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LionHeart007

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*Asʟᴀᴍ ᴏ ᴀʟaɪᴋᴜᴍ.*

Oɴ ᴛʜɪs ʙʟᴇssᴇᴅ ᴏᴄᴄᴀsɪᴏɴ ᴏғ Eɪᴅ, ᴡɪsʜɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜʀ ғᴀᴍɪʟʏ ᴊᴏʏ, ʜᴀᴘᴘɪɴᴇss, ᴘᴇᴀᴄᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ᴘʀᴏsᴘᴇʀɪᴛʏ! Eɪᴅ Mᴜʙᴀʀᴀᴋ! Tʜᴇ ᴍᴀɢɪᴄ ᴏғ ᴛʜɪs ᴅᴀʏ ʙʀɪɴɢ ᴀ ʟᴏᴛ ᴏғ ʜᴀᴘᴘɪɴᴇss ᴀɴᴅ ʙʟᴇssɪɴɢs ɪɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʟɪғᴇ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴡɪʟʟ ғɪʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴊᴏʏ. Wɪsʜɪɴɢ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜʀ ғᴀᴍɪʟʏ ᴀ Hᴀᴘᴘʏ Eɪᴅ.❤🌙🤲🏻

*𝒲𝒶𝓇𝓂 𝓡𝓮𝓰𝓪𝓻𝓭,*

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LionHeart007

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Phle to aapko bahut bhaut badhayi ho is khubsurat kahani ke liye. Aur Readers se writers ki list me kadam rakhne ke liye.
Sath hi me mujhe ye dekh kr bhi bahut accha laga ki aapke story ka prefixe thriller hai. Ye meri is site ki 1st story hogi is catigray ki. Ha mai janta hu ki kuch aur bhi story hai is catigary me jo ki bahut achi hai aur mai unko kabhi time se read bhi karna chahta hu. Lakin wakat hi nahi mil pata raha hai. Aaj thoda free time mila to aapki story dekhi to ise hi read karne ka man bana liya. Ab mera is site par ek Frnd is tread ka bhi ho gaya. 😉
Aapke story ki suruaat bahut hi khubsurat hai. Abhi tak ke story me mujhe sub kuch bikul sahi jagah laga. Aur jo chij mujhe sbse acha laga wo thi comedy. Jo ki bilul sahi jagah par aapne add ki hai. Aur Vicky ke charecter ko bhi aapne abhi tak bahut ache se ek normal ladke ki tarah dikhaya hai. Aur ye bhi mujhe bahut acha laga.
Ha aapke story ke charecters ki details read karte hue mujhe ek baat dhyan aayi to mai aapko wo batana cahta hu. Agar sex hoga aapki story me to use under age mat karna. Quki aapki story me kuch girl 18 year se kam hai agar incest sex hoga to unse mat dikhana. Aur agar dikhana hoga to unki age edit krke 18+ kar dena.
Baki abhi tak aapki story bahut hi achi lagi. Keep growing.
Thanks bhai 🙂.
Bss apka saath chahiye Kuch na kuch to kr gi denge.

OR bhai me yahan apko ye bata dena chahta hun k is story m kuch bhi Adultery content nhi hai so don't worry about that k age restrictions ka koi issue hoga .

Apka bohot shukriya jo aapne itna pyaara or detailed review diya .
bss aise hi apna saath banaye rakhiye or guid krte rahiye gaa jahan bhi apko lage k kuch suggestions deni chahiye to most welcome bro. 🥰🥰
 

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lovely update .sonia to gussa ho gayi jab usko viki ki chamchi kaha 🤣.par wo sab pyar bhari chhedchhad thi .is pariwar me jitna pyar hai bachcho ke bich to koi naraj kaise ho sakta hai par natak to karna hi padta hai 😁.
ali ko office me problem aa gayi thi jiska solution viki pehle se taiyar karke baitha tha aur ali ko sahi direction diya .
ali ko laga ki koi treasure hunt ho raha hai uske saath 🤣.
par aakhir me problem solve ho gayi aur dono ki baate bahar khade sabne sun li .sab impress ho gaye viki ke dimaag ko dekhkar aur shock ho gaye jab unko pata chala ki viki ne unki maujudgi pata kar li hai 😍.
 

