasya ka hal vaha pahle se hi moujud tha.. ek choude ped ke tane ko nahar ke dono taraf se tikaya gaya tha..jahir tha ki koi use aane jane ke liye istemal karta hoga. Sadhana ne hath se tatol kar uss tane ko dekha to ye andaza ho gaya ki tana khokhla nahi tha aur kam se kam ek admi ka bojh to vah araam se utha sakta tha.

Sadhana—bari bari se uss paar jayenge..

Deepak—theek hai..

Sadhana dhire dhire uss tane ke sahare aage badhne lagi..usne apna santulan banaye rakhne ke liye dono hath phaila rakhe the..kuch hi der me dono sahi salamat uss paar pahuch gaye lekin abhi unki samasyayo ka ant nahi hua tha.

Lagbhag sau kadam aage badhne par achanak hi unke samne teen kabile wale aa gaye...unka aana itna apratyashit aur achanak tha ki unko dekhte hi dono chounk kar rah gaye...unhe apni saans rukti huyi mahsoos huyi.

Teeno kabile walo ke hatho me tedhe medhe bhaale the jinka agla bhag nukile pattharo se bana hua tha…unhone ajibo garib kapde apni kamar se upar aur kamar se niche lapet rakhe the...unke vastra kis cheez se bane the ..ye batana namumkin lag raha tha...teeno ka rang koyle ki tarah ekdam kala aur sir par ek bhi baal nahi the..hatho me lakdi ke kade pahne huye the teeno hi.

Unhe dekhte hi sadhana aur deepak thithak kar ruk gaye....par unki ummido ke ulat unhone dono ke khilaf koi aakramak tevar nahi dikhaye…teeno ajib si bhasa me kuch bol rahe the...aur bhaalo se unhe vapis jane ka ishara karne lage.

Unka ishara samajh kar dono ne vapis jana hi uchit samjha..unhe vapis jate dekh teeno kabile walo ne kuch aur nahi kaha, bas unhe vapis jate huye dekhne lage.

Deepak—kya hum issiliye yaha aaye the... ?

Sadhana—jaldbazi me koi kaam safal nahi hota..baad me hum poori taiyari ke sath dubara ayenge….abhi ke liye hame itna to pata chal gaya ki kabile wale itne khatarnak nahi hain jitna ki vo buddha bata raha tha…agar hum jabardasti aage jane ki koshish karte to shayad vo aakramak bhi ho sakte the.

Iss baar deepak ne sabse pahle uss tane par chadh kar nahar ke dusri taraf pahuch gaya..uske uss paar pahuchte hi sadhana ne bhi uss tane ke sahare nahar paar karna shuru kar diya…abhi usne aadha rasta hi paar kiya tha ki tabhi uske kaano me ek awaz takrayi..

“Chal Chal Chal Chal..Chal Mere Yaar..Chal Mere Yaar,

Aa Ja Le Chalu Main Tujhe Nadiya Ke paar

Nadiya Ke Paar Basa Ek Sansar, Ek Sansar

Jaha Dono Karenge Dil Khol Kar Pyar…..”

Awaz dhimi thi par darr ke karan sadhana ki reedh ki haddi me sihran daud gayi…uske dil ki dhadkan asamanya roop se tez ho gayi…use apni saanse phulti huyi mahsoos hone lagi..


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