Incest Deewanapan...

[lover of darkness]

update-76

Abh Agge...

ravi asman me uddta hua shehar ki traf badh reha tha , tabhi uske samne komal a gai , voh shyad ravi ko rokne ayi thi ,

ravi apne es vheshi roop me shehar jata , toh vaha tabahi mach jati , hazaro begunah log mare jate , kyu ki ravi abh behad gusse me tha , voh sab jala deta , sab tabah kar deta ,

"hunnmmm , mere raste se hat jaooo..." ravi ne apni behad bhari awaz me garajte hue bola , uska jism behad lal ho chuka tha , akhen bhi lal roshni me chamak rehi thi ,

"bhai ruko , vaha mat jao , vaha aam log rehte hain..." komal ne behad shant or naram awaz me bola ,

"voosshhhh (ghurate hue) lara ko mara , abh marko ko narag ki aag me jala dunga , mere raste se hat jaoo , varna..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola , uske hatho me aag nikalne lagi thi ,

"bhai naii , app ko me jane nai dungi..." komal ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"muze koi nai rok saktaaa , laraa ki mout ka badla lena hai muze..." ravi agge badta hua bola ,

"toh phir ladu hamse , apko rokne ke liye , ham kisi bhi had tak ja sakti hain..." komal ne abh thoda gusse me bola ,

"tum hame nai rok sakti , hamari behan ho , premika ho , es liye bol rehe hain , raste se hat jaooo...." ravi abh or bhi gusse me ata hua bola ,

"me akeli nai huu..."

tabhi komal ne akhen band ki , ik tez safad roshni charo traf phail gai , etni tez roshni ke ravi ne apni akhan band kar li ,

jab ravi ne kuch der bad akhan kholi , uske samne , baby , khushi , or rema bhi khadi hui thi , abh ravi ko charo se ladna tha ,

"komal , agar ham yaha ravi ko rokege , toh pora jungle jal kar rakh ho jayega..." baby ne thoda preshani me bola ,

"khushi tambomoskoyaaa..." komal ik ajeeb si basha me khushi ki traf dekh boli ,

"samaz gaii..." khushi ne akhen band ki , phir ik andhera sa phail gya , sabki akhon ke agge , jab andhera door hua , tab voh sab ik sunsan si jagah par the ,

us verian sunsan jagah par , sirf jamen thi , jiski mitti kali thi , es anant jamen par , ik bhi pedh nai tha , bilkul sunsan , or halka andhera , charo trah phaila hua tha ,

"bhai abh ruk jao , varna hame apko rokna hoga..." komal ne ravi ke karib jate hue bola ,

"han ravi , komal thik bol rehi hai..." baby bhi komal ka pakash lete hue boli ,

"boosshh (demon groans) , me raza hu tum sab ka , muze rokne ki kossih mat karoo..." ravi tez tez sanse bharta behad bhari awaz me bola ,

"nai ravi , ham tume nai jane dengi , pls tum apna gussa shant karo..." baby , ravi ke karib jate hue boli ,

"naiii , lara ko jinda karna haiii , marko ke khoon se , me uski atma ko hell nai jane dungaa , mere pas wakht kam haiii , hat jaoo , varnaaa..." ravi gusse me chekhta hua bola ,

"naiii , matt jaoo , tumare gusse ne pehle pari log ko khak kar diya , abh tum prithvi ko bhii , naiii , me nai jane dungi tume..." baby ne apne hatho ki muthyian kaste hue bola , aisa karte hi uske hatho me ik agg si nikalne lagi ,

"huuunmmm , me jaugaa , tum sab ko hara kar..." ravi , baby ke karib jaker uski akhon me jakte hue bola ,

"ravii , hosh me ayo..." baby thoda naram padhte hue boli ,

"mee raviiii naiiii huuuuu..." ravi lambi lambi sanse bharta gusse me chekhta hua bola ,

ravi ne baby ki gardan ko apne hath se kas kar pakad liya , ravi me anant shakti thi , usne baby ko gale se pakade uper utha liya , baby ke pair hawa me zulne lage ,

"babyyy..." khushi behad dard bhari awaz me chekhte hue boli ,

khushi ne apni akhen band ki or tez aag ka magic ball ravi par chod diya ,



voh aag ka magic ball tezi se ghumta hua , ravi ke jism se ja takraya ,

lekin khushi ke sath sath sabhi herian reh gye , kyu ki ravi ke jism ne voh pori aag apne ander sama li , ravi ka sharir aag me tapne laga , or behad garam bhi ho gya ,

tabhi rema ne agge badh , apne baalo se ravi ke hath ko jakad liya , rema ke lal jadui baalo ne ravi ke hath ke sath sath uske pore jism ko jakad liya ,

"rema apni pori takat lagao..." komal ne rema ki traf dekhte hue bola ,

komal ki bat sun rema or bhi gusse me a gai , rema ke lal jadui baal ravi ke jism ko kasne lage , ika ik rema ki akhon se tez bijli ke jatke ravi ke jism par padhne lage ,

"ahhhhhh ouuuusshhhh..." ravi ke moh se dard bhari siskayian nikalne lagi , or uske hath ki pakad dheli hone lagi ,

hath ki pakad dheli hote hi , baby ne apne dono hatho se ravi ke hath ko uper ki traf jordar jatka diya ,

baby , ravi ki pakad se azad hote hi , apni gardan pakad ghutno ke bal beth kar , tez tez hafne lagi ,

rema ke do trafa hamle ne ravi ko kamzor kar diya , ravi dhere dhere ghutno ke bal beth gya , or vahi dusri traf khushi , apne hath me demon khanjar liye ravi ki traf badhne lagi ,

"ravii muze maf karna..." khushi ne ravi ke karib akar uski akhon me dekhte hue bola ,

