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Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

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firefox420

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Yeh shaam mastaani ke teesre bhaag me Renuka Milan ko gehraai se bataya Jaye ya fir jaldi khatam kar agle din ki shuruat aur naye kisso par dhyaan dia jaaye?
Aapki Rai Lena mujhe madad karega.

I would say.... story ke har character ko equal prefrence milni chaiye... though she is not in a lead role.... but still part of a second important family ....aur waise bhi hero ki future saas - bua hai ;).
atleast jyaada bhi nahi to jitna lamba apne alka ke liye likha tha, jisse ki character ka base bhi majboot ho jaye aur thoda sa nat - khat aur masale dar, aapke apne Enigma style mein likh do.

Aur sabse main baat ....abb tak aapne jo bhi apne hisaab se story ko pesh kiya hai usse sabhi paathako ne pasand kiya hai... jo abb likho ge usse bhi aur jo aage likho ge usse bhi.

par Enigma ji.... aapki ye baat bahot acchi lagi ki aapne apne paathako se unki rai jaani chahi ......isse pata lagta hai ke aap apne paathako ka kitna samman karte hai..... aur bhai yakeen maniye ye feeling mutual hai.... issi liye aapko aur aapki story ko itna pasand kiya ja raha hai.:)
 
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Yeh shaam mastaani ke teesre bhaag me Renuka Milan ko gehraai se bataya Jaye ya fir jaldi khatam kar agle din ki shuruat aur naye kisso par dhyaan dia jaaye?
Aapki Rai Lena mujhe madad karega.
Zyada gehrai na btana yar
 

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Bhai waise to ye aapki story he aur aapko hi pata he ki kis character ko kitani space deni he. Dusari baat ki aapne hi ek reply me kaha tha ki renuka ji is story me mahut hi aham kirdar nibhayengi to fir unake sath aisa sautela pan kyu. Haa jaha vasna pyar par bhari pade use thoda chota dikha dena.
 
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"Pyaar." Bas unka kaha ye aakhiri lafz dohrata Arjun Renuka ko poori tarah apne seene se lagaye unki aankhon aur chehre ko dekhta raha. Kuch pal aise he beet gaye toh dono he jaise kuch kehna chaah rahe the par Arjun ne pehle himmat ki.
"Aap jaanti ho ki fir ek aise safar par jaha koi rishta ya seema maayne nahi rakhti, chalna dukh bhi de sakta.?" Wo unke chehre ko ek aise premi ki tarah sehla raha tha jaise fir jaane dono rahe ya na rahe.
"Tumne kaha tha na ke sirf abhi ke baare me sochna chahiye. Mai wahi jeena chahti hu, is samay ko tumhare sath aur tumhari baahon me." Renuka apne aansu toh sambhal chuki thi lekin ab uska dil us se ke vash me nahi tha. Us ko bas Arjun ke roop me wo shaqs dikhai de raha tha jo jivan me har ladki ko ek baar dikhta hai. Milna ya na milna toh kismat ki baat hoti hai.

