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friends next update rat ko 10 baje post kar dunga... shukriya..
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Lakin pahli baar jab ravi haweli se girne par mar kyu gaya.thanks bhai... apke swal ka jawab yeh reha...
bhai jab suhana jinda ho gai thi , tab ring ko uska jism mil gya tha , or suhana keval komal yani ruhi ki bali de sakti thi , esi liye usne pehle ravi ko andhkar log behja , khushi ke sath , tain ki ravi ko prince sonik ki kuch yadian mil jaye , par yeh ehsas na ho , ke voh ik devil hai , ravi ko us jung me bus ik prince hone tak hi yad reha ,
suhana ke marte hi , ring , seema se door ho gai , lekin es sab me ik galti ho gai , ring ke jariye ravi or komal ko jinda karna ,
mane suhana ke moh se ring kya hai , yeh bataya tha , ring shetian ka ik ansh hai , ik jevat ansh , abh ring ne komal or ravi ko jinda kiya , toh ravi ko pora yad a chuka hai , ke voh kaha ka prince hai , voh hell ka prince tha , yeh sab ring ka racha hua mayajaal hai ,
ring ne agar komal ki bali dedi , tab shetain khud prithvi par a jayega , bus yahi kahani ka main topic hai , us map me , ring ka ant karne ka ik shakti hai , tabhi sabhi bure log us shakti ko pana chahte hain , tain ke ring ko apni icha anusar chala sake , matlab uska use kar sake ,
seema ko chakar es liye aye , kyu ki voh aurat , vaha ayi thi , ring apni takat se seema ko phir se vash me karegi , tain ki seema use pehan sake , or suhana , komal ki bali de sake , or ravi map ke jariye us shakti tak na pahunch paye ,
bus yahi hai simple sa ik plot
Jisse kaal ko jinda krna pada.
Agar uska devil wale roop amar hai to pichle janm me phir vo kaise mar gaya tha.
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eska jawab nai hai mere pas , ravi pichle janam me kyu mara , agar abhi bata diya , toh sab khatam , apko pm me bata dunga , akele me , lekin apka maza kharab hoga , agar abhi sab jan loge , mere pas apke har swal ka jawab hai , or yeh sab me agge detail me batauga ... shukriya bhai...
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update-78
Abh Agge...
sab shant ho gya , kat behosh padhi thi jamen par , ravi tez tez hafta , ik dam shant hone laga , tabhi khushi ne bhagte hue , ik jordar punch ravi ke chehre par jad diya ,
"aaahhhhhh ..." ravi ik dard bhari chekh marta jamen par gir gya ,
"khushi , ruko , bhyia ko mat maroo , voh abh devil nai hain..." komal ne apne bhai ki chinta me bola ,
"pata haiii , me check kar rehi thi..." khushi muskrate hue kat ke pas chali gai ,
komal bhag kar apne bhai ko uthane lagi , or baby uth kar kat ke pas jane lagi ,
kat ke pas jaker usne dekha , khushi apne hontho ko kat ke hontho se milaye , unko chus rehi thi , baby yeh dekh behad gussa ho gai ,
"aahhhhh bewdi door hat , meri kattt seee..." baby ne gusse me chekhte hue khushi ko dhaka marte hue bola ,
dhaka padhte hi khushi , kat se door gir gai , baby ne kat ko apni bahu me bhar liya ,
"bevkuf dhaka kyu mara , vaise eske honth behad naram hain , maza a gya..." khushi apne hontho par jebh phirate hue boli ,
"teri toh (gusse me chekhte hue) ..."
baby ne tezi se uthte hue khushi ko phir se gira diya , or uske uper beth , uske chehre par punch jadne lagi , khushi bhi kam nai thi , voh baby ko apne uper se ik traf girate hue , tezi se uske uper bethte hue , use punch jadne lagi ,
"rema , roku enko..." komal behad gusse me boli ,
rema ne usi wakht apne lal baalo se khushi or baby ko ik dusre se alag karte hue jakad liya ,
"chodu remaa , es chudail ko mar dungii , meri kat par buri nazar dalii , yaahhh..." baby gusse me chatpatate hue boli ,
"abh voh meri bhi haii , me use paker rahugii , tu rok lenaa , voh muzse bhi pyar karegii..." khushi apne jakhmi honth par hath phirate boli ,
"nai karegi , voh tumse kabhi pyar nai karegi..."
