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SAAJAN
UPDATE- 206
5th Janam Ki Amar Prem Kahani....​

Hazaro pyaliyo ke nashe se madhosh unn ratnari ankho me na jane koun sa aisa akarsan tha, koun sa aisa sammohan tha ki dekhte hi jisne mujhe ek bar me hi awaak, stabdh aur patthar jaisa jadwat bana diya tha uss samay. Behad adbhut tha uska soundarya jisne meri antar aatma tak ko apni sundarta ki chamak se udbhasit kar diya tha uss bhayanak barsati raat me.

Tabhi vajra swar se aas maan phat pada aur jor jor se musladhar barish hone lagi aur pishachini jaisi kali raat aur bhi bhayanak ho uthi.

Tabhi achanak phir jor ki bijli chamki…door akash tak ek chamkili rekha khich gayi aur ussi ke sath hi mera sammohan bhi bhang ho gaya.

Ab aage......

Jitu (mann me)—iss bhayanak andheri kali raat me koun hai yeh ladki.... ?

Bhay, vishmay aur sanshay se bhar gaya tha mera mann…uss ghani kali, barish bhari raat me uss roopangana ka iss tarah aise samay me yaha aana bada hi vichitra lag raha tha mujhe.

Jitu—aap..! koun hain aap…?

Main aage kuch samajh pata ki isse pahle hi vah ashcharya janak dhang se vaha se aise gayab ho gayi jaise ki uss jagah kabhi thi hi nahi....mere liye ye badi hi hairat ki ghatna thi....maine uth kar mashal ki roshni me bahar nikal kar dekha kintu ab vaha koi nahi tha....agar tha to bas door door tak phaila ghanghor andhkar.

Main vapis lout kar bistar par let gaya kintu meri ankho se uss ladki ka vah youvan soundarya ojhal hi nahi ho raha tha...uske vishay me sochte sochte na jane kab main nidra devi ki agosh me sama gaya..

Subah kuch kolahal ke swar se meri neend bhang huyi to main uth kar baith gaya....mujhe jagte dekh vaha bahar baithe kuch sainik idhar udhar jane lage to maine ek ko apne paas bulaya.

Sainik—pranam yuvraj

Jitu—ye kaisa swar sunayi de raha tha abhi... ?

Sainik—vo asal me yuvraj...raat me gaon ke ek hi ghar ke teen bachche achanak gayab ho gaye hain...kuch sainik uske baare me hi baate kar rahe the.

Jitu (hairan)—kyaaaaa….? Raat me…..? kisne gayab kiya unhe…aur sainiko ko kaise pata chali ye baat….?

Sainik—ji yuvraj….kisne gayab kiya iss baat ke vishay me to koi jankari nahi malum huyi kintu subah subah kuch sainik gaon ka pahra laga rahe the tab ek ghar me rona peetna macha hua tha…vaha ja kar puchne par ye baat malum huyi.

Jitu—ohhhh…..ek aur ghatna…! Akhir ho kya raha hai yaha…? Koun si sazish rachi ja rahi hai aur kyo….?

Sainik chupchap apna sir jhukaye mere samne khada raha...maine jane ko kah diya aur khud bhi dainik kriya se nivratt ho kar pooja aradhna me lipt ho gaya...tatpashchat kuch jalpan karne ke uparant main gaon me ussi ghar ki taraf nikal gaya jaha raat me ye ghatna huyi thi....halanki mousam abhi bhi saaf nahi hua tha...aas maan me kale badal apna dera jamaye huye the abhi bhi.....gaon me puchne par asani se uss ghar ka pata chal gaya.

Vaha ghar me abhi bhi logo ki bheed jama thi sath me uss maa ka karun krandan bhi sunayi de raha tha jiske jigar ke tukdo ko uski mamta se vanchit kar diya gaya tha raat me....uska rona dekh kar mera bhi hriday bhar aaya kintu maine bhavnao me bahne ki bajaye khud ko sanyamit rakhne ka prayas kiya.

Jitu (ek admi se)—bhai ye sab kaise ho gaya.... ?

Admi—kya bataye bhai...ye to ab roj ka hi rona ho gaya hai....na jane kis manhoos ki nazar lag gayi hai hamare iss gaon ko.... ?

Jitu—bachche bade bade rahe honge na.... ? kya vo bahar ghum rahe the.... ?

Admi—teen hi to bachche the bechari ke...do ladki aur ek ladka....teeno ki umra abhi dus saal ki bhi nahi huyi thi....pichhle saal pati bimari se khatam ho gaya aur ab uske teeno bachche bhi nahi rahe...bachcho ke sahare hi to bechari jee rahi thi....bhagwan bhi kitna nirdayi hai.

Jitu—kitne samay ki baat hai ye.... ?

Admi—Yahi koi aadhi raat ke karib ki ghatna hai…maa aur teeno bachche ek hi kamre me so rahe the…aadhi raat ke baad achanak tez hawa ka jhonka aaya jisse chimni bujh gayi….thodi der me jab hawa band huyi to bechari ne uth kar phir se chimni jalayi…aur ujala hote hi uski cheekh nikal gayi…uske teeno bachche bistar se gayab the…vo hawa ka jhonka apne sath unn masum bachcho ko bhi le gaya…shayad vo aaya hi isiliye tha.

Jitu—yeh to bahut hi bura hua bhai…

Dusra admi—kisi buri aatma ka saya hai gaon me jo sab ko ek ek kar ke nigale ja raha hai….ab to ye gaon rahne layak hi nahi rah gaya hai.

Pahla admi—baat to tum sahi kah rahe ho kaka…kintu apna ghar aur jamin chhod kar hum jayenge bhi to kaha jayenge…?

Teesra admi—Hamne suna hai ki Yuvraj yaha aane wale hain…..unke aane tak to hame yaha rukna hi chahiye..akhir unko bhi to pata chale ki unke rajya ki praja ke sath kya kya ho raha hai….?

Pahla admi—arey bhai, yuvraj ke aane se bhi kya ho jayega…aur mujhe to nahi lagta ki yuvraj yaha ayenge…? Unko avashya beech me kisi ne yaha ki ghatnao ke vishay me bata diya hoga aur vo bhi maharaj ki tarah vahi se lout gaye honge apne raj mahal…

Dusra admi—nahi bhai….hamare yuvraj aise nahi hain…..vo janta ki baat sunte hain….mujhe vishwash hai ki vo jarur ayenge….hame unki pratiksha karni chahiye.

Pahla admi—unke yaha aane tak jab koi iss gaon me jivit hi nahi bachega to unke aane ya na aane ka kya matlab..?

Unn sab ki baate sun kar mera mann kafi vichlit aur dukh se bhar gaya……uss maa ka rona mujhse dekha nahi ja raha tha…main uske dukh ko door karna chahta tha kintu vivash tha uss samay…mujhe to inn sab ghatnao ke piche ke sutradhar ke vishay me koi sutra nahi mila tha ab tak.

Parantu phir bhi uss maa ko santwana dena to avashyak tha hi….kyon ki ye insaniyat ka farz bhi tha aur uss rajya ka yuvraj hone ke naate mera naitik kartavya bhi tha…ki main apni praja ke har har dukh me unke sath khada ho kar unki sahayta hetu sadaiv tatpar rahu….main uss aurat ke paas ja kar usko santwana dene laga.

Jitu—bahan jo bhi hua, vo atyant dukhdayi hai….main tumhare mrit pati ko to jivit nahi la sakta kintu agar tumhare bachcho ko avashya launga vo jis haal me bhi honge….ye ek bhai ka vachan hai apni iss bahan ko….

Ek admi—kaha se le aaoge tum…? Jhuthi dilasa mat do bechari ko....hum sab jante hain ki unko ab koi nahi la sakta.

Jitu—ye aap kaise kah sakte hain ki ab unhe lana asambhav hai... ? parishram karne se hi kisi karya me safalta milti hai....yaha ek jagah baith kar kisi baat ka anuman laga ke uska parinam soch lene se kabhi koi karya siddh nahi hota bhai.