"Aur mai kahu ki agar hamara rishta badal gaya is raat ke baad toh din me hum isko kya naam denge?", Arjun ka upar wala hath ab Renuka ki kamar ke upar tha jaise Renuka ka Arjun par pehle se rakha tha. Dono ke chehre he ek dusre se kuch faansle par the lekin sharir kahi kahi se sath juda tha. Seena seene se aur paanv dusre ke paanv se.
"Sabke saamne hum kab badle hai jo fir badal jayenge? Maine bhi tumse wahi pyaar manga jo ek patni apne pati se shayankaksh me he chahti hai. Lekin agar tum chahte ho ke mai sabke saamne tumhari premika sa bartaav karu toh mai tayaar hu Arjun. Tum mujhe pyaar karte ho mere liye is se jyada kuch maayne nahi rakhega. Chahe din ke ujaale me kapde bhi kholne ko kahoge..." Jis haath par Renuka sar tikaye thi us se apni taraf karte hue Arjun ne unki aankhon par apne hontho se pyaar bhara sparsh karne ke baad unka upar wala honth choom lia. Sirf is ek sparsh ne Renuka ke jism ki aakhiri hadd tak ko hila dia tha. Aisa pyaar bhara sparsh jo kabhi mehsoos nahi kia tha apne vaivahik jivan me. Baat adhuri reh gai thi kyonki Arjun jaan gaya tha ke sirf jism ki chaah nahi hai jiske chalte ye sabhya mahila aaj uske pas thi. Ye sach wo chakor thi jisko sirf chaand chahiye tha. Iske baad sawaal poochna unki maryada aur charitra ko taar-taar karne jaise he hota. Kamar par rakhe hath ko bhi sar ke peeche karte hue Arjun ab bade pyaar se Renuka ko ek premi ka apni premika ke liye sahi daayitva dikha raha tha. Baari se dono labo ko apne hontho se peene laga tha. Ek baar alag hua toh dono ki laar se bana dhaaga kheench ke toot sa gaya aur Renuka ke hontho ke neeche ja chipka. Ek baar un kaali aankhon me dekhne ke baad Arjun unke hontho ke neeche us gol thoddi ke upari bhaag ko choomne laga tha. 'Ek choone bhar se jaise zindagi poori hone lagte hai. Pyaar ka ye ehsaas bahot hai dil ko jawan rakhne ke liye.'

"Aap bilkul shehad si meethi ho." Arjun ko apni aankhon me dekhte aur uski baat ko sunkar Renuka ne apna sar uski gardan me dhansa lia. Premika bhi toh aise he karti hai. Dil se beshak woh chahti hai ke uska aashiq uske sharir ke har taar se sangeet ki dhunn paida kare lekin ek swabhaki laaj dono ke is milan ko yaadgar bana deti hai.
Idhar Arjun ka haath ab halke andhere me unki kamar aur kaakh tak Renuka ka jism sehla raha tha. Apne nichle haath se pyaar se Renuka ko jakde woh unke baalo ke mehak leta unke sharir ko bhi jagane laga tha. Aatma to judne lagi thi lekin Yog toh aise poora nahi hona tha. Renuka ke bhi naajuk haath aur ungliyon ke naakhun yahi harkat Arjun ki nangi peeth par karne lage. Jaha abhi tak wo apna sar dabaye thi, thoda sa peeche ho unhone Arjun ke gale par apne honth chalane shuru kar diye the. Baar-baar Renuka ki bra ki patti Arjun ke haathon ke beech aane lagi toh usne badi dakshta se kapde ke upar se he bra ke jod ko dhoond lia aur halki si koshish se huk ko andar he ajaad kar dia tha. Ab fir se uske haat is makhmali sharir par reng rahe the aur Renuka Arjun ke chaude seene pe aati bas apne hontho se waha chitrakari karne me lagi thi.

