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Mai aur mitali chachi vapis andar aa gaye....sabhi ek jagah baith kar baate karte huye maa ki oor bhi dekhte ja rahe the...maine bhi ek sarsari nigah sab ke upar dali
Tabhi mujhe kisi ka khyal aaya jise maine abhi tak nahi dekha tha us hadse se vapis loutne ke baad…aur kisi ne uska jikra tak nahi kiya …na kuch bataya…kyo…?…kyo chhupaya sabne... ?
Mai—chachi Paridhi didi kaha hain..... ?..main jab se aaya hu, vo mujhe ek baar bhi kahi nazar nahi aayi...
Neha (sakuchate huye)—arey voooooo....vo...to...company tour par gayi hai....aa jayegi..
Kajal—ha....ha...jaldi hi aa jayegi..vo...bhi...tu..na..tension mat le
Main—unka number do main baat karta hu..
Meera—uska…mobile chori ho gaya hai…last time usne kisi dusre ke number se call kiya tha
Nani—ha beta…..vo aa jayegi…..tu fikar na kar
Mai (mann me)—sab log bina puchhe hi jawab de rahe hain...jabki maine to kewal neha chachi se puchha tha...jarur kuch daal me kala hai.....jawab dene me hich kicha rahe hain...mujhe pata karna hoga...ha..veer sahi rahega
Maine veer ki oor dekha vo mera matlab bina kahe samajh gaya aur vaha se bahar chala gaya.....tabhi doctor ne aakar bataya ki maa ko hosh aa gaya hai
Hum sab maa ke paas aa gaye....maa ne abhi bhi ankhe band kar rakhi thi....unki ankho se pani bah raha tha
Mai—m..a..a.....ankhe kholo maa....dekho...meri oor maa...pls ankhe kholo maa
Mere do teen baar pukarne par maa ne apni ankho ko dhire dhire kholna shuru kiya aur phir jaise hi unki nazar mere upar gayi unki ankho se aur bhi tezi se pani bahne laga
Vo kuch kahna chahti thi lekin hoth kaamp rahe the.....shabd muh se bahar nahi nikal pa rahe the...maine unka chehra apne hatho me lekar unke anshoo pochhne laga
Maa—Ra..........Ra...........Ra.............
Mai—ha...maa....mai tumhara raj hu......dekho tumhara raj tumhare paas lout aaya maa
Maa—me..r..a......ra..........j.....
Mai—ha.....haa...maa...apka..raj...apka beta
Maa (jor se)—ra....ra......ra.......raaaaaaajjjjjjjjjjj
Maa jor se mera naam chilla kar mujhe jor se khich kar apne sine se lagakar rone lagi...mere sar ko..mathe ko...to gaalo ko chumne lagi...vo roti ja rahi thi aur mujhe chumte bhi ja rahi thi main na chahte huye bhi khud ko rone se nahi rok paya
Maa (rote huye)—raj...mera betaaa.....tu...kaha..chala gaya tha...apni is maa ko chhod kar
Mai (rote huye)—ab aa gaya hu..maa...kahi nahi jaunga..ab...
Maa (rote huye)—mai teri judai nahi bardast kar sakti beta.....ek maa ka itna imtihan mat le bhagwan....ek maa ko uske bete se door kar ke tumhe koun sa sukh milta hai bhagwan... ? isse achchha to mujhe mout de diya kar
Mai (rote huye)—aisa mat bol maa....tujhe kuch ho gaya to mai kiski god me apna ye sar rakhunga….?…koun mujhe apne mamta ke aanchal me panah dega... ?..mai tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga.. maa
Ruchi (rote huye)—ha maa...ab betu aa gaya hai....sab theek ho jayega..phir se
Mai (anshu saf karte huye)—ha maa...ab mai aa gaya hu...sab pahle jaisa kar dunga mai
Maa (sisakte huye)—meri gudiya kaha hai…beta…vo kaisi haiii.... ?
Payal (sisakte huye)—theek hai maa vo bhi……apke baju me so rahi hai
Maa (divya ko dekh)—ise kya hua hai….?…ye hospital ke bed par kyo hai….?..kya hua hai meri bachchi ko….?
Mai—kuch nahi maa….ab tum theek ho gayi ho na to vo bhi jaldi hi theek ho jayegi
Maa—theek ho jayegi matlab……?…..kya hua use…?
Niranjan—kuch nahi hua didi….bas hamari gudiya thoda kamjor ho gayi hai…doctor ne use need ka injection diya hai……jaldi hi uth jayegi vo bhi
Mai—ha ma…mama sahi kah rahe hain
Maa—beta mujhe ghar le chal....yaha meri kamar dard karne lagi hai...gudiya ko bhi le chalo
Mai—ha maa...mai doctor se baat kar leta hu
Nani—ab tu theek ho gayi to sab sahi ho jayega beti
Maa—awadhesh….uday kaha hai…………?