Vo maa (rote huye)—mere bachcho ko koi dhoond lao...unke siwa mera ab koi nahi hai....

Jitu—upar wale par bharosa rakho bahan…sab theek ho jayega….

Ek aurat—kaha se theek hoga sab…? Koun jayega uss kali pahadi ki taraf marne ke liye…?

Jitu—main jaunga….haan, main jaunga.

Main vaha se nikal kar uss aurat aur uske bachcho ke baare me sochte huye gaon se bahar ki oor nikal gaya… vaise ye jyada bada gaon to nahi tha lagbhag chalis pachas ghar the….charo taraf door tak phaile huye hare bhare khet… kheto ke bagal se lambi kataro me lage nariyal ke kafi oonche oonche ped, gaon ko lagbhag charo oor se ghere huye dhumil akash ko chhute se aur ek dusre se gunthe huye baans ke jhurmut…matmaile pani se bhare teen char adhkachche pokhar, aur gaon ki seema se thoda door hatkar vakrakar ghum kar bahti huyi ek patli si nadi..uska naam tha rupakshi.

Gaon ke bahar unn door tak phaile kheto se laga hua jungle, aur uss jungle se lagi huyi kali pahadi…aur kali pahadi ke uss paar bana hua ek behad prachin rahasyamayi qila…main apne hi dhyan me khoya hua gaon ke bahar nadi ki oor nikal aaya tha..tabhi kisi ki awaz sun kar mera dhyan toota to samne kal wala admi mujhse kuch kah raha tha.

“Arey bhai kaha khoye huye chale ja rahe ho…main kab se awaz de raha hu tumko…?” usne shikayat bhare shabdo me ulahna dete huye kaha.

Jitu—kuch nahi bhai..bas kuch soch me dooba hua tha..isliye shayad mera dhyan nahi gaya hoga apki taraf…?

“Maine tumhe udhar gaon se bahar jungle ki taraf ke raste par chalte dekha to awaz de raha tha, udhar jane se rokne ke liye.” Uss admi ne aage kaha.

Tabhi meri nazar nadi ke kinare bani ek choti si kutiya par chali gayi to mujhe kafi ashcharya hua ki jab gaon me aisi vichitra ghanaye ghatit ho rahi hain tab aise me yaha gaon se bahar kutiya banane ka kya prayojan ho sakta hai.. ?

Jitu—dhanyawad bhai mujhe dhyan dilane ke liye...vaise vo kutiya kis ki hai... ? kya koi rahta hai vaha... ?

"Haan, usme ek mahatma rahte hain...bechare bahut buddhe ho chuke hain...lagbhag ek sau bees saal ki umra hogi unki...din bhar kutiya me rah kar bhajan karte rahte hain aur shaam ko gaon me bhiksha maangne ke liye nikalte hain.. yahi unka roj ka niyam hai." Uss admi ne jankari dete huye kaha.

Jitu—achcha to ye baat hai.

"Theek hai bhai..apna dhyan rakhna aur jitna ho sake uss jungle se door hi rahna…ab main chalta hu." Usne mujhe samjhate huye kaha aur phir gaon ki taraf chal diya.

Uske jane ke baad main kuch der tak uss mahatma ke bare me sochta raha aur mann me vichar kiya ki aaj dophar me unki jhopdi me milne jaunga….ye mann hi mann abhi soch hi raha tha ki achanak tabhi mere sine me ek bechaini si hone lagi…kuch hi samay me ye bechaini had se jyada badh gayi to maine vaha se jana hi behtar samjha aur gaon jane ke jaise hi palta vaise hi kisi se takra gaya.

Takrane wali koi ladki thi…mujhse takrate hi vo dhadam se niche gir gayi….uske bade bade kesh hawa me lahra uthe girne se…uska chehra niche ki taraf tha jisse mujhe dikhayi nahi diya…girte hi uske mukh se koyl si masumiyat bhari awaz nikli…

"Aaahhhh….Maar Dalungiii." Apni naak ke neeche ungli ghumate huye usne badi hi masumiyat se kaha.

Kahne ke sath hi vo palat gayi aur phir uske chehre par nazar padte hi main jaise apni sab sudh budh bhul baitha..
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Awesome update bhai
anandsngh12 said:
SAAJAN
UPDATE- 206
5th Janam Ki Amar Prem Kahani....​

Hazaro pyaliyo ke nashe se madhosh unn ratnari ankho me na jane koun sa aisa akarsan tha, koun sa aisa sammohan tha ki dekhte hi jisne mujhe ek bar me hi awaak, stabdh aur patthar jaisa jadwat bana diya tha uss samay. Behad adbhut tha uska soundarya jisne meri antar aatma tak ko apni sundarta ki chamak se udbhasit kar diya tha uss bhayanak barsati raat me.

Tabhi vajra swar se aas maan phat pada aur jor jor se musladhar barish hone lagi aur pishachini jaisi kali raat aur bhi bhayanak ho uthi.

Tabhi achanak phir jor ki bijli chamki…door akash tak ek chamkili rekha khich gayi aur ussi ke sath hi mera sammohan bhi bhang ho gaya.

Ab aage......

Jitu (mann me)—iss bhayanak andheri kali raat me koun hai yeh ladki.... ?

Bhay, vishmay aur sanshay se bhar gaya tha mera mann…uss ghani kali, barish bhari raat me uss roopangana ka iss tarah aise samay me yaha aana bada hi vichitra lag raha tha mujhe.

Jitu—aap..! koun hain aap…?

Main aage kuch samajh pata ki isse pahle hi vah ashcharya janak dhang se vaha se aise gayab ho gayi jaise ki uss jagah kabhi thi hi nahi....mere liye ye badi hi hairat ki ghatna thi....maine uth kar mashal ki roshni me bahar nikal kar dekha kintu ab vaha koi nahi tha....agar tha to bas door door tak phaila ghanghor andhkar.

Main vapis lout kar bistar par let gaya kintu meri ankho se uss ladki ka vah youvan soundarya ojhal hi nahi ho raha tha...uske vishay me sochte sochte na jane kab main nidra devi ki agosh me sama gaya..

Subah kuch kolahal ke swar se meri neend bhang huyi to main uth kar baith gaya....mujhe jagte dekh vaha bahar baithe kuch sainik idhar udhar jane lage to maine ek ko apne paas bulaya.

Sainik—pranam yuvraj

Jitu—ye kaisa swar sunayi de raha tha abhi... ?

Sainik—vo asal me yuvraj...raat me gaon ke ek hi ghar ke teen bachche achanak gayab ho gaye hain...kuch sainik uske baare me hi baate kar rahe the.

Jitu (hairan)—kyaaaaa….? Raat me…..? kisne gayab kiya unhe…aur sainiko ko kaise pata chali ye baat….?

Sainik—ji yuvraj….kisne gayab kiya iss baat ke vishay me to koi jankari nahi malum huyi kintu subah subah kuch sainik gaon ka pahra laga rahe the tab ek ghar me rona peetna macha hua tha…vaha ja kar puchne par ye baat malum huyi.

Jitu—ohhhh…..ek aur ghatna…! Akhir ho kya raha hai yaha…? Koun si sazish rachi ja rahi hai aur kyo….?

Sainik chupchap apna sir jhukaye mere samne khada raha...maine jane ko kah diya aur khud bhi dainik kriya se nivratt ho kar pooja aradhna me lipt ho gaya...tatpashchat kuch jalpan karne ke uparant main gaon me ussi ghar ki taraf nikal gaya jaha raat me ye ghatna huyi thi....halanki mousam abhi bhi saaf nahi hua tha...aas maan me kale badal apna dera jamaye huye the abhi bhi.....gaon me puchne par asani se uss ghar ka pata chal gaya.

Vaha ghar me abhi bhi logo ki bheed jama thi sath me uss maa ka karun krandan bhi sunayi de raha tha jiske jigar ke tukdo ko uski mamta se vanchit kar diya gaya tha raat me....uska rona dekh kar mera bhi hriday bhar aaya kintu maine bhavnao me bahne ki bajaye khud ko sanyamit rakhne ka prayas kiya.