"sharat lagao , agar usne muzse pyar kiya , toh , kya dogi muze.." khushi man hi man muskrate hue boli ,
"jo tum kaho , lekin voh muzse pyar karti hai..." baby kat ke masom chehre ko niharte hue boli ,
"thik hai , tum muze kabhi rokugi naiii , kat se bat karne se , uske pas jane se , agar dar rehi ho , toh mana kar do..." khushi muskrate hue boli ,
"nai mana karugi , agar tum hari toh..." baby bhi man hi man muskrate hue boli ,
vahi ravi or komal jamen par bethe , dono ki traf dekh rehe the , or rema bhi unke pas bethi , ravi ke chehre ko chu kar dekh rehi thi , voh kabhi kabhi ravi ke hath ko chum leti ,
"jo tum kahugi , vahi karugii , toh sharat manzor hai..."
"han , par kat par koi jabardasti nai chalegi , or na koi jadu , tume ik aam insan ban kar , yeh sab karna hoga..."
"manzor hai..." khushi muskrate hue boli ,
"muze bhi..."
rema ke baalo ne dono ko azad kar diya , khushi sabko vapis kabile me le ayi , baby ne kat ko apne room me bed par sula diya , kyu ki voh abh tak behosh thi ,
baby , kat ke sath hi let gai , or uska matha chumte hue boli..."ohh meri jaan , ajj tumne ham sab ki jaan bachai haii , meri pyari katt..." baby ne yeh bolte hi kat ke hontho ko kas kar chum liya , or use bahu me bhar let gai ,
vahi dusri traf , rema apni maa seema ko , ajj hui jung ke bare me bata rehi thi , yaha se ik bat proof ho gai , ke ladki chahe aam ho , yah ajeeb si , rahasmayi , voh batian karni nai chodegi ,
lekin seema toh kahi or hi khoi hui thi , reh reh kar use ik ajeeb si takat ki kami mehsus ho rehi thi ,
use abh sapne bhi ajeeb ajeeb ate the , voh apne sapno me , pariya , devil , aag , jadugarniyan sab dekhti thi ,
"kya hua maa , phir se dard ho reha hai..." rema behad udas hote hue boli ,
"nai meri bachii , bus kuch preshan hu..."
"kis bat ke liye..."
"beta ajj kal kuch ajeeb ajeeb sapne ate hain , koi suhana nam ki ladki or ufff , mera toh jeena haram ho gya hai.." seema behad udas lehje me boli ,
"ohh maa , yeh sab kab se ho reha hai..."
"ahh jis din tumara bhai , tumare room se nanga bhaga tha , tab se..." seema haste hue boli ,
"kyaa maa app bhii.." rema sharmate hue boli , toh uske baalo ne uska chehra chupa liya ,
"dekho , meri beti ko sharam a rehi hai , rema .." seema haste haste hue phir udas hoker boli ,
"huu .." rema bhi yeh sab samaz gai ,
"beti mane jo mehsus kiya , ya jo me mehsus kar rehi hu , voh behad bura hai , muze mehsus hota hai , me seema nai hu , me koi or hu , mera saar dard karne lagta hai , muze kuch samaz nai a reha beti (rote hue)..."
"maaa , rona mat , me hu na , me apko kuch nai hone dungi , maa me apko har burai se bacha lungi , apni beti par vishwas karo..." rema behad udas or nam akhon se boli , or seema ko apni bahu me bhar liya ,
"janti hu , jab tak tum ho , muze kuch nai ho sakta , esi sahare toh jee rehi hu..." seema apni beti ka matha chumte hue boli ,
"meri bachi , kitni chot ayi hai tume , agar tumara yeh haal hai , toh baki sab ka , acha , me ravi or komal ko dekh kar ati hu.." seema yeh bolte muskrate hue room se bahar bhag gai ,
vahi dusri traf kat ki jab akh khuli , tab rat ke 8 baj rehe the , seema abhi bhi khana bana rehi thi , or uski madad rimi or shurti kar rehi thi , voh dono kuch jayda hi karib a gai thi (abh app samazdar ho , samaz loge..)
kat ko sapne me bhi , ravi ka devil roop dikh reha tha , uska sapna kuch es parkar tha...