Awadhesh—bhaiya office gaye hain…..
Neha—maine unhe call kar diya hai….vo aate hi honge
Uday ka naam sunkar mitali chachi aur chandni ka muh utar gaya….unka mann kadwahat se bhar gaya…..mai vaha se doctor ke cabin me chala gaya
Mai—doctor hum maa ko kab tak ghar le ja sakte hain.... ?
Doctor—vaise to ab vo khatre se bahar hain...lekin phir bhi abhi kuch din unko observation me rakhna jyada better rahega
Mai—to hospital me unko kab tak rahna hoga abhi.... ?
Doctor—well...agar sab kuch theek raha to aap kal tak unhe ghar le ja sakte hain....main ek nurse ko sath me bhej dunga jo kuch din tak vahi rah kar payal ka aur mamta madam ka dhyan rakhegi
Mai—ok, doctor I have no problem...and thanks
Doctor—ye to hamara farz hai…aur vaise bhi ye aap is hospital ke MD hain
Mai—mai nahi doctor….yaha ki MD Miss Payal Thakur hain…mai sirf caretaker hu
Doctor ke cabin se nikal kar main vapis maa ke paas lout aaya…..maa ne mujhe apne paas baith liya aur bade dhyan se har jagah hath pher kar dekhne lagi
Mai—aise kya dekh rahi ho maa….?
Maa—bas dekh rahi hu..ki tujhe chot kaha kaha lagi hai... ?
Mai—mai bilkul theek hu maa
Maa—itni upar se girne ke baad koi kaise theek ho sakta hai
Mai—tumhare mamta bhare pyar ne mujhe bacha liya….akhir bhagwan ko bhi to ek maa ko jawab dena mushkil ho jata…isliye usne apke bete ko kuch nahi hone diya
Hum sab maa se bate karne me busy the ki Thodi der me uday chachu bhi vahi pahuch gaye mujhe vaha maa ke paas baithe dekh kar shock se unke hatho se phoolo ka guldasta chhut kar niche gir gaya…rahi sahi kasar chandni ko vaha sahi salamat khade dekh kar poori ho gayi
Unke chehre par chamak phiki pad gayi….kayi tarah ke bhav umadne lage sath me ye darr bhi ki kahi chandni ne sab bata na diya ho
Sandhya—lo majhle fufa ji bhi aa gaye
Uday—arey raaaajjjjj…mera puttar…tu kab aayaaaa…..mujhe bahut khushi ho rahi hai aajjjj….bhabhi bhi theek ho gayi…..aur ye to kamal hi ho gaya….payal bitiya aur ruchi bhi sahi halat me hain mai bahut khush hu…ruko mai abhi mandir me bhagwan ko prasad chadha kar aata hu
Awadhesh—theek hai bhaiya
Uday—ye to mitali ki bahan hai na….ye bhi aa gayi….kamal ho gaya..aaj to….mai abhi aata hu bahut khush hu aaj main
Mitali chachi aur chandni unhe behad gusse se dekh rahi thi.....uday chachu ne guldasta maa ko dekar ek nazar meri oor aur phir chandni ko dekhte huye vaha se bahar chale gaye
Neha—kya kaha doctor ne
Mai—kal discharge karne ko kaha hai
Udhar hospital se bahar aane ke baad uday ne kisi ko call laga kar bate karne laga...
Uday—sun tujhe ek kaam karna hai
Dusri taraf--*********
Uday—pahle mai jo bol raha hu vo sun….us ladki kaise bhi kar ke khatam kar do…nahi to mera jeena mushkil ho jayega…mai uski photo send kar raha hu tujhe….aaj raat hi ye kaam ho jana chahiye…..aaj raat ka hi sahi mouka hai….ab kaise karna hai vo tu samajh…lekin kisi ko bhanak bhi nahi lagni chahiye…ok
Kuch der aur samne wale se phone par bate karne ke baad usne ek dukan se laddu kharidne laga
Uday—bhai laddu kaise diye
Shopkeeper—sahab 240 rs. Kg
Uday—itna mehnga….aur vo dusra vala
Shopkeeper—vo to bekar hai sahab…vo niche gir gaya tha billi ka jhutha hai
Uday—bhagwan ko aisi cheeze bahut pasand hain…jante nahi shabri ke jhuthe bair khaye the unhone…chal ye pack kar de
Shopkeeper—sahab achcha wala lekar jao
Uday—chal achcha wala de de..ye lo paise
Shopkeeper—ye sirf 20 rs hain….?
