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aka3829

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Mmmmmuuuuuaaaaaahhhhhhhh meri jaan de laale dil khush kita. Kya mast update diya he. Lekin ek sachhe reader ki tarah is sab ke beech aapne ye nahi bata ki ye sab kab aur kaise hua. Mujhe to lagta he ki In sab ka plan sayad tab bana jab ravi rema ke gale laga tha. Jo bhi he dil jitna kal roya tha usase jyada ab uchal riya he. Aur mujhe to ye soch kr hasi aa rahi he ki ab KAT aur Priya ka kya hoga . Waise to ravi ki halat bhi kharab ho gayi thi jab abhi sabne ek ke baad ek kar ke ravi ko kiss kiya jabki 2 behne baki thi. Hehehe hehehe. Bhai agle part ki suruat komal aur Baby ke sath suhagrat manane se karna plzzz.
Aur bhai sukriya jo aapne mujhe itani izzat di. Bhai aapko suru me hi bol diya tha ki jab tak saans rahegi tab tak aapka sath nahi chhodunga. Aur ye abhi nahi balki aage bhi aise hi saath deta rahunga.
Waiti g 4 next fourth part
 

Mr.Omi

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Behad shandar update diya bhai...
At last, sab sath me mil gaye...
Lekin wo rema ki ma kon thi....Mujhe to lag raha hai k kaal ki wife hogi jo shayad pichle janam me jadugarni thi...
Aur ek baat, kaal ne kaha tha k jab diana ayegi to wo b jarur ayega, lekin wo aaya hi nahi...Q
 

sorbobhuk

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update-61

Abh Agge...

seema beintha ro rehi thi , or komal ke murda jism ko dekh rehi thi , voh phir ika ik uthi , uske akhon me abh behad byank gussa tha ,

"yahhhhhhhh , komalll , agar terii balii na de payiii toh kyaaa huaa , teree paviter jism ko barbad kar dungii , tere murda jism ko paviter nai rehne dungii , huuuu , joker eske murda jism ke sath sehvas (sex) karoo , abhi ke abhii..." seema beintha gusse me boliii ,

baby or khushi ne jab yeh suna , toh unki akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai , etna kon gir sakta hai , hasshh , par seema toh abh shetian thi ,

baby ki akhen gusse se lal ho gai , usne apni pori takat ik jut kar , apne hatho ko jatka diya , uske jatka dete hi , voh lohe ki janjeer tut kar bhikar gai ,

khushi bhi behad gusse me apni talwar liye , unki traf badne lagi ,

"vahi ruk jaoo , varna , ravi ke jism ko jala kar khak kar dungii , ik kadam bhi agge mat badna , varnaa , ravi kisi bhi trah , kisi bhi jadu se jinda nai ho payega , ruk jaoo..." seema ne dono ki traf dekh chila kar bola ,

"seema yeh mahapap hai , aisa mat karo , tum komal ke sath aisa kaise kar sakti ho , yeh tumari behan hai , pls , mat karo aisa..." baby ne rote hue bola ,

"shhhh , apni juban band karo , or khamoshi se sab dekho , joker , tumne suna nai , jo mane kaha , komal ke sath sehvas karo , kapde utaro eske..." seema ne pehle baby or phir joker ki traf gusse se dekh kar bola ,

"nai malik , ham bure jarur hain , par yeh pap nai kar sakte , eske liye hame narag me bhi jagah nai milegi..." lara ne apni talwar fenk , joker ke kadmo me beth rote hue bola , joker udas sa khada tha ,

"bevkuf ladki , mere khilaf jaugi tum , eski saza tume bhi milegi..." seema ne gusse me chila kar bola , or phir akhen band kar mantra padhne lagi ,

kuch hi der me seema ki akhen lal roshni me chamak uthi , seema ne lara ke badan ko sarp mayajaal me jakad diya , abh lara ke jism par sanp lipte hue the , jinki akhen lal roshni me chamak rehi thi ,