Jitu (ek admi se)—bhai ye sab kaise ho gaya.... ?

Admi—kya bataye bhai...ye to ab roj ka hi rona ho gaya hai....na jane kis manhoos ki nazar lag gayi hai hamare iss gaon ko.... ?

Jitu—bachche bade bade rahe honge na.... ? kya vo bahar ghum rahe the.... ?

Admi—teen hi to bachche the bechari ke...do ladki aur ek ladka....teeno ki umra abhi dus saal ki bhi nahi huyi thi....pichhle saal pati bimari se khatam ho gaya aur ab uske teeno bachche bhi nahi rahe...bachcho ke sahare hi to bechari jee rahi thi....bhagwan bhi kitna nirdayi hai.

Jitu—kitne samay ki baat hai ye.... ?

Admi—Yahi koi aadhi raat ke karib ki ghatna hai…maa aur teeno bachche ek hi kamre me so rahe the…aadhi raat ke baad achanak tez hawa ka jhonka aaya jisse chimni bujh gayi….thodi der me jab hawa band huyi to bechari ne uth kar phir se chimni jalayi…aur ujala hote hi uski cheekh nikal gayi…uske teeno bachche bistar se gayab the…vo hawa ka jhonka apne sath unn masum bachcho ko bhi le gaya…shayad vo aaya hi isiliye tha.

Jitu—yeh to bahut hi bura hua bhai…

Dusra admi—kisi buri aatma ka saya hai gaon me jo sab ko ek ek kar ke nigale ja raha hai….ab to ye gaon rahne layak hi nahi rah gaya hai.

Pahla admi—baat to tum sahi kah rahe ho kaka…kintu apna ghar aur jamin chhod kar hum jayenge bhi to kaha jayenge…?

Teesra admi—Hamne suna hai ki Yuvraj yaha aane wale hain…..unke aane tak to hame yaha rukna hi chahiye..akhir unko bhi to pata chale ki unke rajya ki praja ke sath kya kya ho raha hai….?

Pahla admi—arey bhai, yuvraj ke aane se bhi kya ho jayega…aur mujhe to nahi lagta ki yuvraj yaha ayenge…? Unko avashya beech me kisi ne yaha ki ghatnao ke vishay me bata diya hoga aur vo bhi maharaj ki tarah vahi se lout gaye honge apne raj mahal…

Dusra admi—nahi bhai….hamare yuvraj aise nahi hain…..vo janta ki baat sunte hain….mujhe vishwash hai ki vo jarur ayenge….hame unki pratiksha karni chahiye.

Pahla admi—unke yaha aane tak jab koi iss gaon me jivit hi nahi bachega to unke aane ya na aane ka kya matlab..?

Unn sab ki baate sun kar mera mann kafi vichlit aur dukh se bhar gaya……uss maa ka rona mujhse dekha nahi ja raha tha…main uske dukh ko door karna chahta tha kintu vivash tha uss samay…mujhe to inn sab ghatnao ke piche ke sutradhar ke vishay me koi sutra nahi mila tha ab tak.

Parantu phir bhi uss maa ko santwana dena to avashyak tha hi….kyon ki ye insaniyat ka farz bhi tha aur uss rajya ka yuvraj hone ke naate mera naitik kartavya bhi tha…ki main apni praja ke har har dukh me unke sath khada ho kar unki sahayta hetu sadaiv tatpar rahu….main uss aurat ke paas ja kar usko santwana dene laga.

Jitu—bahan jo bhi hua, vo atyant dukhdayi hai….main tumhare mrit pati ko to jivit nahi la sakta kintu agar tumhare bachcho ko avashya launga vo jis haal me bhi honge….ye ek bhai ka vachan hai apni iss bahan ko….

Ek admi—kaha se le aaoge tum…? Jhuthi dilasa mat do bechari ko....hum sab jante hain ki unko ab koi nahi la sakta.

Jitu—ye aap kaise kah sakte hain ki ab unhe lana asambhav hai... ? parishram karne se hi kisi karya me safalta milti hai....yaha ek jagah baith kar kisi baat ka anuman laga ke uska parinam soch lene se kabhi koi karya siddh nahi hota bhai.

Vo maa (rote huye)—mere bachcho ko koi dhoond lao...unke siwa mera ab koi nahi hai....

Jitu—upar wale par bharosa rakho bahan…sab theek ho jayega….

Ek aurat—kaha se theek hoga sab…? Koun jayega uss kali pahadi ki taraf marne ke liye…?

Jitu—main jaunga….haan, main jaunga.

Main vaha se nikal kar uss aurat aur uske bachcho ke baare me sochte huye gaon se bahar ki oor nikal gaya… vaise ye jyada bada gaon to nahi tha lagbhag chalis pachas ghar the….charo taraf door tak phaile huye hare bhare khet… kheto ke bagal se lambi kataro me lage nariyal ke kafi oonche oonche ped, gaon ko lagbhag charo oor se ghere huye dhumil akash ko chhute se aur ek dusre se gunthe huye baans ke jhurmut…matmaile pani se bhare teen char adhkachche pokhar, aur gaon ki seema se thoda door hatkar vakrakar ghum kar bahti huyi ek patli si nadi..uska naam tha rupakshi.

Gaon ke bahar unn door tak phaile kheto se laga hua jungle, aur uss jungle se lagi huyi kali pahadi…aur kali pahadi ke uss paar bana hua ek behad prachin rahasyamayi qila…main apne hi dhyan me khoya hua gaon ke bahar nadi ki oor nikal aaya tha..tabhi kisi ki awaz sun kar mera dhyan toota to samne kal wala admi mujhse kuch kah raha tha.

“Arey bhai kaha khoye huye chale ja rahe ho…main kab se awaz de raha hu tumko…?” usne shikayat bhare shabdo me ulahna dete huye kaha.

Jitu—kuch nahi bhai..bas kuch soch me dooba hua tha..isliye shayad mera dhyan nahi gaya hoga apki taraf…?

“Maine tumhe udhar gaon se bahar jungle ki taraf ke raste par chalte dekha to awaz de raha tha, udhar jane se rokne ke liye.” Uss admi ne aage kaha.

Tabhi meri nazar nadi ke kinare bani ek choti si kutiya par chali gayi to mujhe kafi ashcharya hua ki jab gaon me aisi vichitra ghanaye ghatit ho rahi hain tab aise me yaha gaon se bahar kutiya banane ka kya prayojan ho sakta hai.. ?

Jitu—dhanyawad bhai mujhe dhyan dilane ke liye...vaise vo kutiya kis ki hai... ? kya koi rahta hai vaha... ?

"Haan, usme ek mahatma rahte hain...bechare bahut buddhe ho chuke hain...lagbhag ek sau bees saal ki umra hogi unki...din bhar kutiya me rah kar bhajan karte rahte hain aur shaam ko gaon me bhiksha maangne ke liye nikalte hain.. yahi unka roj ka niyam hai." Uss admi ne jankari dete huye kaha.

Jitu—achcha to ye baat hai.

"Theek hai bhai..apna dhyan rakhna aur jitna ho sake uss jungle se door hi rahna…ab main chalta hu." Usne mujhe samjhate huye kaha aur phir gaon ki taraf chal diya.

Uske jane ke baad main kuch der tak uss mahatma ke bare me sochta raha aur mann me vichar kiya ki aaj dophar me unki jhopdi me milne jaunga….ye mann hi mann abhi soch hi raha tha ki achanak tabhi mere sine me ek bechaini si hone lagi…kuch hi samay me ye bechaini had se jyada badh gayi to maine vaha se jana hi behtar samjha aur gaon jane ke jaise hi palta vaise hi kisi se takra gaya.

Takrane wali koi ladki thi…mujhse takrate hi vo dhadam se niche gir gayi….uske bade bade kesh hawa me lahra uthe girne se…uska chehra niche ki taraf tha jisse mujhe dikhayi nahi diya…girte hi uske mukh se koyl si masumiyat bhari awaz nikli…

"Aaahhhh….Maar Dalungiii." Apni naak ke neeche ungli ghumate huye usne badi hi masumiyat se kaha.