LionHeart007

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lovely update .sonia to gussa ho gayi jab usko viki ki chamchi kaha 🤣.par wo sab pyar bhari chhedchhad thi .is pariwar me jitna pyar hai bachcho ke bich to koi naraj kaise ho sakta hai par natak to karna hi padta hai 😁.
ali ko office me problem aa gayi thi jiska solution viki pehle se taiyar karke baitha tha aur ali ko sahi direction diya .
ali ko laga ki koi treasure hunt ho raha hai uske saath 🤣.
par aakhir me problem solve ho gayi aur dono ki baate bahar khade sabne sun li .sab impress ho gaye viki ke dimaag ko dekhkar aur shock ho gaye jab unko pata chala ki viki ne unki maujudgi pata kar li hai 😍.
Thanks Bhai 🥰

bilkul bachon k beech to hansi mazaak chalta hi rehta hai or ye zaroori bhi hai .

ab hero bilkul namoona to nhi rahe gaa na. Or phir bnda expert hai IT ka to aisi situation k liye prepare rehna padta hai.
 

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Update 14


Viki ki side to ab kuch khaas lagta nhi k hoga atleast NIKAAH wale din tk to inko aise hi yahan chodte hain or chalte hain hamari kahani ki 2sri side yaani unhi 2non ladkiyon ki taraf.

"Uth jaa yrr kab tk soti rahe giii".

"Yrr sone de naa kitna acha khwaab dekh rhi thi"

"Are ooohh khwabon ki malikaa uth jaa ab dekh kya time ho rha hai tu to kabhi itni der tk nhi Soti subah Molvi shahab se bhi pehle uth jaati hai jaise AZAAN tune hi deni ho" 🤣

Ye 1st wali ladki thi jo 2nd ladki ko uthane ki koshish kr rhi thi

"Ab itna jaldi bhi nhi uthti Jab Azaanen ho rhi hoti hain us time aankh khulti hai meri or tum ho k gadhe ghode bech k soti rehi ho roz mujhe hi tumko jagaana padta hai or aaj agr m lait ho gyiii yo tum shurooo hi ho gyiii ho"

"Time dekho phir bolna shurooo ho gyiii ho 😒"

"Acha naa yaarrr ab uth to gyiii hun ab bacchi ki jaan legi kya "

"Kya bola bacchi or woh bhi tu, zaraa yaad kr kal kya kaarnaama kiya tha is bacchi ne akali hi bhid gyii thi un 2non gundon se or ab to woh bhi tour pr honge" 🤣🤣

"Acha acha thk hai pr konse tour ki baat kr rhi ho"

"Tune to unki tickets kaat dii thin to obvious hi hai k jo unke kaam the Jahannum k Tour pr hi honge naa"

"Hahaha tu nhi sudhre gii"

"Acha chod ye sab or jaa jaldi se fresh ho kr aa phir aage ki planing bhi yo krni hai na"

2nd ladki koi jawaab nhi deti or chup chaap uth kr chali jaati hai fresh hone .
Ye koi bohot bada ghr nhi tha bss 2 rooms or 1 bathroom tha, 1 kitchen or chota sa hall.

Or ye ghr shehar se baher ki taraf tha, shehar se baher nhi bss abaadi se hat kr tha aas paas koi ghr nhi tha . Yahan koi rehta to tha nhi or shayad koi case chl rha tha is ghr ka to koi yahaan aye gaa bhi nhi to in 2non ne kuch din yahin rukne ka faisla kiya, is se inke paise bhi bach jaate jo inko rent me dene padte agr kahin hotel 🏨 m rukte to or sath m ye jagah safe bhi thi, or electricity bhi chalu thi to koi khaas problem bhi nhi honi thi. bss kareeb m 1 petrol pump tha or ek CNG gass station.

Jald hi 2non fresh ho kr Naashta krne baith jaati hain or baaten krne lagti hain.

1st: yrr Sidra ye to bata k ab hum log yahaan to aa gye hain pr agr unko pata chal gaya to ?

Sidra: yrr darr mat Kuch nhi hoga unhe pata kaise chale ga k hum yahan hain ..

1st: yrr jo kal tune unke 2 logon k maara hai to aaj nhi to kal pata to lagna hi hai unko.

