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[lover of darkness]

Excellent update bhai kya yah ravi ka end tha jaise ke aap ne kaha tha k story ki main heroin/ hero Komal hai ravi nahi lekin komal ko wapis lane ka zariya to khud ravi hi hai. Shayad is bar komal ka diya howa locket kam aa jae.
Hospital me woh doctor, doctor Nilam ho sakti hai.
Kya yah Kunal ka ant tha abhi kaha nahi ja sakta yah to age chal ke hi pata chale ga.
Lagta hai k ab phir se Seema ko Ravi se juda hone pade ga. Komal k baad favourit girl Seema hi hai us ko zyada dair juda maat rakhna Ravi aur uski behno k liye kya kuch nahi kiya Seema ne apne pati ko bhi unse bant liya ta ke woh sab bhi khush rahe to bhai usko bhi is ka inam to milna chahiye. Lagta hai agle update kaal hi aa ke koi solution batae ga.

thanks bhai... komal bhi hero hai.. or seema bhi hero hai.. balki komal se jayda balidan seema ne diye hain.. esi liye voh ring dharan karne ki shakti rakhti hai..

agar ravi hero nai bhi hai.. toh bhi seema or komal uske bina adhuri hain..

seema ko abhi juda karne ka kuch nai socha.. bhai trailer likhna or story ka plot tyar karna bahut mushkil hota hai..

me trailer me change kar reha hu.. tain ki jo bhi ho achank se ho... seema ko juda karna.. sabhi characters ke sath nainsafi hogi.. es liye uska abhi kuch nai socha..

kunal es story ka main villain hai.. mere khyal se voh abhi marega nai.. uska plot abhi soch reha hu ... tab tak bhai app use mara hua samazo..

bhai esi trah sath bane rehna.. apka sath hamesha muze mila hai..

 

[lover of darkness]

Osm update

thanks bhai.. sath bane rehna esi trah...

 

[lover of darkness]

Brilliant sir jii tarif karne ke liye words nahi hai mere pass really yrr bahot umda update tha ab toh kunal gaya kaam se

thanks bhai.. tarif karne ke liye.. apko update pasand aya.. yahi mere liye bahut hai.. esi trah sath bane rehna bhai..

 

[lover of darkness]

What an update sir jii maza aa gaya padh kar kya fight dikhayi hai bahot lekin yeh update khatam hote hote ravi ko bhi khatam kar diya yrr galat hai i want back

thanks bhai... ravi abhi mara nai hai.. yeh sab jante hain.. bus ring utar kar locket pehnane ki tyari chal rehi hai

shukriya bhai.. time nikal kar sath dete rehna..

 

[lover of darkness]

Pura update full action tha.
Kya jabardast ladai hue kunal or ravi ke bich
Kunal mar gaya ya phir bach gaya
Ye pata nhi chla . Ladai karte ravi pura jhakmi ho gaya.
Ravi ko hospital laya gaya. Vahan operation theater me doc ravi ko dekhkar shock ho gayi.
Akhir vo kon thi .
Doc ne ravi ko dead ghoshit kar diya.
Ring ravi ko bachane ka prayas nhi kar rahi thi.
Kya ye ravi ka ant hai ya phir kissi or chij ki shuruat
Baby ne seema ko ravi ke halat ke bare me bata diya. Vo bhi hospital aa gayi.

thanks bhai.. bahut khubsurat reply diya apne.. aise hi mera sath dete rehna..

 

[lover of darkness]

update-26

Abh agge...

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Abh Agge...

Seema ne jaise hi baby ke moh se yeh suna , ke ravi mar chuka hai , uski akhon se asnu beh nikale ,

seema vaha se uthi , or icu room me ghus gai , kuch nurses abhi bhi vaha par thi , voh ravi ki dead body ke pas khadi hui thi ,

"hlo mam , app bahar jao.." ik nurse seema ko vaha dekh kar boli ,

"yeh mere pati hain , kya hun enko , yeh aise kyu lete hain.." seema ne rote hue pagalu jaise bolte hue kaha ,

"mam , yeh mar chuke hain , hame enki body ka postmortem karna hai , uske bad hi apko dead body milegi.." voh nurse seema ke karib akar boli ,