Kahne ke sath hi vo palat gayi aur phir uske chehre par nazar padte hi main jaise apni sab sudh budh bhul baitha..
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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Yuvraj jitu ki manodasha ka bada hi satik chitran kiya h aapne.
Ek se ek kautuhal ho rahe h bhai is ganv me .
Ye kon aa gyi ab ??
Behtareen or Kamal ka update bhai.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

anandsngh12 said:
SAAJAN
UPDATE- 206
5th Janam Ki Amar Prem Kahani....​

Hazaro pyaliyo ke nashe se madhosh unn ratnari ankho me na jane koun sa aisa akarsan tha, koun sa aisa sammohan tha ki dekhte hi jisne mujhe ek bar me hi awaak, stabdh aur patthar jaisa jadwat bana diya tha uss samay. Behad adbhut tha uska soundarya jisne meri antar aatma tak ko apni sundarta ki chamak se udbhasit kar diya tha uss bhayanak barsati raat me.

Tabhi vajra swar se aas maan phat pada aur jor jor se musladhar barish hone lagi aur pishachini jaisi kali raat aur bhi bhayanak ho uthi.

Tabhi achanak phir jor ki bijli chamki…door akash tak ek chamkili rekha khich gayi aur ussi ke sath hi mera sammohan bhi bhang ho gaya.

Ab aage......

Jitu (mann me)—iss bhayanak andheri kali raat me koun hai yeh ladki.... ?

Bhay, vishmay aur sanshay se bhar gaya tha mera mann…uss ghani kali, barish bhari raat me uss roopangana ka iss tarah aise samay me yaha aana bada hi vichitra lag raha tha mujhe.

Jitu—aap..! koun hain aap…?

Main aage kuch samajh pata ki isse pahle hi vah ashcharya janak dhang se vaha se aise gayab ho gayi jaise ki uss jagah kabhi thi hi nahi....mere liye ye badi hi hairat ki ghatna thi....maine uth kar mashal ki roshni me bahar nikal kar dekha kintu ab vaha koi nahi tha....agar tha to bas door door tak phaila ghanghor andhkar.

Main vapis lout kar bistar par let gaya kintu meri ankho se uss ladki ka vah youvan soundarya ojhal hi nahi ho raha tha...uske vishay me sochte sochte na jane kab main nidra devi ki agosh me sama gaya..

Subah kuch kolahal ke swar se meri neend bhang huyi to main uth kar baith gaya....mujhe jagte dekh vaha bahar baithe kuch sainik idhar udhar jane lage to maine ek ko apne paas bulaya.

Sainik—pranam yuvraj

Jitu—ye kaisa swar sunayi de raha tha abhi... ?

Sainik—vo asal me yuvraj...raat me gaon ke ek hi ghar ke teen bachche achanak gayab ho gaye hain...kuch sainik uske baare me hi baate kar rahe the.

Jitu (hairan)—kyaaaaa….? Raat me…..? kisne gayab kiya unhe…aur sainiko ko kaise pata chali ye baat….?

Sainik—ji yuvraj….kisne gayab kiya iss baat ke vishay me to koi jankari nahi malum huyi kintu subah subah kuch sainik gaon ka pahra laga rahe the tab ek ghar me rona peetna macha hua tha…vaha ja kar puchne par ye baat malum huyi.

Jitu—ohhhh…..ek aur ghatna…! Akhir ho kya raha hai yaha…? Koun si sazish rachi ja rahi hai aur kyo….?

Sainik chupchap apna sir jhukaye mere samne khada raha...maine jane ko kah diya aur khud bhi dainik kriya se nivratt ho kar pooja aradhna me lipt ho gaya...tatpashchat kuch jalpan karne ke uparant main gaon me ussi ghar ki taraf nikal gaya jaha raat me ye ghatna huyi thi....halanki mousam abhi bhi saaf nahi hua tha...aas maan me kale badal apna dera jamaye huye the abhi bhi.....gaon me puchne par asani se uss ghar ka pata chal gaya.

Vaha ghar me abhi bhi logo ki bheed jama thi sath me uss maa ka karun krandan bhi sunayi de raha tha jiske jigar ke tukdo ko uski mamta se vanchit kar diya gaya tha raat me....uska rona dekh kar mera bhi hriday bhar aaya kintu maine bhavnao me bahne ki bajaye khud ko sanyamit rakhne ka prayas kiya.

Jitu (ek admi se)—bhai ye sab kaise ho gaya.... ?

Admi—kya bataye bhai...ye to ab roj ka hi rona ho gaya hai....na jane kis manhoos ki nazar lag gayi hai hamare iss gaon ko.... ?

Jitu—bachche bade bade rahe honge na.... ? kya vo bahar ghum rahe the.... ?

Admi—teen hi to bachche the bechari ke...do ladki aur ek ladka....teeno ki umra abhi dus saal ki bhi nahi huyi thi....pichhle saal pati bimari se khatam ho gaya aur ab uske teeno bachche bhi nahi rahe...bachcho ke sahare hi to bechari jee rahi thi....bhagwan bhi kitna nirdayi hai.

Jitu—kitne samay ki baat hai ye.... ?

Admi—Yahi koi aadhi raat ke karib ki ghatna hai…maa aur teeno bachche ek hi kamre me so rahe the…aadhi raat ke baad achanak tez hawa ka jhonka aaya jisse chimni bujh gayi….thodi der me jab hawa band huyi to bechari ne uth kar phir se chimni jalayi…aur ujala hote hi uski cheekh nikal gayi…uske teeno bachche bistar se gayab the…vo hawa ka jhonka apne sath unn masum bachcho ko bhi le gaya…shayad vo aaya hi isiliye tha.

Jitu—yeh to bahut hi bura hua bhai…

Dusra admi—kisi buri aatma ka saya hai gaon me jo sab ko ek ek kar ke nigale ja raha hai….ab to ye gaon rahne layak hi nahi rah gaya hai.

Pahla admi—baat to tum sahi kah rahe ho kaka…kintu apna ghar aur jamin chhod kar hum jayenge bhi to kaha jayenge…?

Teesra admi—Hamne suna hai ki Yuvraj yaha aane wale hain…..unke aane tak to hame yaha rukna hi chahiye..akhir unko bhi to pata chale ki unke rajya ki praja ke sath kya kya ho raha hai….?

Pahla admi—arey bhai, yuvraj ke aane se bhi kya ho jayega…aur mujhe to nahi lagta ki yuvraj yaha ayenge…? Unko avashya beech me kisi ne yaha ki ghatnao ke vishay me bata diya hoga aur vo bhi maharaj ki tarah vahi se lout gaye honge apne raj mahal…

Dusra admi—nahi bhai….hamare yuvraj aise nahi hain…..vo janta ki baat sunte hain….mujhe vishwash hai ki vo jarur ayenge….hame unki pratiksha karni chahiye.

Pahla admi—unke yaha aane tak jab koi iss gaon me jivit hi nahi bachega to unke aane ya na aane ka kya matlab..?

Unn sab ki baate sun kar mera mann kafi vichlit aur dukh se bhar gaya……uss maa ka rona mujhse dekha nahi ja raha tha…main uske dukh ko door karna chahta tha kintu vivash tha uss samay…mujhe to inn sab ghatnao ke piche ke sutradhar ke vishay me koi sutra nahi mila tha ab tak.

Parantu phir bhi uss maa ko santwana dena to avashyak tha hi….kyon ki ye insaniyat ka farz bhi tha aur uss rajya ka yuvraj hone ke naate mera naitik kartavya bhi tha…ki main apni praja ke har har dukh me unke sath khada ho kar unki sahayta hetu sadaiv tatpar rahu….main uss aurat ke paas ja kar usko santwana dene laga.

Jitu—bahan jo bhi hua, vo atyant dukhdayi hai….main tumhare mrit pati ko to jivit nahi la sakta kintu agar tumhare bachcho ko avashya launga vo jis haal me bhi honge….ye ek bhai ka vachan hai apni iss bahan ko….