Sidra: phir bhi us se kya ho jaiga hum yahan chupe hain is baare m koi insaan nhi jaanta to kaise pata chale gaa unko. Tu tension naa le Nida sab thk hoga.

Nida: chl thk hai maan liya k nhi pata chale gaa pr ab kya .

Sidra: mtlb?

Nida: matlab ye k aab aage kya krna hai hamen .

Sidra: pehle to ye pata krna hai k aakhir unko exactly chahiye kya jiske liye unhon ne itna sab kiya .

Nida: or wo hum kaise pata karen ge ?

Sidra: bhool gyii hum unke mobile phone 📱 laptop utha laye the to ab unhi se kuch info mile gii.

Nida: wah meri lady Sherlock Holmes tu to sach m genius hai.

Sidra: abhi aisa kuch kiya nhi hai to thodi tareefen bacha k rakh jab tk kuch mil nhi jaata .

Nida: chl thk hai aaj naashta to ho gaya hai ab kuch kaam bhi kr lete hain .

Sidra: hmm.

Or phir 2non bartan dho kr Sidra k room m aajati hain or start hota hai inka "Find The Info" game.

Sidra or Nida poori jaan k saath lagi huin thin apne kaam m pr ek problem thi woh ye k laptop or mobiles password se locked the.

Nida: yrr ab kya karen ye password to khul hi nhi raha mene bohot try kr liya.

Sidra: tune try kiya hai abhi mene kahan kuch kiya, ab tu bss dekhti jaa apni behen ka kamaal.

Or Sidra ye bol kr lag jaati hai apne kaam m usse thoda time lagata hai or wo kaamyaab ho jaati hai password kholne m.

Sidra: isme to inke kuch thikaanon ka pata hai or kuch logon k name hain jo inke hi log hain.

Nida: haan pr isme apne kaam ka to kuch hai hi nhi .

Sidra: sabar rakh kuch to mile gaa hi.
Ye bol wohh phir se lag jaati hai apne kaam m.
Or

"Binnnggoo mil Gaya"

Nida: kya mila mujhe bhi to bata .

Sidra: ye dekh ye ek bande ka pata chala hai.
Ye bol kr woh screen Nida ki taraf kr deti hai.

Nida: ye to koi bada lagta hai in gundon ka .

Sidra: haan ye kaafi khaas aadmi hai inka or zaroor yehi woh hai jiski hamen talaash hai .

Nida: pr ab ye kahan mile gaa.or ye kya liya huwa hai n 09xx788 e .

Sidra: ruk to shi mujhe sochne de.

Phir achaanak woh laptop m kuch krne lagti hai or "mil gaya ye rhaa"

Nida: kya mil gaya??

Sidra: ye Aadmi.

Nida: woh kaise ?

Sidra: ye number koi aise hi nhi likhe hain ye coordinates hain or yahin mile gaa humen shameem Munna.

Nida: hahahaha 🤣 ye kaisa name hai Shameem Munna? 😂😂

Sidra: Shameem iska name hai or Shayad Munna iska nickname jis name se ye log usse bulate hon ge .

Nida: ajeeb nhi hai ye .

Sidra: jaisa bhi ho hamen name se kya, hamen to is bande se kaam hai naa.

Nida: hmm yeh to hai.

Sidra: to chal phir nikalte hain is Munna k adde ki taraf or pakadte hain isko.

Nida: haan Jain ge pr aaj nhi 2 din baad .

Sidra: 2 din baad kyun aaj kyun nhi. Pehle to tujhe khud jaldi thi or ab tu hi bol rhi hai k aaj nhi.

Nida: zara apna baazoo dekh kitna sooj gaya hai or tu aisi condition m jai gii un se ladne, uska sirf nickname Munna hai woh sach much ka chota baccha nhi hai jisko tu jaa kr apne ek haath se hi utha le gi.

Sidra: kuch nhi hota yrr me thk hun.

Nida: zara dekh yo kitna neel pad gaya hai pehle rest kr isse thk hone de phir chalen ge aise me tujhe nhi jaane dun gi.

Sidra: yrr jaane de naa Please tujhe pata hai na us se milna hamare liye kitna important hai.

Nida: han pata hai isii liye bol rhi hun k 2 din baad jain ge. Woh koi hamare liye mithayii liye nhi baitha hoga k Malika Sahiba ayen gi or unki khidmat m paish kare woh gunde hain to wahan iske ilaawa or bhi log honge, or hamen unse ladna bhi pad sakta hai or tu lad paye gi unse aisi condition m.