"chattaakkk .." seema ne ik kas kar thapad us nurse ko jad diya or gusse me boli ,

"jab tak me na kahu , tab tak mere pati ki body ko chua bhi , toh tum sabki body cheer dungi , samaz gai , nikalo yaha se.." seema ne behad gusse me bola ,

voh nurses gusse me vaha se chali gai , seema agge badkar ravi ke pas hi beth gai , voh ravi ke chehre ko dekh rehi thi , phir ika ik uski nazar ring par padhi , jo tez roshni me chamak rehi thi , jaise voh seema par hass kar uska mazak udda rehi thi ,

seema ne jaise hi ring ko chua , ik tez bijli ka jatka seema ko laga .."aieeeeee maa..." seema dard bhari chekh marti ravi se kafi door jaker gir gai , ring abh lal roshni me chamak rehi thi , jaise use behad gussa tha , seema par ,

"ahhhhh kya karu me , han , pita ji se puchti hu..." seema ne dard bardasht karte man hi man bola , uske dhaye hath ki unglyian jal chuki thi ,

seema ne man hi man kaal ko yad kiya , abh vahi ik matar rasta bacha tha , kaal hi seema ko ik nayi disha dikha sakta tha ,

ravi ke hath se ring utar pana namumkin tha , ya toh ring apni icha se utar jati , ya phir usse ladna padhta ,

seema ke bar bar yad karne se room me ik andhera chaa gya , wakht ruk gya tha , lekin baki insano ke liye ,

ika ik kaal us andhere me apna vajood liye khada ho gya , kala libas , na koi chehra , na koi sharir , bus tha toh ik kala libas , jo usne pehan rakha tha ,

seema , kaal ko apne samne dekh or rone lag gai , lekin kaal ke liye asnu , khushi , dukh , dard , koi bhavna abh mayine nai rakhti thi ,

"pita ji , mere pati , voh , voh mar gye..." seema ne beintha rote hue bola ,

"seema , mane pehle hi kaha tha , komal ka nam ravi ke samne na aye , pehle tum sab ne komal ki yad ravi ko dilvayi , or bad me khushi ne bhi , khushi ne ravi ko voh bataya jo use nai batana tha ..." kaal ne bhari garajti awaz me bola ,

"kya bataya pita ji.." seema ne apne asnu saf kar pucha ,

"komal ki pith kunal ne jalai thi , use behad dard diya tha , use mara tha , yeh bat khushi ko nai batani chahyie thi , lekin khushi ke batane se ravi ke dil me komal ka pyar jinda ho gya , us wakht ravi ko bus komal hi dikhai de rehi thi , lekin ring ravi ko kisi se bant nai sakti , ring ne ravi ko vampire nai banne diya , kunal se ladte hue ravi ki mout ho gai , abh bus ik hi rasta bacha hai.." kaal ne vaise hi shant awaz me bola ,

"pita ji , koi bhi rasta ho , muze bus mere ravi ko bachana hai..." seema ne nam akhon se bola ,

"hmm , janta hu , yad hai , mane tumse bola tha , tume kurbani deni hogi , magar etni jaldi , yeh muze nai pata tha .."

"pita ji koi bat nai , me tyar hu , boliye kya karna hai muze.." seema ne dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"tum janti ho , ring ko koi bhi insan , ya koi bhi vampire, ravi ke hath se nai utar sakta , ring ne ravi ke sharir par kabja jama liya hai , es liye tume es ring se ladna hoga , tume es ring ke ander ghus kar , use harana hoga , magar.." kaal bolte bolte ruk gya ,

"magar kya pita ji , or me ik insan hu , me etni shaktishali ring se kaise lad sakti hu .." seema ne ik bar ravi ki traf dekh , palat kar kaal ki traf dekhte hue bola ,

"ik rasta hai , komal ki voh kitab , main tume deta hu , usse tum ik sapatrishi chakara yantar tyar karo , voh mantra hi tume ring se ladne ki takat dega , kuch shaktyian me tume dunga , ik bat or meri bachi , ring ke ander jane ke bad , tumare pas matar 24 ghante honge , tume ring se ik khas cheez vapis lani hogi..." kaal ne apni bhari awaz me bolte hue kaha ,

"pita ji , es choti si ring me kya kya hoga , matlab , muze kya lana hai..." seema ne ik umeed se pucha ,

"seema yeh ring jitni choti hai , ander se kahi jayda vishal hai , eski ik alag hi dunia hai , eski dunia , behad daravni or byank hai , yeh logu ko alag alag kahanyian sunati hai , unse hamdardi jatati hai , tum janti ho tum hi vaha kyu ja sakti ho .." kaal ne andhere me chalte hue bola ,

"nai pita ji.."

