Phle to aapko bahut bhaut badhayi ho is khubsurat kahani ke liye. Aur Readers se writers ki list me kadam rakhne ke liye.
Sath hi me mujhe ye dekh kr bhi bahut accha laga ki aapke story ka prefixe thriller hai. Ye meri is site ki 1st story hogi is catigray ki. Ha mai janta hu ki kuch aur bhi story hai is catigary me jo ki bahut achi hai aur mai unko kabhi time se read bhi karna chahta hu. Lakin wakat hi nahi mil pata raha hai. Aaj thoda free time mila to aapki story dekhi to ise hi read karne ka man bana liya. Ab mera is site par ek Frnd is tread ka bhi ho gaya.

Aapke story ki suruaat bahut hi khubsurat hai. Abhi tak ke story me mujhe sub kuch bikul sahi jagah laga. Aur jo chij mujhe sbse acha laga wo thi comedy. Jo ki bilul sahi jagah par aapne add ki hai. Aur Vicky ke charecter ko bhi aapne abhi tak bahut ache se ek normal ladke ki tarah dikhaya hai. Aur ye bhi mujhe bahut acha laga.
Ha aapke story ke charecters ki details read karte hue mujhe ek baat dhyan aayi to mai aapko wo batana cahta hu. Agar sex hoga aapki story me to use under age mat karna. Quki aapki story me kuch girl 18 year se kam hai agar incest sex hoga to unse mat dikhana. Aur agar dikhana hoga to unki age edit krke 18+ kar dena.
Baki abhi tak aapki story bahut hi achi lagi. Keep growing.