Ek admi—kaha se le aaoge tum…? Jhuthi dilasa mat do bechari ko....hum sab jante hain ki unko ab koi nahi la sakta.

Jitu—ye aap kaise kah sakte hain ki ab unhe lana asambhav hai... ? parishram karne se hi kisi karya me safalta milti hai....yaha ek jagah baith kar kisi baat ka anuman laga ke uska parinam soch lene se kabhi koi karya siddh nahi hota bhai.

Vo maa (rote huye)—mere bachcho ko koi dhoond lao...unke siwa mera ab koi nahi hai....

Jitu—upar wale par bharosa rakho bahan…sab theek ho jayega….

Ek aurat—kaha se theek hoga sab…? Koun jayega uss kali pahadi ki taraf marne ke liye…?

Jitu—main jaunga….haan, main jaunga.

Main vaha se nikal kar uss aurat aur uske bachcho ke baare me sochte huye gaon se bahar ki oor nikal gaya… vaise ye jyada bada gaon to nahi tha lagbhag chalis pachas ghar the….charo taraf door tak phaile huye hare bhare khet… kheto ke bagal se lambi kataro me lage nariyal ke kafi oonche oonche ped, gaon ko lagbhag charo oor se ghere huye dhumil akash ko chhute se aur ek dusre se gunthe huye baans ke jhurmut…matmaile pani se bhare teen char adhkachche pokhar, aur gaon ki seema se thoda door hatkar vakrakar ghum kar bahti huyi ek patli si nadi..uska naam tha rupakshi.

Gaon ke bahar unn door tak phaile kheto se laga hua jungle, aur uss jungle se lagi huyi kali pahadi…aur kali pahadi ke uss paar bana hua ek behad prachin rahasyamayi qila…main apne hi dhyan me khoya hua gaon ke bahar nadi ki oor nikal aaya tha..tabhi kisi ki awaz sun kar mera dhyan toota to samne kal wala admi mujhse kuch kah raha tha.

“Arey bhai kaha khoye huye chale ja rahe ho…main kab se awaz de raha hu tumko…?” usne shikayat bhare shabdo me ulahna dete huye kaha.

Jitu—kuch nahi bhai..bas kuch soch me dooba hua tha..isliye shayad mera dhyan nahi gaya hoga apki taraf…?

“Maine tumhe udhar gaon se bahar jungle ki taraf ke raste par chalte dekha to awaz de raha tha, udhar jane se rokne ke liye.” Uss admi ne aage kaha.

Tabhi meri nazar nadi ke kinare bani ek choti si kutiya par chali gayi to mujhe kafi ashcharya hua ki jab gaon me aisi vichitra ghanaye ghatit ho rahi hain tab aise me yaha gaon se bahar kutiya banane ka kya prayojan ho sakta hai.. ?

Jitu—dhanyawad bhai mujhe dhyan dilane ke liye...vaise vo kutiya kis ki hai... ? kya koi rahta hai vaha... ?

"Haan, usme ek mahatma rahte hain...bechare bahut buddhe ho chuke hain...lagbhag ek sau bees saal ki umra hogi unki...din bhar kutiya me rah kar bhajan karte rahte hain aur shaam ko gaon me bhiksha maangne ke liye nikalte hain.. yahi unka roj ka niyam hai." Uss admi ne jankari dete huye kaha.

Jitu—achcha to ye baat hai.

"Theek hai bhai..apna dhyan rakhna aur jitna ho sake uss jungle se door hi rahna…ab main chalta hu." Usne mujhe samjhate huye kaha aur phir gaon ki taraf chal diya.

Uske jane ke baad main kuch der tak uss mahatma ke bare me sochta raha aur mann me vichar kiya ki aaj dophar me unki jhopdi me milne jaunga….ye mann hi mann abhi soch hi raha tha ki achanak tabhi mere sine me ek bechaini si hone lagi…kuch hi samay me ye bechaini had se jyada badh gayi to maine vaha se jana hi behtar samjha aur gaon jane ke jaise hi palta vaise hi kisi se takra gaya.

Takrane wali koi ladki thi…mujhse takrate hi vo dhadam se niche gir gayi….uske bade bade kesh hawa me lahra uthe girne se…uska chehra niche ki taraf tha jisse mujhe dikhayi nahi diya…girte hi uske mukh se koyl si masumiyat bhari awaz nikli…

"Aaahhhh….Maar Dalungiii." Apni naak ke neeche ungli ghumate huye usne badi hi masumiyat se kaha.

Kahne ke sath hi vo palat gayi aur phir uske chehre par nazar padte hi main jaise apni sab sudh budh bhul baitha..
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anandsngh12 said:
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UPDATE*265​

Maine pahredar ki taraf dekha aur usko bahut hilaya dulaya lekin vah behosh ho chuka tha..aur phir hum vaha se bahar nikal gaye uss gufa roopi dwar se…

Chalte chalte hum ek ghane jungle me pahuch gaye….abhi hum uss jungle me kuch kadam hi andar gaye the ki tabhi achanak aas maan me badal ghir aaye..mousam ka rukh tezi se badalne laga…kad kad karte huye bijli kadkadane lagi aur hawao ne bhi ugra roop dharan karna shuru kar diya.

Jungle me itna ghana andhkar chha gaya ki ek dusre ko dekh pana bhi dubhar ho gaya…aise me na to rasta hi kuch dikhayi de raha tha aur na hi manzil nazar aa rahi thi….jungli raste par har kadam mushil bhara ho chuka tha.

Divya—iss mousam ko bhi abhi hi kharab hona tha….aise me kitni der chal sakenge…?

Raj—tabhi to main tum logo ka vahi rukne ko kah raha tha.

Priyadarshini—vaha rukne se to achcha hai ki hum aap ke har sukh dukh ki humsafar bane….chahe jo bhi mushkil aaye,hum aap ke sath hi rahengi.

Raj—ab tumhe kya hua mrinal…? Itna hil dul kyo rahi ho…?

Mrinal (kasmasate huye)—saajan, mujhe niche utar do…..main bhi sab ke sath paidal chalungi.

Raj—kyo…?

Mrinal (kaan me)—pata nahi kyo lekin tumhare sharir ka sparsh mujhe uttejit hone par vivash kar raha hai main apni sakhi se dhokha nahi kar sakti….isliye mujhe bhi niche utar do..

Raj—ohhh…ye lo, chalo paidal.

Divya—saajan, hum ja kidhar rahe hain, kuch pata nahi chal raha hai….kahi aisa na ho ki hum kahi aur disha me hi bhatak jaye….?

Raj—hame uttar disha me jana hai, bas chalte raho jab tak ki hamari manzil hame mil nahi jati.

Mrinal—aap apni shakti se bhi to vaha jaldi pahuch sakte hain.

Raj—haan, pahuch bhi sakte hain aur kadachit nahi bhi lekin vyaktigat swarth ke liye shaktiyo ka prayog karna sarvatha anuchit aur dharm viruddh hai, vishesh kar ek manav ke liye....kintu tum aur priyadarshini rasta dekhne ke liye apni shaktiyo ka istemal kar sakti ho kyon ki tum dono dev kanya ho.

Priyadarshini—nahi...main nahi karungi aisa kuch bhi....jo kasht aap ko hoga vahi mujhe bhi unn kashto ka ehsaas hone dijiye.....aaaaaaaaa

Raj—kya hua...tum chillayi kyo... ?

Priyadarshini—vo…pair me kaanta ghus gaya hai….

Raj—ruko main nikalta hu.

Maine niche baith kar priyadarshini ke pair se kaanta nikal kar door phenk diya…mousam aur bhi roudra roop dharan karta ja raha tha….lekin ye achchi baat thi ki barish nahi ho rahi thi, hawa jarur tez ho gayi thi.

Kuch aur aage chalne par khunkhar jungli janwaro ki awaze aane lagi jo ki kafi nazdik se aa rahi thi.. halanki divya ne apne mobile ki flash light on kar rakhi thi…jiske madhyam roshni me hum nirantar aage badhte ja rahe the.