"meri bachi tum bahut paviter ho , lekin agar tumse voh sapatrishi chakar na bana , toh tum kabhi es ring me nai ja paugi , or 24 ghante bad ravi ka poora sharir jal jayega , or uski atma es ring me sama jayegi , phir tum kabhi ravi ko dekh nai paugi..."

"nai , nai , pita ji , me jaugi ring ke ander , me jaugi..." seema ne ravi ke marne ka sun rote hue bola ,

"hmm , janta hu , tum jaugi , meri bachi , ring ke ander jaker tume amrit kund se ik mayavi phool dund kar lana hoga , uska rang nela hoga ..." kaal abhi bol hi reha tha ke seema bech me bol padhi ,

"pita ji , agar vaha aise kai phool hue toh .."

"meri bachi , voh phool nele rang ka toh hoga hi , magar voh bolta bhi hoga , kyu ki voh ik amritmayi phool hai , use laker tume , us phool ko ravi ke mathe ke bechu bech rakhna hoga , uski shakti se ravi thik ho jayega , lekin tumare pas wakht bus 24 ghante ka hoga .." kaal ne seema ko samazate hue bola ,

"pita ji etna wakht bahut hai mere liye , me ravi ko bacha kar hi dam lungi.." seema ne thoda atamvishwas me bola ,

"seema , komal ka voh locket tum pehan lo , ring ke ander voh tume takat dega , vaha tumari raksha karega , ring ke ander vishal danav , murda log , ajeeb ajeeb cheezo se tumara samna hoga , unko hara kar hi , tum amritmayi kund ke pas pahunch paugi .."

"pita ji ring ke ander muze amritmayi kund ka rasta kaise pata chalega..."

"meri bachi , jab sapatrishi chakar tume shakti dega , tab tumari akhon ke samne khud ba khud us kund ka rasta ban jayega , abh der mat karo , yeh lo voh rahasmayi kitab , jo sadyion se ham darindo ki hifazat kar rehi hai.." kaal ne ik kitab seema ko dete hue bola , yeh vahi kitab thi , jo komal aksar padhti rehti thi ,

"shukriya pita ji , apne muz par bahut bada ehsan kiya hai , yeh karaz me kabhi nai chuka paugi , me apne pati or apke bete ko jarur vapis leker ayugi.." seema ne ik vishwas ke sath bola ,

"tume ravi ko vapis lana hoga , nai toh kai jindgyian khatam ho jayegi , agar tum ring ke ander jane ke bad us amritmayi phool ko na la saki , toh tum hamesha hamesha ke liye vahi kaid ho jaugi , ravi mar jayega or uske sath uski behane bhi..." kaal ne thoda dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"nai pita ji , muze apne pyar par vishwas hai , me jarur ayugi vapis.." seema ne us kitab ko apne seene se lagate hue bola ,

"ik bat or agar tum lot ayi or tumne voh phool ravi ke mathe par rakh diya , tab ring kuch wakht ke liye shaktiheen ho jayegi , tab tum yeh locket ravi ko pehna dena , kyu ki komal ki jaan ko abh khatra badh chuka hai..." kaal ne behad dard me bola , abh uski awaz me voh bharipan nai tha ,

"kya , par kaise..." seema , komal ka sunte hi ro padhi ,

"komal danavo ki dharti par kaid hai , us din tume jo sapna aya tha , voh sach tha , komal vaha kaid , apne bhai ko har pal dekhti rehti hai , uski khushi me khush hoti hai , uske dhuki hone se dukhi hoti hai , lekin abh tak komal ko apne bhai ki es halat ka pata chal chuka hoga , voh kamzor ho gai hogi , seema , jitna voh kamzor hogi , uska badan utna hi jalta jayega , ik wakht ayega , jab komal jal kar rakh ho jayegi or dyana azad ho jayegi..."