"Aap upar dekhiye meri taraf." Renuka ko upar khiskne ka bola toh wo ab bilkul uske mooh ke saamne apne honth lekar leti se bas Arjun ko dekhne lagi thi. Chehre ko saamne dekh Arjun ne unke honth ek baar fir mooh me bharte hue unke gown ko sehlate hue upar karna shuru kar diya. Renuka bhi is pyaare ehsaas ko jeene lagi thi. Naram jaangho se upar tak gown fisalta sa kachi ki dor tak aa chuka tha. Aise he choomte hue jab Arjun ka haath pehli baar unki mulayam jangho par aaya toh ek pal ke liye dono wahi ruk gaye. Renuka ko toh ehsaas bhi nahi tha ki Arjun ka haath kab uski ughdi jaangh tak aa pahucha. Aur Arjun unki narmahat aur chiknaai me he kho gaya. Dhadkan kuch tej hone lagi Renuka ki toh haath ab ek baar fir se finsalta hue upar aane laga tha. Aur aise he wo kapde ke andar se hota hua unki samtal aur naram kamar par aa gaya. Kuch der tak apni ungliyon se us naram aur hali gaddedar kamar ko mehsoos karte Arjun ne apne panje me lia toh Renuka amarbail ki tarah uske jism se chipak gai thi. Pehli baar wo Arjun ki jeebh ko apne mooh me lekar chusne lagi toh Arjun ne bhi hath unki bra ki dheeli katori se andar karte unke upar wale doodh par haath rakh dia. Madhyam aakar ke ye dugdh-kalash uske haathon se kuch thode he bahar the jinpar unka uttejit nipple kisi matar ke daane ke aakar ka tha. Pyaar se is stan ko sehlate aur nipple ko halke halke ungli se chubhlate Arjun unke hontho ko peeta raha. Dono ki jeebh ab khulkar ek dusre ke mooh me ras ka adaan-pradaan kar rahi thi. Pehli baar Renuka ke stano ka itni najukta se mardan ho raha tha jisko woh bharpur maje leti mehsoos kar rahi thi. Unka haath bhi ab Arjun ke pajame ke andar uske sakht mulayam kulhe par fir raha tha.
"Seedhi lait jaiye ek baar." Itni der se chalti is shaant kreeda ko bhang karte Arjun unhe bister par seedha karta apni daai bhuja ka sahara leta baith gaya. Sharam ek baar fir se Renuka par haavi ho chali thi Arjun ke alag hone par. Seedhi hone ke baad unka chehra andhere ki taraf ho gaya tha. Lekin is lamp ki roshni me unka upari gaal damakta sa sab bayaan kar raha tha. Khade ho kar Arjun ne pehle darwaje ki chitakni andar se lagai aur fir unke pairo ki tarah aa baitha. Dheere dheere dusri taraf ka bhi gown wo upar karta chala gaya. Kamar ke paas aakar jab aur aage na hua toh Arjun ka dhyaan aapas me sati in gudaaj naram jangho par gaya. Mumuli si aapas me sati ye jaanghe behad mulayam thi.Koi baal ya roya na tha yaha par aur thik unke upar ek halke rangi ki lace wali panty jo jaangho ke jod par se thodi adhik phooli hui thi. Jaangho ke halke se choom kar Arjun ne fir se gown ke dono seere pakde aur unhe aage karne laga. Beshak Renuka ko sharma aa rahi thi aise pehli baar zindagi me apne pati ke alawa ek insaan ke saamne nirvastra hone me lekin yaha pyaar aur izzat dono mil rahi thi Arjun se. Yahi sochte hue unhone apni kamar uthaai toh Arjun ne gale tak unka gown upar kheench dia. Dheeli bra ab sirf naam ke liye unke doodh chupaye thi. Khud he thoda sa uthkar unhone apna ye kala choga sharir se nikal dia. Bra ke strap kandho par jhool rahe the jinhe Arjun ne aage ki tarag se pakda toh Renuka ne najre neechi karte dono haath samne kar diye.

"Ummmm.." Daant se honth bheenchte hue Renuka ke mooh se ye maje ki siskari nikal gai jab Arjun ne unke ek nirvastra uroj ko mooh me bhar lia. Unke upar jhuka wo apne dusre haath se unki daai jaangh sehla raha tha choot ke phule hisse ke paas. Is umar bhi unke chuche naram nahi pade the. Aise seedhe laitne par bhi dono kalash chatt ki aur mooh kiye apne kataav dikha rahe the. Dono jangho ko kholta sa wo ab ghutno ke bhaar Renuka ke upar chaa gaya tha. Wo naram maans ke mulayam gole ab uske dono haatho ka asar jhel rahe thi wahi Arjun ke honth Renuka ke gaal aur kaan ki lou ko choomne me lage the.