"yeehaaaaaaahhhhhh...." ravi ne apni pori takat laga , behad gusse me chilate hue , apne dono hatho ko jatka diya , rema ke baal jo uske jism par lipte hue the , tut kar , bhikar kar , hawa me uddne lage , rema apne baalo ke tutte hi , jatke se piche ki traf gir gai ,

"aaaahhhhhhh yeehhh loo..." khushi ne behad gusse me chilate hue , demon Khanjar ka war , ravi par karna chaha , par ravi ne uska hath raste me rok diya ,

"tum meri angrakashak ho , meri gulam , devil ki gulam , muzse bhagavt , tume mehngi padhegi tamasss..." ravi ne behad gusse me chila kar bolte hue , khushi ke chehre ko dekhte hue bola ,

"ahhhhhh mera hathhh..." khushi dard me siskar uthi , kyu ki ravi ne uska hath kalai se pakad rakha tha , ravi uske hath ko kalai se pakad kas kar daba reha tha , or khushi ko behad dard ho reha tha ,

"gulam bhagavt nai karte tamas..." ravi ne etna bol , apne dusre hath se ik jordar punch khushi ke pet me jad diya , khushi uddte hue door jamen par ja giri , khushi ke girte hi , vaha ki jamen ander ki traf dhas gai , vaha behad gehra gol ghada ban gya ,

"bhaiii yeh apne acha nai kiyaa..." komal abh gusse me ate hue boli ,

komal ke gusse ne , uske jism me badlav kar diya , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak uthi ,

ring ki takat dono ke pas thi , dono behad takatwar the , kyu dono bhai behan the , apne maa baap se mili shaktyian , or ring se mili shaktyian , dono me ik saman thi ,

"ruhi , mere raste se hat jaoo , tum hamari behan ho..." ravi ne komal ke karib akar bola ,

"bhai jante ho , apko sharap mila hai , app hame chuu nai sakte..." komal ne etna bol , ravi ko apni bahu me kas liya ,

"aaahhhhhhh ssshhhhh naaiiiiiihhh..." ravi ke badan me bijli ke tez jatke lagne lage , paviter bijli ke jatko ne ravi ko kamzor karna suru kar diya ,

dono bhai behan ko ik sharap mila tha , dono kabhi ik nai ho sakte the , abh komal , ruhi thi , or ravi , devil tha ,

"bhaiiii hosh me ayo , apni galti sawikar kar lo , ghar chaloo..." komal ne ravi ke kanu me gusse se bolte hue kaha ,

"naaiiiiiiii..." ravi ne komal ki pakad se azad hone ki kossih karte hue bola ,

"toh bhugto en jatko ko , yeh paviter bijli apko zuka degi , apko kamzor kar degiii , apko zukna hogaaa..." komal ne etna bol , ravi ko or bhi kas liya apni bahu me ,

tabhi asman garaj utha , asman me bijli kadakne lagi , phir voh tez chamakti bijli jamen par ik ke bad ik , girne lagi ,

"bhaiii harr man loo , varnaa..."

"naiiiii...." ravi ne komal ke chehre par apna saar marte hue thoda dard me bola ,

"ahhhh , toh sehan karo phir..." komal abhi bol hi rehi thi , ke ravi bar bar apna saar komal ke chehre par marne laga , komal ki pakad dheli hone lagi ,

"bhaiii ahhhhh rukoo aashhhh..." komal ke chehra chill gya , uska matha fat gya , khoon beh nikala , par tabhi usne voh kiya , jo ravi ne socha bhi nai tha ,

komal ne behad gusse me apne honth , apne bhai ke hontho se mila diye , tabhi asman gusse me garaj utha , asman se bijli or bhi tezi se girne lagi ,

vahi khushi bhi rengte hue us ghade se bahar a chuki thi , rema or baby bhi sambal chuki thi , asman se girti bijli ne unko bhi preshan kar diya tha ,

ika ik rema ne khushi or baby ko apne pas khich , apne baalo se ik shield bana li , tain unko koi nuksan na ho , par jaise hi bijli ka ik tez jatka , rema ke baalo par laga , ik tez dhamake ke sath , tino door ja giri , voh behad jakhmi ho chuki thi ,

vahi komal apne bhai ke hontho ko chus rehi thi , or vahi asman se lagatar bijli gir rehi thi ,

ika ik bijli ka ik tez jatka dono ke jism par a laga , dono dard se chekhte ik dusre se door ja gire ,

abh sabhi jamen par jakhmi lete hue the , komal or ravi jaise hi alag hue , tabhi asman pora saf ho gya , jaise vaha kuch hua hi nai tha ,

ravi ki akhen band thi , tabhi uski band akhon ke samne , lara ka muskrata chehra umad aya , voh behad masom lag rehi thi , phir ravi ne ika ik apni akhen khol li , voh uth kar khada ho gya ,

komal bhi dard se kahrahte hue khadi ho rehi thi , tabhi ravi ne tezi se bhagte hue , komal ke chehre par apne ghutne ka tez war kar diya , komal phir se jamen par gir gai ,

"muze lara ko jinda karna hai , uski atma hell jane ke liye betab ho rehi hai , me uski atma ko mushkil se rok reha hu , or tum sab muze rok rehi ho , yeh jung yahi khatam hui..." ravi etna bol jane laga , tabhi uske kadam vahi tham gye....

ravi ne piche palat niche ki traf dekha , toh komal ne uska pair pakad rakha tha , komal ka chehra khoon se sana hua tha ,

"pyariii behana zuk jaoo..." ravi ne etna bol apne pair ko jatka deker chudva liya , or agge badhne laga , abhi ravi uddne hi wala tha , ke voh kisi ki awaz sun ruk gya ,

ravi ne piche palat dekha , baby , khushi , rema , or komal , behad jakhmi halat me , behad gusse me khadi thi...