"tum , tum kon ho.." kat ik verian sunsan jagah par , ik pahad ki choti par , ik devil ke samne giri hui thi , uski akhon se ganga jamuna beh rehi thi ,
"me hu ravi , tumara ravi , dekho mere es roop ko , tum kehti thi , me devil nai hu..." ravi behad khushi me dahadte hue bola , uske lal byank pankh fadfadane lage ,
"tt...tt...tum...rr...ravi...naa...naiiii ...hh...hoo..." kat haklate hue boli , voh dar se kamp rehi thi ,
"me hu ravi , me hu devil , dekho mera yeh byank roop , abh bolo , karti ho pyar , bolu , varna jaan le lunga..." voh devil agge badhte hue bola ,
"naiii , me tumse pyar nai karti..." kat ne rote hue chekh kar bola ,
"tohh jaoo narag mee...( gooo tooo hellll..).." etna bol ravi ne kat ko us pahad ki choti se niche fenk diya , kat niche girti gai , girti gai , or chekhte hue uski akhen khul gai , lekin yeh ik sapna tha...
"babyyyy bachaoooo..." kat chekhte hue uth kar beth gai , baby ne use apni bahu me bhar liya , or use shant karne lagi ,
"baby mane bhut dekha , baby voh , voh mar dega muze..." kat beintha rote hue boli ,
"naiii shhhhh , shant ho jaoo , meri jaan , me hu naaaa , plss shant ho jaooo..." baby khud bhi rote hue boli ,
jab kat shant na hui , toh baby ne voh kiya , jo voh aksar karti thi , voh kat ke hontho ko chusne lagi , use apni bahu me jakadte hue , bed par gira kar ,
baby ne etna kas kas kar kat ke hontho ko chusa , ke uske lal honth or bhi lal ho gye , voh kuch hi der me shant hoker , kasmasane lagi , voh baby ko baalo ko sehlate hue , apne honth chusvati rehi , jab dono ki sanse phulne lagi , tab baby ne kat ke lajawab hontho ko chod , uske sath let , tez tez hafte hue , uski traf dekh , hasne lagi , kat bhi muskra rehi thi ,
"abh thik ho..." baby , kat ke baalo ko sehlate hue boli ,
"huu..." kat bhi muskra kar boli , par phir voh udas ho gai ,
"kya hua meri jaan..." baby bhi udas hote hue boli ,
"ahhh (ik lambi sans leker) baby mane ravi ko devil ke roop me dekha , lekin muze yeh sab sapna lag reha hai.." kat ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,
"uff ohh , mera bacha , voh sapna hi tha , tum bhi na , acha meri janu , yeh batao tum muzse kitna pyar karti ho..." baby , khushi ki sharat yad karte hue boli ,
"baby , yeh kyu puch rehi ho , tumare bina me kisi ka soch bhi nai sakti , me tumse bepanah pyar karti hu , ravi se bhi jayda .." kat ne baby ke hontho ko chumte hue nam akhon se bola ,
"agar mere bina koi ladki tumari jindgi me aye toh..."
"baby , yeh behki behki batian kyu , akhir bat kya hai , tum chupa rehi ho kuch..." kat ne ghor se baby ke chehre ko dekh bola ,
"nai toh , bus aise hi , uff ohh , sach bol rehi hu , acha abh nai puchugi , lekin..."
"lekin kya.."
"agar tum kisi or ki hui , toh me tumse hamesha hamesha ke liye door chali jaugi , etni door , ke tum kabhi muze dekh nai paugi , yeh vada reha..." baby ne behad rote hue bola ,
"chattaakkk ..." ik jordar thapad ki awaz pore room me gunj gai ,
"me nai janti , tum yeh kya bol rehi ho , kyu bol rehi ho , lekin dubara muzse door jane ki bat kahi , ya sochi bhi , toh me apni jaan de dungiii , tum bolu toh ravi se door ho jati hu , lekin me tumse pyar karti hu , baby me tumare bina jeene ka soch bhi nai sakti , pls aisa mat bolo karu..." kat , baby ke pas bed par girkar chehra chupaye rote hue boli ,
"acha sorry , maf kar do , pls.." baby apne kan pakad nam akhon se boli , or phir usne kat ko apni bahu me bhar liya or use pyar karne lagi , lekin dono ko koi dekh reha tha , koi apna...