"isshhh... Mujhe kuch ho raha hai Arjun." Usko kas ke baahon me bharti Renuka ne socha bhi nahi tha ke ye ladka uske sharir ke har bhaag ko jaga dega. Fir dono hatho ko bister pe dabata wo neeche sarakne laga. Renuka ki kalaai bhi hilne ke kaabil nahi thi is fauladi jism ki pakad ke saamne. Wahi woh baari baari se dono chuchuk ko itminaan se choosta unki gehri naabhi ke upar mooh rakh lait sa gaya. Naram makhmali pait ke thik beech me ye ek 4 aanne si gol naabhi koi ek cm gehti thi. Us chotte se gadde me Arjun ki geeli jeeb ko mehsoos kart he Renuka ki kamar kamaan ki tarah upar hone lagi. Lekin ek seema se aage wo vivash se reh gai thi. Dono kalaiyan Arjun ke bade panjo me sakhti se bister par jo tiki thi..
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"Aapka har ang bharpoor pyaar karne ke liye he bana hai. Jaha bhi mooh rakhta hu toh aisa lagta hai jaise ye baaki nahi bachna chahiye." Arjun ne aur neeche sarakne se pehle lamp ki roshni me damakte us surkh chehre ko dekha jis par kahi kahi laar ki choti bunde chamak rahi thi kisi auns ke jaise.
"Mere haath toh chodo. Mai khud tumhe sab karne de rahi hu." Vinti karti si awaaj me Renuka ne kaha toh Arjun muskurata hua waise he dono hath pakde us safed kachhi par naak rakh ke soonghne sa laga. Halki choot ras ki mehak aur thodi nami bata rahi thi ki Renuka ka jism poora tayaar tha. Apne hontho me wo phoola hua hissa kapde ke upar se he dabata wo geela karne laga toh unmaad ki adhikta se Renuka ne apni jaangho me uska sar jakad sa lia. Lekin beparwaah sa wo kabhi naram choot ki faanko ko hontho me bharta toh kabhi halke daant se. Kachi jab poori laar se geeli ho gai us jagah par se toh unke dono hath chodd usne jhatke me wo aakhiri kapda jism se alag kar dia. 'Naabhi se neeche ko aata chikna pait aur koi 4-5 inch ke baad choot ki shuruwaat se pehle thode nanhe baalo ka ek tikona sa chota jhurmut. Uske neeche bas kahi kahi koi baal aur fir ye phooli hui 3-saadhe 3 inch ka cheera li hui choot. Dono motte naram hontho ke beech me se gulaab ki 2 patli pankhudia kuch aadha centimeter baha ko nikli hui. Pehli baar ek mahila ki aisi choot dekh raha tha Arjun jo kudrati khoosurat thi. aur chedd ke pas toh aise lag raha tha ke anda koi band gulaab dabya ho jiski upar ki thodi khuli hui chonch choot se bahar nikal kar uske waha hone ka aabhas dila rahi ho.
"Aise mat dekho na. Ye galat hai." Arjun ko apne khajaane me aise khoya dekh jaha dil me khushi thi wahi ek sharam bhi ki wo kaise apne se aadhi umar ke ek jawaan ladke ke samne taange failaye padi hai. Sharam se Renuka ne taange bheenchni chaahi toh Arjun ne dono taraf se pakadte hue naa me gardan hilaai.
"Agar aap chahti ho mai aapko pyaar du, wo bhi poori tarah se toh bas itna saath dijiye ke mai jo kar raha hu wo karne de. Jab aap mana kar dengi mai wahi ruk jaunga." Apni baat kehne ke baad usne unki aankhon me dekha toh waha maun-svikriti thi. Jaise keh rahi ho ke sab tumhara he toh hai bas ek aurat hu toh kuch cheeje mere bas me nahi hai. Halke se dono jaangho me haath lapet kar Arjun ne apne honth un gulab ki nanhi pattiyo par laga diye. Sharir me kahi durgandh nahi thi aur yaha aane pehle Renuka ne nahate hue sharir atche saaf kia tha toh choot ke aaspas abhi tak ek atchi khusbu faili hui thi. Geele honth me jaise he usne choot ke halka bahar nikli nok ko chooma Renuka ne dono taraf ki chaadar ko daboch lia apni mutthi me. 