"ohhh meri komal , pita ji , me use marne nai dungi , ravi ke thik hote hi , me komal ko vapis paker hi rahugi..." seema ne akhon se behte asnu saf karte hue bola ,

"tum es ring me ja rehi ho , me ravi ki behano ko supat awstha me sula dunga , agle 24 ghante bus tumare hain , ravi ko tumare ghar pahuncha deta hu , or baby ki yaddasht mita deta hu , abh tum ghar jao jaldi..." kaal etna bol vaha se gyab ho gya ,

abh room se andhera khatam ho chuka tha , seema ne bed par dekha , abh ravi vaha nai tha ,

seema icu room se bahar ayi tab ik nurse use boli ,

"mam , app icu me kya kar rehi ho , yaha jana mana hai..."

seema us nurse ki bat sun chonk gai , seema ne dekha , baby bhi vaha nai thi , seema samaz gai ke yeh sab kaal ka mayajaal hai ,

seema us kitab ko leker ghar ki traf nikal gai , ajj uske paviter prem ki preksha thi , ajj use jeetna tha , ring se or ravi ki mout se bhi , ajj use yeh sabit karna tha , ik pavitar aurat ke pyar me kitni shakti hoti hai ,

seema ke man me ik vishwas tha , ravi ko vapis pane ka , komal ko vapis pane ka , ravi ki nadan behno ko unka bhai lutane ka , uski bachi rema ko uska pyar lutane ka , seema atam vishwas se bhari hui ghar pahunch gai ,

ghar pahunch kar seema pehle apne room me gai , seema ne dekha , rema bed par leti so rehi thi ,

phir seema shurti or rimi ke room me gai , voh dono bhi bed par chain ki nend so rehi thi , kaal ke mayajaal ne sabko sula diya tha ,

matlab abh seema pori trah se tyar thi , abh wakht a chuka tha , ring ki us kalpanik dunia me jane ka ,

seema jaldi se sedyian chad ravi ke room me pahunch gai , seema ne vaha pahunch pehle komal ka locket le liya ,

"hey bhagwan meri madad karna , yeh sab me apne pyar ke liye kar rehi hu , muze takat dena , kahi me nakam na ho jau..." seema ne dono hath jod shiv bhagwan ko yad kiya , or komal ka voh locket apne gale pehan liya ,

locket pehante hi seema ke badan me tez dard ki lehar uth padhi , kyu ki seema ik aam insan thi ,

locket ki takat seema ka nazuk sharir bardasht nai kar pa reha tha ,

seema ke hontho se khoon behne laga , uske dant nokile ho gye , jaise voh bhi ik vampire thi , seema ki akhon ka rang gehra lal ho chuka tha ,

seema ka badan jalne laga , locket ki takat usse sehan nai ho rehi thi ,

ik pal aya jab seema ke badan ki pori chamdi utar gai , seema chekhti hui , har dard bardasht karti rehi , uski akhen pori lal ho gai ,

phir ika ik seema jamen par gir gai ,

uska chehra uske hath ke uper tha , pora badan jagah jagah se chila hua tha , jakham hi jakham ho gye the seema ke badan me ,

"r..rr...raviiii..." seema ne dard se kahrahte hue bola , or uski akhen band ho gai , seema ne locket par apna kabja jama liya tha ,

uske paviter prem ne use etni takat di thi , ke komal ka sadyion purana jaduai locket abh seema ka gulam ban chuka tha , abh seema me beintha shakti thi , voh kuch bhi kar sakti thi ,

kuch der bad seema apne hathion ko jamen par tikaye apne ik ghutne par beth gai , es halat me seema ka badan behad daravna partit ho reha tha , voh kisi shatian se kam nai lag rehi thi ,

phir ika ik seema uth khadi hui , seema jor se chilai , or kafi der tak chilati gai , uska chehra behad khofnak tha , koi aam insan use dekhte hi dar kar mar jata , uski akhen kisi shetaini atma jaisi thi ,