"ahhhhh malik bachaooo , ahh bahut dard ho reha hai..." lara ne beintha rote hue bola ,

"hehe , joker kuch nai karega , joker utaro komal ke kapde or uske jism ka har hissa noch dalo , eske sath berehmi se sehvas (sex) karo , jaldi karoo , varna , tume bhi jala kar rakh kar dungi..." seema ne joker ke karib jaker bola ,

"naiiii , ahhh malik , aisa mat karnaaa , plss..." lara ne behad dard me chekh kar bola ,

"seema tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho , tum bhi ik ladki ho , pls , yeh anarath mat karo..." khushi bhi vaha se door khadi rote hue boli ,

"hmm , yeh toh hoga , joker akhri bar puch rehi hu , tum sehvas karoge ya kisi or ko bulau..." seema ne joker ki akhon me zak kar bola , par joker ne apni nazarian zuka li ,

"matlab , tum kuch nai karuge , namard ho , thik hai , lekin voh jarur karega , use komal jinda mile ya murda , voh eske jism ko noch dalega , hehe , jonith , han , tum sab dekho , kaise jonith , apni sadyion purani hawas shant karta hai , jonith abh a bhi jao , tume nayi jindgi di hai mane..." seema ne sabki traf dekh vheshi hassi haste hue bola ,

"kya jonith , matlab kunal jinda hai , lekin ravi ne use mar diya tha , voh kaise , uska jism toh jal gya tha..." dyana thodi darte hue boli ,

"me suhana hu , me ring hu , me es brehmand ki sabse badi takat hu , me amar hu , jab tak mera maksad pora nai hoga , me es brehmand par rahugii , me komal ki bali deker rahugi , kitne janam leker voh bachegi , ik na ik din , use mar kar hi rahugi , koi na koi janam voh aisa legi , jab me uski bali dungi , tab uska yeh manhus bhai mere raste me nai a payega , or ik bat , komal ke sath mera jism bhi es dunia me janam lega , hazaro logu ki unglyion se hoker me , apne jism tak pahunch jaugi , phir mera , yani suhana ka janam hoga , hasshhh , seema tak pahunchne me , najane sadyion tak , kitne logu ne muze pehna , najane kitne logu ko mane mara , or akhir jab ravi ne muze pehna , tab mane seema ko mehsus kiya , seema hi mera dusra janam thi , khiar abh muze ik or janam lena padega , apna maksad pora karne ke liye..." suhana ne apne asli roop me akar apni sachai batate hue bola ,

"toh kya app ring me kaid ho..." dyana ne or janne ki icha se bola ,

"naiii , meri atma , ring me kaid nai , voh toh mere jism ke sath hi khatam ho gaii , par meri beti rema ne jab mere ander ki burai ko , meri akhri icha ko , ik ring me dal diya , tain ki me tum logu jaisi ik darinda na ban jau , tab meri shetaini takat us ring me jevat ho gai , kyu ki me apne pita shetian ke behad karib thi , par jaise hi meri atma ne naya jism dharan kiya , tab muze uska ehsas ho gya tha , voh seema thi , voh mere bhai sonik ka pyar thi , or akhir jab seema mere ander ayi , ravi ko bachane , tab mane uski priksha li , voh har mushkil se ladti , amritmayi kund ke pas pahunch gai , jab mere kahe anusar , us phool ne seema ko us kund me kudne ko kaha , tab bevkuf seema , bina kuch soche , usme kud gai , voh mera mayajaal tha , us kund me suhana ki yadian thi , suhana ki sari ichayian thi , jab kund se seema bahar ayi , tab voh suhana thi , lekin muze komal ko pana tha , mazbori me muze ravi ko jinda karna padha , kyu ki narag log se komal ko ravi hi la sakta tha , eske liye sabke man me ravi ke liye jehar bhara , tain ki uski har behan usse nafrat kare , esme rema ne mera sath diya , lekin ajj me phir haar gai , apne maksad ke etna karib akar me haar gai..." suhana ne beintha gusse me sab batate hue bola ,

rema khamosh khadi sab batian sun rehi thi , uske man me , kuch or hi chal reha tha , use ring chahyie thi , jo seema ke ander thi , or jab tak ring seema ke ander thi , voh kuch nai kar sakti thi ,