vahi dusri traf
"ouchhhh , komal dhere se malam lagaoo , bahut jal rehi hai , es khushi ne kitni jor se mara..." ravi dard se sisakta hua bola , kyu ki komal uske nichle honth ki ik side malam laga rehi thi , kyu ki voh niche se fat gya tha or suza bhi hua tha ,
"chup , devil banna tha , sabko marna tha , ham logu ki halat kharab kar di , acha hua khushi ne mara , me toh kehti hu , ik do or lagati..." komal ne apne lehrate baalo ko kande se piche karte hue zuk kar ravi ke fate honth par malam lagate hue thoda gusse me bola ,
ravi kho gya , komal ke hasen chehre me , ufff behad khubsurat , or yeh bat komal ne bhi mehsus kar li ,
"kya dekh rehe ho , etna mara hai , mera pora chehra kharab kar diya hai..." komal ne thodi si malam apne jakhmi gaal par bhi lagate hue bola ,
"sorry..." ravi ne apne kan pakadte hue bola ,
"chup , es bat ki mafi nai milegi..." komal ne or bhi gusse me bola ,
"kyu , me yeh lara ke liye kar reha tha..."
"lara thik hai , matlab uska sharir abhi koma awashta me hai , mane khushi ko voh phool lane behja hai , uske ras se lara jevat ho jayegi..." komal ne bina ravi ko dekhe apna kam karte hue bola ,
"lekin marko ka khoon..."
"chup , marko ka khoon , or bhi raste hote hain , or bhulu mat , me kon hu , ik bar thande dimag se muzse bat bhi kar sakte the , bus devil bane , or chal padhe , khoon lane , huu..." komal ne gusse me bolte hue malam lagai or phir baki malam ko ik table par rakh diya ,
"acha , komal sorry , me bhavnayion me beh gya tha , pls man jao..." ravi thoda udas lehje me bola ,
"chup , koi sorry nai milegi , so jaoo , me lara ke pas ja rehi hu..."
"komal , muze yad nai rehta , me devil tha , or tum janti ho , mere us roop ko..."
"chup , me bhi toh ruhi hu , lekin mera control dekho , apko malam lagai na , koi jatka laga apko bijli ka , har bat me hero kyu bante ho , abh ik or lafaz nai , so jao..." komal room se bahar ki traf jate hue boli ,
"komal tum meri bewi ki trah rohab kyu jad rehi ho .."
"ahhhh , me bewi hu tumari samaze , or me tumari pitai bhi karugi , abh so jao , bevkuf , huu.." komal badi adda se yeh bol , room se chali gai ,
"meri bewi , meri komal , kitna hasen sapna hai , ufff kitni lambi jindgi hai , kaha se suruat hui , or abh kaha pahunch gya..." ravi man hi man yeh sochte hue bola , tabhi uske room ki khidki par ik teer a laga ,
ravi ne uth kar us teer ko khidki se nikala or us teer ki nok par lagi , ik choti si chithi ko padhne laga , jo kuch es parkar thi...
"ravi , ravi , meri jaan , me hu Elizabeth , hasshh kya bolu , toh suno , kal vansha jungle ke suruati sathan par , lara ko sahi salamat leker a jana , varna pas behti nadi me aisa chemical dalugi , ke pora shehar narag ban jayega , toh bhulna mat , thik 10 baje , lara ke sath ..tumari Eliza..."
ravi voh chithi padh thoda preshan ho gya , abh khushi hi sabko bacha sakti thi , lekin voh kab tak ayegi , eska kuch pata nai tha...
to be counited... ( note:- friends yar app log reply nai karte , esi liye me update nai deta , me kuch din or dekhuga , uske bad bus , agar es bar mane story bech me chodi , toh phir 1 ya 2 saal restart nai karuga , phir voh log bhi ayege , jo reply nai karte , par kahege , ham apki story ke fan hain , agge likho etc , abh faisla apke hath me hai , reply do , ya me story stop kar du , es bar thread close karke hi jauga... shukariya ...)
Ye bhi sahi hai.