Achanak hame aisa laga ki jaise koi hamare sath sath chal raha hai…uske padchapo ki aahat saaf sunayi de rahi thi…maine ghum kar dekha to koi dikhayi nahi diya…lihaza maine iss baat ko ek bhram samajh kar aage badh gaya.

Hamare aage badhte hi vo aahat phir se sunayi dene lagi aur hamare rukte hi vo bhi tham gayi…iss baat ka ehsaas maine teen char baar kiya…jisse ye to sunishchit ho gaya ki ye kewal ek bhram nahi hai balki vastav me hi koi hamara picha kar raha hai ya phir hamari pratyek gati vidhiyo par nazar rakhe huye hai.

Mrinal—ye kis ki awaz aa rahi hai hamare sath chalne ki…?

Priyadarshini—haan, main bhi kafi samay se gaur kar rahi hu…aisa lag raha hai jaise ki koi hamara picha kar raha hai…?

Divya—saajan tum chup kyo ho…?

Raj—hoga koi..jungle hai, aadhi raat hai, lagne laga hai darr….? Agar aisa hai to aa ja meri baho me so ja rakh ke sir...chinta mat karo jab samne ayega tab dekhenge…main hu na sath me..phir kaisa darr…?

Hum aage chalte rahe aur vo aahat bhi hamare sath sath kadam se kadam mila kar chalti rahi...kuch aur door jane par yakayak main ruk gaya to vo sab bhi chounk kar thahar gayi aur meri taraf prashavachak drishti se dekhne lagi jaise ki ye puchna chahti ho ki main chalte chalte achanak ruk kyo gaya... ?

Tabhi maine unke nazro ki bhasa ko samajh kar ungli se chup rahne ka ishara kar ke ek disha me ungli se ishara kiya dekhne ka...unhone jaise hi udhar dekha to unki bhi ghigghi bandh gayi...asal me vaha kuch chattano ke beech me jungli kutto ka ek jhund tha jo iss samay kisi janwar ka maans khane me lage huye the.

Divya (dhire se)—ab kya kare...kaise aage ab jayenge..beech raste me to ye kutte khade hain... ?

Raj (dhire se)—kuch nahi…unka dhyan khane me laga hua hai abhi….hum chattano ke piche se ghum kar nikal sakte hain…lekin koi awaz bilkul mat karna…chupchap dhire dhire aa jao aur ye roshni band kar do.

Priyadarshi—lekin chattano ke piche to gahri khayi hai…? Andhere me kahi gir gaye to…?

Raj—daro mat aa jao.

Teeno mere piche piche dhire dhire chalne lagi….hum chattano ke piche se ghum kar chupchap aage badhne lagi..tabhi mrinal ka pair kisi patthar par pad gaya aur vo fisal kar niche khayi ki taraf girne lagi jor se cheekh kar lekin maine jaldi se uske khayi me girne se pahle hi uska hath pakad liya aur upar khich liya usko.

Mrinal ki cheekh ne unn kutto ke dinner me vyavdhan uttapann kar diya aur vo jor jor se gurrane lage.. unki gurrane ki awaz se teeno jaldi se mujhse chipak gayi...maine dhire dhire vaha se aage badhne me hi bhalayi samjhi.

Dhire dhire khisakte huye hum chattano ke paar nikal gaye...maine piche mud kar dekha ki kahi vo jungli kutte hamare piche to nahi aa rahe hain lekin vo phir se apne dinner karne me mast ho gaye gaye the.

Hamne ye dekh rahat ki saand li aur lambe lambe kadmo se aage chalne lage...tabhi achanak koi hamare samne aa kar khada ho gaya...uska poora sharir ekdam kala tha aur bada hi bhayanak dikh raha tha vo...teeno mujhse chipak kar khadi ho gayi.

"Tum yaha se aage nahi ja sakte....kyon ki ab mujhe bhi bhookh lag aayi hai..ab main tum sab ko kha kar apni bhookh shant karunga...hahahaha." usne jor jor se haste huye kaha.

Raj—tum koun ho aur hame hi kyo khana chahte ho... ?

"Mera naam vishnu sharma hai....main ek brahma pishach hu aur tum sab ab mera bhojan...hahahaha" usne apna parichay dete huye kaha.

Raj—iska matlab ki tum ek bramhan ho..phir tum brahma pishach kaise ban gaye... ?

Usne meri baat ka koi jawab na de kar sidhe hi mujhe utha kar patak diya…ye dekh kar sab meri taraf bhagi to usne jaise hi divya ko pakadne ke liye hath badhaya vaise hi jhatka kha kar door ja gira….phir se uth kar khada hua aur hame maarne ke liye dauda lekin tab tak main bhi taiyar ho chuka tha…andhere ka fayda utha kar usne mujhe dubara utha kar door phenk diya.

Usne mujhe door phenk kar priyadarshini ki oor lapka magar tabhi maine daud kar usko dhakka de diya aur priyadarshini ko apni taraf khich liya.

Divya (jor se)—saajannnnn

Teen char bar aisa hi kiya usne….iss bar jaise hi mere paas aaya to maine uski aahat ka andaza lagate huye uske pair me ek kich kaar ke niche gira diya aur jaldi se uski gardan jor se pakad li…jisse vo chhat patane laga.

"Kyaaa...tummmm..saajannn hoooo... ? aaaaa." Usne chhat patate huye kaha.

Raj—tum saajan ko kaise jante ho…..?

"Aaaahhh….mujhe chhod doooo…..kyon ki…saajannn ke alawa koi mujhe paraast nahi kar sakta itni jaldi." Usne karahte huye kaha.

Raj—chal ja yaha se…aur dubara mere raste me mat aana..

Vishnu sharma—mujhe kshama kare saajan....main aap ko pahchan nahi saka.

Raj—chalo koi baat nahi...ab jao

Divya—ye brahma pishach koun si yoni hoti hai... ?

Raj—Preto ki jitni yoniya hain, unme se ek yoni brahma pret ki bhi hai...brahma pret teen prakar ke hote hain....pahla brahma pishach ka roop, dusra brahma rakshas ka roop aur teesra brahma veer ka roop... inn teeno roopo ka sambandh kewal bramhan se hota hai...jab koi vidwan bramhan path bhrasht ho jata hai, apne brahman dharm ka palan karna chhod deta hai tab mrityu uparant usko ye teen yoni milti hain... jo vidwan brahman swayam kisi karan vash aatmahatya karta hai usko brahma pishach ki yoni milti hai.. yadi kisi vidwan brahman ne dharm, sampraday athwa samaj, jaati, sanskriti aadi ki raksha hetu aatmadaah kiya hai to usko brahma veer ki yoni prapt hoti hai....issi prakar jis vidwan durachari brahman ki kisi karan vash hatya kar di gayi hai athwa swayam akaalgrast ho kar marr gaya hai to usko brahma rakshas ki yoni milti hai.

Divya—kya ye itne shaktishali hote hain... ?

Raj—apne apne sthan par ye teeno prakar ke brahma pret manavetar, aayu prapt atyant shaktishali hote hain…unme aseem pran bal hota hai…mann shakti aur ichcha shakti bhi atyant prakhar aur teevra hoti hai… jisse padarth anuo (mole) ka sangathan kar ke vah apne ko kisi bhi roop me akaar ya sharir me prakat kar sakte hain…manonukul vatavaran bhi taiyar kar sakte hain…vah bhayankar durghatnao, toofano, jhanjhawato, aur samuhik nar sanhar ke bhi karan bante hain….vo prakrati me vikrati paida kar tarah tarah ka uttapat kar jan jeevan ko ast vyast karne me siddh hast hote hain….lekin aisa tabhi hota hai jab unko chheda jata hai…warna vo apne ghar pipal ke ped me hi shanti se rahte hain.