"jonith kaha ho tum , ayo , jaldi ayo..." suhana ne phir se chekhte hue bola ,

tabhi tez hawa chalne lagi , asman kala padh gya , suraj ki roshni kale badlo me kahi chip sa gai , or phir asman se ik kali parchai jamen par utar gai , yeh tha , danvi sena ka prince jonith , jo behad vheshi lag reha tha , usne ik yohda ke vastar dharan kar rakhe the , or hatho me ik behad bada hathoda (hammer) tha ,

joker , dyana , baki sab , jonith ko dekh kamp sa gye , bus suhana or rema ko chod kar , lekin ajeeb bat thi , abh tak rema ne ik shabad nai bola tha , jab ke voh jan chuki thi , suhana ne uska istemal kiya tha ,

"jonith app a gye , yeh rehi apki komal , abh apni barso purani hawas , apni icha pori kar lo , eska lajawab jism , apko me tohfe me deti hu..." suhana ne behad khushi me bola ,

jonith chalte chalte apne asli roop me a gya , abh voh kunal tha , kunal agge bad komal ke pas beth gya , or uske khubsurat chehre par hath phira muskrane laga , or phir uske gulabi hontho par apni unglyian phira muskrate hue bola ,

"ufff , lajawab , behad kamuk , hazaro apsaryion ko mat deti , umm , eska jism , ahhhh , shukriya malika ..." kunal apni shirt utarte hue bola ,

usne niche zuk komal ke hontho ko chum liya or phir uski tshirt khich kar fad di , uff komal ka lajawab husan abh ik kali bra me kaid tha , uske khubsurat dudh jaise safad jism par chotu ke nishan pade hue the ,

"naiiii , naiii , kunal aisa mat karooo..." baby ne behad gusse me chilate hue bola ,

"shhhh , komal abh meri hai , eska jism abh mera hai , eske jism ko apne sath le jauga , or jab man karega , eske jism se apni hawas shant karuga , hahaha..." kunal ne behad haste hue bola ,

par tabhi kuch aisa hua , jiski umeed kisi ko nai thi , rema ne beintha gusse me kunal ki gardan ko apne baalo se jakad liya , or use piche khich liya ,

"remaaa , pagal ho gai ho..." suhana ne behad gusse me bola ,

"shhh , maa , apka maksad abh bhi pora ho sakta hai , lekin agar kisi ne , kisi ne bhi , meri behan par buri nazar dali , toh vinash kar dungi , sabka , abhi app ne mera vheshi roop dekha nai hai , or es haramjade ne meri behan ke hontho ko chuma , eski gardan dhad se alag kar dungi , tabhi muze chain milega..." rema ne beintha gusse me bola , kisi ki himet nai thi , rema ke khilaf jane ki , sab khamosh khade the ,

"ahhhh malika , es kutiya ko bolo , meri gardan chod de , varna pehle eska rape karuga , pichli bar bach gai thi , es bar nai bachegi..." kunal ne behad dard se kahrahte hue bola , kunal ki baat sun suhana ne apna matha peet liya , voh janti thi , abh rema ka pora gussa kunal par nikalega...

