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Update ki jitana bhi tarif karun kam hoga....
Raj ne kidney donation ki bat sab se chhupa gaya, par payal se chup nahi payi.... payal ka pyar sabse anokha hai...
Ab to wo ek pal ke liye bhi raj ko apne se dur nahi karegi...

Sab narmada maa ki darshan ke liye ja rahe hai, raj ke chahne walon ke man me ek anjana dar sa baith gaya hai....
Par abhi tak sandhya aur chanchal ke man me Raj ko nuksan pahunchane ka khayal nahi aaya hai....
Sayad raj ko khatra kisi aur se ho....
Akram ke nani ko sapne me shayad aane vale khatre ke bare mai kuchh abhas hua ho....
Lagta hai ratna aur Prachandasur raj ke 6th janm se juden hai.... kya Ratna apni laj bacha payegi?...ye pura typical damsels in distress wali situation ho gai hai..
Dekhna dilchasp hoga kahani ka rukh is aur kaise mudti hai..
Ab sayad agle kuchh updates dhamakedar hone wale hai.....
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UPDATE**112

Party shaam ko thi...jiski taiyari ho chuki thi...chhoti si pooja ke baad narmada ji ke darshan karne jane ka plan rakha.....


Guru ji ke aane ke baad pooja ka kaam chalu ho gaya...aaj kafi log unse bahut kuch puchna chahte the...


Karib do ghante chali pooja ke baad sabhi unhe gher kar baith gaye….


Guru ji—putri tum sab ke mann me jo bhi shanka hai..mai uske uttar me bas itna hi kahunga ki ye samay ab sabki pariksha ka hai….apne dhairya aur sanyam ko barkarar rakhte huye us bhagwan par vishwas rakhe…


Mamta—lekin gur ji…hamara mann itna vichlit kyo hai aaj…?


Guru ji—har ghatna ke piche koi na koi karan chhupa hota hai…putri…is srasti me koi bhi ghatna akaran nahi hoti hai…


Payal—guru ji…raj ke upar to koi sankat nahi hai na…?


Guru ji—ye tumhari bhi pariksha ka samay hai putri..bas apni pariksha par dhyan do…

Payal—jane se pahle apna ashirwad mere raj ko bhi dete jana guru ji..mai abhi use lati hu…


Payal didi mujhe kamre se utha layi…maine guru ji ko pranam kiya…


Guru ji—sada kalyan ho putra…tumhare jaisi mahan atma yugo yugo me hi janam leti hai…jaha aaj manav kewal apne vyaktigat swarth me hi lipt hai…sabse pahle vo apne hit ahit ke bare me sochta hai…vo apni biwi bachcho aur apni sasural ke logo ko hi asli duniya samajhta hai…unke aage maa baap ko bhi tuchchh manta hai…tumne in sab se upar uthkar jo karya kiya hai vo tumhare ek uttam manav hone ko siddh karta hai…tum vakai me itihas ki dharohar ho…


Guru ji ne sabke prashno ka gol matol uttar dekar chale gaye…


Neha—didi…guru ji ki baat kuch samajh me nahi aayi..


Mitali—koun si aur kaisi pariksha ka samay hai hum sabka…?

Mamta—guru ji ki bato se meri ashanka ko aur badha diya hai....nishchay hi kuch ghatit hone wala hai...warna vo aise ghuma fira kar jawab nahi dete...


Payal (mann me)—guru ji ne meri baat ka spast uttar nahi diya...jarur raj ke upar hi kisi ki buri nazar hai..kahi koi anarth ho uske sath isse pahle mujhe savdhan rahna hoga...mai ab raj ko akela nahi chhodungi....


Divya (mann me)—Jarur mere saajan se judi koi baat hai jo guru ji jan kar bhi batana nahi chahte...mai sandhya aur chanchal ko apne manshubo me kamyab nahi hone dungi...mai saajan ko akela nahi chhodungi...


Pooja khatam hone ke baad sabne lunch kiya...phir narmada maiya ke darshan ke liye jane ko taiyar ho gaye


Payal didi ek taraf se mera hath pakde thi to dusri or se divya ek hath tham ke chal rahi thi....Ruchi didi aage aur Paridhi didi pichhe…


Payal didi sab ko apni nazaro se scan karte huye chal rahi thi lekin divya ka dhyan sirf sandhya par tha….

Yaha aane ke baad sabne pahle narmada ji ko agarbatti jalakar prasad chadhaya…


Phir kuch ka mann boating ka karne laga to hum sab ek badi boat par aa gaye…


Tab tak vaha chanchal bhi aa gayi jise dekh kar sab ko gussa aane laga…sab ke mann ke chhupa khatre ka darr badh gaya chanchal ko dekh….


Payal (gusse me)—ye yaha kyo aayi hai…?