phir seema shant ho gai , uski akhon ka rang nela ho gya , uske chehre par , uske mathe ka mass fata hua tha , pora chehra khoon se lathpath ho chuka tha ,

dhere dhere seema ke sare jakham apne app bhar gye , abh voh behad khubsurat ladki thi , jo kisi ko bhi mohit kar sakti thi ,

uska roop behad khubsurat tha , akhon me kassih thi , abh seema shant ho chuki thi ,

seema ne apni manzil ka pehla padav par kar liya tha , usne ik insan hote hue bhi es shaktishali jadui locket ko dharan kar liya tha , jise bus ajj tak komal hi pehan payi thi ,

seema , ravi ko yad kar ik bar muskrai or phir usne voh kitab utha li , seema us kitab ko padhne lagi , agar seema locket pehne bina hi kitab kholti toh use kuch bhi samaz na ata , kyu ki es kitab ko padhne ke liye yeh locket pehanna jaruri tha ,

bhale hi kaal ne seema ko yeh bat nai batai thi , or achank se hi seema ne pehle locket dharan kar liya tha ,

wakht apni chal chalta gya , seema abh tak adhi kitab padh chuki thi , par use sapatrishi chakar banane ka voh mantra nai mila tha , lekin voh seema thi , jo jindgi me kabhi haar nai manti thi , dhere dhere seema ikagarta ke sath man laga padhti gai , or akhir kar seema ko sapatrishi chakar ka mantra mil hi gya ,

seema ke hontho par ik muskan doad gai , seema ne niche beth kitab apne samne rakhi or us mantra ka jap karne lagi , locket use aseem shakti de reha tha ,

seema adhe ghante se jayda us sapatrishi chakar mantra ko padhti rehi , or akhir us kitab se voh mantra ik lal roshni ki shakal me uthne laga , us chakar ki chavi abh kitab par banne lagi , seema yeh dekh behad khush ho gai ,

akhir kar seema ki mehnat , uska vishwas rang laya , or kitab ke panu se ik tez chamakti roshni nikalne lagi ,

jo dhere dhere badi hoti gai , seema uth kar khadi ho gai ,

abh uski nazarion ke samne sapatrishi chakar tez roshni me chamak reha tha ,

"ehhh sapatrishi chakar , main seema tume hukam deti hu , muze us vheshi ring ki kalpanik dunia me le chalo , muze rasta dikhao , tain ki me apne pati ki jaan bacha saku..." seema etna bol khamosh ho gai , usne apni akhen band kar li ,

sapatrishi chakar jo tez roshni me chamak reha tha , voh tezi se chamakta hua , seema ki traf badhne laga , seema ke karib pahunch us chakar ka akar behad chota ho gya , voh chakar seema ke mathe ke bechu bech kahi alop ho gya ,

kuch hi der bad seema ka pora badan ik roshni me bhiker gya , voh roshni ik choti si lakeer ke roop me ravi ke hath me pehni us ring me ghus gai ,

seema apne ravi ko bachane ke liye , ring ki khofnak dunia me ja chuki thi , kya tha us dunia me , kai rahasmayi cheezo ka samna seema karne wali thi ,

vahi dusri or kaal apni us khofnak haweli me betha , kuch soch reha tha ,

voh seema ko matar ik insan samaz reha tha , lekin seema ne pehle us locket ko dharan kar yeh dikha diya tha , jab kisi se prem sacha ho , toh ik aam insan kuch bhi kar sakta hai ,

seema or komal , enki deewangi ravi se es kadar thi , ke dono uske liye har pal mar mitne ko tyar rehti thi , seema us kalpanik dunia me pahunch chuki thi , yeh bat alag thi , ke ik uski premika thi toh ik uski behan...

dusri traf...