Uday—galti teri hai…main to itne wale hi le raha tha…tune apni marzi ke laddu diye aur maine apni marzi ke paise…hisab barabar
Uday vaha se laddu lekar vapis hospital aa gaya….aur packet khol kar sab ko laddu baatne laga
Uday—lo sab bhagwan ka prasad khao….aaj main bahut khush hu…..lo raj beta…lo bhabhi..lo mitali tum bhi lo…aur chandni ko bhi khilao…aaj main bahut khush hu
Uday ne sab ko laddu diya.....mitali aur chandni ne bahana banakar khane se mana kar diya uske baad uday business meeting ka bol ke chala gaya sath me ye bhi kah gaye ki vo aaj ghar nahi ayenge
Mai—ab raat hone wali hai..aap sab log ghar jao..mai yahi hospital me rukunga
Neha—lekin beta
Awadhesh—ha raj tum ghar jake aram karo..mai rahta hu yaha
Mai—nahi chachu…mai maa ke paas rukunga…aap log jao...subah aa jana
Ruchi—mai bhi yahi ruk jau…betu..pls mana mat karna
Mai—ok..didi
Maine sab ko samjhakar vapis ghar bhej diya....sabke jane ke baad maine apne hatho se teeno ko khana khilaya aur un teeno ne mujhe
Khana khilane ke baad maine teeno ko dawai ke sath need ki tablet bhi khilayi...jisse vo aram se so sake....unke sone ke baad mai chanchal ke ghar chala gaya jo mera hi intazar kar rahi thi
Chanchal (khushi se)—tum aa gaye raj...mai kab se tumhara hi intazar kar rahi thi
Mai—mai apne wade ka bahut pakka hu
Chanchal—dinner lagau
Mai—vo to mai kae chuka hu...chalo phir bhi thoda sa kha lunga
Phir maine chanchal ke sath dinner kiya...mera pet to bhara hua tha kintu uska bhi dil nahi todna chahta tha
Chanchal—achcha hai tumhari biwi tumse bahut khush rahegi
Mai—vo kyo... ?
Chanchal—tum apne wade ke pakke jo ho
Mai—vo mujhse naraz hi kab hoti hai
Chanchal (udas)—hoti hai matlab... ??…tumne kisi ko chun liya hai apni g/f
Mai—ye vikalp mere paas available nahi hai
Chanchal—abhi to tumne kaha....
Mai—vo to janam janmantar se meri hi hai….isliye chunne ka sawal hi nahi uthata
Chanchal—kounn….?
Mai—jab mil jayegi tab bata bhi dunga…
Chanchal (khush)—iska matlab abhi nahi mili hai….ohh god ..thanks
Mai—isme god ko thanks kahne ki kya jarurat hai…?
Chanchal—bas dil ne god ko thanks kahne ko kaha to maine kah diya
Mai—ye bhi theek hai
Chanchal—achcha raj….tumhe kuch dhyan hai jab maine tumhe khanjar mara tha..tab kya hua tha…?
Mai (udas)—ha…dhyan hai…..mujhe bahut dard hua tha …lekin ye dard utna nahi tha jitna ki mujhe jab ye malum hua ki mujhe jaan se maarne wali koi aur nahi balki meri apni sagi badi bahan hai..tab bahut jyada dard hua tha
Chanchal (nam ankho se)—i’m sorry …raj…mai tumhari gunahgar hu…chahe jo saza de lo mujhe mai har saza bhugatne ko taiyar hu
Mai—mai kisi ko kya saza dunga…mai to khud hi apne gunaho ki saza kaat raha hu ..ab tak
Chanchal—kaisi saza…?..kaisa gunah... ?
Mai—sab apne aap hi jaan jaogi
Chanchal—raj...mere khanjar maarne ke baad kya hua tha...aur kuch yaad hai kya tumhe.. ?
Mai—kyo... ?
Chanchal—pls batao na
Mai—nahi..mujhe to aur kuch yaad nahi hai
Chanchal—achcha itna bata do....agar kisi ladke ke khoon se kisi ladki ki maang anjane me bhar jaye to us ladki ko kya karna chahiye.... ?
Mai—ye to us ladki ko decide karna hai....ki vo kya karna chahti hai
Chanchal—mujhe tumhara vichar janna hai
Mai—agar vo ladki us ladke ko pasand karti hai…pyar karti hai to use bata dena chahiye ladke ko is bare me aur agar nahi chahti to ise kewal bura khwab samajh ke apni life me aage badh jao
Chanchal—aur agar vo ladki sach much us ladke se pyar karti ho aur kuch batane me bhi asmarth ho tab….?
Mai—tab bhi faisla to use khud hi karna hai
Chanchal—agar vo ladki ne use hi apna pati maan liya ho tab aur us ladke ko bata bhi nahi sakti…to…?
Mai—agar pati maan hi liya hai to bata kyo nahi sakti…?…use jarur bata dena chahiye
Chanchal—agar ladke ne use apni biwi maanne se mana kar diya to…?..jabki ladki kewal use hi pyar karti hai..apna sab kuch maan chuki hai….?
Mai—tab bhi bata dena chahiye…?..vaise vo ladki hai koun... ?
Chanchal—pakka bata dena chahiye... ?
Mai—bilkul
Chanchal—tu mujhse naraz to nahi hoga na...vada kar... ?
