Update 3
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"Viki beta utha jaa kab se sooo rha hai, subah utha tha Namaz padh k phir soo gaya, chl jaldi uth"
Viki: ami sone doo na yrr thakaa huwa hun me .
Ami: q aisa kya kaam kr liya tune k thakaa huwa hai, konsa kheton m hallll chala kr aaya tha kal ? Gaon jaana hai aaj or tu abhi tk soo hi rha hai.
Viki: Ami aaj gaon jaana hai, ek to aap logon ne mujhe 3 din pehle bataya is baat ka to ohir mujhe apna pending kaam saara 3 din m krna padaa Or wo jo baaki k employees the mere under unko alag se saara kaam samjhaaya hai k kya krna hai kaise krna hai waghaira waghaira. Tab jaa kr jaan chuuti hai to thakna to hai hi naa. Or gaon train
shaam ki hai naa to abhi q jagaa rhi ho konsa train
mene chalani hai .
Ami: beta train
nhi chalani tumne lekin tayyari yo krni hai na samaan kon pack kare ga tumhaara ?
Viki: Ami meri packing ho gyii hai. mera Laptop, laptop charger, mobile charger, power bank, handsfree etc sab to rakh liya hai mene .
Ami: to beta ek kaam krna pehenna bhi laptop hi haan, kapde nhi rakhne tujhe kya ek hi jode m ghooomta rahe poora time ?
Viki: wo to mujhe pta hai aapne packing kr di hogi mere kapdon ki bhi isii liye soo rha tha, afterall app meri pyaari ami jo ho
.
Ami: beta ami to me hun tumhaari or ab ye maske lagaane ki zaroorat nhi hai mene packing kr di hai to ab utho nahao tayyar ho jaa kr shaam m nikalna bhi hai or tumhe ptaa hai k shaam ko traffic kiyna jamm hota hai to jaldi nikalna hai.
Viki: acha thk hai jaa rha hun.
" Ye hain hamari story k main character Waqas aka Viki, aisaa hi hai ye apne kaamon m thoda careless atleast baaki logon ko to aisa hi lagta hai ".
Shaam theek 5:30 pr sabhi log Railway
Station pr pohonch jaate hain or train
bhi time pr hi thi jo apne m ek miracle se kam nhi hota pr ho gaya tha. Ali bhi aaya huwa tha apne Dost ko see of krne.
Ali: chl yrr ab teri train ka time ho gaya hai to me bhi nikalta hun apna or baaki sabka khayaal rakhna, waise tujhe bolne ka koi faida to hai nhi pr ab formality bhi to poori krni hai na
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Viki: chl ab zeyaada daant na nikaal rakhun ga sabka khayaal or tu bhi dheyaan rakhna jaldi hi milen ge or haan araam se jaiyoo ghar mujhe pata hai tere Rideron wale keede ka to .
Ali: acha thk hai araam se hi jaoun gaa, Chl ok bye Have a Safe Journey
.
Viki: Thanks bhai, bye and take care. 
Or Ali wapas chl deta hai apne ghr aaj wo.jaldi aagaya tha office se apne dost ko station chorne k liye. (Iske ghr m isko Ami Abu ek bada bhai hai or ek Badi behen hai jinki shaadi ho chuki hai bhai ki bhi jaldi hi ho jaye gii Rishta pakka ho chuka hai unka bhi, Ali bhi Viki k saath ek hi College me padhta tha wahin 2non hi dosti huii or dekhte hi dekhte ye 2non Best Friends ban gye, ye bhi viki ki age ka hi hai bss viki se kuch months badaa hai ).
Wahin Train
chal padi thi apni manzil ki taraf. Apna Viki bhi masti m safar ko enjoy kr rha tha or Gaon m ghoomne phirne or naa jaane kis kis cheez ka khwaab dekh rha tha pr isko kya pata ka ye safar ka ikhtetaam usse kis naye safar pr le kr jaane wala hai, or uski qismat m kya likha hai ab ye to aaane wala waqt hi bataye gaa.
Aakhir kaar 16 ghante k safar k baad ye log pohonch jaate hain apne gaon .