"me tumari gulam nai hu bevkuf..." khushi ne aag ugalti akhon se behad gusse me chila kar bola ,

"tum sab , aaaahhhh , me devill huuuuu , or tume devil ke agge zukna hogaaa..." ravi ne gusse me chekhte hue bola ,

"bhai zukna apko hoga..." komal ne apne hontho se behte khoon ko apne hath se saf karte hue bola ,

"voosshhhhh (ghurate hue) , es bar devil tum sabko , jaan se mar degaa , tumari atma ko hell me behj degaaa , mere pas wakht kam haiiii , agar lara ki mout huiii , toh prithvi ko hell banaa dungaa..." ravi ne gusse me chekhte hue apni bhari awaz me bola ,

"bhaiii , abh antim yudh hoga , mout tak , agar prithvi ke masom logu ko bachane ke liye ahhh , hame marna bhi padha , toh hame manzor haiiii , ayoo mar doo apniii ruhiii koo , lelo jaan apni ruhiii kiiii , ayooo devillll..." komal gusse me rote hue chekh kar boli , uske rote hi kuch behad ajeeb hua , jiski kisi ne kalpana bhi nai ki thi...

Dusri traf...

"app zuth bol rehe ho , aisa nai ho sakta..." Eliza ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

"yahi sach hai Elizabeth , me tume dikha sakta hu , apne crystal ball par , yeh dekho..." joker ne behad udas hone ka natak karte hue bola , usne apne magic crystal ball par , lara ke murda sharir ki chavi Eliza ko dikha di ,

"naiiiiiii , laraaaa..." Eliza , lara ke murda sharir ko dekh , ghutno ke bal beth rone lagi , uska ik matar antim dost , abh mar chuka tha , yeh uske liye gehra sadma tha ,

"Eliza tume badla lena hai , ravi se , lara ne apni kurbani di hai , utho Eliza , yeh asnu nai khoon hai , mar do un sab ko , tabahi macha do charo traf , lara ki mout ka badla lo..." joker ne udas Eliza ke man me ik jehar sa gholte hue bola ,

"han , me badla lungi , raviiiii , me barbad kar dungi tume..." Eliza gusse me chila kar boli , or uth kar , apni lab me chali gai ,

voh kuch der bad lab se bahar ayi , uske hath me ik black suitcase tha , usne ik black dress pehan rakhi thi , voh kahi ja rehi thi ,

"kaha ja rehi ho Elizabeth..." joker ne man hi man behad khush hote hue bola ,

"tabahi machane..." Eliza gusse me etna bol , flat se bahar nikal gai , uska pehla nishana , shehar ke aam log the , lekin uske man me kya chal reha tha , yeh toh anne wale wakht me chupa tha...

abh flat me bus marko or joker hi reh gye the , Eliza ke jate hi dono hasne lage ,

"apka dimag behad tez hai , abh Eliza es formule se es shehar me tabahi layegi , voh ravi ko mar degi , phir ham , es dunia par raz karege , mera sadyion purana sapna sakar hoga ... " marko behad hasta hue bola ,

"ahahahaha , marko , mere shetiani dimag hi meri takat hai , me bure kamo ko dusro se anjam dilvata hu , bus ik bar , voh map mere hath lag jaye , phir me hi es dunia ka bhagwan banugaa , ahahaha..." joker apni vheshi hassi haste hue bola....


to be counited.....

 

[sam4321]

Aacha update hai......... Gussa aadmi ki soch ne ki shakti hi khatam kar deta hai ........ aaisa hi kuch ab ravi aur komal ,khushi ,baby ,rima ke sath huwa hai ........komal ravi ko rokna chahati hai taki masum log bache rahe........is hi liye ravi se lad rahi hai ......... Par is say aacha to ye hota komal, baby , rima, khushi ,...,ravi ko samja kar khud marko ko marne ke liye jati ....... Aur ravi ko sambhal ne ke liye shant karne ke liye fari ke naam ka aur seema ke bimar hone ka fayda utha ti ....... Is sai log bhi ravi ke aatak se bache rahte ......aur sayad marko ko maar kar lara ki bhi jaan bach jati.......ab aage ky hota hai ye dekhana hai ..... Khas kar eliza kay karti hai ......eliza jab tabahi machaye gi tab ravi & family aapas mai ladte rahe ge ya .......eliza se masum logo ki raksha kare ge ......kay eliza ka maan badal ne mai kamyab hoge ravi & family ......kay jokar ki chaal eliza ke samne la paye ge ravi & family ........ kay lara bach jayegi ........Ye dekhana interesting hoga ......... Intajar rahe ga next update ka.

 

[Naik]

Very nice excellent update brother
Keep posting
Thanks for lovely update

 

[Raj Singh]

Nice update

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Zabardast update

 

[Love 1994]

Jabardast update bhai

Aap ne bahut hi sahi tarike se ye fight scene likha hai
Khas karke ravi aur komal ka wo scene jisme komal apne mile shap ko lekar ravi ko rokne ki koshish karti hai bina iski parwah kiye ki use bhi isse taklif hogi

Aur is sab me mujhe bas ek baat buri lagi wo ye ki ravi ka khushi /tamas ko gulam kehna

Khair shayad wo devil ban raha isliye wesa kaha hoga
Lekin kal ke update me aap ne bas ravi aur uske gusse ko dikhaya hai rema ko to aap ne kuch hi der ke liye dikhaya tha
Use ravi ko kadi takkar deni chahiye thi kyu ki wo hi is story me sabse jyada power full hai

 

[aka3829]

update-75

Abh Agge...