"yaaahhhhhhh , mera rape karegaaa , mere jismm parr meree bhaiii kaaa hukk haiiii , kuteee..." rema ne beintha gusse me kunal ko apne karib khich apne baalo me jakadte hue bola ,

rema abh apne vheshi roop me a chuki thi , tabhi uske mathe ke bech ka mass fatna suru ho gya , mass ke niche , ik behad tez roshni nikali , jo kunal ke badan par padhne lagi ,

"aahhhhhh maaa bachaooo , ahhhh ..." kunal behad dard se tadafne laga ,

tabhi rema ne kuch aisa kiya , jiski umeed shyad kisi ko nai thi , rema ne kunal ki pent fad , uske ling ko apne hatho se khich kar ukhad diya , ling ke sath sath kunal ka mass bhi , utar gya , beintha khoon behne laga ,

"huuuu huuu bahutt ghamanddd haiii tuzee apniii mardangiiii parrrr , heheee , abhhh naiiii karugeee..." rema uske khoon se lathpath ling ko uske khule moh me ghusate hue boli ,

"agliiii barrr janamm loo tohhh auratoo ki
ijajat karnaa , huuu..." rema ne kunal ki dard se band hoti akhon me dekh kar bola or phir uske seene se uske jism ko bech se fad diya , rema ka kala badan khoon me chamak reha tha ,

phir rema , komal ke pas gai , or uske jism ko uski tshirt se dhak diya , phir voh kuch pal apne bhai ki traf dekhti rehi , or phir suhana ki traf dekh kar boli ,

"maaa , app enko jinda karo , apki ring , enko jinda kar sakti hai , ring ko apne seene se bahar nikalo , phir enko jinda karo , app komal ki bali de dena or ravi ko apna gulam bana lena , apki har icha pori ho jayegi..." rema ne apni bation me suhana ko fasate hue bola ,

"hmm , beti , yeh mane pehle kyu nai socha , acha hua tumne komal ko bacha liya , varna me eski bali na de pati ..." suhana ne behad khushi me muskrate hue bola , jab ke rema ke hontho par ik rahasmayi muskan thi ,

phir suhana ne apni akhen band kar li , uske seene me tez roshni uthi , or phir voh ring uske hath me thi , jo safad roshni me chamak rehi thi ,

sabki akhon me ik chamak si a gai thi us ring ko dekh kar , yaha khada har shetian , es ring ko pana chahta tha ,

suhana ne ring ki traf dekhte hue apni akhen band kar li , dhere dhere asman me bijli chamakne lagi , suhana , bhagwan ke banaye asolo ko tod rehi thi , pori prithvi par hahakar mach gai thi ,

suhana ki ring se chamakti lal roshni nikalne lagi , jo dhere dhere , ravi or komal ke seene me samati gai , akhir kuch palu bad voh pori roshni ravi or komal ke jism me sama gai ,

"hehe , abh me bali dungi , komal ki..." suhana ne ring ko apni ungli me dharan karte hue bola ,

"maaa , meri pyarii maa , app es dunia ki nai , es brehmand ki malika ho , meri maa malika hai..." rema ne suhana ki bad chad kar badayi karte hue use apne pyar me band liya ,

"shukriya beti , yeh sab tumare karan hua , bolo kya mangti ho apni maa se..." suhana ne ghamand me chur chur hoker bola ,

"ring , mera matlab , maa me apki ring ko chu kar dekhna chahti hu , bus ik pal ke liye , vaise bhi me es ring ko dharan nai kar sakti..." rema ne thoda udas hoker bola ,

"ohh , meri beti , yeh lo ring , dekh lo..." suhana ne rema ki bation se , uske pyar me , pigal kar ring apni ungli se utar rema ko dete hue bola ,

rema , ring ko apne hatho me leker chu kar dekhne lagi , tabhi uske karib ik kala dhua sa utha , voh nakabposh aurat abh rema ke piche khadi thi ,

"yeh lo maa ring..." rema ne muskra kar bola , jaise hi suhana ne apna hath agge kiya tab rema boli.." app nai malika , me apni maa se keh rehi hu..." rema ne haste hue bola ,

"par tumari maa toh me hu..." suhana behad pachtate hue boli , usne apni icha se ring rema ko di thi , abh rema agar apni icha se use ring deti , tabhi voh ring ko dharan kar pati ,