"apne yeh kya kar diya , apne seema ko us dunia me behj diya , jante bhi ho , voh dunia kitni khofnak hai , or seema vapis lot ayi , toh kai darinde uske sath hi bahar a jayege..." ik aurat ne kaal se gusse me bat karte hue kaha ,

yeh aurat or koi nai maya thi , kaal ki malika ,

"janta hu , par malika maya , ravi ko bachane ka koi or rasta nai bacha tha , yahi ik matar akhri rasta tha , seema ik paviter premika hai , us jaisi ladki ka janam bahut kam , sadyion me ik bar hota hai , jo apne premi ke liye , bina kisi bhavna ke marne ko tyar ho jaye , seema ik anohki ladki hai.." kaal ne shant awaz me bola , darasal use seema ki chinta ho rehi thi ,

"lekin app jante ho , voh ik aam insan hai , us dunia me ham jaise darinde bhi nai bach sakte , voh , mera matlab , seema vaha se lot nai payegi , ring kitni khukar or takatwar hai , ham jante hain , sadyion se usse ladte a rehe hain , me kitni takatwar hu , app kitne takatwar ho , agar ham nai jeet paye , toh seema kaise jeet payegi , muze lagta hai , ham sab ne milkar , ravi ke sath galat kiya hai..." maya ne thoda dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"malika , komal apni jindgi vapis chahti thi , tum janti ho , voh apne bhai se pyar karna chahti thi , usne kai salo tak jidd ki , voh meri beti hai , uska bar bar rona muzse bardasht nai hota tha , kya karta me , jab uska bhai mar gya , tab bhi usne jidd ki , use vampire banane ki , me apni beti ke pyar me mazbor ho gya tha , yeh komal ki jidd thi , voh insan banna chahti thi , insan ban kar , apne bhai se prem karna chahti thi , esi liye usne ring ko apne bhai ke liye chuna , usne bhi kurbani di hai , mane use pehle hi kaha tha , ring hi antim faisla karegi , ravi or komal mil payege ya nai..." kaal ne dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"ohh , ring kabhi nai zukegi , voh amar hai , na jane kitni sadyion se kitne logu ki atma apne ander sama chuki hai , jab use khatam hi nai kiya ja sakta , toh ik ravi ke liye apne us bechari seema ko us narag me behj diya..." malika ne behad dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"me samazta hu tumare dard ko , lekin agar ravi mar jata , tab uske sath kai or jindgyian khatam ho jati , uski sabhi behne , jinme rema , shurti , rimi , uski premika baby , khushi , uski behan sonal , kavita , sab ki sab , en sab ka ik maksad hai , dekhna , ik din enka paviter prem hi ravi ko es dunia ka raza bana dega..." kaal ne thoda khush hote hue bola ,

malika maya kuch soch kar phir se boli ...

NICHE KA NOTE JARUR READ KARNA...

to be counited....

Friends bahut mushkil se update type kiya hai... yeh ring ke ander jane ka plot pehle nai socha tha.. abh apki bari hai.. ache ache reply dena.. tain ki me agge update de pau... shukriya sabhi ka.. daily update dena mushkil hota hai.. par meri kossih rehti hai.. app logo ko abh aisa koi din na ho jab update na mile... app sab mere sath bane rehe.. apke ik reply se muze likhne ki takat milti hai.. dosti akhir tak nibhana friends.. agar app sath dete rehe toh me.. agle 5 salo tak likhta rahuga..

 

[lover of darkness]

Friends chrome browser use karna.. varna update me add pics app nai dekh pauge... shukyia sabhi ka..

 

[spritemathews]

It’s really good update to read create a phase wise to create the flower which makes Ravi alive again like 5 phases where Seema will cross it across

 

[Sona]

Nice story sir maine apki story xossip pe read ki thi socha nhi tha dobara padhne ko milegi ap please story complete jrur krna

 

[aka3829]

Wow kya jabardast update diya he bhai to ravi ko bachane ka rasta kaal ne bata diya aur seema us raste par chal bhi di he. Lekin kya seema bhi ek vampire ban gayi he jaisa kimpics me dikhaya gya he aur kya vapas aane par jab seema ravi ko locket pehnayegi to wo wapas insaan ban kayegi ya fir humesh ke liye vampire hi bani rahegi. Aur kitna dard sahegi bechari seema aur komal. Mujhe to lagta he ki seema aur baby ko ek sath bhej dena chaiye th. Khair jo aap sahi samjhe wo hi likhiye aur agar ho sake to agle update me seema ko ful ke sath wapas le aana.
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