Mai—mai kyo naraz hone laga bhala...ok promise
Chanchal—raj....vooooo...ladkiiiii.....khud mai..hu.......aur vo ladka ..................tum ho
Mai (shock)—kyaaaaa..... ?
Chanchal (pareshan)—dekho raj...tumne promise kiya hai...gussa nahi hoge mujh par...pls..mai sach kah rahi hu
Mai—ok..ok...mai naraz nahi hu....ab mujhe poori baat batao
Chanchal ne phir mujhe apni maang bharne wali baat batayi.....jise sun kar mujhe bhi thoda shock laga lekin jyada nahi...maine is oor kabhi dhyan hi nahi diya tha
Chanchal—ab tumhi batao mujhe kya karna chahiye.... ?
Mai—abhi mai is bare me kuch nahi kah sakta
Chanchal—mai koi pressure nahi daal rahi hu tum par....tum jo bhi faisla karoge mujhe manzur hoga....bas kisi aur ki hone ke liye mat kahna..pls..
Mai—ye janti ho ki is rishte ko duniya kabhi accept nahi karegi
Chanchal—ha..janti hu
Mai—mujhe thoda time do....is par baad me baat karunga
Chanchal—mai poori zindagi intazar karne ko taiyar hu
Mai—theek hai...ab so jao...kal milta hu
Chanchal—chandni ka dhyan rakhna…
Mai—kyo…?
Chanchal—mujhe uday par bharosa nahi hai.....vo jarur kuch na kuch karega
Mai—ok mai dekhta hu
Chanchal—aur vo locket
Mai—us par kal baat karenge
Chanchal—thodi der aur ruko na
Mai—hospital me koi nahi ha maa ke paas...agar payal didi jaag gayi to musibat khadi kar degi..isliye mujhe jana hoga
Chanchal—ek baar kam se kam apne sine se hi laga lo
Mai—ok...come on
Maine chanchal ko sine se laga liya...vo mujhse aise chipak gayi jaise phir kabhi mujhse chipakne ko hi nahi milega
Mai—ab jane do
Chanchal—bas thodi der aur raj..pls
Mai—mai ab chalta hu...apna dhyan rakhna...ok bye
Chanchal—bye...good night..raj...kal mai intazar karungi
Badi mushkil se chanchal ne chhoda to mai use kal phir milne ka bol kar vaha se hospital aa gaya...jaha veer baitha mera intazar kar raha tha
Mai—kaam hua... ?
Veer—hunnn
Mai—kya khabar hai..... ?
Veer—khabar achchi nahi hai….tum na hi suno to behtar hai
Mai—mai janna chahta hu…kya hua hai paridhi didi ko….?..kya chhupaya hai sabne... ?
Veer—sunkar tumhe bahut dard hoga...pls..
Mai—mai phir bhi janna chahta hu
Veer—to theek hai..suno.********************
Mai (shocked)—whattttt…….?..par kaise…?…
Veer—baat ye hai ki**************
Mai—impossible…….ye nahi ho sakta……mai aisa hargij nahi hone dunga
Mai aur mitali chachi vapis andar aa gaye....sabhi ek jagah baith kar baate karte huye maa ki oor bhi dekhte ja rahe the...maine bhi ek sarsari nigah sab ke upar dali
Tabhi mujhe kisi ka khyal aaya jise maine abhi tak nahi dekha tha us hadse se vapis loutne ke baad…aur kisi ne uska jikra tak nahi kiya …na kuch bataya…kyo…?…kyo chhupaya sabne... ?
Mai—chachi Paridhi didi kaha hain..... ?..main jab se aaya hu, vo mujhe ek baar bhi kahi nazar nahi aayi...
Neha (sakuchate huye)—arey voooooo....vo...to...company tour par gayi hai....aa jayegi..
Kajal—ha....ha...jaldi hi aa jayegi..vo...bhi...tu..na..tension mat le
Main—unka number do main baat karta hu..
Meera—uska…mobile chori ho gaya hai…last time usne kisi dusre ke number se call kiya tha
Nani—ha beta…..vo aa jayegi…..tu fikar na kar
Mai (mann me)—sab log bina puchhe hi jawab de rahe hain...jabki maine to kewal neha chachi se puchha tha...jarur kuch daal me kala hai.....jawab dene me hich kicha rahe hain...mujhe pata karna hoga...ha..veer sahi rahega
Maine veer ki oor dekha vo mera matlab bina kahe samajh gaya aur vaha se bahar chala gaya.....tabhi doctor ne aakar bataya ki maa ko hosh aa gaya hai
Hum sab maa ke paas aa gaye....maa ne abhi bhi ankhe band kar rakhi thi....unki ankho se pani bah raha tha
Mai—m..a..a.....ankhe kholo maa....dekho...meri oor maa...pls ankhe kholo maa
Mere do teen baar pukarne par maa ne apni ankho ko dhire dhire kholna shuru kiya aur phir jaise hi unki nazar mere upar gayi unki ankho se aur bhi tezi se pani bahne laga
Vo kuch kahna chahti thi lekin hoth kaamp rahe the.....shabd muh se bahar nahi nikal pa rahe the...maine unka chehra apne hatho me lekar unke anshoo pochhne laga
Maa—Ra..........Ra...........Ra.............