"yeh loo maa ..." rema ne ghum kar voh ring us nakabposh aurat ko dedi , jisne apni ungli me voh ring pehan li , abh voh es dunia ki sabse takatwar aurat thi ,

abh ravi or komal ko hosh anne laga tha , abh ring ki adhi takat ravi me thi or adhi komal me , abh voh behad takatwar ho chuke the , un dono ki khuli akhen lal roshni me chamak rehi thi , abh voh vampire nai the , abh voh insan the , or voh bhi behad shaktishali ,

"dhokebaj .." suhana ne etna bol rema ko marna chaha , par rema ke jadui lal baalo ne suhana ko jakad liya , phir rema boli ,

"malika abh apka ring me jane ka wakht ho gya hai , jao ring me , or meri insani maa ko chod do , apko kya laga , yeh sab me apke kehne par kar rehi thi , meri maa seema ko jo bhi dard dega , use me es dunia se mita dungi..." rema ne beintha gusse me bola ,

"ahhh nai jaugii ring mee..." suhana ne dard se kahrahte hue bola ,

tabhi us aurat ne ring ki traf dekhte hue apne man me kuch bola , phir suhana ki soch shakti , seema ke saar se nikal kar , ring me sama gai ,

seema apne insani roop me ate hi jamen par gir gai , voh behad kamzor dikh rehi thi , rema ne niche beth , seema ko apni bahu me bhar liya ,

tabhi ravi or komal uth kar beth gye , dono ne ik dusre ki traf muskra kar dekha ,

voh nakabposh aurat vaha se gyab ho gai , joker bhi vaha se bhag gya , par dyana abh bhi vaha thi , voh ring ko pana chahti thi ,

ravi uth khada hua or dyana ki traf badne laga , kya dyana abh ravi ka mukabla kar pati , jisme abh ring ki kai shaktyian thi , jo abh ring se jud chuka tha...

dyana vaha se bhagne lagi , par ravi ne hawa se bhi tez , dyana ko piche se apni bahu me jakad liya , ravi ne uski gardan apni bahu me jakad li , or komal ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"komallll , marr doo esee..." ravi ne chila kar bola ,

tabhi komal ne voh rema ke kale jadui tukde utha liye , or palak japakte hi dyana ke pas khadi ho gai ,

"muzee mere bhyiaa se door kiyaa..." komal ne etna bola , or voh dono tukdo , dyana ke seene me ghusa diye ,

"ahhhhhhhh shhhh..." dyana dard se kahrah uthi , kuch hi palu me un jadui tukdo ne , dyana ki pori shetiani takat chus li , dyana ka jism rakh ban kar udd gya ,

komal ne apne bhai ko bahu me bhar liya , or pagalu ki trah uske honth chusne lagi , ravi ne komal ko kamar se utha liya , komal ne apni tange ravi ke pet se lapet li , or apne bhai ke baalo ko sehlati , uske hontho ko chusti rehi , dono ne man ko skoon pahunchne tak kiss kiya , phir dono hafte hue ik dusre ki akhon me dekhne lage ,

komal abhi niche utari hi thi , ke khushi bhagte hue ravi ke gale lag gai , abh khushi pagalu ki trah ravi ke honth chusne lagi , karib 5 mint khushi , ravi ke baalo me hath phirati , uske hontho ko chusti rehi , jab khushi ka man bhara dono alag ho gye ,

abhi ravi apni tez sansu ko control kar hi reha tha , ke baby ne use bahu me bhar liya , abh baby vheshi roop me ate hue , apne premi ke hontho ko chusne lagi , ravi ki toh band baj gai thi , ik ke bad ik , hamle uske hontho par ho rehe the ,

lekin voh kisi ko rok nai reha tha , kyu ki voh janta tha , sab use behad chahti hain , baby ka jab man bhara , tab voh ravi se alag hoker , komal se milne lagiii ,