AT VILLAGE RAILWAY
STATION
Jaise hi train gaon k station pr rukti hai sabhi musaafir jinki manzil yehi thi woh sab utarnaa start kr dete hain yo Viki and family bhi sabhi ki trhaan apna samaan uthaa kr train se utarte hain or station k gate ki taraf .
Gaon ka mahol hi kuch alag tha abhi yeog station pr hi the jahan jaafi bheed bhaad thi aane or jaane wale logon ki pr phii bhi ek alag hi feel aa rahi thi. Gaon ki hawaon m hi ek alag positivity thi jo sbko ek sakoon de rhi thi wahin apne Viki baabu yo jaise kho hi gye hon.
Train
se utarte hi Viki chaaron taraf aise dekhne laga tha jaise kisi ko dhoond rha ho usko aise dekh kr Abu bole.
Abu: beta ye aise ulluuu ki trahan chaaron taraf gardan q ghumaa rha hai .
Viki: Nhi wo me dekh rha tha koi lene nhi aaya abhi tk .
Abu: wah beta tu koi chota baccha hai ya pahli baar aaya hai yahan jo koi lene ayega or waise bhi kisi ko ye nhi pata hai k hum kitne baje aane wale hain.
Viki: nhi mene bola ab itna bada superstar aaaya hai to koi to ayega hi naa lene lekin koi nhi aaya pr ab aap bol rhe ho to thk hai kisi ko nhi pta to jaane dete hain. (viki ne bade style se chaude hote huwe ye baat boli).
Abu: hainnnn kon superstar beta ?
Ye sun kr Viki ka to munh hi dekhne wala ho gaya tha jis style se janaaab ne khud ko superstar bola tha uspar Abu k jawaab se suthri wali ho gyiii bechare kii .
Haste haste sabhi station se baher aate hain or taxi le kr chl dete hain apni manzil ki taraf.
Inka gaon wala ghr koi pushtaini type nhi tha pr sab as a joint family hi rehte the Viki ki khala, uske mamu, chachu, phupho sabhi .
Inke ghr ek hi gali m ek hi line m the, or sabhi ghr ek 2sre k baraabar m the to inhon ne mil kr sabhi gharon k baher ek boundary wall banwaa rakhi thi like a society or a Haveli type jaise haveli m sabhi log saath rehte hain pr buildings alag alag bani hoti hain lekin outer boundary ek hi hoti hai waisa hi yahaan bhi tha.
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Phle to aapko bahut bhaut badhayi ho is khubsurat kahani ke liye. Aur Readers se writers ki list me kadam rakhne ke liye.
Sath hi me mujhe ye dekh kr bhi bahut accha laga ki aapke story ka prefixe thriller hai. Ye meri is site ki 1st story hogi is catigray ki. Ha mai janta hu ki kuch aur bhi story hai is catigary me jo ki bahut achi hai aur mai unko kabhi time se read bhi karna chahta hu. Lakin wakat hi nahi mil pata raha hai. Aaj thoda free time mila to aapki story dekhi to ise hi read karne ka man bana liya. Ab mera is site par ek Frnd is tread ka bhi ho gaya.

Aapke story ki suruaat bahut hi khubsurat hai. Abhi tak ke story me mujhe sub kuch bikul sahi jagah laga. Aur jo chij mujhe sbse acha laga wo thi comedy. Jo ki bilul sahi jagah par aapne add ki hai. Aur Vicky ke charecter ko bhi aapne abhi tak bahut ache se ek normal ladke ki tarah dikhaya hai. Aur ye bhi mujhe bahut acha laga.
Ha aapke story ke charecters ki details read karte hue mujhe ek baat dhyan aayi to mai aapko wo batana cahta hu. Agar sex hoga aapki story me to use under age mat karna. Quki aapki story me kuch girl 18 year se kam hai agar incest sex hoga to unse mat dikhana. Aur agar dikhana hoga to unki age edit krke 18+ kar dena.
Baki abhi tak aapki story bahut hi achi lagi. Keep growing.