Mai—ha...maa....mai tumhara raj hu......dekho tumhara raj tumhare paas lout aaya maa
Maa—me..r..a......ra..........j.....
Mai—ha.....haa...maa...apka..raj...apka beta
Maa (jor se)—ra....ra......ra.......raaaaaaajjjjjjjjjjj
Maa jor se mera naam chilla kar mujhe jor se khich kar apne sine se lagakar rone lagi...mere sar ko..mathe ko...to gaalo ko chumne lagi...vo roti ja rahi thi aur mujhe chumte bhi ja rahi thi main na chahte huye bhi khud ko rone se nahi rok paya
Maa (rote huye)—raj...mera betaaa.....tu...kaha..chala gaya tha...apni is maa ko chhod kar
Mai (rote huye)—ab aa gaya hu..maa...kahi nahi jaunga..ab...
Maa (rote huye)—mai teri judai nahi bardast kar sakti beta.....ek maa ka itna imtihan mat le bhagwan....ek maa ko uske bete se door kar ke tumhe koun sa sukh milta hai bhagwan... ? isse achchha to mujhe mout de diya kar
Mai (rote huye)—aisa mat bol maa....tujhe kuch ho gaya to mai kiski god me apna ye sar rakhunga….?…koun mujhe apne mamta ke aanchal me panah dega... ?..mai tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga.. maa
Ruchi (rote huye)—ha maa...ab betu aa gaya hai....sab theek ho jayega..phir se
Mai (anshu saf karte huye)—ha maa...ab mai aa gaya hu...sab pahle jaisa kar dunga mai
Maa (sisakte huye)—meri gudiya kaha hai…beta…vo kaisi haiii.... ?
Payal (sisakte huye)—theek hai maa vo bhi……apke baju me so rahi hai
Maa (divya ko dekh)—ise kya hua hai….?…ye hospital ke bed par kyo hai….?..kya hua hai meri bachchi ko….?
Mai—kuch nahi maa….ab tum theek ho gayi ho na to vo bhi jaldi hi theek ho jayegi
Maa—theek ho jayegi matlab……?…..kya hua use…?
Niranjan—kuch nahi hua didi….bas hamari gudiya thoda kamjor ho gayi hai…doctor ne use need ka injection diya hai……jaldi hi uth jayegi vo bhi
Mai—ha ma…mama sahi kah rahe hain
Maa—beta mujhe ghar le chal....yaha meri kamar dard karne lagi hai...gudiya ko bhi le chalo
Mai—ha maa...mai doctor se baat kar leta hu
Nani—ab tu theek ho gayi to sab sahi ho jayega beti
Maa—awadhesh….uday kaha hai…………?
Awadhesh—bhaiya office gaye hain…..
Neha—maine unhe call kar diya hai….vo aate hi honge
Uday ka naam sunkar mitali chachi aur chandni ka muh utar gaya….unka mann kadwahat se bhar gaya…..mai vaha se doctor ke cabin me chala gaya
Mai—doctor hum maa ko kab tak ghar le ja sakte hain.... ?
Doctor—vaise to ab vo khatre se bahar hain...lekin phir bhi abhi kuch din unko observation me rakhna jyada better rahega
Mai—to hospital me unko kab tak rahna hoga abhi.... ?
Doctor—well...agar sab kuch theek raha to aap kal tak unhe ghar le ja sakte hain....main ek nurse ko sath me bhej dunga jo kuch din tak vahi rah kar payal ka aur mamta madam ka dhyan rakhegi
Mai—ok, doctor I have no problem...and thanks
Doctor—ye to hamara farz hai…aur vaise bhi ye aap is hospital ke MD hain
Mai—mai nahi doctor….yaha ki MD Miss Payal Thakur hain…mai sirf caretaker hu
Doctor ke cabin se nikal kar main vapis maa ke paas lout aaya…..maa ne mujhe apne paas baith liya aur bade dhyan se har jagah hath pher kar dekhne lagi
Mai—aise kya dekh rahi ho maa….?
Maa—bas dekh rahi hu..ki tujhe chot kaha kaha lagi hai... ?