"hasshhh , thakkk gyaa mee...." ravi abhi tez tez sanse le hi reha tha , ke rema ke baalo ne use jakad liya , komal , khushi or baby , rema ki traf dekhne lagi ,

"bhyiaaa muze bhi kiss karnaa haiii..." rema muskrate hue boli , or ravi ko apne karib khich liya , komal , khushi or baby hasne lagiii ,

"remaa tum insani roop me ayo na..." ravi , rema ke kale jism ki traf dekhte hue bola , par rema udas ho gai , usne apni nazarian zuka li , uske baalo ne ravi ko chod diya ,

"ohhh meriii sexyyy remaaaa..." ravi muskrate hue rema ko bahu me bharta bola , or apne honth , rema ke black hontho par rakh diye , ravi bade pyar se , behad shidat se rema ke hontho ko chus reha tha ,
or rema ke lal jadui baal ravi ke chehre ko chu rehe the , kuch der bad dono alag hue ,

"merii jaan tumm kaisii bhii hoo , bus merii hoo , or merii rahugiii..." ravi ne muskra kar rema ki akhon me dekh bola , toh rema bhi muskrane lagii ,

"ahhhh mee kahaa huu..." seema apna saar dono hatho me dabate boli ,

ravi ne bhag kar seema ko apni bahu me bhar liya , uske pore chehre ko chumne laga , akhir sab thik ho gya tha , or sab sath the , phir ravi ki nazar lara par padhi ,

ravi uske pas gya , tab lara chehra zuka kar boli ,

"me behad buri hu , par , kya , mera matlab , kyaaa , matlab , voh , kya..." lara abhi bol hi rehi thi ke ravi ne uske hontho par ungli rakh di ,

"shhhhh , ajj se tum mere pariwar ka hissa ho , ayo , me tume apni behano se milvata hu..." ravi , lara ka hath thame use sab ke pas le aya ,

"abh ghar jana hai ya naiii..." baby muskrate hue boli ,

"me kya keh rehi thi , ham sab etne dino bad , ik hue hain , thode din , es khubsurat kabile me rehte hain , masti karte hain , kyu , kya kehte ho sab..." komal sabki traf dekh muskrate hue boli ,

sab ne han bol di , phir khushi ne ravi ke kehne par , kabile ke tute gharo ko thik kar diya , or sab sath me batian karne lage ,

phir khushi , rehan or baki kabile walo ko gufa se bahar le ayi , rimi or shurti bhi , apne bhyia se mil kar behad khush hui ,

"bhyiaa , kitna acha lag reha hai , ham sab sath hain , or khas kar , meri dedi seema ko dekh kar , hai na seema dedi..." komal gehri muskan liye seema ki traf dekh kar boli ,

seema ne agge badh komal ko bahu me bhar liya , or uske chehre ko kuch der chuma , phir use gale laga , uske kanu me dhere se boli ,

"komal abh apni ass marva le , acha moka hai , jungle me teri chekh bhi koi nai sunega..."

"dhattt , dediii , abh bhi meri ass ke piche padhi ho , lekin mane apko bahut miss kiya , i love u , meri jaan , abh mere pas mere bhyia bhi hain , or meri cute si jaan bhi..." komal ne seema ki akhon me dekhte hue bola , phir dono hasne lagi , or ik dusre ko bahu me bhar liya ,

phir seema , apni beti rema ke pas gai , use dekhte hi uski akhon me asnu a gye , rema ke lal baal uske asnu pochne lage ,

"maaa , meriii pyarii maa..." rema , seema ko apni bahu me bhar kar boli ,

"meri pyarii betii , tune meri jaan bachai , meri bachiii , tu sach me , merii betii haii , me kitni khushnaseb hu , ke tuz jaisi betiii muze milii , meri betii ka baal kitne khubsurat hain..." seema , rema ke chehre ko chumte hue boli , phir uske baalo se khelne lagi , jo behad bade hoker , seema ke chehre ko pyar se chuu rehe the , rema ki akhen nam thi , uski maa ne use es roop me bhi etna pyar diya tha ,

tabhi asman se barish hone lagi , sab us barish me bhegne lage , khelne lage , rema bhi behad khush thi , or uske jadui lal baal bhi.....