Mai—shant didi…use maine hi bulaya hai…isliye koi kuch nahi bolega usko…


Payal—tujhe aaj kal us kalmuhi ka bada khyal aane laga hai…tu bhale hi sab bhul jaye par mai kabhi nahi bhul sakti…kabhi nahi…


Mahoul ko garam hota dekh maine baat ka rukh palatne ka soch liya….


Mai—kyo na kuch manoranjan ho jaye….


Uday—ye badhiya idea hai…


Mai—sab apne apne mann ki baat kahenge..


Kajal—sab se pahle bhabhi...


Mamta—mera mann to kewal mere bete me hai…vo khush to mai khush..mere mann me uski khushi ke siwa kuch nahi hai…


Paridhi—mere mann me bhi raj ki khushi ke siwa kuch nahi hai


Ruchi—
“Jane kyo aaj kal,Tumhari kami akharti hai bahut

Yado ke band kamre me,Zindgi sisakti hai bahut


Panapne nahi deta kabhi,Bedard si uss khwahish ko

Mahsus tumhe jo karne ki,Koshish karti hai bahut


Daave karti hai zindgi,Jo har din tujhe bhulane ke

Kisi na kisi bahane se,Yaad tujhe karti hai bahut


Aahat se bhi chounk jaye, Mushkurane se hi katraye

Malum nahi kyo zindgi, Jeene se darti hai bahut" ...



Veer—
"Dost vahi jo apko apna maan sake

Apke har gum ko bin kahe jaan sake

Aap chal rahe hon tez barish me

Magar pani me bhi apke anshoo pahchan sake"….



Maine uthkar veer ko gale se laga liya…


Veer (mann me)—tune kuch nahi bataya mujhe..lekin tere har dard ko main bahut achchi tarah se janta hu...meri yaad dast chali gayi ho magar apni kasam aaj bhi yaad hai mujhe....mere dost....


Aise hi sabne apni baat kahi..divya ne kuch nahi kaha sab uske mann ki baat jante the...matlab Raj ko nahi balki saajan ko jante the...


Payal—mera bhi sab ko pata hai..ki meri duniya Raj se hi shuru aur Raj par hi khatam..meri subah bhi raj aur shaam bhi raj...


Kavita—bhaiya aap bhi kuch bolo ab....


Mai—mujhe kuch nahi aata…


Mamta—bol de beta jab sab ka mann hai...


Mai—theek hai...


Subah teri Raat teri aur din bhar baat teri

Chahta to hu yaado ko bhi, par kuch alag hi hai baat teri

Chahat yahi din raat meri, milne ki bane tumse baat meri

Kuch aise mil jaye hum, mai tera saavan tu barsaat meri

Kuch alag hi hai baat teri.....

Jab milte hain to hoth sile, kuch bhi na ho paye baat meri

Bas yu hi ankho se ankhe mile, kya isse bhali thi yaad teri

Kuch alag hi hai baat teri…..


Awadhesh—wah…jeeta rah mere sher..vaise ye kiske liye tha….?


Mai—chachu..ye jiske liye bhi tha…vo samajh gaya


Vaha baithe logo me se Divya, Payal, Sandhya, Ruchi, Diksha, Mitali, Kajal, Meera, Chanchal, Paridhi aur Pari ise apne liye samajh kar mann hi mann bahut khush ho rahi thi….


Pooja—lekin bhaiya ye cheating hai…ye shayri maine padhi huyi hai kisi pagal writer anandsngh12 ki story me Aj1980 ne ye kahi thi….

Mai—arey meri bholi bahna…hum india me rahte hain..yaha ek hi usul hai…Jiski Lathi uski bhains…arey jab annu malik kisi dusre ki gaano ki dhun churakar apni bata deta hai to mai kyo nahi…


Sandhya—raj uss pahad par chalte hain…vaha se photo lenge....


Kiran—ha bhai chalo na...


Payal—nahi...vo kahi nahi jayega...


Divya—didi sahi bol rahi hain...vo pahad bahut upar hai.. hum yahi theek hain...


Kavita—pls bhaiya...


Chanchal—ha raj chalo na


Payal—dur hat...raj ke paas bhi mat aana samjhi...


Uday—chalo jao beta...jab tumhari bahno ka mann hai to


Mai—theek hai chacha ji….


Hum sab kisi tarah uss pahad ki choti par aa gaye...vaha par sabhi digital camera se ek dusre ki photo khichne lage....


Sabne mere sath me apni apni alag photo khichayi....lekin payal didi mere bilkul aas paas hi rahi…


Sarita—ek photo meri gudiya ke sath bhi raj…


Mai—ye bhi koi kahne ki baat hai…


Mai divya ka hath pakad ke apne paas khich liya…


Sandhya—thoda kinare par khade ho jao raj….vaha se pahad ke niche ka bhi seen badhiya ayega sath me….