Mai—mai bilkul theek hu maa
Maa—itni upar se girne ke baad koi kaise theek ho sakta hai
Mai—tumhare mamta bhare pyar ne mujhe bacha liya….akhir bhagwan ko bhi to ek maa ko jawab dena mushkil ho jata…isliye usne apke bete ko kuch nahi hone diya
Hum sab maa se bate karne me busy the ki Thodi der me uday chachu bhi vahi pahuch gaye mujhe vaha maa ke paas baithe dekh kar shock se unke hatho se phoolo ka guldasta chhut kar niche gir gaya…rahi sahi kasar chandni ko vaha sahi salamat khade dekh kar poori ho gayi
Unke chehre par chamak phiki pad gayi….kayi tarah ke bhav umadne lage sath me ye darr bhi ki kahi chandni ne sab bata na diya ho
Sandhya—lo majhle fufa ji bhi aa gaye
Uday—arey raaaajjjjj…mera puttar…tu kab aayaaaa…..mujhe bahut khushi ho rahi hai aajjjj….bhabhi bhi theek ho gayi…..aur ye to kamal hi ho gaya….payal bitiya aur ruchi bhi sahi halat me hain mai bahut khush hu…ruko mai abhi mandir me bhagwan ko prasad chadha kar aata hu
Awadhesh—theek hai bhaiya
Uday—ye to mitali ki bahan hai na….ye bhi aa gayi….kamal ho gaya..aaj to….mai abhi aata hu bahut khush hu aaj main
Mitali chachi aur chandni unhe behad gusse se dekh rahi thi.....uday chachu ne guldasta maa ko dekar ek nazar meri oor aur phir chandni ko dekhte huye vaha se bahar chale gaye
Neha—kya kaha doctor ne
Mai—kal discharge karne ko kaha hai
Udhar hospital se bahar aane ke baad uday ne kisi ko call laga kar bate karne laga...
Uday—sun tujhe ek kaam karna hai
Dusri taraf--*********
Uday—pahle mai jo bol raha hu vo sun….us ladki kaise bhi kar ke khatam kar do…nahi to mera jeena mushkil ho jayega…mai uski photo send kar raha hu tujhe….aaj raat hi ye kaam ho jana chahiye…..aaj raat ka hi sahi mouka hai….ab kaise karna hai vo tu samajh…lekin kisi ko bhanak bhi nahi lagni chahiye…ok
Kuch der aur samne wale se phone par bate karne ke baad usne ek dukan se laddu kharidne laga
Uday—bhai laddu kaise diye
Shopkeeper—sahab 240 rs. Kg
Uday—itna mehnga….aur vo dusra vala
Shopkeeper—vo to bekar hai sahab…vo niche gir gaya tha billi ka jhutha hai
Uday—bhagwan ko aisi cheeze bahut pasand hain…jante nahi shabri ke jhuthe bair khaye the unhone…chal ye pack kar de
Shopkeeper—sahab achcha wala lekar jao
Uday—chal achcha wala de de..ye lo paise
Shopkeeper—ye sirf 20 rs hain….?
Uday—galti teri hai…main to itne wale hi le raha tha…tune apni marzi ke laddu diye aur maine apni marzi ke paise…hisab barabar
Uday vaha se laddu lekar vapis hospital aa gaya….aur packet khol kar sab ko laddu baatne laga
Uday—lo sab bhagwan ka prasad khao….aaj main bahut khush hu…..lo raj beta…lo bhabhi..lo mitali tum bhi lo…aur chandni ko bhi khilao…aaj main bahut khush hu
Uday ne sab ko laddu diya.....mitali aur chandni ne bahana banakar khane se mana kar diya uske baad uday business meeting ka bol ke chala gaya sath me ye bhi kah gaye ki vo aaj ghar nahi ayenge
Mai—ab raat hone wali hai..aap sab log ghar jao..mai yahi hospital me rukunga
Neha—lekin beta
Awadhesh—ha raj tum ghar jake aram karo..mai rahta hu yaha
Mai—nahi chachu…mai maa ke paas rukunga…aap log jao...subah aa jana
Ruchi—mai bhi yahi ruk jau…betu..pls mana mat karna
Mai—ok..didi
Maine sab ko samjhakar vapis ghar bhej diya....sabke jane ke baad maine apne hatho se teeno ko khana khilaya aur un teeno ne mujhe
Khana khilane ke baad maine teeno ko dawai ke sath need ki tablet bhi khilayi...jisse vo aram se so sake....unke sone ke baad mai chanchal ke ghar chala gaya jo mera hi intazar kar rahi thi
Chanchal (khushi se)—tum aa gaye raj...mai kab se tumhara hi intazar kar rahi thi
Mai—mai apne wade ka bahut pakka hu
Chanchal—dinner lagau
Mai—vo to mai kae chuka hu...chalo phir bhi thoda sa kha lunga
Phir maine chanchal ke sath dinner kiya...mera pet to bhara hua tha kintu uska bhi dil nahi todna chahta tha
Chanchal—achcha hai tumhari biwi tumse bahut khush rahegi
Mai—vo kyo... ?
Chanchal—tum apne wade ke pakke jo ho
Mai—vo mujhse naraz hi kab hoti hai
Chanchal (udas)—hoti hai matlab... ??…tumne kisi ko chun liya hai apni g/f
Mai—ye vikalp mere paas available nahi hai
Chanchal—abhi to tumne kaha....