'Ye kaisa pyaar hai aur isko koi farak nahi padd raha upar ya neeche ke hontho ko ek samaan choomne me?" Bas mann me Arjun ka is kadar pyaar karna usko Arjun ke liye pagal bana raha tha. Udhar Arjun jaise apni kaam kala ko aur upar karta hua choot ko failate hue andar ke ras ko chaatne laga tha. Poori gulabi choot ab geeli ras tapkane lagi thi. Itna bilkul sahi tha Arjun ko aage badhne ke liye. Bina he apne moosal ki jhalak unhe dikhlaye Arjun ne ek taraf se kheench kar apna pajama neeche kar dia aur choot ko choosna chodd ab wo aage ko sarakta unke mooh ki taraf ja raha tha. Pajama dono pairo ki madad se sharir se nikal neeche gira dia toh apne honth fir se Renuka ki thoddi aur hontho par firane laga.
"Aapko mera ye sab karna galat toh nahi lag raha na? Mai chahta hu ke aap mere pyaar ko bhi apne andar tak mehsoos kare." Arjun ne sar ko unke sar ke saamne uthate hue kaha. Jis kandhe me chott thi us taraf ke haath se neeche apna motta lund jadd se pakad kar woh abhi anumaan se he choot ki darar tak usko le gaya. Aur supade ne halke se choot ko choom kar bata dia tha ke wo kitna tadap raha tha itni der se usko choomne ke liye.
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"Pehli baar lag raha hai ke meri zindagi me kuch sahi ho raha hai aur tum pooch rahe ho ke tumhara ye sab karna mujhe galat lagega? Bas aise he mujhko pyaar karo Arjun aur apni premika samajh kar. Yaha hum dono wahi hai aur kuch nahi." Apne upar jhukate hue Renuka ne Arjun ke honth choomne chahe the ke Arjun ne mooh ko kholte hue unke he dono honth daba liye. Lund ka agrabhaag ab fool ke sakht ho chuka tha aur choot ras se chikna bhi. Gulaab ki un pankhudiyo ko apne us tamatar se supade se chupate hue Arjun ne kass ke apni gaand ko neeche jhatak dia.
"Aaah... ummm aaaaiii.." Renuka ki awaaj Arjun ke gale me utar gai bahar aane ki jagah. Choot sunn si padd gai thi lund ke tagde prahaar se. Na Renuka ne uska wo hathiyaar dekha tha aur na he Arjun ne itna samay dia tha. Lekin Renuka ko aabhas ho gaya tha ke koi mota baans uski phool si choot ko bhedta andar dhans chuka hai. Aise he unke hontho ko mooh me dabaye Arjun ne lund se haath hata kar ek doodh ko mutthi me bhar lia aur dusre se Renuka ka sar sehlaane laga. Supade se kuch ek inch jyada he lund abhi choot me ghusa tha aur choot apni aukaat tak chaudi ho kar lund ka gala dabane lagi thi.
"Ek baar aur khud ko sambhaal lena aap. Bas ek baar. Fir waada karta hu ki aapko dard nahi hone dunga jara sa bhi." Aankhon me 2 boond tair gai thi Renuka ke lekin ab ek minute ke baad wo shant thi Arjun ke is pyaar se sehlane aur sharir ko garaane se.. Unhone sirf jara si gardan hila kar haan kaha toh fir se unke dono honth mooh me daba kar Arjun ne gaand se thoda pehle he unke naram patton ko pakad kar waisa he dhakka laga dia lekin is baar cheekh thodi si mooh ke kinaro se bahar aa gai thi. Wo ruki hui 2 bunde ab behti hui si bister ki dono taraf jaane lagi thi. Renuka ki aankhe is bhaynkar dard se band ho chuki thi aur ek baar fir Arjun unke jism ko sehla raha tha. Lund maharaj kisi bhains ke khoote se choot me 7 inch ke karib baith gaye the aur pehle se chudi ye choot bhi ek halki dhaar khoon ki nikalti is lund ki bhayankta batane lagi thi.