Raj—inme se kayi maha vidwan brahma preto ki sthiti prithwi ke gurutwakarsan ki paridhi se bahar hai... vah jis din aur samay apne parthiv sharir ka tyag kiye rahte hain uss din, uss samay pratyek varsh apne mrityu sthal par aate hain….yadi uss sthan par unke nimitt mandir, chabutara athwa samadhi bani hoti hai to uske paas hi kuch samay gujarte hain….vah suksham lok ke atyant shaktishali aur bhayankar prani mane jate hain…unki aayu sukshm lok me kam se kam sau varsh aur adhik se adhik ek hazar varsh hoti hai…..sthool jagat ka ek din, sukshm jagat ke ek minute ke barabar hota hai…aayu poori hone par brahma pret phir se manav yoni me janam lete hain ya phir betaal ki yoni me chale jate hain…yah preto ki antim yoni mani jati hai….iske upar kramashah yaksh, gandharv, kinnar aur dev yoniya hain…ye sabhi uchch yoniya bhi manav yoni se hi sambandhit hain.

Vishnu sharma—main aap ko vaha pahucha sakta hu jaha aap jana chahte hain..

Raj—kya tumhe pata hai uss tilismi talab ke baare me... ?

Vishnu sharma—vo talab to sirf uss aboojh paheli ko hal karne ke baad hi chaand ki roshni me hi dikhayi dega.

Raj—koun si aboojh paheli ki baat kar rahe ho tum... ?

Vishnu sharma—ye to main nahi janta ki vo kya paheli hai..lekin maine suna jarur hai ki usko hal karne ke baad hi tilismi talab tak pahucha ja sakta hai....main aap ko uss qile tak le ja sakta hu.

Raj—theek hai..le chalo.

Agle hi pal palak jhapakte hi hum sab uss qile ke bahar khade the….mousam ab bilkul saaf ho chuka tha aur chandrama ki roshni bhi jhil milate huye apna prakash bikherne lagi thi…..ye qila kahne ki jagah ek purana khandahar kahna adhik upyukt rahega kyon ki uski deeware door se dekhne me hi aisi lag rahi thi ki jaise hath lagate hi upar gir jayengi.

Vishnu sharma—saajan..hame bhi iss kasht dayak yoni se mukti dila do.

Raj—theek hai…tumhare vishay me bhi sochunga pahle ye kaam to poora kar lu.

Hum uss qile ke andar ghus gaye…halanki chaand ki roshni jarur thi lekin utna spast dikhayi nahi de raha tha….hum uss brahma pishach ke bataye anusar raste par chal rahe the.

Raj—yaha qile ke andar se uttar disha me jane ka kaha se rasta hai…?

Vishnu sharma—qile ke andar se hi rasta tha lekin ab vo deewar gir jane se band ho chuka hai...aap ko qile ke piche taraf jana padega ghum kar...vaha se ek rasta ab bhi hai uss disha me jane ke liye.

Raj—theek hai chalo

Hum ghumte huye qile ke pichle bhag par aa gaye...vaha ki deewar thoda tooti huyi thi to hum usme se ho kar uttar disha me aage badh gaye...chalte chalte achanak ek jagah bade se patthar par jaise hi chandrama ki roshni padi to mujhe vaha kuch dikhayi diya....to hum tez kadmo se chal kar uss jagah pahuch gaye....maine hath se uss patthar ki mitti ko saaf kiya to usme ek paheli likhi huyi nazar aayi.

"Chalte Chalte Ek Baar, Aise Hi Masti Mein
Gire Nadi Mein Dono, Ja Rahe The Kashti Mein."
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Excellent update bhai Saajan Ke Charche To Har Jagah hai yahan per us Shaitani ne Raj ko pehchan liya, khair dekhte hain ab Raj paheli ko Kaise HAL karta hai.....
 
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UPDATE- 206
5th Janam Ki Amar Prem Kahani....​

Hazaro pyaliyo ke nashe se madhosh unn ratnari ankho me na jane koun sa aisa akarsan tha, koun sa aisa sammohan tha ki dekhte hi jisne mujhe ek bar me hi awaak, stabdh aur patthar jaisa jadwat bana diya tha uss samay. Behad adbhut tha uska soundarya jisne meri antar aatma tak ko apni sundarta ki chamak se udbhasit kar diya tha uss bhayanak barsati raat me.

Tabhi vajra swar se aas maan phat pada aur jor jor se musladhar barish hone lagi aur pishachini jaisi kali raat aur bhi bhayanak ho uthi.

Tabhi achanak phir jor ki bijli chamki…door akash tak ek chamkili rekha khich gayi aur ussi ke sath hi mera sammohan bhi bhang ho gaya.

Ab aage......

Jitu (mann me)—iss bhayanak andheri kali raat me koun hai yeh ladki.... ?

Bhay, vishmay aur sanshay se bhar gaya tha mera mann…uss ghani kali, barish bhari raat me uss roopangana ka iss tarah aise samay me yaha aana bada hi vichitra lag raha tha mujhe.

Jitu—aap..! koun hain aap…?

Main aage kuch samajh pata ki isse pahle hi vah ashcharya janak dhang se vaha se aise gayab ho gayi jaise ki uss jagah kabhi thi hi nahi....mere liye ye badi hi hairat ki ghatna thi....maine uth kar mashal ki roshni me bahar nikal kar dekha kintu ab vaha koi nahi tha....agar tha to bas door door tak phaila ghanghor andhkar.

Main vapis lout kar bistar par let gaya kintu meri ankho se uss ladki ka vah youvan soundarya ojhal hi nahi ho raha tha...uske vishay me sochte sochte na jane kab main nidra devi ki agosh me sama gaya..

Subah kuch kolahal ke swar se meri neend bhang huyi to main uth kar baith gaya....mujhe jagte dekh vaha bahar baithe kuch sainik idhar udhar jane lage to maine ek ko apne paas bulaya.

Sainik—pranam yuvraj

Jitu—ye kaisa swar sunayi de raha tha abhi... ?

Sainik—vo asal me yuvraj...raat me gaon ke ek hi ghar ke teen bachche achanak gayab ho gaye hain...kuch sainik uske baare me hi baate kar rahe the.

Jitu (hairan)—kyaaaaa….? Raat me…..? kisne gayab kiya unhe…aur sainiko ko kaise pata chali ye baat….?

Sainik—ji yuvraj….kisne gayab kiya iss baat ke vishay me to koi jankari nahi malum huyi kintu subah subah kuch sainik gaon ka pahra laga rahe the tab ek ghar me rona peetna macha hua tha…vaha ja kar puchne par ye baat malum huyi.

Jitu—ohhhh…..ek aur ghatna…! Akhir ho kya raha hai yaha…? Koun si sazish rachi ja rahi hai aur kyo….?

Sainik chupchap apna sir jhukaye mere samne khada raha...maine jane ko kah diya aur khud bhi dainik kriya se nivratt ho kar pooja aradhna me lipt ho gaya...tatpashchat kuch jalpan karne ke uparant main gaon me ussi ghar ki taraf nikal gaya jaha raat me ye ghatna huyi thi....halanki mousam abhi bhi saaf nahi hua tha...aas maan me kale badal apna dera jamaye huye the abhi bhi.....gaon me puchne par asani se uss ghar ka pata chal gaya.

Vaha ghar me abhi bhi logo ki bheed jama thi sath me uss maa ka karun krandan bhi sunayi de raha tha jiske jigar ke tukdo ko uski mamta se vanchit kar diya gaya tha raat me....uska rona dekh kar mera bhi hriday bhar aaya kintu maine bhavnao me bahne ki bajaye khud ko sanyamit rakhne ka prayas kiya.

Jitu (ek admi se)—bhai ye sab kaise ho gaya.... ?

Admi—kya bataye bhai...ye to ab roj ka hi rona ho gaya hai....na jane kis manhoos ki nazar lag gayi hai hamare iss gaon ko.... ?

Jitu—bachche bade bade rahe honge na.... ? kya vo bahar ghum rahe the.... ?

Admi—teen hi to bachche the bechari ke...do ladki aur ek ladka....teeno ki umra abhi dus saal ki bhi nahi huyi thi....pichhle saal pati bimari se khatam ho gaya aur ab uske teeno bachche bhi nahi rahe...bachcho ke sahare hi to bechari jee rahi thi....bhagwan bhi kitna nirdayi hai.