Payal—nahi nahi jyada kinare nahi raj….


Sarita mousi photo lene lagi meri aur divya ki tabhi

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Payal (jor se)—Raaaajjjjjjjjjjj......


Divya—Saajjjjaaaaannnnnnn........

Vahi dusri taraf.......


Ratna ko janjeero se jakad kar nagar ke beech chourahe par le jaya gaya.....


Charo taraf vaha logo ki apar bheed jama thi.....sab is atyachachar ka apni ankho se khade hokar tamasha dekh rahe the......


Ratna ke hotho se aur lagbhag poore sharir se khoon bah raha tha....use bandi grah se ghasitate huye yaha chourahe tak laya gaya tha....


P’asur—hahaha.....ab bula apne saajan ko….sab tere saajan ko dekhne ke liye aaj yaha aaye hain....


Aaj teri izzat in sabke samne utarne wali hai….sab tere is khubsurat jism ko nirvastra darshan karenge aur teri izzat ko taar taar hote huye bhi....


Bula saajanko apne...hahahaha....saajaaannnnn....aa ja saajannnn....hahaha

Ratna (rote huye)—us bhagwan se darr papi….ek abla ladki par apni mardangi dikha kar apne aap ko veer kahta hai....arey thu hai teri aisi mardangi par....


P’asur (jor se)—Ratnaaaaaa....tune bahut hamara apmaan kar liya....hamari mardangi ko chunouti deti hai...ab dekh mai tujhe dikhata hu...apni mardangi sab ke samne....


Ratna (rote huye)—saajan....kaha ho tum….aaj tumhari ratna ki izzat khatre me hai.....saajan aa jao..nahi to tumhari ratna jeete ji aaj mar jayegi....saajan kaha ho.....


P’asur—hahaha....aur ro le.....aaj ke baad teri kismat me sirf rona hi likha hai....ab bhi kahta hu bata de mujhe vo mani kaha hai....shayad teri izzat lutne se bach jaye sabke samne....


Ratna (chillate rote)—nahi...kabhi nahi bataungi...chahe to meri jaan le le.....


P’asur—teri jaan le ke kya karunga.....ek aurat ki sabse keemti cheez uski izzat hoti hai....aaj mai vahi lutunga..teri izzat....aur phir mere baad ye sab log bari bari se tera maza lenge....hahahaha..


Ratna (rote huye jor se)—Saajjjaaan......saajaaannn


P’asur haste huye Ratna ki sari khich deta hai….


Ratna jor jor se saajan ko pukare ja rahi thi rote huye…


P’asur ka hath jaise hi ratna ki choli kholne ko aage badhe…..tabhi….

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P’asur (jor se)—koun hai...... ?


Y....A....M....R....A....J

 

Malik-18

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MERE KHEYAL SE AJ SUSPENSE KUCH ZEYADA HI HO GEYA HAI...
CHLO YAMRAAJ KA TO SMAJ MEIN ATA HAI K WO RATNA KI IZAT
BACHANE A GEYA IS MEIN KOI MASLA NAHI...

LEKIN YE TO PAYAL AUR DIVIYA NE RAAAJJJJJJJ KAR K PUKARA
IS SE ITNA TO SMAJ MEIN ATA HAI K KUCH HUA HAI AB KYA HUA
PTA NAHI AUR YEHI SOCHTE SOCHTE SAR DARD KARNE LAG
GEYA...KYUN DALTE HO BHAI ITNE SUSPENSE JIS SE BANDE
KI JAAN HI CHALLI JAYE...

AGAR TO RAJ US PAHARI SE GIR GEYA HAI TO DIVIYA NAHI
CHORNE WALI SANDEYA KO KYUN K USI NE INHE KAHA THA
K KINAARE PAR KHARE HO...BAKI DEKHTE HIAN K AGE KYA
HO GA...

RAJ PAYAL DI AUR DIVIYA KO BTA KYUN NAHI DETA K CHANCHAL
UN KI BARI SAGI BEHAN HAI...JIS SE SHYD UN KA THORA
GUSSA KAM HO JAYE...

VEER KI YAAD-DASHT AGAR MIT CHUKI HAI TO PHIR USE
YE KESE YAAD REH GEYA RAAJ K BARE MEIN...JO K WO
KHUD SOCH RHA HAI K USE RAAJ K BARE MEIN SAB PATA
HAI CHAHE US KI YAAD-DASHT HI KYUN NAH CHALI GAYI HO...

BHAI AB TO STORY MEIN KUCH HIGH LEVEL KI SUSPENSE
CHAL RAHE HAIN...BHAI AB SUSPENSE KHATAM BHI KAR DO

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