"Pata nahi tumhare kya laga hai.. aannnhhh... aisa mehsoos ho raha hai ke pait me koi chaaku dhans gaya ho waha ke raaste se.. aammmmmm.. aahah.. Ab toh aur dard nahi doge na.?" roti hui Renuka Arjun se chipak gai thi. Pehli baar ek lund us hadd tak pahucha tha jahan usne socha bhi nahi tha. Kaushal ka ausat lund beshak 5 inch ka tha lekin wo sadharan sa lund bhi pichle 5-6 saalo me shayad he andar lia tha Renuka ne. Fir ye toh takriban dugni motai ka aur kuch jyada he lamba tha. Choot jaise jonk ki tarah is lund ko pakde hue thi.
"Maloom hai. Isliye itne se he karunga aur abhi kuch he der me aapka dard khatam ho jayega." Unki geeli aankho ko chumta wo dheeme se apne lund ko bahar ki taraf karne laga. "sshh... aah.. araam se aah..maa mai marr gai..." Lund he prachand tha isme bechari choot ka koi kasur nahi tha. Bahar ko nikalte hue bhi choot lund ki ragar se siskne lagi thi. Pyaar se dono gaalo ko sehlate hue Arjun ne araam se bahar ko nikala lund andar kar dia. Kuch 15-20 baar aise choot ko naram karne ki prakriya me Renuka ke mooh se bhi utni he daard ki halki aahen nikli jinhe wo dabaye thi. Takriban 3 inch lund andar bahar hone laga toh Arjun ne unki dono jangho ko upar utha kar waise he dhakke lagane jari rakhe. 3-4 minute ke baad ab wo dard thoda maja dene laga tha Renuka ko. Choot beshak mooh tak bharr chuki thi is moosal se lekin aisi he ragad ab sharir ko aanand dene lagi.
"Aah... ummm.. aahh. dheere dheere...... Arjun.." Machalti hui wo uske hontho ko khencne kaatne lagi thi. Jab aadhe se jyada lund finsalne laga toh dhakke bhi tej hone lage the. Lekin agle 20-25 dhakko par he choot ne ghutne tek diye..
"Mai... aah.. ye.. kyaa ho rahaa haiiii.. aah ..mmm." Bada he jordaar sa charam praapti ka anubhav hua tha. Jaise koi nadi barso se baandh ke peeche ruki thi aur aaj saalo baad wo usko todti bahar beh chali thi. Choot ke andar itni chiknaai Arjun ne bhi pehli baar mehsoos ki thi. Lund jaise jadd tak bheeg gaya tha aur madhu-ras gulabi hontho se bahar tak aakar unki gaand ki darar se milan karta mhesoos hua. Nidhaal si woh kuch besudh hokar laash ki tarah bister par padi thi. Arjun shaanti se unki kamar ke dono bhaag sehlata unki gardan choomne me laga raha.
"Ye mujhe kya hua tha? Pehle mujhe aisa sukh kabhi nahi mila jitna aaj mila hai." Dono panje bister par tikati woh halka sa uchak kar Arjun ke honth chumne lagi toh Arjun ne bhi ek tarah se Renuka ko goad me le lia tha. Jakhm ki patti jaane kab ki utar chuki thi lekin ab uske sharir me koi dard nahi tha. Apni chaati se chipkaye woh aise he goad me lekar Renuka ko badi shiddatt se choomne me laga tha aur wo bhi waisa he kar rahi thi. Honth dono ke halke sooj chuke the jo poore geele the. Jab yaad aaya ke lund bhi maidan me hai toh khud ko aise he dono taraf paanv kiye Renuka khud he uski goad me aage peeche hone lagi. Choot me is tagde lund ka gharshan ap uski sabse manpasand cheej tha. Arjun ne ek haath kamar aur ek haath Renuka ke unnat mulayam kulhe par rakhe hontho ka swaad leta khud bhi halke dhakke Renuka ke sath milane laga tha.
"ahmmm.. Ye ehsaas .. mai bhi hamesha yaad rakhunga." Ab dono haath baahon ke jod ke neeche rakh Arjun ne itna bol kar Renuka ke dono doodh baari se peene shuru kar diye the. Choot kabhi lund ko kheenchti toh kabhi naramahat se ragad deti. Apne supade par choot ki aisi ragad Arjun ne sahi maayne me pehle mehsoos nahi kari thi. Har dhakke ke sath Renuka thoda aage ko uth jaati jis se lund bahar nikli choot ki faanko ko bhi maja dene lagta tha.
"Mujhe fir aisa lag raha hai jaise.. aah. mai.. aah ummmm.. mere andar wahi.. aahh." Karti Renuka ne Arjun ka sar apni chunchi par kas ke daba lia. Uski kamar bas kampkampa rahi thi lund ko choot me dabaye.. Dher sara taral nikalti wo Arjun ke kandhe par sar jhula kar lipat gai. Saanse aniyantrit thi aur Arjun bas aise he unhe thaame baitha raha. Kuch pal dono kulho ko masalte hue usne wapis unka ek sooja hua nipple mooh me bhar lia aur chusakte hue khud he neeche se lund unki bheegi choot me thelne laga tha.