Ravi or kat ghar pahunch chuke the , kat ajj behad khush thi , uska dil khushi se bhar chuka tha , voh khushi jo use kabhi nai mili thi ,

kat ne bachpan se apni nadan jindgi me , hazaro dukh dard mehsus kiye the , jis umar me ladkyian apne maa baap se , jidd karti hain , apni har dili icha manvane ke liye , us umar me kat khoon ke asnu roti rehi ,

yeh dunia free me kuch nai deti , yaha hasne ke paise lagte hain , or koi hame hasata hai , use bhi kuch na kuch dena padhta hai ,

har insan dukhu me duba hota hai , es dunia me koi khush nai , or na koi kisi ko khush kar sakta hai ,

insani man jiski ik icha khatam hoti hai , toh pal bhar me dusri icha janam le leti hai , par kat , uski bachpan me har icha mar gai , voh bhul gai , ke voh ik aam si ik ladki hai ,

use bhi pyar karna hai , use bhi kisi se ruthna hai , use bhi huk hai , ke voh jab ruth jaye , toh use koi manaye , jab voh udas ho , tab use koi hasaye , lekin kat jindgi ke dukhu me , sab bhul gai ,

voh logu ko marti gai , use har mard me , ik hevian nazar ata , vahi hevain , jo uski maa ki ijat har roz lutta tha , mardu ke parati uski nafrat , behad badh gai ,

lekin eska ant hua , jab use pyar hua , kehte hain , pyar hone ke liye , din , hafte ya saal nai lagte , pyar hone ke liye ik pal ka wakth lagta hai ,

ravi ne kat ka dil jeet liya , lekin yeh ik kahani nai lagti , kat ke jindgi me voh sab hona , uska mardu se nafrat karna , or es dunia me bus ravi se pyar karna , yeh sab ik plan ka hissa tha , lekin yeh sab kon kar reha tha , khair yeh toh anne wale wakht ki bat hai ,

kat ghar me ate hi , apne room me chali gai , voh behad khush thi , or yeh khushi voh baby ke sath bantna chahti thi , uska masom chehra ajj khila khila sa lag reha tha ,

ravi abhi room ki traf ja hi reha tha , ke use lara dikhai di , jo thodi udas thi , voh shyad ghar ke bahar ja rehi thi ,

"hey lara , kaha ja rehi ho , or etni udas kyu ho..." ravi muskrate hue bola ,

"voh , voh , ravi me , acha yeh sab chodu , seema dedi ki tbyiat kharab hai , app unse mil lo , jao jaldi..." lara ne apni bat ik dam se palatte hue bola ,

"ohh no , acha me milta hu tumse..." ravi etna bol tezi se seema ke pas chala gya ,

lara ne ik lambi sans li , or ghar ke bahar jungle ki traf nikal gai , abhi sham hone ko thi , voh udas thi , or kuch der akele rehna chahti thi ,

ravi , lara ki bat sun , jaldi jaldi seema ke pas chala gya , ravi ne room ke ander ghus dekha , seema bed par leti hui thi , uska saar rema ki ik jang par tha , or rema uska saar dhere dhere daba rehi thi ,

seema ki akhen band thi , or rema ke lal jevat baal bhi , seema ka matha sehla rehe the , ravi yeh dekh behad khush ho gya ,

"rema voh..." ravi abhi etna bola hi tha ke rema ne use rok diya ,

"shhhhh..." rema ne apna hontho par ungli rakh bola ,

ravi samaz gya ke seema abhi so rehi hai , or rema nai chahti , ke koi uski maa ko uthaye ,

ravi room se bahar a gya , or uper ki traf jane hi laga tha , ke usne socha , pehle rimi or shurti ko mil le , ravi sidha unke room ke pas pahunch gya ,

ravi ne room ke ander jak kar dekha , rimi or shurti ik dusre se lipat kar batian kar rehi thi , ravi ne unko disturb na karne ka socha , or uper apni komal ke pas pahunch gya ,


dusri traf...


"ahhhh meri gardan ahhh shhh..." ik aurat andheri gufa me apni gardan pakade haf rehi thi ,

"app thik toh ho..." rekha us andhere me behad vheshi awaz me boli , us andheri gufa me halki halki roshni thi , kyu ki ik choti si agg ki mashal vaha jal rehi thi ,

"thik hu , ahhh lekin ravi me etni takat kaha se a gai , meri gardan ka mass jala diya , nai chodugi use..." voh aurat gusse me chekhte hue boli ,

"mera bhai , behad takatwar , usse ladna asan nai , uski kamzori komal , dusri kamzori koi nai..." rekha behad gusse me boli ,

"ahhhh yeh nishan kaise jayege , agar kaal ne yeh nishan dekh liya , toh musibat ho jayegi..." voh aurat apne jale hue gale par hath phira boli ,

"kaal koi shak na hoga , gale par kapda dal lo , ravi ko me dekh lungi , usse muze lena hai badla , meri es halat ka , voh hai jimedar , use markar , bana dungi , apne jaisa , tab badla hoga pora mera..." rekha apni vheshi awaz me haste hue boli ,

"hmm , lekin tum use par abhi hamla mat karna , ahhh bus nazar rakhu us par , tab tak , me koi rasta soch lungi..."