(Apko yeh part kaisa laga... kon sa character pasand aya.. rebu me jarur batana.. or niche jo likha.. use read jarur karna .. shukriya)


The End...


Toh yeh tha Third part , kuch mushkile ayi , jab XP band hua , tab umeed nai thi , ke dubara story start kar pauga , eske liye me Love1994 or Amtul bhai ko thanks bolna chahuga...

Abh bat karte hain , Next Foruth Part ki , voh me ajj se thik 3 din bad start karuga , vahi time Rat ko 10 baje , toh milte hain abh next part me , yaha naye dushman honge , kuch naye suspense , or kuch yahi suspense jo agge jaker pata chal jayege , next part me magic bhi hoga ,

Shukriya Sabhi Pyare Dosto Ka .. Jo Etna Pyar Diya .. Dil Se Thanks...


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fantastic ending...... dil khush ho geya.....suhana fir se ring ke ander geyi hai.....or suhana fir aayegi ravI or komal ke jindegi me......or dayna ko mar diya ravi or komal milkar...... ravi uske wada pura kiya.....or ab ravi vempire nhi hai... ab wo or shaktishali baan geya.......or joker to bhag nikla....... wo to bach geya....matlab abhi tabai hona baki hai........or wo aurat jiske koi chehra nhi tha wo kon hai.......kya wo aurat achhi hai ye burai.....shayed ye bhi agla part me milega....or kaal ne ravi ko kaha tha ki jab suhana se ladhai hoga tab wo aayega liken wo kyu nhi aaya....????.....ab rema seema sab thik ho geyi hai.........or rahi is part ke bare me to is part ke mukabila se baki 2 part kuch nhi.....mast hai....or ik baat bhai.....part ke shuruwat me sab ke sath romantic scene hona chahiye.... kyu ki kaphi der se romantic scene nhi hai.....or new part new dusman ir new suspense ke intejar karenge hum sab.......

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sam4321

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aapki likhan shehali bohoth aachi hai .
kahi dino se mai aapki story ko follows kar raha hu.
kuch saval hai jinka answer next part mai melne ki aasha hai
seema ne phool ki madat se ravi ki jaan bachai thi ,tab kaal ne maya se kaha tha "agar seema voh phool le ayi toh me use kuch inam jarur dunga" ravi ki jaan to seema ne bachali ,ab ye dekhana hai kaal seema ko jise kaal apni dusri beti samjta hai use kay inam dega.
jaise kaal aur maya ne kaha tha ki seema jab phool lekar wapas aayegi to uske sath kahi shetain bhi aajad hokar pruthavi par aa jayegi to ky next part mai jo naye dushaman aane vale hai wo yahi hai .
suhana lotkar wapas aaye gi ,aur aaye gi to kis rup mai, kay seema ko suhana se rima ,ravi bacha payege.
seema ko kaal kay inam dega aur uska seema par ky aasar padega.
nakab wali aurt kon thi .
jokar bhag gaya hai wo scientist ladki Eliza beth ke sath milkar 'growth' ke farmule mai change kar takatwar banega.
ring se azad huwe naye dushaman jokar ka sath dege ,komal jokar ko mar payegi.
ravi,baby jab kat se milege tab kat kaise behave karegi ravi ke sath. Anu apni maan ki baat ravi se keh payegi .
4th part interesting hone wala hai intejar rahe ga next part ka.
 
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Nub_Ag

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Mst update suhana bkl acha hua ring me kaid ho gyi dubara aur sab mil bhi gaye sirf kuch log ko chhod ke like rekha di maa aur anu dr.neelam inn sab ko shayad ab next part me dekhne hi milega can't wait jaldi start karo next part
 
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