Mai—vo to janam janmantar se meri hi hai….isliye chunne ka sawal hi nahi uthata
Chanchal—kounn….?
Mai—jab mil jayegi tab bata bhi dunga…
Chanchal (khush)—iska matlab abhi nahi mili hai….ohh god ..thanks
Mai—isme god ko thanks kahne ki kya jarurat hai…?
Chanchal—bas dil ne god ko thanks kahne ko kaha to maine kah diya
Mai—ye bhi theek hai
Chanchal—achcha raj….tumhe kuch dhyan hai jab maine tumhe khanjar mara tha..tab kya hua tha…?
Mai (udas)—ha…dhyan hai…..mujhe bahut dard hua tha …lekin ye dard utna nahi tha jitna ki mujhe jab ye malum hua ki mujhe jaan se maarne wali koi aur nahi balki meri apni sagi badi bahan hai..tab bahut jyada dard hua tha
Chanchal (nam ankho se)—i’m sorry …raj…mai tumhari gunahgar hu…chahe jo saza de lo mujhe mai har saza bhugatne ko taiyar hu
Mai—mai kisi ko kya saza dunga…mai to khud hi apne gunaho ki saza kaat raha hu ..ab tak
Chanchal—kaisi saza…?..kaisa gunah... ?
Mai—sab apne aap hi jaan jaogi
Chanchal—raj...mere khanjar maarne ke baad kya hua tha...aur kuch yaad hai kya tumhe.. ?
Mai—kyo... ?
Chanchal—pls batao na
Mai—nahi..mujhe to aur kuch yaad nahi hai
Chanchal—achcha itna bata do....agar kisi ladke ke khoon se kisi ladki ki maang anjane me bhar jaye to us ladki ko kya karna chahiye.... ?
Mai—ye to us ladki ko decide karna hai....ki vo kya karna chahti hai
Chanchal—mujhe tumhara vichar janna hai
Mai—agar vo ladki us ladke ko pasand karti hai…pyar karti hai to use bata dena chahiye ladke ko is bare me aur agar nahi chahti to ise kewal bura khwab samajh ke apni life me aage badh jao
Chanchal—aur agar vo ladki sach much us ladke se pyar karti ho aur kuch batane me bhi asmarth ho tab….?
Mai—tab bhi faisla to use khud hi karna hai
Chanchal—agar vo ladki ne use hi apna pati maan liya ho tab aur us ladke ko bata bhi nahi sakti…to…?
Mai—agar pati maan hi liya hai to bata kyo nahi sakti…?…use jarur bata dena chahiye
Chanchal—agar ladke ne use apni biwi maanne se mana kar diya to…?..jabki ladki kewal use hi pyar karti hai..apna sab kuch maan chuki hai….?
Mai—tab bhi bata dena chahiye…?..vaise vo ladki hai koun... ?
Chanchal—pakka bata dena chahiye... ?
Mai—bilkul
Chanchal—tu mujhse naraz to nahi hoga na...vada kar... ?
Mai—mai kyo naraz hone laga bhala...ok promise
Chanchal—raj....vooooo...ladkiiiii.....khud mai..hu.......aur vo ladka ..................tum ho
Mai (shock)—kyaaaaa..... ?
Chanchal (pareshan)—dekho raj...tumne promise kiya hai...gussa nahi hoge mujh par...pls..mai sach kah rahi hu
Mai—ok..ok...mai naraz nahi hu....ab mujhe poori baat batao
Chanchal ne phir mujhe apni maang bharne wali baat batayi.....jise sun kar mujhe bhi thoda shock laga lekin jyada nahi...maine is oor kabhi dhyan hi nahi diya tha
Chanchal—ab tumhi batao mujhe kya karna chahiye.... ?
Mai—abhi mai is bare me kuch nahi kah sakta
Chanchal—mai koi pressure nahi daal rahi hu tum par....tum jo bhi faisla karoge mujhe manzur hoga....bas kisi aur ki hone ke liye mat kahna..pls..
Mai—ye janti ho ki is rishte ko duniya kabhi accept nahi karegi
Chanchal—ha..janti hu
Mai—mujhe thoda time do....is par baad me baat karunga
Chanchal—mai poori zindagi intazar karne ko taiyar hu
Mai—theek hai...ab so jao...kal milta hu
Chanchal—chandni ka dhyan rakhna…
Mai—kyo…?