Sidra: haan bilkul.

Nida ye sunte hi uska hath khenchti hai jiss se Sidra ko kaafi dard hota hai pr woh bardaasht kr jaati hai lekin usse samjh bhi aa jata hai k Nida thk keh rhi hai wrna woh ladki jiske reflexes itne tez hain or fight m itni achi hai k akeli hi 5 se 7 nihatthe logon ko maar giraye woh is mamooli se waar ko nahi rok saki.

Nida: mujhe maaf krna tujhe takleef di pr kya karti tu maan hi nhi rahi wahan teri jaan bhi jaa sakti hai agr aisi condition m hum wahan gyiii or agr aisa huwa to soch mera kya hoga or meri chod tere maksad ka kya hogaa jiske liye tu ab tak tadap rhi hai haann bol, mujhe apni koi fikar nhi hai bss teri fikar hai mera hai hi kon tere ilawaa is duniyaa m to mujhe kuch ho bhi gaya to kisi ko koi fark nhi pade gaa lekin agr tujhe Kuch huwaa na to me jeee nhi paoungi, nhi gee paoun gii me. 😭😭😭😭

Bolte bolte Nida rone lagi thi.

Nida ki ye baaten sun kr or uska apne liye itna pyaar dekh kr Sidra jaisi mazboot ladki bhi apne emotions ko control nhi kr paati or uski aankhon se aanso nikalne lagte hain or wo Nida ko gale laga leti hai.
😭

Sidra: (rote huwe hi 😭😭) nhi tu aise kyun bol rhi hai agr meri koi baat buri lagi to mujhe maaf krde chahe to 2,3,4,5 jine chahe thappad maar le pr aise roo mt or kon kehta hai tera koi nhi ya agr tujhe kuch huwa to kisi ko koi fark nhi pade ga. Me hun na teri behen, sniff sniff, agr mujhe kuch hone pr tu nhi jee sakti to tune ye kise sochl liya k me tere bina reh paoun gii, sab kuch tabaah kr dungi me agr tujhe Kuch bhi huwaa to jaan se maar dun gi me sabko jo bhi meri behen ko takleef pohonchaye gaa .

Pehle to Sidra ro rhi thi pr ab to aisa tha maano k uska gussa ubal kr baher aane wala hai or agr is waqt Munna uska saamne hota to woh usse bina Kuch jaane hi be dardi se maar chuki hoti or Nida ko bhi iska ehsaas ho gaya tha isii liye woh Sidra ko kass kr apni baahon m bhar leti hai or uske balon m haath pherne lagti hai jis se Sidra ka gusaa Kuch kam hota hai or woh aahista 2 normal hone lagti hai.

Jab Nida ko lagta hai k ab Sidra poori trha se normal ho gyii hai to woh usse chod deti hai or usee glass se pani pilaati hai laa kr or uske paas hi baith jaati hai

Nida: mera woh matlab nhi tha yrr me to bss ye bol rhi thi k agr tumhe kuch huwa to me bardaasht nhi kr sakti .

Sidra: hmm samjh gyii thi me bss us time kuch zeyaada hi gussa aa Gaya shayad itna saara stress phir kal ki fight or thk se naa sona, or phir tumhari aisi baaten sun kr control nhi kr payiii. Sorry 😞.

Nida: koi baat nhi meri Jaan tu to bohot special hai mere liye or ab bhala me tujh se kyun naraaz houn gii.

Sidra: Acha thanks.

Nida: ab tu mujhe paraya kr rhi hai.

Sidra: acha 2 kuch nhi bolti.

Nida: hmm

Sidra: mujhe lagta hai tu shi bol rhi hai k mujhe rest krna chahiye wrna problem bhi ho sakti hai agr abhi Hum gye to.

Nida: hmm Good Girl. Ab jaa or soo jaa baaki sab me samait dun gii . 2 din baad chalen ge hum .

Sidra: ok dear ☺️.

Aaj Monday tha to Mtlb k ab ye log Thursday ko jaane wali thin apne mission pr.

Aaj k liye itna hi baaki ka agle update m.
likes or reviews dena naa bhulen 🙂.

 
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