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Aacha update hai.......kat ka kuch samaj me nahi aaya aaisi konsi shakti hai uske pass ....... Mujhe laga tha fari ravi ko rokegi ......... par yaha to kat ne roka ........Seema ko kay ho raha hai ab ...... Par seema ko jo kuch ho raha hai uske bare mai rema kuch na kuch jarur janti hai...... rema kay karti hai seema ke liye ye dekhana hai ........eliza ki mulakat jald hi hogi ravi se ....... Dekhana ye hai eliza ko kaise roke ga ravi ........
Intajar rahe ga nxt update ka.
aur bhai story stop mat karna ..... Story bohot aachi ja rahi hai bohot se raaz khulne baaki hai .......Suspense ke chalte toda confusion hai .....par jaise jaise suspense ke uparse parda hate ga confusion bhi clear hoga.
Intajar rahe ga nxt update ka.
aur bhai story stop mat karna ..... Story bohot aachi ja rahi hai bohot se raaz khulne baaki hai .......Suspense ke chalte toda confusion hai .....par jaise jaise suspense ke uparse parda hate ga confusion bhi clear hoga.
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Pehle review deta hu.
Wah bhai gajab ka update diya he. Is wale me mujhe pura maja aya. Ye kat ko leke khushi aur baby me shart kyu lagwa di yaar. Teeno ko ravi dekh lega. Waise story me lasbianship kuch jyada nahi ho gayi. Hehehhe pehle baby aur kat., Shruti aur rimi, fir kat to har ladki ko apnana chahti he. Komal aur ravi ki nok jhok mast lagi bahut. Haye kya nakhre dikha rahi he komal. Ravi ki to halat kharab kar di. Elizabeth ne to badi khatarnaak dhamki de dali yaar.
Ab baat karte he aapki post par review na aane ki.
Bhai suru me aapne jab story suru ki thi to pehle kuch din aise hi reviews kam aate the, lekin aapke regular updates dene ke baad unme ijafa hona suru ho gya tha. Lekin fir aapke bimar padne se update kam aane lage aur fir beech me to bilkul band hi ho gaye the ek tarike se. Ab bhagwaan ne aapki sehat pehle se thik kar di he to jab ab sabko pata chalega ki aapke update fir se regular aane lage he fo rivews bhi fir se aane lagenge. Isliye plzz is story ko adhura mat chhodna kyu ki ye ab meri life ka ek aham hissa bam gayi he. Jab tak me jinda hu to kam se kam tab tak to ise chalate rehna. Kyuki me aapka aur is story ka sath kabhi nahi chodunga.
Waiting 4 next update
Wah bhai gajab ka update diya he. Is wale me mujhe pura maja aya. Ye kat ko leke khushi aur baby me shart kyu lagwa di yaar. Teeno ko ravi dekh lega. Waise story me lasbianship kuch jyada nahi ho gayi. Hehehhe pehle baby aur kat., Shruti aur rimi, fir kat to har ladki ko apnana chahti he. Komal aur ravi ki nok jhok mast lagi bahut. Haye kya nakhre dikha rahi he komal. Ravi ki to halat kharab kar di. Elizabeth ne to badi khatarnaak dhamki de dali yaar.
Ab baat karte he aapki post par review na aane ki.
Bhai suru me aapne jab story suru ki thi to pehle kuch din aise hi reviews kam aate the, lekin aapke regular updates dene ke baad unme ijafa hona suru ho gya tha. Lekin fir aapke bimar padne se update kam aane lage aur fir beech me to bilkul band hi ho gaye the ek tarike se. Ab bhagwaan ne aapki sehat pehle se thik kar di he to jab ab sabko pata chalega ki aapke update fir se regular aane lage he fo rivews bhi fir se aane lagenge. Isliye plzz is story ko adhura mat chhodna kyu ki ye ab meri life ka ek aham hissa bam gayi he. Jab tak me jinda hu to kam se kam tab tak to ise chalate rehna. Kyuki me aapka aur is story ka sath kabhi nahi chodunga.
Waiting 4 next update
behad shandaar update lekin bhai mujhe hero fir se kamjor hota lag raha ravi ki kamjori hai kat usme aisi power hai ki ravi ki aisi ki taisi ho jati hai