"nazar rakhugi me , apne bhai par , pata karugi , uski takat ka raz , karugi pata , uski kamzori ka , phir mar dungi use , tab pora hoga mera badla , jiske liye batak rehi hu me ..." rekha etna bol vaha se gyab ho gai ,

voh aurat apne gale par ik black kapda band , haweli chali gai , yaha kaal uska intzar kar reha tha ,


Dusri traf...


lara jungle me kabile se door ik choti si pahadi par bethi , asman ki traf dekh rehi thi , uska man udas tha ,

"bhagwan ik bar Eliza se milva do , me janti hu , mane kai pap kiye hain , logu ko mara hai , unko dard diya hai , hazaro ghar tabah kiye hain , tum saza do , par pls , ik bar Eliza se milva do..." lara akhon me asnu liye man hi man bhagwan se dua mang rehi thi ,

kehte hain , acha insan bhi bhagwan se kuch na kuch mangta hai , or bura insan bhi , jab sab darvaje band ho jaye , tab hamare hontho par bhagwan ka nam nikalta hai ,

bhagwan jise ham shyad , apni pori jindgi na dekh paye , voh kon hai , kaha hai , kaisa hai , hame kuch pata nai , hamne kabhi nai socha , ke hame bhagwan se milna chahyie , hamara ik hi maksad ho , kisi na kisi trah , us adrish takat se milna hai ,

"lara..."

lara akhen band kar ro rehi thi , tabhi use kisi ladki ki awaz sunai di , lara ne akhen khol piche palat dekha , voh pathar sa ho gai , uski akhen samne khade insan par jam sa gai ,

"lara meri jaan ..." ik bar phir voh ladki pyar se boli ,

"Eliza..." lara chekhte hue uthi , or bhag kar Eliza ke gale lag gai ,

"Eliza , tum , tum , yaha , ohh , me , me , Eliza , kaha thi tum , me , me , tumare bina nai reh sakti..." lara ne Eliza ke gale lag rote siskate hue bola ,

"lara , tume marna hai..." Eliza ne muskrate hue bola ,

"kyaaa , ahhhhhh shhh..." lara thodi herian hote hue boli , tabhi uski chekh nikal gai ,

kyu ki Eliza ne ik jadui khanjar lara ke pet me ghusa diya tha , lara thoda piche hui , toh Eliza ne voh khanjar khich kar nikal liya ,

"aaaaaaa maaaa..." lara dard se chekhte hue boli ,

tabhi Eliza ka roop badal gya , voh marko tha , jo Eliza ka roop dharan kar aya tha ,

"ahhhh tum , hmm shhh tum k..kon ho..." lara ne apne pet par hath rakhte hue bola , kyu ki vaha behad khoon beh reha tha ,

"haha , me hu marko , es dunia ka sabse bada yodha , or muze tume marna hai..." marko ne behad haste hue bola ,

"ahhh k..kk..kisne behja.. tt..tume..." lara dard sehan na kar pate hue jamen par ghutno ke bal beth gai ,

"muze , muze , tumari dost Eliza ne behja hai , kyu ki tumne uska sath chod diya..."

"nn...naiii...yy..yeh...zz...zuth hai..." lara behad gusse me chekhte hue boli ,

"tum mano ya na mano , vaise bhi tume mar kar , muze kuch hasil nai hone wala , Eliza ne muze jinda kiya , tain ki tume mar saku , vaise bhi usne hi bola tha , ke tume marne ke liye , me uska roop dharan karu..." marko ne lara ke man me ik jehar sa gholte hue bola ,

"kyu , akhir kyu , Eliza kyu kiya tumne..." lara man hi man rote hue boli , barso ki dosti ajj dam tod rehi thi ,

lara dard sehti hui khadi ho gai , usne gusse me marko ki traf dekha ,

"ahhh ladu muzse ..." lara ne apni adh khuli akhon se dard me kahrahte hue bola ,

"haha , abh bhi ladna hai , toh a jao..." marko ne khanjar par lage khoon ko jebh se chatte hue bola ,

lara ne apni tshirt utar apne pet par kas kar band li , tain ki uska behta khoon kam ho jaye , par tab tak khoon behad beh chuka tha ,

"a ja kutte..." lara ne apne dono hatho ki muthyian kaste hue bola ,

marko behad gusse me lara ki traf bhaga , marko ne lara ke karib jate hi , uspar khanjar kar jordar war kiya , par lara niche zuk gai ,

niche zukte hi lara ke pet me ik dard ki lehar doad gai , uski akhon se asnu beh nikale , marko ne lara ke chehre par apna ghutna jad diya ,

lara piche jamen par gir gai , marko ne niche giri lara ke jakhmi pet par apne pairo se marna suru kar diya ,

taza jakham par marko ke pathar jaise juto ne lara ki halat bhigad di , uski akhen band hone lagi ,

tabhi marko ne lara ko baalo se pakad khada kiya , usne apna khanjar ik bar or lara ke pet me ghusa diya , lara ke hontho se ik chekh nikali , or phir uski akhen band ho gai ,

marko ne lara ke bejan jism ko vahi chod diya , or khud vaha se gyab ho gya ,

joker ka ik plan safal ho gya tha , abh dusra plan tha , Eliza ke man me jehar gholne ka , abh joker ko Eliza ko yeh ehsas dilana tha , ke lara ki mout ravi ke karan hui hai ,


dusri traf...


ravi apne room me jaker bed par beth gya , kyu ki komal vaha nai thi , ravi ajj pora din hui , ghatnayion ke bare me soch reha tha ,

ravi abhi apni behan rekha ke bare me soch reha tha , dhere dhere kai batian uske jehan me jinda ho rehi thi ,

jab rema thik nai thi , tab seema kai bar bolti thi , ke uski maa , rekha se milne gai hai , par abh uski maa kaha hai , voh apni maa se kaise mile , voh kaha hai ,

ravi kabhi apni maa ko samaz nai paya tha , uski maa ajeeb thi , lekin voh abh kaha thi , ravi ka dil tadaf sa utha , apni maa ke bare me soch kar , akhon se asnu beh nikale ,

abhi ravi apni maa ke bare me soch hi reha tha , ke khushi uske samne a gai , voh behad chinta me thi ,

"khushi kya hua..." ravi ik dam se khada hota hua bola ,

"voh , voh , lara ko kisi ne mar diya..." khushi etna bol rone lagi , or ravi gusse me jal utha , uska gussa antim seema ko par kar gya , pora badan lal hoker jalne laga , voh chekh utha , uski chekh etni byank thi , ke poora kabila kamp sa gya , pora jungle seham sa gya.....