"Mujhe lita do bister par aur upar aa jao." Arjun ne baat ko maante hue apne hatho me Renuka ki peeth thaamte hue unhe bister par lita dia aur is baar dono paanv upar utha kar ek sadhi hui raftaar se unki choot ki gehraai dheela karne laga tha. Lund par motti nasse ubharne lagi thi jo choot ke andar ek naye tarah ki ragad paida karne lagi thi..
"Umm aahhh.. aahh.. Aur jor se.. aah Arjun .. maar daalo mujhee.. aahhh.. " Wo lagbhag maje me cheekhti si Arjun ko uksaane lagi thi aur wo bhi ek tej raftaar se lund andar bahar karne me laga tha.. Har dhakke ke sath Arjun ki ek bhaari gurrahat si awaaj aati aur wo unke upar jhuka bas aise he andar tak apna moosal pelta raha. Supada ab bhayankar tarike se phool chuka tha, jo choot ki diwaro ko sakhti se chadata jata har baar. Renuka samajh gai thi ki uska bhi hone wala hai..
"aah.. aah Arjun.. mere andar he.. aah bhar do.. " Aur apne naakhun uski peeth me dhansa diye. Renuka ke is sakhallan ke sath eh Arjun ke lund ne bhi us bheegi choot me apni garam malaai bharni shuru kr di. Pichkaari seedha bachedaani par mehsoos karti Renuka ka lagatar charam chal raha tha. Ye garam lava uski choot ko jaise ek adhbhut araam mehsoos karane laga tha. Lund waise he choot me dhansaye Arjun halke pasine se nahaya he Renuka ke upar lait gaya, jaha wo uske honth choos rahi thi. Dil itna khush tha ke jaise aaj jamane bhar ki saari khusi Arjun ne usko de di thi.5 minute ke baad Arjun uthkar bathroom chala gaya toh Renuka waise he aankhen band kiye padi rahi.Choot aur lund ka mishrit paani bahar nikalta chaddar par girne laga tha. Koi 10 minute baad Arjun khud par paani daalne ke baad pajama pehan kar bahar aaya toh bister par nangi padi Renuka ko bahon me utha kar wapis bathroom me aa gaya.
"Aap khud ko saaf kar lijiye." Andar unhe comod par baitha kar woh bahar nikalne laga toh Renuka ne hath pakad lia.
"Waha andhere tha isliye nahi sharma rahe the? Ab sabkuch khud kia hai toh saaf bhi khud karo. Aur akele me sirf mera naam lena hai." Uske hontho par ek chota sa chumban karti Renuka bilkul kisi ek jawan premika jaisa he vyvahaar kar rahi thi. Arjun ne pehli baar atche se ab unke youvan ko dekha tha. Bilkul bedag aur tarasha hua jism. Jispe har taraf sirf itna bharaav tha ke wo atcha he lage. Gore doodh jinpar bhure gol nipple the jinhe aaj choos-choos kar usne suja dia tha. Aakarshak chehra aur kaale reshmi baal. Wo ek anupam sondarya he thi. Doodh bilkul aise jo na bade aur na chote the. Kahi se bhi dheele nahi. Gulabi choot jo aaj ki chudaai se kuch jyada he motti ho gai thi. Ye sab dekhta woh ek mug me paani bhar ke unke saare sharir ko geele toliye se saaf karne laga. Jaise he nipple par toliya lagya toh tej siski nikal gai Renuka ke mooh se.
"Aahh.. dekho kya kar dia.. Ab ye 3-4 din dukhenge." Renuka ki baat par bas wo muskura dia aur sara sharir saaf karne ke baad choot par pehle halka garam paani dala fir apni ungli se ucko atche se saaf karne laga..
"Aai.. yaha tum mat karo.. nahi fir se gadbad ho jayegi.. aur himmat nahi hai.. " Arjun ke haath se wo geela toliya leti khud he choot ko saaf karne lagi..
"Itna toh pehli raat ke baad bhi bura haal nahi hua tha mera. aah.." fir jab atche se saaf ho gai toh wahi toliya lekar bister ki taraf aai jaha taja maal ki bunde giri thi. Poori chaadar he ast-vyast thi lekin Renukane wo jagah saaf ki toh ek gehra daag dikha jo jaa nahi raha tha.
"Ye khoon hai aapka. Dhone se saaf ho jaayega ahi aap araam kijiye. Dedh baj chuke hai aur maine fir subah uthana bhi hai." Unke nange jisme ko baahon me lete hue Arjun ne dono doodh dabate hue fir bister se unka gown unhe pehnaya.
"Baaki kapde?" Renuka ne thodi sharam se kaha toh Arjun ne waise he ek hath se ek doodh dabate hue kaha, "Raat ko ajaad rehne dijiye na. Mai bhi inhe haath me lekar sona chahta hu." Arjun ki is shararat se kahi baat par wo bhi muskurati si chaadar thik karke bister par aa gai. Karwat nahi le sakti thi choot me jalan ki wajah se toh Arjun ne Renuka ko pehle ki tarah apni baah par sath chipkate hue seene se laga lia. Ek haath us naram rooi ke gole par rakhte hue dono hontho ko choomte hue aankhen band karte ek meethi neend me doob gaye.
 