Jitu—kitne samay ki baat hai ye.... ?

Admi—Yahi koi aadhi raat ke karib ki ghatna hai…maa aur teeno bachche ek hi kamre me so rahe the…aadhi raat ke baad achanak tez hawa ka jhonka aaya jisse chimni bujh gayi….thodi der me jab hawa band huyi to bechari ne uth kar phir se chimni jalayi…aur ujala hote hi uski cheekh nikal gayi…uske teeno bachche bistar se gayab the…vo hawa ka jhonka apne sath unn masum bachcho ko bhi le gaya…shayad vo aaya hi isiliye tha.

Jitu—yeh to bahut hi bura hua bhai…

Dusra admi—kisi buri aatma ka saya hai gaon me jo sab ko ek ek kar ke nigale ja raha hai….ab to ye gaon rahne layak hi nahi rah gaya hai.

Pahla admi—baat to tum sahi kah rahe ho kaka…kintu apna ghar aur jamin chhod kar hum jayenge bhi to kaha jayenge…?

Teesra admi—Hamne suna hai ki Yuvraj yaha aane wale hain…..unke aane tak to hame yaha rukna hi chahiye..akhir unko bhi to pata chale ki unke rajya ki praja ke sath kya kya ho raha hai….?

Pahla admi—arey bhai, yuvraj ke aane se bhi kya ho jayega…aur mujhe to nahi lagta ki yuvraj yaha ayenge…? Unko avashya beech me kisi ne yaha ki ghatnao ke vishay me bata diya hoga aur vo bhi maharaj ki tarah vahi se lout gaye honge apne raj mahal…

Dusra admi—nahi bhai….hamare yuvraj aise nahi hain…..vo janta ki baat sunte hain….mujhe vishwash hai ki vo jarur ayenge….hame unki pratiksha karni chahiye.

Pahla admi—unke yaha aane tak jab koi iss gaon me jivit hi nahi bachega to unke aane ya na aane ka kya matlab..?

Unn sab ki baate sun kar mera mann kafi vichlit aur dukh se bhar gaya……uss maa ka rona mujhse dekha nahi ja raha tha…main uske dukh ko door karna chahta tha kintu vivash tha uss samay…mujhe to inn sab ghatnao ke piche ke sutradhar ke vishay me koi sutra nahi mila tha ab tak.

Parantu phir bhi uss maa ko santwana dena to avashyak tha hi….kyon ki ye insaniyat ka farz bhi tha aur uss rajya ka yuvraj hone ke naate mera naitik kartavya bhi tha…ki main apni praja ke har har dukh me unke sath khada ho kar unki sahayta hetu sadaiv tatpar rahu….main uss aurat ke paas ja kar usko santwana dene laga.

Jitu—bahan jo bhi hua, vo atyant dukhdayi hai….main tumhare mrit pati ko to jivit nahi la sakta kintu agar tumhare bachcho ko avashya launga vo jis haal me bhi honge….ye ek bhai ka vachan hai apni iss bahan ko….

Ek admi—kaha se le aaoge tum…? Jhuthi dilasa mat do bechari ko....hum sab jante hain ki unko ab koi nahi la sakta.

Jitu—ye aap kaise kah sakte hain ki ab unhe lana asambhav hai... ? parishram karne se hi kisi karya me safalta milti hai....yaha ek jagah baith kar kisi baat ka anuman laga ke uska parinam soch lene se kabhi koi karya siddh nahi hota bhai.

Vo maa (rote huye)—mere bachcho ko koi dhoond lao...unke siwa mera ab koi nahi hai....

Jitu—upar wale par bharosa rakho bahan…sab theek ho jayega….

Ek aurat—kaha se theek hoga sab…? Koun jayega uss kali pahadi ki taraf marne ke liye…?

Jitu—main jaunga….haan, main jaunga.

Main vaha se nikal kar uss aurat aur uske bachcho ke baare me sochte huye gaon se bahar ki oor nikal gaya… vaise ye jyada bada gaon to nahi tha lagbhag chalis pachas ghar the….charo taraf door tak phaile huye hare bhare khet… kheto ke bagal se lambi kataro me lage nariyal ke kafi oonche oonche ped, gaon ko lagbhag charo oor se ghere huye dhumil akash ko chhute se aur ek dusre se gunthe huye baans ke jhurmut…matmaile pani se bhare teen char adhkachche pokhar, aur gaon ki seema se thoda door hatkar vakrakar ghum kar bahti huyi ek patli si nadi..uska naam tha rupakshi.

Gaon ke bahar unn door tak phaile kheto se laga hua jungle, aur uss jungle se lagi huyi kali pahadi…aur kali pahadi ke uss paar bana hua ek behad prachin rahasyamayi qila…main apne hi dhyan me khoya hua gaon ke bahar nadi ki oor nikal aaya tha..tabhi kisi ki awaz sun kar mera dhyan toota to samne kal wala admi mujhse kuch kah raha tha.

“Arey bhai kaha khoye huye chale ja rahe ho…main kab se awaz de raha hu tumko…?” usne shikayat bhare shabdo me ulahna dete huye kaha.

Jitu—kuch nahi bhai..bas kuch soch me dooba hua tha..isliye shayad mera dhyan nahi gaya hoga apki taraf…?

“Maine tumhe udhar gaon se bahar jungle ki taraf ke raste par chalte dekha to awaz de raha tha, udhar jane se rokne ke liye.” Uss admi ne aage kaha.

Tabhi meri nazar nadi ke kinare bani ek choti si kutiya par chali gayi to mujhe kafi ashcharya hua ki jab gaon me aisi vichitra ghanaye ghatit ho rahi hain tab aise me yaha gaon se bahar kutiya banane ka kya prayojan ho sakta hai.. ?

Jitu—dhanyawad bhai mujhe dhyan dilane ke liye...vaise vo kutiya kis ki hai... ? kya koi rahta hai vaha... ?

"Haan, usme ek mahatma rahte hain...bechare bahut buddhe ho chuke hain...lagbhag ek sau bees saal ki umra hogi unki...din bhar kutiya me rah kar bhajan karte rahte hain aur shaam ko gaon me bhiksha maangne ke liye nikalte hain.. yahi unka roj ka niyam hai." Uss admi ne jankari dete huye kaha.

Jitu—achcha to ye baat hai.

"Theek hai bhai..apna dhyan rakhna aur jitna ho sake uss jungle se door hi rahna…ab main chalta hu." Usne mujhe samjhate huye kaha aur phir gaon ki taraf chal diya.

Uske jane ke baad main kuch der tak uss mahatma ke bare me sochta raha aur mann me vichar kiya ki aaj dophar me unki jhopdi me milne jaunga….ye mann hi mann abhi soch hi raha tha ki achanak tabhi mere sine me ek bechaini si hone lagi…kuch hi samay me ye bechaini had se jyada badh gayi to maine vaha se jana hi behtar samjha aur gaon jane ke jaise hi palta vaise hi kisi se takra gaya.

Takrane wali koi ladki thi…mujhse takrate hi vo dhadam se niche gir gayi….uske bade bade kesh hawa me lahra uthe girne se…uska chehra niche ki taraf tha jisse mujhe dikhayi nahi diya…girte hi uske mukh se koyl si masumiyat bhari awaz nikli…

"Aaahhhh….Maar Dalungiii." Apni naak ke neeche ungli ghumate huye usne badi hi masumiyat se kaha.

Kahne ke sath hi vo palat gayi aur phir uske chehre par nazar padte hi main jaise apni sab sudh budh bhul baitha..
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Bahut hi shandar aur lajawab update bhai mind blowing, Gaon Mein bacche Aur aadmiyon Ko Gayab karna ye kisi ki chaal hai ya Kisi bhoot Pret ka Saya Kuch Samajh Mein Nahin Aaya, khair dekhte hain ab Yuvraj Jeetu kaise ye samasya ko HAL karega aur jo abhi ladki jeetu se Takrayi Hai ye Kaun ho sakti hai, khair dekhte hain Ab aage kya hota hai.....

Waiting for next update_____
 
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