"ravi sambalo khud ko..." khushi thoda darte hue piche hat gai , kyu ki ravi ka jism behad khofnak thi ,

"naaaiiii , huunnmmm , llaarraaaa kkoo kkiisssnneeeee maaaraaaa..." ravi behad bhari awaz me garjate hue boli , (esme app lucifer ke devil ki awaz ki kalpana kar sakte ho...)

"mm...maaarkoo ...n..ne...." khushi apne sukhe gale se behad hakla kar boli ,

"hhhunnmm , maarkoo..." ravi etna bol chekh utha , or phir tezi se uper ko udda , kamre ki chatt jo lakadyion ki bani hui thi , voh tut kar chakna churr ho gai , ravi behad gusse me shehar ki traf badne laga , tabhi uske samne voh a gai... yeh komal thi ,


to be counited... ( next 2 updates me ravi or uski family me fight hogi , kyu ki sab ravi ko rokne ki kossih karege , tain ki ravi shehar na ja paye...)

Wah bhai kya gajab ka update diya he. Bhai ye kya kiya lara ko maar diya par aapne to kaha tha ki abhi uska bahut kaam baki he. Waise rekha ke pass kaun thi jo kaal ke pas rehti he lekin usane ravi par humla bhi kiya. Kat ke jivan me abhi tak ghatit ghatnaye kisi ka plan tha ye to aapne ek dum se naya bomb fod diya.
Waiting 4 next update

 

[aka3829]

update-76

Abh Agge...

ravi asman me uddta hua shehar ki traf badh reha tha , tabhi uske samne komal a gai , voh shyad ravi ko rokne ayi thi ,

ravi apne es vheshi roop me shehar jata , toh vaha tabahi mach jati , hazaro begunah log mare jate , kyu ki ravi abh behad gusse me tha , voh sab jala deta , sab tabah kar deta ,

"hunnmmm , mere raste se hat jaooo..." ravi ne apni behad bhari awaz me garajte hue bola , uska jism behad lal ho chuka tha , akhen bhi lal roshni me chamak rehi thi ,

"bhai ruko , vaha mat jao , vaha aam log rehte hain..." komal ne behad shant or naram awaz me bola ,

"voosshhhh (ghurate hue) lara ko mara , abh marko ko narag ki aag me jala dunga , mere raste se hat jaoo , varna..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola , uske hatho me aag nikalne lagi thi ,

"bhai naii , app ko me jane nai dungi..." komal ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"muze koi nai rok saktaaa , laraa ki mout ka badla lena hai muze..." ravi agge badta hua bola ,

"toh phir ladu hamse , apko rokne ke liye , ham kisi bhi had tak ja sakti hain..." komal ne abh thoda gusse me bola ,

"tum hame nai rok sakti , hamari behan ho , premika ho , es liye bol rehe hain , raste se hat jaooo...." ravi abh or bhi gusse me ata hua bola ,

"me akeli nai huu..."

tabhi komal ne akhen band ki , ik tez safad roshni charo traf phail gai , etni tez roshni ke ravi ne apni akhan band kar li ,

jab ravi ne kuch der bad akhan kholi , uske samne , baby , khushi , or rema bhi khadi hui thi , abh ravi ko charo se ladna tha ,

"komal , agar ham yaha ravi ko rokege , toh pora jungle jal kar rakh ho jayega..." baby ne thoda preshani me bola ,

"khushi tambomoskoyaaa..." komal ik ajeeb si basha me khushi ki traf dekh boli ,

"samaz gaii..." khushi ne akhen band ki , phir ik andhera sa phail gya , sabki akhon ke agge , jab andhera door hua , tab voh sab ik sunsan si jagah par the ,

us verian sunsan jagah par , sirf jamen thi , jiski mitti kali thi , es anant jamen par , ik bhi pedh nai tha , bilkul sunsan , or halka andhera , charo trah phaila hua tha ,

"bhai abh ruk jao , varna hame apko rokna hoga..." komal ne ravi ke karib jate hue bola ,

"han ravi , komal thik bol rehi hai..." baby bhi komal ka pakash lete hue boli ,

"boosshh (demon groans) , me raza hu tum sab ka , muze rokne ki kossih mat karoo..." ravi tez tez sanse bharta behad bhari awaz me bola ,

"nai ravi , ham tume nai jane dengi , pls tum apna gussa shant karo..." baby , ravi ke karib jate hue boli ,

"naiii , lara ko jinda karna haiii , marko ke khoon se , me uski atma ko hell nai jane dungaa , mere pas wakht kam haiii , hat jaoo , varnaaa..." ravi gusse me chekhta hua bola ,

"naiii , matt jaoo , tumare gusse ne pehle pari log ko khak kar diya , abh tum prithvi ko bhii , naiii , me nai jane dungi tume..." baby ne apne hatho ki muthyian kaste hue bola , aisa karte hi uske hatho me ik agg si nikalne lagi ,

"huuunmmm , me jaugaa , tum sab ko hara kar..." ravi , baby ke karib jaker uski akhon me jakte hue bola ,

"ravii , hosh me ayo..." baby thoda naram padhte hue boli ,

"mee raviiii naiiii huuuuu..." ravi lambi lambi sanse bharta gusse me chekhta hua bola ,

ravi ne baby ki gardan ko apne hath se kas kar pakad liya , ravi me anant shakti thi , usne baby ko gale se pakade uper utha liya , baby ke pair hawa me zulne lage ,