Chanchal—mujhe uday par bharosa nahi hai.....vo jarur kuch na kuch karega
Mai—ok mai dekhta hu
Chanchal—aur vo locket
Mai—us par kal baat karenge
Chanchal—thodi der aur ruko na
Mai—hospital me koi nahi ha maa ke paas...agar payal didi jaag gayi to musibat khadi kar degi..isliye mujhe jana hoga
Chanchal—ek baar kam se kam apne sine se hi laga lo
Mai—ok...come on
Maine chanchal ko sine se laga liya...vo mujhse aise chipak gayi jaise phir kabhi mujhse chipakne ko hi nahi milega
Mai—ab jane do
Chanchal—bas thodi der aur raj..pls
Mai—mai ab chalta hu...apna dhyan rakhna...ok bye
Chanchal—bye...good night..raj...kal mai intazar karungi
Badi mushkil se chanchal ne chhoda to mai use kal phir milne ka bol kar vaha se hospital aa gaya...jaha veer baitha mera intazar kar raha tha
Mai—kaam hua... ?
Veer—hunnn
Mai—kya khabar hai..... ?
Veer—khabar achchi nahi hai….tum na hi suno to behtar hai
Mai—mai janna chahta hu…kya hua hai paridhi didi ko….?..kya chhupaya hai sabne... ?
Veer—sunkar tumhe bahut dard hoga...pls..
Mai—mai phir bhi janna chahta hu
Veer—to theek hai..suno.********************
Mai (shocked)—whattttt…….?..par kaise…?…
Veer—baat ye hai ki**************
Mai—impossible…….ye nahi ho sakta……mai aisa hargij nahi hone dunga
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Gajab ka update bhai. Lekin ye pelaridhi ko kya hua he aur wo kaha he. Usake bare me itna bada suspense dediya. Uday ne kise marne ke liya kaha he chanchal ya chandani.
Waiti g 4 next update
Waiti g 4 next update
CG
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bahut hi shandaar update hai bhai....... mazaa aagaya padh kar.
lekin ye hua kya hai PAridhi ko dekhna padegaaaaaaaaaaaaa
lekin ye hua kya hai PAridhi ko dekhna padegaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Sanju
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Ab kaise mod par lake khada kar diya intazar hii nahi hota . .. Nice update bhai and paridhi ke sath kya huya tha dekhte hai
anrohit
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Jitu kumar
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Awesome update bhai,
aakhir kar maa ko hosh aa hi gaya
aur kal doctor unhe aur divya ko discharge
bhi kar denge,
uday sab kuchh thik dekh kar shock
ho gaya ab vo kuchh bada plan kar rha
hai,
paridhi ke sath aakhir aisa kya hua
hai jo ghar ke sabhi log chhupa
rhe hai,
chanchal ne aakhir kar apne pyar ka ijahar
kar hi diya,
dekhte hai ki uday kispar attack karvane wala hai,
Waiting for next update
aakhir kar maa ko hosh aa hi gaya
aur kal doctor unhe aur divya ko discharge
bhi kar denge,
uday sab kuchh thik dekh kar shock
ho gaya ab vo kuchh bada plan kar rha
hai,
paridhi ke sath aakhir aisa kya hua
hai jo ghar ke sabhi log chhupa
rhe hai,
chanchal ne aakhir kar apne pyar ka ijahar
kar hi diya,
dekhte hai ki uday kispar attack karvane wala hai,
Waiting for next update
Raguhalkal
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Bhai aap itne din se yaha per ho or muje bataya tak nahi kya nainsaafi hai bhai apka
Or apka dusri story chamatkar namani ye sab yaha pe bahut age bad chuki hai jabki desi bees per waise hi padi hai mai yaha to pad leta
Chalo jane do bhool gaye honge
Or aaj ke update ke bare me baat karu to bahut acha to nahi ta per acha ta kyunki ek update me aap do do suspence nahi dale to acha hai wo kounsi hai to suno
1 uday kisko marne bola
2 paridi didi ke saath kya hua
Or apka dusri story chamatkar namani ye sab yaha pe bahut age bad chuki hai jabki desi bees per waise hi padi hai mai yaha to pad leta
Chalo jane do bhool gaye honge
Or aaj ke update ke bare me baat karu to bahut acha to nahi ta per acha ta kyunki ek update me aap do do suspence nahi dale to acha hai wo kounsi hai to suno
1 uday kisko marne bola
2 paridi didi ke saath kya hua
Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Kya likhte ho yaar.
Har ek line Kamal kr dete h aapke.
Soch se bhi upar.
Sala is Uday ka kuchh kro bhai.
Chanchal ke saath batcheet dilchasp rahi.
Dekhe kya karta h Raaj is bare me ?
N Jane is Baar kya karega ??
Kya hua hai Paridhi ki , kya bataya veer ne ??
Is Baar bhi suspense....
Or isilye ,
Aage ka intjar
Bahut khoob superb.
Kya likhte ho yaar.
Har ek line Kamal kr dete h aapke.
Soch se bhi upar.
Sala is Uday ka kuchh kro bhai.
Chanchal ke saath batcheet dilchasp rahi.
Dekhe kya karta h Raaj is bare me ?
N Jane is Baar kya karega ??
Kya hua hai Paridhi ki , kya bataya veer ne ??
Is Baar bhi suspense....
Or isilye ,
Aage ka intjar
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