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I would say.... story ke har character ko equal prefrence milni chaiye... though she is not in a lead role.... but still part of a second important family ....aur waise bhi hero ki future saas - bua hai ;).
atleast jyaada bhi nahi to jitna lamba apne alka ke liye likha tha, jisse ki character ka base bhi majboot ho jaye aur thoda sa nat - khat aur masale dar, aapke apne Enigma style mein likh do.

Aur sabse main baat ....abb tak aapne jo bhi apne hisaab se story ko pesh kiya hai usse sabhi paathako ne pasand kiya hai... jo abb likho ge usse bhi aur jo aage likho ge usse bhi.

par Enigma ji.... aapki ye baat bahot acchi lagi ki aapne apne paathako se unki rai jaani chahi ......isse pata lagta hai ke aap apne paathako ka kitna samman karte hai..... aur bhai yakeen maniye ye feeling mutual hai.... issi liye aapko aur aapki story ko itna pasand kiya ja raha hai.:)
bhai wahi kiya hai. Jo aaj subah uth kar likha tha abhi upload kar dia hai. 2 pictures daalne ke liye kshama chahta hu lekin bas atchi lagi toh sahi jagah par daal di.
 

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Bhai waise to ye aapki story he aur aapko hi pata he ki kis character ko kitani space deni he. Dusari baat ki aapne hi ek reply me kaha tha ki renuka ji is story me mahut hi aham kirdar nibhayengi to fir unake sath aisa sautela pan kyu. Haa jaha vasna pyar par bhari pade use thoda chota dikha dena.
aapki baat sar aankhon par bhai. Bilkul aise he maine jo update tyaar kia tha wo post karke is shaam ko khatam kia hai. Dhyanwaad aapka bhai jo sahi baat aapne rakhi. Renuka ka kirdaar kaafi bada hai kahani me toh aapki bhi baat jayaj hai.
 
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