"babyyy..." khushi behad dard bhari awaz me chekhte hue boli ,

khushi ne apni akhen band ki or tez aag ka magic ball ravi par chod diya ,



voh aag ka magic ball tezi se ghumta hua , ravi ke jism se ja takraya ,

lekin khushi ke sath sath sabhi herian reh gye , kyu ki ravi ke jism ne voh pori aag apne ander sama li , ravi ka sharir aag me tapne laga , or behad garam bhi ho gya ,

tabhi rema ne agge badh , apne baalo se ravi ke hath ko jakad liya , rema ke lal jadui baalo ne ravi ke hath ke sath sath uske pore jism ko jakad liya ,

"rema apni pori takat lagao..." komal ne rema ki traf dekhte hue bola ,

komal ki bat sun rema or bhi gusse me a gai , rema ke lal jadui baal ravi ke jism ko kasne lage , ika ik rema ki akhon se tez bijli ke jatke ravi ke jism par padhne lage ,

"ahhhhhh ouuuusshhhh..." ravi ke moh se dard bhari siskayian nikalne lagi , or uske hath ki pakad dheli hone lagi ,

hath ki pakad dheli hote hi , baby ne apne dono hatho se ravi ke hath ko uper ki traf jordar jatka diya ,

baby , ravi ki pakad se azad hote hi , apni gardan pakad ghutno ke bal beth kar , tez tez hafne lagi ,

rema ke do trafa hamle ne ravi ko kamzor kar diya , ravi dhere dhere ghutno ke bal beth gya , or vahi dusri traf khushi , apne hath me demon khanjar liye ravi ki traf badhne lagi ,

"ravii muze maf karna..." khushi ne ravi ke karib akar uski akhon me dekhte hue bola ,

"yeehaaaaaaahhhhhh...." ravi ne apni pori takat laga , behad gusse me chilate hue , apne dono hatho ko jatka diya , rema ke baal jo uske jism par lipte hue the , tut kar , bhikar kar , hawa me uddne lage , rema apne baalo ke tutte hi , jatke se piche ki traf gir gai ,

"aaaahhhhhhh yeehhh loo..." khushi ne behad gusse me chilate hue , demon Khanjar ka war , ravi par karna chaha , par ravi ne uska hath raste me rok diya ,

"tum meri angrakashak ho , meri gulam , devil ki gulam , muzse bhagavt , tume mehngi padhegi tamasss..." ravi ne behad gusse me chila kar bolte hue , khushi ke chehre ko dekhte hue bola ,

"ahhhhhh mera hathhh..." khushi dard me siskar uthi , kyu ki ravi ne uska hath kalai se pakad rakha tha , ravi uske hath ko kalai se pakad kas kar daba reha tha , or khushi ko behad dard ho reha tha ,

"gulam bhagavt nai karte tamas..." ravi ne etna bol , apne dusre hath se ik jordar punch khushi ke pet me jad diya , khushi uddte hue door jamen par ja giri , khushi ke girte hi , vaha ki jamen ander ki traf dhas gai , vaha behad gehra gol ghada ban gya ,

"bhaiii yeh apne acha nai kiyaa..." komal abh gusse me ate hue boli ,

komal ke gusse ne , uske jism me badlav kar diya , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak uthi ,

ring ki takat dono ke pas thi , dono behad takatwar the , kyu dono bhai behan the , apne maa baap se mili shaktyian , or ring se mili shaktyian , dono me ik saman thi ,

"ruhi , mere raste se hat jaoo , tum hamari behan ho..." ravi ne komal ke karib akar bola ,

"bhai jante ho , apko sharap mila hai , app hame chuu nai sakte..." komal ne etna bol , ravi ko apni bahu me kas liya ,

"aaahhhhhhh ssshhhhh naaiiiiiihhh..." ravi ke badan me bijli ke tez jatke lagne lage , paviter bijli ke jatko ne ravi ko kamzor karna suru kar diya ,

dono bhai behan ko ik sharap mila tha , dono kabhi ik nai ho sakte the , abh komal , ruhi thi , or ravi , devil tha ,

"bhaiiii hosh me ayo , apni galti sawikar kar lo , ghar chaloo..." komal ne ravi ke kanu me gusse se bolte hue kaha ,

"naaiiiiiiii..." ravi ne komal ki pakad se azad hone ki kossih karte hue bola ,

"toh bhugto en jatko ko , yeh paviter bijli apko zuka degi , apko kamzor kar degiii , apko zukna hogaaa..." komal ne etna bol , ravi ko or bhi kas liya apni bahu me ,

tabhi asman garaj utha , asman me bijli kadakne lagi , phir voh tez chamakti bijli jamen par ik ke bad ik , girne lagi ,

"bhaiii harr man loo , varnaa..."

"naiiiii...." ravi ne komal ke chehre par apna saar marte hue thoda dard me bola ,

"ahhhh , toh sehan karo phir..." komal abhi bol hi rehi thi , ke ravi bar bar apna saar komal ke chehre par marne laga , komal ki pakad dheli hone lagi ,

"bhaiii ahhhhh rukoo aashhhh..." komal ke chehra chill gya , uska matha fat gya , khoon beh nikala , par tabhi usne voh kiya , jo ravi ne socha bhi nai tha ,

komal ne behad gusse me apne honth , apne bhai ke hontho se mila diye , tabhi asman gusse me garaj utha , asman se bijli or bhi tezi se girne lagi ,

vahi khushi bhi rengte hue us ghade se bahar a chuki thi , rema or baby bhi sambal chuki thi , asman se girti bijli ne unko bhi preshan kar diya tha ,

ika ik rema ne khushi or baby ko apne pas khich , apne baalo se ik shield bana li , tain unko koi nuksan na ho , par jaise hi bijli ka ik tez jatka , rema ke baalo par laga , ik tez dhamake ke sath , tino door ja giri , voh behad jakhmi ho chuki thi ,

vahi komal apne bhai ke hontho ko chus rehi thi , or vahi asman se lagatar bijli gir rehi thi ,

ika ik bijli ka ik tez jatka dono ke jism par a laga , dono dard se chekhte ik dusre se door ja gire ,

abh sabhi jamen par jakhmi lete hue the , komal or ravi jaise hi alag hue , tabhi asman pora saf ho gya , jaise vaha kuch hua hi nai tha ,

ravi ki akhen band thi , tabhi uski band akhon ke samne , lara ka muskrata chehra umad aya , voh behad masom lag rehi thi , phir ravi ne ika ik apni akhen khol li , voh uth kar khada ho gya ,

komal bhi dard se kahrahte hue khadi ho rehi thi , tabhi ravi ne tezi se bhagte hue , komal ke chehre par apne ghutne ka tez war kar diya , komal phir se jamen par gir gai ,

"muze lara ko jinda karna hai , uski atma hell jane ke liye betab ho rehi hai , me uski atma ko mushkil se rok reha hu , or tum sab muze rok rehi ho , yeh jung yahi khatam hui..." ravi etna bol jane laga , tabhi uske kadam vahi tham gye....

ravi ne piche palat niche ki traf dekha , toh komal ne uska pair pakad rakha tha , komal ka chehra khoon se sana hua tha ,

"pyariii behana zuk jaoo..." ravi ne etna bol apne pair ko jatka deker chudva liya , or agge badhne laga , abhi ravi uddne hi wala tha , ke voh kisi ki awaz sun ruk gya ,

ravi ne piche palat dekha , baby , khushi , rema , or komal , behad jakhmi halat me , behad gusse me khadi thi...

"me tumari gulam nai hu bevkuf..." khushi ne aag ugalti akhon se behad gusse me chila kar bola ,

"tum sab , aaaahhhh , me devill huuuuu , or tume devil ke agge zukna hogaaa..." ravi ne gusse me chekhte hue bola ,

"bhai zukna apko hoga..." komal ne apne hontho se behte khoon ko apne hath se saf karte hue bola ,

"voosshhhhh (ghurate hue) , es bar devil tum sabko , jaan se mar degaa , tumari atma ko hell me behj degaaa , mere pas wakht kam haiiii , agar lara ki mout huiii , toh prithvi ko hell banaa dungaa..." ravi ne gusse me chekhte hue apni bhari awaz me bola ,

"bhaiii , abh antim yudh hoga , mout tak , agar prithvi ke masom logu ko bachane ke liye ahhh , hame marna bhi padha , toh hame manzor haiiii , ayoo mar doo apniii ruhiii koo , lelo jaan apni ruhiii kiiii , ayooo devillll..." komal gusse me rote hue chekh kar boli , uske rote hi kuch behad ajeeb hua , jiski kisi ne kalpana bhi nai ki thi...

Dusri traf...

"app zuth bol rehe ho , aisa nai ho sakta..." Eliza ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

"yahi sach hai Elizabeth , me tume dikha sakta hu , apne crystal ball par , yeh dekho..." joker ne behad udas hone ka natak karte hue bola , usne apne magic crystal ball par , lara ke murda sharir ki chavi Eliza ko dikha di ,

"naiiiiiii , laraaaa..." Eliza , lara ke murda sharir ko dekh , ghutno ke bal beth rone lagi , uska ik matar antim dost , abh mar chuka tha , yeh uske liye gehra sadma tha ,

"Eliza tume badla lena hai , ravi se , lara ne apni kurbani di hai , utho Eliza , yeh asnu nai khoon hai , mar do un sab ko , tabahi macha do charo traf , lara ki mout ka badla lo..." joker ne udas Eliza ke man me ik jehar sa gholte hue bola ,

"han , me badla lungi , raviiiii , me barbad kar dungi tume..." Eliza gusse me chila kar boli , or uth kar , apni lab me chali gai ,

voh kuch der bad lab se bahar ayi , uske hath me ik black suitcase tha , usne ik black dress pehan rakhi thi , voh kahi ja rehi thi ,

"kaha ja rehi ho Elizabeth..." joker ne man hi man behad khush hote hue bola ,

"tabahi machane..." Eliza gusse me etna bol , flat se bahar nikal gai , uska pehla nishana , shehar ke aam log the , lekin uske man me kya chal reha tha , yeh toh anne wale wakht me chupa tha...

abh flat me bus marko or joker hi reh gye the , Eliza ke jate hi dono hasne lage ,

"apka dimag behad tez hai , abh Eliza es formule se es shehar me tabahi layegi , voh ravi ko mar degi , phir ham , es dunia par raz karege , mera sadyion purana sapna sakar hoga ... " marko behad hasta hue bola ,

"ahahahaha , marko , mere shetiani dimag hi meri takat hai , me bure kamo ko dusro se anjam dilvata hu , bus ik bar , voh map mere hath lag jaye , phir me hi es dunia ka bhagwan banugaa , ahahaha..." joker apni vheshi hassi haste hue bola....


to be counited.....

Bhai is update ke baare me kya kahu. Kaha to pichale update me lara wale incident ko chhod kar baki sab kitane khus the. Aur is update me sab kuch ulat pulat ho gya. Ravi ko pyaar se bhi to samjha sakte the na. Pehle usaki baat ko samjhate to. Lara ko jinda karna bhi to jaruri tha na. Ek to jab itani sari power in teeno ke pass thi to kyu nahi inhone lara ko nahi bachaya. Aur jab ab ravi use bachane ja raha he to use rok rahe he. Are agar use pyaar se samjhate aur usake sath jate to sayad baat hi kuch aur hoti.
Waiting 4 next update

 

[spritemathews]

nice and excellent update...

 

[Rahul]

Badhiya update hai ravi bahut gusse me hain use control karna bahut muskil hai lekin pyar ki takat ke aage sari takat bekaar hain ishiliye jo bhi hoga achcha hi hoga